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Update 2
To main aur Rakesh ab chalne lage
Main- yaar bata to sahi aakhir tu kaha leke Jaa Raha hai....meri dhadkne mano badh rahi thi ...main pareshaan ho raha tha....
Rakesh- haste hue....wahi jo main roj dekhne jata hoon...
Main- aakhi aisa kya hai...bata to sahi...
Rakesh- bas tu dekhte Jaa.....
Hum ek zopdi ke pass chale gaye....jo ki khet me hua karti hai....
Rakesh- shhhhhhhhhh yahape shor mat karo...
Maine sar hilate hue kaha...
Ab hum us zopdi ke pass Gaye ...Rakesh ne mujhe zopdi ke us or bulaya jahape ek choti si khidki thi......hum dono wha gaye....
Rakesh- idhar aa dekh ....
Maine khidkise jhaank ke dekha ...Irfan nanga khada hua tha ...aur ek ladki us ka lund mooh me leke choos rahi thi ...uski pith meri taraf thi is liye main use dekh nahi paa Raha tha....lekin main unki awaaz saaf saaf sun paa raha tha....
Irfan- chus saali randi........madarchod......kya chusti hai re tu chinaal sachme maja ata hai....har din chusti hai lekin harbar kuch naya lagta ....chus......aahhhhhhh...... behenchod
Wo ladki Irfan ka lund mooh me leke chus rahi thi......
Irfan- chal ab bas kar aandhe ghante se chus rahi hai.....ab chodne de ....aaj to Tera khandan chodunga....
Ladki- to roka kisne hai meri jaan faad de is choot ko .....aur mere khandan ke saare choot ko....tumhari hi to randi huu main...
Ab mere sar se pasina nikalne laga....kyunki ye awaaz main suni thi.....main janta tha ye kaun hai....main bas bharosa nahi kar paa raha tha....aakhir aisa kaise ho skata hai.....mujhe kabhi aisa laga nahi tha ...ki ..Poonam...........
Irfan- chal saali ab kapde utar ....aur ab mujhe ji bhar ke chodne de ....
Ladki.- tu hi utar na Raja....aur chod mujhe ...
Irfan ne jhat se use dusri taraf mod Diya aur uske mamme jakhad liye...
Ab wo ladki mujhe saaf saaf dikhayi de rahi thi wo koi aur nahi balki meri pari bahen thi ....ye aakhir kaise ........mujhe vishwas nahi ho raha tha......
Rakesh- haste hue dhirese dekha saale....ab kya bolega.....teri bahen to sabse mast ladki hai is gaon ki ......dekh use ...
Mujhe gussa aa raha tha...lekin main use ab kya hi kah pata ...
Irfaan- saali dekh tere mamme kitne bade hogaye hai re randi.....mere alawa aur kise chudwane lagi hai tu....hmmm ....Irfan poonam ke mamme dabate hue
Poonam- man to sabse chudwane ka karta hai jaan....par kya karu ...tere lund ki baat hi alag haii.....
.....ahhhhhhh.....ahhh...aur jor se daba na. .......doodh nikal de mere mammo se.....
Irfan - ha re kutiya .....ruk nikalta hoon bahenchod.....tu to sachme randi hogayi re....bol aur kise chudwayegi........wada karta hoon....usko bhi leke aunga....
Poonam+-- ahhhh...ab wo apna haath Irfan ke lund pe sahalate hue....
Tu majak to nahi kar raha meri jaan....haaye ....jisko leke aana hai...aa bas tere jaisa lund hona chahiye.........jo meri choot ke tukde kare........
Main ye saari baate sun raha tha....Rakesh ka haath uske lund pe tha....aur wo sahla rha tha....ab mere Lund me bhi kuch kuch ho raha tha.....maine bhi use kayi baar nanga dekha tha...lekin aise nahi....wo aaj kuch alag hi thi ..
Irfan- chal mujhe kaam hai jaldi se kapde hata aur ghodi banja .
Poonam ne bilkul waisa hi kiy....usne saare kapde utare ....aur puri nangi hogayi....
Poonam- aajao mere malik chodo is randi ko......faad do is chut ko aaj....
Irfan ne apna lund Poonam ke chut pe thikaya aur jordar shot mara.....
Poonam-- ahhhhhhhhhh....ahhhh...dhire...
Irafan- chup randi....
Irfan ne ab aur jor jor se dhakke mare .
Poonam - ahhhh .ahhhhhh.......ahhhhh........aaahhh.......kya mast chodte ho yaar tum........kaash aur lund aisehi miljaye ......
Irfan- saaali bahot shauk hai na tujhe lund Lene ka.....wo bhi shauk ek din pure karta hoon.....
Poonam- maaro meri chut jorse ahhh.......ahhhhh...
Irfan--- ahhhhh ye le bahenchod randi ki aulad.....auladaur haa teri maa ko bhi chodna hai mujhe ekdin....
Poonam- pahle mujhe chodo fir dekhte haii.....aahhhhhh....maa ko tumhara lund bahot pasand ayega....
Ye suntehi mera haath jo mere Lund pe tha ab wo use sahalne laga tha....Rakesh bhi is baat ko dekhkar muskura raha tha...
Irfan ne ab apni raftaar badhayi..
Poonam- aahhh.....oooo....maur jor jor se haa..ha aam......haaan....aur jor se ....kaske chodo mujhe....haannnnn...ooooooo....chodo ....fado meri chooooooot..........aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....aur dono shayad zad gaye.......
Maine Rakesh ke lund ki taraf dekha aur mere Lund ki taraf hum dono bhi kab zadgaye hume pata hi nahi chala ......
Meri bahen ...ab wahase chali gayi.......main bas uske jaane kaa intezaar kar rha tha....
Irfan- are Rakesh....aaja....
Main hakkabakka rahgaya...
Iska matlab ye ki woh janta tha ki hum dono yaha hai....aur ye chudai dekha rahe hai....aur mje le rahe hai ...
Hum dono andar Gaye....
Main uski taraf aankh bhi nhi utha paa rahatha....
Irafan-...-- yaar tention mat le ...teri bahen sachme kamaal ki haii......tujhe to khush hona chahiye ki ye choot tujhe bhi kisi din Milne wali hai .....
Meri aankhon me ab ek chamak si aagayi...
Main- kya matlab...
Irfan- chal tujhe main pura plan batata hoon
Baaki next update mein
Update 2
To main aur Rakesh ab chalne lage
Main- yaar bata to sahi aakhir tu kaha leke Jaa Raha hai....meri dhadkne mano badh rahi thi ...main pareshaan ho raha tha....
Rakesh- haste hue....wahi jo main roj dekhne jata hoon...
Main- aakhi aisa kya hai...bata to sahi...
Rakesh- bas tu dekhte Jaa.....
Hum ek zopdi ke pass chale gaye....jo ki khet me hua karti hai....
Rakesh- shhhhhhhhhh yahape shor mat karo...
Maine sar hilate hue kaha...
Ab hum us zopdi ke pass Gaye ...Rakesh ne mujhe zopdi ke us or bulaya jahape ek choti si khidki thi......hum dono wha gaye....
Rakesh- idhar aa dekh ....
Maine khidkise jhaank ke dekha ...Irfan nanga khada hua tha ...aur ek ladki us ka lund mooh me leke choos rahi thi ...uski pith meri taraf thi is liye main use dekh nahi paa Raha tha....lekin main unki awaaz saaf saaf sun paa raha tha....
Irfan- chus saali randi........madarchod......kya chusti hai re tu chinaal sachme maja ata hai....har din chusti hai lekin harbar kuch naya lagta ....chus......aahhhhhhh...... behenchod
Wo ladki Irfan ka lund mooh me leke chus rahi thi......
Irfan- chal ab bas kar aandhe ghante se chus rahi hai.....ab chodne de ....aaj to Tera khandan chodunga....
Ladki- to roka kisne hai meri jaan faad de is choot ko .....aur mere khandan ke saare choot ko....tumhari hi to randi huu main...
Ab mere sar se pasina nikalne laga....kyunki ye awaaz main suni thi.....main janta tha ye kaun hai....main bas bharosa nahi kar paa raha tha....aakhir aisa kaise ho skata hai.....mujhe kabhi aisa laga nahi tha ...ki ..Poonam...........
Irfan- chal saali ab kapde utar ....aur ab mujhe ji bhar ke chodne de ....
Ladki.- tu hi utar na Raja....aur chod mujhe ...
Irfan ne jhat se use dusri taraf mod Diya aur uske mamme jakhad liye...
Ab wo ladki mujhe saaf saaf dikhayi de rahi thi wo koi aur nahi balki meri pari bahen thi ....ye aakhir kaise ........mujhe vishwas nahi ho raha tha......
Rakesh- haste hue dhirese dekha saale....ab kya bolega.....teri bahen to sabse mast ladki hai is gaon ki ......dekh use ...
Mujhe gussa aa raha tha...lekin main use ab kya hi kah pata ...
Irfaan- saali dekh tere mamme kitne bade hogaye hai re randi.....mere alawa aur kise chudwane lagi hai tu....hmmm ....Irfan poonam ke mamme dabate hue
Poonam- man to sabse chudwane ka karta hai jaan....par kya karu ...tere lund ki baat hi alag haii.....
.....ahhhhhhh.....ahhh...aur jor se daba na. .......doodh nikal de mere mammo se.....
Irfan - ha re kutiya .....ruk nikalta hoon bahenchod.....tu to sachme randi hogayi re....bol aur kise chudwayegi........wada karta hoon....usko bhi leke aunga....
Poonam+-- ahhhh...ab wo apna haath Irfan ke lund pe sahalate hue....
Tu majak to nahi kar raha meri jaan....haaye ....jisko leke aana hai...aa bas tere jaisa lund hona chahiye.........jo meri choot ke tukde kare........
Main ye saari baate sun raha tha....Rakesh ka haath uske lund pe tha....aur wo sahla rha tha....ab mere Lund me bhi kuch kuch ho raha tha.....maine bhi use kayi baar nanga dekha tha...lekin aise nahi....wo aaj kuch alag hi thi ..
Irfan- chal mujhe kaam hai jaldi se kapde hata aur ghodi banja .
Poonam ne bilkul waisa hi kiy....usne saare kapde utare ....aur puri nangi hogayi....
Poonam- aajao mere malik chodo is randi ko......faad do is chut ko aaj....
Irfan ne apna lund Poonam ke chut pe thikaya aur jordar shot mara.....
Poonam-- ahhhhhhhhhh....ahhhh...dhire...
Irafan- chup randi....
Irfan ne ab aur jor jor se dhakke mare .
Poonam - ahhhh .ahhhhhh.......ahhhhh........aaahhh.......kya mast chodte ho yaar tum........kaash aur lund aisehi miljaye ......
Irfan- saaali bahot shauk hai na tujhe lund Lene ka.....wo bhi shauk ek din pure karta hoon.....
Poonam- maaro meri chut jorse ahhh.......ahhhhh...
Irfan--- ahhhhh ye le bahenchod randi ki aulad.....auladaur haa teri maa ko bhi chodna hai mujhe ekdin....
Poonam- pahle mujhe chodo fir dekhte haii.....aahhhhhh....maa ko tumhara lund bahot pasand ayega....
Ye suntehi mera haath jo mere Lund pe tha ab wo use sahalne laga tha....Rakesh bhi is baat ko dekhkar muskura raha tha...
Irfan ne ab apni raftaar badhayi..
Poonam- aahhh.....oooo....maur jor jor se haa..ha aam......haaan....aur jor se ....kaske chodo mujhe....haannnnn...ooooooo....chodo ....fado meri chooooooot..........aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....aur dono shayad zad gaye.......
Maine Rakesh ke lund ki taraf dekha aur mere Lund ki taraf hum dono bhi kab zadgaye hume pata hi nahi chala ......
Meri bahen ...ab wahase chali gayi.......main bas uske jaane kaa intezaar kar rha tha....
Irfan- are Rakesh....aaja....
Main hakkabakka rahgaya...
Iska matlab ye ki woh janta tha ki hum dono yaha hai....aur ye chudai dekha rahe hai....aur mje le rahe hai ...
Hum dono andar Gaye....
Main uski taraf aankh bhi nhi utha paa rahatha....
Irafan-...-- yaar tention mat le ...teri bahen sachme kamaal ki haii......tujhe to khush hona chahiye ki ye choot tujhe bhi kisi din Milne wali hai .....
Meri aankhon me ab ek chamak si aagayi...
Main- kya matlab...
Irfan- chal tujhe main pura plan batata hoon
Baaki next update mein
