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Very good & positive updateUpdate 08
Fast fwd details of 2 months
Next Day subha Komal jaagti hy
Uski tabet bilkul down thi
Wo nashta krny jati hy nashta bhi ne krti
Maa usko dek k pochti k kya hoa.
Noor Gul. Beta kya mo kyu utra utra hy nashta bhi ne krhi ho
K. Mama pata ne tabet ajeeb si horhi hy
Noor gul doc ghar bola leti hy
Doctor chk up krta hy
Wo bolta hy nothing serious
Bachy aaj kal zada sochty hn study ko lekr islie chaie esa hoa ho
Me weakness k lie kuch medicine dehra ho
1 week ka course hy.
Komal rest krny apne room me ajati hy
Or yehi dubara bar bar sochti rehti hy k kal raat ese dream kese agaie
Yw impossible hy
Me yw nahi krskti
Wo 2 din proper rest krti hy
Next week tak bilkul fit thi as per roteen
Wo study ko bhi full time deti hy
Usko yaad ata hy emran ki story likhni thi
Wo us pr bhi kaam krti hy
Wo Emran ko 2 week me story complete krdeeti hy or send krdeti hy.
Dosri side Jibran study or Gym Training dono pr equal focus deraha tha.
Uska Gym trainer usko kuch guide line deta hy
Wo strictly mana krta hy no masturbations or agar girlfriend hy to no sex, ek baar competition win krlo dekhna larki or anti khud approach krnegy phr krlena mazay.
Jibran srf Yes sir bolta or apni training continue krta hy.
Finally exams ka week nazdeek tha.
Abid Khan dono bacho se pochta hy k tyaari kesi jarhi hy
Dono acha response dety hn.
2 weeks exams chalty hn.
Exams bhi complete hojaty hn.
After exams Abid Khan jibran ko office lekr jata hy
Abid Khan normally Jibran ko kabi kabhi factory sath lejaya krta tha
At lunch.
Abid Khan. Beta kya program hy ab agay
J.. BABA abhi results any me to time hy
Mere kafi class mates foreign study k lie jarhy hn
Ap btaie me kya kro.
A. Beta tum btao tumhara kya mood hy.
J. Baba mera to dil hy me bhi jao.
A. Beta tumhre dada ne mje meri jawani me gao se city parhny bheja tha
Ab kafi saal guzar gaie hn or mere pas pese bhi hy me afford krksta ho
Tum jaha jana chaty ho waha ki details lo me agent se bat kr k tme bhjwa donga.
J. Baba or Komal?
A.. Beta wo to larki hy lekin tme mje bhejo ga to masla to hoga or pata hy abhi mere ek frnd ne apne betay k lie uska rishta manga hy.
J. Baba ap me final decision krna hy
But mera suggestion ye hy k at least usko graduation kr leny de abhi choti hy shadi k lie or hosky to usey bhi bhar bheje takey wo thori sharp ho.
(Ab baat bety ko kya pata wo jawan khoon ktni sharp or garam hy)
A.. Chlo tmhri maa se discuss krta ho phr sochty hn.
J. Baba business k kya update hy new contract mila koie new.
A.. Beta next month mje confirm hoga
Tmhri dada k relative to Hindustan mw rehty hn wahi mera ek cozn UAE me ek company me Manager bn gaya hy
Us se meri baat hoie hy
Wo mje confirm kry to hm sb UAE chle gy uski Famliy bhi any ki hy ghumny
Hum sb mil bhi lengy or new contract pr uski company se meeting bhi ho jiegi.
Or tmhra competition ki tyyaari kesi hy
J.. Baba 2 week baad competition hy
A.. Mje date bta dena me aonnga waha
J. Bilkul Baba but mama ko to ne btaya na aapne
A.. Ne ne tum trophy or medal lekr ao phr khud batana
J.. acha baba mje dada ki haweli ghumny jana hy
A.. Competition k bad chle jana 1 week k lie Komal ko bbi sath lejana me boldonga waha
Pehly aaj raat sari baten tmhri Maa se to kerlon phr bolegi baap beta khichri paka kr agaie.
J. Ok Baba
Same night at Abid Khan apni biwi Noor Gul se saari baten krta hy.
N.G. Hme ek baar rishta ka Komal ko btana chaie dekhty hn kya bolti hy
A.. Jab humne irada krlie hy k uski education k bad hi krnegy to q bachi ko tension dehri ho
N..thori masti to banti hy.
A. Ok
But study k lie usko bhar bhjna ka mood hy abhi kuch ne btana
Mje dekhny do Jibran ki country ka bolta mje waha ki pori detail leny do phr announced krnegy Komal ka.
N.. Jo Hukam sarkar.
Next Day morning in Breakfast.
All Family together
Gap Shap k bad Abid Khan apni beti ko bolta hy beta kuch days baad Jibran Haweli jarha hy tmhe jana hy usk sath.
Komal..ha baba q ne bilkul
A.. theek hy
N.G. Acha beta tme ek baat btani hy
Tmhara rishta manga hy tmhre baba k ek frnd ne ab tum btao kya irada hy to phr agay kuch bat kre hum ya mana krde
K. Suddenly shok thi
K.. Mamaa ma wo me.
A.. oh ho abhi choro in bato ko jao tm log ghum phr k ao phr is topic pr baat krengy.
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Next week
Kafi days baad balkay weeks baad dono
Emran or Zareen aaj online aie thy.
E.. oh miss india agae aap
Z. G janab agaie
E.. kese guzare itni din or raten
Z..bht kiss kya tume.
Z.. Exams kese hoe
E. Bht achy or tmhry
Z. Mere bhi.
E. Meny tmhri update chk ki tmne bht vip likha or sex ka to pocho hi ne bht zada hot scene thy.
Z.. thanks
Z. Competition ki tyaari kese hy
E. Bht tuf
f training hy or deit bhi.
Z.. Chlo best of luck kab hy competition
E. Next Saturday
Z. Jeet ke anaa.
E. Ha ha bilkul 1st ana hy mje pata hy.
Dono see of krty hn.
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Or bye krty hn.
Z. Or dear i will wait u on Saturday night.
Very good & positive updateUpdate 08
Fast fwd details of 2 months
Next Day subha Komal jaagti hy
Uski tabet bilkul down thi
Wo nashta krny jati hy nashta bhi ne krti
Maa usko dek k pochti k kya hoa.
Noor Gul. Beta kya mo kyu utra utra hy nashta bhi ne krhi ho
K. Mama pata ne tabet ajeeb si horhi hy
Noor gul doc ghar bola leti hy
Doctor chk up krta hy
Wo bolta hy nothing serious
Bachy aaj kal zada sochty hn study ko lekr islie chaie esa hoa ho
Me weakness k lie kuch medicine dehra ho
1 week ka course hy.
Komal rest krny apne room me ajati hy
Or yehi dubara bar bar sochti rehti hy k kal raat ese dream kese agaie
Yw impossible hy
Me yw nahi krskti
Wo 2 din proper rest krti hy
Next week tak bilkul fit thi as per roteen
Wo study ko bhi full time deti hy
Usko yaad ata hy emran ki story likhni thi
Wo us pr bhi kaam krti hy
Wo Emran ko 2 week me story complete krdeeti hy or send krdeti hy.
Dosri side Jibran study or Gym Training dono pr equal focus deraha tha.
Uska Gym trainer usko kuch guide line deta hy
Wo strictly mana krta hy no masturbations or agar girlfriend hy to no sex, ek baar competition win krlo dekhna larki or anti khud approach krnegy phr krlena mazay.
Jibran srf Yes sir bolta or apni training continue krta hy.
Finally exams ka week nazdeek tha.
Abid Khan dono bacho se pochta hy k tyaari kesi jarhi hy
Dono acha response dety hn.
2 weeks exams chalty hn.
Exams bhi complete hojaty hn.
After exams Abid Khan jibran ko office lekr jata hy
Abid Khan normally Jibran ko kabi kabhi factory sath lejaya krta tha
At lunch.
Abid Khan. Beta kya program hy ab agay
J.. BABA abhi results any me to time hy
Mere kafi class mates foreign study k lie jarhy hn
Ap btaie me kya kro.
A. Beta tum btao tumhara kya mood hy.
J. Baba mera to dil hy me bhi jao.
A. Beta tumhre dada ne mje meri jawani me gao se city parhny bheja tha
Ab kafi saal guzar gaie hn or mere pas pese bhi hy me afford krksta ho
Tum jaha jana chaty ho waha ki details lo me agent se bat kr k tme bhjwa donga.
J. Baba or Komal?
A.. Beta wo to larki hy lekin tme mje bhejo ga to masla to hoga or pata hy abhi mere ek frnd ne apne betay k lie uska rishta manga hy.
J. Baba ap me final decision krna hy
But mera suggestion ye hy k at least usko graduation kr leny de abhi choti hy shadi k lie or hosky to usey bhi bhar bheje takey wo thori sharp ho.
(Ab baat bety ko kya pata wo jawan khoon ktni sharp or garam hy)
A.. Chlo tmhri maa se discuss krta ho phr sochty hn.
J. Baba business k kya update hy new contract mila koie new.
A.. Beta next month mje confirm hoga
Tmhri dada k relative to Hindustan mw rehty hn wahi mera ek cozn UAE me ek company me Manager bn gaya hy
Us se meri baat hoie hy
Wo mje confirm kry to hm sb UAE chle gy uski Famliy bhi any ki hy ghumny
Hum sb mil bhi lengy or new contract pr uski company se meeting bhi ho jiegi.
Or tmhra competition ki tyyaari kesi hy
J.. Baba 2 week baad competition hy
A.. Mje date bta dena me aonnga waha
J. Bilkul Baba but mama ko to ne btaya na aapne
A.. Ne ne tum trophy or medal lekr ao phr khud batana
J.. acha baba mje dada ki haweli ghumny jana hy
A.. Competition k bad chle jana 1 week k lie Komal ko bbi sath lejana me boldonga waha
Pehly aaj raat sari baten tmhri Maa se to kerlon phr bolegi baap beta khichri paka kr agaie.
J. Ok Baba
Same night at Abid Khan apni biwi Noor Gul se saari baten krta hy.
N.G. Hme ek baar rishta ka Komal ko btana chaie dekhty hn kya bolti hy
A.. Jab humne irada krlie hy k uski education k bad hi krnegy to q bachi ko tension dehri ho
N..thori masti to banti hy.
A. Ok
But study k lie usko bhar bhjna ka mood hy abhi kuch ne btana
Mje dekhny do Jibran ki country ka bolta mje waha ki pori detail leny do phr announced krnegy Komal ka.
N.. Jo Hukam sarkar.
Next Day morning in Breakfast.
All Family together
Gap Shap k bad Abid Khan apni beti ko bolta hy beta kuch days baad Jibran Haweli jarha hy tmhe jana hy usk sath.
Komal..ha baba q ne bilkul
A.. theek hy
N.G. Acha beta tme ek baat btani hy
Tmhara rishta manga hy tmhre baba k ek frnd ne ab tum btao kya irada hy to phr agay kuch bat kre hum ya mana krde
K. Suddenly shok thi
K.. Mamaa ma wo me.
A.. oh ho abhi choro in bato ko jao tm log ghum phr k ao phr is topic pr baat krengy.
.
.
.
.
Next week
Kafi days baad balkay weeks baad dono
Emran or Zareen aaj online aie thy.
E.. oh miss india agae aap
Z. G janab agaie
E.. kese guzare itni din or raten
Z..bht kiss kya tume.
Z.. Exams kese hoe
E. Bht achy or tmhry
Z. Mere bhi.
E. Meny tmhri update chk ki tmne bht vip likha or sex ka to pocho hi ne bht zada hot scene thy.
Z.. thanks
Z. Competition ki tyaari kese hy
E. Bht tuf
f training hy or deit bhi.
Z.. Chlo best of luck kab hy competition
E. Next Saturday
Z. Jeet ke anaa.
E. Ha ha bilkul 1st ana hy mje pata hy.
Dono see of krty hn.
.
.
.
Or bye krty hn.
Z. Or dear i will wait u on Saturday night.
owesome good sence of writing i likt itUpdate 13. D
Reception pr Hotel staff.
Sir apse Inspector Sb ne milna hy aap wait kijie me unko bolata hon.
Thori der me Inspector ata hy.
Apna introduction deta hy me Inspector Hadi.
J. Sir me Jibran.
Boliey aapne yaad kia mje.
Insp.. Aap ki gaari pr kafi bullets shot k nishant thy so humne uski inspection ki to gaari me se 2 pistol or ek Machine Gun mili he or gari wo kis ki hy
Or aap k sath kya hoa rasty me usko report likhni hy.
J. Sir aap mje thori der de skty hn me apne Father se bat krlo.
Insp ka mood acha tha
Theek hn krlo.
Jibran Hotel ki land line se apne baap ko call krta hy.
J.. Hello Baba,
A.. Ha beta sb theek hy, Komal theek hy
Soie ne ab tak.
J.. Baba wo inspector sb aie hn unko statement leni hy humri or poch rhy gari me jo Guns thi wo kis ki hy, unko report likhni hy.
A.. Beta Inspector Sb ko bolo thora sa wait kre me khud unse baat krta ho.
Ab 05 star hotel tha Police waly ko bhi pata tha pese wali bachy hn islie politely hi deal kr rha tha.
Abid Khan apne ek frnd ko call krta hy.
Jo k IG tha name.. Maaz Shah.
A.. Salam, Shah G kese ho
IG. W.S
Yrw Abid na poch, phati pari hy.
Thori der pehly bas Operation Plan final hoa hy
Minster ko Briefing di hy.
Teams ko different locations pr depute kia hy.
Ab akr control room me betha ho.
A..Signals on krdiye kya
IG.. ne ne yaha control room me net open hy so whtsapp pr ya phr wireless pr teams se contact me ho.
A.. hoa kya hy ye sb.
IG..yrw protocols hn smjha kr ek baar sb solve hojie phr btao ga.
Abhi tak main roads to clear krdiey hn
But chotay areas or buildings me kuch log weapons k sat hn.
IG. Wese is time kese yaad krlia.
A. Pehly to thanks yrw is time to ne call pick krli.
IG. Ne ne koie bat ne wakie busy tha abhi free hoa to call pick krlie wrna shied 2 din baad hi call back krta.
A. Yrw ek maslay me phas gaya ho
Or bht preshan ho.
IG. Bol Bhai tera bhai hy na. Or bachy ghar agaie ya haweli pr hy.
Pata laga wo log Gao me thy (Village)
A.. Bhai unhi ka masla hy
Wo wapsi arhy thy or yahi phas gaie hn.
Hotel ka name btata hy
Rasty me un pr attack hogaya tha.
Unho ne jese tere apni jan bachaie hy or Marriott Hotel me phnch gaie hy.
Waha tmhra koie Inspector agaya hy k guns kaha se laie kya hoa aap k sath statement likhwany phnch gaya hy.
Baxhy kaha deal kr paie gy ye matters.
IG. Ruk line pr reh.
IG to his assistant
Pata kro is Hotel me konsi team hy or meri wireless pr Inspector Bilal se baat krwao.
Hotel me is time
Bilal, Jibran or Hotel Manager bethy thy or chaie pee rhy thy.
Itni me bahr se ek constable bhagta hoa tha
Bilal Sb, IG Sir hy line pr.
Bilal khara hojata hy
Yes Sir.
IG. Jibran kaha hy Bilal.
Bilal sir sath hy
IG.. Meri bat krwao
Ab Wireless pr baat loudspeaker pr hi hoti wo normal phone ki tara to hota ne.
Bilal or manager bi sb sunty hn
Dosri side IG k sath Abid call tha jo sari baten sun raha tha.
IG. Jibran beta IG Maaz Shah bat krha ho tmhre Baba ka frnd. Kese ho.
J. G uncle theek bo.
IG. Beta preshan ne hona bilkul aram se rho
Koie bbi masla ho Inspector Bilal ko bolna wo krdega tumhra kaam.
Kal raat ko tmhre Baba k sath hi aonga Dinner hotel me sath krengy.
J. G g uncle koie issue ne.
IG. Beta bilal ko dedo.
IG.. Bilal bacho ka dehan rkhna or kal me aonga jab report likhna.
B.. G Sir.
Call ended.
A. Shah G tussi great ko
IG. Bas bas mere bbi bachy hn wo salay Bhabi ko Salam bolna or preshan na ho.
Kal sham me aja yaha.
City ki is entrance pr ajana me waha inform krdonga waha se koie bbi tme mere pas le aiengy.
Ye mera wireless num hy
Kahi issue ho kisi police chk post pr to usko bolna is num pr call krle.
Call ended.
Manager. Impressive Beta
Signals Blocked, No Internet, jammers activated hn but tmne to IG se call krwadi.
Bilal.. Yrw q mere kheench rhy ho.
Bilal ek young parha likha officer tha.
Bilal.. Jibran ab aap to IG Sahb k relative hn so aap hmre bhi Sahb hoy.
Koie kaam ho to Hazir ho me.
J.. Ne ne sir aap to apni duty kr rhn hy bas.
Srf ek help chaie mje kal din me bandage krwani hy so Hosiptal le jaiega
Or mere driver ki tabet kesi hy.
B.. Driver ko admit krwadia tha uska bullet nikal dia gaya tha.
Kal me khud Hospital le jaonga bandage bhi krwa lena or us sey mil bhi lena.
Bilal to Manager
Sir.. Restaurants Timings kya hn.
M.. Beta 24/7
Ab jab chahy ajao.
J.. Ok Sir.
Jibran Hotel ghumta hoa restaurant dekhta hy
Wahi bet jata hy
Waiter ata hy sir menu.
J. Orange Juice de de room me lejana hy
W.. Sir room service team apko dejaiegi.
J.. Nahi aap mje de den me lejaonga.
Jibran juice any tak wahi wait krta hy or sochta
Jibran aaj ne to kabhi ne
Aaj rukna ne sb boldena
Agr gussa bbi hogaie ya naraz hoie to environment esi emotional ny smbhal longa.
Wo room ki trf juice lekr jata hy gate knock krta hy.
Komal ne abbi change ne kia tha.
Komal pochti hy kon
J.. Me ho Komal open the door.
Hmesha gharelo Desi Kameez Shalwar me rehny wali, wo Komal jo aaj tak Bhai k samny without dupata ne aie.
Usne is time bathrobe pehna hoa tha
Geelay baal
Na bra na panty
Usko kab se Jibran ki hy fikar thi.
Wo Bhai ki awaz sun kr change bhi ne krti or direct gate open krdeti hy.
awesome good sence of writing i like it....Update 14.
Komal Jese hi gate open krti hy samny Jibran tha.
K. Shukar hy Bhai aap aagie pata hi ktni fikar mang horhi thi mje
J. Gate pr kharay hi usey dekhta rehta hy
Komal ne bathrobe Sahi se nahi pehna tha
Uska cleavage full visible yha.
Ye normal of insani nafsiat hy
Koie bhi Bhai jisne apni behan ko first time is condition me ya kisi bhi close girl
Cosin, frnd Khala Mami Chachi Bhabhi kisi ko bhi ese dekhy wo pehli nazar me skon se dekhe ga to zror
Komal chutki bajati hy bhai kha gayab ho kin socho me ghum ho.
Jibran hosh me ata hy or andar akar gate lock krta hy
Or Komal k face pr hat rkhta hy
Is time komal ka intention galat ne tha na usey apne aap ko ese show off krna tha
Wo Jibran k lie bht preshan thi islie sb bhool gaie thi wo kis dress me hy
Jibran. Komal pehli meri help kr yrw mera sando utaarny me bht uljhan horhi sara blood or Bandage ki medicine bbi is pr lagi houe hy
Komal help krti hy or aram se sando utarti hy
Jibran k sholder tk jese hi sando ata hy wo drd bhari ahhhh nikalta hy.
Komal. Bhai kya hoa.
J. Ne kuch ne tum utaro
Ab Jibran shirtless tha
Or uski bandage pr hat lagati hy
Bhai tumne bilkul parwa ne jaan ki mje safe krni me tumre sath ye sb hoa
Uski ankho me anso ajaty hy
Jibran bht bold step leta hy
Or Komal ko peechy kr k uski bathrobe khol deta hy
Komal suddenly shok hojati hy or kisi stachue kisi tra khari rehti hy apni jaga
Komal front se full nangi thi
Uski husan
Garam jism
Jibran k samny kholli tijori ki tara open tha
Jis ka tala abhi abhi Jibran ne khola tha
Jibran ek nazar pyar se usko dekhta hy
Us k mammay pink khary nipples
Slim or hot dilkash jisam
Or jese hi neechy nazar jaati hy
Jibran ka Lund uchlna shro hojata hy
Uski nazro k samny halkay halkay hairs wali gulbai choot apni Behan Komal ki choot
Wo forn apne aapko smbhalta hy
Or bathrobe top se pakrta hy shoulder pr sahi se set krta hy neck tak phr ko tight kr k uska jism cover krta hy
Or dori tightly bhand deta hy
Or usko hug krta hy pagli ese wear krty hn isi
Abhi meri jaga koie or hota to..
Kya hoa q hoa us bat ko jese ignore kr k Komal ko bolta chlo ao juice peety hn
Phr mje bag se koie dress do me fresh hojao
Tm bbi change krlo
Phr neechy chal k dinner krty hn
Sath sath tme sari baat btata ho phr.
Komal. Juice peeti hy or bolti hu, Bhai ab 2 min betho me bas change kr aie.
K. Washroom me jaati hy
Bathrobe utar k apne aap ko sheeshay ne dekhti hy
Yrw ye kya hoa
Bhai ne ye kya harkat krdi aaj
Usne to mje nanga Dekh lia or kuch reaction bhi ne
Usne kuch ne socha na bola or itna bara step lelia
Itna bara kaam krny k baad ese anjan ban rha hy k kuch kia hi na ho usne.
Phr apne jisam pr hat pherti hy phr ruk jati hy
Bas bas komal abhi ne
Kameez shlwar pehnti hy or bahr ajati hy
Is time komal ne dupatta ne pehna hoa tha
Wo apne geelay hairs or towel lapet k bhai k paas ati hy
Bhai app kya dress pehno gy
J. Komal mje bag me se trouser dedo or ek sando
Usi me easy rhon ga
Komal bag kholti hy
Wo kapre upar neechy krti hy trouser sando nikalti hy or us k hat me ek packet ajata hy
Wo codom ka pack tha
Wo foran usko bag me andar rakh deti hy.
Dil me. Ye Bhai k iraday theek ne wo tyaari se aya bas kuch kr na skta
Darpook.
Ek baar baat to ke muj se.
Phr wo Jibran ko dress deti hy
Jibran ja kar fresh hota hy
Bht smbhal apne jisam pr paani dalta hy sb saaf krta hy
J. Washroom me
Ye kya krdiya meny
Itna bara kaam kese krgaya me
Yrw kahi meny sb set hony se pehly apni setting ki maa behan to be krdi
Ab Komal kya soch rhi hogi
Shit shit galat hogaya
But Jibran k dimag me sef Komal hi ghum rhi thi
Komal kya cheez ho tum
Tum kisi pari se kam ne
Tume hasil na kr ska to is zaindgi pr lanat
Ese jeena bhi koie jeena hy
Jibran ka lund full tight horha tha phatnay k lie
But us k hat me laga hoa tha
Islie mud marna cancel krdeta hy
Trouser pehna k bhar ajata hy
Ek hat me towel tha
Ek hat me sando.
J. Komal idhar ao
K. G Bhai
J. Yrw mje help krdo isko pehnay me
Komal ki nazar ab skon se usk jism pr prti hy jo wo pehly hi Zareen bn k dek chuki hy
Muscular seena
6 packs
Or dolay sholay
Touser me khara lund clear dekh rha tha
Wo barey aram se Jibran ko Sando pehnati hy
Phr dono Bhai Behan bed pr beth jaaty hn.
Komal. Bhai tum ne gun chalana kaha seekhi.
J. Yrw baba k sat jab club jata ho waha shooting range hy normal pistol to chlany ati thi but machine gun kese chal gaie pata ne
Pata hy wese kehty hn
Dushman samny ho to nishana khud pakka hojata hy
Bas esa hi kuch hoa
K. Un me se kisi ek ne jab mere bary me bola usk bad ap to pagal haogei thy
Aap ko kuch hojata to
J. Tjhe kuch hojata to?
Me kya krta
Mama Baba ko kya moo dekhata
To sb se barkar hy mere lie
Tere lie to pori dunya jala donga
Meri behan ko koie aankh utha k to dekhy
Teri khushi k lie
Tjhe save krni k lie sb kr guzronga me.
Komal k ankho me anso ajaty hn.
Bhai u r the best in the world.
Yes i m the best
Best brother of best and beautiful sister in this universe.
Komal. Wawa kya baat hy mere bhai ki.
K. Bhai ek baat krni hy tumse
J. Ha bolna kya baat hy esi.
K.. wo bhai...
J.. btana kya hoa.
K.. Bhai Baba mere rishta kranay k chakar me lgy hb
Mje abhi shadi ne krni
Yrw abhi mere age hi kya hoie hy
Abhi is In Laws ki chik chik
Typical marriage life
At least graduation to krlo
Itna to time mily.
Jibran ese mokay k to talash me tha
J. Acha to ye baat hy meri gudia to abbi shadi nw krni
Koie or Pasand hy kya
Koie Larka hy to bta de
K. Ne ne bhai kya hogaya
Koie larka warka ne
Me ne to aaj tak kisi se baat bhi ne ki.
J.. Acha chal me ghar jany k baad Baba se bat krta ho
J.. But ek issue hy.
K. Kya
J. Me ye shadi ka topic ek hi tareekay se cancel krwa skta ho.
K. Wo kese.
J. Dekh meny Baba ko study k lie Bahr jany ki baat ki thi.
Baba ne mje bola tha k kis country jana hy
Uspr working k detail btao takey wo consultant se bat kr working krwade mere admission or visa ki.
K. Ye kab hoa mje kisi ne q btaya.
J. Abhi meny Baba ko final ne batya islie.
K.. phr kaha jarhy ho aap
J. London
K. Wa bhai ap k mazay hn khud London jany ki planning kr rhy or yaha mere shadi ki tyyaari horhi hy.
J. Dekh me isi lie bol raha ho k jab ghar jany k bad tmhre samny is topic pr baat to zid krny lg jana k tme bhi London prhny jana hy, phr me Baba ko mana longa k tume bhi bheje mere sath, Graduation k bad shadi ki baat krengy Komal ki.
K. Me waha akr kya krongi.
J. Mere sath rho gi.
K.. Bhai waha jany k bad me tmhre sath rho gi to tmri privacy disturbed hogi kuch din baad tme me buri lagnay lago gi.
J. Ne ne dek me yaha se akela jaonga
Acha hy na to sath hogi to mje company hojiegi.
Or Rhi baat buri lagny ki to q buri lagy gi.
K. Ne Bhai yaha ka to mje ne pata but waha jakr tme koie larki pasand agaie tmhri personal life me tume meri waja se reserve life guzarni pregi.
J. To ne aaj kya suna yaha koie meri girl frnd hy
K. Suna to ne but aapne kabhi btaya bhi ne.
J. Tmne pocha bhi ne
K. Axha to btao kon hy.
J. Aaj tak koie ne bnaie.
Study Gym upr se larkio se baat krny se bht ghabrata ho me koie mili hi ne.
K.. itni Handsome ho ese kese ne mili koie.
J. Meny kisi k bary me zada socha bhi ne. Mje to meri Behan hi itni pyari lagti hy.
K. Dhat behan pr hi line mar rhy ho besharam Baba tangay tor dengy tumhri.
J. Komal Baba meri tangy torey na torey tmhri shadi zror kr dengy.
Agar shadi se bachna hy to, simple si condition hy tume meri girlfriend bnna prega.
London me tum meri girlfriend hogi.
4 years program hoga
Itna time me tme bacha sakta ho shadi se baki us k bad ya London jakr soch lengy.
Ab tme parhny mere sath jana hy
Ya Shadi krni hy sochlo is barey me achy se phr btana.
K.. Bhai mazak bnd kro
J. I m serious
K.. Yrw Bhai Behan kab se GF BF hony lagy.
J. Komal dekho bachpan se baba ne tme Girls school bbeja or mje Boys school, tum larko se esi waja se dor rhi
same meri condition hy.
Jaha bahar jana ho family k sath jana hy ya driver k sath or Baba k jasos ban kr sath rehta hy.
Bachpan se kisi larki ko dekha usk sath raha usko smjha to wo tum ho
Tumhre samny bhi srf me hi tha or ho as a Boy.
Hume srf ek dosry ko or closely smjhna hy
mean thora sa sibling circle se bahr ana prega bas.
Mujhe ne pata tum kya sochti ho
Mje bi abhi khud clear ne
k ye srf attractions hy ya pyar
but mje tmhre ilawa koie ne dekhta
tum itni zada pyari ho
k kese kisi or ka socho
or mera bhi dil nahi k tmhri kisi se abhi Shadi ho
Me chata ho tum mere sath London jakr
Bilkul ek Biwi ki tara.
K. Bhai mujhe lagta hy aaj k hadsay ka asar tmhre dimag pr hoa hy.
J.. Mje kuch ne pata
To nay bola shadi ne krni
Meny rasta bata dia
Ab tera dil ko acha lge wo soch or mje bata.
Ab chal bht bhook lagi hy khana kha kr aty hn.
Komal Dupatta leti hy baal set kerti hy or dono Dinner pr chle jaty hn .
awesome good sence of writing i like it....Update 14.
Komal Jese hi gate open krti hy samny Jibran tha.
K. Shukar hy Bhai aap aagie pata hi ktni fikar mang horhi thi mje
J. Gate pr kharay hi usey dekhta rehta hy
Komal ne bathrobe Sahi se nahi pehna tha
Uska cleavage full visible yha.
Ye normal of insani nafsiat hy
Koie bhi Bhai jisne apni behan ko first time is condition me ya kisi bhi close girl
Cosin, frnd Khala Mami Chachi Bhabhi kisi ko bhi ese dekhy wo pehli nazar me skon se dekhe ga to zror
Komal chutki bajati hy bhai kha gayab ho kin socho me ghum ho.
Jibran hosh me ata hy or andar akar gate lock krta hy
Or Komal k face pr hat rkhta hy
Is time komal ka intention galat ne tha na usey apne aap ko ese show off krna tha
Wo Jibran k lie bht preshan thi islie sb bhool gaie thi wo kis dress me hy
Jibran. Komal pehli meri help kr yrw mera sando utaarny me bht uljhan horhi sara blood or Bandage ki medicine bbi is pr lagi houe hy
Komal help krti hy or aram se sando utarti hy
Jibran k sholder tk jese hi sando ata hy wo drd bhari ahhhh nikalta hy.
Komal. Bhai kya hoa.
J. Ne kuch ne tum utaro
Ab Jibran shirtless tha
Or uski bandage pr hat lagati hy
Bhai tumne bilkul parwa ne jaan ki mje safe krni me tumre sath ye sb hoa
Uski ankho me anso ajaty hy
Jibran bht bold step leta hy
Or Komal ko peechy kr k uski bathrobe khol deta hy
Komal suddenly shok hojati hy or kisi stachue kisi tra khari rehti hy apni jaga
Komal front se full nangi thi
Uski husan
Garam jism
Jibran k samny kholli tijori ki tara open tha
Jis ka tala abhi abhi Jibran ne khola tha
Jibran ek nazar pyar se usko dekhta hy
Us k mammay pink khary nipples
Slim or hot dilkash jisam
Or jese hi neechy nazar jaati hy
Jibran ka Lund uchlna shro hojata hy
Uski nazro k samny halkay halkay hairs wali gulbai choot apni Behan Komal ki choot
Wo forn apne aapko smbhalta hy
Or bathrobe top se pakrta hy shoulder pr sahi se set krta hy neck tak phr ko tight kr k uska jism cover krta hy
Or dori tightly bhand deta hy
Or usko hug krta hy pagli ese wear krty hn isi
Abhi meri jaga koie or hota to..
Kya hoa q hoa us bat ko jese ignore kr k Komal ko bolta chlo ao juice peety hn
Phr mje bag se koie dress do me fresh hojao
Tm bbi change krlo
Phr neechy chal k dinner krty hn
Sath sath tme sari baat btata ho phr.
Komal. Juice peeti hy or bolti hu, Bhai ab 2 min betho me bas change kr aie.
K. Washroom me jaati hy
Bathrobe utar k apne aap ko sheeshay ne dekhti hy
Yrw ye kya hoa
Bhai ne ye kya harkat krdi aaj
Usne to mje nanga Dekh lia or kuch reaction bhi ne
Usne kuch ne socha na bola or itna bara step lelia
Itna bara kaam krny k baad ese anjan ban rha hy k kuch kia hi na ho usne.
Phr apne jisam pr hat pherti hy phr ruk jati hy
Bas bas komal abhi ne
Kameez shlwar pehnti hy or bahr ajati hy
Is time komal ne dupatta ne pehna hoa tha
Wo apne geelay hairs or towel lapet k bhai k paas ati hy
Bhai app kya dress pehno gy
J. Komal mje bag me se trouser dedo or ek sando
Usi me easy rhon ga
Komal bag kholti hy
Wo kapre upar neechy krti hy trouser sando nikalti hy or us k hat me ek packet ajata hy
Wo codom ka pack tha
Wo foran usko bag me andar rakh deti hy.
Dil me. Ye Bhai k iraday theek ne wo tyaari se aya bas kuch kr na skta
Darpook.
Ek baar baat to ke muj se.
Phr wo Jibran ko dress deti hy
Jibran ja kar fresh hota hy
Bht smbhal apne jisam pr paani dalta hy sb saaf krta hy
J. Washroom me
Ye kya krdiya meny
Itna bara kaam kese krgaya me
Yrw kahi meny sb set hony se pehly apni setting ki maa behan to be krdi
Ab Komal kya soch rhi hogi
Shit shit galat hogaya
But Jibran k dimag me sef Komal hi ghum rhi thi
Komal kya cheez ho tum
Tum kisi pari se kam ne
Tume hasil na kr ska to is zaindgi pr lanat
Ese jeena bhi koie jeena hy
Jibran ka lund full tight horha tha phatnay k lie
But us k hat me laga hoa tha
Islie mud marna cancel krdeta hy
Trouser pehna k bhar ajata hy
Ek hat me towel tha
Ek hat me sando.
J. Komal idhar ao
K. G Bhai
J. Yrw mje help krdo isko pehnay me
Komal ki nazar ab skon se usk jism pr prti hy jo wo pehly hi Zareen bn k dek chuki hy
Muscular seena
6 packs
Or dolay sholay
Touser me khara lund clear dekh rha tha
Wo barey aram se Jibran ko Sando pehnati hy
Phr dono Bhai Behan bed pr beth jaaty hn.
Komal. Bhai tum ne gun chalana kaha seekhi.
J. Yrw baba k sat jab club jata ho waha shooting range hy normal pistol to chlany ati thi but machine gun kese chal gaie pata ne
Pata hy wese kehty hn
Dushman samny ho to nishana khud pakka hojata hy
Bas esa hi kuch hoa
K. Un me se kisi ek ne jab mere bary me bola usk bad ap to pagal haogei thy
Aap ko kuch hojata to
J. Tjhe kuch hojata to?
Me kya krta
Mama Baba ko kya moo dekhata
To sb se barkar hy mere lie
Tere lie to pori dunya jala donga
Meri behan ko koie aankh utha k to dekhy
Teri khushi k lie
Tjhe save krni k lie sb kr guzronga me.
Komal k ankho me anso ajaty hn.
Bhai u r the best in the world.
Yes i m the best
Best brother of best and beautiful sister in this universe.
Komal. Wawa kya baat hy mere bhai ki.
K. Bhai ek baat krni hy tumse
J. Ha bolna kya baat hy esi.
K.. wo bhai...
J.. btana kya hoa.
K.. Bhai Baba mere rishta kranay k chakar me lgy hb
Mje abhi shadi ne krni
Yrw abhi mere age hi kya hoie hy
Abhi is In Laws ki chik chik
Typical marriage life
At least graduation to krlo
Itna to time mily.
Jibran ese mokay k to talash me tha
J. Acha to ye baat hy meri gudia to abbi shadi nw krni
Koie or Pasand hy kya
Koie Larka hy to bta de
K. Ne ne bhai kya hogaya
Koie larka warka ne
Me ne to aaj tak kisi se baat bhi ne ki.
J.. Acha chal me ghar jany k baad Baba se bat krta ho
J.. But ek issue hy.
K. Kya
J. Me ye shadi ka topic ek hi tareekay se cancel krwa skta ho.
K. Wo kese.
J. Dekh meny Baba ko study k lie Bahr jany ki baat ki thi.
Baba ne mje bola tha k kis country jana hy
Uspr working k detail btao takey wo consultant se bat kr working krwade mere admission or visa ki.
K. Ye kab hoa mje kisi ne q btaya.
J. Abhi meny Baba ko final ne batya islie.
K.. phr kaha jarhy ho aap
J. London
K. Wa bhai ap k mazay hn khud London jany ki planning kr rhy or yaha mere shadi ki tyyaari horhi hy.
J. Dekh me isi lie bol raha ho k jab ghar jany k bad tmhre samny is topic pr baat to zid krny lg jana k tme bhi London prhny jana hy, phr me Baba ko mana longa k tume bhi bheje mere sath, Graduation k bad shadi ki baat krengy Komal ki.
K. Me waha akr kya krongi.
J. Mere sath rho gi.
K.. Bhai waha jany k bad me tmhre sath rho gi to tmri privacy disturbed hogi kuch din baad tme me buri lagnay lago gi.
J. Ne ne dek me yaha se akela jaonga
Acha hy na to sath hogi to mje company hojiegi.
Or Rhi baat buri lagny ki to q buri lagy gi.
K. Ne Bhai yaha ka to mje ne pata but waha jakr tme koie larki pasand agaie tmhri personal life me tume meri waja se reserve life guzarni pregi.
J. To ne aaj kya suna yaha koie meri girl frnd hy
K. Suna to ne but aapne kabhi btaya bhi ne.
J. Tmne pocha bhi ne
K. Axha to btao kon hy.
J. Aaj tak koie ne bnaie.
Study Gym upr se larkio se baat krny se bht ghabrata ho me koie mili hi ne.
K.. itni Handsome ho ese kese ne mili koie.
J. Meny kisi k bary me zada socha bhi ne. Mje to meri Behan hi itni pyari lagti hy.
K. Dhat behan pr hi line mar rhy ho besharam Baba tangay tor dengy tumhri.
J. Komal Baba meri tangy torey na torey tmhri shadi zror kr dengy.
Agar shadi se bachna hy to, simple si condition hy tume meri girlfriend bnna prega.
London me tum meri girlfriend hogi.
4 years program hoga
Itna time me tme bacha sakta ho shadi se baki us k bad ya London jakr soch lengy.
Ab tme parhny mere sath jana hy
Ya Shadi krni hy sochlo is barey me achy se phr btana.
K.. Bhai mazak bnd kro
J. I m serious
K.. Yrw Bhai Behan kab se GF BF hony lagy.
J. Komal dekho bachpan se baba ne tme Girls school bbeja or mje Boys school, tum larko se esi waja se dor rhi
same meri condition hy.
Jaha bahar jana ho family k sath jana hy ya driver k sath or Baba k jasos ban kr sath rehta hy.
Bachpan se kisi larki ko dekha usk sath raha usko smjha to wo tum ho
Tumhre samny bhi srf me hi tha or ho as a Boy.
Hume srf ek dosry ko or closely smjhna hy
mean thora sa sibling circle se bahr ana prega bas.
Mujhe ne pata tum kya sochti ho
Mje bi abhi khud clear ne
k ye srf attractions hy ya pyar
but mje tmhre ilawa koie ne dekhta
tum itni zada pyari ho
k kese kisi or ka socho
or mera bhi dil nahi k tmhri kisi se abhi Shadi ho
Me chata ho tum mere sath London jakr
Bilkul ek Biwi ki tara.
K. Bhai mujhe lagta hy aaj k hadsay ka asar tmhre dimag pr hoa hy.
J.. Mje kuch ne pata
To nay bola shadi ne krni
Meny rasta bata dia
Ab tera dil ko acha lge wo soch or mje bata.
Ab chal bht bhook lagi hy khana kha kr aty hn.
Komal Dupatta leti hy baal set kerti hy or dono Dinner pr chle jaty hn .