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Fantasy Extra Mundane [ Completed ]

Naik

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Breaking News:

Caster: Nazrein aap ko taza khaber detey chalein k jis Van main Zaigham ko aaj Phansi ki saza sunaney k baad Jail le jaya ja raha tha us k sath Hadsa Paish aaya hai us Van pe Aasmani bijli girney se aag lagi aur us main Mujud Police aur Zaigham ki jal k Mout ho gai hai yeh bhi pata chala hai k ek baar nai la tadad Aasmani bijli girien jis ki wajah se Van main aag lag gai aur ek dhamaka hua jis ki wajah se us main mojud sab jal k mar gaey.

Tabhi hall main cheikh gunji us Aurat ne aur Aadmi ne jab mud k deikha tou Alina cheikhtey hi Behosh ho gai thi who jaldi se us k pass gaey aur la k hall main parey Sofey pe lita dia Alina behosh thi Doctor ne aa k checkup kia.

Doctor: Ghabraney ki koi baat nai hai bas Behosh hui hn shaam tuk hosh aa jaey ga.

Sham ko Zaigham ki dead body bhi ghar aa chuki thi aur hall hi main pari thi koi bhi nai aaya tha siwaye Us aadmi k bhai ki family k kiun k Dafan krna hi tha us k liey un ka wahan hona lazmi tha who aa chukey they hall main beithey they.

Alina ko hosh aa gya aur usey yaad aaya k abhi kia hua tha us ne ek khaber suni thi darasal who apni Saheli k ghar janey k liey nikli hi thi k us ki Tv pe nazer gai aur who sunney lagi khaber yaaad aatey hi jab us ki nazer samney ki traf us k bhai ki dead body pe gai tou who cheikhtey huey us k pass beith k roney lagi Aadmi aur Aurat usey chup kraney lagey.

Alina: Bhai kiun shod gaey mujhey yahan akela ab meri hifazat kon karey ga bhai plz wapis aa jao bhai.

Aurat: Chup ho ja meri bachi.

Alina: Kesay chup ho jaun mera Bhai mar gya aur aap hn k aap ko koi farq hi nai per raha.

Alina ne yeh baat rotey huey gussay main kahi thi usey yakeen hi nai ho raha tha k us k maa baap ko abhi bhi farq nai per raha jabkeh un ka beta mar gya hai.

Aurat: Usey tou wesay bhi phansi honi hi thi es main afsosh kesa jo us ne kia yeh usi ka pernaam hai jesi krni wesi bharni.

Alina ki heirat se aankhein bari ho gaen usey yakeen hi nai ho raha tha k Us k bhai ki dead body samney pari hai aur us ki maa aesi baatein kr rahi hn ab usey gussa aaney laga tha.

Anisa: Afsosh mujhey aap dono pe hai k aap us k maa baap they aap jantey hi nai hn k Bhai ne yeh sab kiun kia tha werna yahan aap bhi matam kr rahey hotey.

Aadmi: Alina! Yeh kesi baatein kr rahi ho aur kon si baat hum nai jantey.

Anisa: Bhai ne Qasam di thi k kisi ko na btaun aur wesey bhi jab who nai rahey tou Qasam ka Faida hi nai hai.

Aurat: Qasam kon si Qasam.

Alina: -------------------------------.

Zaigham jo k waheen mojud tha lekin kisi ko dikhayee nai de raha tha who bas yeh deikhna chahta tha k kaheen us ki mout ki khaber sun k us ki behan kch kr na le who wahan se ghaib ho gya aur jab Alina ne sara sach unhey bata dia tou sab ko ek trhah se jhatka laga who Aurat tou yeh suntey hi sadmey se behosh gai Aadmi ne usey sahara dia aur sofey pe lita dia jab k baqi sab ki aankhon main aansu they.

Kheir Zaigham ko dafna dia gya aur ghar main es waqt matam tha ghar main sir who aadmi ki aur us k bhai ki family thi Alina apney kamrey main rotey huey bag pack kr rahi thi aur jab bag pack ho gya tou who apney kamrey se nikal k bahir aa gai sab hall main beithey they.

Alina: Mein ne badey bhaiya ko phone kr dia hai aur who kal tuk yahan aa jaen gey tub tuk chachu aap yaheen rahiey ga en ka dhyaan rakhney k liey.

Aadmi: Tum kahan ja rahi ho.

Alina: Mein Austrailia ja rahi hn apni dost k pass hamesha k liey mujhey wahan rehna hi nai hai yahan merey bhai ko izzat na mili ho pehley tou mein Bhai ki qasam k aagey chup thi aur yaheen rehney pe mazboor thi lekin ab jab who hi nai rahey tou merey yahan rukney ka koi faida hi nai hai.

Aurat: Meri bachi mujhey akela shod k na ja deikh mujhey teri zaroorat hai plz na ja ek betey ko pehley hi kho chuki hn ab tujhey nai kho sakti plz na ja meri bachi.

Alina: Na who aap ka beta tha na hi mein hn kia kaha tha aap ne usey k who aap ka beta nai hai aur na hi aap us ki maa tou ab sachayee pata chal gai tou who beta ho gya aap ka hamesha se aap ki aur baba ki dant khayee hai us ne ratti bhar bhi yakeen nai tha aap ko us pe aur ab aap ko rona aa raha hai mein ja rahi hoon aur aaj k baad mujhey contact mat kijeay ga.

Alina wahan se chali gai aur phr se us ghar main rona shuru ho gya.

Small Flashback:

Before 25 Year………


Ek Aadmi Hospital main OT k bahir chakker laga raha tha us k pass hi ek Ladka chair pe beitha tha Us aadmi ki BV OT main thi jis ki dilivery honey wali thi Lady doctor aur Nurses Us Aurat ko gheirey khadi theen kisi bhi waqt Dilivery ho sakti thi aur who time bhi aa gya Aurat ne push krna shuru kr dia aur Bacha bahir aaney laga aurat ko Pain bhi kafi ho raha tha aur deikhtey hi deikhtey bacha bahir aa gya.

Achanak se time ruk gya aur wahan koi aaya jis ne ajeeb se kaprey daal rakhey they jesay k koi Greek God ho us ne us bachey ko hathon main lia Bacha usey deikh k Muskura raha tha aur who Aadmi bhi.

Aadmi: Janta hn mujhey deikh k khush ho rahey ho tum hi Mujhey Musibat se bacha saktey ho lekin us k liey Tumhey kch dena chahta hn.

Who bacha Khush hotey huey us k chehrey pe hath pheir raha tha jesey k usey Maloom ho k who Aadmi kia keh raha hai aur who us sey Sehmat hai us Aadmi ne apna ek hath us bachay k seeney pe rakha aur us k hath se white roshni nikalney lagi aur Bachey k seeney main samaney lagi jesay hi Bachey k seeney main roshni janey lagi us ki aankhein roshni ki trhah chamakney lagein full white ho k.

Yeh sab krney k baad us Aadmi ne phr se wahi kia ab ki baar laal Roshni nikalney lagi aur jesay hi Laal Roshni bachey k seeney main gai wesay hi us ki aankhein laal roshni ki trhah chakney lageen full laal ho k Yeh sab kr k who aadmi bachay ko le k ghaib ho gya aur Hospital ki shat pe aa gya us ne bachay ko dono hathon main pakad k uper aasman ki traf kia aur Aasman se Aasmani bijli us bachey main samaney lageen Kch deir k baad who phr se OT room main aa gya aur bachey ko Doctor k hath main de dia.

Aadmi: Filhal ja raha hoon jald hi mulaqat ho gi jab tum 10 saal k ho gey Jantey ho tumharey liey tumharey bhai ne jaan de di sirf es liey k Tum duniya main aa sako es liey humein Nirash mat krna acha ab mein chalta hn.

Jesay hi who ghaib hua Time phr se chalu ho gya aur Bacha roney laga doctor ne bachey ko us ki maa ko dia aur bahir aa gai jesay hi OT ka derwaza khula who Aadmi doctor k pass gya.

Doctor: Mubarik ho aap ko beta hua hai.

Aadmi: Sukriya.

Aurat ko OT se nikal k room main shift kr dia gya Aadmi ne us bachey ko uthaya aur apni BV k pass chala gya.

Flashback End.
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Doctor: Mubarik ho aap ko beta hua hai.

Aadmi: Sukriya.

Aurat ko OT se nikal k room main shift kr dia gya Aadmi ne us bachey ko uthaya aur apni BV k pass chala gya.

Flashback End.

Ab Aagee…..

London

Ek Myth hai London k barey main jo k kaheen na kaheen sach bhi hai k London Duniya k Corrupt tareen Logon k liey Jannat hai yahan un ko Law k jariey se Protect kia jata hai chahey who Politician ho, Businessman ho, Beurocrate ho, Judge ho ya Army Officer jo Money Lounder k jariey corruption ka pesa la k yahan settle ho jata hai aur UK ka Law unhey protect krta hai kheir yeh tou thi thodi si info London k barey main Lekin ek baat aur bhi hai k yahan Husn bhi bht hai.

Waheen ek Bar club k ek VVIP Suite main Ek ladka aur ek Ladki ek doosrey main lagey huey they Ladki ko deewar se laga k Ladka us k Honthon ka ras peeney main busy tha waheen Ladki apna ek hath neechay le ja k pent k uper se hi Ladkey k Lund ko Pinch kr rahi thi Ladka Honth se hota hua Ladki ki Gerdan pe chumney aur chatney laga.

Ladki: Ohhhhh yes baby I'm so wet down there plzzzz fuck me.

Ladka:Hold on Sofie.

Sofie ne Ladkey k kaprey utar diey aur us Ladkey ne bhi us k kaprey utar diey aur bed pe aa gaey aur agle hee pal Sofie bhokhi sherni ke tarah Ladkey k lund pe toot pari aur uske chuppe lagane shuru kar diye.

Ladkey ne bhee Sofie ke sir ko pakad kar apne lund ko uske halak tak pelana shuru kar diya Sofie ne apne dono hath Ladkey ki jhango par rakhe hue they aur uske mooh se ghun ghun ke awaz aa rahi thee.

Jaise hee lund Sofie ke mooh se bahar aata toh uske dher sari laar bhee lund aur uske mooh ke beech mai lataki hoti kuch hee palo mai lund uske thook se ek dum san gaya tha.

Sofie bed pe peeth k bal lait gai aur apni dono tango ko ghutno se mod kar ooper uthaya aur phir apne dono hathon se apni phudi ko pakad kar phelatay huey Ladkey ko apni phudi ka ched dikhane lagee.

Ladka us k pass ghutno ke bal beth gaya aur apni jeebh bahar nikal kar uske phudi ke ched par laga dee jaise hee uski jeebh ke nok Sofie ke phudi ke ched par ragadi Sofie ka jisam ek dum se kanp gaya uski kamar ne ek jordar jabardast jhatka khaya.

Sofie: "ahhhh siiiiiiiiii umhhhhhh ohhhhhh Zaigham yeesssss Babyyyyy I just love thiiisssssss ohhhh Babyyyyyyyy".

Sofie buri tarah kanpte hue siskari bhar rahi thee Zaigham uski phudi ke ched ko chattey hue apni ek ungli ko uske gand ke ched mai ghussa diya.

Sofie: "ahhhhh ohhhhh Zaigham ufff unghhhh Thissssssss is sssooooo Fuuucckkiinngggg Goooddddddd".

Sofie apni gand ko idhar udhar hilane lagee.

Zaigham kuch der uski gand ke ched ko apni ungli se ander bahir kia aur phir ungli bahar nikal kar us ki tangon k dermyaan aaya aur apne lund ke topey ko uski phudi ke ched par set karte hue poori takat se agge ke taraf pela.

Lund ka mota topa phudi ke ched ko phelata hua ander ghusata chala gaya aur uske sath sath Sofie ka badan bhee dard ke karan akadata chala gaya uski ankhe ek dum khul gaye thee.

Usne apne dono hathon se bed sheet ko kaske pakada hua tha jaise hee lund ka Topa Sofie ki phudi ke tight ched mai ghussa Zaigham ne apni poori takat ikhati kee aur ek jor dar dakkha mara.

Sofie: "ohhhhh Goddddddd ufffff babyyyyyyy pleaaaasssseeee Stop for a moment".

Zaigham ne Sofie ki baat mani aur thori deir k liye ruk gya aur uske choot ke dane ko maslane laga aur agge ke taraf jhuk kar uske chuchyon ko bari bari chusne laga.

Kuch der baad Sofie ka dard thoda kam hua toh Zaigham ne ek aur jor dar jhatka maar kar baki ke bache lund ko Sofie ke phudi ke ched mai poora ghussa daya.

Agle hee pal Sofie ko phr se bht dard hua Zaigham phr se ruk gya aur us k mammon ko dabaney laga aur chusney laga Sofie ko thori rahat milli aur us ka dard thora shant hua.

Phir Zaigham ne apne lund ko adhe se jayada bahar nikal kar ander bahar karne laga aur sath sath Sofie ke choot ke dane ko maslane laga.

Sofie: “aaaaahhhhh yesss yesss yessssss Babyyyyy thissss iss ssooooo Fuucckkiinngggg Goooodddddddd you Fuccckkkk so Goodddd babbbyyyyy”.

Sofie: “aaahhhhaaaahhhhhh Babyyyyyy harder pllzzzzzzz I'm going to cumm yyeessss yyeesss yesss I'm commmiinngggggggggg”.

Aur is k sath wohhh release ho gai Zaigham ne apna kaam zari rakha aur agle hee pal Sofie ko doggy style main la kr peeshay se chodney laga.

Sofie: " Ohhhhh yessss Babbyyyyy I'm lovinngggg ittttt ohhhhh yyeesss yessss yeessssss aaahhhhhhhh Fuck"

Sofie abb pagalo tarah apni gaand ko agey peeshay krna shuru kar diya tha aur Zaigham bhee abb apna lund topey tak bahar nikal nikal kar Sofie ki phudi main pelana shuru kar daya tha.

Zaigham phr se Sofie ko Missionary position main chodney laga Sofie ne apni tangein Zaigham ki kamer pe lapait leen aur Zaigham ko kash k galey se laga lia Zaigham ka Lung full speed main Sofie ki chut main ander bahir ho raha tha.

Sofie: "Harder Harder Harder Baby I'm Cuming Again ohhhh yes yes yessssssss oohhhh Fuckkkkk I'm Cuminngggggg".

Sofie k farigh hotey hi Zaigham ne bhi Apna Lund bahir nikal lia aur Sofie k chehrey k pass le gya Sofie ne Lund ko pakda aur aagey peeshay krney lagi sath sath Muh main bhi le rahi thi kch hi pal main Zaigham Sofie k muh main Farigh ho gya Sofie ne sara pani pee lia phr bhi chupey lagana zari rakhey Zaigham ki tangein kanpney lagen es sey or thodi deir k baad dono bed pe letey huey they.

Australia

Ladki: Deikh Alina Mein manti hn k terey Bhai k sath ghalat hua lekin ab tu apni seat ki bilkul bhi perwa nai kr rahi din raat roti rehti hai es sey tera bhai tou wapis nai aa jaey ga na ab who tujhey es halat main deikh k khush tou nai ho ga esi liey apni Zindagi ko nayee sirey se shuru kr.

Alina: Kia karun Nilo(Neelum) reh reh k bhai ki yaad aa rahi hai mujhey mein chah kr bhi nai rok paa rahi hn khud ko roney se her pal un ka chehra merey samney aa jata hai.

Neelum: Deikh Terey bhai ka yahan Business hai usey sambhal us ko aagey le k chal tujhey acha lagey ga.

Alina: Koshish kr rahi hn lekin muskil hai.

Neelum: Namumkin tou nai hai na chal mein ne khana bnaya hai chal k khatey hn.

Alina: Mujhey bhuk nai hai.

Neelum: Tu chal rahi hai ya terey bhai ki qasam doon tujhey.

Alina: Nai nai Mein chalti hn chal.

Neelum: That like a good girl.
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Us Ladkey ne Ladki k sir pe hath rakha aur us k hath se roshni nikal k Ladki k sir main janey lagi jis sey ladki ki aankhein band ho gaen aur usey band aankhon main sab dikhney laga k who kis liey es duniya main aaye hai jesey hi sab manzer deikh lia who us Ladkey k samney Jhuk gai.

Zeus's Wife: Aap ko kia lagta hai k Zaigham usey maar paey ga.

Zeus: Mein ne pehley bhi kaha tha k yeh ladayee 8:2 ki hai Zaigham k chances 20% hn jitney k kiun k DIABLO bht takatwar hai ab yeh Zaigham pe hai k who apni 20% victory ko kesay 80% victory pe lata hai.

Zeus's Wife: DIABLO k pass us ki aadhi takat nai hai phr bhi powerfull hai who.

Zeus: Haan us k pass GOD k sath sath DEVIL ki bhi power hn es liey who zyada takatwar hai.

Zeus's Wife: Tou kia Zaigham ko bhi Devil power ki zaroorat parein gi usey marney k liey.

Zeus: Mein ne kaha na yeh ab us pe hai k who kis trhah DIABLO ko harata hai.

Zeus's Wife: Kia aap us ki ladayee main madad krein gey.

Zeus: Nai.

Zeus's Wife: Tou kia akela ladey ga who.

Zeus: Nai.

Zeus's Wife: Phr kon sath de ga us ka kaheen Maria tou nai.

Zeus: Shaid.

Zeus's Wife: Nai nai mein usey ladayee main nai janey doon gi pehley hi apna beta kho chuki hn us ko khona nai chahti.

Zeus: Es main hum kch nai kr saktey Aliza ager us ka ladayee main jana hua tou usey jana ho ga.

Aliza: Aap merey sath aesa kesay kr saktey hn.

Zeus: Mein ne kch nai kia jo hona hota hai who ho k rehta hai.

Naeem: Haan Rashid.

Rashid: Naeem kch hi deir main us ki flight hai kal airport se pick kr lena usey.

Naeem: Haan tu fiker na kr mein khud jaun ga usey leney tu kab aa raha hai.

Rashid: Bas 1 saal main aa jaun ga abhi kaam khatam nai hua.

Naeem: Chal theek hai aur tu us ki tention na le mein usey pick kr loon ga airport se.

Rashid: Ok bye.

Ladki: Chalein baba announcement ho gai hai.

Rashid: Haan chalo.

Raat ka waqt hai ek ladka sadak pe bhagey ja raha hai us ka pura jism paseeney main nahaya hua hai us k chehrey pe dar bhi saaf dikh raha tha who baar baar peeshey deikhtey huey bhaag raha tha achanak who ek gali main ghus gya lekin us ki badkismati kaho ya kch aur who gali ander band thi aur jesay hi who peeshey palta wahan se nikalney k liey k us k samney koi aa gya yeh sab achanak hua k who ladka dar k marey peeshey hua aur gir gya.

Ladka: Kkkk kon ho tum merey peeshey kiun parey ho mein ne kia bigada hai tumhara.

"God Zaigham"

Ladka: God kon God na mein kisi God ko janta hn na kisi Zaigham ko plzz mujhey janey do.

Zaigham: Rape kia hai tu ne aesa kesay janey doon.

Ladka: Mein ne kisi ka rape nai kia.

Zaigham ne chutki bjayee tou ius ladkey ko us k dimagh main who sab scene chalney lagey jis main us ne rape kiey they yeh deikh k us ki aankhein herat se bari ho gaeen aur shareer kanpney laga.

Zaigham: Kiun yaad aaya kis kis ka rape kia hai tum ne.

Ladka: Kon ho tum.

Zaigham: Bola na God Zaigham aur ab saza k liey tyaar ho jao.

Zaigham ne chutki bjayee ek aag ka golo us ko laga aur who jalney laga who chaikhney laga aur us ki cheikhein door door tuk sunayee deney lagein.

Zaigham: Welcome the Fire of hell.

Who Ladka jal jal k rakh ho gya aur Zaigham wahan se ghaib ho gya aas pass k gharon main rehney walon ne Police ko call kr di thi aur Police wahan pounch gai thi aur aagey ki karwayee krney lagi.

Rashid: Acha beta tum sab se pehley jao aur usey busy karo mein peeshey se usey surprise doon ga.

Ladki: Who mujhey pehchaney gey kesay aur na mein janti hn usey.

Rashid: Yeh rahi us ki tasveer mein tumharey mobile pe send kr di hai ab jao bahir.

Ladki: G baba.

Naeem: Kahan reh gai ek tou us ne mujhey us ki tasveer bhi nai bheiji kesay pehchanu ga usey mein.

Ladki: Hi Uncle.

Naeem: Hello beti.

Ladki: G mein Ayesha aap k dost Rashid ki beti.

Naeem: Arey tou aap ho.

Naeem ne Ayesha ko side se hug kia aur Naeem Ayesha ka saman le k bahir aa gya aur saman gadi main rakh k diggi band kr di.

"Humara saman nai rakhey ga"

Naeem ne peeshey mud k deikha tou us k samney Rashid khada tha jesay hi Naeem ki nazer Rashid se milli us ne usi waqt usey galey se laga lia dono dost ek doosrey se 10 saal baad miley they dono ki aankhein halki nam ho gaeen jesay hi dono alag huey Naeem ne Rashid k pait pe mukka mara mager hulka sa.

Rashid: Uffffff mara kiun.

Naeem: Bata nai sakta tha tu bhi aa raha hai.

Rashid: Surprise dena chahta tha tujhey aur mujhey yun achanak samney deikh k jo teri khushi thi who deikhna chahta tha es liey nai btaya.
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Neelum: Tu chal rahi hai ya terey bhai ki qasam doon tujhey.

Alina: Nai nai Mein chalti hn chal.

Neelum: That like a good girl.

Aadmi: Merey bachey tumhey Aiden ko jagana ho ga aur usey control krna ho ga zyada time nai hai humarey pass.

Zaigham: Kesey.

Aadmi: Tumhey Canopus jana ho ga wahan tumhey Red color main energy ball ek pinjrey main band hawa main hilta hua miley ga bas usey us Pinjrey se nikal k khud main samana hai aur phr Dhyan laga k usey jagana hai jab jaag jaey tou usey bahir nikal dena werna who tumhey ander se hi jala k rakh kr de ga.

Zaigham: Who tou theek hai per jana kab hai.

Aadmi: Us main abhi thoda time hai aaj se do mahiney k baad us Pinjrey pe lagi sheild thodi kamzor ho jaey gi usi waqt us Pinjrey ko khol k us ball ko nikalna ho ga.

Zaigham: Theek hai mein aesa hi krun ga.

Waheen jab Alina ghar shod k gai tou us k maa baap mazeed toot chukey they pehley apney betey ka sach jo k Alina ne sunaya tha who un k muh pe tamacha ban k laga tha aur ab un ki beti k ghar shod janey se who aur dhukkhi ho gaey they Un ka bada Beta aa chuka tha aur sab hall main beithey they.

Ladka: Jab Zaigham k sath yeh sab hua tou aap dono ne mujhey kiun nai bataya.

Aadmi: Kesay btatey us waqt Logon ne aur Media walon ne jeena haram kr dia tha Zaigham k us waqiey se log trhah trhah ki batein krney lagey they us waqt dimagh sahi se kaam hi nai kr raha tha yahan se jao log 100 batein sunatey they.

Ladka: Mein ne pehley bhi kaha tha k Zaigham k mamley main apna Rawiya sahi rakhein jo aap us k sath kr rahey hn who ghalat hai beta tha who aap ka lekin nai her baat pe us ko sunana dantna marna yehi tou krtey aaye hn aap us k sath.

Aurat: Us waqt matt mari gai thi humari Aqal pe perda per gya tha nai samjh paey k who bhi humara beta hai.

Ladka: Samjh aaya bhi tou kab jab who hi nai raha deir kr di aap ne bht deir kr di aur tou aur Alina bhi ghar shod k chali gai.

Aurat: Mujhey meri Beti la do beta tou kho hi chuki hn Beti ko khona nai chahti plzzzz mujhey meri Beti la do.

Ladka: Koi faida nai hai who nai aaye gi who sab se zyada pyaar Zaigham se krti thi jab who hi nai raha tou who yahan kiun aaye gi yahan us k bhai k sath aap ne Zulm kia hai.

Aurat: Mujhey nai pata per mujhey meri beti chaiey Australia keh k gai hai aap plzz kch kijeay na aap usey wapis le k aaiey.

Aadmi: Who nai aaye gi yaad nai kia kaha tha us ne k aaj k baad hum ne milney ki koshish ki tou apni jaan de de gi mager es ghar main wapis nai aaye gi wahan hai tou kam az kam zinda tou hai.

Us aadmi ki baat sun k who Aurat aur zor se roney lagti hai koi kch nai kr sakta tha khamoshi cha gai thi us hall main us k baad who apney apney room main chaley gaey soney k liey.

Office ka kaam khatam kr k Alina aur Neelum ghar ja rahey they Alina aaj pehli baar office main aaye thi aur aaj hi un ne jana k us k bhai ki yeh company drasal kia Manufacture krti hai.

Neelum: Kal jaldi tyaar hona hai kal Important meeting hai Naye Project k silsiley main samjh gai.

Alina: Haan haan samjh gai.

Yeh dono abhi ja hi rahey they k achanak aagey se Container Truck aa gya Alina ne achanak brake lagani chahi lekin brake fail tha jis se dono ghabra gaen aur truck bhi pass aa gya tha dono ne Uper waley ko yaad kr k aankhein band kr lein truck waley ne bhi brake laga di thi aur drift marta hua ja raha tha lekin Alina ki car ki wajah se dono aamney samney aa gaey they abhi 10 feet ka hi fasla tha k Time ruk gya aur Alina ki gadi bijli ki taizi se side ho gai aur time phr se shuru ho gya yeh kch hi sec main hua tha.

Alina aur Neelum ki aankhien abhi bhi band theen jab kafi deir tuk kch nai hua tou dono ne aankhein kholeen tou dono ki aankhein bahir aaney ko huen kiun k us ki gadi footpath pe ruki hui thi aur un k samney Truck road k beecho beech ruka hua tha aur Aas pass k log bhi shocked they k yeh kia hua hai.

Neelum: What the hell just happened hum yahan kesay aaye.

Alina: Don't know.

Neelum: Kch tou hua hai hum road k beech main they yahan kesay aaye brake fail they Gadi achanak ruk kesey gai Alina mujhey dar lag raha hai.

Alina: Tu khamakha darr rahi hai kch nai hota chal Taxi pe ghar jatey hn.

Neelum: Chal.

Gadi k pass main hi koi tha jo en dono ko deikh raha tha lekin koi usey nai deikh sakta tha achanak se hi who wahan se ghaib ho gya.

Aadmi: Who bach kesey gai perfect plan tha.

Aadmi 2: Maloom nai achanak hi kch hua hai samjh hi nai aaye k kesay bach gai who.

Aadmi: Kch tou krna ho ga werna yeh Project hath se nikal jaey ga.

Aadmi 2: Fiker na kro kal subhah who Meeting tuk nai pounch paey gi.

Awaz: Kia kr lo gey.

Dono ne jab doosri traf deikha yahan se awa aaye thi tou wahan koi ladka khada tha jis ki aankhein sufaid roshni main bheianak lag rahi theen dono dar gaey lekin foran sambhal gaey.

Aadmi: Kon ho tum aur yahan kesay aaye.

Ladka: Mein us Ladki ka bhai hoon jisey abhi thodi deir pehley marney ki koshish ki hai tum dono ne.

Aadmi 2: Tou yahaan tu bhi merney ko aaya hai kia.

Ladka: Merney tou tum lagey ho agley pal main tum soch bhi nai saktey k tum logon k sath honey kia wala hai.

Agley hi pal Mosam kharab ho gya aur aasman pe kaley badal her traf cha gaey barish honey lagi Ladkey ne Chutki bjai Ladka aur who do aadmi ghar ki shat pe aa gaey yeh manzer deikh k tou dono kanpney se lagey Ladkey ne apna ek hath uper kia aur dono ki traf point kr dia aasmani bijli dono ki traf aa k giri.

Abhi jhatka normal hi rkha tha us ladkey ne jis ki wajah se us dono ka jism jhatkey ki wajah se kanp raha tha aur badaan main shadeed dard bhi ho raha tha sath hi sath dono ne pent main moot bhi dia tha.

Ladka: Mein ne kaha tha na tum soch bhi nai saktey who ho ga tumharey sath.

Aadmi: Humein maaf kr do hum se ghalti ho gai aainda hum usey marna tou door us k samney bhi nai jaen gey plz humein shod do.

Ladka: Mein apni Behan se bht pyaar krta hn koi aankh utha k un ki traf deikhey ga tou us ki nasal khatam kr doon ga.

Ladkey ne phr se un ki traf point kia es baad latadad bijliyan un ki traf gir parein jab un ka jism jal k rakh nai ho gya tub tuk yeh silsila chalta raha us k baad mosam bhi theek ho gya aur who Ladka bhi wahan se ghaib ho gya.
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Ladkey ne phr se un ki traf point kia es baad latadad bijliyan un ki traf gir parein jab un ka jism jal k rakh nai ho gya tub tuk yeh silsila chalta raha us k baad mosam bhi theek ho gya aur who Ladka bhi wahan se ghaib ho gya.

Agley Din Neelum aur Alina tyaar ho k Meeting main gaey yahan unhey pata chala k un k mukhalif party ki death ho gai hai esi liey yeh Project pe ek din baad meeting ho gi jab unhey maloom para k kis trhah se death hui hai tou Alina ko jhatka laga kiun k us k Bhai ki Mout bhi bilkul aesay hi hui thi who apney bhai ko yaad kr k phr se dukhi ho gai thi aur yeh baat Neelum ko achi trhah se maloom thi.

Neelum: Kia hua Alina phr se kiun dukhi ho gai.

Alina: Kch nai Neelo kal jo death hui hn bilkul usi trhah merey bhai ki death bhi hui bas who yaad aatey hi Bhai ki yaad bht aa rahi hai.

Neelum: Mujhey tou yeh samjh nai aa raha k aaj tuk aesa nai hua k ek hi jagah pe la tadad Aasmani bijli kesay gir sakti hn matlab ek tou Aasmani Bijli girney ki location alag alag ho hai aur ek hi girti hai magar yahan tou an ginat giri hn How is that even Posible.

Alina: Mujhey kch samjh nai aa raha Neelo mujhey sirf itna pata hai k mein ne apney sab se pyarey bhai ko khoya hai.

Neelum: Ab kal k liey tyaari krni ho gi ab pata nai kon si party aati hai un ki jagah.

Alina: Haan tu theek kehti hai chal krtey hn.

Abhi Alina ne apna Laptop on hi kia tha k usey Mail aaye us ne jab open ki tou us main Presentation thi jisey us ne open kia tou heran ho gai k yeh kis ne bheijh di us ne jab sari presentation deikh li tou Shocked ho gai.

Neelum: Kia hua Alina aankhein phadey kia deikh rahi hai Laptop pe.

Alina: Tu khud deikh le.

Neelum ne bhi jub Presentation deikhi tou usey bhi jhatka laga aur khushi k marey uchalney lagi kiun k Presentation to the point aur best of the best thi.

Neelum: Yeh kab banai tu ne aur mujhey bataya bhi nai.

Alina: Mein ne nai bnayee bulkeh mujhey mail aaye hai unknown adress se.

Neelum: Kia matlab hai kis ne bheiji ho gi tujhey yeh teher mein deikhti hn shaid pata chal jaey.

Neelum ne Alina ka Laptop lia aur us pe kch krney lagi lekin kch hasil nai hua 30 min baad us ne Laptop side pe rakh dia aur apney mobile se kch krney lagi lekin us main bhi us ko koi maloom nai para k yeh kis ne bheiji hai hai.

Alina: Kia hua.

Neelum: Kch nai trace hi nai kr paa rahi hn k kis ne bheiji hai kheir shod yeh sab jis ne bhi bheiji ho kal ka project tou apna hi hai.

Alina: Haan yaar mujhey tou es baat ki khushi hai k Jo project bhai ko hi milta aa raha tha who ab bhi humein hi miley ga mein kitni khush hn bata hi nai sakti tujhey.

Alina aur Neelum lag gaen Presentation ko samjhney main waheen un k kamrey main ek Ladka unhey deikh khush ho raha tha lekin who unhey nazer nai aa raha tha thodi deir un ko deikhney k baad who wahan se ghaib ho gya Agley din jab Neelum aur Alina Meeting main gaen tou wahan doosri party ne pehley presentation di us k baad bari aaye Alina ki us ne bhi presentation di jisey sab k sab shocked they Alina apni presentation de k apni jaga pe aa gai.

Host: Ladies and Gentlemen anounce kch deir k baad kia jaey ga.

30 Min later……..

Host: Yeh hum sab jantey hn k Gov ka yeh project Zavino Company ko milta tha jin k Owner they Zaigham jab un ki death ki khaber aaye tou yeh bht bada jhatka tha humarey liey na sirf humarey liey bulkeh humari Gov k liey bhi kiun k Gov ko sab se zyada Trust Un pe hi tha jis trhah se unho ne Project ko finalized kiey they who kabil e deed they ab yeh socha ja raha tha k yeh project kon hasil karey ga kiun k Zaigham jesa caliber kisi main nai hai lekin aaj phr se Heran kia hai Zavino company ne jin ko ab lead kr rahi hn un ki behan Alina un ki presentation deikh k hum sab heran they kiun k un ki Presentation hu bahu un k Bhai ki trhah hi hai so mujhey yeh btatey huey bht khushi ho rahi hai k yeh Project bhi Zavino Campany ko dia jata hai.

Hall main sab taliyan bjaney lagey Alina aur Neelum tou shocked they Alina ki halat aesi thi k usey kch samjh nai aa raha tha k kisi ne usey who presentation bheiji jo k bilkul us k bhai k jesay hi thi us ko yakeen hi nai ho raha tha sab formality puri honey k baad who dono wahan se ghar ki traf chal deen rastey bhar dono khamosh theen unhey kch samjh nai aa raha tha k aaj hua kia hai kesay kisi aur ki di hui Presentation Zaigham se match kr sakti hai kch hi deir main dono ghar pounch gaeen.

Neelum: Alina yeh sab kia hai.

Alina: Mujhey khud kch samjh nai aa rahi Neelo kon hai who jis ne humein hu bahu Bhai k jesi Presentation bheiji.

Neelo: Shaid tumharey bhai ne kisi ko keh rakha ho k yeh sab tumhey bheijney ko.

Alina: Sawal phr wohi hai Neelo bhai ko kesay pata tha k mein yahan aaun gi aur company sambhaloon gi jab who mujhey Pakistan milney aaye they tou achanak hi who sab ho gya tha us k baad un ko jail ho gai kesay unho ne yeh sab kia ho ga.

Neelum: Humein sab se pehley us ka pata lagana hai jis ne tujhey mail bheiji us sey hi pata chal paey ga k majra kia hai.

Alina: Tum theek keh rahi ho lekin kesay pata lagaen tum bhi nai kr paey.

Neelum: Mein utni badi hacker nai hn bas ethical hacker hn humein Unethical hacker ki zaroorat parey gi es kaam k liey.

Alina: Aesa bnda kahan miley ga.

Neelum: Mil jaey ga tu tention na le.

Alina: Mujhey lagta hai baat kch aur hai jo mein nai janti shaid Bhai ka pyaar mujhey yeh sab sochney ko majboor kr raha hai ya kch aur lekin kch tou baat hai jisey mein pehchan nai paa rahi hn.

Neelum: Kia?

Alina: Saber kr mujhey sochney de k mein kia miss kr rahi hn.

Neelum: Ok.

Alina sochney lagi who hall main idher se udher tehal rahi thi aur soch rahi thi who itni soch main gum thi usey maloom hi nai tha k us k aas pass kia ho raha hai who pichli yaadon main chali gai thi jis main us ne Apney bhai k sath pyaar bharey lamhey bitaey they.

Zaigham: Choti yeh apney pass rakh sambhal lekin isey tub hi kholna jab tujhey lagey terey pass aur koi option hi nai hai es sey tujhey ek aesa sach maloom ho ga jisey tu abhi yakeen shaid na kr paey lekin us waqt tujhey yakeen ho jaey ga lekin ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna k yeh baat tumharey elawa sirf aur sirf Neelum hi janey tou behter hai us k elawa koi na janey.

Alina: Yes yaad aa gya.

Alina ne baat uchaltey huey kahi thi Neelum bhi heran thi k Alina ko kia hua Alina dor k apney room main gai aur us cheez ko dhoondney lagi jo us k bhai ne usey di thi bht doondhney k baad akhir usey mil gai aur who le k hall main aa gai aur Sofey pe beith gai sath main Neelum bhi dono usey deikhney lageen.

Neelum: Ab yeh kesay khuley ga.

Alina: Maloom nai.

Alina usey ghour se deikhney lagi lekin usey kch samjh nai aa rahi thi k kesey kholna hai who phr se soch main per gai k shaid us k bhai ne btaya ho k kesey khulna hai lekin koi faida nai lekin achanak us k dimagh main ek baat click hui.

Alina: Neelo ja zara Sugar test machine le k aa.

Neelum: Ab us ka kia krna hai.

Alina: La tou phr btati hn.

Neelum sugar test machine laey us main se Alina ne Pin nikal li kiun k usey sirf usi ki zaroorat thi us ne Pin ko hathon main lia aur apni ek finger main in kia.

Alina: Bhai ne ek baar mujh se blood manga tha shaid yeh sab merey blood se hi khuley.

Us box ki jo upper side thi us main ek thodi si circle jesi side neechay ki traf thi jesa k ek plane surface pe kisi ball ko ek jagah still khada rakhney k liey thodi si side neechay ki traf hoti hai na bilkul wesi hi Aline ki finger se thoda sa blood nikla jisey us ne us box pe us jaga laga dia jis k baad us box main jitney bhi pattern baney huey they us main white color ki roshni nikalney lagi aur deikhtey hi deikhtey who khull gya jab dono ne deikha tou us main ek paper tha Alina ne who nikal lia aur usey khol k perhney lagi sath main Neelum bhi jab dono ne perh lia tou dono sofey se neechay girtey girtey bacheen.

Neelum: Es ka Matlab tumhara bhai.

Alina: God hai :what3: .
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Neelum: Es ka Matlab tumhara bhai.

Alina: God hai.

Neelum: But How.

Alina: Yaad kr kesey hum Accident se bachey they humari gadi road se footpath pe aa gai thi.

Neelum: Yeh tou hai lekin tou kia Tumhara bhai Zinda hai kiun k God tou nai marta.

Alina: Bhai mein janti hn aap mujhey sun rahey hn plzzzz merey samney aaye aap ko deikhney k liey aankhein taras gai hn plzzz samney aaye.

Alina yeh keh k ghutnon k bal beith k roney lagi Neelum bhi us k pass chali gai aur usey chup kraney lagi.

Awaz: Deikho mein aa gya choti.

Alina aur Neelum ne jab awaz ki traf deikha tou shocked ho gaen aur Alina taizi se khadi ho k Zaigham ki traf douri aur usey galey se laga lia aur zor se roney lagi Zaigham ne usey thodi deir roney dia aur chutki bjaye tou dono sofey pe they Alina yeh mehsoos kr k thoda ghabra gai aur sath hi Neelum bhi.

Zaighum: Relax abhi thodi deir pehley sach pata chal gya na k mein kon hn phr bhi ghabra rahi ho.

Alina: Ho jata hai bhai aaj se pehley yeh sirf movies main deikha tha lekin ab sach main yeh ho raha hai tou ho jata hai use too nai hn hum esi liey.

Zaigham: Neelum tum bhi beitho.

Alina: Bhai jab aap God hn tou who marney ka natak kiun kia pata hai meri kia halat ho gai thi ek pal k liey laga tha k aap k sath sath meri Rooh bhi nikal gai ho.

Zaigham: Janta hn lekin krna para duniya k samney rehtey huey tou mein kam nai kr sakta na jo mujhey krney hn esi liey mujhey aesa krna para Lekin tum ne Maa baba k sath acha nai kia.

Alina: Un ki baat hi mat kro aap unho ne kia nai kya aap k sath aur tou aur aap pe bharosa tuk nai kia.

Zaigham: Yeh hona hi tha Choti unho ne jo kia who hona hi tha ya yun keh lo k un se krwaya gya.

Alina: Kia matlab krwaya gya aur kiun.

Zaigham: Kch batein hn jo nai bata sakta kheir shodo mein deikh raha hn jab se meeting se aaye ho khana nai khaya tum dono ne tou yeh lo tumhari pasand ka Pizza.

Zaigham ne chutki bjayee aur un k samney table pe Pizza aa gya.

Alina: Wow bhai I love you.

Alina aur Neelum ne ek ek box uthaya aur khaney lageen us sey pehley Alina ne Zaigham ko bhi offer kia lekin us ne manah kr dia Pizza khaney k baad Zaigham ne unhey fresh ho k aram krney ko kaha Alina Zaigham k sath bht sari baatein krna chahti thi lekin usey jana para Zaigham ne Alina ka Clone bnaya aur usey kch samjha k bheijh dia Sham ko teeno hall main beithey coffee pee rahey they aur baatein bhi kr rahey they.

Zaigham: Tou kia jaey ab shopping or something.

Alina: Bhai shopping tou krni hai lekin Kaheen aur se.

Zaigham: Theek hai America, Canada aur UK chaltey hn shopping k liey.

Alina: Bhai es main tou kafi din lag jaen gey tou company kon deikhey ga.

Zaigham: Hahahahaha shaid tum bhool rahi ho k mein kon hn yeh sab aaj hi ho jaey ga.

Neelum: Kesay?

Zaigham ne unhey tyaar honey ko kaha dono tyaar ho k hall main aa gaen us k baad Zaigham ne un k dimagh pe sheild lagai takeh koi gadbad na ho aur un ko le k Teleport ho gya Canada wahan se unho ne shopping ki us k baad phr America main bhi shopping ki aur phr UK main main.

Aurat: Aap kch tou krein mujhey meri beti chaiey kisi bhi keemat pe.

Aadmi: Mein kch nai kr sakta es mamley main jo hum ne kia hai yeh usi ki saza hai bas ab mout ka intezar hai.

Yeh dono baatein kr hi rahey they k bell hui ladkey ne ja k derwaza khola tou samney deikh k shocked ho gya aur sath hi Khush bhi us ne samney waley ko galey se laga lia us ki aankhon main aansu they.

Ladka: Choti tu aa gai mein bata nai sakta k mein kitna khush hn chal ander chal maa ka rou rou k bura haal hai.

Ladka us Ladki ko le k ander gya aur seedha hall main chala gya yahan who Aadmi aur aurat beithey they Aurat ki jesey hi nazer us ladki pe gai who doudti hui us ladki k pass gai aur usey galey se laga k roney lagi who aadmi bhi un k pass aaya us ne bhi us ladki ko galey se laga lia.

Aurat: Mujhey maaf kr dey meri bachi mujhey maaf kr de meri wajh se mera beta mara gya aur tu humein shod k chali gai mujhey maaf kr de plzzz humein shod k mat ja.

Ladki: Maa mein ab kaheen nai ja rahi mein yaheen rahun gi aur aap ko maafi mangney ki zaroorat nai hai who halat hi aesay they k yeh sab ho gya.

Aadmi: Alina beti hum se ghalti hui hai.

Alina: Baba mein ne kaha na ab chup ho jaiey mujhey bhook lagi hai maa kch do na khaney ko.

Aurat: Haan haan tu beith k baatein kr mein teri pasand ka khana bnati hn bas thodi deir w8 kr.

Zaigham: Mein ne aap ka clone Pakistan bheijh dia hai Maa baba k pass who ab bht khush hn.

Alina: Lekin kiun es ki kia zaroorat thi.

Zaigham: Zaroorat hai choti zaroorat hai yeh project khatam ho jaey us k baad humein Pakistan wapis jana hai.

Alina: Kiun.

Zaigham: Hai kch abhi nai bata sakta waqt aaney pe maloom per jaey ga abhi 2 mahiney hn.

Somewhere in the Universe…….

Ek aesa planet jo baqi universe se alag aur sab se shupa hua yahan 24 ghantey andhera rehta hai aur sath hi Barish hoti hai kiun shocked huey na k Barish kesay yahan badal kesay aaye etc etc yeh ek lambi kahani hai flashback main ziker aaye ga haan tou kahan they hum planet pe yahan ek koi hai jo dhyan krney beitha hua hai jo k ab se nai hazaron salon se hai us k jism se aag nikal rahi hai aur barish ki wajah se hulki thandi bhi hai aur barish ki hi wajah se us ki powers kam hn ek awaz bhi wahan pe gunz rahi hai.

Awaz: Bas ek baar yeh Barish ruk jaey us k baad yahan ki sheild ko tod k teri Duniya ko pal bhar main khatam kr doon ga jo tu ne merey sath kia hai who kabhi bhi nai bhoolun ga yeh barish k ruktey hi teri mout merey hathon ho gi.
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Awaz: Bas ek baar yeh Barish ruk jaey us k baad yahan ki sheild ko tod k teri Duniya ko pal bhar main khatam kr doon ga jo tu ne merey sath kia hai who kabhi bhi nai bhoolun ga yeh barish k ruktey hi teri mout merey hathon ho gi.

Breaking Newz……..

Newzcaster: Naazrein duniya ko hila deney wali khaber hai k duniya bhar se Uranium ko churaya ja raha hai ab tuk ki khaber k mutabik jin Mumalik k pass Uranium hai wahan se Tons k hisab se Uranium churaya ja chuka hai aap ko btatey chalein k Uranium Atomic hatyaar bnaney main bhi istemal hota hai aur yeh Duniya k liey khatrey ki alamat hai abhi tuk barey mulk yeni America China Russia Uk tuk ko maloom nai per raha k yeh kis ka kaam hai mazeed malumaat k liey chaltey hn reporter Khalid k pass G Khalid bataye k yeh kia mamla hai.

Khalid: Pichley ek mahiney se mukhtalif Mulkon se Uranium churaya ja raha tha un Mumalik ne yeh baat ko khufiya rakha kiun k yeh bht hi khaternak hai jab pani sir se uper gya tou yeh baat khul k samney aaye k Uranium churaya ja raha hai ab tuk jo Mulk samney aaye hn yahan se churaya gya hai un main America, Uk, Israel, China, Russia, Pakistan, India, France aur North Koria hn yeh who Mulk hn jin k pass Atomic Weapon bhi hn aur bhi mumalik hn jo k Atomic weapon nai rakhtey un k pass se bhi Uranium churaya gya hai yeh bht hi khaternaak baat hai duniya k aman k liey aur ab tuk yeh maloom nai per saka hai k yeh Uranium kis ne churaya hai duniya bhar ki Intelligence pata laganey main lagi hn lekin abhi tuk pata nai chal saka.

Somewhere in the World…….

CIA chief: We have to find it imidiately or else we will be in War soon.

Mosad chief: Tons of Uranium is been stolen that’s mean whole world is under alert.

Raw chief: Our Agents are searching but no result.

MI6 chief: No threat call we receive till now.

ISi chief: I know someone who will find it but.

CIA chief: But what.

ISI chief: You have to believe it.

Raw chief: Belief what.

ISI chief: Hold on.

ISI chief ne kisi ko call lagai do hi bell main samney se call receive ho gai.

ISI chief: Hello its me ISI chief ----------- Kia tum aa saktey ho bht hi zaroori hai drasal puriya Duniya es waqt khatrey main hai --------------- Ok aa jao meri location pe.

ISI chief: He's coming just w8 a minute.

Abhi ISI chief ne yeh bola hi tha k wahan koi Visible hota hai yeh sab deikh k tou wahan pe mojud sab shocked they aur ghabra gaey they siwaye ISI chief k Jo wahan pe aaya tha who koi Noujawan tha jis ka costume full black tha aur cehehrey pe mask tha kul mila k us ka Avtaar Mysterious tha.

CBI chief: chief(ISI) Who's this.

CBI chief ne yeh baat dertey huey kahi thi ab zahir si baat hai k yeh sab bas hollywood ki filmo main deikha tha aaj real main deikhney ko mill raha tha.

ISi chief: Relax he's not here to harm you so Zaigham we have an issue.

Zaigham: OK I'm Listening.

Zaigham ne chutki bjayee ISI chief bhi samjh gaey k ab who Urdu bhi bolein gey tou sab ko samjh aaye gi.

ISI chief: Uranium churaya ja raha hai tons of Uranium jantey ho es sey kia ho sakta hai puri Duniya ko tabah kia ja sakta hai.

ISI chief ne jab Urdu boli tou sab ne react nai kia lekin jab who unhey samjh bhi aayee tub shocked huey aur herangi se ISI chief ki traf deikhney lagey ISI chief bhi samjh gaey.

ISI chief: Ghabrayee mat yeh sab kch kr sakta hai.

Zaigham: Uranium ko detect kia ja sakta hai ek min.

Zaigham ne aankhein bnd kein tou usey sab maloom per gya lekin usey kch gadbad lagi jab us ne gour se deikha tou yeh us k liey shocking tha.

Zaigham: Detect nai ho raha es ka matlab yeh hai k usey kisi aesay material main rakha gya hai jo k un detect able hai aap logon ne radar se dhoondney ki koshish tou ki ho gi.

ISI chief: Bilkul hum ne her who tareeka istemal kr k deikha jis se Uranium ka pata chal sakey lekin nakamyaab rahey.

Zaigham: Hmmm Theek hai mein pata lagata hn ek do din main Uranium aap k pass ho ga.

ISi chief: OK.

Zaigham wahan se Australia apney room main aaya aur neechay hall main chala gya yahan Alina aur Neelum beith k baatein kr rahi theen.

Alina: Kahan gaey they bhai.

Zaigham: Kaam tha es liey jana para acha choti project complete ho gya hai tou persun humein Pakistan jana hai yaad hai na.

Alina: G bhai.

Zaigham: Mujhey ek aur kaam hai tou aap nikal jana Pakistan mein aap ko waheen milun ga lekin aap kisi ko merey barey main nai btaen gi theek hai.

Alina: Tou kia aap humarey sath nai ja rahey.

Zaigham: Nai mein aana chahta tha lekin kaam aarey aa gya es liey mujhey who krna ho ga.

Alina: Theek hai.

Zaigham: Theek hai aap shopping aur packing krein mein chalta hn aap ko Pakistan main milun ga.

Alina: Ok.

Zaigham wahan se ghaib ho k pounch gya wahan yahan Uranium tha Yeh Earth nai koi aur hi planet tha yahan ek bht hi bari machine thi jis ka rukh aasman ki traf ek aur tha wahan pe kch log machine ko chalu krney lagey they jesay hi Machine chalu hui Zaigham us k beech aa gya us machine se Voilet color ki beem nikal k aasman ki traf janey wali thi k Zaigham k baach main aatey hi who us k jism main samaney lagi wahan pe mojud yeh sab deikh k heran they k yeh beech main kon aa gya ab who machine bnd bhi nai kr saktey they kiun k ek baar chalu ho gai tou ho gai.

Waheen Zaigham ko apney jism main bht dard mehsoos ho raha tha us k jabdey sakhti se beenchey huey they hath ki muthi kashi hui thi aankhein band theen aur jesay hi beem bnd hui Zaigham aahista aahista neechay aaney laga jesay hi us k pair jameen pe lagey us ki aankhein khul gaen us ki aankhein sufaid roshni main nahayee hui theen Zaigham ne chutki bjayee tou sab k sab blast ho gaey.

Zaigham ne Machine k pass ja k deikha tou Uranium tha us ne chutki bjayee tou wahan se Uranium ghaib ho gya aur jahan us ki mulaqat chief se hui thi wahan pe pounch gya us k baad Zaigham apney aglay safar k liey nikal gya jo k tha "CANOPUS”.
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Zaigham ne Machine k pass ja k deikha tou Uranium tha us ne chutki bjayee tou wahan se Uranium ghaib ho gya aur jahan us ki mulaqat chief se hui thi wahan pe pounch gya us k baad Zaigham apney aglay safar k liey nikal gya jo k tha "CANOPUS”.

Idher Alina aur Neelum bhi Pakistan pounch gaen theen aur airport pe Alina ka clone unhey leney aaya hua tha Alina jesay hi us k pass gai aur hath milaya tou usey maloom per gya k us k clone k yahan aaney tuk kia kia hua Alina k clone ne unhey chabi di aur wahan se jatey huey ghaib ho gai Alina aur Neelum wahan se nikal ghar ki traf chal diey.

Aadmi: Who aa chuki hai es baar who nai bachey gi usey aur us k ghar walon ko utha lao.

Aadmi 2: G sarkar.

Alina aur Neelum jesay hi ghar pounchey unhey hall main hi us ka bada bhai aur maa baap dikh gaey jo k baatein kr rahey they.

Aurat: Aa gai apni saheli ko le k tum batao beta kesa raha safar.

Neelum: G bilkul acha raha.

Alina ja k apni maa k pass beith jati hai aur usey side se galey laga leti hai aur us k kandhey pe sir rakh k aaankhein bnd kr leti hai us ki maa bhi pyaar se us ka sir sehlaney lagti hai kch hi deir hui thi k un k ghar main gundey aaney lagtey hn aur un pe gun taan detey hn sab ghabra gaey they gundey un k sir kaprey se dhak k unhey wahan se le k nikal jatey hn yeh sab itni jaldi hua k kisi ko bolney ka moqa hi nai mila.

Ek khulley Maidaan main gadian rukti hn aur un main se bandey nikaltey hn aur sath hi Alina, us ki family aur Neelum ko bhi nikaltey hn jin k sir dhakey huey they unko le k chal detey hn aur ek aadmi k pass ruktey hn jo k kursi pe beitha hua tha who aadmi un k Muh se kapra hataney ko kehta hai jesay hi kapra hatta hai tou samney deikh k ghabra jatey hn kiun k wahan hazaron ki tadad main bndey they aur jesay hi Alina k baap ki nazer Kursi pe beithey aadmi pe jati hai tou who shocked ho jata hai.

Aadmi: Did you miss me Mr Naeem Shah.

Naeem: Waleed tum yahan yeh sab tum ne kia hai.

Waleed: Haan mein ne kia hai.

Naeem: Magar kiun.

Waleed: Ek tou tum merey dushman ho doosra tumhari beti aur betey ki wajah se mein ne apna bhai aur Bhatija kho dia tou socha tujhey teri Family samet khatam kr k apna badla pura kr loon.

Alina: Tu soch bhi nai sakta k tu ne kitni badi ghalti kr di hai.

Waleed: Kesi ghalti ab tumhey bchaney wala hai hi kon koi nai merey peechay logon ka samunder deikh rahi ho.

Alina: Tumhara Bhatija 2000 bndon k sath kch bigad nai saka tou yeh kia kr lein gey.

Waleed: Haan kch nai kr paey lekin ab kesey tumhara bhai tou mar gya na ab kon bchaye ga.

Alina: Kis ne kaha mar gya ager who mara hota tou kia mein Pakistan wapis aati nai mein usi k kehney pe tou aaye hn.

Alina ki baat sun k Alina ki family shocked ho gai k yeh kia baat kr rahi hai Zaigham Zinda kesay ho sakta hai waheen who Aadmi bhi confused k sath sath shocked bhi tha.

Waleed: Mager tumharey baap aur bhaoi ne dafnaya tha usey tou who kon tha mujhey draney ki koshish kr rahi ho na aesa nai ho ga tum logon ki laashein hi yahan se jaen gi.

Alina: Just w8 and watch kch hi palon main tumhari ruh bhi cheikhein maar maar k roye gi.

Somewhere in Galaxy…….

Ek roshini kisi direction main aagey berh rahi thi aur us ki speed Light se hazaar gunah taiz thi apney samney aani wali rukawaton ko dodge krtey huey who lagatar aagey berhtey huey ja rahi thi.

Awaz: Apni speed kam kro Canopus nazdeek hai.

Yeh awaz suntey hi who roshni ki speed kam ho gai aur us k samney ek planet tha who roshni us traf berh gai aur jesay hi who Canopus ki zameen se takrayee us ne apni shape badal di aur Zaigham khada tha us ne aas pass deikha tou wahan laal roshni her traf pheili hui thi aur aasmani bijli kadak rahi thi aur us ki awaz charon traf pheil rahi thi Zaigham us traf berh gya yahan laal roshni zyada thi jab who us k kareeb gya tou ek chota sa Pinjra aur us main Laal roshni main ball vibrate ho raha tha.

Awaz: Jesay hi hum aap ko kahein tou aap ne bijli ka ek jhatka us pinjrey pe krna hai jis se pinjra ghaib ho jaey ga ek aur baat apney kaprey utar do kiun k jab who red ball tum main samayee ga tou tumharey kaprey jal jaen gey.

Zaigham ne apney kaprey utar diey aur awaz ka intezaar krney laga us ki nazrein Pinjrey pe hi theen Zaigham ne deikha k achanak hi us ball ki roshni had se zuada berh gai hai tabhi us k kano main awaz sunayee di.

Awaz: Ab.

Jesay hi awaz sunayee di Zaigham ne ek zor ka bijli jhatka us pinjrey pe mara jis se pinjra blast ho gya aur who ball ek sec k bhi kam waqt main Zaigham main sama gya jis se Zaigham ko itna dard hua k usey laga abhi us ka shreer blast ho jaey ga phr hi himmat kr k who zameen pe beith gya aankhein bnd kr k dhyaan main chala gya usey who ball spped main ek jaga jatey huey dikha aur achanak ruk gya yeh us k jism main who jagah thi jo Dimagh ko dill se jodti thi wahan ja k who ball deerey deerey roshni main badalney laga aur jesay hi roshni main badla usey ek awaz sunayee di.

Awaz: Wellcome to the world of Hell Fire.

Jesay hi yeh awaz usey sunayee di us ne ball ko khud main se nikal dia aur hawa main hilney laga.

Awaz: Mujhey jaganey k liey sukriya.

Zaigham: Aiden ab tum jao aur khud ki takat ko stable kro jab zaroorat ho gi tou bula loon ga.

Aiden: Jesa aap kahein mein ab chalta hn.

Yeh kehtey hi Aiden who se ghaib ho gya aur Zaigham bhi.

Waleed: Tera bhai mar chuka hai aur koi bhi nai aaye ga yahan tum logon ko bchaney k liey hey us ladki(Alina) ko le aao aur baqi sab ko maar dalo.

Jesay hi us ki baat sun k kch bndey Alina ki traf janey lagey tou ek pal k liey Alina ghabra gai lekin foran sambhal gai.

Alina: Tu ne apni Mout ko dawat di hai ab tujhey koi nai bcha sakta BHAAAAIIIIIIII.

Jesay hi Alina ne bhai kaha who Alina k kch aagey zameen pe koi cheez giri jis sey us main khadda ho gya ek pal k liey tou wahan mojud sab k sab dar gaey they kch hi deir main us main se ek Ladka nikal k aaya lekin us ka chehra dhakka hua tha who bahir aa k Alina k aagey khada ho gya.

Alina: Bhai.

Waleed: Kon ho tum aur yahan kia leney aaye ho.

Ladka: Meri family ko marney chala hai aur puch raha hai mein yahan kia kr raha hn.

Waleed: Kon ho tum.

Ladka: Zaigham and I'm a God Son of ZEUS.
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Waleed: Kon ho tum.

Ladka: Zaigham and I'm a God Son of ZEUS.

Waleed: Acha tu God hai tou mein Satan hn hahahahahaha lekin ek min kia bola Zaigham Naeem ka beta?

Zaigham: Haan Zaigham Naeem Shah.

Waleed: Lekin tum tou mar gaey they phr Zinda kesay.

Zaigham: Mein ne kaha na Mein God hn.

Yeh keh k Zaigham ne apni muthi band ki jis sey Waleed ko apney dill ki dharkan rukti hui mehsoos hui jis ki wajah se usey dard honey laga jesay heart attack aa raha ho yeh deikh k sab shocked they aur ghabra bhi gaey they kch hi deir main Zaigham ne Mutthi khol di.

Zaigham: Ab aaya Yakeen.

Waleed dar gya tha Zaigham ki es herkat se who peechay hattey huey gir gya us k sath aaye gundon ne usey pakad k uthaya who abhi bhi dartey huey aankhein bari kiey Zaigham ko deikh raha tha.

Zaigham: Kia hua dar lag raha hai.

Waleed: Kon ho tum.

Zaigham: Abey yaar bola tou God hn Zeus ka beta.

Waleed: Abey deikh kia rahey ho Goliyon se bhun do.

US k kehtey hi gundon ne Zaigham pe goliyon ki bochar kr di Zaigham still apni jagah pe khada tha jab goliyan khatam ho gaen tou Zaigham apni jagah khada hi tha aur us k pass zameen pe goliyan hi goliyan theen yeh sab deikh k tou sab ki aur phat k hath main aa gai.

Zaigham: Waleed yeh chota sa namuna deikh.

Zaigham ne hath uper kia tou aasman pe kaley badal aa gaey aur zor zor se bijli kadakney awaz aaney lagi phr Zaigham ne Waleed k sath aaye gondon pe ishara kr dia aur Aasmani bijli un pe girney lagi Waleed k sath sath Zaigham ki family bhi yeh manzer deikh kanp rahi thi jab sab gundey rakh ban k hawa main ud nai gaey Aasmani bijli girti rahi us k baad phr se mousam phr se theek ho gya.

Zaigham: Deikh lia namuna.

Waleed: Tu God nai Satan hai.

Zaigham: Tujh jeson k liey yehi sahi tujhey tou es se bhi zyada takleef deh mout deni hai.

Ami: Alina yeh mera beta hai na yeh Zaigham hai na bol na.

Alina: G ami yeh aap ka beta Zaigham hai.

Ami: Tou yeh kesi baatein kr raha hai k mein God hn.

Alina: G ami yeh God hi hn Greek God Zeus k bete.

Ami: Nai yeh mera beta hai.

Alina: Haan haan yeh aap ka hi beta hai aap ne hi isey peda kia hai lekin es main Ansh Zeus ka hai.

Ami: Usey yahan bula na mujhey apney kiey ki maafi mangni hai teri baat nai taley ga bula na usey who tujh se bht pyaar krta hai teri baat maan le ga.

Alina: Aap fiker na krein who aap se naraz nai hai aur na hi aap ko maafi mangney ki zaroorat hai who aaye ga aap k pass pehley usey apna kaam khatam krney dein.

Waleed: Deikho mujhey janey do.

Zaigham: Kesay janey doon tu ne meri Family ko nuqsaan pounchaney ki koshish ki hai tujhey kesay Jinda shod doon.

Zaigham ne apni ungli ko hawa main hi herkat di jis se Waleed ko apney seeney main dard hua us ne jab wahan deikha tou us ki shirt pe khiin laga hua tha jab us ne button khol k deikha tou us k seeney pe cut laga hua tha esi trhah phr lagatar us k jism pe cut lagney lagey jis se Waleed ki dard k marey cheikhein nikalney lageen us k sarey kaprey khoon main ter they.

Alina: Bhai usey jaldi se khatam kro aur chalo ghar chaltey hn.

Zaigham: Terey sath aur kheilna tha mujhey lekin Choti ne keh dia tou jaldi khatam krna parey ga so wellcome the Fire of hell.

Zaigham ne ne ishara kia aur Waleed aag ki lapet main aa gya who cheikhein marta hua idher se udher dodney laga lekin koi faida nai aakhir mar gya aur gid gya jab us ki bady rakh ban gai tou Aag khatam ho gai Zaigham chal k apni family k pass gya aur chutki bjayee jis se sab apney ghar k hall main beithey they yeh deikh k tou pehley sab ghabra gaey lekin phr who Aurat Zaigham k pass gai aur usey galey se laga lia.

Ami: Mujhey maaf kr dey.

Zaigham: Na mein aap se naraz nai hn koi bhi hota tou yehi krta jo aap ne kia mujhey koi dukh nai hai aur na hi naraz hoon aap se yeh hona tha ho gya.

Naeem: Lekin yeh God ka kia chakker hai.

Zaigham: Lambi kahani hai baad main btaun ga.

Ami: Tu beith mein terey liey khana bnati hn.

Zaigham: Pehley beitho zaroori baat krni hai choti k liey rishta deikhney aaney waley hn kal.

Ami: Kia? Lekin badey bhaion k hotey huey pehley us ka kiun Salmaan hai phr tum ho us k baad hi ho gi na us ki shadi.

Zaigham: Mein ne kab kaha k kal us ki shadi hai mein ne kaha k rishta pakka hona hai.

Naeem: Alina ki pasand pushey bagheir.

Zaigham: Choti ko pata hai yeh dono ek doosrey se pyaar krtey hn.

Ami: Kiun Alina tu ne mujhey tou kabhi btaya nai es barey main.

Zaigham: Mujhey btaya sab se pehley aap ko bata patey k who hadsa ho gya us k baad aap ko pata hi hai.

Naeem: Theek hai kal dupeher k khanay pe bula letey h unhey.

Zaigham: Theek hai mein unhey bata doon ga doosri baat ab se mein kch kam hi raha krun ga ghar kiun k mujhey jana ho ga kaam k liey.

Somewhere in the Universe……

Planet pe yahan barish ho rahi thi who aahista aahista rukney lagi tha aur jesay hi ruki wahan pe jo sheild thi dhamakey k sath toot gai aur wahan drawni hassi ki awaz gunjney lagi.

Awaz: Mein azad ho gya Zeus ab apni duniya ko mujh se bacha k dikha hahahahahahahahahahaha.
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Planet pe yahan barish ho rahi thi who aahista aahista rukney lagi tha aur jesay hi ruki wahan pe jo sheild thi dhamakey k sath toot gai aur wahan drawni hassi ki awaz gunjney lagi.

Awaz: Mein azad ho gya Zeus ab apni duniya ko mujh se bacha k dikha hahahahahahahahahahaha.

Ami: Tou Tum kisi ko pasand krtey ho ya hum hi Deikhein tumharey liey Rishta.

Mein: Nai ami Shadi nai kr sakta.

Ami: Kiun kia hua Tum shadi kiun nai kro gey.

Mein: Mera kch pata nai hai ami aesay main kisi kisi Zindagi kharab nai krna chahta mein ab tou who bhi Azad ho gya hai jis k liey mein es duniya main aaya hn kab who hamla kr dey kch pata nai.

Awaz: Bachay tumhey es waqt Rajya main aana ho ga.

Mein: G mein abhi aata hn.

Awaz: Theek hai.

Mein: Ami mujhey abhi jana ho ga mein aata hn khaney k time pe.

Ami: Theek hai jaldi aana.

Mein ghar se ghaib hua aur Greece pounch gya wahan ek pahad pe gya aur us main kaheen ghaib ho gya.

Somewhere in the Universe……..

Awaz: Tyaari kr lo God Zaigham aaney waley hn.

Yeh awaz purey planet main gunj rahi thi jis ki wajah se Planet ko kch hi sec main purey ka pura Saja dia gya tha Mehal bhi Planet k sarey log Mehal k pass khadey they aur Zaigham ka intezaar kr rahey they tabhi unho ne deikha k Aasman se ek Roshni un ki traf aa rahi hai aur jesay hi who roshni Zameen pe utari us ne Zaigham ka aakar le lia aur wahan Mojud Sab k sab Jhuk gaey.

Mein: Uth jaey.

Itna suntey hi sab uth gaey aur Zaigham Mehal ki traf berh gya kch hi deir main Zaigham mehal main tha aur who ek barey hall main enter hua wahan Mojud sab k sab uth gaey aur Jhuk gaey siwaye us k jo Singhashan pe beitha tha Zaigham chalta hua uper us Singhashan pe Beithey Shaksh k pass ja k khada ho gya aur un k samney jhuk gya.

Shaksh: Khadey ho jao bchey.

Zaigham khada ho gya us ne wahan mojud sab ko khadey honey ko kaha aur pass pari kursi pe beith gya.

Shaksh: Tumhey maloom per gya ho ga k who azad ho gya hai.

Zaigham: G baba.

Zeus: Filhal who kamzor hai aur who es liey kiun k us ki power ek sword main band hai aur who sword Earth pe hi hai jab tuk who Sword usey nai mill jati who kch nai kr sakta who kamzor hai filhal.

Zaigham: G mujhey kia krna ho ga.

Zeus: Sword kahan hai yeh sirf mein janta hn lekin yeh abhi baad ka masla hai mein ne tumhey es liey bulaya hai k jis sey tumhari shadi honi hai us ki 21st janamdin kareeb hai aur jesay hi us ka janamdin aaye ga usey tumharey barey main pata chal jaey ga aur who tum se milney ki koshish karey gi.

Mein: Mein ne soch tha k mein shadi hi nai krun ga.

Zeus: Yeh hona hai bachey aur zaroori bhi hai Tumhari us k sath jung main tumhara beta hi tumhari madad karey ga.

Mein: G theek hai.

Zeus: Sirf 2 mahiney us ki 21st janamdin main reh gaey hn us k baad tumhey hi pehchanna hai usey jis k sath tumhari shadi ho gi.

Mein: G theek hai.

Us k baad Kch aur baatein hueen aur Zaigham ghar aa gya yahan sab raat k khaney pe w8 kr rahey they Zaigham ne khana khaya aur apney room main chala gya Agley din subhah nashta hua us k baad dawat ki tyaari shuru ho gai mukhtalif kisam k khaney pakey aur khana paktey paktey dopeher ho gai Mehmaan bhi aa gaey.

Baba: Aaiey Aaiey aap logon ka hi intezaar ho raha tha.

Naeem un sab ko hall main le gya yahan sab beithey they un dono Family ne ek doosrey ka Taruf krwaya us k baad baton ka silsila shuru ho gya.

Somewhere in the Universe…….

Awaz: Santan.

Santan: G hukam.

Awaz: Jaldi se who talwar dhoondo mujhey who kisi bhi keemat pe chaiey kaheen bhi ho usey doondh nikalo zyada samey nai hai humarey pass.

Santan: G hukam mein abhi se us ki khouj pe nikalta hn.

Awaz: Yaad rahey zyada samey nai lagana aur mein apni thodi power heal kr loon koi mujhey preshan na krney paey.

Santan: G hukam aesa hi ho ga.

Santan wahan se chala gya.

Awaz: Zeus ek baar who talwar mill jaey phr deikhna mein teri duniya ko kesay khatam krta hn.

London……

Ladki: Baba aap ne wada kia tha k es baar mera Birthday Pakistan main manayein gey.

Aadmi: Who tou theek hai beta lekin abhi bht zaroori project chal raha hai mera usey shod k abhi tou nai ja sakta na aur wesay bhi 2 month hn abhi bhi aap fiker na kro Pakistan hi manayein gey.

Ladki: Thank u Baba I love u.

Aadmi: I love u too beta.

Aurat: Aap dono ka ho gya ho tou nashta shuru krein gey thanda na ho jaey.

Aadmi: Haan haan kiun nai aaj meeting bhi hai tou mujhey jaldi pounchna bhi hai.

Ladki: Baba humara Pakistan main koi nai jis k pass hum ja sakein matlab koi family member.

Aadmi: Nai beta mera koi Family member nai hai Pakistan main aur aap ki Ami k sarey relative yaheen hn bas mera best Friend hai jo Pakistan main rehta hai us k pass chalein gey mein us se mill bhi loon ga 10 saal k baad.

Ladki: Theek hai baba.
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