Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

[vj4u]

Can't find any words to praise you now!! Simply, the greatest story of the forum currently, don't think I've ever read something as great as this story, in my life.. no novel, no story, no writer can come close!

Thanks brother... honored...

 

[vj4u]

इंतहा हो गई थी सब्र करते करते । बर्दाश्त करने की शक्ति ने जबाव दे दिया था। समीर चंदर ने लक्ष्मण रेखा लांघ दिया था। और इसी का परिणाम था भरी महफिल और फेयरवेल फंक्शन मे उसके साथ ऐसा हुआ हश्र। पुरे उत्तराखंड का सबसे होनहार और ब्रिलिएंट स्टूडेंट की ऐसी किरकिरी हुई कि उसका अपना स्कूल भी उस पर शर्मिन्दगी महसूस करने लगा।
ये घटना कोई प्राइवेट प्लेस पर नही बल्कि सैंकड़ो लोगो के सामने घटित हुआ था। सैंकड़ो लोग चश्मदीद गवाह थे। अब हमे देखना है कि स्कूल के एडमिनिस्ट्रेटर , ट्रस्टी और प्रिंसिपल, समीर भाई के लिए कैसा कैरेक्टर सर्टिफिकेट बनाते है और क्या डिसिजन तय करते है।

मैडम मैथ्यूज ने अगर वेरोनिका जी की कसम नही दी होती तो शर्तिया सनवीर , मां बेटे दोनो का वहीं टेंटूआ दबा कर मार दिया होता।
इस अपमान को स्मृति और जयदेन चौधरी भुल ही नही सकते। यह चिंगारी नही शोले भड़कने का आगाज है। शायद ऐसा शोला जो सब कुछ जलाकर राख कर दे।

समीर से ऐसे बचपनेपन की उम्मीद कोई भी नही कर सकता। सरेआम खुद के इज्जत की निलामी कोई नही करवाता। अपना फ्यूचर कोई भी इस तरह से दांव पर नही लगाता। मुझे विश्वास है इसके पीछे कोई बहुत बड़ी वजह होगी।

सनवीर के उग्र रूप का यह सिर्फ एक झलक था। देखकर ही लगता है, यह लड़का आगे चलकर काफी बवाल मचाने वाला है। दुश्मनों को छठी का दुध पिलाने वाला है।

इस कांड के बाद भी यदि उदासी दम्पति सनवीर के प्रति उदासीन और निष्ठुर रवैया ही अपनाते रहे तो धिक्कार है उनके इंसान होने पर ।
पहले वाले अपडेट की खुमारी अभी गई ही नही कि दूसरे अपडेट ने नशा डबल कर दिया। बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वि जे भाई।
Outstanding & Amazing & brilliant.

Dhanyavad bhai... yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Koshish jaari hai

 

[vj4u]

Vj bhai yeh nahi samajh aaya ki aakhir Sameer ne aisa kyon kiya aur aisi jagah pe jahan khud uski maa bhi maujud thi.
Kya woh sanvy ko uksana chahta tha Ani ko is tarah sabke samne sarminda kar ke ya koi aur hi twist hai isme bhi. Ab yahan yeh bhi samajh nahi aa raha ki Sameer jyada hi smart hai ya bahot hi bada bewakoof kyonki sirious ke rules to use bhi pata hi hongey ki uske sath kya ho sakta hai. Ya fir jaiden chaudhari ka beta hone ka ghamand ki wo kuchh bhi kar sakta hai uska koi kuchh bigad nahi sakta.

Pata chal jaayega... saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

अरे भाई लोग...

क्यू उसे 1 साल पहले मार रहे हो??

Veronica मेरी favourite है...
sanvi से भी ज़्यादा!

V J bhai ने prologue में 2021 year लिखा है
और story में अभी 2020 चल रहा है!!!

ठीक से पढ़ो सब लोग नहीं तो writer को ग़ुस्सा आ जाएगा !!!

2021 chaalu ho chuka hai brother

 

[vj4u]

Jabardast update kafi emotional seen bhi raha finally Dimple ko group me jagah mil gyi aur sab kuch sahi ho gya Shanvy ne bhi apni feeling likh ke samjha diya mai tumhe kaisa dekhna chahta hu

Congratulations for 800

Wahhh kya hi kahe ab to shuru ho raha hai khel Pahle Kamal ne ungli karne ki koshish Kiya use to Rizwaan bacha le gya kitne armaan ke sath gya tha Nits Ani ka salsa dekhne lekin sala chutiya Sam baaz nhi chindi harkat kar diya
Aur pahli baar Shayad koi bhi is khaufnaak manjar ko dekha wo bhi wo Sam jiski har baar bachate huwe aaya tha Shanvy wahi Rizwaan ke dost jo Shanvy se bhidna chahte the sabki pant gili hone se bach gyi
Aur Smriti chander ke bodyguard ki achhi dhulai wo bhi detergent powder se hui aur abhi bhi hekadi nhi utri Smriti chander ki yaha tak Ranjana Mattheues ne bhi Shanvy ke is roop ke dar ko feel Kiya
Ab ham soach sakte hai hai Shanvy ki maa ke jane ke baad kaisa hoga ham Guess kar sakte hai

I just fucking love it.

nice1

Bhai aisi writing ke liye to aap ko award milna chahiye........



I feel i am the one of character in this story....

Awesome, mind blowing, brilliant........

Super update hai Bhai

Best update .. best dailouge.. mere bete ko uski aukad dikhayegi tu dikha ...mast update bhai dil khush hogya

Awesome updates and thanks for the continuously two updates
Dil Garden Garden ho gya, 2nd updates ke liye to words hi nahin hai❤

Nice update

Aair sabne dimple ko maaf kar hi diya

Faadu udpate

Sam se aisi umred nahi thi.

Aaj SANVY ka naya roop dekhne ko mila. Sabne milkar smiriti ki dho hi di.


Waiting for next update

बहुत शानदार रहा सेकंड अपडेट। पर जहाँ अपने हीरो की फाइट इतनी ज्यादा धमाकेदार थी उससे ज्यादा रंजना मैथ्यू के डायलॉग पावरफुल थे पर वेरोनिका के आने के बाद मेने सोचा था कि वो ani से सैम को थप्पड़ लगवाएगी या धांसू डायलॉग बोलगी रंजना के जैसे पर कुछ नही हुआ। में शार्क हु तू मछली है यह कुछ जमा नही। काम से कम सेम को ही ज्ञान दे डालती

बेहतरीन रचना के लिए हार्दिक बधाई

Veronica ki planning while executing waali seekh hi ab Sanvy ko wo banayegi jiska khof aage chal kar dunia khayegi.

Bechari Ani bahut buri fansi school tradition ke chakkar mein magar fir bhi wo Sam ke saath dance ke liye tayyar ho gai. Magar uska gussa abhi bhi kam nahi hua tha.

Tradition ke chakkar mein bechara Nits bhi bahut bura fansa tha. Sabne apni poori bhadas nikali thi uske upper.

Chalo Dimple ke saath waapas uska group -1 aa gaya hai aur is -1 ne bhi usko ek raah dikhayi hai ki kis tarah wo us -1 ko +1 kar sakti hai. Dekhte hai ki kya Sanvy waapas dil se usko kabhi apna bhi paayega yaa nahi? Beautiful update.

Extraordinary and superb updates hai sir g,
Bonding and affection and anger to dekha hum sabne but wo ek alag roop bhi dekne ko milgaya,

At last veronica ke lines .... Wowwwww...

Wow, this is next level Sanvy. Abhi sirf Ani ke saath ek incident hua tha aur Sanvy reached to next level of ruthless so it's beyond imagination that what would he become when Veronica will be no more. Sahi kaha tha Dimple ne future prologue mein ki Sanvy is ruthless murderer.

Aaj ke kaand ke baad Sam ne apni kabr kudh hi khod li hai bhale hi wo Jayden Chaudhary ki najayaj aulad ho magar Sanvy Saneel aur Veronica ki aulad hai ye do naam jinke aage dunia bhi jhuk jaati hai.

Shayad aaj ke incident ki hi wajah se Jayden Chaudhary Sanvy ko us kameene Inspector ke haatho jail mein pitwata hai. Very exciting update.

Awesome updates.

Nyc fabulous update bhai

Beautiful update bhai

Nice update back to back 2update bahut achha laga

Bhai kya updated diya maja aayaga jabardast dhamekdar update bhai waiting for next update jaldi dana bro hosekto

Boht zabardast updates

Wahhh bhai ky update diya h kasam se maza aa gaya

Fuck this shit men, itna behtreen update, itna mind-blowing update bhai kiya hi bolu main mere pass alfaaz nahi hai kuch kehne ke liye bhai sach me ek baar tumse milna chahta hu tumhare pair chuu kar aashirwad Lena chahta hu ki aisa main bhi likh pau

Behtareen

SUPER UPDATE BROTHER....
ETNA DIN WAITING KA ACHA ENAM DIYA
EK DOUBT HE AAJ ETNA SAB HOGYA TOH EN SAB ME DIMPLE DIKHAYI NHI DI ABHI TAK! IN SAB KA ASAR USPE KYA HOGA !!!

BAS CURIOSITY HE

The writing skill are on another level ....

Awesome, excellent updates

Babaal kar diya bhai ye update ne to
Ek to ek saath do update
Uper se dono kaa apna ek alag hi level
Aur ek dhaaansu saa fight seen
Bohat hi vadia update the bhaii
Maja aa gya padh kar
Umeed hai aaapki kalam stories ko ek alag level par laike jaaye gi or kayoo ko inspire karegi kush alag or wadia likhne ke liye

Fantastic Updates Bro

Matlab double update

lovely update ..dimple ko sabne maaf kar diya ye jaankar bahut achcha laga .
sanvy ne ek best salaah likhi dimple ke shirt par jisko ab wo apnane ka vaada kar baithi hai khudse .

romanchak update ..farewell ka maja lene aaye the sab par kuch alag hi kaand ho gaya jiska asar future me dekhne ko milega .
sam ne ani ke boobs ko daba diya ,par sidha sabke saamne dance karte waqt ye sabse badi galti hai ,aur waha dono ke parents bhi maujud the .

sanvy ko pata chala to uspe bhut hi sawar ho haya sam ko peetne ka .
bodyguards ki to durgati kar di sanvy ne aur sam ko peet diya ..
smriti ke upar haath uthane se bhi koi problem nahi huyi sanvy ko .itna gussa kyu aaya aaj sanvy ko sirf ani ke liye ya koi aur bhi reason hai ..
jaisa sabne dekha ki sanvy ki personality hi change ho gayi hai sam aur smriti ko maarte waqt aur usko dekhkar sab darr bhi gaye .
smriti ko to ranjana ji ne karara jawab diya par ab veronica bhi aa gayi jisko dekhkar apni aukat yaad aa gayi smriti ko .
ab ye sab sunkar dimple ka reaction kya hoga ye bhi dekhna hoga .
ani ko veronica ke paas dekhkar aaj uske parents ko bhi bura nahi laga balki achcha hi laga .

Jabardasttt Updateee


Farewell days aur woh Sign up moments bhule bhulaye nhi jaate. Those were the most memorable days. Uss din school ki sabhi achhi aur buri yaade yaad aati hai jinme se kuch zindgi bhar saath rehti hai toh kuch bhulaye jaate hai. Aur aisa hi kuch innlogo ke saath hua hai. Par ab lagta hai Rohan sudhar raha hai. sanvy ke group ke saath ghum raha hai sidhe muh baat kar raha hai aur yrh ek achhi baat hai.

Nice update

bahut hi khubsurat updates....

Awesome updates

Awesome

Isse padhne ke baad mujh mein bhi review dene ki taqat nhi bachi hai. Koi itna bhi ruthless hosakta hai yeh pehli baar dekha hai. Isse ek baat toh pakki hai jab saamne galat horaha ho tab sanvy se bada galath koi nhi.

Veronica ke zinda hone ke baad bhi jo itna merciless hai toh uske marne ke baad woh kaisa hoga yeh soch pana bhi mumkin nhi.

Atyanta Adbhut aur akalpaneey update vj4u bhai....

Veronica aur Ranjhana toh bilkul ugal rahi thi jiski garmahat dekh kar smriti toh uske pass Jane ke liye baar sochegi...

Bhai sameer ki aur leni thi aesi ki vo khud apni najro me gir ke school hi chhod de...

Mind blowing update bro maza aa gaya

Bahut hi shandaar lajawaab update bro

Aise hi behtareen update late rehna bhai

Mast update bro
Yaar SANVY ki itni sanak se kya hoga karna hi tha to esa karte ki uska baap bhi iske per me hota tab baat kuch jamti sanak Esi honi chahi ki sanak ko bhi lage ki me bara ya vo bara

Bahot zaberdast shaandaar update bhai

SANVAY k ander koyi doosri atma khus gayi thi lagta tha princi na aayi hoti tow dona maa beta ka kaam tamam ker dia hota
Itna sab hone k baad bhi Smirti ka ghamand kam nahi huwa lekin jaise Veronica ko dekha kadam peeche hat gaye zaberdast
Bahot behtareen shaandaar
Lajawab update

Superb

डिम्पल अपने सौतेले भाई की गंदी हरकत की वजह से अनी और पूरे ग्रूप से माफी मांगेगी ।
वेरोनिका + सैनवी का पूरा ग्रूप = डिम्पल/सैम
इंतजार है अगले अपडेट का

Veronica ki sekhayi hoi sekh bohat hi ziada khas hai agr Sanvy isko achieve ker leta hai to it really great for him kyu k ye chez bad me uske liye bohat ziada helpful rhe gi abhi jaise jaise competition tuf hota ja hai to its time for him khud ko improve kre ziada se ziada yehi better hai.
Finally Dimple welcome back to the group sabhi ne dill se muaf ker diya ye acha laga or wo jo apne dostu k bagair sad feel kerti ti dill hi dill me chalo ye 1 problem to solve hoi uski or baki Sanvy ki kia thoughts hain uske bare me ye to guess karne se rhe.
Anjali tshirt sign karne k liye na bolti to shayad Sanvy is bat ko avoid hi ker deta but usne jo bat likhi wo dill ko chu gayi angain Veronica k kahe ge words jo bohat hi precious hain.
Sam madarchod or kitna neche gire ga ye backloda mera dimagh to usi waqt ghoma ta jab Anjali ne jald-bazi me door open kia ta Sanvy k pochne k bawajod wo taal gayi thi practice k time b kuch na kuch harkat ki hogi sam kamine ne itni b kia aag lagi hai madarchod ko Sanvy ne acha sabak sikhaya hai uske kiye ka ab agr zara c b dimagh howa uske pas to next time kuch b utla sedha karne se pehle 100 bar soche ga kehte hain k kutte ki dum kabhi sedhi nahi ho sakti ab ye dekhne wali bat hai k is k mamle me ye bat kitni sahi bethati hai samriti ko kuch ziada hi ghamand hai koi na iska ilaj to Veronica ache se ker den gi
Princi ko kuch to action lena chahiye uski ghatiya harkat k jawab me halanke suna to baria wala diya hai per sirf sunane se kam thori na chalta kuch to action lena hi chahiye
Sanvy ke bare me kia bolu action time jo roop usne liya ab usko describe karne k liye to alfaaz hi na hain apne pas agr Princi usey Maa ki kasam na deti to pata cut ta dono maa bete ka sabhi dare howe te or wo chutiya kamal next time ungli na kre ga Sanvy and group se last me Veronica ki entry bawal thi samriti chali thi Sanvy ko aukat dikhane pehle apni to dekh le dayan khair Anjali k parents ki taraf se first time positive reaction dekhne ko mila hamesha se dislike hi kia hai Veronica or Anjali k dostu ko chalo is bech kuch to acha howa......!

Both updates are marvelous❤

Keep going

Yaar ekdum rapchik update tha
Bole toh chabuk update
I like RANJANA OR VERONICA entry or dialogue very impact ful
SHANVY ka toh ku6 kehne ka toh banta hi na hein....!
Ku6 19-20 ho gaya tha characters mein lekin koi na 6oti moti baate hoti rehti hein....!
Keep Writing....!

Amazing update bhai..sam to lgta hai achi trah gaand mrva kr hi mane ga sala ab nea kaand kr dia sala

Awesome update bhai keep posting

speechless awesome great mind blowingggg update dear

bhai lajabab update awesome mind blowing maza hi aa gya

(Unable to comment on such a masterpiece...)

NICE UPDATE BHAI
LEKIN KYA SAM KA CHERECTOR NEGETIVE HO JAYEGA GA KYA ABBBB

Nice update bro

शब्दो की कमी पड़ गयी मेरे अंतर्मन मे vj भाई, क्या दृश्य दिखाया है आपने आज sanvy का, ओह्ह... शायद ही मै कहानी के बीच मे कहीं रुका हूँगा ।
अब लग रहा है कहानी मे असल पंगे स्टार्ट होंगे । संवीर को और भी शक्तिशाली बनना होगा, चाहे वो शरीरिक रूप से हो या फ़िर मानशिक रूप से । साला समीर चंदर अपना औकात फिर से दिखा दिया, लेकिन उसका जबाब उसे सूद समेत वापस मिला है । अब आगे देखना होगा की इन सब पर डिंपल का क्या प्रतिक्रिया होगा ।
लज़ाबाब अपडेट था सरकार ।

Superb updateds bro

SANVY is like the modern version of RAAZ.
But ye NITS aur SONU ke roop me ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ka hi punarjanam hua lagta hai

Ye update story ke title ko justify karti hai
Very good update bhai
shandaar

Awesome update bro

Superb fantastic update waiting for next update

Nice Updates...

सैम के द्वारा की गई इस गंदी हरकत के बाद सैनवी को सैम से एग्जाम में टाप होकर , और अगले सेमेस्टर में खेल और पढ़ाई में उसे हरा कर उसके बाप जाडेन चौधरी और उसकी तीनो मां को उसकी औकात दिखाए

Ekdum jabardst update bhai halat hi khrab krdi sam or uski maa ki to

Sign up prathaa yaad dila diya apna Engineering ka last day. Wow maza aa gaya. Lekin aapne shuru me prologue diya thaa uski date April thee I think ab Feb hain yani Veronica ab 2 months ki mehmaan hain. Means story ka sabse dukhad adhyay shuru hone wala hain aur true champion wohi hta hai jo apni mushkilo ko fatah karey aur dobara uth khada ho jaye ab dekhna hoga kaisay SANVY apne ko in sab ke baad dobara khada kar pata hai.

Jiska aap e prologue me bola thaa shayad ab ant ki shuruvat ho gayi magar woh arambh hoga SANVY ke safar ka magar ek cheez miss lagi is pure kaand me aur woh hain DIMPLE ka es sence se gayab hona shayad yahi wajah Dimple aur SANVY ka karan banegi jis ka apane 2nd Prologue me darshaya thaa. Ab lagta hai Smriti hi usi police wale se complain kar ke SANVY ko jail karayegi ya phir Sam ka najayaz baap kudega phir beech me aur apni taqat dikhayega aur yahi reason Bane shayad Veronica ki death ka.
Jaha tak mujhay lagta hain shayad SAM ne intentionally salsa ke liye apna nad Ani ka naam diya hoga aur SANVY ko trigger karne ke liye yah harkat Kari ho apne baap ke kehne per. Taki SANVY kuch GHALAT kar sakey aur usko moqa Miley coz uske jaisay champion ke liye draw bhi haar hoti hai aur woh haar bardasht nahi kar sakta. Dekhtey hai aapke dimagh me kiya chal raha hai .

Both updates are great and the second one is the tone setter for those things which are going to happen in the future for SANVY.

Overall behtreen updates the 2non hi .

isme hume SANVY ka ab tk ka sabse Cruel orr Ruthless avatar dekhne ko mila, or jahan tk mujhe yaad aaraha hai ab tak ki story ka to ye first time tha jab SANVY ne kisi female pr haath uthaaya ho even k SANVY to kabhi kisi female k saamne kuch ultaa seedha bhi nhi bolta.


Sam ne kitna badaa gunaah kiya hai or SANVY ko kitna gussa aaya tha us pr ye to issi baat se clear ho jaata hai k SANVY ne kisi ka lehaaz nhi kiya even k teachers or sabhi parents logon k saamne hi gaaliyon ka be-Daregh istemaal kiya usne.


SANVY ne sabhi sabko hi peeta kya wo Bodyguard hon ya Sam ya phir usmi MAA lekin SANVY ne kisi ka lehaaz naa kiya. SANVY ne to Ranjana Methwes ki bhi naa sunii agr VERONICA shi time pr naa aatiii to maybe aaj SANVY k haathon kuch ghalat ho jaata, waise ghalat to pehle hi ho chukaa hai pr agr VERONICA usse naa rokti to phir kuch bachta bhi nhi.



or aaj first time Anjali k parents usse VERONICA k saath dekh kr khush huwe hain to maybe k ab jald hi inki talkhiyaan bhi khatam ho jain .

Will be waiting for the next update.

Bilkul vj4u apki story to rollercoaster ride jaisii hi hai or me to bolun ga k us se bhi zeyaada thrilling and exciting hai yrr.

apki story to Marvel walon ki Web series or movie se bhi zeyaad thrilling or complicated hai jinme Marvel ki future movie ka hint diya hota hai like next movie k hero ya villain se related kuch scene ya stuff dikhayaa jaata hai. Unhe guess krna phir bhi bohot easy hota hai pr apki story k hints or scenes se guess krna bohot zeyaada difficult hota hai.

Bohot hi behtreen hain aapki writing skills .

Bilkul dost aapne is baat ko note kiya jo k shaayd hi kisi or reader ne kiya ho k aakhir Sam ko aisiii kya chulll machi thi jo usne sabke saamne aisa kiyaa. Mene bhi note kiya tha but time ki kami or net k issue k chalte mention nhi kr paaya or review likhte huwe zehen se nikal gaya pr aapne mentione kiya hai ab reason kya tha ye to sabko hi jaannaa hai k aisa q kiya SAMEER ne.
maybe by mistake aisa ho gaya ho pr chances bohot hi kam hain iske bcz SAMEER koi bacha to hai nhi ya koi No-Sikhiyaa, wo ek trained or one of the best dancer hai to ghalati k chances bohot kam hain. Or phir ek straight on smooth step k beech me jab usse apne haathon ko smoothly slide krte huwe ANJALI k shoulders se slide krte huwe uski Fingers as on hands tk le kr jaana tha but mid way m uske haad ANJALI k breast pr chale gye or usne squeeze kr diya , ye ghalti nhi hai.

Veronica ki death aur sanveer ke jail jaane ka plot ban chuka hai
Aur sath he sath sanveer ke andar ek alag shaksiyat bhi paida hone lagi hai

Abhi 2 month bacha hai SANVY ke jail or VERONICA ke death ke liye usse pehle bahut kuch hoga lagta hai sunami aane wali hai lahre astir ho chuki hai

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SANVY SAM KI HARKAT PAR PEHLE USKE BODYGUARDS KO MAARTA HAI AUR PHIR USSE AUR USKI MOM KO BHI NAHI CHHODTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VERONICA SMRITI KO KHUDSE AUR USKE BETE SE NAA ULAJHNE KI DHAMKI DETI HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER 1

(ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH)


DATE-1ST FEB

UPDATE-92


CITY-DEHRADUN

PLACE-CHANDER VILLA






HEY DINGLI...AAO...

upar chaddhne ke liye stairs par kadam rakhe hi the SMRITI CHANDER ne ki tabhi ghar me dandanakar enter hui DIMPLE jisse dekh upar se toh ek halki smile ki thi usne par DIMPLE ke facial expressions ko dekh woh samajh gayi thi ki kal jo hua,woh jaan gayi hai woh and because of what happened, she was not in a good mood...


DIMPLE-SAM kahan hai choti MAA...

SMRITI-upar,apne kamre me...hey,stop...listen first...


turant stairs chaddhne lagi thi DIMPLE par usse rok liye the SMRITI ne...

SMRITI-you brother is injured heavily... uska pura jaw line dislocate kar diya hai us bastard SANVEER ne...

DIMPLE-choti MAA...soch samajh kar boliye...jo aapke bete ne kiya hai,for that,shukr manaiye ki SANVY ne uska sirf jaw line ko hi dislocate kiya hai...

warna ANI ke saath jo harkat SAM ne ki hai,uske liye SANVY uske sharir ka har ang tod chuka hota...

SMRITI-soch samajh kar tum bolo...us looser ke liye tum apne bhai ke khilaaf bol rahi ho...

DHADHHH...

DIMPLE aur SMRITI,dono hi stairs chaddhte hue baat kar rahe the...

SAM ka room aa chuka tha jiska darwaza band tha..

zor se push kiya tha dono hi pallon ko DIMPLE ne jiski wajah se door tezi se open hua...

dandanati hui ghusi DIMPLE room me par saamne ka scene dekh thithak gaye the uske kadam...

ek doctor joki CHANDER ka family doctor tha,4 nurses ke saath bed ke baaju me khada tha aur bed par half head me pattiyon se covered face liye leta hua tha SAM...

SANVY ke ek do punches uski aankhon ke just neeche bhi pade the jiske kaaran uski eyes kaafi suj gayi thi aur saath hi saath unme blood jaisi redness bhi dikh rahi thi...

filhal ussi ko check kar raha tha doctor...

bilkul kisi nirjeev insaan ki tarah pada hua tha SAM...

jahan apne bhai ki haalath dekh ek pal ke liye DIMPLE ke man me uske liye daya ke bhaav ne janm le liya tha wahin DIMPLE ke piche piche room me ghusi SMRITI ko dekh doctor apna check up hold par rakh ghuma unki taraf...


SMRITI-how is my son doing doctor...!!!???

DOCTOR-filhal toh not good...but i must say,he is lucky...warna jaisi maar lagi hai,he should have gone blind...

par abhi bhi i am only 90 percent sure ki he is alright...ek do din ke observation ke baad,i will be completely sure...

SMRITI-kyun...???what happened...??? morning me toh aapne kaha tha ki jaw line dislocation mahine bhar me theek ho jaayega...

DOCTOR-that's true... par mai baat jaw line ki nahi balki SAM ke right eye ki kar raha hun...

see this place...ye down eyebrows se lag kar jo portion hai,isse atrophy of pretarsal muscle kehte hain...

it's a very important structure for our vision...

now,is muscle ke just neech,ye jo halka phoola hua part hota hai,ye hai fat bag...

SAM ko maar issi fat bag par lagi hai aur isiliye hi iski aankh itni red hai...

ab aisi condition normally bohot zyada dangerous hoti hai aur woh isiliye kyunki ye bag pretarsal muscle ke just neeche hone ke kaaran usse attached hota hai...

iski veins bhi pretarsal muscle se connected hoti hai...

SAM ko jo maar uske fat bag par lagi hai,uska impact iske pretarsal muscle par bhi hua hai par thankfully zyada nahi...

agar zyada hota toh ab tak he would have lost his vision...

par kam hi sahi but kyunki impact hua hai isiliye we have to see through it for atleast a day...

waise tensed hone ki zaroorat nahi hai kyunki looking at the damage at SAM'S fat bag,kuch bhi bura hone ke chances bohot zyada kam hain...

baaki jaw line ka jaisa maine pehle bhi bataya tha,it will take atleast a month to completely recover...

haan,abhi ek hafte pain zyada rahega isiliye pain killer injection din me do baar lagega...

is dauran isse neend bhi zyada aayegi but it is good for the fast recovery...jitna kam jawline movement hoga, recovery will be that fast...

apne bete ki haalath ko jaan aur usse chupchaap pada dekh uske liye daya, pyaar aur jisne SAM ko is condition me pahuchaya tha, SANVY,uske liye dil kadwahat se bhar utha tha SMRITI ka...


SMRITI-doctor, can we have a moment alone with my son...

DOCTOR-sure...bas SAMEER se baat karne ki koshish zyada mat kijiyega...his jaw line needs rest...

haan me sir hilaya DOCTOR ne aur apne nurses ke saath room se nikal gaya woh...

aur un sabke jaane ke baad apne bete ke paas pahunch uske sir par haath ferne ke baad ghumi SMRITI DIMPLE ki taraf aur...


SMRITI-dekh rahi ho...kaisi condition ho gayi hai iski...

kya ab bhi us nobody ko apne bhai ke upar rakh favour karogi tum...!!!


"ZAROORI NAHI KI HAR CHIZ ME MAHAN BAN JAAO"...

BAS APNA AKS DEKHTE WAQT AAYNE ME SIR NA JHUKE,WOH INSAAN BAN JAAO..."


apni choti MAA ki baat sunte hi SIGN UP DAY par jo advice SANVY ne uske shirt par likhi thi,dimag me ghum gaya tha DIMPLE ke...

saath hi saath SANVY ke "SAHI aut GALATH "waala tark bhi yaad aane laga tha usse...

ek aisa tark jispar naa amal kar paane ki hi wajah se aaj woh SANVY se door ho gayi thi...

DIMPLE-kya bulaya aapne SANVY ko..."NO BODY"...

right...!!!ek aisa no body jisse apne dum par kisi bhi chiz me harane ka hunar nahi hai aapke is champion bete me...

ek aisa no body jisse sports meet me kisi bhi event se door rakhne ke liye hamari puri so called champion family kisi soul looser ki tarah behave kar rahe the...

nobody woh hota hai CHOTI MAA jiske hone naa hone se fark nahi padta par SANVY woh banda hai jiske aage agar koi sabse bada nobody hai toh woh aapka beta hai...

haan,bhai hai mera par as i said,jo harkat isne kal ki hai,he deserves this punishment...

insaan hokar jaanwar jaisa ATTITUDE rakhega toh maar toh padegi hi...

SMRITI-what did you just say...!!!??? jaanwar...apne bhai ko jaanwar bolne se pehle ye dekho...pata chal jaayega,asli jaanwar kisse kehte hain...

apne phone me ek video file ko open karte hue DIMPLE ke saamne kar diya tha SMRITI ne...

ye video aur kuch nahi kal BANQUET HALL me hue kaand waala scene tha jisme SANVEER ne pehle toh kisi ka lihaaz nahi kiya tha aur phir SMRITI ke bodyguards, phir SAM and finally SAM ke saath SMRITI ka gala dabane me bhi hichak nahi dikhayi thi...

hall me hi kuch students ne woh video sboot kar liya tha jisse waise toh PRINCI ne strict warning ke saath sabse delete karwa diya tha par woh aisa kar paati,usse pehle hi SMRITI ne apne secretary ke through us video ki ek copy haasil kar li thi...

khair,us pure scene ko dekhte waqt DIMPLE ki aankhein hairat se faili hui thi aur theek baaki sabki tarah jinhone SANVY ki brutality ko live dekh aur feel kar apne andar dar feel kiya tha,same haalath is waqt DIMPLE ki ho chuki thi...

the guy she loved,the guy for whom she was willing to fight even with her family,us scene me apne us pyar ko pehchaan bhi nahi paa rahi thi woh...

it was like kisi dusre person ko hi dekh rahi thi DIMPLE...

video pura ho chuka tha jiske baad bhi DIMPLE stabdh hi khade rehne waali thi par tabhi uski nazar phone ke pure screen par gaya jisse dekh uski aankhein ek baar phir badi ho chuki thi...

DIMPLE-aapne ye video DAD ko W..AP kiya hai...!!!

SMRITI-kyun,nahi karna chahiye tha...tum bhale hi bhul gayi ho ki saamne itni kharab condition me pada ladka tumhara bhai hai par JAIDEN nahi bhulne waale ki he is his son...

aur unke bete ko is condition me pahunchane waale ke saath woh kya karenge,just imagine...

JAIDEN CHOWDHARY was a huge global personality...unka influence bhi national level ka tha...

aise me DIMPLE ke man me SANVY ke liye darna laazmi bhi tha...

kuch kaha nahi usne aur chupchaap palath jaane lagi aur ye dekh...

SMRITI-kahan jaa rahi ho...???us looser ko warn karne...jo chahe kar lo,he cannot ne saved...

SMRITI ki baat sun uski taraf palti DIMPLE...

DIMPLE-i know ki SANVY dad ke aage filhal kuch nahi...par jis bandr ka video aapne mujhe abhi dikhaya hai,khud dhyan se dekh lijiye ek baar...usme mera SANVY hai hi nahi...

you were right...woh ek jaanwar hi hai... aisa jaanwar jisse achayi aur burayi,sahi aur GALATH jaise bhaavon se koi matlab nahi hai..

yaa toh mai nahi,yaa saamne waala nahi...jo aise junoon se ladhte hai naa choti MAA,unse door rehna hi theek rehta hai...

meri advice maaniye,aap bhi door rahiye SANVY se air dad ko bhi rakhiye...

ho sakta hai ki pehli chot aap usse dene me kaamiyab ho jaayen,par matter toh aakhri chot ki hoti hai naa...

aur der saver hi sahi, woh aakhri chot SANVY hi dega...

isiliye phir kehti hun,apne bright future ke liye,stay away from SANVY...





SAME TIME:-

PLACE-SANEEL'S RESIDENCE




HEY MAA...NAMASTE AUNTY...

darwaaze ke dusri taraf ANJALI,NAISHA,RASHI,KHANAK,NITS,SONU, EKPREET aur RAJAT khade the...

VERONICA ne door open kiya tha jispar hamesha ki tarah jahan ek taraf ANJALI unse lipat gayi thi wahin baaki sabne normal greet kiya tha par in dono hi gestures me do bhaav common the joki chhup nahi paaye the VERONICA se...

HESITATION and GUILT...

kal jo hua, SANVY ne jo kiya,uske baad pehli baar aisa tha jab uske dost usse dare the...

usse door jaana chaah rahe the joki woh chale bhi gaye the...

par baad me unhe apni galti ka ehsaas bhi ho gaya tha...

kyunki aakhir jo bhi SANVY ne kiya tha,woh action nahi balki action ke prati uska reaction tha...

haan,woh reaction unke hisaab se zyada hi brutal tha par ek sach ye bhi hai ki baat ANJALI ki thi...

ANJALI ke saath jo hua tha uske baad SANVY ne jo kiya, kahin na kahin woh un sabko justified lagne laga tha...

ek dusre se baat,tark vitark karne ke baad finally unhe laga tha ki is negetive mahoul me un sabko yun SANVY ko chhod nahi nikalna chahiye tha...

ye convo late evening hui thi isiliye aaj yahan aane ka plan kiya tha un sabne and here they were...

VERONICA-yahin darwaze par anshan karna hai toh carpet laga dun...!!!

VERONICA ke chehre ki sanjeevani buti waali muskurahat...

jisse dekh koi stranger bhi apne bade se bada tention bhi insaan bhul jaaye...

phir toh ye sab ghar ke hi bacche the... turant un sabka mind 50 percent light ho chuka tha jiske baad woh VERONICA ko follow karte hue sab turant andar ki taraf badh chuke the...

ANI-MAA...ab mood kaisa hai SAN ka...!!!???




JAB KISI KO KISI SE MOHABBAT HOTI HAI...

YEH NA POOCHHO SANAM KAISI HAALAT HOTI HAI...

NA SUBAH KA PATA,
NA KHABAR SHAAM KI

KYA KISI SE KAHEIN JAAN-E-JAAN
KAISA YEH PYAAR HAI, YEH KAISA PYAAR HAI...


VERONICA ko jawab dene ki zaroorat nahi padi...

guitar play ke saath SANVY ke room se aa rahi gaane ki awaaz ne ANI aur baaki sabke common sawal ka jawab de diya tha...

aur us jawab-e-tarike ko sun hairan ho gaye the sab...

RASHI-ye...ye toh SANVY ki awaaz hai...he is singing...!!!

itna sab karne ke baad,itne light tone me gaana gaa raha hai ye...

NITS-aunty pakka SANVY hi hai naa...!!!

VERONICA-khula hai darwaza... push it and see it for yourself...

VERONICA ki baat sun NAISHA aage badhi and she pushed the door...

wakayi khuli thi woh door joki NAISHA ke push se bin awaaz khulti chali gayi...

couch par dusri taraf mooh kar baitha hua tha mai...haathon me aaj dad ki nahi balki kuch time MAA ki gift ki hui black givson acoustic guitar thi jisse play karte hue aankhein band kar gaana gaa raha tha mai...

KHANAK-SANVY...

MAI-hey...whats up guyzzz...bataya nahi aa rahe ho karke...

par sahi time par pahunche ho...aaj bade dino baad jamming karne ka man hua hai...abhi first song hi start kiya tha...wanna here...!!!

apne normal way se zyada khush aur energetic dikh raha tha mai..
face par ek alag hi glow tha jisse dekh face toh normal hi rakha sabne par man hi man bohot zyada shocked the sab...

RASHI-yaa...we would love to...

ab tak sabne bhi apne aap ko normalise kar liya tha...

MAI-par participate karna hoga...mere saath baari baari ek ek song gaana hoga sabko...

tum besooron ko bhi be...

NITS-besoora tu saale...tere se better gaata hun mai...

MAI-pichwade se nikali awaaz ko gaana nahi bolte beta...

HAHAHA...

jahan baaki sab haste hue SANVY ke aaj baaju baith chuke the wahin ANI abhi bhi SANVY ke is naye avtaar ko dekh shocked hi thi...

VERONICA-zyada mat soch aur jaakar baith jaa...

ANI-kaise naa sochun aunty...jitne baar bhi lada hai ye,uske baad 1,2 din tak har time ukhda ukhda raha hai par kal isne un BODYGUARDS ko sirf maara nahi, unke haath pair tod diye, SAM ka mooh tod diya and even usse aur uski mom ka gala daba nearly dono ko pura maar diya tha...

phir bhi itna chilled out...!!!

ab kya bolti VERONICA...pehle SANVY ki har ladhayi bohot hi normal way me puri hui thi...

dekhne waalon ko lagta tha ki SANVY ne bohot damage kar diya tha jabki uske standards ke hisaab se damage toh shuru bhi nahi hua tha...

haath pair chalne band ho jaate the par dimag me ghussa chaddha hua hi rehta tha aur yahi wajah thi SANVY ke kuch dino tak ukhde rehne ki...

par kal, SANVY ke negetive side ko thoda hi sahi,par bahar nikalne ka mouka mila tha...

isiliye aaj shaant tha woh side aur SANVY khush...

VERONICA-tujhe toh is positive side ko dekh khush hona chahiye...

warna jab tak ye ukhda rehta tha, tab tak tumhara pura group bhi off mode par rehta tha...

isiliye zyada soch mat aur jaa,baith...

sahi hi toh thi VERONICA ki baat isiliye apne dimag ko jhatak SANVY ke kandhe se lag baith gayi woh...



"AE MERE....HUMSAFAR....

EK ZARA INTAZAAR...

SUN SADAAYEN,DE RAHI HAIN,MANZIL PYAAR KI..."


ANJALI ke aage badhte hi VERONICA bhi wapas palath apne room jaane hi waali thi ki tabhi SANVY ne pehle guitar tone aur phir gaana change kiya jisse sun rook gaye unke kadam...

awaaz aur sur...dono wakayi kamaal ke the unke bete ke... aise lag raha tha jaise koi proffesional singer gaa raha ho...

darwaze ki oth liye VERONICA apne bete ke gaane ko enjoy karne lagi thi...

RASHI-wow...too good SANVY...awesome...yaar tu itna multi-talented hai par pata kisiko lagne deta nahi...

waste kar raha hai tu apne talent ko...

MAI-talent shares ki tarah hota hai... sahi invest jama ho toh faayda hi hona hai...

NAISHA-tere se toh baat karna hi bekaar hai...aunty, aap kyun nahi bolti isse,to participate in all the school events...

KHANAK-true...SAM aur uske jaise har kisi ki chutti kar dega ye...

VERONICA-its his choice beta...i cant force him...

RASHI-aap bhale hi force naa karen aunty par dekh lena...

SANVY chamakne ke liye hi bana hai...aisi chamak jo chhup hi nahi sakti...

aur ek din,ye chaahe naa chaahe,iski chamak puri duniya dekhegi...

SAB-true that...

RASHI ki baat aur uspar sab ki haami sun smile karte hue palath gayi thi VERONICA par palaththe hi unka face serious ho gaya tha...

REASON...

RASHI ke kahe shabdon ne ek purani yaad taaza jo kar di thi VERONICA ke zehen me...

apne room me pahunch bed ke right par rakhe arm chair par baithne ke baad apne aap hi aankhein band ho chuki thi uski aur aisa hote hi ussi purani yaad me wapas lout gayi thi VERONICA...





FLASHBACK...

DATE-20TH MARCH 2012


CITY-JAIPUR

PLACE-CHANDPOLE BAZAAR






YAAR VERONICA,YAHAN SHAKUNTALA MARKET KO CHHOD IS DOWN AREA MARKET ME KYUN AAYE HAIN HUM...???


VERONICA-down area market...!!!CHETNA,jaipur ka one the most valued market hai chandpole...

CHETNA-yaa right...!!!market bhale hi valued hoga par yahan dikhne waale zyadatar log utne hi disgusting hain...

just look at them, aise ghoor rahe hain jaise aankhon se hi khaa jaayenge...

VERONICA-ab khaane waali chiz hai bhi toh tu naa...!!!

CHETNA-ek toh naa,tu mere yaa kisi aur ke beauty par kabhi bhi comment mat kiya kar...

aisa lagta hai jaise suraj kisike roshan hone ki baat kar raha...

dikhta hai kya koi ujala suraj ke saamne...!!!

VERONICA-arre waah...unique compliment diya tune aaj...

CHETNA-aur kitne door...ek toh yahan ki authority ne parking itne door rakhi hai ki pair dukhne lag gaye mere...

VERONICA-kis level ki ledri hai re tu...yahan mera itna chota baccha bhi araam se chal raha hai aur tere pair dukhne lage hain...


saath me apne chote chote pairon se tubduk tubduk chalte 6 saal ke SANVY ke sir par haath ferte hue kahi thi apni baat VERONICA ne jispar sir ghusse se hila thoda aur tez chalne laga tha woh...

wahin apne super cute bacche ke fule gaalon ko dekh halki si has padi thi VERONICA...

CHETNA-oye,kaun sa tera baccha...???tere se zyada mera lalla hai SANI... hain naa babu...

thoda aage jaa piche se hi SANVY ke gaal khinchi thi CHETNA ne jispar unka haath jhatak dheeme hi sahi,doudte hue aage bhaag gaya SANVY...

CHETNA-arre SANI.. bhaago mat beta... kharab raasta hai...gir jaaoge...

VERONICA-relax...jo chalna sikhte waqt kabhi nahi gira,woh ab kya girega...

piche aa rahe chaar hatte katte bodyguards ko ishara kiya tha VERONICA ne jiske baad woh sab turant nanhe SANVY ke piche chal pade the...

VERONICA-just follow...don't stop him...

bodyguards ko hidayat de di thi VERONICA he jispar un sabne nod kiya tha...

CHETNA-arre woh kaun si gali me ghus raha hai SANI...

jahan thoda tez chalte hue ek taraf mood gaya tha SANVY wahin bodyguards ki hi tarah CHETNA bhi ab thoda tez chalte hue SANVY ke piche ho li thi...

CHETNA-what the hell...???ab kidhar ghum gaya ye...???

ye second gali thi jisme ghum tha SANVY aur aise hi 8,9 galiyan agle 10 minute me ghum chuka tha woh...

upar se bodyguards VERONICA ke order ki wajah se SANVY ko rokne ke bajaye ek doori banakar uske piche bhar the...

ye dekh CHETNA tention me aakar bhaagne lagi thi uske piche par VERONICA ne uska haath pakad usse relax rehne ko kaha tha...

par jab gali 10vi baar muda SANVY toh frustrate ho gayi CHETNA...

CHETNA-itni bheed hai market me aur ye ladka bas idhar udhar bhaage jaa raha hai...

and you...!!!khud usse rokne ke bajaye mujhe hi rok rahi hai...!!!

VERONICA-apne bete ko manzil tak pahunchne se bhala kyun rokun mai...!!!???

khaas kar tab jab woh manzil hum dono ki bhi hai...

CHETNA-matlab...!!!

VERONICA-matlab saamne hai, dekh le...

chalte hue CHETNA aur VERONICA bhi SANVY jis raaste par muda tha,mood chuke the aur aisa hone ke baad jab VERONICA ki baat aur straight finger pointing par saamne dekha CHETNA ne toh SANVY ko thoda door ek shop ke door par khada paaya...

"SHAKUNTALA ARIFACTS..."

chandpole bazaar ho kya, pure jaipur me sabse badhiya aur rare wooden ARIFACTS SHAKUNTALA ARIFACTS shop me hi milta tha...

isiliye hi toh JAIPUR ke sabse expensive aur posh area,VAISHALI NAGAR ke rehwasi ,the multi billionaires CHETNA SINGH aur VERONICA PAUL AHARYA GAURAV TOWER jaise international standard market ko chhod yahan chandpole bazaar jaise average market place me aaye the...

jahan puri market average size dukaane se bhari padi thi wahin saamne dikh rahi SHAKUNTALA ARIFACTS shop hi bas aisi shop thi jo kisi a list shopping complex ki tarah badi aur classy dikh rahi thi...

CHETNA-hume yahan aana tha...!!!

VERONICA-yup...

CHETNA-pehle kitni baar aayi hai yahan...!!!???

VERONICA-ek baar...

CHETNA-holy godfather...ye toh apne baap ka bhi baap nikla hai...

VERONICA ke answer ko sunte hi CHETNA ke dimag me chandpole bazaar ke start me bane parking se yahan tak ka safar ghoom chuka tha jiska 25 percent bhi correctly yaad nahi kar paa rahi thi woh...

and she was damn sure ki jitne twisted galiyon se woh guzri hai,next time agar aayi tab bhi ek baar me SHAKUNTALA ARIFACTS tak nahi pahunch paayegi...

par 6 saal ka chota sa SANVY joki obvious hi tha ki apni MAA ke saath woh bhi yahan ek baar hi aaya hoga,usse by heart pura raasta yaad tha...

isiliye CHETNA ka reaction obvious tha jispar uska haath thaam SHAKUNTALA ARIFACTS shop ki taraf badh gayi VERONICA...

wahin nanhe se SANVY ne jab apni dono MOMS ko apni taraf aate dekha toh woh turant shop ke andar ghus gaya...

aur ye dekh 3 bodyguards shop ke bahar rooke aur bacha banda SANVY ke piche shop ke andar ho liya tha...

VERONICA-arre...wapas bahar kyun...???ye ladka bhi naa... ghussa hamesha naak me hi baitha rehta hai iska...

jaise hi VERONICA aur CHETNA shop ke entrance par pahunche toh SANVY wapas bahar aane laga tha aur ye dekh jab uske gaal ko pyaar se touch karna chaha VERONICA ne toh unka haath jhatak bahar nikal gaya woh...

CHETNA-ghussa nahi karega kya...???achi khaasi settled life, apni aadhi family ko chhod kal se dehradun jaise chote sheher me basne jaa rahe ho tum teeno...

khudko apne bhai se door,mujhe mere BHAI se door aur AARNA ko uske bhai se door kar rahe ho...this is not fair VERONICA...

VERONICA-hum pehle bhi is baare me baat kar chuke hain CHETNA... it's necessary...

nahi hota toh kya tum teeno ko chhod hum jaate kabhi...

mujhe pata hai ki SANVY tere liye kya hai par same condition toh meri bhi hai naa...

i know ki ye distance maintain karna mushkil hai...bohot mushkil...par as i said,as for now,it is necessary...

CHETNA-aur wahan jaakar ek middle class zindagi jeena...kya woh bhi zaroori hai...!!!

i mean you and BHAI are no less then a KING and QUEEN...

and mera SANY... he is a born prince...agar dehradun bik raha ho aur tu kharidna chaahe toh yun kharid sakti hai...

mera SANY,jiske subah uthne ke baad jab woh bed se neeche utarta hai,uske pairon ke neeche slippers rakhne ke liye bhi alag se noukar rakha hua hai humne...

middle class parvarish me jeene ke kaaran aage jaakar apne har chote bade kaam bhi khud karne honge usse...

i cannot even imagine that life for you,him and my BHAI...

aur tum teeno toh jeene waale ho woh life...

VERONICA-silver spoon ke saath naa mai paida hui thi aur naa SANEEL...

what we have today,we have earned it...hamara beta bhi kar lega...

rahi baat middle class life ki toh tujhe pata hai ki woh bhi zaroori hai...

rahisi apne saath exposure laati hai...aur agar hunar ho toh us exposure ko chhupaya nahi jaa sakta...

par jo life ab mera beta jiyega,us life me har chiz aam hogi...

aas paas uski wahan bhi rahisi hogi...

us limelight me baaki sabke saath
dekhenge sab usse bhi par uske middle class tag ki wajah se interested bohot kam log honge...

jab tak sahi waqt nahi aayega,apni asli chamak ko chuppakar woh sabko apni asliyat dekhne se roke rakhega...

i know ki ab tu ye kahegi ki usse yahan bhi hum chhupa kar rakh sakte the par tujhe bhi pata hai ki dikh kar bhi chuppe rehne me aur hide in ho jaane me fark hota hai...

aur ye fark tum teeno par bhi musibat le aata joki hum hone nahi de sakte...

ab agar tere saare repetitive questions pure ho gaye hon toh andar chalen...

glass covered entrance door par khade hain hum...

ya phir kahun ki raasta blocked karkar khade hain...

abhi tak koi aaya nahi hai par aaya toh muh par naa sahi par man me zaroor gaali bakega hume...

CHETNA-koi aayega toh bakega naa..!!

shop bahar se bhale hi bada lag raha hai par hai toh city ke outskirts ke is bhulbhulaiya market me hi naa...

woh bhi pata nahi kis kone me...mujhe nahi lagta ki hume chhod yahan koi aata bhi hoga...

aur aaye bhi kyun...yahan aisa kya milta hoga jo jaipur jaisi city ke main markets me available naa hogaaaaa.....

us glass door ko open kar jab andar aayi VERONICA ke saath CHETNA toh andar ka scene theek se clear hua aur jo dekha usne, uske baad word toh strech hona hi tha...

EBONY,MAHAGONI, ROSEWOOD,OAK,TEAK,SHISHAM, SANDALWOOD aur baaki bohot se kism ke hardwood ARIFACTS se bhari padi thi ye shop...

design aur dekhne bhar se hi un sabhi ARIFACTS ki quality itni umda lag rahi thi ki unhe dekh wahi ek shabd nikla CHETNA ke mooh se jo kisi bhi ARIFACT lover ke mooh se nikalna chahiye...

CHETNA-WOWWWWW...

CHETNA ka jo reaction tha,woh pehle hi guess kar chuki thi VERONICA isiliye bas muskura bhar di woh aur...

VERONICA-chal...apne naye ghar ke liye kuch naye ARIFACTS choose karte hain...

CHETNA-select... they all are masterpiece...puri dukaan utha lete hain...tujhe jo chahiye tu le jaana,baaki se mai apna naya pent house sajaungi...

kitne ke honge pure...10 crores,max...manager...

VERONICA-oh,rook jaa thoda... pehle toh mujhe apne naye ghar ke liye bas 3 se chaar artifacts hi lene hain jinki combined keemat 1 lakh bhi nahi hogi...

CHETNA-really...!!!

VERONICA -yup...its an affordable shop...saare artifacts agar wakayi le bhi le tu tab bhi price 1 crore se zyada nahi jaayega...

aur rahi baat tere pent house ki toh tu usse pent house hi rehne de, dukaan naa bana isiliye last time jab mai yahan aayi thi tab wahan ke liye maine 10 artifacts already select kar liye the...

right...!!!

MANAGER-yes MA'AM...

managar joki apne 6 sales people ke saath jaise hi VERONICA ne shop ke andar kadam rakha tha, turant unke saamne khada ho chuka tha,usne jaldi se jawab diya tha...

saamne khadi shakshiyat ke liye is waqt uske aankhon me samman ke saath glass door ke bahar khade nanhe SANVY ko neeche beech me dekhte hue uski aankhon me halka aascharya bhi tha jisse VERONICA ne samajh liya tha...

VERONICA-why are you looking surprised...!!!

BODYGUARD-ma'am,woh SANVY baba ne 3 artifacts select kiye hain...ye teen...

and ma'am, pent house ke liye bhi unhone 3 artifacts alag se select kiye hain...

behadh hi khubsoorat aur ancient artistic artifacts jinhe SANVY ne 2 minute me hi select kar liya tha, point out kiya aur unhe dekh...

CHETNA-damn...these are so beautiful...

(YE WAHI ARTIFACTS HAIN JO DEHRADUN ME SANEEL RESIDENCE ME LAGE HUE HAIN... DISCRIPTION PEHLE DE CHUKA HUN ISILIYE ABHI SKIP KAR RAHA HUN.)


VERONICA-isiliye hairan hain aap...!!!

MANAGER-ma'am,college students ke paas bhi artifacts ke baare me basic knowledge nahi hota...

par aapke bete ne in artifacts ke structural points ka naam lekar in sabko choose kiya hai...

maine kabhi dekha toh kya,aisa kuch suna bhi nahi hai kahin... it's unbelievable...

CHETNA-mera beta jo hai...

SANVY ke baare me sun is waqt VERONICA se zyada khushi CHETNA ke face par saaf dikh rahi thi...

VERONICA-ab kya select karna...pack all these artifacts...

MANAGAR-sure MA'AM...

VERONICA -isse kya hua...!!!???

CHETNA-shit...SANI bahar hi hai naa...


manager abhi palta hi tha ki tabhi CHETNA aur VERONICA ke saamne khada bodyguard achanak se hi tez kadmo ke saath shop se baahar nikla tha...

ye dekh jab palte woh dono toh dekha ki 2 aur bodyguards joki shop ke glass door ke bahar khade the,woh bhi gayab the...

turant CHETNA aur VERONICA ke kadam bhi bahar ki taraf badh chuke the...

CHETNA-SHIT...SANIII...

bahar nikalte hi jo scene saamne aaya tha,usse dekh CHETNA aur VERONICA,dono hi stabdh reh gaye the...

unke bodyguards me se ek apna face pakde neeche baiha hua tha...

nose aur lip area se khoon riste hue uske haathon ko bhigo raha tha...

wahin uske paas khada tha SANVY jiske haathon me tha woh patthar jiske through usne hi apne bodyguard ka face lahuluhan kiya tha...

aur jab CHETNA ne pukara uska naam toh turant palta woh aur apni dono moms ko apne paas aata dekh smile karte hue patthar chhod diya usne...

CHETNA-ye...ye tumme kiya SANI...!!!

badu maasumiyat ke saath smile karte hue haan kaha SANI ne...

CHETNA-why...???

VERONICA-isne touch kiya tha SANVY ko...!!!

BODYGUARD-jee ma'am...woh actually SANVY baba aage ki taraf bhaagne lage the toh isne pakad liya inhe...

VERONICA-saamne icecream stal hai..wahin jaa raha hoga ye...

BODYGUARD-jee..par SANVY baba rook gaye the lekin kuch seconds baad inhone isse smile karte hue neeche jhukne ko bola...

ye jhuk gaya aur...

VERONICA-patthar naak me maar diya isne...

BODYGUARD-jee ma'am...pata nahi kab patthar utha liya inhone and he hit him...

woh bhi teen baar...

VERONICA-maine bola tha,sirf follow karne and not to stop him...

uski nahi,tumhari safety ke liye bola tha maine...

SANVY-MAA...chalo naa... icecream...

VERONICA-hospital lekar jaao isse... turant...

BODYGUARD-yes ma'am...

CHETNA ko icecream stall ki taraf kheenchne laga tha SANVY jispar us bodyguard ko hidayat dete hue VERONICA bhi saath badh gayi...

kuch hi palon baad ek taraf SANVY apni masti me pure chaav me saath chocobar khaa raha tha wahin dusri taraf VERONICA aur CHETNA usse chupchaap dekh rahi thi...

CHETNA-yaad hai 2 hafte pehle C. S ground jaane ki zidh ki thi SANI ne...

VERONICA-hmm...

CHETNA-mai bhi gayi thi iske saath wahan...

bohut se log the par kuch bacche season ball se cricket khel rahe the ground me...

tabhi ek shot iski taraf aane laga tha...

ball ki direction issiki umar ke ek bacche ki taraf tha...

ball ki speed zyada thi aur woh ladka dekh bhi dusri taraf raha tha...

impact pakka tha par SANI jo thodi door tha us ladke se,bhaag pada uski taraf aur exact time par usse dhakka de diya...

baccha toh bach gaya par...

VERONICA-ball SANVY ke peeth par lag gayi thi... impact zyada tha aur pain bhi...

ghar aane ke baad bhi kaafi der tak roya tha ye...i know...

CHETNA -yaa...ek woh personality thi aur ek aaj ka ATTITUDE...

ye ladka kabhi RAM ka avtar lagta hai mujhe toh kabhi bhavishya ka RAAVAN...

aur tujhe lagta hai tu isse chhupa sakti hai...mark my words VERONICA...

duniya ke kisi bhi kone me chali jaa...ye ladka suraj ki woh roshni hai jisse har jagah chamakna hi chamakna hai...

iski chamak iska hunar hai...kisi tarah us hunar ko chhupa bhi paayi toh kood kar bahar aayega iska belagaam ghussa...

aisa ghussa jiski aanch me puri duniya jal jaaye,itna garm...

US KRODH KI AGNI KO,KAISE ROKEGI AUR CHHUPAYEGI TU...




"MAA...WE ARE LEAVING..."

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ANI ki awaaz sun aankhein khul gayi VERONICA ki aur ateet ke apne ek panne se bahar aa gayi woh...

lambi saans chhod uth room se bahar nikal gayi thi woh...

physically toh present me aa chuki thi woh mentally abhi bhi past me hi atki thi uski aatma aur dimag me gunj rahe the CHETNA ke kahe gaye woh shabd...

"US KRODH KI AGNI KO,KAISE ROKEGI AUR CHHUPAYEGI TU...???






AREA-MANESAR

PLACE-CHOWDHARY'S FARMSTAY






BEHENCHOD...YE SAALA FARM HOUSE HAI YA FARM CITY...ITNA BADA...

apne chaaron taraf nazarein ghumata hua us 100 acre me faile
farm stay ko dekh aage badh raha tha inspector RAJESH MISHRA...

aur uski hairangi us farm house me bane stay ke andar jaate hi aur badh chuki thi...

woh jagah thi hi itni khubsoorat...asli sher ki khaal se bane sofe,european lime se bani chhat aur AFRICAN BLACKWOOD (world's most expensive wood) se bani floor us stay ks gigantic ki bhavyata aur khubsoorati bina bole bata rahe the...

kal commissioner ke urgent order par yahan delhi se 62 km door MANESAR aaya tha woh...order official nahi tha par jis tarah se diya gaya tha,usse saaf tha ki agar nahi aata RAJESH yahan toh uski hamesha ke liye officially chutti zaroor ho jaani thi...

aur ab is jagah ko dekh bhar kar woh samajh chuka tha ki jiske bhi bulaawe par woh yahan aaya hai,uski hasti badi hi hogi...


RAJESH MISHRA...BORN AND BROUGHT UP IN RAM NAGAR...

WIFE...SWATI MISHRA...SON...AARAV MISHRA,AGE 7...

JANUARY 3 2019 KO DEHRADUN TRANSFER HUA TUMHARA YA PHIR YE KAHEN KI 25 LAKHS DEKAR KARWAYA TUMNE YE TRANSFER...

PAR TAB SE LEKER AB TAK US 25 LAKH KE 1 CRORE 75 LAKHS KI UNDER THE TABLE EARNING KAR CHUKE HO TUM...

GOOD...


apne secretary ke saath haathon me thaame paper jispar RAJESH ki kundali likhi hui thi,hall me enter hua ek shaksh jisse dekh aankhein badi ho gayi thi RAJESH MISHRA ki...

koi bada officer nahi tha woh par turant aise alert mode me khada ho chuka tha RAJESH jaise C.M ya P.M ke saamne khada ho...

aur aisa hona laazmi bhi tha...

REASON...

MR JAIDEN CHOWDHARY...

ab inki shakshiyat thi hi itni badi ki RAJESH MISHRA ko toh alert aur respectful hona hi tha...

upar se RAJESH tha bhi uttarakhand ka jahan JAIDEN CHOWDHARY ka rutba thoda zyada hi mashoor tha...

JAIDEN-relax RAJESH...kya loge, whisky,rum or anything else...

RAJESH-i,i,i am ggood sir..
thankyou...

zubaan ladhkhadane lagi thi RAJESH ki jispar smile karte hue uske saamne sofe par baith apne liye drink banane laga tha RAJESH...

JAIDEN-so MR RAJESH...

RAJESH-yyes sir...

JAIDEN-ek date batata hun...tell me if you remember anything about it...

RAJESH-i will try sir...

JAIDEN-14/06/2019...

ye wahi date thi jis din CHANDER RESORT me SANVEER ne pehli baar RAJESH ka sarvajanik kachra kiya tha...

yahi wajah thi ki JAIDEN CHOWDHARY ke date bolte hi bas ek second ke liye hi sahi,jabde sakhti se kas gaye the RAJESH ke aur JAIDEN CHOWDHARY ko jawab mil gaya tha...

JAIDEN-so you do remember...good...

what if i say ki repayment ka time nazdeek hai...

JAIDEN CHOWDHARY ki baat sun aur samajh RAJESH ki aankhon me ek saath do bhaav chamak uthe...

khushi aur aascharya jinhe JAIDEN CHOWDHARY ne bhi padh liya tha...

JAIDEN-usne mere bete ko maara hai...

RAJESH-maaf kijiyega sir par agar itni si hi baat hoti toh aap mujhe yahan tak nahi bulaate...

aapka ek phone aur woh ladka andar jo chuka hota...

JAIDEN-sharp...good...par no,nahi hota... influence ki kami nahi hai uski family ke paas bhi...

aur tum yahan isiliye ho kyunki agar mera koi aadmi bhi tumse dehradun ke milta toh there are people jo jaan jaate ye baat...

RAJESH-phir bhi sir...sawal toh wahi hai naa..aapke jaisi shaksiyat ko ek mamuli school going boy me bhala kaisi dilchaspi...

JAIDEN-tum apne dilchaspi par dhyan do RAJESH...

finally,you will get your revenge and to put cherry on the cake,5 crores...


aankhein ek baar phir badi ho gayi thi RAJESH ki aur paise ki baat sun buddhi brasht...

JAIDEN CHOWDHARY jaisa shakshiyat apne logon tak ko dehradun bhejne ka risk nahi le raha...

ek bache ke liye usse yahan itni door bulaya gaya hai...

and most importantly, JAIDEN CHOWDHARY ke bete ki thukayi ki hai SANVEER ne phir bhi woh direct attack nahi kar raha...

ye saare negetive points us 5 crore ki maaya ke aage mit chuke the...

RAJESH-aap jaisa bolenge,mai karunga sir...

JAIDEN-i know...he is my secretary...ye contact me rahega tumhare...

kab,kya kaise karna hai,he will guide you...

RAJESH -sure sir...

JAIDEN -aaj stay enjoy karo yahan... jo bhi chahiye,sharab,shabaab,sab ka intazam ye kar dega...

kal,apne 1 crore advance ke saath wapas chale jaana...

RAJESH-thank you sir...

jahan apni baat bol ek smile ke saath JAIDEN CHOWDHARY nikal chuka tha wahin uska secretary bhi apna number dekar aur RAJESH ke farmaishon ki lambi list lekar bahar ki taraf nikal pada...

aur RAJESH...

un dono ke jaate hi woh jahan kuch der pehle tak JAIDEN baitha tha,us sher ki khaal waale sofe par uske owner position me baith gaya...

saamne whisky ki mehengi bottle padi thi jisse open kar ek naye glass me daal uski halki si chuski li usne aur...

RAJESH-sach hi kaha hai kisine...

jab upar waala deta hai toh chhapar faad ke deta hai...

maza aa gaya...

5 crore bhi andar aur woh behen ka louda jhaant barabar lounda SANVEER...




aag aur barf se nahi tujhse puchenge log ki GARM aur SARD KISSE KEHTE HAIN...

jo apna apmaan nahi bhulta,tu bhi dekhega ki woh MARD KISSE KEHTE HAIN...

taklif ki nayi paribhasha likhunga mai tujhpar...

tootkar gawahi dega tera sharir ki DARD KISSE KEHTE HAIN...









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...





AAPKA APNA V...J...

 

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