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Please be patient until GIFs are loaded.

GIFs load hone tak thhoda sabr rakhen.

 
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Bahoth saare log story ke saath GIFs add karne ki request daal rahe hain DM mein jabke main regularly GIFs add kar raha hun....

Mujhe lagta hai ke 'High-resolution GIFs' (jo 5MB se zyada size ki hain) slow internet speed par load hone mein thoda waqt le rahin hain. Jo ke episode 34 ko main aaj phir ek baar parhte waqt mahsoos kiya.

Isliye episodes parhte waqt thoda sabr rakhein, ek baar saari GIFs load ho jayengi 3-4 mein tab parh lena aapko bhi maza ayega GIFs ke saath kahani parhne mein.

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For example ek GIF yahan deraha hun aap log dekhiye kitna waqt lag raha hai ise load hone mein.
Next episode ka intezar hai
Sorry bro Thoda busy tha isliye last 2 episode k review nahi de oaya par main jarur Dunga
 
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Meri pyari sisters aur brothers, aur sabse pehle Writer baba kamdev bhai ko bohot saara pyaar aur respect.
Main 3 saal se adult stories aur web series follow karti hoon. Bahut si stories dekhi hain, lekin "Ghar Ki Aag" jaisi bold, addictive aur emotional story bahut kam milti hai. Aapne is family ko itna natural aur intense banaya hai ki story 33 parts tak pahunchne ke baad bhi dil karta hai aur padhti rahun.

Lekin aaj main aapse ek request karne aa rahi hoon, dil se.

Bhai, aap is family ko aur zyada powerful aur realistic bana sakte ho agar aap unhe ek religious Muslim family ke roop mein present karein.

Socho aap log ki incest story padhne me itna maza kyu aata h....kyuki ye social taboo h...aur yahi taboo ek religious family me ho to story aur beautiful aur intresting ho jaygi...

Mai chahati hun ki baba kamdev bhai in familys ko thoda sa religious persent kare...jese family roze namaz ki paband ho. Sex k sath sath religion bhi unke liye ahmiyat rakhta ho.

Mai esa nahi bol Rahi ki ....logo k religious sentiment ko hurt Kiya jay....ye nahi ki namaz k dauran sex dikhaya jay....ya kisi religious book ya religious person ki beizzati behurmati ki jay.

Bus family ko kabhi kabhi namaz padhte roza rakhte dikhaya jay...Deen ki taleem dete hue dikhaya jay.

Story ka weight badhega. Incest aur family sex toh already bahut bold hai, uske saath religious layer daalne se story mature aur premium category mein chali jayegi.

Writer bhai, aap bahut talented ho. Aap is story ko ek normal bold story se utha kar ek legendary family saga bana sakte ho. Esi family sex story to bhari padi h portal pr...kuch naya, kahani ko naya kink dega ...

Agr aaplog razi h to.... please "han" boliye taki baba kamse. Bhai kahani ko naya ayam de sake..

Please acche se soch kr jawab digyega...bhut maza aaega kahani ka maza 10 guna ho jayga.
Ap jaisa soch rhi Hain
Waisa Hi Chal rha tha story.. Kuch updates pahle tak..
Jaha kabhi dikhaya gya ki Rashid sahab tasbih padh rhe h..

But Yaha Kuch Logo ki ye sab chize hurt kar Rahi hai.. jiske wajah SE writer Sahab ye sb ab add Karne se bach rhe hain taki faltu Ka drama create na ho idhar..

But apke baat SE main agree hu.. Agar is story me AISA add ho to aur interesting ho skti h story...

Aur Jin logo ko agar religious sentiments se itna jyada hi problem hai to sabse pahle to is site pe aana hi nhi chahiye tha unhe.
 
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Main yahan apni story par achhe aur constructive reviews ki umeed lekar baitha tha, lekin kuch log phir se usi tarah ki baaton se irritate kar rahe hain, jo pahle bhi ho chuke hain.
Agar koi feedback de to woh story ko behtar banane mein madad kare, warna bina wajah ke ye discussion kaafi disappointing lagte hain.
I am sorry writer Sahab.
Ye Mera is topic se releted first and last baat tha.
Agar apko Sahi nhi lage to uske liye mafi..
 

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Ghar Ki Aag

Episode 34: Pyas, Pehra aur Parwaz

Scene 1: Haveli ka Sehan — Maan aur Beti ki Khufiya Guftagu

Nashte ke baad haveli mein hamesha ki tarah chahal-pahal shuru ho chuki thi. Rashid Sahab aur baqi mard bahar nikal chuke thay. Hira ne college jane ke liye apna bag uthaya, magar uske qadam seedhe kitchen ki taraf gaye jahan Naseem akeli khari kuch hidayat de rahi thin.

"Ammi... zara ek baat suniye," Hira ne nehayat dhere se Naseem ke qareeb ja kar kaha.
Naseem ne mud kar beti ko dekha. "Hira? Tum abhi tak gayi nahi? College ke liye der ho rahi hai."

Hira ne apni ungliyon se bag ki strap ko marora. "Ammi, wo... kal table par maine jo baat ki thi, main us par qaim hoon. Magar mujhse ab aur intezar nahi ho raha. Meri bechaini barhti ja rahi hai. Kya main... kya main is hafte apni 'pehli chudai' ka kaam poora kar loon? Aap ijazat dein toh main taiyari karoon."

Naseem ne ek gehri saans li aur apne hath saaf karke Hira ko thoda door ek kone mein le gayin. "Nahi Hira. Abhi bilkul nahi."

"Magar kyun Ammi? Abbu bhi maan gaye hain aur Saima Baji ne unhe sambhal liya hai," Hira ne zidd karte hue kaha.

"Baat Abbu ki nahi hai, Hira. Baat ghar ke mahol aur zimmedari ki hai," Naseem ne nehayat sanjeedagi se samjhaya. "Pehli baar jab 'seal' toot-ti hai na, toh sirf khoon nahi nikalta, ladki ki chaal badal jati hai. Uska ang-ang bolne lagta hai ke wo ab kunwari nahi rahi. Aur hamare ghar mein agle kuch dinon mein mehmanon ka aana jana shuru hone wala hai."

Naseem ne Hira ke kandhe par hath rakha. "Karachi se Shamim Baji, Bilal aur Zoya aa rahe hain. Maine Usman aur Zoya ke rishte ki buniyaad rakh di hai. Agar Usman ki shadi Zoya se pakki hoti hai, toh ghar mein dawatain hongi, rasmein hongi. In sab kaam-kaaj ke liye mujhe tumhara, Ayesha ka aur Saima ka 'fit' hona zaroorat hai. Agar tum pehli chudai ke dard aur uske baad ki lachak lekar mehmanon ke samne ghoomogi, toh log sawaal uthayenge."

Hira ne hont bheenchiye. "Ammi, main sambhal loongi..."

"Nahi sambhal paogi," Naseem ne baat kaati. "Jab pehli baar kisi kamsin choot mein koi tagda lund andar jata hai na, toh wo jism ko andar se hila kar rakh deta hai. Tumhari aankhon ki sujan aur tumhare chalne ka dhang sab bata dega. Kya tumhe woh din yaad hai jab Ayesha ki 'seal' tooti thi. Poore do din tak wo theek se khari nahi ho saki thi. Uski raano mein itna dard aur sujan thi ke jab wo chalti thi toh uski chaal cheekh cheekh kar batati thi ke uske saath kya hua hai. " Naseem ka chehra thoda fikrmand hua. "Hira, tum bhool rahi ho ke Karachi se Shamim Baji, Parveen Mami aur Ruqsana Phuppo aa rahi hain. Ye purani aurtein hain, inki nazrein cheel jaisi tez aur tajurba ragon mein daudta hai. Ayesha ki badli hui chaal ka hi main abhi kuch nahi kar payi hoon, uski chaal mein abhi bhi wo lachak baaqi hai, ab un logon ke samne main ek aur naya jokhim (risk) nahi le sakti. Agar unhone Ayesha ke dhang ya uski badli hui lachak par koi sawal khara kar diya, toh mere paas koi jawab nahi hoga. Main unki tez nazron se tumhe aur Ayesha ko nahi bacha paungi."

Hira ne roni si soorat banayi. "Ammi, magar meri ye pyas...? Agar maine abhi ye kaam poora na kiya toh mera dimaag parhai mein nahi lagega."

"Toh thanda pani piyo, aur apni pyas ko thoda aur sabr sikhao, Hira!" Naseem ne sakhti magar mohabbat se kaha. "Abhi tumhara 'fresh' dikhna zaroori hai. Ek baar ye rishte ki baat pakki ho jaye, mehman chale jayein, phir main khud tumhe apne hathon se taiyar karke tumhare 'jawan lund' ke hawale karungi. Tab tak, sirf apne mammon aur honton se kaam chalao, choot ko mehfooz rakho. Tumhari ye pyas thoda aur ruk sakti hai."

Hira ne samajh liya ke Ammi ab nahi manengi. Usne apna bag sahi kiya aur ek gehri saans lekar darwaze ki taraf barhi. "Theek hai Ammi... magar yaad rakhiyega, ye pyas jab bharkegi toh phir control karna mushkil ho jayega."

Naseem usey jata hua dekh kar halka sa muskurayi. "Ye jawani bhi na... bilkul Rashid Sahab par gayi hai, dono baap beti ko sabr hi nahi rahta. Bade utawle bane phirte hain"

Scene 2: Usman ki Car — Rasta aur Khufiya Mansooba

Haveli ke baahar Usman ki car start khari thi. Usman driving seat par baitha tha, magar uske chehre par kal raat dastar-khwan par hue dhamake ka asar saaf nazar aa raha tha—Naseem ne jo uska aur Zoya ka rishta pakka karne ki baat ki thi, usse uske dimaag mein khujli ho rahi thi. Kuch hi der mein Hamza aur Ayesha apna apna bag lekar car mein dakhil hue. Ayesha aage Usman ke sath baithi, jabke Hamza peeche ki seat par sukoon se draz ho gaya.

Usman ne car aage barhayi, magar uski khamoshi aur udasi se steering wheel ko pakadne ka dhang dekh kar Ayesha samajh gayi.

"Bhaiya... kya baat hai? Kal raat se aapka chehra yun utra hua hai jaise Zoya se nahi, kisi bhediye se aapka rishta joda ja raha ho? Kal raat jab Ammi ne is rishte ka zikr kiya tab toh aap bade khush dikh rahe thay, ab achanak kisliye udas bethe hain?" Ayesha ne thodi shokhi aur hairat se pucha.

Usman ne ek gehri saans li. "Ayesha, aisi baat nahi hai. Zoya ladki buri nahi hai, mujhe pasand bhi hai... magar meri asal pareshani kuch aur hai. Karachi ka nizam alag hai aur hamari haveli ka mahol alag. Main bas ye soch kar pareshan hoon ke kya wo ladki hum logon ke is khule mahol mein khud ko dhal payegi? Kahin wo yahan ke dhang dekh kar tamasha na khara kar de."

Ayesha ne muskura kar Usman ka hath thama. "Bhaiya, aap is baat ki fikar chhor dein. Zoya ka mere sath ek accha aur dosti wala rishta ban chuka hai. Woh meri ham-umar hai, isliye wo mere nature ko acche se samajh sakti hai aur main usey samajha bhi sakti hoon. Main usey dheere dheere apne sath lagaoongi, haveli ke rasm-o-riwaaj samjhaongi aur usey is mahol ki aadi bana doongi. Aur phir Ammi ke hote hue ye kaam aur bhi aasan hojayega, wo bohot jald yahan adjust kar legi."

Usman ne thoda shak se dekha jaise usey Ayesha ki baaton par poora yaqeen na ho, magar phir uske chehre par dukh saaf nazar aane laga. "Chalo wo toh theek hai... magar Saima Aapi ka kya? Mera aur Saima Aapi ka jo silsila chal raha tha, wo toh ab khatam ho jayega. Wo mujhse door ho jayengi, isi baat ka bhi gham hai mujhe."

Hamza ne peeche se aage ko jhukte hue shararat se kaha, "Bhaiya, aap kyun dil chota kar rahe hain? Mere paas ek zabardast tarkeeb hai. Ek baar aapki aur Zoya ki shadi ho jaye, phir hum Ammi ke zariye aisa mansooba banayenge ke Bilal Bhai ki poori family ko Karachi se Lahore ya Lahore ke qareeb hi kahin shift karwa dein. Jab wo yahan rahenge, toh Saima Aapi bhi hamare qareeb hi rahengi."

Ayesha ne Hamza ki is shatir tarkeeb par khushi zahir karte hue nehayat naughty lehje mein kaha, "Wah Hamza! Tumhara dimaag toh harami-pan mein sab se aage chalta hai. Chalo Bhaiya, ab toh aapka gham door ho jana chahiye!" Usman ko bhi Hamza ki ye tarkeeb bilkul sahi aur thos lagi.

Hamza ne thoda hanste hue Ayesha ki taraf dekha aur usey jalane ke liye bola, "Aur wese bhi, Abbu is shift wale maamle par foran raazi ho jayenge. Unhe toh bas is baat se matlab hai ke jab unka dil chahe, unhe Saima Api ki gaand milti rahe. Unka dhyan wahan banta rahega."

Ye sunte hi Ayesha ke chehre ke rang badalne lage. Uske andar ek ajeeb si jalan aur akelepan ka ehsas jagne laga. Usne socha ke shadi ke baad Usman Bhai apni (hone wali) biwi Zoya aur purani mohabbat Saima mein poori tarah masroof ho jayenge. Hamza ka silsila pehle hi Ammi aur Hira ke sath andar hi andar chal raha hai. Aur Abbu ka dhyan Saima Api aur Hira ki maujoodgi ki wajah se us se door hi rahega. 'Toh phir mera kya hoga? Main toh is haveli mein bilkul akeli reh jaoongi,' Ayesha ne socha.

Hamza ne mirror mein Ayesha ke chehre par chhayi us khamoshi aur jalan ko ghaur se dekha. Wo raseeli awaaz mein bola, "Ayesha Baji... agar aap bhi Saima Api aur Hira Baji ki tarah thoda jigra dikhayein, toh aapki bhi chandi ho sakti hai. Phir aapko akelepan ka rona nahi rona padega."

Ayesha ne thoda chonk kar peeche dekha. "Kya matlab Hamza? Main kya himmat dikhaoon?"

Usman ne car ki raftaar thodi dheemi ki aur Ayesha ki naram raan par hath rakh kar dabaya. "Matlab saaf hai Ayesha. Tum mard ko khush karne ke qabil hui bhi ho ya nahi, ye tumhe sabit karna padega. Agar tum mein wo salahiyat hai, toh hum dono bhai hamesha tumhare sath hain."

Hamza ne baat ko aage barhaya, "Haan Baji... agar khud ko sabit karna hai, toh aaj balke abhi, is raste mein jo sunsaan jagah aati hai, wahan apne munh se hum dono bhaiyon ke lund choos kar unhe thanda karna padega. Agar aapne ye imtehan paas kar liya, toh aap kabhi akeli nahi rahengi."

Ayesha pehle toh ye sun kar ghabra gayi, uske hont thartharaye. "Nahi... tum dono pagal ho gaye ho kya? Raste mein... is tarah car mein main kaise... nahi Hamza ye bilkul bhi nahi hosakta...!"

"Kyun nahi Ayesha? Agar car mein tangi mehsoos ho toh hum bahar khule mein bhi kar sakte hain. Wahan hamein dekhne wala kaun hoga? Khaas kar is waqt," Usman ne shokhi se kaha.

"Apni haveli mein har koi apni aag bujha raha hai, toh aap apne in do jawan bhaiyon ko kyun pyasa rakhna chahti hain? Hamari garmi door kijiye, aur hamare saath maze kijiye" peeche se Hamza ki uksati hui awaaz aayi.

Hamza aur Usman ne bar bar usey uksana aur ubharna shuru kiya. Ayesha ne ek gehri saans li, use darr toh lag raha tha is naye adventure ko lekar, lekin kal raat wali dastar-khwan ki baatein aur apne akelepan ka khauf uske dimaag par sawaar ho gaya. Usne socha ke jab haveli mein sab azaad hain, toh wo kyun peeche rahe.

"Theek hai..." Ayesha ne dhere se apna dupatta sarka diya, is sonch se uske andar garmi badh rahi thi aur uske hont rasile ho rahe thay. "Jab sab apni apni aag bujha rahe hain, toh main bhi apne hisse ke maze le hi loon. Chaliye Bhaiya, car ko kisi achi jagah mein rokiye."

Usman ne muskura kar car ko highway se utara aur nehr (canal) ke kinare ghane pedon aur unchi jhadion ki aad mein khari kar di. Baahar bilkul khamoshi thi, sirf paani ke behne ki halke sarsarahat thi.

Car rukte hi Hamza ne peeche se apna hath aage barhaya aur Ayesha ki seat ko poori tarah recline karke taqreeban neeche lita diya. Isse pehle ke Ayesha sambhalti, Hamza ne aage jhuk kar uske rasile honton ko apne munh mein bhar liya aur unhe deewanawar choosne laga. Idhar Usman aage se Ayesha ke kapde nikalne mein mashghool ho gaya. Usne uski qameez ko upar khinchne ki koshish ki.

"Bhaiya... rukiye, ye kya kar rahe hain? Kapde mat nikaliye," Ayesha ne halka sa aiteraz dikhaya.
"Ayesha, kapdon ke sath maza nahi aayega, sab fhas jayega," Usman ne bahana banaya aur nehayat safai se uski qameez aur bra ko upar karke uske gore, bhare hue mammon ko baahar nikal diya.

Mamme baahar aate hi Hamza aur Usman dono ki nazron mein hawas chamak uthi. Hamza uske dono mammo ko dabate hue uske hont chusne laga aur Usman uske pairo mein baith uski shalwar bhi nikal di aur uski choot chatne ki koshish ki magar car mein seat recline hone ke bawajood jagah kam lag rahi thi.

"Ayesha, car mein comfort nahi hai, maza nahi aayega. Chalo bahar jhadion ki aad mein chalte hain," Usman ne kaha.

Ayesha ne bahar jane ke khayal se saaf mana kar diya. Uski jaan nikal rahi thi darr se. "Nahi Bhaiya! Bilkul nahi. Main bahar nahi jaongi. Kyun aap log apni bahen ko randi ki tarah bazar mein nanga karna chah rahe hain? Kisi ne dekh liya toh?"

Usman ne uske gaal ko chuma aur nehayat narmi se samjhaya, "Ayesha, pagal mat bano. Hum tumhare bhai hain, tumhari izzat par koi aanch nahi aane denge. Bahar bilkul sunsaan hai, jhadion ke peeche koi dekh hi nahi sakta."

Dono bhaiyon ne bina der kiye car ke darwaze khole aur bahar nikal kar apni apni pant aur shalwar neeche karne lage. Jab Ayesha ne car ke andar se dono bhaiyon ke tane hue, lambe aur garam auzaron ko khule aasmaan ke neeche lehrate dekha, toh uski apni choot mein ek tezi se lachak uthi. Uska darr hawas mein badalne laga. Wo darte darte car se bahar nikli aur jhadion ki aad mein apne panjon ke bal zameen par baith gayi.

Usne nehayat jhijhak aur fahisha shauq ke sath dono bhaiyon ke lund apne hathon mein liye. Unki garmi aur sakhti Ayesha ke hathon ko jala rahi thi.

"Uff... tum dono toh sach mein toofan lekar ghoom rahe ho," Ayesha ne sharmate hue dono auzaron ko sehlaya.

"Toh shuru ho jao Baji, pehle kiska chakhna hai?" Hamza ne muskurate hue lusty comment kiya. "Dekhein toh sahi haveli ke mardon ko khush karne ka hunar hai bhi ya nahi?"

Ayesha ne darr ke maare ek baar aaspas dekha ke kahin nehr ke kinare koi aa na jaye, phir usne Usman ke mote lund ke oopri hisse par apni gili zubaan pheri.

"Ahhh... Ayesha... ye hui na baat," Usman ne karahate hue sukoon ki saans li aur apna hath Ayesha ke naye gore mammon par rakh kar unhe zor-zor se dabane laga.

Ayesha ne bina der kiye Usman ka poora topa apne munh mein le liya aur dhere dhere aage peeche hone lagi. Uske galay ki narmi Usman ko pagal kar rahi thi. Wo darr aur sharm ke beech dono mardon ke maze ko mehsoos kar rahi thi. Phir usne apna munh thoda khola aur Hamza ke jawan lund ko apni ungliyon se zor se hilana shuru kiya.

"Baji, thoda idhar bhi dhyan dein, sirf Bhaiya ke lund ko hi maza dengi kya?" Hamza ne be-sabri se uske sarr ke baal pakadte hue kaha.

Ayesha ne Usman ka lund munh se nikala, uske hont thook se geele thay. Usne darrte dheray se pucha, "Hamza... koi aa gaya toh? Mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai."

"Koi nahi aayega Baji, aap bas choosne par focus karein," Hamza ne sargoshi ki.

Ayesha ne Hamza ke tane hue auzar ko apne honton ke beech dabaya aur poori taqat se choosna shuru kiya. Khule mein hone wale is khel ki wajah se Ayesha ke andar itni garmi barh gayi thi ke wo lund choosne ke sath sath apni taango ko aapas mein bheenchy hue apni choot ko bhi ragad rahi thi.

Ayesha baari baari dono bhaiyon ka maal chakh rahi thi. Kabhi wo Usman ka lund poora halaq tak le jati, toh kabhi Hamza ke auzar par apni zubaan ghumati. Car ke AC ki thandak baahar jhadion tak nahi thi, isliye teeno ke jism par paseena chamak raha tha.

"Uff Ayesha... tum toh sach mein ustad nikli. Saima Aapi se bhi zyada naram munh hai tumhara," Usman ne masti mein uske baalon ko pakad kar thoda andar ko dhaka diya. tabhi Hamza uske mamme dabochte hue bola "Baji... dono ko saath me lona apne andar"

Ayesha ne koi inkar nahin kiya balke josh mein apni poori koshish ki

"Shabaash Ayesha...., ahhh...haan aise hi khush karte hain mardon ko..." Usman ne maze mein kaha.

"Mere bhaiyon ke liye kuch bhi karungi" Ayesha ne unki aankhon mein dekhte hue badi ada'a se kaha aur bari bari dono ke lund chusne lagi.

"Baji... thoda tez... lagta hai mera lund maidan marne wala hai," Hamza ne apna lund uske munh mein thoda jhatke se chalate hue kaha.

Ayesha ne dono bhaiyon ke lund ko ek sath apne dono hathon mein liya, unhe aapas mein sataya (joda) aur dono ke topay ko ek sath apni zubaan se chaatna shuru kiya. Wo poori tarah is rangeen aur khofnak masti mein doob chuki thi.

Kuch hi der mein, Usman aur Hamza dono ke jism thartharaye aur wo jhatke lene lage.

"Ayesha... pakad ke rakhna... munh mat hatana... aa raha hai..." Usman ne haanpate hue kaha.

Ayesha ne darr ke maare honton ko thoda peche kiya lekin Hamza aur Usman ne Ayesha ka sar pakde rakha aur dono ne lund ko apne hathon mein pakad kar nehayat tez-tez hilane lage. Agle hi lamhe, Usman aur Hamza dono ka garam aur gaadha maal jhatkon ke sath baahar nikal kar Ayesha ke honton, chehre aur uske nange mammon aur uske bazuon par dhaar ban kar girne laga.

Ayesha ne haanpate hue, saansein bahaal karte hue dono bhaiyon ki taraf dekha. Uske chehre par ab darr ke sath sath ek ajeeb sa sukoon aur fatah ki muskurahat thi. Usne dhere se car se tissue nikal kar apne hath aur mamme saaf kiye.

Usman aur Hamza ne apni pant aur shalwar sahi ki. Usman ne Ayesha ka gila chehra chooma, "Tumne sabit kar diya Ayesha... ab tum is haveli ki asli rani ho. Tumhara koi muqabla nahi."

Teeno wapis car mein bethe. Usman ne car start ki aur highway par barh gayi, magar ab car ke andar ka mahol bilkul badal chuka tha. Ayesha ab akeli nahi thi, usne dono bhaiyon ko apna deewana bana liya tha.

Scene 3: Karachi ka Ghar — Shamim Banu ki Tadap aur Khamosh Deewar

Karachi mein shaam ka waqt tha. Shamim Banu ke ghar mein aik ajeeb si khamoshi phaili hui thi. Shamim kitchen mein khari chai bana rahi thin, magar unka dhyan baar baar lounge ki taraf ja raha tha, jahan unka beta Bilal chupchaap betha tha. Jab se Zoya ne apni sakht aur sanjeeda nazron ka pehra is ghar par lagaya tha, tab se Bilal apni maa Shamim se door bhaagne laga tha. Shamim ke liye ye sabr bardaasht se baahar ho raha tha—wo beta jo unki ek aah par tarap uthta tha, wo ab unhe dekhne se bhi katra raha tha. Shamim ko bilkul andaza nahi tha ke Bilal ye sab sirf Zoya ke darr se ek natak kar raha hai; wo toh andar se bilkul toot chuki thin, unhe lag raha tha ke Zoya ki sakht nigrani ne unke bete ko sach mein unse door kar diya hai.

Tabhi lounge mein Shamim ki choti beti, Farah, aayi. Farah hamesha ki tarah apne nakhron mein thi, usne lounge mein aate hi nakhre se apna phone sofa par phenka.

"Uff Ammi! Kitni der laga rahi hain chai mein? Aur aapko pata hai na, kal subah hume Lahore ke liye nikalna hai, meri abhi tak aadhi packing baqi hai!" Farah ne kitchen ki taraf munh karke oonchi awaaz mein nakhre se kaha.

Shamim ne chai ki tray uthayi aur lounge mein aayin. Unhone tray table par rakhi aur Farah ko narm nazar se dekha. "Aa gayi chai, Farah. Apne bhai ko bhi do."

Zoya, jo wahan nehayat sanjeedagi se bethi koi kaam kar rahi thi, usne apni sakht aur pakiza nazrein utha kar Bilal par jamein. Bilal ne foran apni nazrein jhuka lin aur apni maa Shamim ki taraf dekha tak nahi, bas chupchaap cup uthate hue bola, "Shukriya Ammi."

Farah ne apna cup uthaya aur sofa par phelti hui boli, "Bhai, mujhe Lahore ja kar bohot saari shopping karni hai. Aapko mere sath chalna padega, main akele kahin nahi janay wali."

Bilal ne Zoya ki sakht nazar ka dabao mehsoos karte hue sapaat lehje mein kaha, "Haan Farah, chalein ge. Magar pehle kal waqt par nikalna zaroori hai."

Shamim Banu wahan khari apne bete ke is rookhe-pan aur doori ko dekh kar andar hi andar sulag rahi thin. Unhe lag raha tha ke Bilal sach mein unse door bhaag raha hai, aur unka ye lagao aur unki tadap unhe chain nahi lene de rahi thi. Wo is ghutan ko bardaasht nahi kar payin aur bina kuch bole chupchaap wahan se ghumien aur apne kamre mein chali gayin.

Kamre ka darwaza band karte hi Shamim ke aansu nikal aaye. Wo bister ke kone par baith gayin aur haanpate hue khud se kehne lagin, "Mera apna beta... mujhse yun ghairon ki tarah door bhaag raha hai. Sirf is Zoya ke darr se wo meri taraf ek nazar dekhta tak nahi. Is ladki ne mere hi ghar mein mere aur mere bete ke beech deewar khari kar di hai aur Bilal ko mujhse chheen liya hai."

Shamim ke andar ek ajeeb si bechaini barh rahi thi. Kal jab Lahore se Naseem ka phone aaya tha aur unhone Usman aur Zoya ke rishte ki baat ki thi, toh Shamim ko is andhere mein aik ummeed ki kiran nazar aayi thi. Unhe Lahore (Haveli) ke andar ke mahol ka toh koi andaza nahi tha, magar unhone ye zaroor soch liya tha ke agar Zoya ka rishta Usman se pakka ho jata hai, toh Zoya ki saari nazrein aur dhyan Bilal par se hat kar uske apne shoor (Usman) par lag jayega. Ek baar Zoya ka pehra Bilal par se hata, toh Shamim ke liye apna beta wapis paana bohot aasan ho jayega.

"Mujhe bas Lahore pahunchne tak ye doori aur ye tadap bardaasht karni hogi," Shamim ne apne aansu saaf karte hue khud ko hosla diya. "Ek baar hum Lahore pahunch jayein, phir is Zoya ka pehra khatam hote hi mera Bilal shayad phir se mere paas lout aayega. Tab tak mujhe ye sab bardaasht karna hi padega."

Tabhi darwaze par halqi si dastak hui. Shamim ne jaldi se apna dupatta sahi kiya aur darwaza khola. Samne Bilal khara tha, uske chehre par ab bhi wahi sapaat-pan tha ke kahin lounge mein bethi Zoya usey dekh na le.

"Ammi..." Bilal ne nehayat dhere aur sapaat lehje mein kaha, magar uski aankhon mein apni maa ke liye wahi purani talab aur be-bassi jhank rahi thi jise wo chhupa raha tha. "Hum kal subah hi Lahore ke liye nikal rahe hain. Zoya keh rahi hai ke saara samaan waqt par gari mein rakhna hai. Aap bhi apni taiyari mukammal rakhhiyega."

Shamim ne bete ke is rookhe andaaz ko dekha toh unka dil mazeed bhar aaya ke wo kitna badal gaya hai. Unhone bhari awaaz mein kaha, "Theek hai Bilal, main bilkul taiyar hoon. Tum fikar mat karo."

Bilal ne aik aakhri gehri nazar apni maa par daali aur foran mud gaya, taake lounge mein bethi Zoya ko koi shaq na ho. Darwaza band karke Shamim ne ek gehri saans li. Kal ka safar unhe Lahore lekar ja raha tha, jahan rishton ki aik nayi siyasat unka intezar kar rahi thi.


Episode 34 Khatam

Cliffhanger: kya Lahore ki hawa Zoya ke yeh sakht pehra toad payegi? Bahen Bhaiyon ke is adventure ke baad jab ghar laotenge toh kis tarah unka isteqbal hoga? Kya Miss Kiran Hamza ke class bunk karne par Rashid Sahab se Hamza ki shikayat lagayengi? Naseem aur Saima ka aagey kya plan hai?
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