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Fantasy Fighting For Love(kahani itihas ke sabse takatwar shisya ki)

Devil

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Lagta hai urvi riyansh se kafi impress hai
Jaisa ki aapne bataya tha ki riyansh aur urvi ki fight ho ke bhi nahi hogi usse yahi lagta hai ki urvi jab riyansh ke samne aayegi to use usse love ho jayega
 

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UPDATE 25
Last update mea aapne pada ki kaise riya ki madat se hamne rajan se picha chudaya..

Ab aage..

Waha se nikal mea or riya sidha ROJANPAKU mea aaye..
Jaha sabi masters elder ko chod majud the or muje or riya ko sahi salamat dekh sab ke chere par smile thi..

Par sakaki ke chere par santusti wale bhav the..
Unhone muje sahi salamat d3kh apne aap se kaha..

Haash acha hua riyansh sahi salamat waha se aagaya..
Warna mea yaha soch soch pagal horaha tha ki kahi mene inko waha akela chod galti toa nai kardi..

Ab sakaki aisa q soch rahe hea toa iss baat ka pata karne ke liye thoda flashback mea chalte hea..

Hame waha
maidan-e-jung mea akela chod sakaki jaise he ghar aaye unhone raste mea jo kuch hua sab kuch sabko batadiya..

Jisse sunne ke baad sabi ne koi khass prati kriya toa ni di..
Par akisame kisi soch mea dube huye the..
Jo sakaki ne dhek liye or unse iss bareme pucha b..

Tab akisame bole ki..

Sakaki tumne jo kiya wo bilkul sahi kiya..
Qki Martial arts master banne ka pehla niyam he yahi hea ki..
Ek master kabi apne students ki fight mea dhakal andazi na kare..
Bhale he uss fight mea riyansh kitna b gayal q na ho..
Par ham uske masters shide toar par uski madat ni kar sakte..
Or meare pareshan hone ki waja ye he ki..
Riyansh ke current level ke anusar..
Wo ghar toa aajayega..
Par usske sarir par chotte b bohot hongi..
Inshort bolu toa riya ke waha honeke karan riyansh ghar toa aahijayega..
Par jaisa ki tumne bataya waha uss grp ko control kar raha banda b tha(rajan) toa iska saaf matlab he ki wo taqatwar hea..
Isliye uske under 9 log the..
Ab agar sidhe tor par riyansh ko fight rajan se hui bina rukawat ke toa riyansh maar khakar b ant mea ghar toa aahejayegaa.
Par agar usse aagar pehle un 9 logo se ladna pada toa riyansh ke ghar aaneke b chances kam hea..

Akisame ke iss lambe chode explanation ko sunne ke baad sakaki ko lagne lagga..
Ki usko wahi rukna chahiye tha or dekhna chahiye tha ki riyansh kaise lad raha hea..
Or kahi wo musibat mea toa ni he..
Par ab wo ye baat bahar b ni dikhana chahta tha..
Qki ye baat uski image ko shiva ni deti..

Tabi sakaki ki najar appachi par padi jo ki riyansh ko training dene ke liye yaha waha dhund raha tha..
Or thak haar kar nirash ho wo ek kone mea baith gaya qki usse lag raha tha..
Har baar ki tarha riyansh appachi ke training se bhag raha hea...
Isliye wo nirash tha
Par riyansh se nai khudse..

Tabi shigure ne uske kaan mea kuch kaha jisse uske face par ek baar fir smile lout aayi or wo shigure ke sath baith gaya..

In present ..

Jaise ham andar aaye..
Sabko waha kya hua ye bataya..
Or fir mea apni training ke liye tayar ho wapas baramde mea aaya..
Jaha mea appachi ka wait kar raha tha..

Par aaj pehli baar aisa hua ki..
Mea khud training lene khada hu or appachi waha nai tha..
Or jab mea usse dhundte huye baramde ke pichle chor par aaya toa waha appachi or shigure dono he crayons se kuch draw kar rahe the..

Mene jakar appachi se training ke liye b kaha toa wo bolaki..

Appachi riyansh se baat ni karega..
Riyansh hamesa appachi ke training se bhagta hea..

Wahi mea usse samjane lagga ki mea bhaga ni tha bas mea waha fight ke wajase atak gaya tha..

Tabi appachi bola ki..

Ni ab appachi ka maan nai hea..
Riyansh ko shikane se jada maja shigure ke sath drawing banane mea hea..

Fir uch din kuch ni hua..
Mea ant tak appachi ko mana nai paya..
Wo toa sukar he riya ka jisne muje appachi ko burger khilane ka idea diya..
Qki appachi ko burger bohot pasand the..
Isliye raat ke diner ke waqt sabi ke liye mene burger or fries order kiye the..
Jisse appachi b khush hogaya..
Or khushi khushi mea wo mujse bola ki..

Ab appachi riyansh ko double power ke sath training dega kal..
Jisse sun mere chere ka rang udgaya..

Wahi sab meri sakal dekh hasne lagge..

Wahi urvi ke taraf jo ki hamare college ke ragnorak ke gang ki head thi..
Matlab hamare college or uss area ke colleges mea urvi ki he chalti thi..
Or wo is waqt apne base joki ek 4 male ki purani band building thi..
Ussi ke 4th floor par..
Urvi apne shingashan jaise red sofe par baithi hui thi..
Wo b kisi billi ke tarah apne aap ko sikud kar..

Tabi waha rajan aaya..
Or aaj ke huye gatna kram ko batane lagga..

Tabi urvi nea ussi position mea jisme wo thi apna ek pair se rajan ke face par jor dar kick mari..
Joki itni tej thi..
Jisse rajan ne dekh toa liya par wo dodge ni karpaya..
Or uss kick ke lagte he wo piche jakar diwal se takra gaya..

Tabi urvi usse boli ki..

Mene kaha thana ki riyansh ko bina hath lagaye usse yahalana mere samne..
Par tum usse ladne lagge..

Tabi rajan bola ki..

Urvi muje ek baar explain karne do waha kya hua..
Mea b apne logo ke sath uss raste se gujar raha tha ki wo coincidentally muje mil gaya..
Or mea usse yahi lane wale tha..
Par uski gf ko jab mene dekha toa muje bohot jalan hui..
Qki wo itni jada hot or sexy thi ki mea uss riyansh se iss baat ka badlena chahta tha..
Par meri phuti kismat wo ladki hot or sexy hone ke sath sath ek rakshas nikli..

Wahi rajan ke is betuke par sahi explanation ko sun urvi ne apne sabse khass shiva se iss bareme pucha ki..
Rajan kya bake jaa raha hea..

(Short introduction
Sayad mene pehle iss character ko introduce kiya ki nai muje yaad nai aaraha issliye ek baar fir isse introduce kar rahi hu..

Shiva - age 19
Gender filal gopniya he par pehnave se pura ladka dikhta hea..
Or awaj b tk he yani ki awaj se lagta he ki ladki b hea or ladka b..
Par perfect gender kya he ye baat filal raaj hea..
Ye bachpan se urvi ke sath raha hea.school or ab college..
Ragnorak b isne urvi ke liye he join kiya hea..).

Urvi ka sawal sun..
Shiva bola ki..

Muje b ni pata urvi..
Sayad fight ke dauran iske sar par chout aayi he lagta hea..

Tabi urvi ne shiva ke kaan mea kuch kaha..
Jisse suneke baad shiva ke maan me question toa tha q par usne wo sawal tab urvi se nai kiya..

Or tabi wo waha majud rajan or uske piche khade ankit or shubham jinne rajan ke yaha aate he bula liya gaya tha..
Unse shiva boli ki..

Tum tino ko rajan ne jo kiya he uska bugtan karna padega..
Pehle toa urvi ke orders na manna or dusra apne 9 sathiyo ko buri tarha pitwa hospital mea admit karwana..
Iski sajja toa kafi badi honi chahiye par qki tum tino ne ragnorak ke mission ke liye kafi yogdan diya hea..
Isliye filal jab tak tum riyansh ko yaha nai lea aate tab tak ke liye..
Tumhe ragnorak se nikala jata hea..
Or ab tumhare under jitne b sathi the wo sab b abse tumhare under nai rahenge..

Wahi untino ne bina kisi sawal jawab kiye shiva ki baat mani or waha se nikal liye..
Keheneko wo 3 log the..
Par rajan jisse shubham ne apne kandho par utha rakha tha joki is waqt behos tha urvi ke kick ke wajase..
Waha se dono ankit or shubham gusse mea nikal gaye..

Wahi unke jaate he urvi muskurate huyi khudse boli ki..

Kya personality hogi riyansh tumhari kitne manly hoge tum..
AahhhAah.
Bas ab tumse milne ka intazar ni hota..
(Yaha batadu ki urvi ne abtak riyansh ki taswir tak ni dekhi..
Aisa ni tha ki unke pass riyansh ki taswir ni hea par urvi riaysnh se sidha face to face milna chahti hea)

At college gardening club..

Is waqt mea apne banaye folder beds ko bani dea raha tha..
Tabi muje piche se kisi ladki ne hi karke pukara..

Short introduction..
Alisha - age 18..
Ek dam simple or cute si ladki..
Riaysnh ko gin ye do he members he gardening club mea.riyansh ke sath usike class mea padti hea..
Par indono ka club mea aane ka tyming hamesha he alag raha isliye ab tak inka face to face contact ni hua tha..

Or aaj jab alisha gardening area mea aayi toa waha riaynsh ko dekh usne hi kar greet kiya..
Jispar riaynsh ne b usse hi kaha..

Fir kuch der dono me normal baat chit huyi..
Jisme alisha ne riyansh ko apna gardening club join karne ka reason batya..
Wahi same usne riyansh se b pucha..

Jispar riyansh bola ki..

Muje plants bachpan se he pasand the..
Par tum toa janti ho..
Ladko ko gardening karta d3kh sab uska majak udate hea..
Isliye mene apne iss pasand ko side rakh diya tha..
Par fir mere duniya mea uthal pathal macha(fights suru hona)..
Jisse mene decision liya..
Ki ab chahe jo hojaye..
Mea wahi karunga jo muje pasand hea bina kisiki parwa kiye..
Isliye mene fir se gardening karna suru kardiya..
Qki yahi ek aisi chij he jo muje shanti or sukun dono deti hea..

Meri baate sun kuch der tak toa alisha muje apne chasme ke mote mote glasses se gurti rahi..
Par fir wo mujse ek baar fir boli ki..

Riyansh tumhe lekar jo b rumors college mea faille hea..
Tum unse bilkul alag ho..
Mene jab un rumors ko suna tha toa muje lagga..
Tum jaroor daravne dikhte hoge..
Par tum toa meri imagination ke bilkul ulat nikle..

Alisha ke muh se rumor wali baat sun mea usse bola ki..

Oo wo rumor..
Ye sab uss devil ka kaam(sagar) he joki asal mea ek alien hea jo ab insan ka mask pehen hamare college mea gum raha hea..

Meri baat sun alisha mujse boli ki..
Kya riyansh tum b alien devil kaisi baate kar rahe ho..
Par sach kahu toa muje lagta hea..
Ye jo b rumors he sab juth hea..
Qki tumse milne ke baad mea daave se keh sakti hu ki tum college sab taqatwar gunde kaise ho sakte ho..
Qki jisse phul podo se itna pyaar ho wo kisiko kaise hani pohacha sakta hea..

Ye baat waqt alisha ke chere par ek alag he chamak or noor tha..
Jaise wo ye sab kehte huye kafi khush ho aisa lagraha tha..
Par mene insab pe jada dyan ni diya..

Or sabse taqatwar gunde wali baat par sochne lagga..
Ye rumor sun..
Muje yakin higaya..
Ki ye sab uss nalayak saagar ka hi kaam hea..
Jo pure college ne juthi afwa faila raha hea..

Abi mea apne maan mea sagar ko galiya de he raha tha ki..
Mere pichese kisine mere kandho par hath rakha..
Or bola..

Q mere bareme itna bhala bura keh rahe ho mere dost..

Aaj ke liye itna he..
Ab muje sab se ek suggestion chahiye..
Kya ab 2 update mea mea riyansh ka samna ankit or shubham se karwau yaa iske bich kuch choti moti fights or dhikau..
Ab agar mea choti moti fights or dhikati hu toa..
Ankit or shubham ka samna hote hote or 5 update nikal jayenge..
Ab saab ispat apne vichar deve..
Qki jo ab sab chahenge wahi mea karungi..
Qki dono he aurto mea story par bilkul b koi bad effect ni girega naa story ke flow par..
Isliye ye wala masla me aap sabi par chodti hu..
Keep supporting..


Agar necessary nahi h to skip kro...
 

Hellohoney

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Apko jesa thik lage vesa kijiye
 

Riya20

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badiya update

Ye baar baar sujhaw nahi maango jo tumko sahi lage wo hi karo bas story ki raftar thodi tez karo.
Jaisa socha hai waise hi story chalao.

Update achchha hai.

Superb update dear

Nice update bro...
Waiting for next

Waiting for next

Agar necessary nahi h to skip kro...

Apko jesa thik lage vesa kijiye
Thnx everyone for your beautiful reviews and comments..
Next update kal sham tak aayega..
Keep supporting like this only..
 

Riya20

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Ap do updates me hi fights dikha dijiye.... kyunki ek bari urvi aur riyansh ko face to face dekhna chahungi.... aur ab to urvi ki feeling dekh, badi exiatment ho rahi hai.. ki kahi urvi, hero ko first time milte hi I love na bol de
Thnx for your suggestion..
Ab urvi and riyansh ke face-off mea kya kya hoga
Ye toa waqt he batayega..
Par muje umid he aapko maja jarur aayega..
Keep supporting till then..
 

Riya20

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Ye baar baar sujhaw nahi maango jo tumko sahi lage wo hi karo bas story ki raftar thodi tez karo.
Jaisa socha hai waise hi story chalao.

Likh tum Rahi ho or suggestions humse puchti ho, writer tum apne se likho
Har bar ye puchna aise likhu ya wese
Aisa nai he ki mea story ko lekar confused hu yaa kuch or waja hea..
Mea bas readers involvement ho story mea plus story agar kisiko slow lag rahi ho toa we sabi apne vichar dea..
Qki meane pehle ankit or shubham ke sath hone wale face of se pehle bichme 2 or fights sochi thi..
Par agar unhe hatta b diya jaye toa story par uska impact na girta..
Ab ye mea apne man mutabik aaram se kar sakti thi..
Par mere iss baat par suggestion mang ne ki ek he waja thi or wo thi ki readers b involve hosake..
Baki i respect your suggestions..
N if u think so I will see forward to it that..
Ki ye bich bich mea suggestion na mange jaye jab tak ki iski ati awasyakta na ho..
Till then keep supporting like this only..
 
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