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Incest Gaon ka Raja

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Update 28


Bahadur- raju baki bate tu kal kar lena chalo ab chalte hai hum log..


Raju- accha tik hai, to sambu kaka chalata hu mail or kal aata hu FIR apke pass


Sambu- achha tik hai beta, main intajaar karunga..


Ab agge chalate hai...

Raju ne ek nazar Pawan ki tarf ki apna hath hilaya jese bol raha ho - chalata hu FIR aunga or Pawan ne hinhina kar jese raju ki baat ka jawab diya..


Sambu- lagta hai Bahadur raju beta ko ghoda pasand aa gaya or isko raju bhi..


Bahadur- ha ab is baare mar kal hi baat karenge main bhi malik ko iski jankari de dunga chalte hai hum..


Sambu- tik hai par yaad hai na ajj raat bathak lagate hai dono kyu..


Raju- baetak matlb kaka..


Bahadur- wo tumhare janane ki chij nahi hai beta, tu bada ho jaa sab samjh aa jayega tik hai malik intajara kar rahe hoga..


Dono gadi ke pass aa gaye or raju ne gadi start kar liya or chal diye Haveli ki taraf , idhar Thakur sahab Haveli ke bahar ke barande mae the or apne hath ki ghadi ki tarf dekh rahe the...


Thakur- sham ke 5 baj chuke hai or Bahadur raju abhi tak nahi aaye hai chala kaha gaya hoga Bahadur raju ko lekar..


Thakur sahab ke Piche se maya or payal aa rahi thi maya ke hath mae kuch nasta tha or payal ke hath mae chay (tea) thi or dono kuch baat kar rahe the


Payal- chachi ye Bahadur to bahut samay se lekar gaya hai na usko, matlb raju ko to abhi tak kyu nahi aaye hai dono..


Maya- ha tumne mere dil ki baat bool diya lado main bhi kabse yahi soch rahi thi, or lagta hai babuji bhi tode se chinta mae lag rahe hai..


Or tabhi buliet ki awaj aai or Haveli ki jitni bhi Aurte thi matlb jo us time Haveli ke bahar kaam kar rahi thi or saath mae maya or payal bhi in logo ka dyan bilkul raju ki hi tarf ho gaya the kyuki ek too raju bahut hi Hundsome tha upper se ankho nae gogals or buliet ki bike ye combination bahut hi khataranaak tha


Raju


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Sab log usi taraf dekh rahe the or jab raju ne bike ko band kiya tab payal boli..


Payal- wow chachi apne dekha kya ye is bike mae kitna Hundsome lag raha hai..


Ye sun maya ke kaan khade ho gaya or usne ek nazar payal ki taraf dali, jo raju ki or hi dekh rahi thi or boli


Maya- kyu kya raju Hundsome nahi hai payal, ya tumne abhi ghor kiya uski taraf..


Payal- are yesi baat nahi hai chachi, wo kay hai na buliet par wo kuch jada hi alag or handsome lag raha tha bas isliye or kuch nahi..


Maya- huu main sab samjh rahi hu meri lado ki bato ko, kya hua lado kahi raju ke liya tere dil mae kuch kuch to nahi ho raha hai na huu..


Payal( toda blush karte hue) - kya chachi mere dil mae bhala kyu kuch kuch hoga ab bhi na, chaliye dada Ji intajaar kar rahe honge..

Maya age kuch nahi boli bas muskura kar chal di payal ke saath. Tab tak raju or bahadur bhi..


Thakur- kaha le kar chal gaya tha re bahadur isko, kitni der ho chuki ha janta bhi hai tu..


Bahadur- maaf kijye ga malik wo main raju ko ghadi sikhane ke liye hande stabl mae le kar chala gaya tha to todi der ho gai..


Raju- ha babuji isame kaka ki bilkul bhi galat nahi hai wo meri hi wajha se der ho gai.. Ab inpar gussa mat kijye..


Thakur- are beta hum isme gussa kar bhi nahi skte hai kabhi wo to bas yese hi puch raha hu or kuch nahi, wese raju beta pahli baar bike chaliye to kese laga ..


Raju- bahut maja aaya babuji, wese pahli baar to mujhase bike start hi nahi ho rahi thi fir kaka ke samjne ke baad hui or dhire dhire mene bike chala bhi li..


Piche se Maya or payal bhi aa gaye or


Payal- dada Ji apke liye chaye ( tea) or kuch pakode..


Thakur- bahut badhiya beti, jawo raju or bahadur ke bhi toda le aao.


Maya- Ji babuji wo mene kaamwali ko bool diya hai wo sab ke liye laati hi hogi nasta or chay


Thakur- badiya choti bahu, ha to raju beta hum kaha the


Raju- ha babuji wo main bata raha tha ki pahle to mujko kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu kese karu gear lagana ho to niche dekhta tha par dhire dhire sab samjh mae gaya Bapuji..


Thakur- ha wo to hum dekh hi rahe hai kese kuch ganto mae hi tumne bike chalani suru kardi, accha to hamare stabal gaye the waha kese laga..


Raju- wo, waha to bike chalane se bhi jada maja aaya babuji..


Thakur- accha wo kyu bhala jara hum to Jane


Raju- wo kya hai na babuji mujko bachpan se ghodo ko asliyat mae dekhne or chune ka sapna tha too ajj app logo ki wajha se wo sapna pura hua.. Main bahut khush hu babuji


Us samay thakur Maya payal ko Raju ke chahare par ek asli or payari khushi nazar aa rahi thi jo pata nahi kyu par tino ke dilo ko bhi khush kar rahi thi..


Raju- are ha babuji asli baat to batana bhul hi gaya main wo..


Isse pahle ki Raju kuch bol pata,Tabhi bahadur bol pada


Bahadur- are Raju beta jara ye khabar humko batane do malik ko tum tab tak pakode ka maja lo tik hai..



Raju- tik hai kaka app hi bata do babuji ko usme kya...


Bahadur- ha, mailk apko wo ghoda yaad hai, yahi ghoda jo sone (gold) ki tarah chamk raha tha app bahar desh se laye the..bahut kimti tha wo ghoda..



Thakur- hmm accha tum wo golden horse ki baat to nahi kar raha hai, jis ne hamre dono bete ko chotil kar diya tha ha to kiya hua uska..



Bahadur- ha sahi goldan ya jo bhi ho, ha malik usi ghode ko or Raju ne chua or sambu bool raha tha ki Raju uski sawari bhi kar lega..



Thakur- kya Raju beta bahadur sach bol raha hai kya..



Bahadur- makin kya apko hamari baat par vishvaas nahi hai..



Payal- dada jo ye golden horse ye kya hai...


Thakur- payal beti ye bahut hi kimti horse hai jo humne turkistaan se mangwaya tha, or jaha tak humko pata hai uski kimat yahi koi 28-30 lakh tak ki rahi hogi.. Or yese ghode hote hai na payal apne owner ke prati loyal hote hai.. Or sabse khubasoorat bhi..


Payal- accha to kya dono bade bhaiya bhi usko apne control mae nahi kar paye dada Ji


Thakur- ha bete tere chote bhaiya vikram ne to 2-3 baar kosis ki, ki uske uper sawari kar li jaye par kamyab nahi ho paya, or chot bhi kha betha..


Payal- wow matlb us ghode ko Raju ne control kar liya kaya baat hai Raju.. Congrats..


Raju- are ye koi badi baat nahi hai payal ji..


Thakur- are beta ye badi baat hi hai wese ye sab chod kya tune uski sawari ki..


Raju- nahi babuji abhi to mujko bhi pata nahi hai ki wo mujko apne uper sawari karne dega ki nahi..


Thakur- chalo koi baat nahi beta kaal apni bike wahi le jakar acche se sikhna or ho sake to sanbhu ke saath us ghode ke pass chale bhi jana , or agar tune us ghode ki sawari kar li Raju to hum tumko ek inam denge..


Raju- inam kya inam doge app babuji



Thakur- pahle tu uske upper sawari to kar or saath hi jab wo ghoda bhi tujko apna owner man le tab tujko main inam dunga samjha..


Raju- accha tik hai babu Ji..


Tabhi toda hawa tej chalni lagi or mausam bhi kharab hone laga


Thakur- lagta hai musam kharab hone wala hai, ek kaam kar Raju tu ghar chala ja beta wese bhi time bhi ho gaya hai kal bhi subha aa jana tik hai..


Rajj- Ji babuji chalta hu main..


Raju waha se sabhi ko bye bol chal diya ajj uske liye bahut hi accha din gaya Raju aram se apne ghar ki taarf chal diya musam toda thanda ho gaya tha, or tabhi Raju ko meena ki yaad aa gai saath mae rajo kaki ki bhi or wo meena ke ghar ki tarf mhud gaya


To be continued
बहुत ही सुंदर लाजवाब और अद्भुत रमणिय अपडेट है भाई मजा आ गया
लगता हैं पायल राजू के तरफ खिचें जा रही है ये बात माया भाभी के भी नजर में आ गयी
सुनहरी घोडे की सवारी करने पर ठाकुर राजू को क्या इनाम देते है
राजू घर जाते समय रज्जो या मीना की सवारी करने की संभावना लगती हैं खैर देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है
अगले रोमांचकारी धमाकेदार और चुदाईदार अपडेट की प्रतिक्षा रहेगी जल्दी से दिजिएगा
 

Gurdep

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Update 28


Bahadur- raju baki bate tu kal kar lena chalo ab chalte hai hum log..


Raju- accha tik hai, to sambu kaka chalata hu mail or kal aata hu FIR apke pass


Sambu- achha tik hai beta, main intajaar karunga..


Ab agge chalate hai...

Raju ne ek nazar Pawan ki tarf ki apna hath hilaya jese bol raha ho - chalata hu FIR aunga or Pawan ne hinhina kar jese raju ki baat ka jawab diya..


Sambu- lagta hai Bahadur raju beta ko ghoda pasand aa gaya or isko raju bhi..


Bahadur- ha ab is baare mar kal hi baat karenge main bhi malik ko iski jankari de dunga chalte hai hum..


Sambu- tik hai par yaad hai na ajj raat bathak lagate hai dono kyu..


Raju- baetak matlb kaka..


Bahadur- wo tumhare janane ki chij nahi hai beta, tu bada ho jaa sab samjh aa jayega tik hai malik intajara kar rahe hoga..


Dono gadi ke pass aa gaye or raju ne gadi start kar liya or chal diye Haveli ki taraf , idhar Thakur sahab Haveli ke bahar ke barande mae the or apne hath ki ghadi ki tarf dekh rahe the...


Thakur- sham ke 5 baj chuke hai or Bahadur raju abhi tak nahi aaye hai chala kaha gaya hoga Bahadur raju ko lekar..


Thakur sahab ke Piche se maya or payal aa rahi thi maya ke hath mae kuch nasta tha or payal ke hath mae chay (tea) thi or dono kuch baat kar rahe the


Payal- chachi ye Bahadur to bahut samay se lekar gaya hai na usko, matlb raju ko to abhi tak kyu nahi aaye hai dono..


Maya- ha tumne mere dil ki baat bool diya lado main bhi kabse yahi soch rahi thi, or lagta hai babuji bhi tode se chinta mae lag rahe hai..


Or tabhi buliet ki awaj aai or Haveli ki jitni bhi Aurte thi matlb jo us time Haveli ke bahar kaam kar rahi thi or saath mae maya or payal bhi in logo ka dyan bilkul raju ki hi tarf ho gaya the kyuki ek too raju bahut hi Hundsome tha upper se ankho nae gogals or buliet ki bike ye combination bahut hi khataranaak tha


Raju


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Sab log usi taraf dekh rahe the or jab raju ne bike ko band kiya tab payal boli..


Payal- wow chachi apne dekha kya ye is bike mae kitna Hundsome lag raha hai..


Ye sun maya ke kaan khade ho gaya or usne ek nazar payal ki taraf dali, jo raju ki or hi dekh rahi thi or boli


Maya- kyu kya raju Hundsome nahi hai payal, ya tumne abhi ghor kiya uski taraf..


Payal- are yesi baat nahi hai chachi, wo kay hai na buliet par wo kuch jada hi alag or handsome lag raha tha bas isliye or kuch nahi..


Maya- huu main sab samjh rahi hu meri lado ki bato ko, kya hua lado kahi raju ke liya tere dil mae kuch kuch to nahi ho raha hai na huu..


Payal( toda blush karte hue) - kya chachi mere dil mae bhala kyu kuch kuch hoga ab bhi na, chaliye dada Ji intajaar kar rahe honge..

Maya age kuch nahi boli bas muskura kar chal di payal ke saath. Tab tak raju or bahadur bhi..


Thakur- kaha le kar chal gaya tha re bahadur isko, kitni der ho chuki ha janta bhi hai tu..


Bahadur- maaf kijye ga malik wo main raju ko ghadi sikhane ke liye hande stabl mae le kar chala gaya tha to todi der ho gai..


Raju- ha babuji isame kaka ki bilkul bhi galat nahi hai wo meri hi wajha se der ho gai.. Ab inpar gussa mat kijye..


Thakur- are beta hum isme gussa kar bhi nahi skte hai kabhi wo to bas yese hi puch raha hu or kuch nahi, wese raju beta pahli baar bike chaliye to kese laga ..


Raju- bahut maja aaya babuji, wese pahli baar to mujhase bike start hi nahi ho rahi thi fir kaka ke samjne ke baad hui or dhire dhire mene bike chala bhi li..


Piche se Maya or payal bhi aa gaye or


Payal- dada Ji apke liye chaye ( tea) or kuch pakode..


Thakur- bahut badhiya beti, jawo raju or bahadur ke bhi toda le aao.


Maya- Ji babuji wo mene kaamwali ko bool diya hai wo sab ke liye laati hi hogi nasta or chay


Thakur- badiya choti bahu, ha to raju beta hum kaha the


Raju- ha babuji wo main bata raha tha ki pahle to mujko kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu kese karu gear lagana ho to niche dekhta tha par dhire dhire sab samjh mae gaya Bapuji..


Thakur- ha wo to hum dekh hi rahe hai kese kuch ganto mae hi tumne bike chalani suru kardi, accha to hamare stabal gaye the waha kese laga..


Raju- wo, waha to bike chalane se bhi jada maja aaya babuji..


Thakur- accha wo kyu bhala jara hum to Jane


Raju- wo kya hai na babuji mujko bachpan se ghodo ko asliyat mae dekhne or chune ka sapna tha too ajj app logo ki wajha se wo sapna pura hua.. Main bahut khush hu babuji


Us samay thakur Maya payal ko Raju ke chahare par ek asli or payari khushi nazar aa rahi thi jo pata nahi kyu par tino ke dilo ko bhi khush kar rahi thi..


Raju- are ha babuji asli baat to batana bhul hi gaya main wo..


Isse pahle ki Raju kuch bol pata,Tabhi bahadur bol pada


Bahadur- are Raju beta jara ye khabar humko batane do malik ko tum tab tak pakode ka maja lo tik hai..



Raju- tik hai kaka app hi bata do babuji ko usme kya...


Bahadur- ha, mailk apko wo ghoda yaad hai, yahi ghoda jo sone (gold) ki tarah chamk raha tha app bahar desh se laye the..bahut kimti tha wo ghoda..



Thakur- hmm accha tum wo golden horse ki baat to nahi kar raha hai, jis ne hamre dono bete ko chotil kar diya tha ha to kiya hua uska..



Bahadur- ha sahi goldan ya jo bhi ho, ha malik usi ghode ko or Raju ne chua or sambu bool raha tha ki Raju uski sawari bhi kar lega..



Thakur- kya Raju beta bahadur sach bol raha hai kya..



Bahadur- makin kya apko hamari baat par vishvaas nahi hai..



Payal- dada jo ye golden horse ye kya hai...


Thakur- payal beti ye bahut hi kimti horse hai jo humne turkistaan se mangwaya tha, or jaha tak humko pata hai uski kimat yahi koi 28-30 lakh tak ki rahi hogi.. Or yese ghode hote hai na payal apne owner ke prati loyal hote hai.. Or sabse khubasoorat bhi..


Payal- accha to kya dono bade bhaiya bhi usko apne control mae nahi kar paye dada Ji


Thakur- ha bete tere chote bhaiya vikram ne to 2-3 baar kosis ki, ki uske uper sawari kar li jaye par kamyab nahi ho paya, or chot bhi kha betha..


Payal- wow matlb us ghode ko Raju ne control kar liya kaya baat hai Raju.. Congrats..


Raju- are ye koi badi baat nahi hai payal ji..


Thakur- are beta ye badi baat hi hai wese ye sab chod kya tune uski sawari ki..


Raju- nahi babuji abhi to mujko bhi pata nahi hai ki wo mujko apne uper sawari karne dega ki nahi..


Thakur- chalo koi baat nahi beta kaal apni bike wahi le jakar acche se sikhna or ho sake to sanbhu ke saath us ghode ke pass chale bhi jana , or agar tune us ghode ki sawari kar li Raju to hum tumko ek inam denge..


Raju- inam kya inam doge app babuji



Thakur- pahle tu uske upper sawari to kar or saath hi jab wo ghoda bhi tujko apna owner man le tab tujko main inam dunga samjha..


Raju- accha tik hai babu Ji..


Tabhi toda hawa tej chalni lagi or mausam bhi kharab hone laga


Thakur- lagta hai musam kharab hone wala hai, ek kaam kar Raju tu ghar chala ja beta wese bhi time bhi ho gaya hai kal bhi subha aa jana tik hai..


Rajj- Ji babuji chalta hu main..


Raju waha se sabhi ko bye bol chal diya ajj uske liye bahut hi accha din gaya Raju aram se apne ghar ki taarf chal diya musam toda thanda ho gaya tha, or tabhi Raju ko meena ki yaad aa gai saath mae rajo kaki ki bhi or wo meena ke ghar ki tarf mhud gaya


To be continued
nice SUPREB update
 

horny j

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Story started off great with hero having some superpower and all, then the hero is stuck being nothing just the old sanskaari good boy when this could have a been great story with lots of action and thrill.
Ab to uski superpower ka koi zikr bhi nahi hota he could read minds but hero chutiyon ki tarah chhoti si chhoti baat as doubt puchh Raha hai. There's still a lot of room to improve, it's not complaint it's just a criticism if you think about it and work on it it'll be great.
 

rajpoot01

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Ok intzaar rahega
 

0One above all

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Story started off great with hero having some superpower and all, then the hero is stuck being nothing just the old sanskaari good boy when this could have a been great story with lots of action and thrill.
Ab to uski superpower ka koi zikr bhi nahi hota he could read minds but hero chutiyon ki tarah chhoti si chhoti baat as doubt puchh Raha hai. There's still a lot of room to improve, it's not complaint it's just a criticism if you think about it and work on it it'll be great.
Thanks for your thoughts, but this story not fantasy story like other , where hero get power and everything goes under control him, if my hero became superhuman, if he get every thing without hardwork this story will end before start, my hero only get full human power and mind but little by little, just like us, so just enjoy this story, action thrill, we'll come too...

Or rahi baat chutyo ki tarah to apne story read nahi ki lagta hai hero 17 salo tak ek pagal ki tarah hi tha, usko kuch idea hi nahi tha, sab kuch free mae mil jaye to maja hi kya uska
 
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