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Fantasy Evolution~Is not end, Is beginning

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Guys mai ek silent reader hu aur yaha itni mast mast story padhkar mera dil mai bhi ek story likhna ka kar diya mai koi professional writter to nahi hu lekin mai fir bhi aap sabke samne apni ek kaalpanik story rakhna chahta hu es story mai aage kya kya aayega woh sab aapko story padhne se pata chal jayega..

Guys Story ka update 8th update is post niche diye hue link se check kar lena..

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And kya es platform mai incest story hi zada chalti hai fantasy story nahi? :verysad:
 
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Next update ko likhne mai mujhe thoda time lagega yeh shuru ke 2 updates to mene pehele hi likhe hue the bas update 2 ko aaj complete kara tha update 3 aap sabhi ko 2 ya 3 din mai mil jayega and mai un 10 family ke naam update 0 mai mention kar dunga jo abhi earth ki sabse badi family hai.​
10 family ke naam update 0 mai mention kar dunga???? ---------Mene Update 0 me dekha mujhe nahi mila???
 
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UPDATE-02
It's Literally A Mysterious Day..

Ab tak..

Ansh ek 7 saal ka ladka jo abhi delhi ke ek town mai ek chai ki dukaan pe kaam kar raha hai ek raat usse samne pahaad pe ek roshni dikahi deti hai apni jigyaasa ke chalte woh us roshni ke pass chala jate hai aage jakar usse pata chalta hai ki woh roshni ek darwaje se aa rahi thi aur kab woh darwaja khulta hai to usme se koi bahut tez udkar samne ki deevar se takra jata hai..


Ab aage..

Ansh ne us taraf dekha jaha se abhi koi us darwaje se udkar bahar aaya tha ki kabhi Ansh ko ek karah ki awaaz sunai di yeh awaaz sun kar Ansh apne man mai kehta hai..

'Yeh to kisi insaan ki awaaz hai kya us darwaje se koi insaan udkar aaya tha.. '

Ansh abhi yeh sab soch hi raha tha ki kabhi usse fisse ek karah ki awaaz sunai di ansh dheere dheere aage badhne laga us insaan ko dekhne ke liye jab Ansh us insaan ke pass pahunch gya to woh heraan ho gya kyuki woh insaan ek aurat thi aur uske hatho mai ek bacchi bhi dekh Ansh heraan ho gya..

Yeh dekh Ansh aage nahi badh paya usne dekha woh aurat pat ke bal niche giri thi aur usne ek safed color ka chhoga bhi pehna hua tha aur us aurat ke sab jagha chhote bhi lagi hui thi aur uske hath mai ek 4 se 5 saal ki ek bacchi bhi hai aur usne ek laal color ka chhoga pehna tha..

Woh aurat dikhne mai kisi apsara se kam nahi hai par ajeeb baat yeh hai ki us aurat ka khoon laal rang ki jagha hare color ka tha Ansh abhi yeh sab dekh kar heraan hi tha ki kabhi usse us aurat ki awaaz sunai di..

Aurat -"tu.. tum ko.. kon ho aur yeh jagha kons.. konsi hai.. "

Us aurat ko itna bolne mai bhi sangharsh karna pad raha tha us aurat ki haalat wakai bahut buri thi Ansh ko usse koi khatra mehsoos nahi hua Ansh dheere se ek kadam aage badha aur bola..

Ansh -"Mera naam Ansh hai aur yeh jagha Delhi ka ek chhote se town ke piche pahaad ki ek gufa hai.. "

Yeh sun woh aurat boli..

Aurat -"ky..kya ye..yehh Fa..Fairy Clou...Cloud nah..nahi ha..hai.. " us aurat ki haalat abhi kharab thi lekin woh dheere dheere ab dhan se bol pa rahi thi..

Us aurat ki baat sunkar Ansh soch mai ghum ho jata hai aur apne man mai sochne lagta hai ki Earth pe esi jagha kaha pe hai woh kuch der soch kar kehta hai...

Ansh -"maaf kijiye lekin mene Earth pe ese kisi island aur jagha ka naam nahi suna hai.. "

Par woh aurat boli..



[Fuuu....


5.5k+words ka update hai pata nahi kya soch kar 2nd update itna bada likh diya agar aap sabhi ko yeh update psnd aaye to comments and like se es update ke baare mai bata dijiye..

And mai ek new writter hu agar story mai thodi ya kisi word mai thodi galti ho gayi ho to plz bata dena taaki mai aage se uska dhyaan rakhu..

And and and aapne ansh ka pura naam notice kara..

Nahi kara na to jao ek baar pura naam dekho and update 0 ko bhi checkout karo kuch common mil jayega:sad:]
UPDATE-03
You Have Only 100 chance to pass the test..
Ab tak...

Us darwaje se jo udkar aayi thi woh ek aurat thi jiske sath ek 4 saal ki bacchi bhi thi us bacchi ka naam Angy tha aur us Aurat aur us bacchi ki jaan ke piche kuch log pade hue the woh Aurat ansh ko 2 level ke peak pe pahucha deti hai aur Ansh se apni beti ka dhyan rakhne ke liye kehti hai Ansh bhi Angy ko apni sagi behen ki tarah rakhna ka waada karta hai..

Jane se pehele woh aurat Ansh ko ek locket bhi deti hai jo usse ek space portal ke pass mila tha..

Ese hi ek din Ansh Ramesh chacha ka kuch samn lene delhi ke main market aaya tha kab woh ja raha tha to usse apne samne ek bacchi raste ke bicho bich khadi hui dikhti hai...

Ab aage..

Akshita naam ki ek bacchi rashte ke bicho bich khadi thi aur ab truck usse 2 feet ki duuri pe tha us aurat ki yeh dekh kar ek cheekh nikal gayi aur usne apni aankhen band karli wahi us aadmi ne aage badhne ki koshish kari par woh truck bahut speed mai tha woh us tak pahuchta usse pehele hi woh truck Akshita ko kuchal deta....

Tabhi koi dharam ke sath us truck se takraya aur us truck se takrane se duur ja kar gira uske niche girne ke baad uske aas paas bahut saara khoon phelne laga wahi woh truck bhi ek jhatke se ruk gya aur uske tiers ke ghisne ki awaaz aane lagi tabhi woh ladka jo us ladki matlab Akshita ke sath khada tha...




Continue~~
[Yeh update 6.9k+ words ka hai and isme bahut si chijen hui hai to aaram se aur fursat se padhna aur agar es update mai koi mistake ho to bata dena mai usse correct kar dunga taaki future readers ko problem na ho and aage se mistakes ka dhyan bhi rakhunga..

Aur comments aur likes karke mujhe es update ke baare mai jarur batana baaki ka aap sabhi ko agle update mai milega kab tak ke liye byy.. ]
UPDATE-04
Last Few Second Is Enough To See Our Full Life...

Ab aage...

Ansh jitna jyada wo dard sahen kar raha tha, aur wo energy absorb kar raha tha, uski aatma bhi utni hi takatwar hoti ja rahi thi. Ansh ko apni kamzor aatma mein ek aa saheniye dard mehsoos ho raha tha, par Ansh apne jabade ko kas kar ye dard sahen kar raha tha…

Jab Adhiraj ji ne Ansh ko apni energy dena bandh kiya, tab jaakar Ansh gehri neend mein chala gaya. Agle din subeh Ansh ki chetna jagi, tab usse Karanveer ji aur Adhiraj ji ki baatein sunai di, jisse sun Ansh ko pata chala ki wo phir se apni energy uske andar daalne wale hain…



Continue...

[6.9k+ words..

Mai Ansh ke past ko alag alag scene karke dikhana chahta tha lekin fir thodi bahut confusion ho jati isliye Ansh ke paida hone se dikha raha hu and isme agar koi galti hoti bata dena taaki aage dhyan rakhu..

Iske aage ki story aage ke update mai continue hogi..]
UPDATE-05
Trust..?

Ab tak..

Ansh ke pass ab last chance tha locket ka test pass karne ke liye agar woh test pass nahi karta to woh kabhi mar jata test dene ke dauraan Ansh ko apni puri zindagi dikhai dene lagti hai kese uske baap aur maa ne usse apnane se inkaar kar diya aur ek jhuthi galti ki wajah se usse itni maar khani padi..

Ab aage..

Ansh apni school ki books aur notes taiyaar kar raha tha, tabhi Nirmala ji wahan aayi….

Nirmila : “Ansh dekho mai tumhare liye naya uniform aur ye naya school bag lekar aayi hu..”

Yeh sun kar Ansh ne us taraf dekha, jahan Nirmala ji ek haath mein uska school uniform aur dusre haath mein ek naya school bag lekar khadi thi…



Continue~~
[Yeh update 7k+ words ka hai..

Es update ko likhne mai wakai bahut mehnat lagi hai and mujhe es story mai incest add karna chaiye ya nahi ek baar batana..

And mai personally es story mai incest add nahi karna chahta...]
UPDATE-06
EXCHANGE..

Ab tak...

10 second..

9…

8…

7…

6…

5…

4…

3…

2…

1…

Dhammmmmm… ..

Ansh apni jagha par hi gir gya....


Ab aage..

Aaj jab Adhiraj ji aur Karanveer ji Ansh ki jaanch kar rahe the, tab unke chehre kuch ajeeb aur gambheer ho gaye. Unhein Ansh ke andar kuch ajeeb laga…

Karanveer : "pitaji, ye Ansh ke saath kya ho raha hai? Mujhe uski chetna bahut mushkil se mehsoos ho rahi hai…”

Adhiraj ji kuch der kisi soch mein gum ho gaye aur unhone Ansh ka haath pakad kar apna poora dhyan uske upar laga diya. Kuch der baad unhone apna haath peeche liya aur Karanveer ji ki taraf dekh kar bole…




Continue~~

[5.6k+ words ka update hai..
likes and comments karke batana yeh update kesa laga baaki ka agle update mai..]
Review for update "2-6"
To Ansh ka pura naam Ansh Rajvansh iska matlab vo Vipul Rajvansh vanshaj hai.:shocking:
Dekhte hoga ki aage chal ke Angy aur Ansh ka bond kaise nikhare ga....Angy ki maa ki baato se lagta hai ki vo bahut powerful planet[divine vally] se hai but unhone jyada kuch bataya nahi aur Angy ki memory bhi seal kardi....kya Ansh unka badla le payega ye to vakt hi bata payega.
Do hi updates me itne characters aagaye hai ki naam hi nahi yaad ho raha hai.😦

Aage chal kar dekhne me maja aayega jab Ansh ki family ko pata chalega ki jese unhone sirf isliye ghar se nikal diya tha:frown: kyoki Ansh us vakt kamjor tha....tab unhe apni galti ka ahsaas hoga ki unhone kitna galat kiya uske saath.
Ye locet ka rahasaya to bahut gahara lagta hai....BLOOD REVOLUTION SUTRA ke bare me padhne se lagata khatarnak hatyar hai dekhna hogi Ansh isko kitna sikh pata hai...Aage chal ke Ansh ke ye bahot kaam aayegi.

Ye Suryavanshi family👪 kuch jyada hi nahi madad kar rahe hai Ansh ki ye janne ke baad bhi vo rival [Rajvansh family] se hai...ye to vakt he bataye ga ye sirf dikhava sirf apne faayde ke liye kar rahe hai [taki baad me Ansh ka use kar sake apne kaamo ke liye:buttkick:] ya wo sa sahi me sharif hai.
Vese total kitne level hote hai celestial ko pahuchne se pahle?

Well abhi to bahot sawal man me aarahe hai kyuki ye fantasy story hai so to ye hoga hi I know aur ju ne achcha likha hai....abhi to story buid up ho rahi hai so jyada kuch kaha nahi ja sakta hai.😁


I think Incest na add karo to jyada achcha rahega:nope:.......But ju Romance😄 add kar sakte ho vaise bhi jaha tak mujhe abhi tak story padh kar laga hai ki Ansh abhi tak akela hi hai aur support karne ke liye koi nahi hai to aage chal kar ak partner[heroine]:notme: ho to jyada achcha rahega....Isse aur readers:reading1: bhi judenge. :winknudge:



Keep writing best wishes from me.....And waiting for the next update.:flybye:✨
 
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Shukriya bhai es story pe pehla itna bada comment karne ke liye...
Review for update "2-6"
To Ansh ka pura naam Ansh Rajvansh iska matlab vo Vipul Rajvansh vanshaj hai.:shocking:
Hai ansh vipul rajvansh ka vanshaj hai..
Dekhte hoga ki aage chal ke Angy aur Ansh ka bond kaise nikhare ga....Angy ki maa ki baato se lagta hai ki vo bahut powerful planet[divine vally] se hai but unhone jyada kuch bataya nahi aur Angy ki memory bhi seal kardi....kya Ansh unka badla le payega ye to vakt hi bata payega.
Angy ki maa ne ansh se badla lene ke liye nahi kaha tha aur na hi ansh ka esa koi irada hai Angy ki maa apni beti ko bas ek normal life dena chahti thi jo us condition mai har ek maa chahegi..

aur unhone ansh ki memory dekhi thi isliye usse pata tha woh kaise hai agar aage chal kar Angy pe koi pareshani aayegi to kab Ansh uske samne khada hoga..

Do hi updates me itne characters aagaye hai ki naam hi nahi yaad ho raha hai.😦
Bhai woh dono updates family se related the isliye itne character add karne pade aage bhi character add honge lekin ek sath itne nahi karunga ab mostly aliens and character development pe dhyan rahega KYRIOS ki journey ke baad
Aage chal kar dekhne me maja aayega jab Ansh ki family ko pata chalega ki jese unhone sirf isliye ghar se nikal diya tha:frown: kyoki Ansh us vakt kamjor tha....
Ansh ki family ne usse ghar se bahar nahi nikala tha ansh ghar chhod kar aa gya tha, lekin ek tarah se dekha jaye to usse koi bhi ghar ka member nahi maanta tha yaha tak bahar ki duniya mai bhi bahut kam log jante hai ki Rakesh ke 4 bacche hai....
tab unhe apni galti ka ahsaas hoga ki unhone kitna galat kiya uske saath.
Han ehsaas to hoga lekin kab tak bahut der ho chuki hogi..
Ye locet ka rahasaya to bahut gahara lagta hai....BLOOD REVOLUTION SUTRA ke bare me padhne se lagata khatarnak hatyar hai dekhna hogi Ansh isko kitna sikh pata hai...Aage chal ke Ansh ke ye bahot kaam aayegi.
Yeh locket Ansh ki puri life change kar degi and es skill ko banane wala Angy ki maa se bhi bahut zada powerful hai..

Next update mai iska answer mil jayega..
Ye Suryavanshi family👪 kuch jyada hi nahi madad kar rahe hai Ansh ki ye janne ke baad bhi vo rival [Rajvansh family] se hai...
Abhi tak story mai yeh show nahi hue hai ki Rajvansh family and Suryavanshi family rivals hai bas Adhiraj ke muh se Rajvansh family ke kisi buddhe ka jikr hua tha lekin kon yeh nahi jante..
ye to vakt he bataye ga ye sirf dikhava sirf apne faayde ke liye kar rahe hai [taki baad me Ansh ka use kar sake apne kaamo ke liye:buttkick:] ya wo sa sahi me sharif hai.
Yeh to aage hi pata chalega..
Vese total kitne level hote hai celestial ko pahuchne se pahle?
Mai yaha bataunga to dhan se smjh nahi aayega lekin kuch updates mai KYRIOS ki journey shuru hone wali hai..

Fir bhi 5 level hai but yeh jaruri nahi hoga ki 5 level hone ke baad hi Celestial ban sakte hai..

Har level ke liye us level ke aliens ko jaan se marna padega aur unke gene consume karn padega aur 100 points hone ke baad yeh keh sakte hai ki woh level 1 pe hai...

Har aliens ko maarne se 10 ya usse kam points milenge aur kuch ese aliens bhi honge jinhe maarne se unki soul milegi jo kisi bhi ancient weapon ya kisi gear ke roop mai ho sakti hai..

Jese Rakesh ki Ice wolf ki soul jisse Aditya ne competition jitne ke baad as a gift maanga tha..
Well abhi to bahot sawal man me aarahe hai kyuki ye fantasy story hai so to ye hoga hi I know aur ju ne achcha likha hai....abhi to story buid up ho rahi hai so jyada kuch kaha nahi ja sakta hai.😁
Bro ek dam sahi kaha abhi to story ka build up chal raha hai..
I think Incest na add karo to jyada achcha rahega:nope:.......
Mene pehele hi decide kar liya tha es story mai Incest nahi hoga...
But ju Romance😄 add kar sakte ho vaise bhi jaha tak mujhe abhi tak story padh kar laga hai ki Ansh abhi tak akela hi hai aur support karne ke liye koi nahi hai to aage chal kar ak partner[heroine]:notme: ho to jyada achcha rahega....
Bro heroine hongi and ek se zada hongi lekin abhi heroine add nahi kar sakta kyuki Ansh abhi bas 8 saal ka hai:idk1:

And 18 saal se hone se pehele may be mai ek heroine add karu lekin uske sath koi scene ya esa kuch nahi hoga..

Ansh ne 18 ke hone ke baad sab kuch milega..
Isse aur readers:reading1: bhi judenge. :winknudge:


Keep writing best wishes from me.....And waiting for the next update.:flybye:✨
Next update kal raat ko mil jayega and update 9 ya 10 se KYRIOS ki journey shuru ho sakti hai..

Mai update 7 and 8 en dono update mai sab kuch karna ki soch raha hu..

And firse thanks itna accha reply karne ke liye..
 
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