Fantasy Evolution~Is not end, Is beginning

[Dolar]

Guys mai ek silent reader hu aur yaha itni mast mast story padhkar mera dil mai bhi ek story likhna ka kar diya mai koi professional writter to nahi hu lekin mai fir bhi aap sabke samne apni ek kaalpanik story rakhna chahta hu es story mai aage kya kya aayega woh sab aapko story padhne se pata chal jayega..

Guys Story ka update 6th update is post niche diye hue link se check kar lena..

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UPDATE 06​

And kya es platform mai incest story hi zada chalti hai fantasy story nahi?

 

[Dolar]

UPDATE-0
INTRODUCTION
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Hum insaan es dharti ke sabse viksit prani hai. Hum hamesha do chijon ki taalash karte hai..

Ek taaqat aur dusra paisa, Inke bina hamaari zindagi nahi chalti. En do chijon ko pane ke liye hum apni ka khun bhi baha dete hai. Par, par iske alawa bhi hum insaano mai ek aur chij hai aur woh hai jigyaasa.

Kyuki insaan es duniya, antariksh aur dusri duniyaon mai jee rahi prajati ke baare mai janne ke liye nayi nayi khoj aur jaankari paane ke liye utsuk rehte hai. En experiments se khud ko evolve karne ke alag alag aur tarah tarah ke kadam bhi uthate hai..

Hum es anant brahmand ko samjhne ke liye aaye din naye naye experiment karte rehte hai fir bhi hum insaan es anant brahmand ke kisi bhi rahesyo ko puri tarah se jaan nahi paaye hai...

Fir bhi hum insaan ne kabhi bhi haar nahi maani. Haar jane ke baad bhi hum hamesha firse prayash karte hai taaki hum safal ho jaye..

Isliye insaan dusri prajatiyon aur grahon ke baare mai janne ke liye har hadd paar kar dete hai. Har experiment ke baad insaan ki jigyaasa badhti jaati hai, jisse woh aur adhik prayog karte hai..

Par insaan ki jigyaasa tab paar kar gayi, jab unhe ek aur prajati Braze ke baare mai pata chala, us samay insaan bahut kamzor the lekin Braze ke pass bahut saare aadhunik hathiyaar aur unki khud ki taaqat insaano se kayi zada thi. Jab insaano ko Braze ke baare mai pata chala to puri duniya ke research centers mai hahakar mach gya. Sabhi research centers ne milkar insaano ko aur takatvar banane ka faisla kara aur prayog shuru hue..

Ek din insaano ko safalta hath lagi. Unhone ek ese planet ki khoj kari jisse KYRIOS kaha jata tha. Es planet pe bahut zada aliens rehte the un aliens ko maarne ke baad insaan unse unki energy haasil kar khud ko aur zada taakatvar bana sakte the..

Es duniya mai kayi alag alag tarah ke aliens rehte hai. Insaano ne ek teleportal ka invention kara aur apne 20 logo ki ek team ko us planet pe bheja. Lekin unme se sirf 3 log hi bachkar wapas aa paye..

Woh 3 log the..

1. Vipul Rajvansh
2. Raj Agarwal
3. Aditya Kumar

Fir es tarah ke aur bhi missions chalaye gaye. Iske baad scientists ne KYRIOS ke baare mai aur bhi research ki aur army ke sath milkar kuch jagho pe base banaye gaye aur unhe viksit kara. Dheere dheere waha insaano ko bheja jane laga.

Ab KYRIOS ko khoje hue takareeban 300 saal ho gaye the. Ab prithvi par bahut kuch to nahi, lekin thoda bahut badal gya hai. Aaj Earth pe 2030 chal raha hai. Ab insaano ne technology ke sath jeena seekh liya hai.

Halaki abhi bhi jyadatar chijen pehele jesi hi hai. Bacche school jate hai, sadkon pe traffic hai. Udne wali cars aur dusri technology mojuud hai, lekin unka zada upyog nahi kiya jata. Unhe kewal military aur bade parivaaron ke liye hi istemaal kara jata hai...

Ab baat karte hai KYRIOS ke baare mai..

KYRIOS pe kese jana hoga aur waha kya karna hoga..?

Darasal prithvi pe bacchon ki growth pehle se alag ho chuki hai. Jo log KYRIOS pe gaye the, unke vanshaj samanyo baccho se jyada samajhdaar ho gaye hai.

Udhaaharan ke liye kisi 6 saal ke bacche ka dimaag kisi 10 saal ke bacche ya kisi genius jesa ho sakta hai. Ese mai 6 saal ki umar mai hi unka dimaag aur shareer kisi 14-15 saal ke bacche je sa ho jayega. Issi wajah se woh chhoti umar mai physically aur mentally dono tarah se majboot hote hai..

Es duniya mai sirf 10% logo ko hi pata hai es secret mission ke baare mai abhi sabhi ko nahi bataya gya hai es mission ke baare mai...

Continue-
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[Es story ma dusri duniyaon ke baare mai janne ko hoga aliens honge jinke sath fight hogi and and and aur bhi bahut kuch hoga bas yeh update ek introduction tha taaki story ke plot ka ek basic idea lag jaye baaki chijen aage story ke sath sath pata chal jayegi aur kab tak aap sabhi es intro pe thode bahut comments and likes de sakte hai isse mujhe koi aapatti nahi hogi]

 

[Dolar]

Yarr koi to introduction ke baare mai batao taaki mujhe bhi lage readers bhi es story ko padhne ke liye interesting hai

 

[Ravisharma0143]

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Yarr koi to introduction ke baare mai batao taaki mujhe bhi lage readers bhi es story ko padhne ke liye interesting hai

Bhai achha likha raha ho baki review to story ke scene pr aye ga all the best

 

[mistyvixen]

UPDATE-0
INTRODUCTION
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Hum insaan es dharti ke sabse viksit prani hai. Hum hamesha do chijon ki taalash karte hai..

Ek taaqat aur dusra paisa, Inke bina hamaari zindagi nahi chalti. En do chijon ko pane ke liye hum apni ka khun bhi baha dete hai. Par, par iske alawa bhi hum insaano mai ek aur chij hai aur woh hai jigyaasa.

Kyuki insaan es duniya, antariksh aur dusri duniyaon mai jee rahi prajati ke baare mai janne ke liye nayi nayi khoj aur jaankari paane ke liye utsuk rehte hai. En experiments se khud ko evolve karne ke alag alag aur tarah tarah ke kadam bhi uthate hai..

Hum es anant brahmand ko samjhne ke liye aaye din naye naye experiment karte rehte hai fir bhi hum insaan es anant brahmand ke kisi bhi rahesyo ko puri tarah se jaan nahi paaye hai...

Fir bhi hum insaan ne kabhi bhi haar nahi maani. Haar jane ke baad bhi hum hamesha firse prayash karte hai taaki hum safal ho jaye..

Isliye insaan dusri prajatiyon aur grahon ke baare mai janne ke liye har hadd paar kar dete hai. Har experiment ke baad insaan ki jigyaasa badhti jaati hai, jisse woh aur adhik prayog karte hai..

Par insaan ki jigyaasa tab paar kar gayi, jab unhe ek aur prajati Braze ke baare mai pata chala, us samay insaan bahut kamzor the lekin Braze ke pass bahut saare aadhunik hathiyaar aur unki khud ki taaqat insaano se kayi zada thi. Jab insaano ko Braze ke baare mai pata chala to puri duniya ke research centers mai hahakar mach gya. Sabhi research centers ne milkar insaano ko aur takatvar banane ka faisla kara aur prayog shuru hue..

Ek din insaano ko safalta hath lagi. Unhone ek ese planet ki khoj kari jisse KYRIOS kaha jata tha. Es planet pe bahut zada aliens rehte the un aliens ko maarne ke baad insaan unse unki energy haasil kar khud ko aur zada taakatvar bana sakte the..

Es duniya mai kayi alag alag tarah ke aliens rehte hai. Insaano ne ek teleportal ka invention kara aur apne 20 logo ki ek team ko us planet pe bheja. Lekin unme se sirf 3 log hi bachkar wapas aa paye..

Woh 3 log the..

1. Vipul Rajvansh
2. Raj Agarwal
3. Aditya Kumar

Fir es tarah ke aur bhi missions chalaye gaye. Iske baad scientists ne KYRIOS ke baare mai aur bhi research ki aur army ke sath milkar kuch jagho pe base banaye gaye aur unhe viksit kara. Dheere dheere waha insaano ko bheja jane laga.

Ab KYRIOS ko khoje hue takareeban 300 saal ho gaye the. Ab prithvi par bahut kuch to nahi, lekin thoda bahut badal gya hai. Aaj Earth pe 2030 chal raha hai. Ab insaano ne technology ke sath jeena seekh liya hai.

Halaki abhi bhi jyadatar chijen pehele jesi hi hai. Bacche school jate hai, sadkon pe traffic hai. Udne wali cars aur dusri technology mojuud hai, lekin unka zada upyog nahi kiya jata. Unhe kewal military aur bade parivaaron ke liye hi istemaal kara jata hai...

Ab baat karte hai KYRIOS ke baare mai..

KYRIOS pe kese jana hoga aur waha kya karna hoga..?

Darasal prithvi pe bacchon ki growth pehle se alag ho chuki hai. Jo log KYRIOS pe gaye the, unke vanshaj samanyo baccho se jyada samajhdaar ho gaye hai.

Udhaaharan ke liye kisi 6 saal ke bacche ka dimaag kisi 10 saal ke bacche ya kisi genius jesa ho sakta hai. Ese mai 6 saal ki umar mai hi unka dimaag aur shareer kisi 14-15 saal ke bacche je sa ho jayega. Issi wajah se woh chhoti umar mai physically aur mentally dono tarah se majboot hote hai..

Es duniya mai sirf 10% logo ko hi pata hai es secret mission ke baare mai abhi sabhi ko nahi bataya gya hai es mission ke baare mai...

Continue-
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[Es story ma dusri duniyaon ke baare mai janne ko hoga aliens honge jinke sath fight hogi and and and aur bhi bahut kuch hoga bas yeh update ek introduction tha taaki story ke plot ka ek basic idea pag jayega baaki chijen aage story ke sath pata chal jayegi aur kab tak aap sabhi es intro pe thode bahut comments and likes de sakte hai isse mujhe koi aapatti nahi hogi]

First of all welcome!
Dekhne se hi interesting hai...with dusri duniya and all the stuff.

Nice start too.
Yaha pe bahut kam hi ache stories hai...and yours one has a good premise to be one of them!

Will follow this story.

Pehle ke 10 updates jaldi Dene ke koshish kare. All the best

 

[Dolar]

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Bhai achha likha raha ho baki review to story ke scene pr aye ga all the best

Bro aaj raat update 1st release karunga abhi uspe kaam kar raha hu..

 

[Dolar]

First of all welcome!
Dekhne se hi interesting hai...with dusri duniya and all the stuff.

Thanks...
Dusri duniya, earth and esi aur bhi chijen dekhne ko milengi thoda bahut sci-fic and ancient ka mixture hoga..

Nice start too.
Yaha pe bahut kam hi ache stories hai...and yours one has a good premise to be one of them!

Han yaha pe mostly story bas sex ke upar hai bas ginti ki esi story hai jinki story mujhe dil se psnd hai ek aapki aur aur ek werewolf sir ki..

And werewolf sir se inspiration lekr hi mene esi story likhne ke baare mai socha hai...

Jisme bas sex na ho emotions, adventure, world ke alag alag hisso ko explore karna esi chijen ho..

Will follow this story.

Thanks ❤❤

Pehle ke 10 updates jaldi Dene ke koshish kare. All the best

Aaj raat 1st update post karunga and 10 update tak jald se jald likhne ki koshish karunga mujhe detailed mai sab likhna hai isliye 2 din mai 1 update hi post kar paunga..

Shuru ke 2 updates to ready hau lekin raat ko 1st update post karunga kab tak us update ko thoda aur detailed ke sath likhne ki koshish karunga..

 

[Dolar]

And abhi main character ki age under 18 mai chalegi to moderator se request hai plz story ko banned mat kar dena shuru ke updates mai main character ki age kam hi rahegi kyuki yeh story ke plot and character ke liye mene jo socha hai uske liye important hai..

I hope moderator es chij ko samajhenge..

 

[Dolar]

Readers kab tak mai aap sabhi ko story ke baare mai kuch bata deta hu jinhe aap sabhi ek baar padh lijiye..

1} Mai es story mai incest nahi rakhna chahta hu agar kisi reader ko bas incest story padhni hai to woh koi dusri story padh sakta hai lekin agar future ke update mai mujhe laga ki isme incest add karna hoga to mai ek baar aap sabhi se puch kar hi es story mai incest add karunga lekin usme abhi bahut time hai..

2} Yeh story ek highly fantasy story hogi isme different chijen aap sabhi ko dekhne ko mil jayengi yeh story sci-fi and ancient ko lekr chalegi jaha Earth pe to modern chijon hongi lekin KYRIOS pe ancient time hoga and waha ancient weapons ke sath ladaai hogi matlab talwaar, archery, bhala esi chijen aur wahi earth pe modern weapons honge lekin jo log mission ke liye KYRIOS pe jate hai unhe kisi na kisi weapon ko yahi seekhna padega kyuki us duniya mai kadam kadam pe khatra hai..

Kuch points hai ek baar dekh lijiye sab..

 

[MrHandsome]

Start acha hai. Bs kuch jaga par ajeeb laga. Jesy hai to Earth hi or 2030 b zada dur ni or cars hawa mai urah rahi.

Or Earth se 300 saal pahly kesy dusry plenat par koi mission bej sakty..

Earth ki jaga koi aur plenat bata dety.

Baki sub thik hai. Next updates par k hi baki ka bata sakty hai. Goodluck for next updates..

 

[Dolar]

Start acha hai. Bs kuch jaga par ajeeb laga.

Yeh bas ek highly fantasy story hai..

Jesy hai to Earth hi or 2030 b zada dur ni or cars hawa mai urah rahi.

Or Earth se 300 saal pahly kesy dusry plenat par koi mission bej sakty..

Bro 2030 mene ese hi le liya hai isse reality se koi lena dena nahi hai kyuki flying cars jesi aur alag alag chijen mai aage introduce karunga to sab log kahenge yeh kya hai isliye 2030 le liya taaki mai esi chijen add kar saku apni story mai...

Earth ki jaga koi aur plenat bata dety.

Earth ki jagha mai aur koi planet rakh to sakta tha lekin earth ke point of view se es story ko chalane mai zada maza aata kyuki humans zada strong nahi hai aur ek insaan hi hai jiske andar har ek chij ko janne ki jigyaasa hai..

Aur yeh mission braze ke pata chalne ke baad chalaya gya tha aur insaan ke pass teleportation ki technology 300 saal pehele kese aayi woh sabhi aage ke updates mai pata chal jayega uska mene pehele hi socha hua hai..

Baki sub thik hai. Next updates par k hi baki ka bata sakty hai.

Abhi mene koi update nahi diya woh bas story ka ek overview tha ya ek summary samjh lo isliye aapko woh padhne se thodi confusion ho rahi hai aage ke update mai sab kuch dheere dheere samne aayega to sab acche se samjh aa jayega..

Goodluck for next updates..

Thanks bro Update 1 mai mene zada bada nahi socha hai real story update 2 se start hogi..