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thanks for the beautiful review brother...saath bane rahiyeJabardast Updatee
Sanvy ne aakhir aisa kyaa kiya jiske wajah se Veronica itni jyaada shocked hogyi. Itna toh pakka hai usne jo bhi kiya hai woh khud Veronica ke liye bhi unexpected thaa.
Anjali ne jo uss hill top se jump kiya hai woh jarur Sanvy ki nigraani mein hi kiya hai. Kyoki Mangal aur uske saathiyon se ghirr jaane ke baad bhi Anjali ke face mein darr nhi thaa.
Yaha pe Veronica ka ek week point dikha hai. Aur woh hai uske bachhe. Agar Veronica ko todnaa hai toh uske bachho pe attack karo. Aur shayad yehi wajah hogi Veronica ke death ki.(Guess karne se koi faiyda nhi hai phir bhi kardiya)
Idher Sanvy aur Dimple ko gazab ka dare diya hai Miss Shaifali ne. Dare ka task sunnke hi Dimple ki dil ki dhadkane tezz hogyi.
Sanvy ne ek tarah se dare ka sahara leke Dimple ko propose toh kar hi diya hai. Aur ab dekhna yeh hai ke Dimple ka kya hotaa hai iss proposal ke baad.
thanks bhai,itne khubsoorat shabdon ke liye..aage aur ache updates hain.. yunhi saath bane rahiyeवि जे भाई के प्रत्येक अपडेट की खुबसूरती यह है कि हर बार वो कोई नया नया आइडिया लेकर आते हैं । कुछ चीजें तो ऐसी होती हैं जिनसे ज्यादातर लोग अवगत ही नहीं होते।
इसके अलावा अपडेट्स के अंत में जो शायरी या गजल होती है , वह तो अकल्पनीय होता है । कभी कभी तो पुरे अपडेट का निचोड़ होता है वो शायरी । गजब की कल्पना शक्ति है वि जे भाई आपकी !
सनवीर की बातें ऐसी लच्छेदार होती है कि दुनिया की हर लड़की उससे इम्प्रेश हो जाए और निट्स की बातें ऐसी कि मुस्कराते हुए होंठ दोनों कानों को स्पर्श करने लगे !
फाइट सीन ऐसे लिखते हैं कि जैसे हमारे धमनियों में बहता हुआ खून उबाल मारने लगे ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग वि जे भाई । आप सच में कोहिनूर हो इस फोरम की ।
कहां हमने सोचा था कि इस अपडेट में आरिफ रेजा की बैंड बजता हुआ देखेंगे पर हमें आश्चर्यचकित करते हुए एक नया कांसेप्ट " डेयर एंड ड्रींक " पेश कर दिया ।
और क्या बेहतरीन पेश किया ! अमेजिंग ।
इसके पहले वेरोनिका का बंकर से अचानक अपने घर पहुंच जाना और सनवीर के कमरे में प्रवेश करना हमें सस्पेंस में डाल गया । अंजलि को भी फाल्स से कूदने के दौरान वेरोनिका के चेहरे पर आए संतुष्टि के भाव हमें सस्पेंस में डाल गया था ।
अपनी कहानी में सही जगह सही तरीके से गजब का सस्पेंस क्रिएट करने में भी माहिर हैं वि जे भाई ।
क्या कहूं यार ! आपने एक बार फिर हमें निशब्द कर दिया ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग
और हमेशा की तरह जगमग जगमग ।
beautiful review brother...yunhi saath bane rahiyeWell well well to is baar jungle me mangle karne ka plan bana rakha hai Arif babu ne
Lakin deyhan se mere bhai pichli bar ki kutayi bhola nhi hai wo or her bat ka bareeki se jaiza liye ja rha hai take is bar plan me galti ki koi gunjaish baki na reh jai
Bohat dimagh laga raha hai lakin hona to wahi hai jo hona likha hai or is bar to Anjali ko trap banane ka soche bethe han ji halwa hai na k itni asani se utha le ge abhi thora sabar to rakho
Wahi dosri or Princi or Veronica kisi bunker me moujod hain jahan pe wo camping area ko live dekh rahin hain through camera's mast dimagh lagayi hain Veronica or un k hisab se wahi jagah choose kari hai Arif ne jo pehle hi point out ker chuki hain Ranjan Mathews ko
Princi ka un se pochna k unhe Sanvy k bare aise kyu lgta hai k wo akela us situation ko handle ker le ga
Or yehi pe kuch bohat gehri bat chupi hoi hai Sanvy k bare me jise khud Veronica b anjan hain k unhen aisa kyu lagta hai akhir Sanvy me esi kia bat
jis k base pe aisa ki hain wo
Ab ye to baad me pta chale ga k scene kia hai
Dimple sabhi alag kisi b activity me koi b dilchaspi na le rahi bilakhir Sam ne poch hi liya k kia Sanvy or us k darmiyan sb ok hai
ab wo use kia batati k usko to khud b smjh nhi aa rhi k khud uske andar kia chal rha hai jiske chalte wo Sanvy ko le ker kuch ziada hi soch rhi hai
Anjali ka kehna k usme itna dimagh na lagye wo kyu wo to kabhi smjh ane se raha jo sahi b hai
Sam or Anjali apne raste ho liye or Dimple Sanvy ki or barh gayi kuch halki pulki batain hoi or un batu k doran unka 1 dosre k kareeb ana kia hi moment dikhaye ho bro bole to speechless
Tumne jo manga hai to dill ye hazir ho gaya
Tum ko mana manzil or musafir ho gaya
Lo safar shiro ho gaya
Humsafar tu ho gaya
Safar to inka b shiro ho gaya hai jo jane kab or kis mor pe mukamal ho ga Dimple jo kabhi b is bare kuch khas soch rakhti nhi ti ab jb khud pe ye situation zahir ho gi to kuch though to hoga uske hamesha se straight forward rehne wali bandi ka yun pyar me par jana haye zulam nhi to or kia hai
Per maza khob ae ga jb mil bethen ge 2 chahne wale
Anjali ko gher hi liye mangal or uske bande or uske sath dosri larkiyu ko behosh ker diya un se to koi sarokar hi nhi ta
Unhe to bs Anjali chahiye or us moment pe Anjali bilkul normal rahi jaise ye koi bat hi na ti uske liye bhai 3&4 bande ghere howe hain zara b parehsan nhi hoi wo
Or Arif ka pochna k koi or to nhi dikha jungle me students k ilawa mtlb abhi dar baki hai
3 3 rounds laga liye us k bandu ne poore jangle k or rider to kia kisi 1 bande ko b wo nhi dhond pai pora itmenan kiye bethen hain are rukiye sahib party hona abhi baki hai
Moka dekh Anjali bhag nikli ab camping se dour ti to na to awaz deke bola sakti ti or na hi kuch or jis se uski help ho sake up hill ki taraf bhag nikli mangal ko laga ab to uske bach nikalne ka koi chance hi nhi hai ab uder se kahan jai gi
Is ko ider hi stop lagate dosre update ka revo b aj hi deta hu thora deri ho gayi uske liye sorry karu ga update ka bolu to 1 dum marvelous likhe
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thanks for appreciating brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiyeAnjali ne Cliff se chhalaang laga li aur uska mrit shareer bhi baraamad kar liya gaya... Just kidding... Par haan ye sach hai ke usne jump to lagaayi hai par ye sab ek plan lag raha hai Shreeman Sanveer Aharya ka... Ek aesa plan jisse yahaan tak ki Veronica ne bhi expect nahi kiya tha... Veronica ke wo shabd – “You scare me son!! ”, shayad se kaafi hain bataane ke liye the what Sanvy really means... G.O.D. ki jo jhalak aapne kuchh samay pehle dikhlaayi thi... Ek sanki insaan laga tha wo... Ab agar Sanvy ko uss se takkar leni hai to usse khud ko uss level par le jaana hoga jo khud usne bhi naa socha ho... Ye Arif Reza ya Rashid Reza shayad practice matches hain Sanvy ke liye, apni capabilities ko amplify karne ke liye...
Idhar Arif ko lag raha hai ke uska plan kaamyab hota chala jaa raha hai... Par uss bechaare ke liye sirf yahi kahunga ke – Jaago Jaago subah ho gayi...
Ek game – D or D... Maane Dare or Drink...Jab main Graduation kar raha tha uss waqt hamare friend circle mein bahut baar khela hai ye game maine bhi... Aur main har baar dare opt kar sakta hota tha but when there is a drink... I don't say no to it...
Par yahaan drink Vitro Juice tha jisse peene ka mazaa hi kuchh aur hai... Ek baar piyo fir paani se bhi dar lagne lagta hai... Khair, sabhi ko alag alag tasks mile par ullekhniya tha Sanvy & Dimple waala task... Waise ek baat batao bhai, aap apni story ke hero se rishwat to nahi lete??? Jo har game mein uski jodi Heroine ke saath ban hi jaati hai...
Ant mein Sanvy ke dwara kahi gayi shayari ne fir ek baar mann ko prasann kar diya... Pyaar ke oopar likhi gayi har pankti dil ko chhoo hi leti hai aur yahaan to Sanvy ne shayad dare ke zariye apne dil ke asli jazbaat hi keh diye ... Do line meri aur se bhi...
Mohabbat nazrana hai aasmano ka...
Jod deti hai dil jo begaano ka...
Hasratein naa rakhna ismein kabhi...
Ishq to sangeet hai bezubaano ka...
Ek baar fir se behatreen update VJ bhau... Writing skills ki tareef to aapki apun kar kar ke sahi mein thak gaya hai... Isiliye for a change brother... Iss baar aapki shayari ki tareef kiye deta hoon... Oopar Sanju bhai ka comment padha maine aur main unse poori tarah sehmat hoon ke aapke dwara end mein likhi gayi lines sahi mein update ko ek alag level par le jaati hain... Hats Off Brother...
Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...
thanks brother..saath bane rahiyeArey bap re ye kia hi twist dale ho bhai saab bole to 1 dum ghazab
Socha hi nahi ta k Anjali us hill up se jump ker jai gi or jis hisab se wo calculations ker rhi ti mtlb k bach nikalne k chances ziada hain
or mujhe laga hi ta k Anjali me kuch to khasiyat ho gi ye or bat hai shiro se usko kuch khas scene me involve nhi kia gaya per zarori b to nhi jo sirf dikhti hai wahi exist karti ho
pehle maan b lete k Anjali b aam larkiyu ki tarah hi hai per jab se ye bat reveal hoi k wo Sanvy ki childhood friend hai mostly wo ziada time sath rahen hain to bohat kuch sath kiyen hu ge or Sanvy to kuch na kuch seekhaya ho ga use akhir parchai jo hain 1 dosre ki
Mangal team ko to yehi itmenan ta k chori hai koi na gher le ge
lakin ulta unki hi leli Anjali ne
Veronica suddenly kuch pareshan to hoi lakin koi to bat zaror rahi ho gi jiske chalte wo normal ho gayin or un k dimagh me ye kheyal ana k how?
Ab main yahan thora confused hu k wo bunker jo hai un ke ghar se kitne distance pe ta matlb k uder wo Sanvy k msg k bad bunker se nikli or dosri taraf ghar me entry
ho gayi
ab room me aisa kia ta jis se wo scare hoi
is poore kand me Sanvy updated ta or na sirf janta ta balke usne defense b kara Anjali k bare wo janta ta halanke wo sath nhi te phir b kaise khel gaya wo ye bazi?
Wahin dosri or koi game khel rhe students jin me sam and group b hain
Sonu k liye mujhe acha nhi laga jb khud ka hi friend aise bole ga to dosru se kia hi umeed ker sakte hain Nits ko aisa nhi kehna chahiye ta
Sanvy ki mom ne 1 martaba pehle b use samjhaya ta per shayad use faraq nhi parta
Khair kia ker sakte hain
Sanvy ko b shayad acha nhi laga ho ga kuch bola wo us se or phir Sonu ne apni mom ko yad karte kia hi baria song sunaya sabhi ki ankhain ansuon se bhar gayi
or akhir me kia hi task de dala
Sanvy or Dimple ko
propose karne ka bol rhe lo bhai isi bahane practice b ho jai gi
Sanvy k pochne pe bina koi jawab diye us k hathu me apne hath dena
last me update ki bohat hi beautiful moment bana di bs dill khush ho gaya
Apki writing skills k to shiro se hi kayel hain❤
bohat hi shandar update ta suspense or romance k kia hi khob tadka lagaye ho 1 dum mast
We'll next update ka besabri se intezar rhe ga
Keep it up![]()
hahahah..bohot maza aane waala hai brother..aal bas yunhi saath bane rahiyeKaash me aaaj ye update nhi pdhta ...aur ab jab padh liya to abhi jis angle pr ye khatam hua waha ye khatam nhi hota
...afsos ki ye update yhi khatam ho gya aur ab intzaar krna pdega is raat ke aage badhne ka ..
ye raat wo raat h jo bahut hi jyada lambi hone wali h jisme ghatnao ka ek jo shilshila shuru hua h wo lmba chalne wala h...jahan abhi abhi dekha hmne ki sanvy ko shaifali ma'am ke dare ke through dimple ko apne dil-ae-haal batane ka moka mila beshak ye srf ek game ka hissa h pr asal me to ye uski sacchi feelings h dimple ke liye aur wahi dimple ke liye bhi uske dil ke liye kaash ye game ka hissa na hokr sach me hota jahan sanvy ko ya usko apne dil-ae-haal bayan krne ke liye kisi dare ki jrurt nhi hoti...dono ka dil bullet train ki raftar ki trha dhadak rha hoga is waqt...❤...jahan ek taraf ye sab ho rha h to wahi dusri taraf anjali ne approx 30ft se bhi uppr se jump lga di pr veronica ke first reaction and then uske situation analyzing ke baad ke second reaction aur sanvy ke message ke baad uske room me uske andr uthe sawal HOW ke jawab milne ke baad ke reaction se itna to pta chal jata h ki yaha pr plan arif reza ka nhi sanvy ka execute ho rha h anjali ka mangal aur uske sathiyo ke sath aamna samna se lekr uske us height se jump lgana iske baad bhi wo safe hogi kyuki agr ye sanvy ke plan ka hissa hi h to wo safe land ki hogi ...to plan to yaha sanvy ka hi execute ho rha h jisme arif reza fansta chla ja rha h ...aur room me veronica ne jo kuchh dekha h lgta h arif reza ki wo tunnel wali harkat aur usse phle ki uski sari fielding ke baare me bhi sanvy ko phle se hi sab malum h to sayd veronica ki wo soch jisme wo sanvy ka test lena chahti h ki kitna taiyar h wo yaha use uska jawab mil hi gya hoga baki ka hme bhi pta chal jayega jb reza ka kissa khatam hoga aur is pure game se parda uthega...ye bakai deemag faadu hone wala h...to dekhte h kya kaise kab hoga sab .. Bahut bekrari se intzaar h brother next update ka....plz kaise bhi ftafat de dijiye❤✌✌✌✌✌wahi ek baat aur sam ka goal h jaiden chowdhary ke kisi bhi record ko todkr sirius ka ultimate best bnne ka pr mujhe lga wo bolega ki mera goal h sanvy ko kisi bhi area me harane ka and ye sabko definately shocked kr deta pr khair ab wo bs jb jaiden chowdhary ko hi harana chahta h uska goal yhi seemit h to isme uski marzi ..hm lya bol skte h usko ab
Waiting for next
kuch waqt rukiye..ye GALATH aapko GALATH saabit kar dega..Bhai attitude se achchhi koi story nai ho sakti![]()