Sushilnkt
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Bro aisi story ke update likhne time lagta hai koi 5 ya 6 character thodi hai bahot sare hai or uper bhai ka update v bada hota hai hai per kavi kavi kuch jyda hi time laga dete hai apki baat v sahi hai readers ka intrest kam ho jata hai update na aane seYe story aage jaa kar aur bhi jyada interesting and wild hone waali hai .....Aakash K kai saare adventuring toor bhi honge ....but writer ki laparwaahi ki bjha se story K readers ki expectations hai wo toot rahi hai dhire dhire
Writer Bhai thoda dhyaan de lo story par ..kaafi acchi story hai ese yun hi bhangaar k jese naa daalo ki ye story aapke haatho complete ho naa ho
Hope aap ese aage badaane aayenge
YepBro aisi story ke update likhne time lagta hai koi 5 ya 6 character thodi hai bahot sare hai or uper bhai ka update v bada hota hai hai per kavi kavi kuch jyda hi time laga dete hai apki baat v sahi hai readers ka intrest kam ho jata hai update na aane se