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mistyvixen

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That's a big twist. Thought I was anticipating that there is something wrong with Akansha but I never expected this!
Yess...with KalJayi there.... a dark servant would have never been able to enter VanRajya so she needed a pure body...Ravisha's story is for later update🙃
I also stand corrected about Karan's character. Now it seems that he is very observant and he is thinking it through.
This is a very important skill where a single mistake can be fatal....as this world not merciful in any bit.
Also, I am not sure why but I think there is something going on in Nandini's head too. Prachi too seems to be just a pawn following someone's order to me!
Prachi has the most simplest story in the whole plot...but she will have a crucial role in Karan's development later!
A small request, the spelling of कक्ष has been consistently wrong, this is the first time I felt something bothering me.
What's the right spelling in Roman? Kashya or kshaya... I'm honestly confused
However, a wonderful update. I can't wait for the next one. Bring it on soon!
Thanks💕✨ would start writing soon:writing:
Till then, stay horny and write greatest scenes of all time!💝
On God! You just wait for the wars... they'll be supper freaking awesome!!
 
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Wow Sonali ke sath uska bhai bhi a raha hai kya hoga jab Akshay payal ko dekhe ga aur Karan ka kya reaction hog ?
Time is the biggest answer 🙃
You'll see
Aur ye akansha nahi hai ye ravisha hai. Asli akansha ek chudail hai aur ye salahkar bhi Mila hua hai .
Backstory mein Jayda maza hai.
Aur rakshak ne Karan aur payal ko hi kyon bulaya kya koi raaz hai jo bataya Jayga ya fir kuch aur dekhna padega
Kyuki woh dono hi pichle Raja ke bachche hai🙃 ...wait he'll be nicer this time.
BTW update padhke intezar ka fal milgaya .
Enjoyed?
Lekin payal ko gayab rakha lagta hai jail me hi hai abhi choti nahi hai jaldi nikalo nahi to aap se katti meri payalllll......🤧🤧🤧
Smjhi nhi...Payal toh whi hai unke paas🤔

THANKS for reading so deeply💕✨
 
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Time is the biggest answer 🙃
You'll see
Ok I am waiting, what happened in next update
Backstory mein Jayda maza hai.
Let's see how much fun in past story
Kyuki woh dono hi pichle Raja ke bachche hai🙃 ...wait he'll be nicer this time.
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Smjhi nhi...Payal toh whi hai unke paas🤔
😂😂 I'm joking sister because payal dissappear in this update
THANKS for reading so deeply💕✨
And thank you for writing story for all💙💙
 
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Darr toh nhi gye😂

You don't know how scary other pictures came out...this one is the mid version of that
Really...try me then . Dm me the scariest one
angry henry cavill GIF by Mission Impossible
 
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Kya bhyanak twist hay karan kee Mousi Akansha aak chrail hay or uss kee jgah us kee aak doodh koo Mahrani bunaya huwa hay
Dut nhi woh Ravisha aur Akansha aapas mein pyaar karte the pehle🙃 past lover...uski wajah se hi Akansha aise ban gye...
lakin Karan kee maa apni bahan koo kun naa pahchan saki
Kyuki aakansha ke saath yeh sab Nandani jab 15 saal tak wahan nhi thi tab hua tha.
or pher kuran kee bahan bhi kya asal may asli Akansha kee turha chrail hay or apni kisi doodh koo Karan kay sath keya huway hay
Nhi...spoiler hai ek tarah se...lekin Payal asli hi hai...sab characters ke story same nhi ho skti...Payal ka role bahut imp hai story mein final arc mein after 100.
or sub say bura sawal Karan kee chita apni maa kay jawab pay ager uss kee maa koo uss paydaish neshan kaa nahi puta tuu uss kee Mousi Akansha koo kasay pata
Whi toh...saree sawalon ke jawab ismein se hi chalu hote hai...
kahani bohut buri turha say chukaroo may ouljhty jaa rahi hay
Haa abhi toh starting hi hue hai...sawal toh honge hi
any way good update
Thanksss :love2:
 

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Dut nhi woh Ravisha aur Akansha aapas mein pyaar karte the pehle🙃 past lover...uski wajah se hi Akansha aise ban gye...
Kyuki aakansha ke saath yeh sab Nandani jab 15 saal tak wahan nhi thi tab hua tha.
😡I just asked you how many updates I have to wait to see ( you know what) and you said "pLeAsE dOn'T sPoiL tHe sToRy mOrR." and here you're giving spoilers literaly from the plotline hmm! 😤
 
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😡I just asked you how many updates I have to wait to see ( you know what) and you said "pLeAsE dOn'T sPoiL tHe sToRy mOrR." and here you're giving spoilers literaly from the plotline hmm! 😤
Yeh koi spoiler thodi hai...chapter 16 mein Ravisha khud bolti hai ke main woh hoon jisse Akanhsa pyaar karte the.😴

Aur..
Nandini, Akansha ko ache se pehchanti hai...yaad hai 7 mein usne kaha tha ke woh Karan se kitna pyaar karte hai aur pehle usse milna chaege akela...toh .

Nandani se yeh Raaz chupna is impossible...lekin abhi tak dono behane mile hi nhi🙃

Start reading plot seriously :haha:
 
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Read the edited comment again...and that much is obvious...when Akansha in her real form said that "ab bas andhakaar hi bacha hai..." Toh in dono ke beech hi kuch hua hoga:think:

Kuch bhi spoil nhi kiya maine...jo obvious hai whi hai sab :sip:
 
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