Thriller Faraar (COMPLETED)

[Suparseupar]

suparrrrrrrrrrrrrr
seeeeeeeee
uparrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr kahani hi bhai

 

[Casinar]

just shuru kiya padhna

shukriya bhai

 

[luv4sale696969]

What a fantastic story... Superb plot... Except a few errors I must say it was a finely written script... Read it in one go... The major error is that at the end of the story, you mentioned Jagdish as nephew of the MLA whereas earlier he has been projected as his son... One more error is that you mentioned plotting the drugs and arms while Vicky was initially dealing with Jagdish after killing his two accomplishes together and then again the event is repeated at the end...
Vaise ek shikayat bhi hai... Mauritius khali Vicky aur Rathod ko hi invite kiya... Hamein nahin....

 

[Casinar]

What a fantastic story... Superb plot... Except a few errors I must say it was a finely written script... Read it in one go... The major error is that at the end of the story, you mentioned Jagdish as nephew of the MLA whereas earlier he has been projected as his son... One more error is that you mentioned plotting the drugs and arms while Vicky was initially dealing with Jagdish after killing his two accomplishes together and then again the event is repeated at the end...
Vaise ek shikayat bhi hai... Mauritius khali Vicky aur Rathod ko hi invite kiya... Hamein nahin....

thanks very very much luv bro
very much appreciated that you read it in one go non stop....
strange that i never noticed the mistakes you have pointed out, jugdish was the MLA's son and the raghuveer's nephew.... thanks for pointing out, i will correct them bro... it is that while reading daily updates no one noticed because they read it day by day and never caught it, since you read them all at once it was easy to find those mistakes....
but i did not get the second mistake you have talked about..... kahin aap ne ussi update ko dobara to nahin padh liya?..

anyway i will go through them again to verify...
abhi chawla aur sarjoo par updates dene hein to baad mein check karunga bhai
bahot bahot shukriya issko padhne aur passand karne ke liye
ab agar issko passand kiya to you will surely like "love with a rapist" padhke dekhna bhai
thanks again

 

[FRIDAY]

Fantastic & mind blowing story.
UPDATE 11 &12 porne ke samay mera enkh pani ki barsat rukh hi nahi ja aha ta.
Mujhe vicky par bahut guass aia salena apna behan ko bach nahi paya. Aap ye dolout,uska thande dimag ke kia ghasa charye ga ?
Main itna emotional ho gea ki bhul hi gea ye kahini hai.Mujhe lag raha ta main hi 5 gundey ko jake pitu.Itna gharai main doob gaye tha. Jab bad me vicky unsaab ko ek ke bad ek dardnak maut dia tab jake dil ko sakun mila.Interview ki idea super tha.
Aapne har scene pe chota chota chiz bhi deatail kia jo bahut shanndar tha.
Aapne story ke nam ek dum perfect select kia kiu ki hero pahle scene se hi farar ho jata hai.
Is story ke phale se leke anth tak esa laga ki main koi hindi film dekh raha hu.
Thanks for this unique story..
Hats off to your writing skill and hard work.

 

[Casinar]

Fantastic & mind blowing story.
UPDATE 11 &12 porne ke samay mera enkh pani ki barsat rukh hi nahi ja aha ta.
Mujhe vicky par bahut guass aia salena apna behan ko bach nahi paya. Aap ye dolout,uska thande dimag ke kia ghasa charye ga ?
Main itna emotional ho gea ki bhul hi gea ye kahini hai.Mujhe lag raha ta main hi 5 gundey ko jake pitu.Itna gharai main doob gaye tha. Jab bad me vicky unsaab ko ek ke bad ek dardnak maut dia tab jake dil ko sakun mila.Interview ki idea super tha.
Aapne har scene pe chota chota chiz bhi deatail kia jo bahut shanndar tha.
Aapne story ke nam ek dum perfect select kia kiu ki hero pahle scene se hi farar ho jata hai.
Is story ke phale se leke anth tak esa laga ki main koi hindi film dekh raha hu.
Thanks for this unique story..
Hats off to your writing skill and hard work.

Bahot shukriya bhai.
Mujhe khushi hai k aap ko kahani passand aayi.
Rape scene to ek hi hai bhai issi liye to kahani bani varna kahani hi nahin hota ... aaguey ke sab updates befikar hokar padho enjoy zarur karoge.
Aur apni raae zarur dete chalna bhai.
Thanks again.

 

[FRIDAY]

Bahot shukriya bhai.
Mujhe khushi hai k aap ko kahani passand aayi.
Rape scene to ek hi hai bhai issi liye to kahani bani varna kahani hi nahin hota ... aaguey ke sab updates befikar hokar padho enjoy zarur karoge.
Aur apni raae zarur dete chalna bhai.
Thanks again.

Thanks for reply Bro.
Maine aaj hi sari updates pore chuka hu.
Story ki plot shandar hai.
kuch bol na ki shabd nahi hai.
Vicky MLA aur ACP se badla lega ye pahle se hi samaj gea tha.MLA ki beta ko bahut daradnak mauth mila.Jungle mai mangle jesa.
Baki 4 gundey ko marne ke samay Rita bahut madad ki.Uska inam bhi use mil geya.Rathod ko Reshma mil gea.Khan ko comissionar ki post mil gea.Bahut fantastic ending tha sab acha tha.
Magar maine socha vicky badla lene ke bad jungle mai us ladki ke saath jindegi bitaye gi.Aur in dono ke bich farheen a gea.
Khair koi baat nahi kuch pyar ek raat ki hota hai.Ise ek raat ki bhul/paap bhi kai saathe hai.
Thanks for this fantastic & wonderful story.

 

[Casinar]

Thanks for reply Bro.
Maine aaj hi sari updates pore chuka hu.
Story ki plot shandar hai.
kuch bol na ki shabd nahi hai.
Vicky MLA aur ACP se badla lega ye pahle se hi samaj gea tha.MLA ki beta ko bahut daradnak mauth mila.Jungle mai mangle jesa.
Baki 4 gundey ko marne ke samay Rita bahut madad ki.Uska inam bhi use mil geya.Rathod ko Reshma mil gea.Khan ko comissionar ki post mil gea.Bahut fantastic ending tha sab acha tha.
Magar maine socha vicky badla lene ke bad jungle mai us ladki ke saath jindegi bitaye gi.Aur in dono ke bich farheen a gea.
Khair koi baat nahi kuch pyar ek raat ki hota hai.Ise ek raat ki bhul/paap bhi kai saathe hai.
Thanks for this fantastic & wonderful story.

bahot bahot shukriya bhai, mujhe khushi hui ke aap ko kahani passand aayi

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel

 

[Asif khan]

Boht hi soooper dooooper story h
( Faraaaar)
Kia Kaho bahi ap ki is story k bare mai jitni tareef Kro kmm h

Mere pass to lafz hi nahi hain ap ki tareef kliye ,
Ap ki writing style boht badhiya h
Ap ne Jo characters create kiye hain awesome zabardast
Is story mai sub se best se best cheez hero k dimagh ko dikhya h ap ne beautiful .