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Kaisi lag rahi hai ..continue karun ya nhi??

  • Achi hai continue karo........

    Votes: 125 83.3%
  • Zaroorat nahi hai...

    Votes: 5 3.3%
  • Sudhar ki zaroorat hai

    Votes: 2 1.3%
  • Incest.........

    Votes: 39 26.0%

  • Total voters
    150
  • Poll closed .

Jaguaar

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Update......11


Arin abhi soya hua hi tha ki use kuch ehsas hua aur wo jhat se uth ke pohoch gaya. Ek jagah pe........
yeh jagah ek night club ka underground parking area tha.......Arin ke samne kuch gunde thr jo do ladkiyo ki ijjat lutne ki kosish kar raha tha. Aur wo dono ladkiya chhutne ki kosish kar rhi thi lekin ......zyada resist nhi kar rahi thi

dekhne se aisa lag raha hai ke wo dono nashe mein hai.....

Arin ne ankhein band karke man mein hi kuch bola.......aur uske sarir pe ek suit aa gaya......muh pe nak tak mask sar pe ek bada sa hoodie......like in Assassins Creed game....lekin. Yeh suit ekdum black tha.........
Aur uske pith pe latak raha tha ek katana......wo bhi black color ka..
Arin dheere dheere chalte huye unke taraf chala gaya......

wo gunde kuk 6 admi the.....
ek gunda abhi ek ladki ki top fadne hi wala tha ke .......wo Arin ke najar mein agaya.....
Arin abhi kuch 20-25 feet ke duri pe hi tha ke......wo apna speed dikhaya.......aur ......slash......jst ek hawa ka awaj ayi.......aur jis gunde top ko pakda hua tha.....uske dono hath katke niche gira pada hua tha.......
pehle to use kuch samajh nhi aya.....jab samajh mein aya to jor jorse cheekh ne laga........

baki ke gunde yeh dekhke dar gaye ......lekin apne sathi ka hal dekhke gussa bhi aa raha tha unhe.......unka leader jo dusri ladki ko pakda hua tha.....usne bola.......

kaun hai tu ........pata hai main kaun hun.....main stephen hun.....is sahar ka Don ka bhai.....aur tune mere admi ka hath kat diya.......chhodunga nhi tujhe.......

lekin......Arin ne ek shabd bhi nhi bola......wo bas unse thodi hi duri pe chup chap khada tha.......Usne apne hath se ishara karke unko ladkiyo ko chhodne ka ishara kiya......

Stephen .....yeh dekhke aur bhi gussa ho gaya.....ki usne kuch bhi nhi bola aur use lal kar raha tha.......

wo gusse mein bola......salo mera muh kya dekh rahe ho....khatam karo ise.....

baki ke gunde Arin ke hath mein talwar dekhke pas mein khadi unki gadiyo se ..chaku,baseball bat......jaise hatiyar nikal liye......aur daudke ek sath Arin ke taraf jane lage.......

Arin bas shaant khada tha.....aur unhe ate huye dekh raha tha.......
abhi gunde thodi hi duri pe aa gaye the ki......Arin ne apna raftar dikhaya......aur bas ......wooosh.....slash aur gundo....ang ke tukde niche gir rahe the......aur unke chikhne se pehle hi unka sar dhad se alag.......

sabko khatam karke...Arin Stephen ke pas jane laga.....

Stephen to pehle hi dar gaya tha.....aur Arin ko apne taraf ata dekh aur bhi dar gaya......usne apne sath pakda hua ladki ko chhor ke fatafat apni gun nikal li.....aur ek ek karke fire karne laga.......

Lekin Arin to bas uske taraf chal raha tha.......har ek goli usse takra ke niche girne laga.......

Arin ne apne sword ki taraf dekha to wo khun se laal ho gaya tha......aur usse khoon ke bundein tapak raha tha......

Arin ke dekhte hi sword se khoon gayab ho gaya........aur khoon pe black falme aa gayi......

Stephen ki to ab fat ke 34 ho gayi thi......
wo waha se kutto ki tarah bhagne laga girte padte huye......
abhi thodi hi dur gaya tha ke........samne kisi se takra gaya......

jab uthke samne dekha to Uske samne Arin khada tha.....

Arin ne bina kuch bole.....apne sword ko chalaya.....aur Stephen ke body mein cut dene laga......hat pe ......pao pe.....uske sine pe......

cut lagte hi Stephen chikhne laga......kyunki wo jo black flames thi....wo use dheere dheere jala rahi thi......uska skin dheere dheere sar ke jhulas raha tha......

kyunki wo koi mamuli flames nhi thi......wo thi hell flames.....

BLACK FALMES OF GAHANA

Stephen ke ankhon ke samne uska pura zindagi bole to gunaah ghumne laga......kaise usne kitne ladkiyo ka rap aur murder kiya.....kitne bacho ko anath kiya......kitne bacho ke ang sarir se nikal ke becha.....kaise drugs ka lat lagwa ke logo ki zindagi barbad ki

wo cheekhne laga ........mujhe chhor do....mujhe chhor do....

lekin koi uska dard kam nhi kar raha tha

Arin ne apna talwar piche latkaya aur apne hath uske taraf karke....aise ishara kiya ke uska heart ko pakda ho......aur phir kuchalne ka ishara kiya

aur Stephen ko cheekhne ka mouka bhi na mila aur niche gir gaya......


idhar wo ladkiya abhi bhi nashe mein thi.....unhe kuch ahsas hi nhi tha....ke unke sath kya kya ho raha tha....

Arin unke pas gaya aur unke sar pe hath rakha.....aur wo dono so gaye.......

Arin waha se nikal ke teleport hua.....un ladkiyo ke kamre mein.....matlab apne purane ghar mein......

iska matlab yeh dono ladkiya chhote chacha ke betiya hai......Neha aur Megha

lekin sawal yeh hai ke yeh dono raat ke time us jagah pe kya kar rhi thi........
kher isse humein koi lena dena nhi hai......

Arin unhe leta ke waha se nikal gaya......aur jake so gaya....

Subah.....

charo taraf khauf ka samah tha ....
tv pe kal raat huyi seher ke mashoor gunde Peter ki bhai ka murder ka news chal rahi thi......

yeh news peter bhi dekh chuka tha......wo turant us jagah ke liye nikal gaya......

police bhi thi us underground parking area mein . Chari taraf nakabandi thi.......

Peter jake apne bhai ke lash ke pas gaya .....jo is waqt sefed kapde mein lipta hua tha......

aur thodi hi duru mein kati fati lashein giri huyu thi aur pas ke diwar mein likha tha.......

REAPER

jise dekhke wo thoda dara lekin......phir bhi apne bhai ke maut ke badle mein aur bhi gusse mein agaya.......

kyunki wo yeh nam janta tha.....k yeh koun hai......iski power kya hai......

lekin use yeh baat samajh nhi aa rahi thi ke uske bhai ko kyu. Mara Reaper ne.....

kher gusse aur dukh mein wo waha se apne bhai ke lash ko uthake chalne lga...

police bhi dar ke mare kuch nhi bola....

sabko bas yehi dar tha ke......ab to iss seher ki kher nhi.....peter ab haiwan ban jayega.....apne bhai ki maut ka badla lene

aur udhar police bhi thodi dar gayi thi Reaper ka nam dekhke

unhe bhi Reaper ke bare mein thoda bohot pata tha.....

peter chup chap udhar se nikal gaya......aur man mein socha....

Tune mere bhai ko mar kar acha nhi kiya......tujhe dhund ke maroonga mein Reaper......

Aur idhar Arin ko yeh sab baatein pata chal chuka tha......wo bas muskaray aur bola.........

I'm waiting.......


to be continued.........
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Raj 88

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Update......11


Arin abhi soya hua hi tha ki use kuch ehsas hua aur wo jhat se uth ke pohoch gaya. Ek jagah pe........
yeh jagah ek night club ka underground parking area tha.......Arin ke samne kuch gunde thr jo do ladkiyo ki ijjat lutne ki kosish kar raha tha. Aur wo dono ladkiya chhutne ki kosish kar rhi thi lekin ......zyada resist nhi kar rahi thi

dekhne se aisa lag raha hai ke wo dono nashe mein hai.....

Arin ne ankhein band karke man mein hi kuch bola.......aur uske sarir pe ek suit aa gaya......muh pe nak tak mask sar pe ek bada sa hoodie......like in Assassins Creed game....lekin. Yeh suit ekdum black tha.........
Aur uske pith pe latak raha tha ek katana......wo bhi black color ka..
Arin dheere dheere chalte huye unke taraf chala gaya......

wo gunde kuk 6 admi the.....
ek gunda abhi ek ladki ki top fadne hi wala tha ke .......wo Arin ke najar mein agaya.....
Arin abhi kuch 20-25 feet ke duri pe hi tha ke......wo apna speed dikhaya.......aur ......slash......jst ek hawa ka awaj ayi.......aur jis gunde top ko pakda hua tha.....uske dono hath katke niche gira pada hua tha.......
pehle to use kuch samajh nhi aya.....jab samajh mein aya to jor jorse cheekh ne laga........

baki ke gunde yeh dekhke dar gaye ......lekin apne sathi ka hal dekhke gussa bhi aa raha tha unhe.......unka leader jo dusri ladki ko pakda hua tha.....usne bola.......

kaun hai tu ........pata hai main kaun hun.....main stephen hun.....is sahar ka Don ka bhai.....aur tune mere admi ka hath kat diya.......chhodunga nhi tujhe.......

lekin......Arin ne ek shabd bhi nhi bola......wo bas unse thodi hi duri pe chup chap khada tha.......Usne apne hath se ishara karke unko ladkiyo ko chhodne ka ishara kiya......

Stephen .....yeh dekhke aur bhi gussa ho gaya.....ki usne kuch bhi nhi bola aur use lal kar raha tha.......

wo gusse mein bola......salo mera muh kya dekh rahe ho....khatam karo ise.....

baki ke gunde Arin ke hath mein talwar dekhke pas mein khadi unki gadiyo se ..chaku,baseball bat......jaise hatiyar nikal liye......aur daudke ek sath Arin ke taraf jane lage.......

Arin bas shaant khada tha.....aur unhe ate huye dekh raha tha.......
abhi gunde thodi hi duri pe aa gaye the ki......Arin ne apna raftar dikhaya......aur bas ......wooosh.....slash aur gundo....ang ke tukde niche gir rahe the......aur unke chikhne se pehle hi unka sar dhad se alag.......

sabko khatam karke...Arin Stephen ke pas jane laga.....

Stephen to pehle hi dar gaya tha.....aur Arin ko apne taraf ata dekh aur bhi dar gaya......usne apne sath pakda hua ladki ko chhor ke fatafat apni gun nikal li.....aur ek ek karke fire karne laga.......

Lekin Arin to bas uske taraf chal raha tha.......har ek goli usse takra ke niche girne laga.......

Arin ne apne sword ki taraf dekha to wo khun se laal ho gaya tha......aur usse khoon ke bundein tapak raha tha......

Arin ke dekhte hi sword se khoon gayab ho gaya........aur khoon pe black falme aa gayi......

Stephen ki to ab fat ke 34 ho gayi thi......
wo waha se kutto ki tarah bhagne laga girte padte huye......
abhi thodi hi dur gaya tha ke........samne kisi se takra gaya......

jab uthke samne dekha to Uske samne Arin khada tha.....

Arin ne bina kuch bole.....apne sword ko chalaya.....aur Stephen ke body mein cut dene laga......hat pe ......pao pe.....uske sine pe......

cut lagte hi Stephen chikhne laga......kyunki wo jo black flames thi....wo use dheere dheere jala rahi thi......uska skin dheere dheere sar ke jhulas raha tha......

kyunki wo koi mamuli flames nhi thi......wo thi hell flames.....

BLACK FALMES OF GAHANA

Stephen ke ankhon ke samne uska pura zindagi bole to gunaah ghumne laga......kaise usne kitne ladkiyo ka rap aur murder kiya.....kitne bacho ko anath kiya......kitne bacho ke ang sarir se nikal ke becha.....kaise drugs ka lat lagwa ke logo ki zindagi barbad ki

wo cheekhne laga ........mujhe chhor do....mujhe chhor do....

lekin koi uska dard kam nhi kar raha tha

Arin ne apna talwar piche latkaya aur apne hath uske taraf karke....aise ishara kiya ke uska heart ko pakda ho......aur phir kuchalne ka ishara kiya

aur Stephen ko cheekhne ka mouka bhi na mila aur niche gir gaya......


idhar wo ladkiya abhi bhi nashe mein thi.....unhe kuch ahsas hi nhi tha....ke unke sath kya kya ho raha tha....

Arin unke pas gaya aur unke sar pe hath rakha.....aur wo dono so gaye.......

Arin waha se nikal ke teleport hua.....un ladkiyo ke kamre mein.....matlab apne purane ghar mein......

iska matlab yeh dono ladkiya chhote chacha ke betiya hai......Neha aur Megha

lekin sawal yeh hai ke yeh dono raat ke time us jagah pe kya kar rhi thi........
kher isse humein koi lena dena nhi hai......

Arin unhe leta ke waha se nikal gaya......aur jake so gaya....

Subah.....

charo taraf khauf ka samah tha ....
tv pe kal raat huyi seher ke mashoor gunde Peter ki bhai ka murder ka news chal rahi thi......

yeh news peter bhi dekh chuka tha......wo turant us jagah ke liye nikal gaya......

police bhi thi us underground parking area mein . Chari taraf nakabandi thi.......

Peter jake apne bhai ke lash ke pas gaya .....jo is waqt sefed kapde mein lipta hua tha......

aur thodi hi duru mein kati fati lashein giri huyu thi aur pas ke diwar mein likha tha.......

REAPER

jise dekhke wo thoda dara lekin......phir bhi apne bhai ke maut ke badle mein aur bhi gusse mein agaya.......

kyunki wo yeh nam janta tha.....k yeh koun hai......iski power kya hai......

lekin use yeh baat samajh nhi aa rahi thi ke uske bhai ko kyu. Mara Reaper ne.....

kher gusse aur dukh mein wo waha se apne bhai ke lash ko uthake chalne lga...

police bhi dar ke mare kuch nhi bola....

sabko bas yehi dar tha ke......ab to iss seher ki kher nhi.....peter ab haiwan ban jayega.....apne bhai ki maut ka badla lene

aur udhar police bhi thodi dar gayi thi Reaper ka nam dekhke

unhe bhi Reaper ke bare mein thoda bohot pata tha.....

peter chup chap udhar se nikal gaya......aur man mein socha....

Tune mere bhai ko mar kar acha nhi kiya......tujhe dhund ke maroonga mein Reaper......

Aur idhar Arin ko yeh sab baatein pata chal chuka tha......wo bas muskaray aur bola.........

I'm waiting.......


to be continued.........
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