Fantasy God of darkness and nature

[Ristrcted]

Sorry friends first story hai aur abhi start hua hai to update thode chote ayege

Koi naa dost bas likhte rahne ka jab bhi time mille....baaki updates to chote bade hote rahenge....starting sahi hai

 

[Obaid Khan]

Update 1

Ye bat suru hoti hai carodo arabo sal pahle ki. Jab hamare akashganga aur as-pas ki galaxy jivan ka namonishan nahi tha. Tab yaha se bahut prakash varsh dur ak planet tha jo kisi bhi galaxy ka hisa nahi tha kyuki vo hamesha adrash rahata tha . Vaha par ek raja hua Karte the Jise vaha ke log origine matalab jo sabse pahle aya. Vo kon tha kaha se aya kisi ko malum nahi tha. Use log Arya the great name se jante the jis ke pas sabhi prakar ki takte thi. Chahe vo panch tatv ho ya light magic ho ya fir dark magic ho. Vo chutki bajake hi kisi bhi chese la nirman kar dete the ya phir tabah, ise liye loge unhe god of nature or god of destruction se jante the. Unhone apne liye ek patni ka nirman kiya upni adhi takat se jinhe log goddess of nature kahte the. Us planet pe 7 rajya hua karte the jinka vo maharaj the. Jivan ka nirman karne ke bad aur thode samay ke shasan ke bad dono ne vivah kar liya. Vivah ke ek sal bad unhe do putro ki prapti hue. Jis me ek ko power of light ki takat mili to dusre ko power of darkness. Dono bhai jab bade hue to unhe galaxy o me jivan sthapana karne ke liye beja gaya. Uske bad vo planet gayab ho gaya jise ka name tha ...... THE ORIGINE.

Bahot badhiya start hai bro

 

[Pta nhi]

Update 1

Ye bat suru hoti hai carodo arabo sal pahle ki. Jab hamare akashganga aur as-pas ki galaxy jivan ka namonishan nahi tha. Tab yaha se bahut prakash varsh dur ak planet tha jo kisi bhi galaxy ka hisa nahi tha kyuki vo hamesha adrash rahata tha . Vaha par ek raja hua Karte the Jise vaha ke log origine matalab jo sabse pahle aya. Vo kon tha kaha se aya kisi ko malum nahi tha. Use log Arya the great name se jante the jis ke pas sabhi prakar ki takte thi. Chahe vo panch tatv ho ya light magic ho ya fir dark magic ho. Vo chutki bajake hi kisi bhi chese la nirman kar dete the ya phir tabah, ise liye loge unhe god of nature or god of destruction se jante the. Unhone apne liye ek patni ka nirman kiya upni adhi takat se jinhe log goddess of nature kahte the. Us planet pe 7 rajya hua karte the jinka vo maharaj the. Jivan ka nirman karne ke bad aur thode samay ke shasan ke bad dono ne vivah kar liya. Vivah ke ek sal bad unhe do putro ki prapti hue. Jis me ek ko power of light ki takat mili to dusre ko power of darkness. Dono bhai jab bade hue to unhe galaxy o me jivan sthapana karne ke liye beja gaya. Uske bad vo planet gayab ho gaya jise ka name tha ...... THE ORIGINE.

Awesome update

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Bhai mai new story likhane ja raha hu . Ye meri first story hai to mistake ho to maff karna aur update kalse ayenge. So please wait until then

congregation for new story

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update 1

Ye bat suru hoti hai carodo arabo sal pahle ki. Jab hamare akashganga aur as-pas ki galaxy jivan ka namonishan nahi tha. Tab yaha se bahut prakash varsh dur ak planet tha jo kisi bhi galaxy ka hisa nahi tha kyuki vo hamesha adrash rahata tha . Vaha par ek raja hua Karte the Jise vaha ke log origine matalab jo sabse pahle aya. Vo kon tha kaha se aya kisi ko malum nahi tha. Use log Arya the great name se jante the jis ke pas sabhi prakar ki takte thi. Chahe vo panch tatv ho ya light magic ho ya fir dark magic ho. Vo chutki bajake hi kisi bhi chese la nirman kar dete the ya phir tabah, ise liye loge unhe god of nature or god of destruction se jante the. Unhone apne liye ek patni ka nirman kiya upni adhi takat se jinhe log goddess of nature kahte the. Us planet pe 7 rajya hua karte the jinka vo maharaj the. Jivan ka nirman karne ke bad aur thode samay ke shasan ke bad dono ne vivah kar liya. Vivah ke ek sal bad unhe do putro ki prapti hue. Jis me ek ko power of light ki takat mili to dusre ko power of darkness. Dono bhai jab bade hue to unhe galaxy o me jivan sthapana karne ke liye beja gaya. Uske bad vo planet gayab ho gaya jise ka name tha ...... THE ORIGINE.

nice update

 

[Rohit1988]

Update 1

Ye bat suru hoti hai carodo arabo sal pahle ki. Jab hamare akashganga aur as-pas ki galaxy jivan ka namonishan nahi tha. Tab yaha se bahut prakash varsh dur ak planet tha jo kisi bhi galaxy ka hisa nahi tha kyuki vo hamesha adrash rahata tha . Vaha par ek raja hua Karte the Jise vaha ke log origine matalab jo sabse pahle aya. Vo kon tha kaha se aya kisi ko malum nahi tha. Use log Arya the great name se jante the jis ke pas sabhi prakar ki takte thi. Chahe vo panch tatv ho ya light magic ho ya fir dark magic ho. Vo chutki bajake hi kisi bhi chese la nirman kar dete the ya phir tabah, ise liye loge unhe god of nature or god of destruction se jante the. Unhone apne liye ek patni ka nirman kiya upni adhi takat se jinhe log goddess of nature kahte the. Us planet pe 7 rajya hua karte the jinka vo maharaj the. Jivan ka nirman karne ke bad aur thode samay ke shasan ke bad dono ne vivah kar liya. Vivah ke ek sal bad unhe do putro ki prapti hue. Jis me ek ko power of light ki takat mili to dusre ko power of darkness. Dono bhai jab bade hue to unhe galaxy o me jivan sthapana karne ke liye beja gaya. Uske bad vo planet gayab ho gaya jise ka name tha ...... THE ORIGINE.

Plot acha hai but chota hai koi nahi
Likhte rahe sab ho jayega bas sath rahiyega
Gayab na hona story adhuri chor ke bas yahi gujarish hai

 

[Himanshu Vasava]

Bhai log and baheno mai kal sam tak update de dunga

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Bhai log and baheno mai kal sam tak update de dunga

intezar rehega bhai aapke update ka

 

[Naina]

for new story....
shandaar suruwat huyi hai kahani ki

 

[Himanshu Vasava]

Update 2
Pichali bar dekha ki kaise jivan sthapana ke liye dur galaxy mai dej diya .
Now...
Ab soch rahe hoge ki Maine dono bhaio ke power ke bareme bataya pan unke name nahi vo age jake pata chalega lekin bata du ki akasha ganga mai jivan ki sthapana un dono bhaio ne nahi balki Dono ORIGINE ne milke ki thi(Lord and goddess of nature). Dono ne milke prithvi ke sahit bahot se planet pe jivan ki rachana ki. Jyada tar planet chote the isliye vaha sift ek hi jati ke ke log hote jaise ki parilok, jinlok, bono ka lok , elf lok , Dev lok , Danav lok , beast land , degran world, vampire world , wolf world nag lok and baki bahut se planet me jivan ki sthapana ki jo age chalte pata chalega. Ye to father and mother ne kam kiya to ap log soch rahe hoge ki dono bhai kaha gai? To esha kuch jish ke chalte Arya the great ne unhe prithvi name ke planet pe ked kar diya us vakt prithvi par jivan nahi tha. Is ke bad unhone prithvi par bhi jivan ki sthapana ki aur har planet ke raksha hetu 3 Guardian ki rachana ki apni power se . Jisme ek logo ki likhata, ek us ka sanchalan karta aur tisra ke pas nayi rachana and uske tabah karne ki power di gayi and unhe kaha gaya ki jab tak vo vapash nahi ajate tab tak sabki dekhabal karna. And uske bad god and goddess dono gayab ho gaye.
Ase hi samay bitata gaya log apas me ladne page to ek bar phir god ko ana pada . Unhone apne khun se ek yodha ki rachana ki jisme dono ki power thi. Us yodha ke pas intni power thi ki vo in dono bhaio se bhi akela lad sakata tha and raha bhi sakata tha lekin us yodha ko santi banai rakhane ke liya banaya tha vaise hi usne kiya . Usne sabhi planet pe santi banai rakhi har guardian ke sath milkar. Ese hi sal bhitate gai and us yodha ko akhari gadi ai to use apne sarjan har ko yad kiya and anpe priy putr ki awaj sunakar uske dono ma pita god and goddess uske samane aye . Unhe dekh kar yodha ne kaha ki “ prabu Maine nishwarth pan se sabhi ki seva ki hai aur in akhari sansho me mai apse kunch magana chahta hu agar apki agya ho to .” Arya ne kaha ki “ putr hum jante hi ki tum kya magana chahte ho . Tum fikar mat karo ek esa samay ayega jab koi dev prithvi lok mai nahi ja sake get tab burai badegi kyuki tumare dono bade bhai vahi ked hai tab mai aur tumhari Mata tumhare vansaj ke parivar me janm lege aur usi ke sath esha kuch hoga jishe dusre planet vale yaha nahi aa sakege jab hamari kuch mukhy takate jagrit and hum 20 sal ke nahi ho jate .” Us ke bad dono gayab yo gaye and usi ke sath unka planet bhi . To sabhi planet ke guardians (prithvi ko chod kar) ki ma-pita ke yad mai ek school banaya jay jaha pe kishi bhi planet and unme base rajya ke raja ki nahi chalegi . Unhone ek ese planet pe school banaya jaha pe life tha lekin vaha sirf khali maidan, pashu pakshi se barpur jangal, jangal mai jarne nadi talab sab tha sath mai sagar bhi the , anaj ugane ko achi jamin thi to unhone khali maidan mai school banaya jaha har tarah ki siksha di jati thi . Jadu se talavar baji se archery tak sabhi siksha di jati thi . Yaha sabhi planet ke log padai karne aa sakte the lekin ek rule tha ki yaha koi rajashahi nahi chalegi. Ek planet ke rajkumar and use planet ke ek common ladaka jab school mai enter hote hi dono ek saman hai . Esi ke sath sabhi guardians ne milke ek esa guardian banaya jo school ki raksha kar sakhe. Esi ke sath sabhi guardians apni sakti badane chale gai. Isi ke sath school bhi chalu ho gaya and samay bitane laga.
Ab prithvi par kalyug suru ho gaya tha and har taraf burai ka samrajy felne laga. Ese hi samay bitane laga and arya the great ne jo vachan apne bete yodha ko diya tha vo pas ane laga .
Ab age story sirf prithvi ki dekhayi jayegi jab tak baki ka samay nahi ajata.
Ab chalte he yodha ke vansaj ke pas. Ye the mere dadaji jo abhi mere mata-pita ke sath hamare kulguruke ke ashram mai the. Kyuki hamare ghar mai har 100 salo mai ek yodha paida hota tha and baki ka raj bad me pata chalega . Abhi sab kulguru ke samane the. Kulguru dadaji ki taraf dekhate hui
Kg: ye tumne acha kiya ki sirf tum aur tumare bade bete bahu ko leke aye.
Dadaji: guruji ap to jante hai ki hum kis vajase apke pas aye hai aur ghar ke baki ke sabhyo ke liye har kulguru ke shishy unke liye kulguru hai.
Kg: hum jante hai aur apko Jan ke khusi hogi ki 100 sal pure hone mai 1 sal baki hai aur apki bahu garbvati hai.
Ye sunkar pitaji and dadaji shocked ho gaye and ma bhi lekin is bat ke liye ki ye bat vo papa ko aj guruji se milne ke bad batane vali thi vo kg ki taraf dekhane lagi.
Kg : hum jante hai putri tum kya soch rahi ho. Iske bad papa and dadaji mom ki taraf dekh kar punchha
Papa/Dadagi: kya such mai tum pregnant ho?
Ma ne sirf ha mai sar hilaya and papa ne mom ko baho mai barke nachane laga. Sabhi kush ho gaye lekin kg ke chahre pe khusi ke sath udasi bhi thi jise dadaji ne dekh liya
Dadaji : kya ap khush nahi hai guru dev?
Kg : mai khush hu lekin pareshan bhi hu kyuki tumare hi ghar ka koi tumare bade bahu bete ko marna chahta hai aur ye bat use pata hai ki 100 sal mai ap ke parivar mai do mayavi bacho ka janam lete hai aur vo chahata hai ki uska beta hi ghar ka mukhya bane jise vo raj kar sake
Mom: guruji iska koi upay? Kyuki mai apne bache ko bina janme marne nahi dena chahti.
Kg : upay to hai lekin ye apke pitaji(ma dadaji ki pitaji hi kahti thi ) aur tumare pati ke liye kathin hai.
Papa: ab jo bolo hum karne ko taiyar hai chahe kitniai ka samana karna pade.
Kg : thik hai. Papa se tum ek scientist ho na?
Papa: ha.
Kg : aisa Karo ki tum kahi aur chale jav ya phir desh chod do.
Dadaji: ye ap kya kah rahe he guruji ? Ap jante hai mai unko kitna pyar karta hu .
Kg : hum jante hai lekin ane vale bache ke balayi ke liye inko jana hoga aur inko apne maut ki juthi khabar phelani hogi jisse marne vale ko lagega ki ye mar gai hai.
Dadaji: par mera kya hoga? Kya muje mere pote ko dekhane ka sobhagya nahi milega?
Kg : milega na kintu apko intejar karna padega.
Papa : hum taiyar hai .
Lekin tabi dadaji ko kuch yad ata hai vo kg se puchate hai
Dadaji: lekin guruji usko sabhi purani vidhya aur shashtro ka gyan kon dega ?
Kg : apke pote ne apna guru khud Chun liya hai ab ye mat puchana va kaise .
Iske bad thodi bat chit ke bad kg ka ashirvad leke ghar ki taraf chal pade. Ghar akar sabako ye bataya ki ma- papa kal gumne ja rahe hai.
Agali subh jab sab uthe tab tak ma- papa ja choke the . Sab dining table pe khane ko bethe the and NEWS chali ki jis par ati khabar dekh ke sabki chikh nikal gai........