Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

[vj4u]

Vj4u bhai kyaa hi kahe matlab aapki story ki suruat kisi aag ki lapte ki tarah jo jungle mai failti hai

Bhai aapke story na suru hone se pahle mai 2 se 3 story mai bhatak gaya thaa
Pata chala mujhe waha jaakar ki apna nagar to sirf vj4u bhai ka dagar hai

Bhai aapki update bahut hi shaandaar hota hai
Alfaaj na kam pad jaye is story ke ant tak jaate jaate
Q ki aapne kaha ismai attitude ke dono part se jyada ghatak hogaa

Thanks bhai shukriya
Aapki writing ka fan

thanks brother..shayad aise hi compliments hain jo wapas likhne ko majboor kar dete hain...

meri puri koshish rahegi ki aapko ye kahani meri pichli dono peshkash se behtar lage..

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Nice starting Bhai waiting for next one

 

[vj4u]

guyzzz..meri pichli dono kahaniyon me abusive language ka use naa ke barabar hua tha but is baar case alag hai...

story jis point se aage badhne waali hai,usme aane waale scenes me abusive words, gaaliyan zyada hongi toh spare me for that...

UPDATE RAAT TAK...

 

[u.sir.name]

guyzzz..meri pichli dono kahaniyon me abusive language ka use naa ke barabar hua tha but is baar case alag hai...

story jis point se aage badhne waali hai,usme aane waale scenes me abusive words, gaaliyan zyada hongi toh spare me for that...

UPDATE RAAT TAK...

Ju bass likho humara full on support hai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

guyzzz..meri pichli dono kahaniyon me abusive language ka use naa ke barabar hua tha but is baar case alag hai...

story jis point se aage badhne waali hai,usme aane waale scenes me abusive words, gaaliyan zyada hongi toh spare me for that...

UPDATE RAAT TAK...

Aapke update ka besbri se intezar rehega bhai

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Nice Start bro

 

[Naik]

guyzzz..meri pichli dono kahaniyon me abusive language ka use naa ke barabar hua tha but is baar case alag hai...

story jis point se aage badhne waali hai,usme aane waale scenes me abusive words, gaaliyan zyada hongi toh spare me for that...

UPDATE RAAT TAK...

Intizar rehega bhai

 

[Raguhalkal]

guyzzz..meri pichli dono kahaniyon me abusive language ka use naa ke barabar hua tha but is baar case alag hai...

story jis point se aage badhne waali hai,usme aane waale scenes me abusive words, gaaliyan zyada hongi toh spare me for that...

UPDATE RAAT TAK...

bhai uske loye chinta nahi hai bas apki ye english wali words hi thoda bahut dimag ko khata hai

 

[vj4u]

bhai uske loye chinta nahi hai bas apki ye english wali words hi thoda bahut dimag ko khata hai

shuruat me yahan bhi English words kaafi use hone waale hain..scenes hi aise create kiye gaye hain..

but jaise jaise kahani aage badhegi, shabd desi hote jaayenge..

phir bhi,agar koi baat,koi point samajh me naa aaye toh puch lijiyega...

 

[Raguhalkal]

shuruat me yahan bhi English words kaafi use hone waale hain..scenes hi aise create kiye gaye hain..

but jaise jaise kahani aage badhegi, shabd desi hote jaayenge..

phir bhi,agar koi baat,koi point samajh me naa aaye toh puch lijiyega...

always bhai aapse hi tho poochna hai or kisse poochu or haan isme attitude story se jyada twists milegi iski aasha had se kuch jyada hi hai dekhte hai

apki lekhni yaa kahu soch pe koi doubt tho nahi per magic nahi haina tho thoda atpata sa lagta hai magic ke bina aap kaise aap magic karte ho ye dekhna hai muje