Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

[vj4u]

11 baje tak guyzz...

 

[Aman Gupta]

11 baje tak guyzz...

Ok bro

 

[Rahul sood]

11 baje tak guyzz...

Okk

 

[vj4u]

Fabulous Updatee

Socha tha kal subah padhunga. Par reh nhi paaya. Agar nhi padhta toh saari raat yehi chiz dimaag mein rehti aisa hai aapki kahani ka craze.

Dimple ka woh sapna padhke bahot hasi aayi. Jabardast Sapna tha Dimple ka. Adya ko leke jalan Dimple ka kiss phir Adya aur Sanvy ka liplock awesome tha.

Par at last Sanvy ka karnaama jitni tareef karo kam hai. Aise deadly situation mein bhi kitna fast aur perfectly decision lena koi aasan kaam nhi. Par mushkil se mushkil kaam ko bhi aasan banana aata hai Sanvy ko.

Sanvy ne bahot hi bahaduri aur sujbhuj se ek bachhi ki jaan bachayi. Dekha jaaye toh aaj Sanvy ne ek nhi 2 jaan bachayi hai. Ek Aarna aur dusri uski maa ki. Kyoki agar Aarna ko kuch hojaata toh shayad uski maa jee nhi paati.

Dimple toh Sanvy ke iss karnaame se aur jyaada impress hogayi hai. Aur ab lagta hai woh din durr nhi jab indono mein love confess hoga. Par yeh aapki story hai jo dikhta hai woh hota nhi. Iss case mein bhi aisa hi hogaa.

thanks for such appreciation brother..real game toh ab on hone waala hai..saath bane rahiye..

 

[vj4u]

Insaniyat ka ek behtrin udaharan deta hua update..mind blowing mja aagya
apni jaan ki parwah kiye bagair jis trha se sanvy and dimple ne apni koshishein ki aur uske baad sanvy ka aarna ko safely bacha kr lana ...us khatarnak aag se apni jaan ki parwah kiye bagair wo kabile tarif h aur uske wo shabd ( bacha sakta hun mai us maasum ko, agar ye jaante hue bhi kuch nahi kiya toh sharir zaroor bach jaayega par aatma jal jaayegi meri....)

in shabdo ne dil ko chhu hi liya sach baat hi h agr aap kisi ki madad krne ya kuchh aur krne me capable ho aur uske baad bhi aap wo nhi kar rhe to kya fayda aapke capable hone h usse bdhiya to kuchh krne ke kabil hi na ho..tb km se km muh to chla hi skte ho baki logo ki trha.. Is sab ke baad sanvy ka akela lime light se dur chupchaap baith jana jaise usne kuchh kiya hi nhi ho. Ye uske andar ki sacchi insaniyat ko hi dikhata h ki asal me wo hi sacha insaan h jo apne dwara ki gyi madad ka bhi credit na lekr ( neki kr dariya me daal ) wale siddhaant pr chalta ho..✌
ab aate h dimple ke sapne pr ek baargi to hme lga ki ye sach me ho rha h pr baad me dimple ke sath hmara bhi fuddu ban gya ki ye kya h ye to sapna h aur us sapne me jo hua wo to majedar tha hi pr uske baad jo real me hua wo aur bhi gjb tha kaash ADYA bhi waha aajati to dimple ki halat dekhne layak hoti aaj so waiting for the next update dekhte h kya hota h aage ab✌✌

thanks for the beautiful review brother..aage kahani bohot zyada intersting hone lagegi..saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

So, Jaiden Choudhary is coming to Sirius... Maybe after his entry the story will start showing up a new phase of Sanvy's life... Jaiden Choudhary hi uska kaaran ho sakta hai jo humne Prologue Update mein padha tha... Saath hi kayi sawaal hain uski visit se pehle! Kya wo G.O.D. se connected hai, agar haan then definitely he will have a clear face – off with Sanvy. Par agar wo G.O.D. se juda hua nahi hai tab bhi Saneel Aharya se apne jeevan ki iklauti haar ka swaad wo chakh hi chuka hai, Interesting hoga dekhna jab Sanvy aur Jaiden ka aamna – saamna hoga...

Idhar Dimple ki training sahi tareeke se chalne lagi hai... “Unknown Surrender”, the way Sanvy explained that thing to new girl, that was just amazing... And,


Amazing vj4u bhai...

Jiss prakaar se poore scene ko likha aapne, that Army Officer and his wife, Sanvy explaining everything to Dimple, aur sabse khaas Dimple ke zehen mein Sanvy ki tasveer ubharna... Especially the last one, Dimple facing his back and then gets to see his face and that too of the Mossy Hills Encounter... You're just, just amazing bro!!

Adya... Sanvy ke saath pehli mulakat ke waqt hi lag gaya tha ke Adya is attracted towards Sanvy par ye cheez tab kaafi normal si lagi thi because what Rajkumar's students know about Sanvy's capabilities, It's quite understood that Adya or any other girl would feel something for Sanvy... Par inke School Auditorium mein huyi hai ghatna, especially Adya ka Dimple se jealous hona... On her looks and Beauty is again understood, but Dimple ki Sanvy se closeness ko feel karke uska jealous hona indicates that Adya is definitely one of those characters who will play a serious.. serious role in this story...

That first kiss ... Life ki pehli kiss har kisi ke liye special hoti hai,aur jab wo aapke pehle pyaar ke saath ho then... Actual mein Sanvy ne apni first kiss Anjali ke saath hi share ki thi, but of course Dimple is Sanvy's love.. the girl who has got to that special place in his heart... So of course uske saath apni pehli kiss ka ehsas khaas to hona hi tha! Idhar Dimple ke dil mein bhi lagaatar alag – alag kaarano se Sanvy ke liye feelings panapti jaa rahin hain but she's just unable to understand all this...

Aur ye justified bhi hai, she's a girl who has always believed in only one thing and that's victory... Love doesn't even exists for her, but dheere dheere hi sahi,wo Mossy Hills par Sanvy sang jharne par kareebi ka drishya ho ya Anupam Garden mein huyi ghatna... Aur ab ye kiss, she'll slowly start to realise that there's something in her heart for Sanvy or maybe a lot more than that too!!

Khair, last update mein yaani Update 61 mein,

Chemistry ... I just hate that thing .

Dimple's Dream or should I say nightmare ... Well, that was a banger of an update once again dude, I mean seriously... Bro what is this behaviour? You know about herbs, you know history, your knowledge on social issues, you know geography, you are damn good at philosophy, from previous stories – your mythological knowledge and now Chemistry! This is not acceptable ...

Aarna ko apni god mein lena, ek chhoti si hi baat thi waise to but ab tak hum ye to jaan hi chuke hain ke jis matter mein Sanvy central point ho wo kabhi bhi chhota ho hi nahi sakta... Even taking a lil girl into his arms, wasn't just a simple gesture! It left us behind with a couple of questions...


Iss baat se ek baat to saaf hai ke Sonu ki behen Niharika ke alawa kisi aur bachi ko god mein naa lene ke pichhe definitely ek special reason hai... Kya Sanvy ki koyi behen thi?? “Thi” is the main word here, Is she dead and is that the reason that Sanvy only takes Chhutki in his arms... Maybe because he sees her sis in her... Ya fir Sanvy – Saneel – Veronica se connected kisi bachi ki death?? Maybe Sanvy thinks he's the reason behind that?? Mujhe to bass yahi do reasons lagte hain iss baat ke, let's see what new surprise you come up with brother...


Let's see what's that andaza she got ... Is Aarna special???

At last, Sanvy ne Aarna ko surakshit tareeke se fire se nikaal hi liya... Anjali ka Sanvy se gale lagne waala scene bhi cute tha amd of course Dimple's observation capabilities are just amazing... Waise uske sapne mein Adya aur Dimple ki flowers ko lekar choice bilkul same thi, reality mein agar aisa hua to bechari Dimple ka baaki ka sapna bhi kahin sach naa ho jaaye!

Superb updates bro, especially Update – 61, what a great update that was... Flowers,some Chemistry, some emotions, and a thrilling scene too... So much in a single update, that's why people crave for more of your story... And in the end would just like to mention that this is the best story running on the forum currently!! That's it, that's the truth...

Outstanding Updates Bro & Waiting For Next One...

wow... brilliant and to the mark review the brother...kitni closely aur lovingly padhte hain aap kahani,saaf pata chal raha hai aapke review se . thanks for being such a good reader.. koshish rahegi meri ki aapki story ko lekar excitement badhti hi rahe..

saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Bhai choro en ko story k lagao mae ho jata h bura nahe kaho ga lkn ap k jawab ko slute kro ga ak dm sai kha h

Ap ki shadi ka kya bana btaya he nae

next month hopefully

 

[vj4u]

Story shuru hui thi to updates ka average tha har do din me ek update. Aaj ke tareekh me shuru se aaj tak average ho gaya hai 9 din me 2 updates.

Hope ke aapke sabh kaam sahi salamat line me aa jayenge aur story phir se pehle jaise raftaar pakad legi.

Aapke friend ki health ab kaise hai? Hope he is now fully recovered.

aage speed hoga brother..and yes he is recovering but process lamba hai.6 months lag jaayenge complete recovery ke liye..

 

[vj4u]

Mst update bhai....

Just marvelous and the last 4 lines are too romantic vj4u bhai..

Jabardast

Excellent superb update

Much good update

Awesome update bhai maza aa gya

Mast shaandar update

Mind blowing update bhai

ek aur khubsurat update ..dimple ka sapna bahut majedar tha ..

par sanvy kaise jaanta hai us aarna naam ki ladki ko koi bata sakta hai kya ???

dimaag lagake bacha hi liya sanvy ne aur reporters ko kuch pata bhi nahi chalne diya ki kisne bachaya .

waise reporters ke baare me sab dosto ki raay ekdam sahi thi .jo dusre blast ke baad sahi sabit ho gayi ..

Fantabulous update.

Super update hai Bhai

Superb update bhai...

शानदार ज़बर्दस्त जिंदाबाद
लाजवाब

Fabulous update bhai

Nice update

Nice update

Awesome update bhai

Mind-blowing update bro demple ka ye hal hona hi tha coz apna hero hai he Aisa waiting for next update bro

Awesome update bro

Dunia m insaniyat abhi khatam nahi huwi jiska jeeta jagta saboot h Hamare SANVAY AHARYA
behad shaandaar update bhai
Lajawab

Zabardast update

Fantastic update bro maza aa gaya

Awesome update

Fantastic

Ye zindgi hai koi haar jeet ka khel nahi hai
Khud se jeetna aur kudh se hi haarna hai
Isiliye iska koi mail nahi hai.

Nice update bro

Nice update bhai

fantastic update

Nice update

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Nice update waiting for next update

Jabardast update VJbhai

Superb fantastic update waiting for next

Behtreen Update bro

Ekdummm sahii baatt

thanks brothers...be along

 

[Azhar mujeeb]

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