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Romance Fir Milenge

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AP 316 said:
First of All Congo for the story Ass. I hope this story becomes a blockbuster here..

As you know I don't read stories but since you wrote it I must read it know..
So the first update was pretty interesting according to me. Best part tha mere liye jo tune fight describe ki thi I must say I am impressed that was clean.. Second best part tha jo description diya tune ladki kaa ek dum baareek that was also clean and I liked that a lot.. First update se thoda andaaja hogaya hai ki story kaafi interesting rahegi..

Lekin issue ye tha ki kaafi spelling mistakes they update mein i know first update humessa had badi mein post hota hai and all lekin still I hope ki tum aage double check karke post karoge and also thoda saa slow chalo don't go that fast.. Like step by step baaki aage padhke bataata hun.. Keep Rocking Ass :love:
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Thanks for your review :thanks:

Starting kuchh fast lagegi sabko par aage normal hoga, I assure you :yo:
 
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Assassin said:
Kai readers ko lagta he Love Story ka end happy ending ya sad ending me he hota he. Iske alawa agar koi writer story ko alag tarike se pura kare to readers ki demand hoti he ke 2nd part likho, ending unke marzi se ho :hmm:
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Mang karna humara adhikar har .. is baat par itna sir khujane lage to baal udd jayenge .. main to 3,4,5,6,7 part tak ka demand kar dunga..

Jaise JK ke sath kiya aur use 7 part me istory deni padi ... Don't blame us ... Humari mange jayaj hai aur hamesa aati rahengi .. yalgar ho :dwarf:
 
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