Writer ji mera iss msg ka bhi jawaab de dijiye....
Aur ek baat, tum jiss tarah se sexual intercourse ka description de rahe ho it's really very nice & erotic... Khas kar ke Hakim Suleman aur Anita ka sexual intercourse ka description jis tarah se diya hai, read karke eroticness high level par uth Gaya tha. Once again excellent writing skills....
Mere taraf se choti se ek idea hai agar tumhe achaa Lage to story mai add karna... Anita dhire dhire badal Raha hai , aur uske sexual desire increase ho raha hai yeh sahi hai aur realistic hai. ,, lekin story jaise jaise aage badta jayega Anita ka sexual intercourse ke time blowjob, ass licking iss tarah ka kuch dirty sex hoga to aur bhi eroticness ayega, agar dirty sex kisi zada Umar ka aur dirty logo ke sath hoga to aur bhi eroticness ayega.
Yeh bass mera ek personal idea hai. Tum apne hisab se story ko bohot achee tarike se likh rahe ho , agar mera yeh idea tumhe achaa laga to story mai add karna.... Bura mat manna.... Mai bass ek idea diya baki tum apne hisab se hee likho.... Thank you.