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Yess...with KalJayi there.... a dark servant would have never been able to enter VanRajya so she needed a pure body...Ravisha's story is for later updateThat's a big twist. Thought I was anticipating that there is something wrong with Akansha but I never expected this!
This is a very important skill where a single mistake can be fatal....as this world not merciful in any bit.I also stand corrected about Karan's character. Now it seems that he is very observant and he is thinking it through.
Prachi has the most simplest story in the whole plot...but she will have a crucial role in Karan's development later!Also, I am not sure why but I think there is something going on in Nandini's head too. Prachi too seems to be just a pawn following someone's order to me!
What's the right spelling in Roman? Kashya or kshaya... I'm honestly confusedA small request, the spelling of कक्ष has been consistently wrong, this is the first time I felt something bothering me.
Thanks would start writing soonHowever, a wonderful update. I can't wait for the next one. Bring it on soon!
On God! You just wait for the wars... they'll be supper freaking awesome!!Till then, stay horny and write greatest scenes of all time!
Time is the biggest answerWow Sonali ke sath uska bhai bhi a raha hai kya hoga jab Akshay payal ko dekhe ga aur Karan ka kya reaction hog ?
Backstory mein Jayda maza hai.Aur ye akansha nahi hai ye ravisha hai. Asli akansha ek chudail hai aur ye salahkar bhi Mila hua hai .
Kyuki woh dono hi pichle Raja ke bachche hai ...wait he'll be nicer this time.Aur rakshak ne Karan aur payal ko hi kyon bulaya kya koi raaz hai jo bataya Jayga ya fir kuch aur dekhna padega
Enjoyed?BTW update padhke intezar ka fal milgaya .
Smjhi nhi...Payal toh whi hai unke paasLekin payal ko gayab rakha lagta hai jail me hi hai abhi choti nahi hai jaldi nikalo nahi to aap se katti meri payalllll......
Ok I am waiting, what happened in next updateTime is the biggest answer
You'll see
Let's see how much fun in past storyBackstory mein Jayda maza hai.
Kyuki woh dono hi pichle Raja ke bachche hai ...wait he'll be nicer this time.
Enjoyed?
I'm joking sister because payal dissappear in this updateSmjhi nhi...Payal toh whi hai unke paas
And thank you for writing story for allTHANKS for reading so deeply
Really...try me then . Dm me the scariest oneDarr toh nhi gye
You don't know how scary other pictures came out...this one is the mid version of that
Thanks ToniShaandar jabardast shocking update
Hmmm....main kuch aisa hi love triangle lane wale the...lekin cancelled abSonali apne bhai ko bhi la rahi hai idhar wo payal ke pichhe gaya to kya karega karan
Aur bhi role hai Prachi ka story meinPrachi aur karam ke khoob maze hai
Aadha sach hi aaya hai abhi tak!Akanksha chudail hai
Dut nhi woh Ravisha aur Akansha aapas mein pyaar karte the pehle past lover...uski wajah se hi Akansha aise ban gye...Kya bhyanak twist hay karan kee Mousi Akansha aak chrail hay or uss kee jgah us kee aak doodh koo Mahrani bunaya huwa hay
Kyuki aakansha ke saath yeh sab Nandani jab 15 saal tak wahan nhi thi tab hua tha.lakin Karan kee maa apni bahan koo kun naa pahchan saki
Nhi...spoiler hai ek tarah se...lekin Payal asli hi hai...sab characters ke story same nhi ho skti...Payal ka role bahut imp hai story mein final arc mein after 100.or pher kuran kee bahan bhi kya asal may asli Akansha kee turha chrail hay or apni kisi doodh koo Karan kay sath keya huway hay
Whi toh...saree sawalon ke jawab ismein se hi chalu hote hai...or sub say bura sawal Karan kee chita apni maa kay jawab pay ager uss kee maa koo uss paydaish neshan kaa nahi puta tuu uss kee Mousi Akansha koo kasay pata
Haa abhi toh starting hi hue hai...sawal toh honge hikahani bohut buri turha say chukaroo may ouljhty jaa rahi hay
Thanksssany way good update
Dut nhi woh Ravisha aur Akansha aapas mein pyaar karte the pehle past lover...uski wajah se hi Akansha aise ban gye...
I just asked you how many updates I have to wait to see ( you know what) and you said "pLeAsE dOn'T sPoiL tHe sToRy mOrR." and here you're giving spoilers literaly from the plotline hmm!Kyuki aakansha ke saath yeh sab Nandani jab 15 saal tak wahan nhi thi tab hua tha.
Yeh koi spoiler thodi hai...chapter 16 mein Ravisha khud bolti hai ke main woh hoon jisse Akanhsa pyaar karte the.I just asked you how many updates I have to wait to see ( you know what) and you said "pLeAsE dOn'T sPoiL tHe sToRy mOrR." and here you're giving spoilers literaly from the plotline hmm!
Read the edited comment again...and that much is obvious...when Akansha in her real form said that "ab bas andhakaar hi bacha hai..." Toh in dono ke beech hi kuch hua hoga