Incest Gaaye Anek Saand Ek

[Nasn]

Amazing story. Bahut se log yaha Manohar ka bhi role chahte hai aur bahut se log chahte hai sirf sandy hi main role me ho.

I think Manohar ko renu ke saath rehne do kyuki sandy ke paas already 3 gaye hai... Renu bhi sandy ke Paas jayegi to kahani boring ho jayegi. Renu ko Manohar ko dedo aur rajni, ratna aur rashmi ko sandy ko dedo.

Renu Manohar se pregnant ho jaye aur baki 3 gaye ratna, rajni aur rashmi sandy se pregnant ho jaye..

Isse kahani ka balance bana rahega aur most of the audience satisfied rahenge

ग्रेट आईडिया भाई

ऐसा अगर हो जाये तो स्टोरी में चार चांद लग जाएंगे
मनोहर को रेनु मिलनी ही चाहिये ।
वरना बहुत से रीडर डॉटर फादर लोवर्स चले जायेंगे
बल्कि मनोहर को बहु से भी अटेच रखते तो।और
मज़ा आता ।लेकिन इतने से भी काम चला लेंगे ।

वरना मज़ा खराब...

 

[Vikashkumar]

Waiting For Next Update

 

[Strange Love]

Writer busy chaal raha hai
Issliye kuch din koi bhi story mai update nhi aayega

Renu ko rakho Manohar ke liye. Baki sand ke paas to bahut si gaye already hai

 

[Kiran Rajput]

Reply plz

 

[Beingvijayd]

Waiting for update

 

[Gokb]

Waiting for your update

 

[reeya batliwala]

Story ko aage badhaiye
Likhate rahiye

 

[Vikashkumar]

Update

 

[Nishant_mumbai]

Sahi kahaa aur bhi hai ye sab karne ke liye

 

[reeya batliwala]

Story aage badaiye