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[Extra] Vengeance ~ Revenge is Sweet

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EXTRA UPDATE 3 ~
(HAPPY NEW YEAR)


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South Korea
31st December, 2011 ~ 8:45 PM

*Yawn*

Raat ke 9 bajne ko the. Yoo-Jung uske haath mein ek shopper ko pakad ker chal rahi thi. Uske kandhe per uska bow aur uske dusre kandhe per uske ek arrows ka bag latka huwa tha.

December ka aakhiri din tha to thand bhi bohat he zyada thi aur havayen bhi chal rahi thi to uska bhi shareer thand se thoda kaanp raha tha. Yoo-Jung ne uske kadam tezi se aage badhane shuru ker diye.

*Sigh*

Yoo-Jung uske ghar ke paas pohanchne he wali thi ke usko dur se he uski Landlady ghar ke darwaze per he khadi dikh gayi. Usko daikh ker Yoo-Jung ne ek thakan se bhari huwi aah bhari aur uski taraf chal di.

“Yoo-Jung?”

Yoo-Jung ko daikhte he uski Landlady uske paas aa gayi. Yoo-Jung ne uski nazron ko uske saamne ate he jhuka liya aur chehre per ek jhooti muskurahat le ayi.

Yoo-Jung: Hap-

Landlady: Mujhe kuch bhi aur nahi bolna! Ye bata ke rent layi hai kya?

Uske saval per Yoo-Jung ne ek lambi saans li aur uske saamne jhuk ker bow karne lagi. Usko daikh ker Landlady bhi thodi naram per gayi.

Yoo-Jung: Ma’am, I’m really sorry! Lekin main jald he de dungi, thoda aur time de dijiye.

Landlady (Frustrated): Tch, Last time bhi ye he keh diya tha tum ne! Lekin ab ye last chance de rahi hu aur wo bhi sirf New Year ke liye aur tumhare uncle ek lambe samay tak hamare kirayedar the isiliye...!

Yoo-Jung: Thank You so much...!

Landlady: Ab ye Archery ko bhi chhod do! Ye tumhe zyada paise nahi kamane de gi aur na he tum kabhi aage badh sako gi.

Yoo-Jung: Thank You...!

Landlady ne uske purse ko neeche se uthaya aur udhar se chale gayi. Yoo-Jung uske udhar se jaane tak bow he karti rahi aur uske jaane ke baad uth ker khadi ho gayi aur ghar ki taraf mud gayi.

*Click*

“Main ghar aa gayi...!”

Yoo-Jung ne andar jaate huwe kaha aur darwaze ko band ker ke andar chale gayi. Lekin uske ghar ke andar bilkul andhera tha aur bohat he zyada thand bhi thi.

Yoo-Jung (Stunned): Yoo-ri?

Yoo-Jung ne uske ghar ke andar ate he dhayan se daikha to usko ek kone mein Yoo-ri baithi huwi dikh gayi. Yoo-ri ne ek patali si blanket ko lapaita huwa tha aur apne ghutnon ko gale lagaye bilkul sikud ker udhar baithi huwi thi.

Yoo-Jung: Yoo-ri, Yanha aise thand mein kyu baithi huwi ho?

Yoo-Jung uske paas chale gayi aur usne ek haath Yoo-ri ke sar per rakh ker check kiya to uska sar bilkul thanda ho gaya tha aur chehra bhi thand se laal ho gaya tha. Yoo-ri ko body bhi bohat he weak thi aur uske gaal bhi pichke huwe the.

Yoo-ri: Electric and gas is cutoff...! Unhen main ne rokna bhi chaha tha. Lekin bill na dene ke kaaran unhone aur time nahi diya... Sorry...!

Yoo-Jung (Sigh): Huh, Ab tum kyu sorry keh rahi ho? Usmein tumhari kya galti hai?

Yoo-ri (Down): Meri he to galti hai sab! Ek to main itni weak hu aur na he Qi use ker sakti hu. Uske upar se main bimar bhi he to ap ki salary sirf meri medicine per he lag jaati hai...Unni, Ap kyu mujhe akel-

Yoo-Jung: Again? Ab mujhe kitni baar aur kehna ho ga ke main kanhi bhi nahi ja rahi hu! Ab mera aur mood kharab na karna aur main ye soup le ker ayi hu. Ye peete hai...!

Yoo-Jung ne uske haath mein pakade huwe bag se ek soup ka box nikala aur usko ek bowl ke andar daal diya. Lekin raaste mein ate huwe soup thanda ho gaya tha.

Yoo-ri: Ye to thanda ho gaya hai! Gas bhi band ker di haii, Ab kya kare?

Yoo-Jung ne Yoo-ri se kuch bhi nahi kaha aur bowl ko utha ker dono hathon se pakad liya. Yoo-ri bhi usko dhayan se daikhne lagi. Yoo-Jung uski fire qi per focus karne lagi aur uske haath heat hone lage.

Uske haatho mein pakda soup ka bowl sirf kuch he seconds ke andar he garam ho gaya. Ye daikh ker Yoo-ri khush ho ker muskurane lagi.

Yoo-Jung (Smile): Ab to theek hai na?

Yoo-ri (Nod): Yes...!

Yoo-Jung aur Yoo-ri baith ker souo peene lagi aur enjoy karne lagi. Avinash ne unhen uske ek trusted Aadmi ke paas chhod diya tha. Yoo-Jung aur Yoo-ri dono ko usne uski betiyon ki tarha he pyaar kiya tha.

Lekin uski bhi umar ho gayi thi aur ek saal pehle uski bhi death ho gayi thi. Uske baad se Yoo-Jung ne he sab kuch sambhal liya tha. Avinash bhi unse sirf ek baar he mila tha to wo uske paas bhi nahi ja sakti thi.

Avinash ne Yoo-Jung ko basic bata ker usko Fire clan ki ek book de di thi. Yoo-Jung uski Qi core ko train karne ke liye taiyar he nahi thi kyu ke Yoo-ri ki weak body ke kaaran uske paas Qi core nahi tha.

Yoo-Jung usko khud se inferior feel nahi karwana chahati thi. Lekin jab usko ehsaas huwa ke usko ab khud ko aur Yoo-ri ko protect karne ke liye Strong hona ho ga to usne bhi training shuru ker di thi.

Yoo-ri: Unni, tumhare archery class mein koi hai jo tumhe pasand ho?

*Cough ~ Cough*

Yoo-ri ke achanak saval se Yoo-Jung bhi chaunk gayi aur khansane lagi.

Yoo-Jung (Coughing): Ye kya bol rahi ho? Main ek assistant archery instructor hu aur ye mera kaam hai. Udhar main paise kamane ke liye jaati hu kisi se date ke liye nahi...!

Yoo-ri (Frowns): Unni kitni boring ho rahi ho ap? Ye he to din hai ladko ko date karne ka aur unse pyaar mein doobne ka aur...Shaadi? *Grin*

Yoo-Jung (Sigh): Ye ladki ab dobara khawabo ki duniyan mein ghoomne chale gayi...!

Yoo-Jung ne kaha aur muskurane lagi. Uske baad usne bartanon ko uthaya aur unhen rakhne ke baad Yoo-ri ke saath uski blanket mein ghus gayi.

Ab raat ke 11 baj gaye the aur thand bhi badh gayi thi. Yoo-Jung uski body ko heat karne lagi aur apne saath Yoo-ri ko bhi warm karne lagi. Yoo-ri bhi uske saath gale lag ker baith gayi.

Yoo-Jung: Avinash Ahjussi bata rahe the ke unke bhi twins kid hai! Ek ladki aur ek usse bhi bada ladka bhi hai...!

Yoo-Jung: Phir kya?

Yoo-ri (Smile): Maybe you could...You know? Kuchi Kuchi...!

Yoo-Jung: Seriously? Kya pura din ye sab he chalta hai tumhare khurafati dimagh ke andar?

Yoo-ri (Giggling): Hehehehe, Main to sirf mazak he ker rahi thi! But who knows, Maybe you could get to know his son. You know, fall in love, get married…?

Yoo-Jung: Stop right there... Girl, You're impossible...!

Yoo-Jung ne kehte huwe Yoo-ri ke sar ko halka sa dhakka diya aur dono hansne lagi.

*Boom*

*Suuuuu*

*Pop*

*Crackle*

“Happy New Year”

Raat ke 12 baj gaye the aur unhen unke kamre ki khidki se dur kanhi per firework hoti dikhayi de rahi thi.

Yoo-ri: Unni, Jaldi se New Year resolution ke baare mein soch lete hai...!

Yoo-ri keh ker uski aankhe band ker ke uske new year resolution ke baare mein wish karne lagi aur Yoo-Jung usko daikh ker muskurate huwe firework ki taraf daikhne lagi.

Yoo-Jung: [This year, I have to get stronger! Strong enough to keep Yoo-ri safe... and to protect both of us from anything. I just have to do it...!]

Yoo-Jung ne uske New Year resolution ke baare mein socha aur uski nazar unke room mein rakhi huwi Avinash ki di Fire Qi ki training ke book per chale gayi.

Yoo-Jung (Smile): [Avinash ke beta...! Huh, Uski bhi to ek choti behan hai na? Kya wo bhi khud ko strong ker raha ho ga apni behan ko protect karne ke liye? Shayad, Uske baad hum sach mein... *Smile* Yoo-ri ka mere upar ab galat asar per raha hai... Lekin kya naam tha uska?... Unghhh... Haan... Aarav Arya]


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[And that's it for our New Year special extra update! Wishing you all a super happy belated New Year! If you want, feel free to share your New Year’s resolution with everyone!]
Nice update bhai...
 

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31st December, 2011 ~ 8:45 PM
Wooo.. bro you have gone to the year when it all starts happening .i had never imagined to go this old in the EXTRA
Yoo-Jung (Smile): [Avinash ke beta...! Huh, Uski bhi to ek choti behan hai na? Kya wo bhi khud ko strong ker raha ho ga apni behan ko protect karne ke liye? Shayad, Uske baad hum sach mein... *Smile* Yoo-ri ka mere upar ab galat asar per raha hai... Lekin kya naam tha uska?... Unghhh... Haan... Aarav Arya]
Yoo-Jung too had a corner for aarav in her heart i wonder how was she feeling when aarav came infront of him in the tutorial tower. 😊
Landlady: Mujhe kuch bhi aur nahi bolna! Ye bata ke rent layi hai kya?
Yoo-Jung has seen alot in her life which made her so tough .avinash ne in dono ko safe karke apne dost ke paas chhor diya par unke marne ke baad yoo-jung ko hi sab samhalna pada as her sister is so weak .
Yoo-Jung: [This year, I have to get stronger! Strong enough to keep Yoo-ri safe... and to protect both of us from anything. I just have to do it...!]
This is why she is so determined towards getting stronger and stronger but at the end she couldn't save her beloved sister ,when she need a shoulder to cry aarav too has gone to prison . How sad 😔

Writer bro this update was totally unexpected 😲. When i open up the thread i thought it to be last update you have posted but after seeing the time of posting it brings a huge smile on my face.😁😊
Thank you so much for this great surprise update.it was so good 👍 .
 

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Wooo.. bro you have gone to the year when it all starts happening .i had never imagined to go this old in the EXTRA
That’s exactly why I started this thread! These EXTRA updates are mostly filler, but they help make the story’s foundation stronger.

There are going to be more updates like this in the future, so stay tuned :approve:

Yoo-Jung too had a corner for aarav in her heart i wonder how was she feeling when aarav came infront of him in the tutorial tower. 😊
just wait a bit longer! I’m going to cover that part soon too :blush1:
Writer bro this update was totally unexpected 😲. When i open up the thread i thought it to be last update you have posted but after seeing the time of posting it brings a huge smile on my face.😁😊
Wait, did I forget to include you in the announcement? I posted it last night, so you should’ve gotten a notification too :hmm2:
 
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Extra Update 1
(Last Time)


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Day 884

“Vansh”

“Vansh!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Vansh”

Vansh ko apne kareeb Sonia ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi aur uske paas hone ka ehsaas bhi ho raha tha. Lekin wo uske bavajud bhi aankhen nahi khol raha tha.

Sonia: Vansh ...Mom Dad ko bura lage ga! Ap kyu mujhe unke saamne sharminda karna chah rahe ho?

*Silence ~*

Sonia (Sigh): Huh, Lagta hai ap ko bacchon ki tarha he uthana padega...!

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

*Tuck*

Vansh ko Sonia ke kadmon ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi aur usko Sonia ke bed ke upar chadhne ka bhi ehsaas ho gaya. Vansh gehri saanse lene laga.

*Thud*

*Slash*

*Bam*

Vansh ne uski aankhen kholi to uske upar Sonia ek chaku pakde khadi huwi thi. Vansh ne usko dhaka dete huwe bistar se gira diya aur tabhi ek taraf se mask lagaye huwa Vansh ka dusra roop chaku liye khada tha.

*Woooosh*

*Thud*

Mask wale Vansh ne chaku se vaar kiya to Vansh uchalte huwe peeche ho gaya aur usne dodge ker liya. Bina kuch bhi kahe ya aur daikhe Vansh kamre ke darwaze ki taraf bhaga aur usko kholte huwe baahir nikal gaya.

*Thud*

*Thud*

*Thud*

“Vansh”

“Ye kya ker rahe ho Vansh?”

“Vansh beta ruko”

Vansh ne bhaagte huwe he sidhiyon se neeche ki taraf daikha to uska pura parivar usko neeche khada daikh raha tha. Lekin Vansh unko daikh ker bhi ruka nahi aur upar he bhaagta raha.

Vansh (Panting): A-Ab aur nahi ...Ab aur dhokhe mein nahi rahu ga. Ye sab jhoot hai. Yanha se nikalte he main iss nightmare se baahir nikal sakta hu aur sach mein mar sakta hu.

*Thump-Thump*

Vansh hanfte huwe bhaag raha tha. Usne peeche daikha to Sonia aur Mask wala Vansh ab bhi uske peeche bhaag rahe the. Lekin wo ruka nahi aur ab bhi bhaagta raha.

Vansh: Just a little more...!

Vansh ne saamne daikha to usko ek badi window dikh gayi. Vansh ab tezi se uski taraf bhaagne laga aur window ke paas ate he kud gaya.

*CRASH*

*SHATTER!*

Vansh window todte huwe baahir nikal aya seeshe ke pieces uske chehre mein ghus rahe the aur uske shareer per bohat se cut lag rahe the.

*Bam*

*Crack*

Vansh (Groan): Ughhhh!

Vansh abhi third floor se neeche gira tha. Uske paas abhi uski player abilities nahi thi to uski body bohat weak thi aur uske pairon ki hadiya bhi toot si gayi thi.

Vansh (Groaning): Finally *Panting* B-Baahir aa he gaya...! *Groaning*

Vansh himmat ker ke mushkil se uske pairon per khada ho gaya aur haatho ka sahara bhi lete huwe aage Gate ki taraf badhne laga. Vansh buri tarha se ladkhada raha tha aur uska shareer bhi kaanp raha tha.


“Vansh”

“Vansh ap ke pairon ko kya huwa hai?”

“Vansh mere bache ye kya ho gaya hai?”

“Vansh Bachao”

“VANSH!!!”

Vansh ko uske peeche se lagatar awaazen aa rahi thi. Lekin usne khud ko bohat mushkil se roka huwa tha aur bina kisi per bhi dhayan diye Gate ki taraf badh raha tha. Usko 884 din ho gaye the ye he sab bardasht karte huwe.

Lekin har baar uske liye ye aur se aur mushkil ho raha tha. Lekin ab ki baar usne baahir nikalne ka nirnay ker liya tha. Uske paas ye aakhiri raasta bacha tha.

“Vansh”

“Vansh”

“Master”

Vansh (Stunned): Huh ...?

Awaazon ke beech mein ek awaaz sun ker Vansh ke kadam udhar he tham gaye. Vansh ki aankhen bhi hairat se fail gayi. Usne ye awaaz bohat samay ke baad suni thi. Usko khud ke kanon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

“Master...Ye ap ko kya huwa hai? Ye itne ghayal kaise ho gye ap?”

Vansh (Shivered): Huh...?

Ek haath Vansh ke chile huwe ghutne per aya aur usko daikhne laga. Vansh ne bheegi huwi aankhon ke saath neeche daikha to usko awaaz ka chehra bhi dikh he gaya.

*Thud*

Vansh seedhe neeche gir gaya. Usko vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

Vansh (Stunned): Flora?

Vansh ke saamne Flora baithi huwi thi. Vansh ko Flora ache se yaad thi. Uski virginity usne Flora ke saath he khoyi thi. Lekin Vansh ke liye Flora usse kayi zyada thi. Flora ne he uska aur Vanshika ka dhayan rakha tha. Flora uski teacher caretaker aur Maa sab thi.

Flora: Ye kya ker rahe ho? Aur kitne ghayal ho gye ap? Uthiye andar chalte hai.

Flora ne Vansh ka haath pakda aur usko dobara se khade ker diya. Vansh sirf usko daikhta he reh gaya aur khada ho gaya.

Vansh (Tearful): Sorry Flor...Huh?

*Slash*

Vansh kuch kehne he wala tha ke ek chaku Flora ke peeche se aur flora ke gale ko kaat gaya.

*Thud*

Flora neeche gir gayi aur uska khoon zameen per failne laga. Vansh ghutnon per gir gaya aur baitha Flora ke bejan shareer ko daikhne laga.

Flora (Whisper): Vansh...A-Ap ne ye kyu kiya?

Vansh (Crying): Main ne kuch bhi nah-

*Stab*

Vansh kuch keh sakta ke usse pehle he uski peeth mein chaku ghuste huwe uske dil mein ghus gaya. Vansh bhi neeche gir gaya aur wo saamne giri huwi Flora ko daikhta raha.

Flora: Ap ne ye kyu kiya? ~

Vansh ki aankhen band hoti gayi aur wo ek baar dobara mar gaya.

Day 885

“Master”

“Master!......10 baj rahe hai”

“Master...Ap ki saza abhi khatam nahi huwi hai... Master...!”

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[Abhi ke liye itna he. Ye tha hamara first extra update. Umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye pasand aya ho ga aur ap aage bhi ye daikhna chaho gye. Ab mile gye next Saturday story per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
maja aa geya bhai eski or bhi gand mar kr rkh do ye sala ye he deesrve krta he
 
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Extra Update 2 ~
(Tanu's Christmas)

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Veer's House
Tanu's Rooom ~ 7:00

*Ho-ho-ho*

Subha ke 7 baje Tanu ke kamre mein bed ke paas rakha Alarm bajne laga. Ek haath ko Tanu ne uske bistar se nikala aur usko band ker diya. Lekin kuch he seconds ke baad Tanu uth ker baith gayi.

Tanu (Smile): Christmas...!

*Thud*

Tanu uske bed se kudte huwe neeche utar gayi aur uske kamre se baahir nikal gayi. Usne baahir ate he ek baar baahir daikhna shuru ker diya jaise kisi ko dhoond rahi ho.

Usko udhar koi bhi dikhayi nahi diya to wo Aarav ke kamre ki taraf badh gayi aur bina ek baar bhi knock kiye andar ghus gayi.

Tanu: Aarav aa gaye kya?

Aarav ke kamre mein seedhe ghuste he Tanu ne uske saamne khade Aayush se pucha uski awaaz ke andar ek excitement aur khushi chhalak rahi thi. Lekin kamre ke andar sirf Aayush ko daikh ker uske chehre per ayi he muskurahat khud he pheeki padne lagi.

Aayush: Aara...Aarav abhi kisi kaam se kanhi gaya huwa hai! Abhi uske saath contact nahi ker sakte.

Tanu (Furious): Ab ye har baar ka ho gaya hai! Ek tevaron per he to unhe ane ke liye kaha tha. Lekin unhone 1.5 mahine mein ek baar bhi baat tak nahi ki...!

*Slam*

Tanu ne gusse se darwaze ko band kiya aur baahir nikal gayi. Aarav ko uski trip per gaye huwe ab 1.5 mahine ho gaye the. Tanu ne bhi usko 1.5 mahine se nahi daikha tha.

Usko lag raha tha ke Aarav uske saath christmas per to ho ga. Lekin Aarav ko ab bhi na daikh ker usko bura lag raha tha.

Aayush: *Sigh*

Aayush udhar he baith gaya. Uske andar bhadki huwi Tanu se baat karne ki himmat nahi thi. Usne kuch pal baith ker socha aur phir phone nikal ker kisi ko call karne laga.

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Tanu's Room

*Click*

*Slam*

Tanu (Furious): Ab to ye unka har baar ka he ho gaya hai! Rakshabandhan per bhi aisa he kiya ab bhi aisa kiya aur New Year per bhi ye he kare gye.

Gusse se aagbabula Tanu kamre mein waapis aa gayi aur udhar he muh bana ker baith gayi. Usko Aarav ke upar bohat gussa aa raha tha jaise abhi agar wo saamne aa bhi jata to Tanu uska muh he noch leti.

Tanu (Exhale): Fuuuu ~ Ab unko farak nahi padta to mujhe kyu per raha hai? Ab main bhi unke bina he christmas enjoy ker ke dikhaungi.

Udhar baithi Tanu khud se he baate karne lagi aur hansne lagi. Uske baad Tanu dobara khadi ho gayi aur wardrobe khol ker dress nikalne lagi aur taiyar hone lagi.

Tanu: Helloooo ~

Tanu ne apne phone ko uthaya aur Vlog style mein video banane lagi.

Tanu (Smile): Bhayia, Main ne ap ka bohat he wait kiya! Ab ap to ghar ane se rahe. Lekin ap ke kaaran main apna din kyu kharab karu?....Ye huwi hu main christmas party ke liye Readyyyy....!


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Ye keh ker Tanu video mein apni dress aur make-up dikhane lagi. Usne ek red dress pehna huwa tha aur makeup ke saath wo pyari lag rahi thi.

Tanu: Ooh, Main to bhool he gayi ke meri friends ke saath mera aj ka plan hai! Yanha ke liye itna he ab chalte hai next location per.... Woooosh...!


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Living Room ~ 8:22 AM

*Sip*

“Aj ki chai to maze ki bani hai”

Pratap ne chai ki chuski lete huwe hans ker kaha to uske paas baithe sab log hansne lage. Parivar ke lagbhag sabhi log udhar Living room mein baithe chai ke maze le rahe the.

Vikram aur Meera ek taraf baithe huwe the. ishika aur Priya dusre sofa per baithe the. Kunal uske Dada ji ke saath baitha huwa tha.

Uske maa aur baap dono he USA chale gaye the Aarav se ulajhne ke baad ab dono he aur risk nahi le rahe the.

“Aarav”

Ishika ko upar se Aayush ate dikhayi diya to usne usko bula liya. Ishika usko baaki sab ke saamne Aarav keh ker he bulati thi.

Ishika: Aarav, Tumhare liye bhi chai banau kya?

Aayush: Nahi, Abhi mujhe kisi se milna hai to main jaldi main hu...!

Ishika (Nod): Okay...!

Aayush ko Ishika ne Aankhon se ishara kiya to wo aage aa gaya aur sab badon se ashirwad lene laga aur sab se mil ker baahir nikal gaya. Ishika he usko ghar ke andar handle karti thi.

Pratap (Smile): Lagta hai kuch zyada he khaas meeting hai! Vikram daikhna ladke ki umar ho rahi hai.

Pratap ka ishara sab samajh rahe the aur sab he muskurane lage aur dobara apni baato mein lag gaye.

“Merry Christmas Dada Ji”

Aayush se kuch der baad he Tanu bhi udhar aa gayi aur seedhe Pratap ke paas chale gayi. Usko daikh pratap ne bhi usko gale se laga liya aur uske baad Tanu baaki sab ko Merry Christmas kehne lagi.

Pratap (Smile): Aj to bohat pyaari lag rahi ho! Ab ye bhi batao ke tumhe tumhare Santa se kya chahiye hai?

Pratap ne uski white beard per haath fairate huwe kaha jaise ke wo Santa ho.

Tanu: Santa ko batane ki zaroorat hai kya?

Pratap: Ye bhi sahi hai! Lekin Santa ko kuch to idea do na.

Tanu: Ye ap ko khud figure out karna ho ga! Abhi mere meri friends ke saath kuch plans hai to main aj late ho sakti hu.

Meera: Lekin aj ka din to hum family ke saath reh sakte hai na?

Tanu (Mumbling): Family poori he kanha hai?

Meera: Kya?

Tanu: Kuch bhi nahi, Ab main chalti hu...!

Vikram: Tanu, Aj tumhare art school ke principal aa rahe hai...!

Tanu: Unse ap baat ker lena! Bye Bye, Love you all...!

Tanu ne kisi ki aur ki baat nahi suni aur baahir nikal gayi.


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Palladium Mall
Mumbai ~ 12:07 PM

“Hello”

Tanu ne dobara se uska phone nikal liya aur video banane lagi. Uske saath uski kuch school friends aur kuch family friends bhi thi.

Tanu: Ab hum sab ne breakfast ker liya hai to hum shopping karne aye hai! Aj mall ko bhi bohat ache se sajaya gaya hai. Ye kisi ke intezar mein baithe reh ker christmas ko barbad karne se to bohat he acha hai. Bye Bye...!


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*Sigh*

Amrita (Tanu's Friend): Tanu, Ye tu ne kab se vlogging shuru ker di?

Jiya (Tanu's Friend): Aur tu ye kisko chidhane ki koshish ker rahi hai?

Tanu (Sigh): Huh, Ek hai ego se bhara huwa banda jisko sirf uska kaam he dikhayi deta hai! Ek baar kisi ko kuch wish bhi nahi ker sakta.

Amrita: Kiski baat ker rahi hai?

Tanu: Nevermind, Hum enjoy karte hai na!?

Amrita: Lekin phir bhi koi to ha-.....Tera bhai?

Tanu (Stunned): Kya? Aarav kanha se beech mein aa gaya?

Amrita: Beech mein nahi saamne aya hai! Udhar daikh kisi ladki ke saath hai.

Amrita ki baat sun ker Tanu ne saamne daikha to usko bhi ek jeweller ki dukan per Aayush khada dikh gaya uske saath ek ladki bhi thi. Lekin Tanu ko uska chehra dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Tanu: Huh? Ye kon hai? Sab yanhi per ruko main ek minute mein daikh ker ati hu.

Aayush ko kisi Ladki ke saath daikh ker Tanu ke khurafati dimag mein shaitani khayal ane lage aur wo chupke se shop ke paas chale gayi.


Lekin usko ab bhi Ladki ka chehra dikhayi nahi de raha tha kyu ke wo dusri taraf daikh rahi thi to wo aur bhi glass door ke paas ho gayi.

*Woooosh*

Tanu ka focus ladki ki taraf tha usne Aayus ki taraf dhayan he nahi diya. Aayush shop se baahir he aa raha tha ke usko darwaze per he Tanu khadi dikh gayi. Usko daikh Aayush ke chehre ke rang badalne shuru ho gaye.

“Aayush ab aage chale kya?”

Tanu: Huh, Nandini Di?

Nadani: Huh, Ta- *Scream* Aghhhh....!

Aayush ne kuch bhi baat hone se pehle he Nandini ke haath ko pakad liya aur uske saath udhar se bhaagne laga. Tanu unko ek pal ke liye hairani se khadi daikhti rahi aur kuch samajh ate he wo bhi unke peeche bhaagne lagi.

Tanu: Rukooo....!

Lekin Aayush bina ruke Nandini ka haath pakad ker bhaagta raha.

Nandini (Running): Aayush, Main ne heels pehni huwi hai! Main aur nahi bhaag sak...Woahhh....!

Aayush ne bina uski baat puri huwe he usko banhon mein utha liya aur bhaagne laga. Udhar sab he unko daikh rahe the aur kuch ladkiyan to Nandini se jealous bhi ho rahi thi.

Nandini ke gaal sharam se laal hone lage aur usne apna chehara Aayush ki chhati mein chupa liya.

Aayush (Mumbling): Bhaagna ho ga Bhaagna ho ga Bhaagna ho ga...!

Aayush lagatar badbada raha tha aur Tanu se dur bhaagte huwe Mall se baahir nikal gaya.

*Panting*

Tanu thoda he bhaagne ke baad thak gayi aur udhar he ek bench per baith gayi.

Tanu (Panting): Raat ko ana to ghar he hai na udhar daikh lu gi...!

Tanu ne kuch der udhar baith ker saans li aur dobara apni friends ke paas chale gayi.


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Singh Enterprises
Mumbai ~ 7:02 PM

Kunal uske office mein baitha huwa tha. Uske paas he Sonia, Divya aur iska bhi baithi huwi thi aur Kunal files ko daikh raha tha.

Kunal: Last delivery ke baad se hamare paas eternapower ki expectations se bhi zyada request aye hai! Lekin hamari production uske saath keep up nahi ker pa rahi...We’re way behind schedule.

Sonia: Yeah, I’ve been keeping tabs on it too! Lekin Zoe se baat huwi hai aur ab uske saath hum kaam ker rahe hai. We're working on setting up a new production machine. That should solve the bottleneck.

Ishika: Hum ne Association se bhi request ki hai aur potential magic engineers ko dhundhne ke liye aur response positive hai! Zoe khud sab ke interview le ker new hiring start ker rahi hai.

Kunal: Aur machine kab tak taiyar ho gi?

Sonia: Hum sirf kuch necessary material ka wait ker rahe hai! They’re coming in a shipment. Once they’re here, Zoe can finish everything.

Kunal: How long are we talking?

Sonia: Shipment should arrive by the end of the week, assuming there are no delays.

Kunal (Nod): Do we have enough inventory to handle current orders until then?

Sonia: It’s tight, I’ve already told the team to focus on the most urgent requests! We can manage for now.

Kunal: Okay. Let’s make sure we’re tracking that shipment closely! If it’s delayed, we need to know immediately.

Sonia (Nod): Divya is Already on it. She'll update you as soon as she hears anything. Divya khud he Shipment check karne bhi ja rahi hai.

Kunal: Hmm, Divya ka akele check karne jana safe nahi ho ga! Ishika, Rahul se baat ker ke usko saath jaane ke liye keh dena.

Ishika (Nod): Okay...!

Kunal: Huh, Dinner?

Kunal ne meeting ko khatam karte huwe rest ke liye sab se pucha.

*Ring*

Ishika: Excuse me...!

Ishika ke phone per call ayi to Ishika phone utha ker daikhne lagi. Call Tanu ki thi.

Ishika (OnCall): Hello...!

Tanu: Ishika Di, Ap yanha aa sakti ho kya?

Ishika: Yanha kanha? Abhi kanha per ho tum?

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Christmas Party
Mumbai ~ 9:09 PM

*Screech*

*Horn*

Ishika ne footpath ke paas car ko rok ker baahir daikha to usko footpath per he Tanu uski friends ke saath baithi dikhayi di. Lekin uski halat daikh ker Ishika khush nahi thi.


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“E *hiccup* E-Eshu Di”

Tanu ko uthate huwe uski friends usko Ishika ki car ke paas le ayi. Ishika bhi car se baahir nikal ayi aur un sab ki taraf gusse se daikhne lagi.


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Ishika: Kya huwa hai?

Jiya: Sorry Di, Tanu ne to resist kiya tha! Lekin hum Tanu ko drink karne ke liye force kiya to usne bhi drink ker li. Lekin hamay bilkul bhi idea nahi tha ke Tanu itni Light drinker hai...Sorry!

Tanu (Giggling): Eshu Di, Partyyyy karte hai na...!

Tanu ne Ishika ke galle lagte huwe kaha unke paas he ek building ke andar christmas party ho rahi thi aur wo sab bhi wanhi ayi thi. Lekin Tanu ke nashe mein doobne ke baad un sabhi ko baahir ana per gaya.

Tanu: Chaloooo....! Huh?

Tanu ek baar dobara party karne ke liye bhaagne lagi to usko kisi ne pakad liya. Ishika ne saamne daikha to wo Akansha thi.

Ishika: Tum yanha?

Akansha: Rahul ne contact kiya tha! Abhi Rahul Kunal ke saath hai to usne ap ke saath ghar jaane tak rehne liye mujhe kaha hai.

Ishika ko bhi Players ki existence ke baare mein idea ho gaya tha aur Kunal ne usko Aarav ki guild se introduce bhi karwa diya huwa tha.

Ishika: Thank You, Main drive ker rahi hu! Tum kya Tanu ke saath backseat per baith sakti ho?

Akansha (Nod): Sure...!

Ishika: Thank You, Ab tum sab bhi time per he ghar chali jao...!

Ishika ne Tanu ki friends se kaha to wo sab bhi udhar se bhaag gayi. Akansha ne Tanu ko car mein baithaya aur khud bhi uske saath backseat per he baith gayi. Ishika driving seat per baith ker drive karne lagi.

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Veer's House
Mumbai ~ 11:26 PM

*Beep-Beep*

Ishika ne car ko parking mein laga diya aur baahir aa gayi. Akansha bhi Tanu ko le ker baahir he khadi huwi thi. Ishika ne aage badh ker Tanu ko Akansha se pakad liya.

Ishika: Raat bohat ho gayi hai to tum ruk rahi ho na?

Akansha: Actually mujhe training karni hai aur abhi time nahi hai! Tarun bhi pickup karne ke liye aa he raha hai to issue nahi hai.

Ishika: Okay, Take Care, Goodnight....!

Akansha udhar se he baahir chale gayi aur Ishika Tanu ko pakad ker chupke se ghar ke andar chale gayi. Ishika kisi ki bhi nazron mein aye bina usko uske kamre mein le gayi.


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Tanu (Yell): Aye Aaravvvvvvv...!

Ishika (Stunned): Tanu, Chilla kyu rahi hai?

Ishika ne Tanu ke muh per haath rakha aur usko le ker jaldi se uske kamre ke paas pohanch gayi aur darwaza kholne lagi. Tanu udhar khadi usko daikhne lagi.

Tanu: Ye hum kyu chup rahe hai? Chhupana to uss akdu ko chahiye hai. Itna bhau kyu khata hai wo?


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*Click*

Ishika: Ab ye to usko he pata ho ga! Lekin abhi ke liye pure ghar ko ye pata lagne se pehle ke unki beti kya pee ker ayi hai hamay andar chalna chahiye hai.

Ishika ne Tanu ka haath pakda aur usko kamre ke andar le gayi. Tanu ko udhar baitha ker Ishika ne uske wardrobe se uska pajama nikala aur usko change karwa ker dobara baitha diya.

Tanu: Ishika Di, Usko kyu pata nahi lagta ke Veer bhayia ki tarha ab main usko khona nahi chahati hu? Uske har baar aise bina bataye jaane per mujhe dar lagta hai ke kanhi wo bhi Veer bhayia ki tarha he... *Sob* Kya sirf main he usko bhai kehti hu? Uske liye main ab bhi ek stranger he hu na? Ek baar bata bhi nahi sakta hai ke wo safe hai na!?


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Uski baate sun ker Ishika bhi ek pal ke liye hairan ho gayi. Tanu aise kabhi bhi uske fears ko kisi ke saath bhi discuss nahi karti thi unke sach ho jaane ke dar se.

Lekin nashe ki halat mein uske muh se uske andar ki baate baahir aa rahi thi. Ishika ne uski taraf muskurate huwe daikha aur uske sar per pyaar se haath faira diya.


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Ishika: Usne promise kiya hai na? Ab tumhe tumhare secret santa per vishwas rakhna chahiye hai. Tumhare sabhi savalon ka jawab tumhe tumhara Santa he de ga. Mwah! Goodnight...!

Ishika ne uske mathe per kiss ki aur usko udhar laita ker khud bhi kamre se baahir chale gayi aur udhar se apne kamre mein chale gayi.

*Woof*

Fluffy aa ker Tanu ke saath lait gaya aur Tanu ne usko hug ker liya. Uske andar se Tanu ko Aarav mehsoos ho raha tha.


Tanu (Mumbling): M-Main ap se baaat nahi karung-


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Veer's House
Tanu's Room ~ 7:08 AM

*Tring-Tring*

“Ughhh”

Subha ke 7 baje Alarm ki awaaz se Tanu ki neend khul gayi. Alarm pichle 8 minute se lagatar baj raha tha. Lekin Tanu ke sar ka dard usko uthne he nahi de raha tha. Lekin Alarm ki awaaz uske sar per hathodon ki tarha baj rahi thi.

*Groan*

Tanu Alarm band ker ke uth ker baith gayi aur usne apna sar pakad liya. Usko bilkul bhi yaad nahi tha ke wo yanha tak kaise ayi hai. Usko sirf Raat drink tak ka yaad aa raha tha.

Tanu (Yawn): Huhhhhh, Lagta hai ye sar phat he jaye gaaaaaaa ~ *Scream*

*Wooof*

Tanu ekdum se chillate huwe uth gayi aur uske saath he fluffy bhi uth ker bhaag gaya. Usne bed per daikha to udhar ek almost real dikhne wala ek red dragon rakha huwa tha.

Lekin wo sirf ek toy he tha. Lekin usko daraya tha uske saamne Santa ka dress pehan ker khade huwe insaan ne...!

Tanu (Panting): Kon ho tum?

*Gulp*

“Main hu”

Tanu uss Santa ki awaaz ko ek pal mein he pehchan gayi aur usne uski nakali beard ko pakad liya aur usko thapar lagane lagi.

Tanu: Aayush ke bache, Ye badla le rahe ho kya tum? Laga he tha ke tumhare mann me aisi koi to khurafat chal he rahi ho gi.

Santa ki dress mein uske saamne Aayush he khada huwa tha. Tanu ne uske muh se beard ko pakad ker nikal diya.

Tanu: Ye sab kya hai? Revenge le rahe ho kya?

Aayush: Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai! Kal tumhara muh ban gaya tha na? Nandini se pucha ke kya karna chahiye hai to usne kaha ke tumhe christmas ka ek surprise gift de du to tum khush ho jao gi. ye kal pasand ker ke laya hu aur kuch bhi khurafat nahi hai.

Tanu (Sigh): Huh, Lekin toy lana tha to koi teddy le ker ate na! Ye kya chipkali si la ker de di hai?

Aayush: Huh? Racist...!

Tanu: Kya?

Aayush: Kuch bhi nahi...!

Tanu (Sigh): Thanks....Kam se kam tumhe yaad to tha na...!

Aayush: Ab main jau?

Tanu: *Nod*

Tanu ki permission milte he Aayush udhar se bhaag gaya. Uske jaane ke baad Tanu ne uske Red dragon ko side table per rakh diya aur fresh hone ke liye bathroom jaane he lagi thi ke kuch daikh ker wo ruk gayi.

Tanu: Ye kya hai?

Ek canvas uske kamre mein rakhi huwi thi. Lekin usko gift paper se wrap kiya huwa tha. Lekin Tanu ne canvas per lage tag ko fauran pehchan liya. Ye uske he art school ka custom canvas tha.

Tanu: Shit...Kal to principal aa rahi the...!

Tanu ne jaldi se uska phone uthaya to uske phone per kal uski art school ki principal ki calls aur messages aye huwe the. Tanu ne uske new message ko open ker liya.

[Tanu, I told your mother before coming over, but you still weren’t home. I waited for a while, but when you didn’t show up, I gave the canvas to your mother to leave in your room.

It’s a canvas your brother asked me to give you for Christmas. Honestly, I wouldn’t have agreed to help if I hadn’t seen the love he put into that portrait.

Last month, he came to our school to learn how to make portraits. He spent a whole week practicing, but it only took him one day to figure it out. The rest of the week, he was just perfecting the one he made for you.

He made me promise to keep it a secret until Christmas. So, of course, I had to follow through.

But, for making me wait so long, you’re getting two hours of detention. Come to school tomorrow.

Oh, and Merry Christmas!]

Tanu (Tearful): Huh?

Principal ke message ko padh ker Tanu ki bhi aankhon mein aansu aa gaye. Aarav usko bhoola nahi tha aur usne uske liye pehle se gift ready kiya huwa tha.

Tanu seedhe bhaag ker canvas ko utha liya aur bed per rakh ker usko kholne lagi. Usne gift paper ko dhayan se utaar diya aur portrait ko daikhne lagi.


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Portrait mein Aarav ne khud ko Tanu ko aur Veer ko draw kiya tha. Tanu ki har painting mein sirf ab tak Veer he tha. Lekin Aarav ne khud ko unke beech add ker diya tha. Ye daikh Tanu ke chehre per muskurahat aur aankhon mein aansu aa gaye.

Tanu (Sniff): Merry Christmas...!
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2nd extra update ke liye itna he, Ye almost 4K words ka ho gaya hai :redface: Lekin umeed karta hu ke ap ko ye extra update bhi pasand aya ho ga aur confirm nahi karunga Lekin shayar New Year per bhi ek extra update aya ga. In the end, Belated.

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Ye to 1 poora update tha or bht he maje ka bitha or arav ka tanu ko gift bht acha lga or ab wo bhi tano ko behn man rha hai gud
 
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That’s exactly why I started this thread! These EXTRA updates are mostly filler, but they help make the story’s foundation stronger.

There are going to be more updates like this in the future, so stay tuned :approve:


just wait a bit longer! I’m going to cover that part soon too :blush1:

Wait, did I forget to include you in the announcement? I posted it last night, so you should’ve gotten a notification too :hmm2:
I didn't got any notification 😕. Koi na i have
Habit of checking your threads so i get it in that way
 

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EXTRA UPDATE 3 ~
(HAPPY NEW YEAR)



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South Korea
31st December, 2011 ~ 8:45 PM

*Yawn*

Raat ke 9 bajne ko the. Yoo-Jung uske haath mein ek shopper ko pakad ker chal rahi thi. Uske kandhe per uska bow aur uske dusre kandhe per uske ek arrows ka bag latka huwa tha.

December ka aakhiri din tha to thand bhi bohat he zyada thi aur havayen bhi chal rahi thi to uska bhi shareer thand se thoda kaanp raha tha. Yoo-Jung ne uske kadam tezi se aage badhane shuru ker diye.

*Sigh*

Yoo-Jung uske ghar ke paas pohanchne he wali thi ke usko dur se he uski Landlady ghar ke darwaze per he khadi dikh gayi. Usko daikh ker Yoo-Jung ne ek thakan se bhari huwi aah bhari aur uski taraf chal di.

“Yoo-Jung?”

Yoo-Jung ko daikhte he uski Landlady uske paas aa gayi. Yoo-Jung ne uski nazron ko uske saamne ate he jhuka liya aur chehre per ek jhooti muskurahat le ayi.

Yoo-Jung: Hap-

Landlady: Mujhe kuch bhi aur nahi bolna! Ye bata ke rent layi hai kya?

Uske saval per Yoo-Jung ne ek lambi saans li aur uske saamne jhuk ker bow karne lagi. Usko daikh ker Landlady bhi thodi naram per gayi.

Yoo-Jung: Ma’am, I’m really sorry! Lekin main jald he de dungi, thoda aur time de dijiye.

Landlady (Frustrated): Tch, Last time bhi ye he keh diya tha tum ne! Lekin ab ye last chance de rahi hu aur wo bhi sirf New Year ke liye aur tumhare uncle ek lambe samay tak hamare kirayedar the isiliye...!

Yoo-Jung: Thank You so much...!

Landlady: Ab ye Archery ko bhi chhod do! Ye tumhe zyada paise nahi kamane de gi aur na he tum kabhi aage badh sako gi.

Yoo-Jung: Thank You...!

Landlady ne uske purse ko neeche se uthaya aur udhar se chale gayi. Yoo-Jung uske udhar se jaane tak bow he karti rahi aur uske jaane ke baad uth ker khadi ho gayi aur ghar ki taraf mud gayi.

*Click*

“Main ghar aa gayi...!”

Yoo-Jung ne andar jaate huwe kaha aur darwaze ko band ker ke andar chale gayi. Lekin uske ghar ke andar bilkul andhera tha aur bohat he zyada thand bhi thi.

Yoo-Jung (Stunned): Yoo-ri?

Yoo-Jung ne uske ghar ke andar ate he dhayan se daikha to usko ek kone mein Yoo-ri baithi huwi dikh gayi. Yoo-ri ne ek patali si blanket ko lapaita huwa tha aur apne ghutnon ko gale lagaye bilkul sikud ker udhar baithi huwi thi.

Yoo-Jung: Yoo-ri, Yanha aise thand mein kyu baithi huwi ho?

Yoo-Jung uske paas chale gayi aur usne ek haath Yoo-ri ke sar per rakh ker check kiya to uska sar bilkul thanda ho gaya tha aur chehra bhi thand se laal ho gaya tha. Yoo-ri ko body bhi bohat he weak thi aur uske gaal bhi pichke huwe the.

Yoo-ri: Electric and gas is cutoff...! Unhen main ne rokna bhi chaha tha. Lekin bill na dene ke kaaran unhone aur time nahi diya... Sorry...!

Yoo-Jung (Sigh): Huh, Ab tum kyu sorry keh rahi ho? Usmein tumhari kya galti hai?

Yoo-ri (Down): Meri he to galti hai sab! Ek to main itni weak hu aur na he Qi use ker sakti hu. Uske upar se main bimar bhi he to ap ki salary sirf meri medicine per he lag jaati hai...Unni, Ap kyu mujhe akel-

Yoo-Jung: Again? Ab mujhe kitni baar aur kehna ho ga ke main kanhi bhi nahi ja rahi hu! Ab mera aur mood kharab na karna aur main ye soup le ker ayi hu. Ye peete hai...!

Yoo-Jung ne uske haath mein pakade huwe bag se ek soup ka box nikala aur usko ek bowl ke andar daal diya. Lekin raaste mein ate huwe soup thanda ho gaya tha.

Yoo-ri: Ye to thanda ho gaya hai! Gas bhi band ker di haii, Ab kya kare?

Yoo-Jung ne Yoo-ri se kuch bhi nahi kaha aur bowl ko utha ker dono hathon se pakad liya. Yoo-ri bhi usko dhayan se daikhne lagi. Yoo-Jung uski fire qi per focus karne lagi aur uske haath heat hone lage.

Uske haatho mein pakda soup ka bowl sirf kuch he seconds ke andar he garam ho gaya. Ye daikh ker Yoo-ri khush ho ker muskurane lagi.

Yoo-Jung (Smile): Ab to theek hai na?

Yoo-ri (Nod): Yes...!

Yoo-Jung aur Yoo-ri baith ker souo peene lagi aur enjoy karne lagi. Avinash ne unhen uske ek trusted Aadmi ke paas chhod diya tha. Yoo-Jung aur Yoo-ri dono ko usne uski betiyon ki tarha he pyaar kiya tha.

Lekin uski bhi umar ho gayi thi aur ek saal pehle uski bhi death ho gayi thi. Uske baad se Yoo-Jung ne he sab kuch sambhal liya tha. Avinash bhi unse sirf ek baar he mila tha to wo uske paas bhi nahi ja sakti thi.

Avinash ne Yoo-Jung ko basic bata ker usko Fire clan ki ek book de di thi. Yoo-Jung uski Qi core ko train karne ke liye taiyar he nahi thi kyu ke Yoo-ri ki weak body ke kaaran uske paas Qi core nahi tha.

Yoo-Jung usko khud se inferior feel nahi karwana chahati thi. Lekin jab usko ehsaas huwa ke usko ab khud ko aur Yoo-ri ko protect karne ke liye Strong hona ho ga to usne bhi training shuru ker di thi.

Yoo-ri: Unni, tumhare archery class mein koi hai jo tumhe pasand ho?

*Cough ~ Cough*

Yoo-ri ke achanak saval se Yoo-Jung bhi chaunk gayi aur khansane lagi.

Yoo-Jung (Coughing): Ye kya bol rahi ho? Main ek assistant archery instructor hu aur ye mera kaam hai. Udhar main paise kamane ke liye jaati hu kisi se date ke liye nahi...!

Yoo-ri (Frowns): Unni kitni boring ho rahi ho ap? Ye he to din hai ladko ko date karne ka aur unse pyaar mein doobne ka aur...Shaadi? *Grin*

Yoo-Jung (Sigh): Ye ladki ab dobara khawabo ki duniyan mein ghoomne chale gayi...!

Yoo-Jung ne kaha aur muskurane lagi. Uske baad usne bartanon ko uthaya aur unhen rakhne ke baad Yoo-ri ke saath uski blanket mein ghus gayi.

Ab raat ke 11 baj gaye the aur thand bhi badh gayi thi. Yoo-Jung uski body ko heat karne lagi aur apne saath Yoo-ri ko bhi warm karne lagi. Yoo-ri bhi uske saath gale lag ker baith gayi.

Yoo-Jung: Avinash Ahjussi bata rahe the ke unke bhi twins kid hai! Ek ladki aur ek usse bhi bada ladka bhi hai...!

Yoo-Jung: Phir kya?

Yoo-ri (Smile): Maybe you could...You know? Kuchi Kuchi...!

Yoo-Jung: Seriously? Kya pura din ye sab he chalta hai tumhare khurafati dimagh ke andar?

Yoo-ri (Giggling): Hehehehe, Main to sirf mazak he ker rahi thi! But who knows, Maybe you could get to know his son. You know, fall in love, get married…?

Yoo-Jung: Stop right there... Girl, You're impossible...!

Yoo-Jung ne kehte huwe Yoo-ri ke sar ko halka sa dhakka diya aur dono hansne lagi.

*Boom*

*Suuuuu*

*Pop*

*Crackle*

“Happy New Year”

Raat ke 12 baj gaye the aur unhen unke kamre ki khidki se dur kanhi per firework hoti dikhayi de rahi thi.

Yoo-ri: Unni, Jaldi se New Year resolution ke baare mein soch lete hai...!

Yoo-ri keh ker uski aankhe band ker ke uske new year resolution ke baare mein wish karne lagi aur Yoo-Jung usko daikh ker muskurate huwe firework ki taraf daikhne lagi.

Yoo-Jung: [This year, I have to get stronger! Strong enough to keep Yoo-ri safe... and to protect both of us from anything. I just have to do it...!]

Yoo-Jung ne uske New Year resolution ke baare mein socha aur uski nazar unke room mein rakhi huwi Avinash ki di Fire Qi ki training ke book per chale gayi.

Yoo-Jung (Smile): [Avinash ke beta...! Huh, Uski bhi to ek choti behan hai na? Kya wo bhi khud ko strong ker raha ho ga apni behan ko protect karne ke liye? Shayad, Uske baad hum sach mein... *Smile* Yoo-ri ka mere upar ab galat asar per raha hai... Lekin kya naam tha uska?... Unghhh... Haan... Aarav Arya]


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[And that's it for our New Year special extra update! Wishing you all a super happy belated New Year! If you want, feel free to share your New Year’s resolution with everyone!]
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EXTRA UPDATE 3 ~
(HAPPY NEW YEAR)



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31st December, 2011 ~ 8:45 PM

*Yawn*

Raat ke 9 bajne ko the. Yoo-Jung uske haath mein ek shopper ko pakad ker chal rahi thi. Uske kandhe per uska bow aur uske dusre kandhe per uske ek arrows ka bag latka huwa tha.

December ka aakhiri din tha to thand bhi bohat he zyada thi aur havayen bhi chal rahi thi to uska bhi shareer thand se thoda kaanp raha tha. Yoo-Jung ne uske kadam tezi se aage badhane shuru ker diye.

*Sigh*

Yoo-Jung uske ghar ke paas pohanchne he wali thi ke usko dur se he uski Landlady ghar ke darwaze per he khadi dikh gayi. Usko daikh ker Yoo-Jung ne ek thakan se bhari huwi aah bhari aur uski taraf chal di.

“Yoo-Jung?”

Yoo-Jung ko daikhte he uski Landlady uske paas aa gayi. Yoo-Jung ne uski nazron ko uske saamne ate he jhuka liya aur chehre per ek jhooti muskurahat le ayi.

Yoo-Jung: Hap-

Landlady: Mujhe kuch bhi aur nahi bolna! Ye bata ke rent layi hai kya?

Uske saval per Yoo-Jung ne ek lambi saans li aur uske saamne jhuk ker bow karne lagi. Usko daikh ker Landlady bhi thodi naram per gayi.

Yoo-Jung: Ma’am, I’m really sorry! Lekin main jald he de dungi, thoda aur time de dijiye.

Landlady (Frustrated): Tch, Last time bhi ye he keh diya tha tum ne! Lekin ab ye last chance de rahi hu aur wo bhi sirf New Year ke liye aur tumhare uncle ek lambe samay tak hamare kirayedar the isiliye...!

Yoo-Jung: Thank You so much...!

Landlady: Ab ye Archery ko bhi chhod do! Ye tumhe zyada paise nahi kamane de gi aur na he tum kabhi aage badh sako gi.

Yoo-Jung: Thank You...!

Landlady ne uske purse ko neeche se uthaya aur udhar se chale gayi. Yoo-Jung uske udhar se jaane tak bow he karti rahi aur uske jaane ke baad uth ker khadi ho gayi aur ghar ki taraf mud gayi.

*Click*

“Main ghar aa gayi...!”

Yoo-Jung ne andar jaate huwe kaha aur darwaze ko band ker ke andar chale gayi. Lekin uske ghar ke andar bilkul andhera tha aur bohat he zyada thand bhi thi.

Yoo-Jung (Stunned): Yoo-ri?

Yoo-Jung ne uske ghar ke andar ate he dhayan se daikha to usko ek kone mein Yoo-ri baithi huwi dikh gayi. Yoo-ri ne ek patali si blanket ko lapaita huwa tha aur apne ghutnon ko gale lagaye bilkul sikud ker udhar baithi huwi thi.

Yoo-Jung: Yoo-ri, Yanha aise thand mein kyu baithi huwi ho?

Yoo-Jung uske paas chale gayi aur usne ek haath Yoo-ri ke sar per rakh ker check kiya to uska sar bilkul thanda ho gaya tha aur chehra bhi thand se laal ho gaya tha. Yoo-ri ko body bhi bohat he weak thi aur uske gaal bhi pichke huwe the.

Yoo-ri: Electric and gas is cutoff...! Unhen main ne rokna bhi chaha tha. Lekin bill na dene ke kaaran unhone aur time nahi diya... Sorry...!

Yoo-Jung (Sigh): Huh, Ab tum kyu sorry keh rahi ho? Usmein tumhari kya galti hai?

Yoo-ri (Down): Meri he to galti hai sab! Ek to main itni weak hu aur na he Qi use ker sakti hu. Uske upar se main bimar bhi he to ap ki salary sirf meri medicine per he lag jaati hai...Unni, Ap kyu mujhe akel-

Yoo-Jung: Again? Ab mujhe kitni baar aur kehna ho ga ke main kanhi bhi nahi ja rahi hu! Ab mera aur mood kharab na karna aur main ye soup le ker ayi hu. Ye peete hai...!

Yoo-Jung ne uske haath mein pakade huwe bag se ek soup ka box nikala aur usko ek bowl ke andar daal diya. Lekin raaste mein ate huwe soup thanda ho gaya tha.

Yoo-ri: Ye to thanda ho gaya hai! Gas bhi band ker di haii, Ab kya kare?

Yoo-Jung ne Yoo-ri se kuch bhi nahi kaha aur bowl ko utha ker dono hathon se pakad liya. Yoo-ri bhi usko dhayan se daikhne lagi. Yoo-Jung uski fire qi per focus karne lagi aur uske haath heat hone lage.

Uske haatho mein pakda soup ka bowl sirf kuch he seconds ke andar he garam ho gaya. Ye daikh ker Yoo-ri khush ho ker muskurane lagi.

Yoo-Jung (Smile): Ab to theek hai na?

Yoo-ri (Nod): Yes...!

Yoo-Jung aur Yoo-ri baith ker souo peene lagi aur enjoy karne lagi. Avinash ne unhen uske ek trusted Aadmi ke paas chhod diya tha. Yoo-Jung aur Yoo-ri dono ko usne uski betiyon ki tarha he pyaar kiya tha.

Lekin uski bhi umar ho gayi thi aur ek saal pehle uski bhi death ho gayi thi. Uske baad se Yoo-Jung ne he sab kuch sambhal liya tha. Avinash bhi unse sirf ek baar he mila tha to wo uske paas bhi nahi ja sakti thi.

Avinash ne Yoo-Jung ko basic bata ker usko Fire clan ki ek book de di thi. Yoo-Jung uski Qi core ko train karne ke liye taiyar he nahi thi kyu ke Yoo-ri ki weak body ke kaaran uske paas Qi core nahi tha.

Yoo-Jung usko khud se inferior feel nahi karwana chahati thi. Lekin jab usko ehsaas huwa ke usko ab khud ko aur Yoo-ri ko protect karne ke liye Strong hona ho ga to usne bhi training shuru ker di thi.

Yoo-ri: Unni, tumhare archery class mein koi hai jo tumhe pasand ho?

*Cough ~ Cough*

Yoo-ri ke achanak saval se Yoo-Jung bhi chaunk gayi aur khansane lagi.

Yoo-Jung (Coughing): Ye kya bol rahi ho? Main ek assistant archery instructor hu aur ye mera kaam hai. Udhar main paise kamane ke liye jaati hu kisi se date ke liye nahi...!

Yoo-ri (Frowns): Unni kitni boring ho rahi ho ap? Ye he to din hai ladko ko date karne ka aur unse pyaar mein doobne ka aur...Shaadi? *Grin*

Yoo-Jung (Sigh): Ye ladki ab dobara khawabo ki duniyan mein ghoomne chale gayi...!

Yoo-Jung ne kaha aur muskurane lagi. Uske baad usne bartanon ko uthaya aur unhen rakhne ke baad Yoo-ri ke saath uski blanket mein ghus gayi.

Ab raat ke 11 baj gaye the aur thand bhi badh gayi thi. Yoo-Jung uski body ko heat karne lagi aur apne saath Yoo-ri ko bhi warm karne lagi. Yoo-ri bhi uske saath gale lag ker baith gayi.

Yoo-Jung: Avinash Ahjussi bata rahe the ke unke bhi twins kid hai! Ek ladki aur ek usse bhi bada ladka bhi hai...!

Yoo-Jung: Phir kya?

Yoo-ri (Smile): Maybe you could...You know? Kuchi Kuchi...!

Yoo-Jung: Seriously? Kya pura din ye sab he chalta hai tumhare khurafati dimagh ke andar?

Yoo-ri (Giggling): Hehehehe, Main to sirf mazak he ker rahi thi! But who knows, Maybe you could get to know his son. You know, fall in love, get married…?

Yoo-Jung: Stop right there... Girl, You're impossible...!

Yoo-Jung ne kehte huwe Yoo-ri ke sar ko halka sa dhakka diya aur dono hansne lagi.

*Boom*

*Suuuuu*

*Pop*

*Crackle*

“Happy New Year”

Raat ke 12 baj gaye the aur unhen unke kamre ki khidki se dur kanhi per firework hoti dikhayi de rahi thi.

Yoo-ri: Unni, Jaldi se New Year resolution ke baare mein soch lete hai...!

Yoo-ri keh ker uski aankhe band ker ke uske new year resolution ke baare mein wish karne lagi aur Yoo-Jung usko daikh ker muskurate huwe firework ki taraf daikhne lagi.

Yoo-Jung: [This year, I have to get stronger! Strong enough to keep Yoo-ri safe... and to protect both of us from anything. I just have to do it...!]

Yoo-Jung ne uske New Year resolution ke baare mein socha aur uski nazar unke room mein rakhi huwi Avinash ki di Fire Qi ki training ke book per chale gayi.

Yoo-Jung (Smile): [Avinash ke beta...! Huh, Uski bhi to ek choti behan hai na? Kya wo bhi khud ko strong ker raha ho ga apni behan ko protect karne ke liye? Shayad, Uske baad hum sach mein... *Smile* Yoo-ri ka mere upar ab galat asar per raha hai... Lekin kya naam tha uska?... Unghhh... Haan... Aarav Arya]


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[And that's it for our New Year special extra update! Wishing you all a super happy belated New Year! If you want, feel free to share your New Year’s resolution with everyone!]
Another emotional scene, this time from Yoo-Jung's life, her struggles and love for her sister, Yoo-ri. Interesting, to know how the first seeds of liking for Aarav were sowed in Yoo-Jung's mind. Unfortunately, both lost their twin sisters whom they were trying to protect. Urvi revival is a different story, I don't consider her to be the same old Urvi.
 
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