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Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

vj4u

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Harbaar ki tarah hi jabardasttt Updatee thaa. Par yaha mujhe Sanvy ka character ab ajeeb lag raha hai. Jabse Sanvy aur Dimple couple huye hai tabse hi Sanvy ka behaviour puri tarah se badla hua sa lag raha hai.

Aur aaj toh Sanvy ne kuch jyaada hi kardiya. Manta hu Samrat waalo ne rules ke against jaakr Sirius ke border ke paas khade the School hours mein par Sanvy ke waha jaana mujhe ajeeb laga. Jab tak woh log aage naa aaye Sanvy ko iss tarah aage nhi badhna chahiye tha. Aur phir Police se aise bhidna. Idher Dimple ne bhi apni power ki akad dikha di Rajesh ko aur inn sab ka badla Rajesh lega bhi Sanvy se.

Dekhte hai yeh Sports meet aur kya kyaa hungaame lekar aata hai aur Sanvy kis kis tarah se apne liye musibat lekar aata hai.
thanks brother...saath bane rahiye...
 

vj4u

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vj4u भाई क्या कहूँ लेखनी में छोटी छोटी सी घटना की विशेषता से अलंकृत कर देते हैं
डिम्पल को रेस के लिए उकसाना और सैम के साथ टॉप पोजिशन शेयर करने पर गुरु ज्ञान देना वाकई एक दोस्त और गाइड की भूमिका में अतुलनीय है l
कुछ भी हो सबका फेवरिट सानविर होगा मेरा भी पर चेहरे पर मुस्कान आजाता नितेंद्र की बातों से I सिरीअस के स्टूडेंट ही नहीं बाहर गोलगप्पे बेचने वाले भी स्कुल के प्रति आत्मीय भाव रखते हैं l राजेश खुन्नस खाए बैठा है सस्पेंड जो हुआ था बदला लेने की मौके की तलाश में है l शायद डूबते सम्राट वालों को और दुश्यंत को तिनका उर्फ़ राजेश में सहारा दिख रहा है l
खैर अपडेट अल्टिमेट रहा
thanks brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye...
 

vj4u

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Behtareen update vj4u bhai....

Lekin yeh sanvy jab bhi koi panga hota hai toh Rajesh hi kyu samne hota hai enquiry ke liye aur toh aur iss baar dimple ne bhi usko apne tevar dikha diye hai toh Rajesh bhi ab dono ke liye kuch na kuch plan karega hi....

Last mein bhai yeh toh batao ki sports meet tak kitne update aur lagege....
is baargi ittefaq tha brother.. sports meet bohot jald shuru hoga..saath bane rahiye...
 

vj4u

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In the last three updates the character of Sanvy, his antics have been a bit different... Dimple ko jab Charvi aur Parag ne chot pahunchayi thi, tabhi ye confirm ho gaya tha ki Sanvy ko is baat ki jaankari milte hi wo dono ko ek behatreen saza dega... But what he did, pointed towards the cause of the future scene we read earlier... Dimple ne future scene mein jin shabdon ka prayog Sanvy ke liye kiya tha uska ek chhota sa reason hume Update 78 mein padhne ko mila... Charvi ke chhote bhai ki indirect involvement us sabmein, jo dhamki Sanvy ne un donon ko di aur jis intensity se di, and of course after finishing them, jo baatein usne Dimple se kahi, saaf hai ki jo Sanvy un donon se keh raha tha, wo kar bhi sakta tha...

In previous Updates, Vajra Bodh pointed towards the difference in Saneel & Sanveer... I think yahi sabse bada difference hai donon mein ki jahaan Saneel ke measures aur raaste hamesha straight hote the wahin Sanvy ke case mein aisa nahin hai... Sanvy, Veronica ki death ke baad, I don't think anyone can even imagine what he'll become... Aur jab is baat ka bhi andesha hai ki Dimple aur Sanvy ki love story mein bhi koyi catch hai, either Dimple is betraying him or Sanvy is with her with the intentions of getting Archana Batra (assuming that she works for G.O.D.)... So, yadi donon mein se kuchh bhi hua, to it's obvious ki Sanvy ke behaviour aur character mein ek turn zaroor aayega aur abhi ke liye jo trait uske andar chhipi huyi hai, jo kewal uske loved ones ko harm kiye jaane par unlock hoti hain, they'll be unleashed completely...

Parag aur Charvi, I don't think ke ab wo dono Dimple ya fir Sanvy ke aas – paas fatkenge bhi... Mental injury hamesha hi physical injury se zyada pain deti hai aur Sanvy ne jo kiya, firstly Charvi's brother & then making them sit on their knees in front of everyone, wo bhi unhi ke school ke baahar, I don't think ke jaldi wo donon is sadme se ubhar paayenge... Jis competition se wo Dimple ko baahar karna chahate the, kya wo donon ab khud usmein participate karne laayak bache hain? Well, let's see what they'll do now...

Idhar Dushyant aur uske saathi kahani mein firse apni tudwaane aa gaye hain... I don't know ki kya ye sab sachmein itne bade bewakoof hain ki inhe itne examples dekhne ke baad bhi akal nahi aati... Numerous times, Sanvy has beaten the shit out of Dushyant like people... Aur is update mein jo usne Rajesh ke saath kiya, jis lehze mein uske saath baat ki, Agar ab bhi Dushyant & Party ko akal nahin aati, then they absolutely deserve a good amount of beating... But ek baat samajh nahi aayi ke Dushyant & Party ki itni himmat huyi kaise ki wo Sanvy ke ghar par aakar use dhamki dekar chale gaye..? Koyi hai kya unke pichhe?

Well, pichhle kuchh updates se kahani mein jo kuchh ho raha hai wo sandeh janak raha hai... Sanvy ka kuchh muthhi bhar ladkon ke dwara itne serious tareeke se injured hona, uske baad Dimple aur Parag – Charvi ke beech jo kuchh hua, Sanvy ka Dimple se kehna ki wo is sports meet mein participate karne waala hai, injured hone ke bawajood uska is baat par kaayam rehna, Jaiden Choudhary ki entry ki sugbugahat, Dushyant ka Sanvy ke ghar aane ki himmat karna, aur ab Rajesh... Ye sab ghatnayen jo is waqt scattered si lag rahin hain, kya asal mein ye scattered hain? The build-up towards the Sports Competition is becoming more & more intense, kyonki hum prologue mein padh chuke hain ki Veronica marne waali hai, iske kaaran har cheez aur bhi sandeh poorn lagne lagi hai... But is samay agar kisi par sabse adhik sandeh hai to wo hai Sanvy aur uske dwara liye jaa rahe steps par...

Don't know why but I feel ki Sanvy ka injured hona accident nahi tha, un ladkon ki wajah se bhi Sanvy injured nahi hua, I feel ki wo apni marzi se injured hua tha... Kaaran!? I'm not having any idea about it right now, but I think jaise hi Jaiden Choudhary ki entry hogi kahani mein, kuchh parten apne aap khulne lagengi... Smriti seems to be involved in the mix too...

Asliyat mein jitne bhi bade baap aur unki auladein hain kahani mein, sabhi ka ending point mujhe ek hi dikhayi de raha hai – Jaiden Choudhary... Rohan ka Baap, Dimple ki Maa, Sameer ki Maa, Rajesh, Dushyant (too early to judge him but still..), and how can we forget Anjali's Parents... Lag raha hai ki koyi bohit badi saazish yahaan chal rahi hai jiska sootra dhar ya to Jaiden hai ya fir G.O.D., I'll go with Jaiden at the moment kyonki G.O.D. ka jo iklauta scene humen dekhne ko mila tha, uske hisaab se yahaan maujood log uske kad ke saamne bohot baune hain, itne baune ki wo uske haath ke neeche kaam karne laayak bhi nazar nahin aate... Abhi tak kahani mein aaye paatron mein se kewal Jaiden aur Archana (mostly because of Dimple), yahi do lagte hain jo G.O.D. se connected ho sakte hain... Baaki aage pata chal hi jaayega...

Smriti ka pyaar tha Saneel ya uski zidd? Ye bhi ek mukhya sawaal hai... Veronica se har cheez mein maat khaane waali Smriti, us se jeevan saathi ke maamle mein bhi maat kha gayi... Dimple Sameer se baat nahin kar rahi thi because wo Sanvy ke injured hone ka zimmedar use maan rahi thi, Dimple se apna champion ka tag share karne ki baat par Sameer kewal muskura diya, Dimple – Sanvy ke relationship ki baat saamne aane par uska reaction, the prom incident, and now this Smriti – Veronica face–off... I will be hugely shocked if Sam won't be betraying Sanvy in near future...

Dimple aur Sanvy ka romance, kahani mein abhi tak namak jaisa laga hai... Means, Impact >>>> Quantity... Kuchh hi romantic conversations aur scenes aayen hain donon ke beech but they all have been beautiful... Another reason why I'm tensed about Dimple betraying Sanvy... Ye kahani un 3-4 kahaniyon mein se ek hai (both running & completed), jinhone mujhe is kadar kahani mein involve hone par majboor kar diya hai... Without a doubt, readers ke dilon par ek kabhi naa mitne waali chhaap chhodne waali hai ye kahani... All those who are reading this masterpiece are lucky af & those who haven't read it, despite coming across, are truly unlucky...

Khair, Dimple ki capabilities se hum anjaan nahin hain but jo is update mein hua wo ek aur udahran tha is baat ka ki why Dimple is the perfect match of Sanvy... She has matched Sam in this practice race but I'm sure she'll surpass him in the competition itself... What I'm curious about is Sanvy, how will he perform in the Competition, will be the real thing... Definitely, bohot jald kahani mein romanch aur bhi badhne waala hai...

All the three updates were terrific brother... As I said, the romantic scenes between Sanvy & Dimple were just outclass, the reason of Sanvy calling her new girl was the highlight though... Parag & Charvi scene, again it was too good... But in the last three updates, the scene which turned out to be the best was the one of Veronica... She's just unbelievable man! What a character she is... I've read many stories (on this forum and in the form of novels & all too) but have never read anything like this where characters other than main protagonist & main villain leave an impact like this on the story... Truly marvellous creation dude! I've said a lot of things but I'm truly speechless because of this creation of yours...

Btw. The way you've raised the bar set by you only, first in Attitude - 1, then Attitude - 2 and now this... The level of your imagination & writing has only gone upwards & onwards... Signs of a genius writer!

Outstanding Updates Brother & Waiting For Next...
wow...itne dhyan se toh mai kahani likhta nahi jitni seriously aap isse padhte hain...
honored bro and thanks for all the motivating words...

haan SANVY ki harkatein trustworthy nahi lag rahi...par kyun,ye toh aage hi pata chalega...aaj ka update bohot cool lagne waala hai aapko...

enjoy it aur saath bane rahiye...
 

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Rajesh ek baar firse aaya aur fir se beijjati kra gya apni...😂😂bechare ki kismat hi ruthi hui h filhal jo ek bar firse uska sanvy se samna ho gya...abhi jyada kuchh uchhalta to fir se suspend hone wala tha...pr koi nhi abhi puncture gadi lekr jayega 😂😂sulag to.puri gyi hi h uski pr kehte h na har kutte ka din aata h uska bhi kbhi din to aayega hi pr us din ke baad uska har din kisi bure sapne se bhi badtar gujrenge ye use pta nhi hoga...khair wo to waqt hi btayega kya hota h pr wahin dusri taraf dushyant and gang aayi to kisi aur uddesya se thi pr ho gya alg hi unke sath sari ki sari calculation golu bhaiya ke sariya ne bigaad di unki😂😂 aisi to unki sanvy se bhi ns fati hogi jaise sariya ko dekh kr fat gyi thi abhi😂😂👌.. Wahin Sam ne last moment pr apni aakhiri hadd tak ka jor lga diya tha bawjood iske dimple ke sath use position share krni pdi. Ye baaki logo ke liye chowkane wali baat thi ki ek ldki ne ek ldke ko jo bahut hi behtrin racer h ko race tie krne pr majboor kr diya ...its a huge achievement for a girl..but sanvy ke liye nhi kyuki ya baat kisi ordinary ldki ki nhi ho rhi h ordinary ldki ke liye ye ek achievement hoga pr dimple jaisi super extraordinary bandi ke liye nhi..aur sanvy janta h ki dimple me wo kabiliyat h jo use sam ko bhi surpass krne ke kabil bnati h yahi nhi usse bhi jyada krne ke layak h wo...she can matched and overtake the strength, speed, endurance of any athletic boy . isliye sanvy ne dimple ko koi appreciation nhi diya aur usne jo kaha wo sam and dimple dono ki smjh me bhi brabar se aaya hoga. To ab wo aur bhi jyada hard training krne wale h to achieve that goal which they dreamed ever.. Aur sam ke liye to ye aur bhi jyada jaruri ban gya h kyuki ek to wo champ h uppr se dimple ke satg uski race tie ho gyi to uspr ek extra dbab hoga performance ka aur kehte h jab kisi insaan pr performance ka dbab jyada ho tbhi uska real potential nikal kr bahar aata h bss mentally usko strong hona hota h aur dbab mentally aur physically dono ko hi enhance krne me madad krta h....so lets see what happened next.
👏👏waiting brother..✌✌
thanks for the beautiful review brother.... yunhi saath bane rahiye...
 
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