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mistyvixen

Immersing in Extreme Ways (Bourne)
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Update 16(Review)
Tarkash kingdom 4 humungous snakes ke karan impenetrable lag raha hai magar itihaas gawah hai koi bhi kingdom puri tarah se abhed nahi ho sakta hai.
3xactly! Nothing is absolute in the world. We have already seen many huge forts being seiged.
Aisa lagta hai jaise Akshay khud apne bahan ki beauty ke jaal mein phas gaya hai.
Hmm....that is subjective... it's normal for the women to admire their brother's traits? :idk1:
Ye *Varutha* kaun hai par aisa lagta hai jaise koi ahanakari king hoga jo sirf apne takat ke chalte logo mein darr paida karta hoga.
Varutha is that colossal octopus monster earlier we saw in the story 🙃...just imagine Dravya fighting it with his four huge snakes :cowboy2:
Badi strange baat hai Karan ke dad ne apni wife ko hi kingdom ke uttradhikari ke mark ke bare mein nahi pata hai aur Ravisha ko pata hai jo pahle kabhi Nandini ki bahan Akansha ki mate rahi hai.
Hm... I saved this moment for this chapter only...nhi toh kabhi bhi reveal karne se maza kharab ho jata...aur ab Karan ko sak hogaya hai!

Akansha ye chudail kaise ban gayi ya phir pahle se hi chudail rahi ho, par aisa hota to Nandini ko pata hona chahiye tha.
Right? Nandini apni behan ko ache se jante hai...aur tajub yeh hai ke abhi tak dono mile nhi hai...yaad hai in prison Nandani said that she knows Aksnha very well...nhi toh Akansha pechan lete usse... God's plan (or mine 🙃)

That secret is for later updates..and think a lil' if the real Akansha still has feelings for her family?
At the end Vikram ko uski Jeet ka phal mil gaya maut ke roop mein.
Akansha always hunts the best meat :death:...
Bahut sare sawal hain jo unanswered hain??
Obviously....story mein kitne sawal hote hai utna interest aata hai😊
Akansha wahan andhere kamre mein kya kar rahi hai aur matlab jo pahle Akansha ke roop mein Ravisha ne kaha tha ki koi tumhe dhokha de to tum kya karoge???
As I said earlier...she was testing Karan aur woh questions bhi aise hi nhi the...baaki apne saathiyon ke madad lena would be crucial too in the upcoming plot!
Karan ka surprise hona relevant hai ki uski mausi(Akansha) ko kaise pata chala us bird ke mark ke bare mein jab uski mom ko hi nahi pata hai??
Right...yeh line aur add karna bhul gye main...
"Ke Akansha ne fir usse juth kyu bola ke woh sign usse banayaa tha.." now it would feel more fishy!

Amazing update with some mysteries to unfold.
Can't thank you enough:love2:
mistyvixen

Itna chhota review thik hai ya phir aur bada chahiye par ek baar mere bare mein bhi soch lena mujhe bahut sare reviews dene padte hain aur khud ki story bhi likhni hoti hai.
Yeh chota kahan se tha...this is the most detailed review about the plot I've received till now...and definitely it goes on the first page!💕✨
 
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