Thriller Faraar (COMPLETED)

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Update 25​

Ek ghante ke intezaar ke baad Vicky kuch pareshaan hogaya kyun ke weh log tab tak nahin punhche the…. Vicky Rita ko phone kar raha tha magar woh utha nahin rahi thi. Vicky samajh nahin pa raha tha ke kia kiya jae….. kahin unn logon ko kuch pata na chal gaya ho aur unn logon ne plan badal na diya ho….. Tab Rita Vicky ko phone karke zaroor batati….magar kyun woh phone nahin le rahi thi apni? Vicky ne sms karne ko socha magar kahin eisa na ho ke unn logon ne Rita ka mobile check kar liya aur uss se sawaal kar rahe honge ke kiss ka call aya hai….. yeh sab soch kar Vicky bahot pareshan tha aur ussko bahot fikar tha ke agar unn logon ko zara sa bhi bhanak lag gaya ke Rita Vicky ka ek zarya hai unn logon tak pohunchne ka to sab garbad ho jaega; uss ka pura plan bigar jaega iss baat ko lekar Vicky bahot ziada pareshaan ho gaya tha….. Vicky khud badbadaya, “Where the hell is she why she is not taking the call? Kahan mar gayi saali? Kia kar rahi hogi? Apne cell ko loud rakhne ko kaha tha main ne to main ne call kiya to ussne suna to hoga phir liya kyun nahin? Ek ghanta hogaya kia weh sab abhi tak wahin honge? What the hell! Come on Rita bring them here damn it!!”

Dekhte dekhte aur adha ghanta beet gaya aur Vicky bechain ho gaya to ek aur call lagaya rita ke cell par. Cell udhar baj rahi thi magar Rita nahin le rahi thi, do baar, teen baar, chaar baar call kiya Vicky ne magar Rita ne phone nahin uthaya…..Aur Vicky ne wapas wahan jaakar check karne ko decide kiya aur kitchen ke ussi khirki se baahar nikla, jeise hi gate ke paas gaya to ek sms aya usske mobile par, sms Rita ke taraf se tha aur likha tha,

“Hum log ab wahan aa rahe hein; yeh kutte mujhko sea side legaye the, aur main phone nahin le paayi kyun ke yeh log mujhe tang kar rahe the uss waqt aur donon saath the mere, mujhko bahot tang kiya donon ne, bahot mushkil se inn ko rok paayi hoon aur ghar chalne ke liye mana paayi hoon, we are nearing now… be careful… I am deleting the sms after sending…. See you there…”

Tab Vicky ke jaan mein jaan aayi aur jaldi wapas ghar ke piche kitchen ke nazdeek gaya aur iss se pehle ke woh andar ghussta uss ko nazar aya ke ek taxi ruk rahi hai aur weh log uss mein se utar rahe hein teenon….. ab iss se pehle ke weh log gate khol kar yard mein aate phir apne main door ko kholte, Vicky ne try kiya andar daakhil hone ko phir se ussi choti si khirki se aur same time baahar unn logon par nazar bhi kiye huwe the…… Vicky ko waqt mila iss liye ke weh donon thoda bahot nashe mein the aur Rita ke saath chipka chipki kar rahe the gate ke andar aane se pehle…. Donon ek saath Rita ko kiss kar rahe the, usski jism ko masal rahe the…Rita beech mein quaid thi unn donon ke, aur ek aage se dusra peeche se Rita ko daba rahe the…. To iss vajah se Vicky ko dobara andar ghussne ka achah mawka mil gaya…..

Vicky ghar ke ek andhere kone mein chup gaya. Uss ne khub plan kiya ke shayad weh toilet jaenge aur kitchen mein kuch coffee vaghaira ke liye jaenge iss liye Vicky ne unn do jagaon ko avoid karke ke, lounge ke TV set ke furniture ke piche chup gaya kyun ke woh furniture kaafi bada tha saath saath furniture thoda bahot library bhi tha iss liye……. Vikcy sab dekh aur sun bhi raha tha….Rita idhar udhar ghar mein dekh rahi thi dekhne ke liye ke kahin Vicky nazar na ajaaye….. Magar kuch nahin dikha Rita ko….

Ab lounge mein hi ek ne Rita ko couch par letaya aur uss par chadh gaya aur usski chaati ko chumne laga apne kamar ko Rita ke janghon ke beech dabaate huwe jabke dusre ne kitchen ke taraf se aate huwe kaha,

“Are tumne yahin program shuru kar diya nikaal saali ke kapde, nangi karde kutti ko phir jamke chodenge iss saali ko……”

Vicky sab dekh raha tha magar uss waqt bebus tha….woh soch raha tha ke agar weh log wahin rehkar sab kuch karna chahe to maamla kuch katheen ho jaega…phir bhi Vicky ko Rita par bharosa tha aur ussko pata tha ke Rita kuch na kuch zaroor karegi unn logon ko wahan se hatane ke liye…..

Aur han Vicky sahi soch raha tha, Rita ne nakhrein dikhana shuru kiya aur kuch natkhat adaon ke saath adhnangi uthkar kehne lagi,

“Kyun tumhare ghar mein bedroom nahin hai kia? Bistar nahin hai sofe par hi sote ho kia tum? Main tumhara bed dekhna chahti hoon main to ussi par letungi tum donon ke liye….”

To ghar maalik ne kaha,

“Bed kyun nahin hai janeman, chal letata hoon tujhe apni bistar par aur donon milkar tere saath maza karenge wah kitni namkeen hai tu mazaa ayega aaj to, kia cheez hai tu yaar bahot mast hai tu wah! Chal yaar chal issko dikhate hein ke hum kia cheez hai chal bedroom mein chal….”

Aur ussne Rita ka haath thaame ussko khinchte huwe apne bedroom ke taraf lejane laga aur usska dost donon ke piche piche ladkhadate huwe bedroom ke taraf badhne lage…… jiss bedroom ko Vicky ne socha tha ussi mein gaye teenon.

Phir to turant baad Vicky nikla aur jaldi se apna bag nikala aur jaldi jaldi camera ko tripod par lagaya, apne hathyaar nikaale aur revolver mein goli aur silencer lagaya, uss lohe ke ghunsse ko muthi mein pehna aur laathi ki rassi ko kalaayi mein lapeta, phir sab samaan ko uss bedroom ke darwaze ke karib rakh kar kaan laga kar sunne laga ke Rita kia bolti hai donon ko….. Apne dayen hath mein revolver liye Vicky tayyaar tha achanak vaar karne ke liye. Phir bhi sahi mawke ka intezaar mein tha……

Kamre ke andar Rita donon ko nahin rok paa rahi thi…plan to yeh tha ke woh donon ko nange karne ke baad baahar nikalti magar iss baar maamla ulta ho raha tha weh donon Rita ko nangi kar rahe the….. Rita ki dress utaar daala donon ne milkar… Rita bahot koshish kar rahi thi haalaat ko sambhaalne ki aur Vicky ki bataaye plan ko kaamyaab karne ki magar donon nashe mein the aur kuch bhi sunne ko tayaar nahin the to Rita majboor ho gayi thi…… Baahar se Vicky kaafi kuch sun raha tha aur usske samajh mein agaya ke Rita ka nikalna mushkil hai aur ussne decide kiya ke woh khud andar ghusse achaanak……

Pichele do aadmiyon ke saath Vicky ne kia kiya yeh Rita ko kuch pata nahin tha ab tak. Vicky revolver aur hathyaar se pesh ayega yeh bhi Rita ko kuch idea nahin tha… Rita sirf unn aadmiyon ko usske hawale karke chali jaati thi…. Magar kia ab Vicky ko revolver ke saath kamre mein ate huwe dekh kar heyraan nahin hogi? Kia Vicky goli chala paega Rita ke enkhon ke saamne? Phir bhi kia Rita chup rahegi sab dekhne ke baad? Vicky kia karega andar daakhil hone par? Yeh sab Vicky soch raha tha….. ke achanak……………

To be continued……………….

Wow ek ke baad ek 2 solid update but yaha thoda mamla ulajhta lag raha hain aut thoda bohat rita ke character bhi sandeh me aata huandikh raha hain. Lekin vicky ka dimagh in sab se shatir hain to shayad wo kuch na kuch back up plan ke sath hoga.

 

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[Casinar]

Wow ek ke baad ek 2 solid update but yaha thoda mamla ulajhta lag raha hain aut thoda bohat rita ke character bhi sandeh me aata huandikh raha hain. Lekin vicky ka dimagh in sab se shatir hain to shayad wo kuch na kuch back up plan ke sath hoga.

welcome to this thread bro. Happy to know k tumko kahani passad aayi.... magar tum ne 25th update ko quote kiya aur update to 26 hai bhai..... anyway thanks very much aur aate rehna.

 

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[Casinar]

Update 27
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Inspector Khan ne Udhar Rathod ko call karke apne saath airport lekar gaaya aur Jugdish ko roka plane mein jaane se. Koyi aur police wala nahin gaya Khan ke saath. Ussne Rathod ko personally civil dress mein lekar gayaa. Jugdish Raghuveer ne to bahot zabardasti karne ki koshish kiya magar Khan ne baakhubi kaam kiya. Counter par jab woh apne boading pass ko present kar raha tha tabhi Khan ne uss se passport manga formal inquiry ke jeise aur passport ko apne jeb mein rakh kar kaha.

“Aap iss plane mein nahin board kar sakte aap ko issi waqt hamare paas chalna hoga ek bahot zaroori statement leni hai aap se.”

Jugdish ghusse se laal pila hokar kaha,

“Are tum kia bigaar sakte ho mera abhi mere chacha tumhara bajata hai thehro…”

Yeh kehkar ussne apne cell phone se ACP ko phone karna chaaha to turant Inspector Rathod ne uss ke hath se mobile chinN liya aur dhire se, araam se muskurate huwe kaha,

“Nahin janaab aap iss waqt iss mobile ka istemaal bhi nahin kar sakte, hamare saath corperate kijiye issi mein aap ki bhalaayi hai!”

Jugdish laal babula ho gaya aur chillaane laga,

“What the hell is this aap log zabardasti nahin kar sakte mere saath main MLA ka beta hoon tumko apne naukri se haath dhona padega, kehdeta hoon jaane do mujhe varna achah nahin hoga tum donon ke liye, ek chutki mein donon ko suspend karwa sakta hoon mujhse mat uljho to tumhare liye thik hoga!Samjhe ke nahin Inspectors?”

Tab turant Inspector Khan ne ussko ek zor ka tamacha mara sab ke saamne aur Rathod ne ek ghunssa mara usske chehre par aur donon inspectors ne usske donon taraf se usske bazu ko pakre khinch kar ussko legaye parking ke taaraf car ke paas.

Parking mein bhi Jugdish shor kiye jaa raha tha aur kaha,

“Tum donon ko pata nahin kiss se ulajh rahe ho bus mere baap ko pata chal jaane do zindagi bhar pachtaoge tum donon, bus thodi der ki baat hai main dikhata hoon tum donon ko!”

Khan ne dhakka dete huwe ussko car ke andar dhakela tabhi usska cellphone baja. Vicky call call kar raha tha. Khan ne dhire se Rathod se kaha,

“Tum usske paas car mein baitho, bhaagne na paaye woh, Vicky ne mujhko information diya tha ke woh bhaag raha hai, ussi ka phone hai main uss se baat karta hoon okay?”

Rathod baith gaya Jugdish ke saath car mein aur Khan ne Vicky se baat kiya:

“Bolo Vicky kia bat hai ab?”

“Kia huwa Khan sahab? Roka ussko ke nahin?”

Vicky uss waqt wahin tha ussi ghar mein jahan donon ko maar dala tha. Raat ke 1 baj gaye the.

Khan ne reply kiya,

“Woh hamare saath hai gadi mein Vicky Sir ji!”

Phir Vicky ne apne plan ko vistaal mein Khan ko samjhaya aur ek ek chiz ko bilkool ussi tarah se karne ko kaha jeise usska plan hai varna sab gadbad ho jaega. Khan bahot khush huwa aur raazi huwa Vicky ke plan ke motabik kaam karne ko aur kaha ke bus 20 minutes mein uss se milta hai usski bataaayi huwi address par.

Inspector Khan car drive karte huwe Rathod se baatein karte huwe kaha,

“Ab aega mazaa Rathod, Jugdish ka baap bhi issko nahin bacha sakta ab, aur na isska uncle ACP. Ab hum isska decide karenge ke kia karna hai isska, chahe to abhi ke abhi saale ke khopdi mein che goliyan utaar dein aur kissa ko tamaam Karen hahahaha!!”

Rathod hanss pada aur Jugdish ne kaha,

“Aap log eisa kuch nahin kar sakte mujhko kia bacha samjha hai jo dara dhamka rahe ho pungi to tum donon ke bajne wala hai aur bajaunga main… police station chalo bus ek phone ki zaroorat hai sarkaar ko khada kar dunga tumhare saamne han!”

Khan ne ussko hansste huwe jawaab diya,

“Abe saale kaun tumko police station le jaa raha hai? Ladkiyon ka rape karne mein bada mazaa ata hai nah tujhe chal aaj tera rape karte hein hum donon milkar phir dekhna kitna mazaa ata hai!” hehehehe!!!

Rathod ne hanste huwe Jugdish ke laal chehre ko dekhte huwe Khan ko jawaab diya,

“Khan, isski to fatt gayi dekh keise chehra laal ho gaya isska hahaahaha”

Khan bola,

“Ab soch abhi jab apne baap se milega tab kia haal hone wala hai isska hahahaha!”

Aur Khan aur Rathod raaste bhar usska mazaak udate huwe Vicky ke bataayi hui address tak ponhuche jahan Vicky wait kar raha tha unnka.

Address wohi makaan tha jiss mein unn donon ke laash pade the, Jugdish ke saathi ke. Vicky gate ke paas khada tha Hippie ke bhess mein aur Khan ko dekhte hi uske kaan mein kuch phussur phussur karke kuch bataya…. Phir ussi makaan mein chala gaya wapas.

Inspector Khan ne tab Rathod se kaha Jugdish ke haath mein hathkadiyan pehnakar ussko uss ghar ke andar le chalen!

Jugdish object karne laga, kanoon ki batein karne laga ke ussko jurm bataye baghair ussko hatkadi nahin pehna sakte, kissi aur jagah par nahin leja sakte, police station lejana chahiye aur bahot phudak raha tha….. Rathod ne ekaat ghussa mara ussko aur hatkadi samet uss ghar ke andar lekar gaya jahan Khan ne bhi join kiya donon ko aur lounge mein baithe teenon Jugdish ko ek sofe par bitha kar….. Phir Rathod bola,

“Plan kia hai Khan?”

Khan bola,

“Plan to Vicky ko pata hai main to Vicky ka kaam kar raha hoon abhi! Hehehehe”

Yeh sunkar Jugdish ka chehra badal gaya aur donon police walon ke chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap log corrupt nahin ho aap imaandaar police officers ho aap donon Vicky se nahin mil sakte aap log mujjhe dara rahe ho nah?!” Itna hi bola tha uss ne ke ek kamre se Vicky apne asli bhess mein usske saamne chalte huwe nazar aaye aur usski to bilkool fatt gayi!!!! Woh kabhi Khan ko to kabhhi Rathod ko dekhta phir Vicky ke chehre ko dekhta aur usske honth jeise thartharate nazar aaye… usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke ab kia Karen ya kahe… bolti bandh ho gayi usski aur apne sarr hillate huwe khud sarr niche jhuka diye Jugdish ne…… magar ussko pata nahin tha ke uss ke saath kia hone wala hai kuch der mein…. Vicky ne jo plan banaya hai uss se to usski aur usske MLA aur ACP ki bhi baj jaegi…..

To be continued………………..

 

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