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Sweetkaran

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UPDATE 9
The ROJANPAKU.

Mea is waqt riya ke bataye huye address ke anusar ek wisal lakdi ke gate ki par khada tha..
Jo ki meri lakh kosisso or dam lagane par b nai khulraha tha..

Par tabi kisine mere pichese uss darwaje ko sirf apni ek ungli se touch kiya..
Jiske chalte wo darwaja ek dam se khul gaya..
Or me dhadham se niche girgaya..

Mea toa chounk gaya tha ki ye kon tha jissne sirf ek ungli se ye bhari darwaje ko hiladiya..
Or jab mea piche mudkar dekha toa..

Waha karib 7 ft lamba chauda admi tha..
Achi khasi body thi..
Par face se umarwale lag rahe the..
Aisa admi mene aajtak nai dekha tha..
Jiske karan mea unhe dekh dar gaya tha..


Or tabi wo admi bole..

Tumhe kuch kaam tha bache..
Jo tum hamare martial art school mea aaye ho..

Unki bhari awaaj or bolneke tarikese mea or b dar gaya..
Or waha se bhagte huye..
Kuch aage jakar piche mud bola ki..

Sry sir lagta hea mea galat jagha aagaya tha..

Tabi mea kisi pol jaisi chij se takrakar niche girgaya..

Or jab mene samne dekha toa..
Wahi budha admi mere samne khada tha..

Unko yaha dekh mea piche dekhne laga..
Jaha kuch sec pehle wo khadete..
Muje toa apni ankho par wiswas he nai horaha tha ki itni jaldi kaise koi yaha aasakta hea..

Tabi ek baar fir muje shock mea dekh wo bole..

Tum itni jaldi kaha chaldiye..

Isbar unki awaj mea narmi thi..
Jisse sun mea kuch sochte huye unse bola ki..

Kya aap martial arts master ho..

Jispar wo admi haste huye bole ki..

Ho ho..
Dekha jaye toa mea koi master toa nai hu..
Par mere jawani ke dino se lekar ab tak mea ek b fight nai hara hu..

Unki baate sun muje yakin hogaya ki..
Riya isi jagha ke bareme bol rahi thi..
Or sayad ye he master hea..

Itna soch mea ekdam se khada hua or unhe namaste kartay huye bola..

Mera naam riyansh sharma hea..
Or muje riya singh nea yaha ka address diya tha for martial arts training..

Jispar ek baar fir haste huye wo bole ki..

Tum kafi sanskari ho..
Acha hea..
Toa riya ne tumhe ye jagha recommend ki..
Tk hea..
Chalo andar chal te hea..

Itna bol wo aage badne lagge..
Mea b yes sir bol unke piche holiya..
Or unke sath chalne lagga..

(Yaha batadu ki
ROJANPAKU pure 3 hisso me divided hea..
Yani ki 3 building hea alag alag..
Jisme 1st aati hea entry hall building..
Joki purane style ke banglow jaise thi..

Insab ke bareme detail mea aage bataunga jab jarurat hogi..
Filal toa itna jaana jaruri hea ki..
Ye ghar kam school kafi bada hea..)

Unke piche chal ham ghar ke outer side jaha garden tha waha se jaa rahe the..

Tabi mene unse pucha..

Kya aap yaha martial arts sikhate ho..
(Ye mene isliye pucha qki..
Ye jagha muje normal ghar ke tarha he dikh rahi thi..
Or nahi yaha koi sorgul tha ya koi student..)

Jispar unhone jawab diya ki..

Haa..
Ham yaha martial arts b shikateh hea..
Tum kis type ka martial arts shikna chahte ho..

Jispar mene khush hote huye kaha...
Karate..

Abi mene itna he kaha tha ki..
Mere kano me kuch ghirne ki awaje aai..

Or jab aage chal ham us jagha pohache jaha se awaje aarahi thi..
Toa mene dekha ki waha..
Shorts pehne ek ladka pero or hatho se lakdiyo ke tukde kar raha tha..

Usse dekh mere muh se apne aap he nikal gaya..

WTF ye kya hea..

Mene ye baat thodi jorse boldithi..
Jispar sayad uss ladke ka dyan b meri taraf gaya par wo bina kuch kahe firse apne kaam mea laggaya.

Par isbar usne itna jor se kick mari thi wo lakdi ka ek tukda ud mere taraf aane lagga..
Jisse mea kafi dar gaya tha..

Par wo tukda muje chuta usse pehle he..
Mere sath me khade bhude aadmi(shamsher singh) ne wo lakdi ka tukda apni ek ungli se chop maar tod diya..

Jisse dekh mea achambit tha..
Tabi we bole ki..

Ye he appachi hoppachi..
Thailand se hea .
Or pichle 5 salo se yahi rehta he hamare sath..
Ye muay thai specialist hea..

Or sayad aaj hamare yaha guest dekh wo overdo kargaya..

Jispar mene sirf apana sar khujatejhuye smile ki..
Or sochnelagga.

Ki aisi b insaan hote hea kya..

Mea abi ye sab sochte huye aage bad he raha tha shamsher singh(inko ham kuch samay ke liye elder kahenge) ke sath tabi meri najar pass he ke kamre mea gayi..
Jisske andar jhakne ke liye kafi kam gao thi..
Karib 6 inch ke ass pass..

Andar ek hot si ladki..
Japanese kapdo mea..
Joki kafi short the..
Itne short ki agar wo jukti toa sayad uski panty b dikhti..
Uparse se she was dam hot..
Perfect figure..
With beautiful bossoms..

Aisa nai tha ki riya khubsurat nai thi..
Par riya jaise kapde pehntithi or rehti hea..
Usme wo sundar dikhti hea par ye ladki bohot he jada sexy thi..

Abi mea usse dekh he raha tha ki..

Andar wo ladki apne hath mea talwar liye khadi thi..
Or uske ird gird char talvar square mea khadi hui thi..
Or with in blink of sec isne un charo talwaro ko apni talwar se katdiya..

Abi mea uske taraf achambe se dekh hea raha tha ki..
Wo boli..
Waha chupke kya dekh rahe ho tum..
Tumhe saram nai aati..

Uski baate sun mea dar gaya tha..

Par tabi uss ladki ne apne piche ke parde par gol akar me apni talwar chalayi..

Jaha se hat pehne ek chinese aadmi nikla..
Jiske hatho me ek camera tha..
Or uss camera mea wo iss ladki jiska naam shigure hea..
Or wo chinese admi ka naam ma kensie..

Ha toa ma kensie apne camera mea shigure ke pics khich rahe the..
(Ab aap sab samaj honge ki ye banda kaisi pics khich raha tha..
Qki ye ek no. Ka tharki insaan hea..)

Shigure ko camera dekh samajte der nai laggi ki ma kensie waha kya kar raha tha..
Isliye usne apni talwar side rakh..

Apne pero ke stockings se shuiriken blade nikali or ma kensie par fekne laggi..

Par kensie ne un sabi ko asani se dodge karte huye kaha..
Mea toa bas scenery ke photos lea raha tha..

Tabi shigure ke pheke gaya ek shuiriken mere taraf badne lagga..
Jisse ek baar fir elder ne rok muje bachaya or mujse bole ki..

Tumhe yaha waha tak jak nai karni chahiye..
Tum musibat mea fas sakte ho..
Itna bol wo age badne lagge..

Mea b unke piche chalte huye sochnelagga ki..
Riya sayad sahi bolrahi thi..
Yaha mere jinda rehne ke chances kam he hea..
Yaha aaye abi muje 1 ganta b nai hua hea..
Or 2 baar mea marte marte bacha hu..
Ab bhagwan he jaane aage kya hoga mera..

Sry fir short update kal duper ek or update aayega..
Nice update bro
 

Sweetkaran

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UPDATE 10
He Becomes The
Student.

Yaha ham jaise he ek kamre ke bahar pohache tabi..
Elder darwaja kholte huye mujse bole ki..

Riyansh yaha he hamare karate ke master..
Par inka para hamesa garam rehta he..
Toa sambhalkar rehna..

Itna bol ham andar chalegaye..
Jaha kari 6.5 ft ka ek admi hath me sharab ki bottle liye ek wooden plank ke pass khada tha jispar bohot he chote chote hole the...
Is waqt unki pit hamare taraf thi..

Tabi elder andar jate huye unse bole ki..

Sakaki mea tumhare liye student lekar aaya hu..

Jispar wo admi ekdam se piche mudda..
Unki sakal dekh mea dar gaya tha..
Qki unki face par ankh ke pass ek bada sa cut ka nishan tha..
Upar 6.5 ft ki height or bohot he jada hatti katti body..

Elder ki baat sun sakaki gusse mea mere taraf dekhte huye sarab ka ek gut lekar bole ki..

Aapko pata heana elder meane aajtak kisi ko apna student nai banaya..
Yahi mera lakshya hea..
Par.

Itna bol apni hath ki sharab ki bottle puti khali kar usse side mea phek tea huye kehte he ki..

Yadi aap chahte he hea ki mea student lu apne under..
Par wo 3 din sea jada jinda ni reh payega meri training sea..

Apni baat complete kar unhone pass he ke wooden plank mea speed se punches mare or unme hole kardiye..
Unke punches ki speed itni thi muje unke hath tak nai dikh rahe the..

Unki ye harkat dekh..
Bina koi dusra vichar kiye.
Mea waha se gate ke taraf bhagte huye bola..

My bad..
Agar aapka motto he ki kabi student nai lena..
Toa mea kuch nai karsakta..

Mene abi apni baat puri kar gate se bahar (roomse bahar) nikla he tha ki..
Mere samne ekdam se ek admi aa khada hogaya..
Jisne white kapde pehne the .

Or mea unse takra kar niche gir gaya..
Or jab mea unke muh ke taraf dekha toa mea wahi behos hogaya..

Ab aisa q hua..
Toa ye or koi nai ROJANPAKU ke 5th master the Akisame joki jujutsu expert hea..
Or ye jab india aaye the tab inhone sholay movie dekhi thi..
Or ye usme thakur ke role se kafi pravit huye the..
Or issi karan was ye apne lose shirt joki ye anuman dalte hea..
Unme se dono hath andar ki or lekar rakhte hea..
Or jab riyansh ne inhe dekha tha..
Us waqt we iss halat me apni muche sehlla rahe the..apne hatho se joki andar the .

Or bichara oehele se dara riyansh ekdam inhe dekh itna dar gaya ki..
Wahi behos hogaya..

Riyansh ke behos hote he..

Sakaki elder or Akisame aapas mea baat karne lage..
Jispar sakaki bole ki..

Ye ladka toa hame dekhte he behos hogaya..
Ye training kya kar payega..

Uski baat sun akisame bole..

Haa or kita rude b hea ye..
Mere cute face ko dekh kaise koi behos hosakta hea..
Par isse riya ne yaha beja hea toa jarur koi baat hogi isme..

Undono ki baate sun elder haste huye bole ki..

Ho ho..
Ye bacha kafi innocent or saaf dil hea..
Ye jarur hamare kaam aayega..
Or hosakta he..
Ki ye hamara wo lakshya b pura kare..
Jisse ham aanewale samay me pura karna chahte he..

Kuch samay baad..

Mea abi b behosh he pada tha..
Tabi meri ankhe dhire dhire khulne laggi..
Tabi mere kano mea jani pehchani awaj aai ki..

Tum tk toa hona Riyansh..

Riya ki awaj sun or usse apne pass dekh..
Meri wo situation thi..
Jaise dubke ko tinke ka sahara..

Mea ek dam se riya ko gale laggne ke liye aage bada .
Par riya ke chere par jijak dikhi or wo piche hatgayi..

Tabi muje dyan aaya ki wo pancho master or elder wahi khade the..
Jinhe dekh riya ka hath pakadte huye mea bola..

Bhago jaldi riya..
Ye sab monsters hea..

Meri baat sun elder hasne lagge wahi..

Akisame bole..

Mene sahi samaja isse..
Ye kaafi rude bacha hea..

Tabi mera hath se apna hath churate huye riya boli..

Darasal Riyansh muje tumse kuch kehna tha..
I mean hamare masters ko dusro ko darana kafi pasand hea..
Tum unhe galat samaj rahe ho..

Uski baate sun mea shock mea chalagaya..
Or meare muh se sirf ek sabd nikala..

Hamare????

Jispar wo apna sar jukate huye boli..

Actually ye jagha..
Ye jagha mera ghar hea..
Or ye..(elder ke taraf hath dikhate huye..)
Mere dadaji hea..

Uski bate sun muje itna bada shock laga..
Jitna muje sayad he kabi lagga ho..
Uss ek pal ko toa u b laga ki..
Ladkiyo par kabi barosa nai karna chahiye..

In end yahi tumhari marti hea..
Or yaha toa riya ne ek nai balki che che log rakhe he meri marne ke liye..

Abi mea ye sab soch he raha tha ki..

Riya uthte huye boli..
Ab tum tk ho toa..
Mea kuch chai nasta lati hu..
Akhir pehli bar mera koi dost yaha aaya hea..

Itna bol riya bina koi meri baat sunne waha se chaligayi..

Or mea piche bas ye kehta reh gaya ki..

Muje inlogo ke sath akela mat chodo riya..

Par wo toa bina koi baat sune waha se nikal li..

Tabi un 6 ke 6 logo ne muje circle banakar gher liya tabi..

Sakai bole ki..

Dekho kaise riya is nervous bache ko yaha akela chod ke chaligayi..

Uski baate sun haste huye elder bole ki..

Ho ho..
Yeh toa bilkul wo baat hogayi..
Jab koi titli makdi ke jaal mea phas jati hea..
Or ladki usse chudane ke chakar me mehanat kar thak harke waha se titli ko or uljake chali jati hea..

Elder or sakaki ki bate sun..
Mere face ke expression aise hogaye the ki mea unse daya ki bhik mang raha hu...
Or ab kuch hua toa sayad mea wahi ro b deta ..

Tabi mere face expression dekhte huye..

Ma kensie bole ki..

Waa kitne cute expression aarahe he iske face par..

Unki baat sun elder ma kensie or sakaki tino hasne lagge..

Tabi..
Akisame unsabi ko sant karte huye bole ki..
Toa ab hame is baby butterfly ka kya karna chahiye..

Unki baat sun elder meri taraf aage badte huye bole ki..

Toa Riyansh ab mudde ki baat par aate hea..
Toa kya ab b tum hamara martial arts school join karna chahte ho..
Qki yaha tum aao ge toa apni marji sea par jana ni jana uska ham kuch keh ni sakte..
Toa kya tum tayar ho hamara or is ROJANPAKU ke student banne ke liye..

Is baar elder ki baate sun na sirf dar..
Par muje wo tej b dikha..
Jo muje khich raha tha aisa lag raha tha..
Unki ankho mea alag he chamak thi iss waqt..
Bilkul waisi jab riya muje martial art ke bareme batati ya shikati hea ..

Fir kuch der apne aap she dwand kar..
Mea apni jagha par khada hua..

Or pure confidence se bola ki..

What if
I say yes..

Delay ke liye mafi chahungi..
Thoda kaamo me busy thi..
Isliye kal se xf he open nai kar payi hu..
Jitna ban pada utna likha hea mene..
Or is week ka 4th update kal aayega..

Keep supporting..
Nice update bro
 

Sweetkaran

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UPDATE 11
The beginning.
{MEGA UPDATE 2600 Words}

Mere ha karte he..
Muje niche bithaya gaya or ma kensie mere samne ek paper rakhte huye bole..

Agar tumne ye school(dojo) join karne ka decision le he liya hea toa tumhe is agreement par sign karna hoga..

Paper ko hath mea lete huye mea bola ki..
Isme kya likha hea..

Jispar ma kensie bole ki..
Agar training ke dauran tumhe kuch b hojaye yaa tum galti sea marjau toa ham iske jimmedar nai hea..
Or naa he tum ek baar join karne ke baad jab tak hamna chahe tab tak tum ye dojo(school) nai chodsakte.
Badle mea ham ye garuntee dete he ki..
Agar tum hamari training jel paye toa tum 1 mahine mea he apne college ke sabse taqatwar ladke banjaoge..

Unki baate sun meri phati jarur thi..
Aakhir koi aisa thodi intro detay kisiko joining ke liye..
Par unki aakhri line sun..
Mene khudko dilasa dete huye..
Us paper par sign kardiya..

Tabi ma kensirkek baar fir bole ki..

Toa ab 20000 nikalo..

Mea unki baat sun shock mea tha..
Ki ye kya bolray hea..

Isliye mere muh se kyaaa nikal gaya..

Jispar wo bole ki..

Aray ab tum hamara dojo join kar rahe ho toa..
Tumhe monthly fees b toa deni hogi na..

Unki baate sun mea bola..

Itni jyaada...

Jispar wo turant he bole ki..

Agar jada lage toa 10000 he dea do..

Unke iss reply par mea unhe gur kar dekhne lagga..
Matlab abi 20000 bole or agle he pal 10000 yani ki ab thodi der mea 5000 b boldenge.

Abi mene itna socha he tha ki..

Tabi elder bole..

Kensie q pareshan kar rahe ho isse..
Dekho beta..
Fees toa deni padegina tumhe..
Warna hamara ye dojo chalega kaise agar ham tumhe free mea training denge..
Waise b ab tak hamara dojo sirf riya ke kusal netritwa ke wajase tika hua hea..
Warna ham kab ke bankrupt hochuke hote..

Unki baate kuch kuch toa meri samaj aagayi par kuch kuch baate toa sir ka 10ft upar se gayi..
Par riya ke bareme sun mea ascharya me tha ki wo akele he ghar ka sab kam kaaj karti hea..

Bichari par kitne jurm karte honge ye log..
Aisi mea alag alag chije imagine kar raha tha..

Ki kaise sakaki daru pikar hangama karte honge or kaise ma kensie riya ko chedte honge..
Wagera wagera..

Ye sab baate soch mea ekdam se khada hua or elder se bola..

Elder mea 10000 toa nai par 5000 monthly dea sakta hu..
Qki meri pocket money jada nai hea..
Jispar wo man gaye..
Or mea khud se bola ki..

Mea kisi b haal mea riya ko in sabi se bachaunga..

Tabi riya chai nasta lekar aagayi..
Or ham sabko serve karne laggi tabi..

Shigure boli ki..

Tum kis type ka martial arts shikna chahte ho..

Shigure ko bolta dekh sabi masters uske taraf achambe se dekhne lagge..
Qki wo kisi sea b baat nai karti thi..
Or utna he bolti jab uska jawab dena aniwarya ho..
Par aaj usko u bolta dekh wo b anjaan ladke se..
Sabi bohot khush b the ispar par chounkeb the..

Tabi mea bola ki..
Waise toa mea martial arts he shikna chahta hu..
Par kis type ka ye mene kabi socha nai..
Bas mea majbut or taqatwar banna chahta hu..
Taki mea khudki or hosake toa kamjoro ki madat kar saku..

Meri baate sun waha sabi ke chero par muskurahat thi..
Par elder kuch soch rahe the meri baate sun..

Tabi ek baar fir shigure boli ki..

Hmm muje lagta hea ki..
Akisame bhaiya ko he isse training deni chahiye..
Qki ab tak jitne b log yaha training ke liye aaye the..
Unki training ki surwat akisame bhaiya ne he kari thi..

Shigure ki baat sun Akisame lambi saans chodte huye bole ki..

Mea he q har baar..
Par kher choti tumne pehli baar kuch muje karneko kaha hea toa mea he iss bache ki training suru karunga..

Tabi elder bole ki..

Yea achi baat hea riyansh tumhare liye..
Ki Akisame khudse tumhe shikhana chahta h..
Bhale ab tak jitno ko b usne shikhaya he usme sea sayad he koi sahi salamat bacha ho..

Elder ki baate sun meane roni surat banate huye riya ke taraf dekha..
Ki sayad yahi meri kuch madat kare..

Tabi riya boli ki..

Tnsn mat lo Riyansh akisame bhaiya ek dam perfect hea tumhari training ke liye..
Wo bohot ache hea..

Uski baate sun mea b aapne aapko dilasa dene lagga..

Tabi akisame mere pass aate huye mujse bole ki..

Hmm toa kya tum martial arts ko uske asli form mea yani basics se sikhne ke liye tayar ho..

Jispar mene turant he haa kaha or bola ki..

Mere pass or koi chara b nai hea..
Warna mea apne clg ke karate leader ke hatho mara jaunga..

Jispar akisame smile karte huye mere sar par hath pher te huye bole ki..

Tnsn mat lo..
Agar tumne hamari training ko jel liya toa tumhe koi ni mar (death)payega..
Or tumhe pata mea b jab chota tha tab meri b halat kuch tumhari he tarha thi..

Akisame ki aakhri ki baate sun mea shock mea tha..
Qki muje yakin nai horaha tha ki..
In sabi monsters mea se kisiko kabi kisine tang kiya hoga..

Tabi ham sabi ne chai nasta khatam kiya..
Or muje ghar ke piche open ground mea laya gaya..
Or tabi mujse akisame bole ki..

Toa surwat ke liye ham defensive built up ki training karenge..
Jisse martial arts ke language mea WUSHU TECHNIQUE b bola jata hea jissea tum apni raksha apne sea 10guna jada taqatwar logo sea b kar sakte ho..

Or

(Yaha mene jaise thodi detail mea technique ke bareme bataya hea o he aage jari rakhu yaa shirf us technique ka naam batadu suggest karna aap sabi ki..
Kya karna chahiye)

Itna bol wo ek kamre mea chalegaye or waha se kuch atrangi saaman lekar aaye..
Jisme kuch chote matke the jinme miti bhari hui thi agarbati b thi or ek garam pani ki jetli or ek katora..

Ye sab saman dekh mea sochne laga ki kaisi training karwayenge ye mujse..
Ye sab soch mea dar b raha tha..
Jo sayad mere chere ko d3kh akisame samaj gaye the..
Isliye wo apna kaam karte huye mujse bole..

Tnsn matlo bache..
Tumhara pehla din hea toa ham bas basics hee shikenge..
Or rahi baat strictness ki toa mea tumhe easy easy he training dunga survat mea..

Unki baate sun muje thodi rahat mili..
Tabi unhone apne jeb mea hath dal ek shoulder band nikala jisse hamare hath pe jaha muscles hote hea..
Waha pehna jata hea..

Par ye sirf mamuli shoulder band nai tha..
Isme ek side par nukila khil jaisa kuch tha..

Abi mea uss band ko analyse kar he raha tha ki..

Akisame mere pass akar muje shirt utarne ko bole or fir mere dono hatho mea unhone wo band pehna yaa..
Or muje dono hath 90 degree par rakhne ko kaha..
Par ye sab sirf normal khade khade nai karna tha..

Ye sab muje apne gutno ko
Band karte huye khada rehte huye karna..
Tha

Ye waisi position thi..
Jaise ham squats yaa situps marte hea..
Bas yaha usi position mea khada rehna tha bina hile..
Ab aalam ye tha ki mea apne dono hatho ko jara b niche leta normal position mea toa unme lagi khil mere chest ke baju me chub ti..
Isliye mea ab hath hila b nai sakta tha..

Muje laga ki abs yahi karna hoga kuch der tak muje..
Par akisame yaha nai ruke..

Unhone miti se bhare dono chote matke mere dono hatho mea pakada diye..
Joki takriban 4 se 5 kilo honge..
Ab muje unhe pakad waisa khada rehna tha..
Or fir mere sar par garam pani se bhara hua full katora rakha..
Jisse agar mea thoda b daaye baaye yaa aage piche hilta toa wo garam ubal ta hua pani mere nange badan par girta..

Par akisame ko ye b kam laga..
Isliye unhone apne sath layi agarbattiyo ko jalaya..
Or mere bum ke niche stand par laga diya..
Jisse mea niche b ni juksakta tha..

Meri halat ye sab set up karte huye dekh he bigad gayi thi..
Or mere hath per kapne lagge the..
Par naa me apni jagha se hil sakta tha..
Warna garam pani girta mujpar na he mea apne stance ko halka juka rest le sakta warna agarbati mere bum gusti wo b garam garm na he mea apne hatho ko rest de sakta warna wo khile mujme gusti..

Kul milakar meri puri tarha se har kone se mari jaa rahi thi..

Muje uss position mea kapta dekh akisame ek marker lekar mere pass aaye or mere hatho ke dono matko par spirit or effort likha fir mere sar pe rakhe cup par endurance (sehensakti) or niche lagi aggarbiti ke stand par mind control..

Ye sab likh wo mujse bole..
Ab tumhe batane ki toa koi jarurat he nai hea muje iss training se tumhe kya laab hoga..
Mene charo main point likh diye hea..

Ab tumhe 1 gante tak aisa he khade rehna hea..
Or mea har 10 min mea tumhare sar ke upar ka garam pani bad lunga toa tum apna dyan rakhna..

Itna bol wo wahi pass me baith book padne lagge konsi toa..

Or mea unse guhar karte huye bola..

Master apne kaha tha ki..
Aap easy training doge surwat mea muje..
Par..

Abi mea apni baat puri karta ki mere left hath halka niche hua jisse waha bande band mea lagi khil mere chest ke pass gusi or dard ke mare mera balance bigda jisse meare sar ke upar ka garam pani mujpar gira..

Ab garam pani ka chatka lagte hea mea niche hua thoda toa jalti hui agarbati mere bum mea gus gayi..

Hay hay..
Mea apni kismat ko kos raha tha ki mea q yaha aaya..
Or gir ussi stance mea khada hua tabi akisame bole..

Tumhe ye jo mea training de raha hu..
Ye sabse he easy training hea..
Iske baad toa dhire dhire training or b kadi hogi..

Unki baate sun literally mere aasu nikalne lagge par uss rakshas ko mujpar ittu si b daya ni aayi..

Or karib 1 gante baad mere upar lade sara saman nikala gaya..
Or is waqt mere dono side chest par se khun beh raha tha or mere pero ko bichse agarbati hatha te he mea niche gir pada..
Yaa yuh kahu ki mea behos hochuka tha..
Par fir b kisi tarha meane wo 1 ghanta katliya tha..

Par muje behos huye hardly 15 20 min he huye honge ki muje hosh mea laya gaya or muje kapde pehne ko bol fir akisame bole ki..

Ab ham tumhari dusri training ki surwat karte hea..

Itna bol ek baar fir wo ussi kamre mea gaye jaha wo pehle gaye the..
Or is baar waha se ek bada sa truck tyre jiske bichme jo hol tha wo pack tha..
Or usske ek side sea do rashi bahar aarahi thi..

Tyre karib 50 kilo ka hoga he qki usme kuch bara hua tha joki muje badme samja..

Wo tyre lekar ham ghar ke bahar sadak par aaye or akisameAuss tyre ko ab tak aaram se ek hath se uthakar laa rahe the jaise ki usme koi wajan he naa ho..

Par jaise unhone usse road par letaya dam se awaj aai
.
Jaise koi bari chij rakhi ho..

Fir us tyre ke bich bethte huye unhone kaha ki..
Lets go for a walk..

Mea unki baate sun bola kaha tak jana he aise..

Qki mea samaj gaya tha ki wo chahte he ki mea tyre ko khich kar lekar jau..

Meri baat sun wo smile karte huye bole ki..

Jada dur nai bas central garden tak jakar wapas aana he..

Unki baat sun mea chounk gaya tha qki wo garden yaha se kam se kam nai toa b 7-10 km dur hoga he...
Or utni dur janke soch mea bola ki..

Kya aap sach bol rahe ho..
Wo garden dusre town mea hea..
Or aap chahte ho mea waha tak ye tyre par aapko bithakar isse khicte huye lekar chalu..

Jispar wo ek damse serious face banate huye boleki nai..

Mea chahta hu ki tum isse lekar waha tak bhagte huye jau..

Itna bol unhone ek chabuk type kuch toa nikala or usse mere pith par marne lagge..
Jaise bel ya goadhe ko mara jata he bhagne ke liye..

Yaha ye sab riya khade ho dekh rhi thi or kuch na ho iski prathna b kar rahi thi..

Yaha ham nikle the tab toa duper ka samay tha par aate aate hame sham hochuki thi..

Or ham jaisi ROJANPAKU pohache tab muje baramde me he chod akisame bole ki..

Aaj ke liye itna he kafi hea..
Aaj toa mene sirf tumhari body ko warmup karwaya tha..
Par kalse asli training suru hogi..
Or ghar jate he apne in sabi jakhmo ko saaf kar lena yaad se mea ni chahta ki tum 1 din ki training ke baad he mar jau..

Itna bol wo toa andar chalegaye..
Par mea yaha piche jamin par padha hua tha..
Or mere sarir ke almost har visible jagha se khun nikal raha tha..
Or mere per b chil gaye the...

Mea badi muskil se khada hua or main gate jo ki yaha ka entrance gate b hea uske taraf jate huye khudse bola ki..

Aahhhhn..
Ye kaise jaanwar he yaha..
He bhagwan mere per sun padgaye hea..
Dard itna horaha he ki an mujse ek kadam b chala nai jaraha..
Ab mea yaha fir kabi nai aunga..
Haa mea aaj he ye dojo chod raha hu..

Tabi appachi mere pass aya or mujse bola ki..

Muje jada kuch toa banane nai aata par appachi tumhare liye ye lakdi ka pole banakar laya hea..

Usse wo pole lete huye mene thanks kaha or aage jate huye fir sochne laga ki..

Agar mea appachi ko apna master chunta toa sayad behtar hota..
Isne toa muje meri madat ke liye ye pole b banakar diya..

Tabi muje pichese riya ne roka or mere karib aate huye wo mujse boli ki..

I hope tumhara aaj ka din acha gaya ho..
Tum aisehe mehenat karte rehna riyansh..
Muje kafi khushi hui aaj tumhe training karta dekh..
Kal isse b jada mehnat karna..

Itna bol wo waha se chali gai..
Ye sab baate ussne mere karib aakar kahi thi..
Jisse mea uske sundarya sea manmohit ho gaya tha..
Or fir ek baar apna decision badal te huye mea khudse bola ki..

Sayad muje kuch din or training lea he leni chahiye..
Itna bol mea muskurate huye aage badgaya apne ghar ki orr..


Sry sry sry very very sry frnds..
Mea janti hu aap sabi ko lagta ho ga ki mea wada kartoa leti hu par nibha nai pati par muje maaf karna itne din gayab rehne ke liye..
Almost 1 week hogaya he mene update nai diya..
Par muje sahi mea waqt nai mil raha tha..
Aisa nai tha mea jara b free naibhui..
Par jab hui tab thaki hui thi so likhne ka man nai hota tha..
Ye update b meane 2 din mea 2 2 gante lagakar likha hea..
Pure 4 ganto ki mehnat ke baad ye update bana hea..
Pls maaf karna or iss update ko enjoy karna..
Kal ek or update dea pau iski kosis rahegi meri puri..
Qki sunday ko mea treak ko jaa rahi hu so Saturday ko he update dea du iski puri kosis rahegi..

Hope you like this update..
Nice update bro
 

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Thoda girtte padte or rote huye mea ghar pe pohach gaya..
Jaha mere nasib ne pehli baar mera sath diya..
Qki iss waqt ghar pe sayad koi nai tha..
Waise b mea hamesa ghar par aata tha tab mea apni spare key he use karta tha..
Or aaj b waisa he kiya..

Sabse pehle meane jakar kuch khaya qki muje kafi bhuk lag rahi thi..
Fir nah kar apne jakhmo pe davai lagayi or fir apne kamre mea aagaya or bahar

do not disturb
I m studying.

Aisa board laga dia..
Joki mea aksar kiya karta tha jab muje kuch jaruri padna hota ya mere exams hote..
Par aaj mea nai chahta tha ki koi muje iss halat mea dekhe..

Apne kamre mea aakar mea apne bed par letgaya..
Or lette he muje nind aagayi..
Raat mea mere kamre ka darwaja nok b hua par mea bohot he gehri nind mea tha..

Jo ki sidha shubhe he khulti hea..
Wo b alarm ke bajne se pehle..
Qki muje badi jor ki toilet aayi thi..
Or jaise he mea bed sea utha mere sarir mea kar kar ki awaje aane lagi..
Pura sarir akad chuka tha..

Or dard ke mare mere halki chikh b nikal gayi..
Par toilet b badi jor ki aarahi thi..
Isliye mea jaise taise utha or apne room mea he attached bathroom mea jaa fresh hua..
Or garam pani se nahaya..

Tab jakar kuch rahat mili..
Or fir ready ho bina nasta kiye he clg ke liye nikal gaya..

Yaha ab college ki thodi boring baate skip karte huye aage badte hea..

Ha toa ab recess ho chali thi..
Or hamare class mea riya iss waqt apne table pe he beth tiffin kha rahi thi..
Uska bench last mea tha or tk uske piche lockers the..
Jisme ham apni wo books ya jaruri ke chije rakhte the jo hume daily use hoti thi..
Or wo ache khase bade the..

Tabi riya ko dekh wahi do ladke aapas mea baat karne lage jo riya par line marna chahte jinka koi khass bada role toa nai hea story mea issliye unhe ham b1 or b2 he kahenge..

Riya ko dekh b1 kehta he b2 se ki..

Dekh bhai aaj riya uss gadhe(riyansh) ke sath nai gayi lagta he khana khane..

B2 b b1 ki baate sun riya ke taraf lalchayi najro se dekhte huye bolta he ki..

Ha bhai sahi kaha tune..
Lagta isse pata chal gaya ki wo gadha riyansh kisi kaam ka nai hea..

Itna bol wo dono hasne lagte hea tabi class mea omkar aata he(karate club leader jo riyansh se ladna chahta hea or isliye usse dundraha he pichle 2 dino se)

Omkar class mea aate he apne hath mea pakde do pathar jo har dam he uske hatho mea hote unhe todte huye..

Puri class me jor se puchta hea ki..

Riyansh sharma kaha hea.
Kisiko pata hea..

Ek omkar ko apne samne wo b gusse mea dekh sabi bache dare huye the..
Qki bhale he insab ka pehla saal ho clg mea par insabi nea omkar ki hevaniyat dekhi thi..
Jab cricket club ke leader ko omkar ne ussi ke bat se mara tha or ant me uski bat ko apne he pero se do tukdo me tod diya tha..

Omkar ki baat sun sabi ne darte huye na me sar hilaya or kuch logone naa b kaha..

Jispar omkar me guse mea black board par gusa mara..
Or fir jaate huye sab se bola..
Ki agar yaha koi b usski mujse chupne ya bhagne mea madat kar raha hea toa..
Soch lena ki mea uska kya hasar karunga..
Chahe wo ladki ho ya ladka..

Omkar ke jate he puri class aapas mea khusar phusar karne lagi..
Or b1 b2 be apas me baat karte huye bole ki..

Sala iss riyansh ka nasib he kharab hea..
Pata nai kya kiya hoga usne jo omkar patil uske piche pada hea isbar..

B1 ki baat sun b2 bolta he..

Sahi kaha bhai..
Pehle dinesh or ab omkar..
Pata nai riyansh omkar se kaise bachega..
Dinesh se toa wo karate class chod bachgaya tha..
(Qki bohot kam logo ko pata tha ki..
Riyansh ne khudse har mani thi apne aapko winner gosit hone ke bavjood)

Wahi recess jab khatam hone ki bell hui or teacher class mea aane he wali thi ki..
Riyansh tabi riya ke pich wale locker room se nikal tha hea..
Bichara ek toa waha garmi se behal tha upar se omkar ki baate sun or dara hua tha..
Par fir b ussne ye sab riya ko nai jahir hone diya or jakar apne seat jo ki riya ke bagal mea he uspar beth gaya..
Jisse riya ke alwa kisi ne b nai dekha tha..

Riyansh ke aate he riya usse kehti hea..

Riyansh jara apni halat dekho..
Ac ke chalte rehne par b kis tarha tum pasine mea bhig gaye ho..
Or kab tak aise he chupte rahoge..
Kabi na kabi toa tumhe samna karna he hoga omkar ka..

Jispar riyansh lambi saans chodte huye bolta he ki..

Kya kar sakta hu me or riya..
Tum b janti ho..
Meri abi ke capability ke anusar me agar omkar se ladta hu toa..
Mera haarna tay hea..
Isliye jab tak meari training thodi aage na bade or me taqatwar na banu tab tak yahi ek chara he mere pass..
Waise b master akisame ne b yahi kaha tha ki muje kamse kam 1 month training ke baad he mea omkar ko hara paunga..

Meri baat sun riya ne b aage kuch nai kaha tabi class mea teacher ki entry hoti hea..
Or fir aage ke lectures b aise he khatam hojate hea..

Or clg chutne ke tym mea or riya clg se bahar jane ko hote hea..
Par riya muje rokte huye kehti hea ..

Pehle hame dekhna chahiye ki waha koi tumhare liya ruka toa nai hea..
Qki jaha tak muje lagta hea omkar ne apne dosto ko khada kar rakha hoga gate par..

Or hua b aisa he..
Clg ke do gate the..
Ek front or back or dono par he omkar ke bande khade the..
Mere liye..

Isliye ham chipte huye clg ke garden ke side aaye qki ye side bohot rarely koi aata tha..
Qki yaha sirf gardening club members aate the..
Or ab tak mea he ek louta member tha is club mea..

Waha aa ham ab bahar kaise nikla jaye yahi soch raha tha tabi mera dyan samne ke fence(jali jo ki amuman har clg ya school mea hoti he hea walls ke upar) par gaya..
Or mene riya se kaha hame iske upar chadkar he uss par jana hoga..

Hamare pass or koi chara nai hea..

Riya ne b sehmati jatayi or palak japakte he wo upar chadgayi..
Usse chadne ke tarike se lag he nai raha tha ki..
Wo koi inshan ho..
Balki aisa lag raha tha..
Ki riya ke pankh he or wo udte huye upar chad rahi ho..
Itne fast or smooth movements the uske..

Wahi mea dhire dhire jali ko pakad upar chad raha tha..
Or upar chadte huye mea riya se bola ki..

Riya tum ye mat samajna ki mea bhag raha hu..
Bas ye ek strategic retreat hea..
Taki mea puri tayari se usse lad saku..

Riya meri baate sun muskurate huye khudse bolti hea..

Acha he ab riyansh thoda manly behave kar raha hea..
Or halato se samjota karne ke bajaye ab ladne ka nirnay liya he usne..

Clg se nikal ghar jakar khana wagera khakar kuch der aaram kar mea duper karib 2 baje ghar se nikla ROJANPAKU ke liye..

Jaha aaj mere kal ke tarha he 1st training hui bas kal jaha muje ek jagha par he khada rehna tha..
Aaj muje ussi position mea kado ke bich se chalna tha..
Apne pero ko band kar..

Or iss waqt mere hatho mea wahi matke the jo kal be the..

Bas mere sar pe garam pani or bum ke niche agarbati nai thi..
Par akisame muje kaha itne saste mea chodte unhone aaj muje ye training chalte huye squats marte huye karne ko kaha tha..
Wo b zig zag..
Chalte huye jisliye waha chote chote lakdo ke tukde b the jinke agal bagal se muje nikalna tha..

Surwat kuch rounds toa mene kar liye the muskil the jarur par hogaya tha mujse pura..

Fir pata nai achanak kya hua akisame ne kal wala hunter nikala or muje tej tej sqauts karne ko kaha..

Or jaha me slow hota waha mere bum par hunter padta..

Ek hadbar toa mea niche b gir jisse waha lage lakde ke tukde mere body par lage jisse uss jagha dard hone laga..
Or kuch jagha se chamdi b chil gayi thi..

Par simple or bhole dikhne wale akisame devil bane huye the yaha..
Or meri jamkar mare jaa rahe the..

Mea bohot thak gaya tha isliye mea apne gutno ke bal baitha gyaa..
Meri halat dekh akisame bole tk he thoda break lete hea..

Wahi baramde mea baithe chai ki chuski lete huye baki ke sabi masters yaha mera entertainment show dekh rahe the..

Tabi elder bolte hea ki..

Akisame ko riyansh ki surwati training ke liye chunna bilkul sahi nirnay tha..
Akisame naujawan khun ko bakhubi samajta hea..

Wahi bear pite huye sakaki elder baat sun kehte hea ki..

Agar ye bacha aise he nakhre karta rahega toa..
Taqatwar banne se pehle he ye pit jayega..

Jispar elder ke chere par smile aajati he tabi ma kensie chai pite huye shigure ke piche baith uski choti dress ka fayada utha uski panty dekhne ki kosis karte hea..

Or waise he kosis karte huye haste huye kehte hea..

Kya baat hea sakaki tumhe kabse dusro ki chinta hone lagi..

Par ma kensie abi kuch d3kh pate tabi shigure apni sword jo wo hamesa apne sath he rakhti hea..

Usse nikal ek baar gol guma apne Mayan mea fir rakh deti hea..
Or uski talwar ke gol gumne se usne ma kensie ke tk 1cm aage talwar gumayi..
Jisse agar wo thoda b aage aate toa unki naak cut jati..

Makensie b achanak huye hamle ke karan piche hogaye..

Tabi elder sakaki se bolte hea ki..

Toa sakaki q na tum usse training do..
Agar tumhe lagta hea ki wo sahi nai kar raha hea toa..

Jispar sakaki waha se nikal te huye kehte hea..

Mene pehle he kaha tha..
Mea kabi b kisiko apna student nai banaunga..

Tabi appachi utsahit hote huye apne bhole andaj me kehte hea..

Toa kya appachi usse shikha sakta hea..

Jisse sun shigure ne kaha..

Tum or usse shikhana chahte ho..
Aisa sochna b mat..
(Ab aisa q kaha ye aage pata chalega..)

Wahi appachi shigure ki baate sun..

Bacho ki tarha muh chota kar kone mea baith jata hea.
Jisse elder samjate huye kehte hea..

Aray beta..
Uske kehne ka matlab tha..
Jab riyansh thoda taqatwar hojayega tab tum usse training dena..
Qki abi wo tumhare waar mera matlab tumhari training jel nai payega..

Jisse appachi turant khush hojata hea..ki badme he sahi par wo riyansh ko kuch shikha sakta hea..

Waha karib 5 min ke break ke baad riyansh firse wahi steaps firse karne lagta hea..
Bas is baar usse knee squats marte huye aisa karna tha..(matlab ek per pehle aage rakh dusre per ke gutne ko jamin par lagana..
Fir uss per ko aage rakh pehle wale per ke gutne ko jamin pe lagana..
Ye normal gym training mea b include hota hea..)

Riyansh ko ye wala steap karta dekh ma kensie aage badh usse kehte hea..

Tumhare movements kafi steaf hea..(hard)
Unhe smooth karo thoda..
Khudko relax karo pehlea..

Or fir wo wahi steap usse karke dikhate hea..
Bas isme wo puri tarha pav niche na touch kar usse hava me he rakhte hea..
Jisse uspar jada prabhav pade..

Yea wala steap dekhne mea aisa lagta jaisa koi stretching excercis kar raha ho..
Jisse dekh akisame kensie se kehte hea..

Kensie tum ye jo steap bata rahe ho..
Agar mea galat nai hu toa..
Ye kung fu steap..

Jispar kensie haste huye akisame ko thoda side mea lejate hea..
Or kehte hea ki..

Aray bhai..
Thoda kung fu shikna b bura nai hoga..
Waise b iske basics shikne mea sabse jada samay lagta hea..

Jispar akisame chintit hote huye bolte hea..

Isliye keh raha hu..
Abi usse kung fu shikna jaldbaji nai hogi..
Pehle he isse normal basics mea he itni taklif horahi hea..

Tabi unhe yuh baate karta dekh appachi b waha aajata hea or sunne lagta hea..
Or yaha muje b unki baate sunayi de rahi thi aaramse qki wo log mujse koi jada dur nai the..

Tabi kensi haste huye aage bolte hea ki..

Kya tum hum sabi ke techniques ka mishran nai dekhna chahoge kaisa hoga..
Jispar akisame b muskurate huye bolte..

Chahta toa mea b hu..or isme maja b bohot aayega..
Par kya riyansh ki body abi ye sab jel payegi..
Jispar kensie samjate huye bolte hea ki..

Kosis kiye bina haar manna sahi thodi hea..
Waise b agar ham jo karna chahte he wo agar sahi hua toa..

Isme sabse jada fayda riyansh ka he hea..

Tabi appachi b khush hote huye bolta hea..
Mea b riyansh ko muay thai(kick boxing)
Sikhana chaunga..

Jispar akisame usse rokte huye kehte hea..

Abi nai..
Tumne ab tak kisiko nai shikhaya hea..
Or riyansh mea koi khass kabiliyat b nai hea..
Jo ham usse itna sab ek sath shikhaye.

Tabi kensie kehte hea..

Dekho..
Ham jo karenge usme sabse jada fayda kiska hea..
Kisse jald taqatwar hona hea..
Or agar isme kuch galat hojata hea or riyansh ki body ye sab nai seh pati ya wo galti se mar jata hea toa..

Ham maan lenge ki hamara usse surwat se ye sab sikhana galat tha..
Or aage jo kabi aayega usske liye insab bato ka dyan rakhenge..

Unki baate jaisi mea sunta mea apne hatho ke matke niche phek bina apna saman liye waha se bhagne lagta hu..

Or abi mea gate ke bahar aaya he tha ki..
Shigure muje lokhand ki janjeer phek pakad leti hea..

Or fir muje andar khichte huye lekar jati hea..

Jispar mea chilate huye..

Koi toa muje bachalo..
In rakshaso sea..
Pls koi toa bachaoo..

Fir mea wahi behos ho jata hu..


Sry fir delay..

Family wala part kal aayega..
Nice update bro
 

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Finally we face off.

Mea itna dar or gabra gaya tha ki jaise he shigure ne muje andar khicha mea wahi meri jaan bakshne ki guhar karte huye behosh hogaya..

Mea abi behos he tha ki koi muje bhaiya bhaiya kehte huye hila raha tha..

Badi muskil semene apni ankhe kholi..
Or jab samne dekha toa varsha meri choti
Behen mere pass beth ro rahi thi..

Usse dekh mea dukhse bola ki..

Kya choti tum b margayi ho..
Ye bohot bura hua..
Par ab ham swarg mea shanti se reh payenge meri choti behen..

Meri baat sun..
Varsha or jor se rone lagi..
Or rote huye mujse boli ki..

Kya hogaya hea tumhe bhai..
Ham abi ghar par hea..
Aapke kamre mea..
Aap ghar ke darwaje ke pass behos pade the..

Uski baate sun muje sab yaad aagaya ki kese mea behos hua tha..

Tabi riya ek dam se mere gale lag gayi..
Rona toa uska ab baand hogaya tha..
Par abi b siskiya lea rahi thi wo..

Or waisi mere gale lagge huye wo boli ki..

Aapko pata hea bhai mea kitna dar gayi thi..
Jab aap darwaje par behos pade the..
Maa papa ko b aapki chinta horahi hea bohot..
Wo toa jab maa ne aapko check kiya tab pata chala ki aap sirf behos ho..

Varsha jo kuch b bol rahi thi usme se koi b baat mere kano mea nai gayi siway iske ki mea ghar par hu abi..
Fir b ek baar confirm karne ke liye mene charo taraf dekha..
Tab jake confirm hua ki mea ghar par he hu..

Tabi mea khud se bolta hu ki..

Matlab matlab mea jinda hu or ghar par hu..

Itna soch mea nachne lagta hu apni jagha par khade ho..

Wahi varsha jo mujse gale lagi hui thi..
Muje yuh ekdam se nachta dekh gabra jati hea..

Or jor jor se chilane lagti hea ki..

Maa maaa..
Bhai.. bhaii..
Ko kuch hogaya hea maaa..
Jaldi aaoo..

(Yaha thoda family drama hota he jo sabko pata hr hoga kya hoga isliye insabi baato ko likh update ko bada na karte huye main point par aate hea)

At dinner table..

Is waqt ham sabka khana hochuka tha or ham sabi dining table bethe..
Jaha mea mere dad mom or mero choti behen maujud the..

Meri aaj ki hui halat ke wajase muje unhe ab tak jo kuch b hua wo sab batana pada..
Bas mene ladayi wala part na bataya uski jagha ye kaha ki wo muje tang karte hea..
Pehle dinesh or ab omkar..

Meri puri baat sun dad ek dam serious hote huye mujse bole ki..

Dekho beta tum apni pocket money se kya karte ho..
Ye tumhari marji hea..
Par har roj ghar par mar khakar buri halat mea aana kya hea..
Tumhe lagta hoga ki tum chup chap apne kamre mea chale jate ho toa hame kuch pata nai chalta..

Toa betaji tumhara sochna galat hea..
Tumhari puri khavar rehti hea hame..

Par jo tumne ye martial arts school join kiya hea kya ye koi normal place b he..

Yea unhone taunt marte hea huye gusse mea kaha tha..
Par mea kya bolta unhe..
Jaisi b jagha ho wo par abi meri jarurate wahi jagha puri kar sakti hea..

Isliye mene unse kaha ki..

Nai wo jagha normal nai hea..
Par mere pass normally kuch karneka samay nai hea..

Itna bol mea unki bina koi baat sune apne kamre mea chalagaya..
Pichese meri behen varsha muje awaj deti rahi par mea nai rukha isliye wo b mere piche piche mere kamre mea aagayi..

Yaha mere or varsha ke jate he papa maa ke taraf mude or sirf itna he bole ki..

Dear ..

Jispar maa ne kaha .
Ji ha boliye.

Tab papa ek dam se maa ke pass guthno ke bal baith jate hea or maa se parehsan or darte huye kehte hea ki..

Hame kya karna chahiye ab dear..
Hamara beta musibat mea hea..

Jispar maa unhe side kar uthte huye kehti hea ki..

Hame riyansh par bharosa karna chahiye..
Usne apna rasta khud chuna hea..

Maa ki baat sun dad jamin par bacho jaise Lotte huye kehte hea ki..

Kyaaa..
Is baar nai..
Tum har baar aisa he karti ho..
Agar wo martial arts school koi bura or bigda hua dojo hua tha..
Tum ye baat ko itna lightly kaise lea sakti ho..
Yaha hamare bete ki jindagi ka sawal hea..

Par maa ne unhe fir se shant rehne ko kaha..
Jispar dad ne unki baat na mante huye..

Hall mea lagi family photo ko hataya jo kafi badi thi..
Jiske piche diwar me locker or us locker ke upar ek shotgun gusi hui thi..

Jisse wo bahar nikal te huye bolte hea ki..

Sibastian(jo ki uss shotgun .company ka naam he par dad uss gun ko sibastian he bulate hea) ab waqt aagaya he bahar aaneka..
Hame he us dojo ke masters ko sabak shikana hoga..

Tabi maa unke hath se gun chunte huye jor se kehti hea..

Honey pehle meri puri baat suno..
Jo ladka pehle apni problem taklifo se bhagta tha aaj wo unse bhage bina unka samna karna chahta hea..
Hame uspar bharosa karna chahiye..

Usme tumhara or mera khun hea..
Tum chinta mat karo..

Ma ki baate sun dad sibastian ko vapas uski jagha par rakh dete hea or mako gale laga kar kehte he ki..

Sahi kaha dear tumne..
Riyansh mea hamara khun he..
Wo kabi har nai manega..
Hame chinta karne ki koi jarurat nai hea..

Papa ki baate sun maa man sochti hea ki..

Chinta toa muje hea..
Par mere khun ki nai tumhare khunki honey..
Riyansh b tumhare tarha he darpok hea..
Wo toa sukar he usme mera b khun he jo usne ab himat karke apni muskile khud hal karne ka nirnay liya hea..

Yaha clg mea..
Clg khatam hote he mea chip chipate huye bahar janeke ke liye garden ke taraf jaa raha tha..
Par aaj garden ke raste mea b kuch log khade the..

Jis karan muje garden ke upar bane 1st floor ki khidki se jump marneka socha maine..

Tabi mere piche se kandho par kisine hath rakhte huye kaha ki..

Toa tum roj iss raste sea bhagte ho..

Wo awaj sun mea darte huye piche muda toa waha omkar khada tha jisse dekh meri phat ke char hogai..

Par ham is waqt clg ke andar the jaha sab hame dekh sakte the..
Khaskar teachers isliye omkar muje kandho me hath dall clg ke pichle bhag jaha koi nai jata uss or lea aaya..

Yaha riya garden mea baith abi mera he intazar kar rahi thi..
Par mea toa omkar ke sath tha..

Omkar muje waha lejakar dekha dea deta hea

Jispar mea usse kehta hu..
Dekho omkar muje tumse nai ladna hea..
Muje jane do..

Jispar wo kuch nai kehta or muskurata hea..
JskiUmuskurahat dekh mea usse kehta hu ki..

Mea q ladu tumse..
Mene karate club b chod diya hea..
Or na hea mene koi dusra fighting club join kiya he clg mea..
Isliye muje yaha se jane do..
Qki muje meaningless fight karna pasand nai hea..

Itna bol mea waha se jane lagga..
Abi mea kuch he kadam chala tha ki..
Omkar mujse haste huye kehta he ki..

Ha ha ..
Lade bina he bhag rahe ho..
Buzdil kahi ke..
Tum pehle b stupid or kamjor the or ab b wahi ho..

Uski bate sun pata nai kya hua muje..
Mere andar avhanaka gussa panap utha or mea mudte huye usse bola ki..

Mea ab koi kamjor ya stupid nai hu..
Behtar hoga tum apne words wapis lo..

Jispar omkar muskurate huye apna stance leta he or kehta he ki..

Muje hara kar muje apne sabd lene par majbur karo..
Warna mea toa yahi kahunga..


Aaj jada bada toa ni likh payi mea..
Samay kam tha mere pass..
Par jitna b likha hea..
Usme b muje karib 2 ghante se jada lag gaye hea..
Hope aap sabi ko ye pasand aaye..
Nice update bro
 

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The Face I Don't Want
Her To See.(1750 words)

Omkar ki baate sun muje uski chaal tab toa samaj nai aayi par muje itna pata chal chuka tha ki ab mere pass or koi dusra rasta nai hea..

Or mea apne aap se bola ki..
Shant raho riyansh shant..
Tumhe bas wahi sab karna he jaisa tumne dinesh ke sath ladte waqt kiya tha..
Qki wo b karate use karta tha or ye b karate he use karega because ye karate black belt hea..

Tabi omkar ne fight ki survat karte he huye mere taraf apna muka badaya..

Omkar ka punch ki speed dekh me vhounk gaya tha..
Qki ye punch dinesh ke punch se bohot fast tha..
Or mea kuch kar pata usse pehle wo punch mere muh pe lagga or mea usse pehle sambhal pata usne turant he right per se mere left side jor daar kick mari..

Jisse mea devdaas ke paru ki tarha niche gir gaya XD..

Mere niche girte he muje laga ki kamina thoda rukega..
Par nai sale mea pata nai konsi atma gusi thi..
Jo mere niche girne par b mere pet mea laat mare jaaraha tha..

Jisse mere muh se khun nikal ne lagga..
Mene bohot kosis ki mea usse rok saku yaa khudko bacha saku par mea dono mea se kuch b nai kar paa raha tha..
Qki ek toa omkar ki speed bohot jada thi attacks ki..
Dusri wo dinesh se bohot jada powerful tha..

Or yaha muje martial arts ke kuch moves or apni basic training ko chod kuch nai aata hea..

Omkar ke attacks ka mujpar asar horaha tha par utna nai jitna hona chahiye tha..
Sayad ye sab Akisame ki training ke wajase tha..
Qki usme meri isse b jada pitai yaa yuh kahu ki buri halat hoti thi..
Par mea yaa siway maar khane ke kuch kar nai paa raha tha..

Kuch der lagatar marne par omkar ruka or mujse bola ki..

Kya hua kaha gaye tumhare wo movements jo tumne dinesh ke sath use karay the..
Kya wo sab fluke the..

Itna bol usne ek damdaar ki mere back pe maari jisse mea lete lete he giste huye 2 feet dur gaya..
Or mere muh se or b khun nikal ne laga..

Fir mere pass akar mere chest par per rakh wo bola..

Muje laga tumme dam hoga..
Isliye pichle kai dino se mea tumhe paglo ki tarha dhund raha tha..
Par tum toa mere opponent banne layak b nai ho..
Tum kamjor ho kamjor he rahoge idiot fellow..

Itna bol wo waha se jane wala he tha ki tabi mene..
Uska wo per jo usne mere upar rakha tha usse mene niche se pakad liya..

Or usse bola..
.apne sabd wapas lo omkar..
Mea kamjor nai hu..

Meri iss harkat pe omkar ke chere pe kafi herani ke bahv the..

Or wo apne per ko jatak te huye usse chudane ki kosis karne laga par meri pakad majboot thi..
Jisse frustrate ho usne dusre per se mere hath par lath marne lagga..
Jisse kuch he der me meri pakad dhilli hogai or uska per chutgaya..

Fir omkar waha se aage bad washroom chala gaya..
Jaha jakar usne apnr pant joki full length tha usse upar kar dekhne lagga..
Qki jaha se mene uska per pakada tha waha par mere ungliyon ke nishan rehgaye the or chil b gaya tha waha se..

Jisse dekh omkar apne aap se bola ki..

Uss gadhe mea itni taqat kaha se agaayi ki sirf uske pakadne se mera per chilgaya..
Aakhir kaisi training karta he wo or kya sach me wo kamjor he..

Omkar se markhane ke baad mea clg ke main gate se langdate huye bahar aaya..
Or sidha ROJANPAKU aagaya..
Yaha riya garden ke bahar wali fence ke taraf mera intazar kar rahi thi..
Par 2 gante bit ne ke baad b muje waha na pakar..
Wo waha se apne ghar ke taraf badgayi..
Usse laga ki sayad mea jaldi nikal gaya hounga waha se..

Par jab riya ROJANPAKU pohachi tab mea baramade ke side lagge nal se apne gaav saaf kar raha tha..
Iss waqt mene apna shirt utar rakha tha..

Tabi riya ka dyan mujpar gaya..
Or muje waha dekh riya mere taraf aate huye wo mujse boli ki..

Aray riyansh tum kab yaha aaye..
Mea tumhara waha..

Abi wo itna he boli ki tabi uska dyan mere gavo par gaya..
Qki omkar ke punches or kicks ke wajase mere back or chest par nille nille nishan padgaye the..
Or kaha kaha se toa khun b beh raha tha..

Tabi riya ekadam se mere pass aayi or mujse boli ki..

Ye sab kaise hua riyansh..
Kahi omkar ne tumhe pakad toa nai liya tha clg mea .

Riya ko ekdam apne piche dekh mea hadbada gaya tha..
Or uski baate sun mea hadbadate huye bola..

Naj nak riya..
Wo mea class se loutte samay stairs par gir gaya tha..

Meri baate sun riya meri taraf aise dekhne laggi jaise usse pata ho ki mea juth bol raha hu..
Tabi muje daate huye wo boli ki..

Ye kaisa reason tha riyansh..
Konsi sidiya thi jo tumhe iss tarha ke gaav huye hea..
Juth mat bolo mujse..

Fir b mea apne baat pe adte huye usse waha se uthte huye bolaki..

Nayi riya mea tumse juth nai bolsakta..
Mea sachi gir gaya tha..

Tk hea muje ab jana chahiye master akisame mera intazar kar rahe honge training ke liye..

Fir bina uski koi baat sune mea waha se akisame ke room ke taraf chala gaya..

Pichese riya muje awaj deti rahi par mea nai ruka..
Or jab wo mere taraf badne wali thi tabi uske kano mea Sakaki ki awaj padi jisse sun wo rukh gayi..joki thi..

Ruk jau riya..

Riya - par master riyansh..

Abi wo apni baate puri karti tabi sakaki usse bole ki..

Riya meri baat dyan se suno..
Ek kahawat he hamare america me ki..

There is always a face that man don't want women to see..

Or sayad riyansh b wahi chahta he ki tum uski haar ko naa jano..

Sakaki ki baate sun riya samajte huye haa mea sir hilati hea or waha se apne kaam ke liye chali jati hea..

Wahi akisame ke kamre mea..
Akisame muje niche bitha mere hatho ko hila kar kuch karte huye bole ki..

Koi gabrane ki baat nai hea..
Sirf 2 bone dislocate huye hea..
Mea unhe abi tk kardunga..

(Mene jaise ki bataya tha..
Akisame ke pass bhale he doctor ki degree na ho par unhe ancient se lekar modern tak sabi types ke medical ilaj karne aate hea..
Jisme surgery or bones ke treatment ke liye wo expert b hea or iska unka clinic b hea jaha he part tym kaam karte hea..{matlab sirf shamko})

Akisame ne apni baat complete kar mere hath ko jod se moda jisse kad kad ki awaje aayi or muje tej dard hua..
Par agle he pal mera hath normally move kar raha tha..
Bas dislocate honeke wajase waha halki sujan thi..


Or jab mene piche mud unko thanx bolne wala tha tab unke chere par badi wali smile thi jisse dekh mea bola ki..
(Mene unhe sab bata dua tha ki clg mea kya hua tha)

Mere sath jo kuch b hua uspe aapko hasi aarahi hea???
Mene itni khatarnak or bhayanak training ki ki nai jellihor usska fal kya mila..
Mea kuch seconds mea he haar gaya..
Aise mea kya taqatwar ban paunga..

Meri baat sun akisame bole ki..

Nai tumne sahi kaha ye hasne ki baat nai hea..
Toa ab tum kya karna chahte ho..
Usse badla lena or usse jitna usne tumhe pita utna he usse b pitna ???

Is waqt akisame ke kamre me bhale he mea or wahi maujood the..
Par waha baki ke charo masters
(sakaki,shigure,ma kensie, appachi) b maujood the or hamari baate sun rahe the kamre ke bahar se qki kamre ke dono gate khule the or we charo dono gate ke pass khade the..

Akisame ki baate sun mene unse apne halke aaye aasu saaf karte huye kaha ki..

Me me jab koi chij galat ho toa usse galat kehna chahta hu..
Par me aisa karu toa b kisiko kuch farak nai padta..
Isliye isliye jo muje sahi lage uss chij ko karne ke liye muje taqat ki jarurat hea..

Par par mere pass na hi taqat or na hi sahas hea..

Meri baato se waha maujood pacho masters prabhavit huye the bohot..

Or tabi akisame apne hatho ki muthi bana farsh par marte huye(dhire se bohot) bole ki..

Toa tk hea..
Toa kal se ham tumhari asli martial arts ki training suru karenge..
Jisme basics ke sath sath techniques b sikhayenge ham sabi tumhe..

Akisame ka itna he kehna tha ki tabi appachi jo apni khushi control ni karpaya wo ek damse kamre mea agaya..
Khus toa baki sabi b the par appachi jada he khus tha qki usse uska 1st student milne wala tha..

Wahi akisame ye soch rahe the ki..

Taqat jo dusro ki bhalai ke liye use karni ho..

Bhale he ye ladka chota he abi par iski samaj insabi chijo mea bohot badi hea..
Aakhir jo mene apne teacher se kaha tha jab mea martial arts shikna chahta tha aaj wahi mere pass fir aagayi hea..

Tabi unka dyan aapachi ke baato se tutta hea jo ki thi..

Appachi apne dono hatho ko muthi bana apas mea marte huye kehta he ki..

Ha ha appachi is ready..

Itna bol wo riyansh ko ek hath se utha apne sath lejane lagta hea..
Tabi akisame usse rokte huye kehte he ki..

Ruko ruko appachi tumhara josh bohot acha hea par..
Tumhe abi khudko kabu mea rakhna nai aata he khaskar apni taqat ko..

Jispar par appachi sochte huye bolta he ki..
Tumne abi jokuch b bola khashkar kabu rakhna n all mere samaj nai aaya akisame..
Wese b hindi bohot hard he or muje itne bhari word ni samaj aate..

Wahi undono ki baate sun mea appachi ke hatho jatpatte huye bola..

Tumhe nai pata akisame kya bol rahe he naa he tumhe kabu karna aata he..
Nai nai me ni aaunga..

Tabi appachi bolta he ki..

Riyansh bhale he muje hindi achese naa aaye par muje bhure logo ki G..d kese mari jaati he ye aata he or mea tumhe ye sab muay thai se shikaunga..

Wahi piche baki chro masters appas mea kuch baate karte hea haste huye..
Nice update bro
 

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Master Sakaki James (2300 words)

Next day in ROJANPAKU..

Kal akisame ne jaise muje technical training dene ke liye raji huye the..
Tabi turant he appachi muje uthakar training ke liye lea gaye the..
Jisme mea tin baar behos hua tha..
Or meri body par ab tak ke kiye gaye training se dugne gaav the..

Muje toa laga tha ki mea isbaar pakka parlok sidhar gaya hu par pata nai ma kensie ne kya pilaya jisse mea turant hosh me aagaya or mere gavo ke bharne ki speed b bad gayi thi..
Joki muje agle din shubhe uthkar pata chali qki shubha tak mere sarir pe gaav ke nishan jarur the par naa toa usme dard tha na he kuch ehsas ek dam normal lag raha tha muje..

Ab appachi ne aisi kya training di wo toa aage pata chalega par ma kensie ke bareme aap sabi ne introduction me pada he hoga ki..
Chinese kung fu ke sath sath wo acupuncture or ayurvedic medicine expert b hea..
Unhe aisi aisi davaiya pata he jo sayad he is duniya me koi or janta hoga..
Khair aage badte hea ab..

Ha toa me abi akisame ke samne khada tha jaha meri roj ko basic training hochuki thi or ab baari thi techniques sikhne ki..
Or wo uski surwat karne he wale the..

Tabi hame ped ke pass khade hokar dekh rahe sakaki master ko akisame bolte he ki..

Sakaki riyansh ki techniques ki training suru hone se pehle kuch advice dena chahoge..

Tabi sakaki ekdam se hadbadate huye bole ki..

Nai nai mea kisiko koi advice nai deata..

Unki baate sun mea apne aap se bola ki..

Toa fir har dam mere ird gird khade ho q gurte rehte ho muje..

Or sayad akisame ke dimagh mea b yahi baat chal rahi thi..

Tabi baat ko badalte huye mea akisame se bola ki..
Ek pathar ki murti jispar karate ke kapade pehnayegaye the uske taraf ishara karte huye bola ki..

Ye kya he master (aki)

Jispar akisame smile karte huye bole ki..

Ye mera spcl training device hea..
The Thrower..

Unki baate sun itna toa samaj gaya tha ki mea muje ise utha na he or syaad phekna b..
Isliye uss murti ke pass jaa meane usse uthane ki kosis ki..
Par wo murti mujse uthi he nai..

Tabi mea akisame se bola ki ye bohot bari hea..

Jispar wo bole ki..

Bhari toa honi he hea..
Pathar ki murti jo hea..
Laghbagh 80kg wajan hoga is murti ka..

Unki baate sun mea hang hogaya tha..
Ki 80kg wajan muje uthana hoga..

Tabi wo aage bole ki..

Dekho riyansh surwat ke liye ham jo easy techniques hea wahi use karte hea..
Toa suno riyansh dyan se..
Ye jo technique he isse tum defense or attack dono ke liye use karsakte ho..
Jis karan se ye technique bohot he jada mahattvapoorn hojati hea martial arts ke liye..

Tabi mea murti ko uthake phekne ki kosis karte huye bola ki..

Par ye murti kafi bari hea kya karu mea..

Jispar akisame mujse rokte huye bole ki..

Tumhe murti ke wajan ko dyan me ni rakhna he..
Tumhe murti ke centre of gravity par dyan dena he..
Jisse tumhe murti ka pura wajan uthaneke bajaye uska 1/4th he uthana hoga baki ka kaam centre of gravity he kar degi..
Itna bol unhone uss murti ke pass aa..

Uske bich wale hisse par ek hath rakh dusra hath uski gardan pe rakha or agle pal wo murti hava mea gol gol gum rahi thi..

Unhone ye sab itni aasani se kiya tha kya bole..

Unko ye sab karta dekh mere muh se apne app he ..

Amazing nikla..
Jisse sun unhone wo murti ko hava me he rok firse niche rakha or bole..

Ye bilkul b amazing nai tha..

Jisse sun me apne aap se bola ki..

Beta riyansh jaldi practice suru kar warna akisame apni philosophy ki class suru kardenge phir .Se..

Kuch ganto baad..
Akisame ki training khatam kar..
Ab baari thi ma kensie ki..

Isliye ab maidan me akisame ki jagha ma kensie the..
Or mea b toa tha he..
Par ek or shaks tha jo ped ke pass khade ho hame ghur raha tha..

Aap sab samaj he gaye honge mea Sakaki ki baat kar raha hu..

Khair ma kensie training suru karne se pehle mujse bole ki..

Riyansh me tumhe pehle attacking or defending ke fundamentals sikhaunga..

Itna bol unhone muje kuch steaps bataye jinki mea practice karne laga tabi wo bole ki..

Iss technique se tum uss jagha par attack kar sakte ho jaha opponent defend ni kar payega..

Unki bate sun wo steap continue karte huye he mea bola ki..

Master ma ye steap ko fight mea kaise use karna hea..
Qki muje sirf steaps he bataya tha unhone par usse use kaise or kab karna he ye nai..

Tabi unhone pass he jati hui riya ko roka or usse hamare pass bulaya or usse kaha ki riya tum mujpar attack karo..

Itna bol unhone apne sar se apni black round hat nikal di..
Jiske niche unka chamakta hua takla dekh mea apne app se bola ki..

Wow kitna shiny he inka sar..

Tabi riya ne ma kensie par attack karte huye apna per unke sar pe marne ki kosis ki..
Qki ma kensie ki height kam thi toa riya ye aaram se kar sakti thi..

Par tabi ma kensie uss kick ko dodge karne ke bajaye aage bad uss kick ko apne chest par roka jisse uski speed or power kam hogai..
Or apna sir riya ke pet mea gusaya or yahi karte huye wo bole ki..

Aise he tum opponent ki knee ko tod b sakte ho or agar girl opponent ho toa hamare liye lucky b hosakta he..

Itna bol wo apna sar riya ke pet mea he daye baye gumane laga halka upar kar..
Jisse unka sar riya ke chest par yani uske breast par sparsh horaha tha..

Jisse riya unhe dhaka dete huye pass pade jadu ko uthakar boli..

U tharki..
Mea aapko chodungi nai ma kensie..

Or ma kensie waha se bhagte huye haste huye mujse bole ki..

Toa ab tum samaj gaye riyansh an tum ye steap ki practice karo..

Ma kensie ke kahe or bataye anusar me uss steap ki practice karne laga..
Or ant me jaise unhone apna sar ko daye baye gumaya jisse dekh ma kensie mere pass se bhagte huye bole..

Tumhe ye wala steap copy nai karna he..
Ye toa mene aise he maje leneke liye kiya tha..

Aise he kuch der wo steap ko practice karte raha mea..
Tabi bari aayi appachi ke training ki..
Jisse dekh mea waha se bina koi pal gawaye bhagne lagga..
Par shigure wahi chat par bethi ye sab dekh rahi thi..
Or muje bhagta dekh usne apni steel rope mere taraf pheki..

Or agle he pal me uss janjir me lipta niche girra hua tha..
Or shigure muje khichte huye appachi ke pass lekar ja rahi thi..

Tabi me shigure se bola ki..

Shigure tum muje hamesha iss steel rope se q bandh deti ho..

Jispar shigure bole ki..
Qki tum hamesa bhagne ki kosis karte ho..
.Tabi appachi mere pass aa mujse bola ki..


Riyansh tum mujse bhag q rahe ho..

Ye sab usne bache ki tarha kaha tha..
Waise b tha toa wo bacha he..
Bas ladte waqt pata nai kaha se wo super man ban jata tha..

Khair me appachi ki baat sun bola nai mea bhagjaunga par tumhari training nai karunga..

Itna bol mea janjiro me bande huye he waha se bhaga...

Par shigure ne muje phir pakadliya..
Isliye muje majburan he appachi ki training leni pad rahi thi..
Qki shigure abi b mere piche wo janjiro ki chain lekar khadi thi..

Tabi appachi bola ki..

Tension mat lo Riyansh aaj sirf tum attack l
Karna..

Tabi mea bola ki..

Appachi kal b tumne aisa he kaha tha..
Or ant mea tumne muje ek he punch me behos kardiya..
Wo toa sukar he ma kensie ke dawai ka warna sayad me marchuka hota..

Par meri baate sun appachi hasne lagga..
Jisse muje samaj aagaya ki mea bhes ke aage bin baja raha hu..

Tabi mea appachi ke hato par pehne mit par attack karne lagge..
Appachi ke instructions ke anusar..

Mere attack dekh appachi haste huye bola..

Tumhare attacks me bilkul b taqat nai he or sabi attack kamjor hea..
Par ek instructor hone ke nate muje tumhe juthi he sahi encroachment deni chahiye isliye..
Karte raho riyansh tum acha kar rahe ho..

Ha daya haa baya..
Ab elbow..
Chalo ab dodge karo isse..

Mene itna he suna tha or agle he pal mea behosh hochuka tha..

Aise he marte bachate kuch din or gujar gaye ab muje ROJANpaku mea 20 din hochuke the..

Or mea is waqt roj ki tarha basic training khatam kar pathar ki murti utha raha tha..
Par pichle 15 dino se me isse uthane ki kosis kar raha hu..
Par ye murti badi muskil se mujse uthti he nai thi..

Isliye mene thak ke uss murti ko chod diya..
Tabi akisame bole ki..

Kya hua itni jaldi har maan rahe ho kya..

Jispar mene bina soche jawab diya ki..

Nai mea har nai mansakta..
Nai manunga har mea..


Wahi ped ke pass khade sakaki ye sab dekh mujse bole ki..

Tumne ab tak bohot ache se training ko jel ka hea..
Sach kahu toa muje nai lagta tha ki tum 3 din b tk paoge..
Par tumme jarur koi baat he chujje..

Sakaki ke muh se apne liye pehli koi achi baat sun mea bohot khush tha..

Tabi mea fir uthkar murti ko uthaneki kosis karte huye bola ki..

Par sayad mujme koi talent nai hea isliye 15 dino ke training ke bawjood me iss murti ko dhangse utha b nai pa raha hu..

Tabi sakaki apne face par hath mar haste huye bole..

Kya tumhe ab tak koi gadbad nai mehsoos hui us murti ke sath chujje..

Sakaki ki baat sun mea uss murti ke taraf gor se dekha ek baar..
Tabi muje kuch gadbad lagi or mea bola ki..

Haa apke kehne ke baad muje lagraha he ki..
Pehle din ke mutabik ye murti kuch badi dhik rahi hea..

Tabi akisame yaha waha dekhte huye bole ki..

Haa sayad kuch badi hogayi hogi..

Itna bol haste huye wo apne piche ke darwaje ko dhakne lagge..

Jisse muje waha gadbad dhiki or mea unke piche wo darwaje ko khol andar gaya..
Jaha ja mea itna chounk gaya tha ki mea niche he gir gaya..
Tabi akisame or sakaki andar aaye or Akisame muje pakad bahar lekar aaye or mujse bole ki abi toa bas surwat he riyansh..

Ab yaha batadu ki andar kya dekha mene..

Andar kamse kam 100 se jada murtiya hongi..
Wo b line wise rakhi hui thi..
Jaha sabse aage wo murti thi jo pehle din delhi thi..
Or uske agge aage ek ek size murtiyo ki badti ja rahi thi..
Ab mere sath itna bada dhoka hua tha isliye mea chounka hua tha..


Tabi akisame aage bole ki..

Dekho riyansh jab tum aisi he 100 murtiyo ko uthaneke kabil hojayege..
Tabi tumhari 10 guna taqat badegi..

Tabi sakaki mere pass ate huye mujse boleki..

Oye chujje sirf aaj ke liye..
Ha sirf aaj ke liye..
Mea soch raha hu mea b tumhe ek technique shikaunga..
Muje batau wo jo ladka he jisne tumhe haraya tha uske ladne ke style ke bareme batau muje..
Konsa style use kiya tha usne..

Tabi akisame haste huye bole ki..

Sakaki kya tum wahi ho jo kabi b student nai lene wala tha..
Ha ha ha..

Jispar sakaki hadbadate huye bole ki..

Mene thodi kaha mea isse apna student bana raha hu..
Mea toa mea toa..
Bas usse isliye aaj shika raha hu..
Qki meara aaj ..
Ha mera aaj birthday hea..
Samje tum chujje..

Wahi akisame apne app se bole ki..
Sakaki tumhe juth bolna b nai ataa..
Ha ha ha..

Tabi sakaki mujse boleki..

Tumne abi fak bataya nai muje chujje kya style use karta tha wo ladka(omkar)

Jispar mea masum si sakal banate huye bola ki..

Wo wo muje nai pata..

Mera jawab sun sakaki ek dam se chillate huye mujse bole ki..

Kya kaha tumne..
Tumhe ye b nai pata ki tumhara opponent konsi style use karta hea..

Mene abi itna he sunata ki..
Mea darte huye unke per pakad liye or rote huye bola ki..
Sry sry muje maaf kardo..

Mea iss waqt itna dar gaya tha ki kya bolu..
Qki ek toa wo 7 ft se b jada lambe or unke face pada cut or unki bayanak body..

Meri phatke char hogayi thi..
Meri halat dekh sakaki muje uthate huye bole ki..

Mea tumpar gussa thodi kar raha hu..
Chalo chodo muje ye batao uska ladne ka tarika kaise tha..

Jisse sun apne app ko snbhal te huye..
Kuch sochte huye mea unse bola ki..

Omkar ke dono hath upar the jaise boxers ke hote he..
Or wo halke halke.se uchal raha tha..

Jisse sun sakaki haste huye bole ki..
Acha toa wo ladka karate or boxing ka mixture use karta he ladne ke liye..

Aisa he toa muje ek technique pata he jisse tum usse asani se hara paoge..


Itna he likhne mea 2 din lag gaye..
Qki jada tym ni mil raha tha..
Par aaj or kal mea ek update ka bola tha toa dena he tha..
Hope you all love it..
Next 2 update mea he khatam hojayega omkar ka chapter..
Or fir suru hogi asli story..
The real adventure..
N sabse important..

App sabi ko
Happy Holi..
Sry for late wishing..
Party mea thi shubha se..
Hope u all like this update..
Keep supporting..
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UPDATE 16
First Strike.(1300+ words)

Sakaki ki baat sun ek pal ko toa mere b chere par muskurahat aagayi..
Par agle he pal muje sakaki ka gusse wala chera najar aane laga apni imagination mea or ye b ki kaise wo muje tod phod rahe he gusse mea..

Jisse dekh meri sari khusi agle he pal phur hogayi..
Isliye mene ek bar akisame ke taraf dekha..
Or sayad wo b meri halat ya yuh kahu meri man ki baat ko samaj gaye the..

Or unhone apni aankhe mund muje aswasaan diya ki muje kuch ni hoga..

Tabi sakaki bole ki..

Chalo fir mea tumhe wo technique aaj he shikhata hu..
Chalo mere sath..

Unki baat mea yes master bol unke piche chal pada..

Wahi hamare waha se jate he..
Chat par ninja style me ulti latak rahi shigure niche aate huye akisame se boli ki..

Sakaki student ko lea raha he..
Wow aisa kya jadu kar diya bhaiya aapne..

Jispar akisame haste huye bole ki..

Mene kuch nai kiya chutki.
Sakaki toa hamesa se he kamjoro ki madat karta aaya he..
Or rahi baat student banane ki toa ek baat hamesa yaad rakhna chutki..

Acha guru student ko shikhata he..
Par acha student apne guru ko shikhata he..

Dekhte he ab indono ke case me kya hota he..
Chalo..

Wahi sakaki muje lekar ek baar fir baramde mea aagaye..
Or fir mujse bole ki..

Meri baat dyan se sunna chujje..
Jaise tumne us ladke ki ladne ke tarike ke bareme bataya he uss hisab se wo karate ke sath dusre ladne ke style jaise boxing ko fuse kar apna he alag style use karta he..

Aise bando se ladneke kuch tarike hote he..
Qki wo hamesa ruke bound fighting he jante hea..
Or street fighting styles inke samne kafi asardar hoti hea..
Toa mea tumhe un styles mea se he ek aisi technique bataunga jo thi toa karate ka hissa he..
Par jabse ye professional tournament rules bane he tabse iss technique ko illegal gosit kar diya gaya hea..
Toa jitna meara samjna he..
Iss technique se tum uss ladke par opening aaram se open kar paoge..
Samje chujje..

Sakaki ki sari baate mene badi dyan se suni..
Par ek baar fir unki last wali line samje chujje isse sun mea unse kehna toa chahta tha ki mera b naam he..
Par muje unse dar lagraha tha..

Or sakaki ne b ye jaan liya ki mea kuch asmanjas mea hu..
Isliye unhone he mujse pucha ki..

Kya baat huhi chujje..

Jispar me gabrate huye haklate huye unse bola ki..

Wo wo darasal mera naam riyansh he..
Riyansh sharma..

Meri baat sun sakaki ek dam se hasne lagge or haste huye mujse bole ki..

Sry sry riyansh mea bhul gaya tha ki aaj kal kutto ke b naam hote he..
Toa tumhare jaise chujje ka naam b hona chahiye..
Toa tk hea..
Tum b mujje aajse master sakaki he bolna samje..

Unki baat sun..

Meane yes master kaha..
Jisse sun wo halka sa blush karne lagge..
Jisse dekh mere face par kafi ajeeb expression aaye the..
Par mene usse control karte huye normal rehne ki kosis ki..

Tabi pata nai muje kya suja isliye mene unse kaha ki..

Master sakaki ..
Kya kya mea..
Kabi taqatwar ban paunga??
Qki itni practice karne ke bawjood b mea omkar se asani se haar gaya..
Sayad mujme koi talent he nai hea..

Meri baat sun sakaki ka face ek dam serious hogaya or wo mujse bole ki..

Kya bolrahe ho..
Kya tumhe khud par jara b bharosa nai hea..

Jispar mene apni gardan niche kardi bina kuch bole..

baramde mea us waqt
Ek taraf akisame or shigure baithe sab d3kh or sun rahe the toa wahi ek taraf diwar ke piche chip riya or appachi b yaha kya horaha he dekh or sun rahe the..

Tabi akisame apne aap se bole ki..

Sakaki bade dyan se jawab dena riyansh ke sawal ka..
Qki yahi question faisla lega ki riyansh aage bad payega ya nai..

Wahi sakaki meri baat sun kuch sochte huye mujse bole ki..

Riyansh muje ye batau pehle ki tum kitna taqatwar banna chahte ho..

Jisse sun mea mea kuch soch sarmane lagga or bola ki..

Aap hasoge nai toa bolta hu..

Jisse sun wo bole ki..

Aakhir me q hasunga..
Hamdono mens goal ko lekar baat kar rahe he..
Or ispar koi hasta nai..
Tum bejijak hokar mujse bolo wo baat..


Unki baat sun mea himat kar unse bola ki..

Mu muje itna taqatwar banna he ki mea riya ko protect kar saku sabi muskilo se..

Mene itna he kaha tha ki waha watawaran mea hadi ki gunj uthi..
Joki sakaki or akisame ki thi..

Or unhe yuh hasta dekh muje kafi embarrassed feel horaha tha..
Isliye mea unse chidte huye bola ki..

Isme kya burai hea..
Ye sirf ek goal he toa hea..
Jisse mea pana chahta hu..

Jispar sakaki apni hasi ko control karte huye mujse bole ki..

Gadhe ho tum riyansh gadhe..
Tumhara goal kamse kam puri duniya ka sabse taqatwar banna toa hona he chahiye tha..
Ha ha ha..

Tabi haste huye wo ekdam se ruke or fir ekbaar serious ho mujse bole ki..
Suno riyansh ye baat hamesa yaad rakhna..
Ki ye jaruri nai ki tum koi kaam kar paoge ki nai..
Balki ye jaruri he ki..
Tum wo kaam karna chahte ho ya nai..

Toa kya tumhe apne sabi sawalo ka jawab mila..

Unki baato se mea kafi prabhavit hua tha..

Wahi akisame or shigure hamari ye baat chit sun has rahe the tabi shigure akisame ko hasta dekh puchti he ki..
Bhaiya kya sakaki piye huye jo aisi baate kar rahe hea..
Unhe itna acha meane kabi bolta nai dekha tha..

Itna bol wo hasne lagti hea..wahi akisame shigure ki hasi dekh apne ankho mea aaye khushi ke aanshu ko jatse saaf kar usse kehte hea ki..

Nai chutki aisi koi baat nai hea..

Wahi dusri taraf diwar ke piche chippe ye sab baate sun riya sarma rahi thi sath he kafi khush b thi..
Toa appachi apni he dun me lage huye ek book mea kuch likh raha tha..

Jisse dekh riya puchti he ki..

Kya likh rahe ho appa bhaiya jispar appachi kehta he ki..

Appachi riyansh or sakaki ke bole dialogues likh raha hea..
Wo b isse future me use karega..

Ispar riya haste huye appachi ko side se hug kar kehti hea..

Kitne bhole ho app iski koi jarurat nai hea..
Aap jaise ho waise he tk ho..
Khud ko badal ne ko koi jarurat nai hea..

Jisse sun appachi khush hote huye kehta he ki..

Toa fir appachi riyansh ko apne he style mea training dega usse b badlega nai..

Jispar riya bas hasti hea or kuch nai kehti..

Wahi mea sakaki abi b wahi baramde mea khade the..

Tabi sakaki kehte he ki..

Ab tumhare sawal sare pure hogaye ho toa training suru karte hea..

Jispar mea b josh ke sath haa kehta hu..

Tabi sakaki mujse kehte hea ki..

Riyansh mea tumhe jo technique shikhane wala hu wo karate se sambandhit hea..
Or karate mea ek niyam hea..
FIRST STRIKE..

insabdo kabi mat bhulna..
Jab b tum karate use karo kisi se ladte waqt toa first strike badi ehmiyat rakhti hea..
Or ye jo technique he ye b first strike par he aadharit hea..

Sry for short update qki..
Iske agle bhag mea muje omkar ke sath fight khatam karni thi..
Par wo part mea issi update mea likhta toa kafi bada hojata update or mere pass utna samaya b nai tha aaj..
Qki mere next phootoshoot contract ke liye aaj audition dene gayi thi mea..
Jaha muje thodi der hogayi..
Par ye next update mea kal he dene ki kosis karungi par agar delay hua toa max to max Tuesday yani parso tak dea dungi mea agla update..
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UPDATE 17
Second Face Off
(1900 words)

Ek unknown building mea kuch logo ko meeting chal rahi thi..

Jaha kul milake 5 jan the jinmese unki boss jo ek ladki thi dikhne me 19 se 20 saal ke aas pass ki lag rahi thi..
Wo ladki is waqt ek bossy type chair pe baithi hui or apne charo gang member jo uske left me do or right me do khade the unse kuch baat kar rahi thi tabi us unknown building ke uss room me jaha ye gang members the waha entry hoti he omkar ki..

Wo aage bad us ladki(urvi) jo ki leader thi uske samne jukta he..

New character.

Urvi
Age 19

Ye riyansh or riya ke he clg mea padti hea second year student he bcom..
Sath he martial arts me b mahir he..
Ye sahar ki jani mani gang ki member hea..
Or clg join karne ke baad jo clg students inki gang ke liye kaata ban sakte he..
Unko ye yaa toa apne under lea leti he yaa unko kisi under na jaa paye waisi halat kar deti hea..
Rumors ko sahi mana jaye toa pure clg mea sabi sections mea isse taqatwar koini hea..
Dikhne mea jitni cute he usse jada khatarnak he ye..

Ab ye konsi gang he jiski ye member he uske bareme aage pata chalega..
Par filal ke liye itna bata deti hu ki ye sutro ke mutabik pure clg me sab se jada taqatwar he..
Or iske under bohot se ladke he clg ke jo iske kahe anusar kaam kar te hea..
Jinme se omkar b ek hea..
Bhale he wo urvi ka senior ho..
Par wo urvi ke samne 1 min b ni tk sakta he..

Chalo firse story ke taraf chalte he..

Ha toa omkar ko apne samne dekh urvi usse kehti he ki..

Toa omkar jis naye ladke ke bareme tum bata rahe the uske bareme koi khabar..

Urvi ki baate sun omkar sidha khade hote huye kehta he ki..

Nai miss urvi..
Aap jitna usko kabil samaj rahe the wo toa uska 10% b nai tha..
Bohot he jada kamjor tha wo..

Omkar ki baate sun urvi ek lambi se saans chodte huye kehti hea..

Haaa is saal ke sabi naye ladke nalle he nikal rahe hea..
Koi ni ye raha tumhara next target..

Ek photo omkar ke taraf pehkte huye kehti hea..

Isska b jald test lo..
Or agar kaam ka ho toa usse mere samne lana..

Omkar urvi ki baat sun uss photo ko uthate huye dekhta he..
Or kehta he ki..

Hope ye meri taqat jel paye..
Qki kamjoro ko masalna mera shok hea..

Uski baate sun urvi haste huye kehti hea ki..

Tum usse maslo todo ya phoda..
Muje usse koi lena dena ni hea..
Bas uper se orders he ki..
Pura clg hamarh under hona chahiye plus unhe ab gang ko or bada b karna he jisle liye hame or taqatwar logo ki jarurat hea..

At clg..
Abi clg chutne ka waqt ho chala tha..
Riya ki b gymnastics ki practice hochuki thi..
Or wo riyansh ke gardening club ke taraf jaa rahi thi..

Riyansh ke sath clg se janeke liye..
Ye unka roj ka tha..
Sath aate or sath jate..

Riya ko apne pass ata dekh riyansh usse kehta he ki..

Riya tum 5 min ruko mea bas back side ke podoo ko pani dekar aaya abi..

Riya b riyansh ki baat sun clg ke main gate par wait karneka bol waha se nikal jati he main gate ke taraf..

Riya ko jaata dekh

wahi L1 or L2 jo riya par try karna chahte he ya yuh kahu ki usse patana chahte he par riya se darte he pata nai q..

Par riya ko riyansh se baat karta dekh indono ki hamesa khub jalti the..

Or aaj b riya ko riyansh se yuh baat karta dekh L2 L1 se kheta he ki..

Bhai mene pehle he kaha tha ki hamdono ko jaldi kuch karna chahiye tha riya ko pane le liye..

Ab dekh le wo chapad ganju uda legaya apni chidiya ko..

L2 ki baate sun L1 ki or jal uth thi he joki pehle se riya or riyansh ko dekh jal rahi thi..

Isliye wo L2 se kehta he ki..

Muje ni lagta ki wo dono date kar rahe hea or wo pidi ek makhi ni uda sakta wo kaise hamri chidiya uda lea jayega..

Chal mea aaj he riya ko date ke liye puchunga..
Chal mere sath..

Itna bol wo dono pichese riya ke taraf badte hea..

Tabi riya ko ped ke pichese kisi ke karhane ki awaj aati hea..
Or wo uss jaa waha dekhti he toa..

Usse waha omkar milta he joki kisi ladke ko bohot he buri tarha mar raha tha..

L1 or L2 omkar ko dekh bina kuch soche samje waha se khisak lete hea..

Wahi omkar us ladke ko marte huye kehta he ki..

Iss saal sala koi b dhang ka banda aaya he nai he clg mea..
Jaise mene socha tha..
Tu b kamjor nikla kamine..

Itna bol omkar pehle se niche pade ladke ke pit par jor jor se laat marne lagta hea..
Jisse uss vichare ke muh se khoon bahar aajata he..
Or wo pls maaf kardo bachaoo wagera wagera bolta jata he..

Par omkar nai rukta ..

Tabi riya aage bad omkar ko dhaka deti he..
Jisse omkar piche ko hojata he..
Or fir wo uss ladke ko sahara de uthaneke kosis karti hea..

Wahi omkar kisiko uske bich aata dekh gusse mea aajata hea or wo riya ke kandhe par piche sea hath rakhte huye kehta hea ki..

Tumhari inti himmat ki..

Abi wo apni line puri kar pata usse pehle he riya uske hath ko niche se upar ke taraf khoni marti hea..

Or omkar iske liye ready ni tha..
Jisse uska hath he uske muh par aa kar lagta hea..

Tabi riya uss ladke waha se janeka kehte huye omkar se bolti hea ki..

Muje gussa dilane ki kosis mat karna..
Warna me khud tumhe tumhare kiye ki saja dungi..

Jisse sun omkar apni hatheli ki malish karte huye kehta he ki..

Ha ha..

Tumne abi jo b move use kiya kafi interesting tha..
Ha ha..
Mea jab kabi b kisi strong opponent ko delhta hu toa..
Mea unhe akela ni chod sakata..
Chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki..
Lets dance..

Itna bol wo apna wahi fighting stance lea leta he jo usne riyansh ke tym liya tha..

Apne dono hath boxer ki tarha upar kar muthi bana apne pero se yaha waha halke halke jumps lea raha tha..

Wahi riyansh onkar ka stance dekh apne app se kehti hea ki..

Sayad yahi wo ladka he jisne riyansh ko haraya tha..
Or sath he buri tarha pita b..
Mea isse choudungi nai..

Itna soch riya b apna stance lene he wali thi ki tabi unke piche se awaj aati hea ki..

Ruk jao omkar..
Agar tumne riya par apni ek ungli b uthai toa mea tumhe choudunga nai..

Riyansh ko waha dekh riya ke sath sath omkar ke face par b shocking expression the..
Par dono ki wajha alag alag thi..

Tabi omkar kehta he ki..

Mea soch he raha tha ki..
Kis kutte ko apni mout bula rahi he..
Jo wo itna bhok raha hea..
Par dekho yaha toa kutte ke jagha chuha nikla..

Itna bol apne sade huye punch par wo khud he hasne laga..

Wahi riyansh riya ko apne piche kar khud aage badta hea..
Tabi riya usse rokne ki kosis karte huye kehti hea ki..

Riyansh abi yumtpuri tarikese tayar ni ho omkar se ladne ke liye..
Tumhare current level par b wo tumhe hara sakta hea..

Riya ki baate sun riyansh usse kehta he ki..

Muje ye sab pata he riya..

Jise sun riya or jada shock hoti hea or riyansh se puchti hea ki..

Tumhe pata fir q ladne jaa rahe ho..

Jispar riyansh muskurate huye kehta he ki..

Qki..
Qki mene apne aap se promise kiya tha martial arts shikte waqt ki mea tumhari har haal mea raksha karunga..

Itna bol wo aage bad apna stance lea leta he..

Jisse dekh omkar haste huye kehta he ki..

Agar tumne ladne ka faisla lea he liya he toa..
Ye baat jaan lo ki..
Isbar mea tumhe ni baksne wala..
Isbar tum maroge..
Samje..
Ha ha ha..

Itna bol wo b apna stance lea leta he..

Jisse dekh riyansh ..
Ko apni pichli fight yaad aati hea..
Jisme omkar se wo buri tarha pit raha tha..
Jisse yaad kar riyansh darne lagta he..
Or darte huye apne aap se kehta he ki..

Omkar ke wo rock solid punches or damdaar kicks aaj b mea apni body par feel kar sakta hu..
Par par mea fir b ladunga..
Muje ladna he hoga..
Muje apne dar pe kabu pana hi hoga..

Tabi mere samne wo scene aata he jisme sakaki muje new technique sikhane se pehle kuch samja rahe the..

{Riyansh jo log fighting ko use too nai hote..
Wo akasar gabra jate he aisi situation mea..
Jisse unke attack mea taqat kam hojati hea..
Or jab tak unka dyan wapas aata he tab tak opponent already prepared hota he apne agle move ke liye..

Jisse sun riyansh kehta he ki..

Mere sath b kuch aisa he hua tha..

Jispar sakaki usse samjate huye kehte he ki..

Delho riyansh aise waqt mea tum bilkul b mat ghabrana..
Bhale he darane wali chij wakai mea daravni or khatarnak ho..
Aise waqt me sabse jaruri hea..
Tumhara pura dyan..
Apne
FIRST HIT par concentrate karna..
Jisse tumhara opponent ne bilkul b apeksha ni ki ho..
Uss ek hit me apni puri taqat lagana..
Yaha tak ki ye b mat sochna ki uske baad kya karoge tumm..
Samaj lena bas yahi ek hit he..
Jo tumhe bacha sakti hea..

Jisse sun mea yes master kehta hu..}

Master sakaki ki baat yaad aa..
Mere andar ek baar fir confidence aajata he..

Or mere taraf bad rahe omkar ke upar mea wo technique use karta hu..
Jisse sakaki ne muje shikhaya tha..

Omkar jaise mere karib aata he..
Mea pehle ek steap piche liya..
Or jaisi omkar apna punch marne wala tha tabi mene apne left hand se punch bana uske face ke taraf mara..
Jisse usne aasani se roka..
Or wo haste huye bola..

Tumhare punch ki speed jarur badi he par abi b tum muje chu nai sakte..

Par tabi mene apna dusra hath yani ki right hand ka punch bana uske pet mea mara..
Joki left wale punch se dugna damdar tha..

Jisse omkar apna pet pakad jukgayam.

Or bola ki..

Kamine kon ye move tournament mea use kartay..
Ye unofficial move hea..

Jispar uske jukhe huye he mea piche hat uske face par ek spin kick marta hu joki muje appachi ne shikayi thi..

Jisse wo girta toa nai par wo uske face se khun nikalne lagta hea..

Or tabi mea kehta hu ki..

Ye koi tournament fight nai street fight hea..

Sry yaha par he stop karna pada..
Fighting scene bohot kam bacha tha..
Par muje abi aade gante mea beach party mea jana hea..
Jis wajse bichme he rokna pada..
Kal ya max to max parso tak ek or update aajayega..
Jisme ye fight ke result ke sath sath new chapter yaani new adventure ki b survaat hogi riyansh ke liye..
Keep supporting till then..
Nice update bro
 

Sweetkaran

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UPDATE 18
Effects Of Training
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(1800 words)

Mere 1st attack jo ki muje sakaki ne shikhaya tha usse dekh riya apne aap se boli ki..

Ye toa dadu ki 108 special techniques mea sea ek hea..
Kya dadu ne riyansh ko ye technique shikhayi par agar dadu ne riyansh ko shikahaya hea toa riyansh jinda kaise hea..
Nai sayad kisi dusre master ne riyansh ko ye technique shikhayi hogi..
Par bina dadaji ko puche yaa..
Ahh mera sar phat jayega..
Ghar jakar he sabi masters ko puchungi..

Wahi mere dono attacks ke baad b omkar abi b apne pero par khada tha..

Par wo bohot he jada shock tha..
Apne muh se khoon saaf kar wo khud se kehta hea ki..

Ye kaise hosakta hea..
Kaha galti huyi mujse ..
Frontal attack mea par uska attack jo mere face par tha usse toa muje rokna hr tha..
Par issme mene apna lower body par dyan ni diya..
Ha tab he waha ke defence kamjor hone ke karan he ye hua..

Aah iss kute ko mea choudunganai ..

Wahi mea man he man sakaki ko thnx bol raha tha..
Mujme fighting spirit ke sath ye trchntech b shikane ke liye..

Par mera dyan ab b omkar ki movements par tha..
Or tab he wo gusse mea muje anab sanab bakte huye mere taraf bhagte huye aaya or pass apni right per se muje kick marni chahi usne..

Par tab jaisa ki muje ma kensie ne shikaya tha..
Mene uske per ko pehle dodge kiya fir usse bichme se pakad apna sar uske pet mea dea mara..

Par meri par par pakad kafi majboot thi jisse waha se tik tak ki awaje aayi..
Jisse koi haddi tutne ko awaj ho..

Par omkar abi b niche nai gira tha..
Abi b wo langdate huye mere pass he khadata..
Bad omkar ka gussa or dard iske baad bohot badgaya tha..
Or kehte heana..
Gussa hamesha vinash ka karan hota he..
Omkar ke sath b kuch aisa he hua..

Usne tab b haar na mante huye..
Apni bachi kuchi sari taqat se mere face par punch mara..
Par ye wahi punch tha jab meri or omkar ki first fight hui thi..
Tab mea uske punches ko rokta uske pehle he muje lag jate wo..
Par ab mea usse dekh pa raha tha achese..
Par fir b omkar ne usme apni ji jaan lagai thi..

Isliye wo sayad ab taak ka uska sabse powerful pinch hoga..
Par power jada hone ke karan wo punch ke direction ko properly control ni kar paya..
Or mene b punch se bachne ki kosis ki..
Par fir b wo mere jabde ko chute huye gaya..

Wo sukar he appachi ke training ka..
Warna sayad he muje ye punch dikhta..
Or agar lag jata toa ye knock out punch hota..

Khair mea tayar tha pehle se he..
Or jaise he uska punch mere jabde ke paar gaya..

Mene ulta gum uske ussi hath ko apne kandhe ke aagese pakda..
Or uske center of gravity ko calculate kar usse pichese uthakar aage ke taraf pheka..

Iss waqt muje omkar ka weight kafi halka mehsoos hua..
Wo b sirf akisame ki Training ke wajase..

Wahi is move ke baad omkar jamin pe pada karharaha tha..
Or ab usme hilne ki b taqat nai bachi thi..

Jiska saaf matlab tha mene apni life ki dusri fight jeet li hea..
Jisse mea aakhri samaj raha tha..
Par niyati ke aage kiska bas chalta hea..

Tabi omkar karhate huye mujse bola ki..

Riyansh (usne pehli baar mera naam pukara) tumne in kuch dino mea bohot kuch naya shikha he..
Konsa martial arts tha jo tumne use kiya karate ke alawa..

Jisse sun me smile karte huye bola ki..
Kungfu muay thai or jujutsu..

Jisse wo b haste huye bola ki..

You tricky bastard..
Or wo behos hogaya..

Riya b ab tak mere pass akar khadi hochuki thi..
Or kafi khush b thi..

Or mujse boli ki..

Kya tum tk ho riyansh..

Par jaise he mene omkar ko behos hota delha..
Muje laga ki kahi ye mar toa ni gaya..
Mea niche beth bina riya ke bato ko sune..
Omkar ke nerves ko check kar bola ki..

Hash ye tk hea..
Or riya ke taraf khushi se dekhte huye bola ki..

Omkar jinda he acha hua isse jada kuch ni hua..

Meri harkate or baate sun riya mand mand muskurane lagi or apne app se boli ki..

Apne app se jada isse apne opponent ko padi hea..
Wo b tab jab wo isse marna chahta ho..
Bohot he interesting he riyansh..

Wahi riya ko muskurata dekh meane usse iski waja puchi..

Toa usne sirf hi hi hi kiya..

Jisse dekh mene usse pucha ki..

Kya mera ladne ka tarika kuch galat tha kya..

At ROJANPAKU

Mene ROJANPAKU pohach sabi masters ko apni shubhe huyi fight ke bareme detail mea bataya..
Jaise koi chota bacha apne jeet par batata he waise he..

Jisse sun..
Unsabka reaction kafi normal tha..
Jaise ki sakaki ne kaha..
Kya tum jit gaye..

Or akisame ne kaha..
Oh acha hua tumne jada damage ni liya..

Jisse sun mea unse bola ki..

App sabi ko nai lagta ki..
Aap sab ko meri tarif karni chahiye jaise ki..
Acha kiya tumne riyansh..
Very good..
Ya aisa he kuch..

Jispar sakaki apni hath me beer ki bottle mea se beer pite huye bole ki..

Itni jaldi nai chuje abi toa isse b bade events aayenge tumhari life me..
Abi toa bas survat hea..

Jisse sun mea ne unse pucha ki..

Bade events se kya matlab hea aapka..

Jispar sakaki ek dam se serious mod mea jaate huye mujse bole ki..

Agar mea galat nai hu toa..
Omkar clg ka jana mana gunda type banda tha..

Jispar mene haa mea sar hilaya..

Tab wo bole ki..

Agar aisa he toa..
Ye baat pure clg mea aag ke tarha fel jayegi ki..
Ek fresher ne itne bade monster(uski harkato se jisse mene inhe bataya tha) ko haraya..
Tab uske baki ke gang members tumhare piche nai aayenge kya badle ke liye??

Unki baat se meri solid phat chuki thi..
Or fir mea apne masiha ke pass gaya (akisame)

Or unse bola ki..

Pls meri madat karo..

Jispar wo apni style mea haste huye mujse bole ki..

Abi toa kuch hua b nai hea..
Tum jis raha par nikle ho..
Uspar dusman aate jayenge or ye ek bohot badi musibat hogi agar tumne training ko seriously nai liya toa..

Unki baat se meri pehle se phati hui thi or ab toa aisa lag raha tha ki kai dar se mera susu he na nikal jaye tabi..
Sakaki mere pass aate huye mujse bole ki..

Darne ki koo jarurat ni he riyansh..
Abi ke liye ham or kadi training karenge..
Taki tum kamse kam toa clg ke sabse taqatwar banjao..
Or waise b yahi toa life ki theory he ki..
Jindagi ek naa khatam hone wali jang hea..

Jisse sun mea unse chidte huye bola ki..

Ye aapki life theory he meri nai..

Itna bol mea tnsn or dar se jamin par bacho jaise lotne laga..

Tabi ma kensie unke age bethi shigure ke piche se apne camera se kuch pics lete huye bole ki..

Koyale se hira banke liye..
Hire ko bohot parisharam karna padta he..
Waise he tumhe b bohot mehnat karni hogi..
Apne app ko tarashna hoga..
Tab jake tum martial arts ki duniya me jinda reh paoge..

Unki baate sun muje aisa lagraha tha ki yaha sabi masters yahi chahte he ki mea aage training continue karu..
Sayad mujme koi khass talent hea..

Isliye ye baat soch khush hote huye waha maujud pancho masters elder ko chodke..
Unse pucha ki kya mujeme koi talent hea..

Jispar un pacho ne ek sath ek he sur mea naa bol kar..
Mera popat kar diya..
Or mere pehle se tute dil ko or tod diya..

Itna ki mea waha se jane wala tha..
Or riya muje pakade huyi or muje samja rahi thi..
Par mea ni ruk raha tha..

Tabi akisame apne style mea bole ki..

Ruko riyansh..
Pehle shant hojau or meri baat suno..

Jaruri ni hea ki..
Martial arts shik rahe ya shike huye sabi mea kuch talent ho..
Talented log toa tumhe kai b mil jayenge..
Par agar tum janna chahte ho toa batadu..
Sab talented log martial arts shik sakte he..
Toa iska jawab naa he..
Par jiss kisi nea b martial arts shika he or usse janna hea..

Un sab mea ek chij common thi or hea..
Wo hea..
Unka drid sankalp..
Jiske liye unhone martial arts ka rasta chuna..

Or tumhare pass wo hea..
Kya ye kafi ni hea tumhare liye..


Wahi ussi building mea jaha urvi or uske gang ka adda tha..
Usme urvi iss waqt apne training chamber mea thi..

Tabi waha J bhagte huye aata
(J urvi ka sabse karibi or barsose mand hea..
Wes bhusa or chal daal se toa ladka he..
Par iski asli gender unknown hea jo ki sirf urvi he janti he pure gang mra..
Or jab tak hame pata nai chal jata tab tak kr liye ham isse male he consider karenege)

Hea or urvi ko clg mea hui gatna ke bareme bata ta hea..
Yani omkar ke haar ke bareme..

Jisse sun wo haste huye bolti hea ki..

Oh ho ho..
To wo omkar akahir us fresher riyansh se haar he gaya..
Mene pehle he kaha tha..
Usme kuch toa baat hea..

Itna bol wo apne aage khade ek ladke ko ishara karti hea..
Jisse wo aapne hato mea pakdi concrete slab..
Jo building banane use hoti he bricks ke jagha..
Usse hawa mea uchalne huye urvi ke taraf phektahea..

Jisse wo hava mea ek straight kick mar asani se chur chur karte huye bolti hea ki..

Aakhir kar koi toa useful banda mila in fresher's mea se..

Toa yaha akhir kar khatam hua omkar ka chapter..
Next update mea riyansh ke new
opponents ke bareme pata chalega..
Or uss me thoda riyansh ke character ko moral build up b dene ka socha he meane..
Isliye taki future mea uska dar kam ho..
Hope you all like my this idea..
Agar aap sabi ko lage ki aisa kiye bina sidhe new opponent ke taraf badna chahiye toa jarur batayega..
Update length jo pehle 2000+ words ki hua karti thi meri ab dhire dhire last 2 update se kam hui hea..
Mafi chahungi uske liye..
Par aane wale update pehle jaise he bade ho iski kosis karungi..
Hope you all like this update..
Keep supporting..
Next upadte kab aayega ye mea kal tak bataungi qki thode issues horahe tym management ko lekar..
Par jada late nai karungi..
Nice update bro 😺
 
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