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  • Achi hai continue karo........

    Votes: 125 83.3%
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    Votes: 5 3.3%
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Aise hi 2 din aur bit gaye.......in 2 dino mein jyada kuch khas nhi hua ....Choti Chachi ne khud ko sambhal liya tha........Neha aur Megha dono bhi abhi Arin ke mansion mein thi.....

Aksara ne kai bar Arin ko contact karne ki kosish ki ....uski Didi aur Maa ke kehne pe....lekin Arin ke taraf se koi jawab nhi aya......

lekin Aaj Arin hospital pohoch gaya ....jake dekha ke waha pe abhi sabhi the....uska Baap ka halat bhi abhi sahi thi.....

Arin....kya bat hai sab log ek sath...

Arin ne apni Maa aur beheno ko dekhte huye bola......

Aksara ne jaise hi Arin ko dekhi to jhat se uske gale lag gayi....aur dheere dheere subakne lagi....kyunki jabse wo terrorist wala humla hua tha...woh bohot hi dar chuki thi....jis sahare ke intejar mein wo thi...usr ab mil chuki thi....

Arin ne. USe alag karna chaha to wo use aur bhi kaske pakad liya....aur Aksara ne Arin ke kaan mein dheere se boli....mujhe pata hai tum hi Reaper ho....

Arin ne jyada kuch react nhi kiya....bas muskura diya.....

Arin ne waise hi bola....haa to malhotra Pariwar main kuch batane aya hun....

sab log use sawaliya najro se dekhne lage.....

Arin...main humesha ke liye yahan se jaa raha hun......apko meri Manhoosiyat aur sehen nhi karni hogi.......

Maa.....nhi beta aise. Mat bolo...mana ke humne bohot badi galti ki hai...lekin hume chhod ke mat jao....jab se humari ankhein khuli hai...tabse hum tumhare liyr taras rahe hai.....main hath jodti hun.....hume maaf mat karo lekin aise chhod ke na jao....

Arin....kya baat hai....itna pyar....agar main pehla jaisa hota to shyad pighal bhi jata......aur main kitni bar bolun...main apka beta nhi hun.....na mujhe janam dete waqt apne mujhe beta kaha tha....na ab main manta hun....

aur galti....acha thik hai man liya...ke Chacha ne sab kuch plan kiya tha....lekin aap log itne andhe the ke ek bache pe waise iljam lagaya aur....uske sath janwaro jaisa iljam lagaya....kher ap logo ko yeh bolke koi faida nhi hai....abhi bhi agar koi aake keh de ke main galat hun to aap log phir se wahi sab karenge....


Yeh baatein sunke waha rahe sab logo ke sar niche ho gayi.....


Arin....aur rahi baat Mere jane ki to main yaha puchne nhi aya hun....batane aya hun....aap logo ki yahi saja hai ke sari jindagi aurat ki khwaish mein har din taraf te huye....jinda raho.....ek to ap logo ko chhod ke bhag chuka hai....

A.papa.....matlab....

Arin....muskurake.....matlab yeh ke apka pyara beta...ap logo ke paise leke bhag chuka hai.......

Maa....nhi nhi nhi yeh sach nhi hai tum humein tadpane ke liye yeh sab keh rahe ho....

Arin.....hahahahaha....acha mere baaton pe yakin naa ho to use call karke dekho.....

Sabhi ne bari bari call lagane ki kosish ki lekin not reachable bata raha tha....akhir mein Arin ne bola.....

ho gayi tasalli.....ek ladki ke liye usne ap logo ke paise leke bhag gaya.....main rok sakta tha...lekin kyun roku main....

Sab kuch janne ke baad Maa ne apne sar pakar ke baith gayi...aur rone lagi.....Papa bhi ro rahe the....
Didi ka bhi wahi haal tha...lekin Aksara wo abhi bhi Arin ko pakde huye the....

Arin....jyada chinta mat karo....hospital ka bill bhar diya gaya hai....ap.logo ko apke purane ghar bhi wapas mil jayega....aur akhri baat apka beta wapas ayega....use uski karni ki saja bhi bhugatna hoga.....

yeh bolke Arin waha se jane ke liye Aksara ko alag karna chaha...lekin woj alag na huyi....bas itna boli...mujhe bhi jana hai.....

Arin ne bina koi jawab diye...use waha se leke gayab ho gaya....aur piche rakh ke gaya Hairan pareshan apni dukhi pariwar ko...jinke pas abhi jine ka koi sahara nhi bacha tha.....na aulad na paisa....

Arin ne Aksara ko wahi sab dikhaya jo usne Amayra ko dikhaya tha ke...woh kaun hai.....

Aksara woh sab dekhke itna dar gayi thi ke ...wo behosh ho gayi.....

Arin use leke wapas usi hospital ke usi room meim aa gaya....Aksara ko waise dekhke sab log pareshan ho gaye.....

Arin...ghabrane ki jaroorat nhi hai....yeh bas behosh hai....aap logo ne dekh liya.....jis din main khai se gira tha..usi din apke bete ki Maut ho gayi thi.....ab main koi apka beta nhi hun.....Jaane se pehle itna wada karoonga....jindagi mein aap logo ko kabhi khush nhi hone dunga.....jab bhi aap log khush honge...us khushi ka kaal banunga main.....

Bas yeh bolke wo waha se nikal gaya.......

jab wo apne Mansion mein pohocha to waha Amayra aur Ellie dono hi intejar kar rahe the....

Arin...meri sherniyan wapas aa gayi hai....

Ellie...daur ke ake Arin ke gale se lag gayi....

Arin ne muskurate huye Amayra se bola....tum kyun baithi ho...tum bhi aa jao....

Amayra bhi ake Arin ke gale se lag gayi....

Arin...to kaisa raha safar....ache se sab kuch kiya na.....

Ellie....bohot acha gaya humara safar....woh chehekte huye boli...

Arin....kya baat hai chhoti sherni kuch jyada hi khush hai...

Amayra....khush kyun nhi hogi...waha ise ladne ko jo mila hai....aur last mein Colossal ko isne hi khatam kiya tha.....

Arin...kya baat hai...meri chhoti biwi ne to bohot acha kam kiya hai....to iska matlab prize to dena banta hai....

Ellie...sharma gayi...

Amayra....bacho jaisi bolte huye...kyun mujhe nhi milegi kya...maine bhi to mehnat ki hai..kitna sara....

Arin....acha acha meri Amu ko bhi milegi....

Arin....acha suno....hum mere Kingdom mein jaa rahe hai....humesha ke liye....to bolo kaha shadi karna chahogi....yaha ya phir Wahi pe....

Amayra ne kuch der soch ke boli....kyun na hum Ellie ke planet pe hi shadi kare....

Arin...bohot acha sujhav....hum kal hi nikal jayenge....aur phir wahi pe hi shadi hogi.....

tabhi piche se Chachi ate huye boli......kiski shadi ho rahi hai Aksh beta...??aur yeh dono itni pyari bachiya kaun hai...

Arin....main abhi apko hi bulane wala tha chachi....kuch jaroori baat karni hai.....

Chachi...kya baat hai beta ??

Arin ....aap pehle baithiye....yeh bolke usne Neha aur Megha ko bhi bula liya....

Dono behne bhi waha baith gayi ake....

Arin....acha to jab tak na bolun...koi kuch nhi bolega.....sabse pehli baat .....yeh dono hai Amayra aut Ellie....yeh dono meri patniya hai.....

Chachi aur Neha Megha shock ho gaye...kuch bolne wale the ke Arin ne unhe rokte huye bola.....abhi shadi nhi huyi hai.....lekin jald hi hogi....
ek lambi saans leke....aur dusri baat Hum loh insan nhi hai....

Chachi...ek minute...ek minute abhi tumne kya bola....insan nhi ho...iska matlab kya hai....

Arin bas muskuraya aur Amayra aur Ellie ke taraf dekhke bola apne asli roop mein aa jao.....

phir kya tha....Arin apne LORD CHAOS wale roop mein Amayra apne Queen Chaos ke roop mein aur Ellie...apne asli roop mein aa gayi.....

Jab tino maa beti ne inka asli roop dekha to...woh log dar ke mare ek dusre ko pakad liye....

Arin ne fatafat normal roop mein agaya....aur bola...darne ki jaroorat nhi hai....yehi hai meri asliyat.....main kal yaha se humesha ke liye jaa raha hun....meri sari property ap log aur Bade chacha ke bete ke naam kiya hua hai....mujhe yaha se kuch bhi nhi chahiye....

Choti Chachi....hath jor ke ankhon mein ansoon liye boli.....main dhanya ho gayi apko apna beta paa ke....meri bas ek akhri khwaish hai....main apko apna khud ka beta kehna chahti hun....

Arin...is janam mein to yeh sambhab nhi hai...lekin...apki khwaish jaroor puri hogi....


iske baad agle din Arin Amayra aur Ellie ko leke nikal gaya....lekin jane se pehle...Chacha ko ajad kar diya tha...lekin unke memory ko alter karke...abhi wo ek ache insan the.....

Kuch din bad Arin ne Amayra aur Ellie se Ellie ke planet pe shadi kiya.....aur waha kuch din aur ruk ke.....woh apne Kingdom chala gaya.....

Baki logo ka kya hua....Amar jis ladki ko leke bhaga tha....usi ne ladki ne uske sare paise leke bhag gayi.....aur Amar ek begger ki jindagi jine laga....kuch mahine baad kisine uspe taras kha ke use India wapas bhej diya...jaha wo sharmindagi ke karan apne ghar wapas na gaya....

Aksara...ne khud ko sambhal liya tha...aur wo humesha yehi pray karti rahti ke...use Arin mil jaye...wo wapas aa jaye....

Arin ne bade chacha ke bete ko bhi thik kar diya tha....wo abhi Chachi ke sath milke Arin ke pure Empire ki dekhbhal karta tha.....

Aur baki ke pariwar wahi hatash...nirash...dukh bhari zindagi gujarne lage....jab tak unka anta na agaya ho......






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End Of The New Beginning......
 

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Aise hi 2 din aur bit gaye.......in 2 dino mein jyada kuch khas nhi hua ....Choti Chachi ne khud ko sambhal liya tha........Neha aur Megha dono bhi abhi Arin ke mansion mein thi.....

Aksara ne kai bar Arin ko contact karne ki kosish ki ....uski Didi aur Maa ke kehne pe....lekin Arin ke taraf se koi jawab nhi aya......

lekin Aaj Arin hospital pohoch gaya ....jake dekha ke waha pe abhi sabhi the....uska Baap ka halat bhi abhi sahi thi.....

Arin....kya bat hai sab log ek sath...

Arin ne apni Maa aur beheno ko dekhte huye bola......

Aksara ne jaise hi Arin ko dekhi to jhat se uske gale lag gayi....aur dheere dheere subakne lagi....kyunki jabse wo terrorist wala humla hua tha...woh bohot hi dar chuki thi....jis sahare ke intejar mein wo thi...usr ab mil chuki thi....

Arin ne. USe alag karna chaha to wo use aur bhi kaske pakad liya....aur Aksara ne Arin ke kaan mein dheere se boli....mujhe pata hai tum hi Reaper ho....

Arin ne jyada kuch react nhi kiya....bas muskura diya.....

Arin ne waise hi bola....haa to malhotra Pariwar main kuch batane aya hun....

sab log use sawaliya najro se dekhne lage.....

Arin...main humesha ke liye yahan se jaa raha hun......apko meri Manhoosiyat aur sehen nhi karni hogi.......

Maa.....nhi beta aise. Mat bolo...mana ke humne bohot badi galti ki hai...lekin hume chhod ke mat jao....jab se humari ankhein khuli hai...tabse hum tumhare liyr taras rahe hai.....main hath jodti hun.....hume maaf mat karo lekin aise chhod ke na jao....

Arin....kya baat hai....itna pyar....agar main pehla jaisa hota to shyad pighal bhi jata......aur main kitni bar bolun...main apka beta nhi hun.....na mujhe janam dete waqt apne mujhe beta kaha tha....na ab main manta hun....

aur galti....acha thik hai man liya...ke Chacha ne sab kuch plan kiya tha....lekin aap log itne andhe the ke ek bache pe waise iljam lagaya aur....uske sath janwaro jaisa iljam lagaya....kher ap logo ko yeh bolke koi faida nhi hai....abhi bhi agar koi aake keh de ke main galat hun to aap log phir se wahi sab karenge....


Yeh baatein sunke waha rahe sab logo ke sar niche ho gayi.....


Arin....aur rahi baat Mere jane ki to main yaha puchne nhi aya hun....batane aya hun....aap logo ki yahi saja hai ke sari jindagi aurat ki khwaish mein har din taraf te huye....jinda raho.....ek to ap logo ko chhod ke bhag chuka hai....

A.papa.....matlab....

Arin....muskurake.....matlab yeh ke apka pyara beta...ap logo ke paise leke bhag chuka hai.......

Maa....nhi nhi nhi yeh sach nhi hai tum humein tadpane ke liye yeh sab keh rahe ho....

Arin.....hahahahaha....acha mere baaton pe yakin naa ho to use call karke dekho.....

Sabhi ne bari bari call lagane ki kosish ki lekin not reachable bata raha tha....akhir mein Arin ne bola.....

ho gayi tasalli.....ek ladki ke liye usne ap logo ke paise leke bhag gaya.....main rok sakta tha...lekin kyun roku main....

Sab kuch janne ke baad Maa ne apne sar pakar ke baith gayi...aur rone lagi.....Papa bhi ro rahe the....
Didi ka bhi wahi haal tha...lekin Aksara wo abhi bhi Arin ko pakde huye the....

Arin....jyada chinta mat karo....hospital ka bill bhar diya gaya hai....ap.logo ko apke purane ghar bhi wapas mil jayega....aur akhri baat apka beta wapas ayega....use uski karni ki saja bhi bhugatna hoga.....

yeh bolke Arin waha se jane ke liye Aksara ko alag karna chaha...lekin woj alag na huyi....bas itna boli...mujhe bhi jana hai.....

Arin ne bina koi jawab diye...use waha se leke gayab ho gaya....aur piche rakh ke gaya Hairan pareshan apni dukhi pariwar ko...jinke pas abhi jine ka koi sahara nhi bacha tha.....na aulad na paisa....

Arin ne Aksara ko wahi sab dikhaya jo usne Amayra ko dikhaya tha ke...woh kaun hai.....

Aksara woh sab dekhke itna dar gayi thi ke ...wo behosh ho gayi.....

Arin use leke wapas usi hospital ke usi room meim aa gaya....Aksara ko waise dekhke sab log pareshan ho gaye.....

Arin...ghabrane ki jaroorat nhi hai....yeh bas behosh hai....aap logo ne dekh liya.....jis din main khai se gira tha..usi din apke bete ki Maut ho gayi thi.....ab main koi apka beta nhi hun.....Jaane se pehle itna wada karoonga....jindagi mein aap logo ko kabhi khush nhi hone dunga.....jab bhi aap log khush honge...us khushi ka kaal banunga main.....

Bas yeh bolke wo waha se nikal gaya.......

jab wo apne Mansion mein pohocha to waha Amayra aur Ellie dono hi intejar kar rahe the....

Arin...meri sherniyan wapas aa gayi hai....

Ellie...daur ke ake Arin ke gale se lag gayi....

Arin ne muskurate huye Amayra se bola....tum kyun baithi ho...tum bhi aa jao....

Amayra bhi ake Arin ke gale se lag gayi....

Arin...to kaisa raha safar....ache se sab kuch kiya na.....

Ellie....bohot acha gaya humara safar....woh chehekte huye boli...

Arin....kya baat hai chhoti sherni kuch jyada hi khush hai...

Amayra....khush kyun nhi hogi...waha ise ladne ko jo mila hai....aur last mein Colossal ko isne hi khatam kiya tha.....

Arin...kya baat hai...meri chhoti biwi ne to bohot acha kam kiya hai....to iska matlab prize to dena banta hai....

Ellie...sharma gayi...

Amayra....bacho jaisi bolte huye...kyun mujhe nhi milegi kya...maine bhi to mehnat ki hai..kitna sara....

Arin....acha acha meri Amu ko bhi milegi....

Arin....acha suno....hum mere Kingdom mein jaa rahe hai....humesha ke liye....to bolo kaha shadi karna chahogi....yaha ya phir Wahi pe....

Amayra ne kuch der soch ke boli....kyun na hum Ellie ke planet pe hi shadi kare....

Arin...bohot acha sujhav....hum kal hi nikal jayenge....aur phir wahi pe hi shadi hogi.....

tabhi piche se Chachi ate huye boli......kiski shadi ho rahi hai Aksh beta...??aur yeh dono itni pyari bachiya kaun hai...

Arin....main abhi apko hi bulane wala tha chachi....kuch jaroori baat karni hai.....

Chachi...kya baat hai beta ??

Arin ....aap pehle baithiye....yeh bolke usne Neha aur Megha ko bhi bula liya....

Dono behne bhi waha baith gayi ake....

Arin....acha to jab tak na bolun...koi kuch nhi bolega.....sabse pehli baat .....yeh dono hai Amayra aut Ellie....yeh dono meri patniya hai.....

Chachi aur Neha Megha shock ho gaye...kuch bolne wale the ke Arin ne unhe rokte huye bola.....abhi shadi nhi huyi hai.....lekin jald hi hogi....
ek lambi saans leke....aur dusri baat Hum loh insan nhi hai....

Chachi...ek minute...ek minute abhi tumne kya bola....insan nhi ho...iska matlab kya hai....

Arin bas muskuraya aur Amayra aur Ellie ke taraf dekhke bola apne asli roop mein aa jao.....

phir kya tha....Arin apne LORD CHAOS wale roop mein Amayra apne Queen Chaos ke roop mein aur Ellie...apne asli roop mein aa gayi.....

Jab tino maa beti ne inka asli roop dekha to...woh log dar ke mare ek dusre ko pakad liye....

Arin ne fatafat normal roop mein agaya....aur bola...darne ki jaroorat nhi hai....yehi hai meri asliyat.....main kal yaha se humesha ke liye jaa raha hun....meri sari property ap log aur Bade chacha ke bete ke naam kiya hua hai....mujhe yaha se kuch bhi nhi chahiye....

Choti Chachi....hath jor ke ankhon mein ansoon liye boli.....main dhanya ho gayi apko apna beta paa ke....meri bas ek akhri khwaish hai....main apko apna khud ka beta kehna chahti hun....

Arin...is janam mein to yeh sambhab nhi hai...lekin...apki khwaish jaroor puri hogi....


iske baad agle din Arin Amayra aur Ellie ko leke nikal gaya....lekin jane se pehle...Chacha ko ajad kar diya tha...lekin unke memory ko alter karke...abhi wo ek ache insan the.....

Kuch din bad Arin ne Amayra aur Ellie se Ellie ke planet pe shadi kiya.....aur waha kuch din aur ruk ke.....woh apne Kingdom chala gaya.....

Baki logo ka kya hua....Amar jis ladki ko leke bhaga tha....usi ne ladki ne uske sare paise leke bhag gayi.....aur Amar ek begger ki jindagi jine laga....kuch mahine baad kisine uspe taras kha ke use India wapas bhej diya...jaha wo sharmindagi ke karan apne ghar wapas na gaya....

Aksara...ne khud ko sambhal liya tha...aur wo humesha yehi pray karti rahti ke...use Arin mil jaye...wo wapas aa jaye....

Arin ne bade chacha ke bete ko bhi thik kar diya tha....wo abhi Chachi ke sath milke Arin ke pure Empire ki dekhbhal karta tha.....

Aur baki ke pariwar wahi hatash...nirash...dukh bhari zindagi gujarne lage....jab tak unka anta na agaya ho......










End Of The New Beginning......
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introductions..........

F
ather-Shankar Malhotra......age 46yrs. Height 5.9"ft . Ekdum smart look wala banda . Avi v bohot young dikhte hain. Kadak swavab lekin andr se naram , sabse pyar karte hai , khaskar apni family members ko (sivay ek ko chhorke) ek successful bussiness man hai.
Mother-Surbhi Malhotra......age 40yrs. Height 5.4"ft . Figure-36-34-38. Bohot hi sundar mahila hain ye. Bhale hi umr 40yrs lekin daily yoga se khud ko acha maintain kiya huya hai.swavab thode gusse wale hain. Apne pati aur bache hi inki sab kuch hain.

Dadaji......Late Jitendra Malhotra
Dadi...... Late Malini Malhotra
(flashback mein thoda role hai)

Amar..... Ye hai hero ka bada vai ... Avi ye 25 sal ka hai , aur apne bap ke sath bussiness sambhalta hai...padhayi puri ho chuki hai. Swavab se bigda hua . Ek number ka aiyash kisam ka, lekin kisiko pata nHi chalta.

Arti..... Ghar ki badi beti aur hero ki badi behen...age 25yrs Amar aur ye dono judwa hain.....isne padhai puri karke ek fashion boutique kholi hui hai. Khudke dum pe kuch karna chahti hai... Swavab mein apne vai se ulat ye shant hai aur iska byavhar vi bohot hi nirmal...koi buri adat nhi ..... Apne chhote vai ko bohot yaad karti hai....khubsurti bilkul apne maa jaisi...sundar ankhein, chehra aisi ki koi dekhe to kho jaye.aur figure v mast hai..

Aksara..... Ghar ki choti beti aur hero ki dusri behen umr avi 23 yrs. Avi graduation k final year mein hain. Future mein apna family bussiness sambhalne ki chahat hai. Sundarta mein apni maa beheno jaisi hai. Ghar mein sabse chanchal hai yeh...

Hero........... Arin Malhotra urf Aksh. 6.2ft height well built body, lekin chehre masoomiyat lekin jab apne pe utar aye to haiwan v dar jaye avi iski umr 21 yrs hai aur Australia mein rehta hai . Yeh banda thoda sa ajib hai pyar , relationship aur family in jaisi chizo se ye nafrat karta hai. Iski bas ek hi lakshya hai Badla .

Bade chacha..... Raghu Malhotra...age 50yrs ye bhi ek bussiness man hai apne vai k sath bussiness sambhalta hai
bohot hi harami type ka insan hai
Chachi- Kavita Malhotra ....age 47yrs....bohot hi kanuk aur sexy lady....inke bare age pata chalega aur bhi
inke ek beta aur ek beti hai. Beta thora mentally ill hai . Kyunki bada to ho gaya hai lekin dimag avi bacho wali hi hai
beti.... Payal....age 20yrs avi graduation kar rahi . khubsurti to kya kehne . Ekbar koi dekhle to na murke dekhe aisa to ho hi nhi sakta . Baap ki paise ki bohot zyada ghamand hai. Gussa to nak pe rehti hai hamesha . apne baap ki ladli hai.

chote chacha... Bipul Malhotra age 43yrs . Ye v apne bhaiyo k sath bussiness sanbhalte hain .... Swavab apne dono bhaiyo k ulat ekdum naram aur shant kisam ka

Chachi.....Ruby Malhotra...age 40yrs ek no ki kamini aur chalu aurat. Khubsurat v kafi hai aur ghamand v waisa hi..
inke ek beta aur beti hai

Rony ..... Inka beta age 22yrs....doulat k nashe mein bigad chuka hai ...har tarha k nasha karta hai....age aur bhi pata chalega

Neha aur Megha ......doni judwa hain avi 18yrs mein ayi hain......aur college k 1st yr mein hain apni baap ki ladli aur bohot hi shararati.....

yeh ek joint family hain sab ek sath hi rehte hain.


Mama......Kamal Malhotra hain .....age 43yrs.....ye ek Major hain Army mein zyadatar bahar hi rehte hain...
Mami......Swati....bohot hi sundar aur sweet hai ye apne pati aur bacho se bohot pyar karti hai....aur ek insaan hai jise yeh bohot pyar karti hai lekin use aj tak dhund nhi payi hai....

beti....Sheetal .....nam k mutabik inka swavab...age 22yrs.....avi padhai chal rahi hai .....khud k dum par kuch kar dikhane ki junoon hai isme
beta......Sagar.....avi chota hai .....ghar mein sabse choti member hai ye....


age aur bhi characters ayenge .....?

to be continued........
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.



To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

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