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I just like to laugh at people, who don’t like me.
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Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)
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Dekho vj bhai essee chutiye hajaaro h xforum pt or duniya m aap jaada seriously mt lo
Inka kaam hi h chutiyapa krna aap bs jb free ho to update de dena
Bs nivedan h ki weekly 2 update de dede to bahut badiya hota
Aage aapki marji weekly 1 bhi chal hi raha h
Waiting for update
Ab kb doge ye bhi bata dena sir ji
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So, Jaiden Choudhary is coming to Sirius... Maybe after his entry the story will start showing up a new phase of Sanvy's life... Jaiden Choudhary hi uska kaaran ho sakta hai jo humne Prologue Update mein padha tha... Saath hi kayi sawaal hain uski visit se pehle! Kya wo G.O.D. se connected hai, agar haan then definitely he will have a clear face – off with Sanvy. Par agar wo G.O.D. se juda hua nahi hai tab bhi Saneel Aharya se apne jeevan ki iklauti haar ka swaad wo chakh hi chuka hai, Interesting hoga dekhna jab Sanvy aur Jaiden ka aamna – saamna hoga...
Idhar Dimple ki training sahi tareeke se chalne lagi hai... “Unknown Surrender”, the way Sanvy explained that thing to new girl, that was just amazing... And,
Amazing vj4u bhai...
Jiss prakaar se poore scene ko likha aapne, that Army Officer and his wife, Sanvy explaining everything to Dimple, aur sabse khaas Dimple ke zehen mein Sanvy ki tasveer ubharna... Especially the last one, Dimple facing his back and then gets to see his face and that too of the Mossy Hills Encounter... You're just, just amazing bro!!
Adya... Sanvy ke saath pehli mulakat ke waqt hi lag gaya tha ke Adya is attracted towards Sanvy par ye cheez tab kaafi normal si lagi thi because what Rajkumar's students know about Sanvy's capabilities, It's quite understood that Adya or any other girl would feel something for Sanvy... Par inke School Auditorium mein huyi hai ghatna, especially Adya ka Dimple se jealous hona... On her looks and Beauty is again understood, but Dimple ki Sanvy se closeness ko feel karke uska jealous hona indicates that Adya is definitely one of those characters who will play a serious.. serious role in this story...
That first kiss
... Life ki pehli kiss har kisi ke liye special hoti hai,aur jab wo aapke pehle pyaar ke saath ho then... Actual mein Sanvy ne apni first kiss Anjali ke saath hi share ki thi, but of course Dimple is Sanvy's love.. the girl who has got to that special place in his heart... So of course uske saath apni pehli kiss ka ehsas khaas to hona hi tha! Idhar Dimple ke dil mein bhi lagaatar alag – alag kaarano se Sanvy ke liye feelings panapti jaa rahin hain but she's just unable to understand all this...
Aur ye justified bhi hai, she's a girl who has always believed in only one thing and that's victory... Love doesn't even exists for her, but dheere dheere hi sahi,wo Mossy Hills par Sanvy sang jharne par kareebi ka drishya ho ya Anupam Garden mein huyi ghatna... Aur ab ye kiss, she'll slowly start to realise that there's something in her heart for Sanvy or maybe a lot more than that too!!
Khair, last update mein yaani Update 61 mein,
... I just hate that thing 
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Dimple's Dream or should I say nightmare
... Well, that was a banger of an update once again dude, I mean seriously... Bro what is this behaviour? You know about herbs, you know history, your knowledge on social issues, you know geography, you are damn good at philosophy, from previous stories – your mythological knowledge and now Chemistry! This is not acceptable 
...
Aarna ko apni god mein lena, ek chhoti si hi baat thi waise to but ab tak hum ye to jaan hi chuke hain ke jis matter mein Sanvy central point ho wo kabhi bhi chhota ho hi nahi sakta... Even taking a lil girl into his arms, wasn't just a simple gesture! It left us behind with a couple of questions...
... Is Aarna special???
At last, Sanvy ne Aarna ko surakshit tareeke se fire se nikaal hi liya... Anjali ka Sanvy se gale lagne waala scene bhi cute tha amd of course Dimple's observation capabilities are just amazing... Waise uske sapne mein Adya aur Dimple ki flowers ko lekar choice bilkul same thi, reality mein agar aisa hua to bechari Dimple ka baaki ka sapna bhi kahin sach naa ho jaaye!
Superb updates bro, especially Update – 61, what a great update that was... Flowers,some Chemistry, some emotions, and a thrilling scene too... So much in a single update, that's why people crave for more of your story... And in the end would just like to mention that this is the best story running on the forum currently!! That's it, that's the truth...
Outstanding Updates Bro & Waiting For Next One...
Idhar Dimple ki training sahi tareeke se chalne lagi hai... “Unknown Surrender”, the way Sanvy explained that thing to new girl, that was just amazing... And,
Amazing vj4u bhai...Jiss prakaar se poore scene ko likha aapne, that Army Officer and his wife, Sanvy explaining everything to Dimple, aur sabse khaas Dimple ke zehen mein Sanvy ki tasveer ubharna... Especially the last one, Dimple facing his back and then gets to see his face and that too of the Mossy Hills Encounter... You're just, just amazing bro!!
Adya... Sanvy ke saath pehli mulakat ke waqt hi lag gaya tha ke Adya is attracted towards Sanvy par ye cheez tab kaafi normal si lagi thi because what Rajkumar's students know about Sanvy's capabilities, It's quite understood that Adya or any other girl would feel something for Sanvy... Par inke School Auditorium mein huyi hai ghatna, especially Adya ka Dimple se jealous hona... On her looks and Beauty is again understood, but Dimple ki Sanvy se closeness ko feel karke uska jealous hona indicates that Adya is definitely one of those characters who will play a serious.. serious role in this story...
That first kiss
... Life ki pehli kiss har kisi ke liye special hoti hai,aur jab wo aapke pehle pyaar ke saath ho then... Actual mein Sanvy ne apni first kiss Anjali ke saath hi share ki thi, but of course Dimple is Sanvy's love.. the girl who has got to that special place in his heart... So of course uske saath apni pehli kiss ka ehsas khaas to hona hi tha! Idhar Dimple ke dil mein bhi lagaatar alag – alag kaarano se Sanvy ke liye feelings panapti jaa rahin hain but she's just unable to understand all this...Aur ye justified bhi hai, she's a girl who has always believed in only one thing and that's victory... Love doesn't even exists for her, but dheere dheere hi sahi,wo Mossy Hills par Sanvy sang jharne par kareebi ka drishya ho ya Anupam Garden mein huyi ghatna... Aur ab ye kiss, she'll slowly start to realise that there's something in her heart for Sanvy or maybe a lot more than that too!!
Khair, last update mein yaani Update 61 mein,
Chemistry
... I just hate that thing .Dimple's Dream or should I say nightmare
... Well, that was a banger of an update once again dude, I mean seriously... Bro what is this behaviour? You know about herbs, you know history, your knowledge on social issues, you know geography, you are damn good at philosophy, from previous stories – your mythological knowledge and now Chemistry! This is not acceptable ...Aarna ko apni god mein lena, ek chhoti si hi baat thi waise to but ab tak hum ye to jaan hi chuke hain ke jis matter mein Sanvy central point ho wo kabhi bhi chhota ho hi nahi sakta... Even taking a lil girl into his arms, wasn't just a simple gesture! It left us behind with a couple of questions...
Iss baat se ek baat to saaf hai ke Sonu ki behen Niharika ke alawa kisi aur bachi ko god mein naa lene ke pichhe definitely ek special reason hai... Kya Sanvy ki koyi behen thi?? “Thi” is the main word here, Is she dead and is that the reason that Sanvy only takes Chhutki in his arms... Maybe because he sees her sis in her... Ya fir Sanvy – Saneel – Veronica se connected kisi bachi ki death?? Maybe Sanvy thinks he's the reason behind that?? Mujhe to bass yahi do reasons lagte hain iss baat ke, let's see what new surprise you come up with brother...
Let's see what's that andaza she got
... Is Aarna special???At last, Sanvy ne Aarna ko surakshit tareeke se fire se nikaal hi liya... Anjali ka Sanvy se gale lagne waala scene bhi cute tha amd of course Dimple's observation capabilities are just amazing... Waise uske sapne mein Adya aur Dimple ki flowers ko lekar choice bilkul same thi, reality mein agar aisa hua to bechari Dimple ka baaki ka sapna bhi kahin sach naa ho jaaye!
Superb updates bro, especially Update – 61, what a great update that was... Flowers,some Chemistry, some emotions, and a thrilling scene too... So much in a single update, that's why people crave for more of your story... And in the end would just like to mention that this is the best story running on the forum currently!! That's it, that's the truth...
Outstanding Updates Bro & Waiting For Next One...
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Waiting for a story from you dude
! And would like to see [Completed] written along with it ...
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Bhai choro en ko story k lagao mae ho jata h bura nahe kaho ga lkn ap k jawab ko slute kro ga ak dm sai kha h
Ap ki shadi ka kya bana btaya he nae
Finally aap ne stand liya. Ab tak to kai log aapke personal problems ye kaam ko bhi nazar andaaz kar rahe the, as if writer yahan ke free padne walon ke naukar hain. Aur ek baar thoda narami ke unke apne problems batao to hamesha sir pe chadte rehte hain.
Apna honsla buland rakho aur apne kaamon ke sath sath story ke liye bhi time nikal ke badhiya updates dete raho.
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bas thoda aur wait kijiye brother.. kahani bhi raftaar pakadne waali hai aur updates bhi...
excitement alag level par lekar jaayegi ye kahani..i promise you that..bas thoda sa patience rakhiyega..
Bohot besabri se wait kar rahe hai vj bhai update ka I hope jaldi dekhne ko mile ...agar nahi bhi ho paya to koi baat nahi apna jo bhi kaam hai khatam karke aram se do
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3 baate dhayan mai rakho .
1 . Respect the writer .
2. Vj sir is one of my favourite writer .
3. Dubara kisi bhi story par is type ka comment nhi karna .