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UPDATE THODI DER MEIN.
Main Story Line credit gose to Madsnail
yeh puri tarah inspired story hai.
Yellow Realm
Initial Stage.
Mid Stage.
Advance Stage.
Dawn Stage.
Medium Stage.
Completion Stage.
Extra Realm-Ultimate Yellow Realm.
Yellow Realm mainly work on soul and foundation.
Black, Earth, Heaven, 9 Changes of body, Half-Saint, Saint, Saint King, Supreme Saint, True God Realms.
Initial Stage.
Middle Stage.
Advance Stage.
Dawn Stage.
Medium Stage.
Final Stage.
Completion Stage.
Extra- Ultimate Realm.
Update schedule
Monday
Wednesday
Friday
Time- 10-10:30
Main Story Line credit gose to Madsnail
yeh puri tarah inspired story hai.
Yellow Realm
Initial Stage.
Mid Stage.
Advance Stage.
Dawn Stage.
Medium Stage.
Completion Stage.
Extra Realm-Ultimate Yellow Realm.
Yellow Realm mainly work on soul and foundation.
Black, Earth, Heaven, 9 Changes of body, Half-Saint, Saint, Saint King, Supreme Saint, True God Realms.
Initial Stage.
Middle Stage.
Advance Stage.
Dawn Stage.
Medium Stage.
Final Stage.
Completion Stage.
Extra- Ultimate Realm.
Update schedule
Monday
Wednesday
Friday
Time- 10-10:30
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UPDATE 1
St.Ancenstral mountain range aur uske gehri ghatiyon ke bich se Suraj ki roshni waha fail rahi thi. Ghari ke hi baju mein Jo mountain the waha par abhi bhi barf jami hui thi.
Dekha jaye toh garmiyon ka season start ho gaya tha par yaha ki barf abhi pighalni baki thi. Yaha ka Thand ka season kuch lamba hi chalta hai. Bich bich mein kisi demon beasts ki dahaad bhi sunayi deti thi.
Ussi ghati ke mein ek shandar aur khubsurat city thi.
St.Ancenstral mountains ke bahar ki duniya par ab demon beast ka raaj hai. Is mountain range mein rehne wale logon ne kitne saalon se bahar ki duniya nahi dekhi hai.
Yaha ke city mein rehne wale log bahar ki duniya se anjaan hai. Kaha jata hai ke jab yaha insano ka raaj tha tab hazaro Legend rank fighters aur Demon spiritualist ne bohot se empires khade kiye the lekin vo sabhi khatam ho gaye.
Mountains ki bich chupi hone ke wajah se yeh city ab tak bachi Hui thi Age of Darkness se. Kabhi kabhi is city par snow wind beast se attacks hote the jo St.Ancenstral mountain range mein rehte the,lekin aise kitne attacks ke baad bhi yeh city har baar banayi jaati thi.
Is city ka naam tha Osian city aur yeh city is ilake ki aankhri hope thi humanity ki.
Holy Osian institute, Fighters apprentice class.
30 students yaha baithe hai aur apne Female teacher ke lectures start karne ka wait kar rahe hai. Yeh students fighter apprentice the.
Tabhi kisine class mein kuch baat kahi.
"Mein ne suna hai hamari teacher shital sacred family se belong karti hai aur vo 3-star silver rank demon spiritualist hai!"
Yeh sunne ke baad kuch students apne aap mein kuch disscus karne lage.
Tabhi sabhi students ka dhyan teacher par gaya. Uska figure tall tha aur usne ek lavender colour ka dress pehna tha jo uske body ko kafi tightly fit ho raha tha jise uske sabhi curve dikh rahe the. Usne apne face par makeup bhi kiya hua tha. Uski aankho mein garv aur ahankaar bhara hua tha. Osian city mein sacred family teen bade families mein se ek thi. Kyo ki vo birth se Nobel thi aur 3-star silver rank demon spiritualist bhi toh uske nature mein yeh garv hona natural tha.
As a 3-star silver rank demon spiritualist vo kabhi bhi yaha nahi aati seekhane. Vo is baat par raazi hui ke uska bhatija yaha seekh raha tha.
Usne sabhi ki taraf dekha aur apna lecture start kiya.
Shital- Demon spiritualist aur Fighters mein five different ranks hote hai jaise "Bronze, Silver, Gold ,Black Gold aur Legend rank. Har ek rank apne aap mein five levels mein divided hoti hai jo 1-star se 5-star hoti hai."
Ek demon spiritualist fighter se upar hota hai. Dekha jaye toh ham ek nobel existance hai. Ek demon spiritualist apne ander ek soul realm bana sakta hai. Unke paas ek ability hoti hai jiske help se vo capture kiye hue demon spirit ke saath merge ho sakte hai aur fight ke waqt uska use kar sakte hai. Isse unhe matchless strength milti hai jo kisi bhi fighter ke bohot upar hai.
Shital ne apne sir ko upar kiya aur ahankaar mein kaha.
Shital- Jaise ki meri taraf, mera demon Scarlet Falme Fox hai.
Tabhi Shital mein suddenly changes aane lage, uska facial shape sharper ho gaya wahi uske teeth aur nails bhi sharper ho gaye. Finally ek scarlet tail uske piche se nikali.
Shital ne aage kaha.
Shital- Jaise hi mein mere demon ke saath merge hoti hu toh uske strength meri control mein aati hai aur uske fire-type abilities par bhi. Demons ke bich Scarlet Falme Fox ek Gold rank demon beast hai. Jiska matlab hai meri highest rank Gold rank demon spiritualist tak hai. Of course jab mein Gold rank demon spiritualist banane ke baad mein isse kisi aur powerful demon se replace kar sakti hu.
Jab bhi Shital le cultivation ki baat aati toh uske face par garv aur bhi badh jata.
Shital ki baaton ne kuch students ko kafi amez kar diya. Gold rank demon spiritualist banna unke liye ek sapne jaisa tha.
Shital ne apna lecture aage continue kiya wahi Kabir piche ek row mein baitha hua tha. Uska mind ek trance mein tha aur uski soul kahi float kar rahi thi.
Thodi der baad Kabir apni aankhe kholta hai. Uske samne jo chal raha tha usse vo thoda confuse tha.
Kabir-Mein kaha hu?.
Kabir ko ek bohot hi bada shock laga kyo ki uske haath chote ho gaye the. Uski skin bhi kafi tender ho gayi thi.
Shital aage stage par khadi ho kar sabhi ko non-stop lecture de rahi thi. Kabir ko achhe se yaad tha ke uske yeh institute kab join Kiya tha. Uske samne jo teacher hai vo ek 3-star silver rank demon spiritualist hai aur bohot hi ahankaari hai. Kyo ki Kabir ko uske marzi ke khilaf usse sikhna pada tha.
"Mein phir se reborn hua hu?"
Kabir abhi bhi shock mein tha. Usse achhe se yaad tha ke vo Sage Emperor aur uske six Deity rank beast se ghira hua tha aur un sabhi ke saath battle karte hue vo mara gaya tha. Aisa lag raha tha ke uski soul time mein piche aa gayi hai jab vo 18 saal ka tha.
Kabir apne side mein dekhta hai aur usse kuch jaane pehchane face dikhte hai jo the Ravi aur Varun. In dono ne Kabir ke saath Life aur death tak safar kiya hai, expect unki apperance kafi immature thi.
Tabhi Kabir apne left side mein dekhta hai. Usse kuch duri par ek bohot hi khubsurat face usse dikha hai. Uska naam tha Rati. Dekha jaaye toh vo abhi 18-19 saal ki thi par vo abhi se hi bohot khubsurat dikh rahi thi aur uske saath uske purple colour ke hairs jo uske kamar tak aate the. Vo abhi samne dekh rahi thi wahi uske aankho mein hoshiyaar hone ki chamak dekhi jaa sakti thi. Jab bhi vo ami karti thi tab uske gaalo mei ek dimple padta tha jo uske face ko aur bhi khubsurat banta tha.
Abhi ke liye vo thodi childish dikh rahi thi lekin Kabir janta tha ke jab vo aur thodi badi ho jayegi toh isse bhi jyada khubsurat aur karamati ho jayegi. Rati ne abhi ek silk dress pehna tha jo uski khubsurati ko chaat chand laga raha tha. Kabir ke pichle life mein Rati ke liye uske dil mein kafi deep feelings thi.
"Vo abhi bhi zinda hai".
Kabir is kadar khush hua tha ke vo almost chikne hi wala tha.
Kabir-Mein time mein piche aa gaya hu, kya yeh sach hai?kahi yeh koi dream toh nahi?.
Kabir yeh apne aap se puch raha tha aur uske saathi apne aap ko pinch bhi kar raha tha. Hone wale pain ke wajah se usse pata chal gaya ke yeh dream nahi hai. Tabhi usse kuch yaad aata hai.
Kabir-Divine Demon spirit Book. Yeh zaroor Divine Demon spirit Book ki wajah se hua hai.
Kabir jhat se niche dekhta hai aur apne kapdon mein usse dhundne lagta hai par usse Divine Demon spirit Book nahi milti.
Kabir ko abhi bhi thik se vishvas nahi ho raha tha uske rebirth ka, aisi mysterious ghatna uske saath hui, lekin yeh us mysterious Divine Demon Spirit Book se related nahi tha.
Us Divine Demon Spirit Book ka creator koun tha vo kabhi bhi pata nahi chal saka tha. Vo bohot hi mysterious book thi ke Kabir ne usse hamesha apne paas hi rakha tha. Usse achhe se yaad tha ke jab vo Sage Emperor aur uske six Deity rank Demon beasts se fight kar raha tha tab vo bohot hi ghayal ho gaya tha aur uske blood se vo book puri bhig gayi thi. Yeh zaroor Divine Demon Spirit Book ke wajah se hi hua hai us Book ke wajah se hi vo phir se wapas aa paya hai apne 18 saal ke age mein.
Kuch der baad sabhi jaane pehchane faces dekh kar Kabir ek gehri yaad mein kho gaya.
Kabir ko yaad tha ke jab Osian city par Snow wind beasts ne attack Kiya tha aur is city ke guardian Lord Uday, jo legend rank demon spiritualist the vo sabhi ko bachate hue mare gaye the aur uske saath aur bohot se log un beasts se fight karte waqt mare gaye the. Kuch thousands log hi bach paaye the aur vo sabhi desert ki taraf chale gaye jo St.Ancenstral mountains range ke east side mein tha. Us escape mein ek ke baad ek log maare jaa rahe the us desert mein. Eki din us sabhi ko us desert mein kuch beasts ne gher liya lekin us attack mein bhi kuch hi bach paaye. Issi bich us waqt Kabir aur Rati ek dusre ke bohot hi paas aa gaye the aur us raat vo dono hi ek ho gaye the.
Us raat Kabir ne Rati se is kadar pyaar kiya ke usne usse apne sirf Dil mein hi nahi balki usse apne soul mein utar diya.
Us chandani raat mein us chandani ne unpar ek ghungat sa odh diya tha. Rati ka vo jism aur uski vo crystal clear skin aisi lag rahi thi ke Swarg se koi apsraa hi niche utar aayi ho. Dono hi ek dusre ke pyaar us raat doob se gaye the.
Agar Osian city destroy na hui hoti aur waqt rehte vo waha se escape na hue hote toh shayd hi vo dono ek dusre ke saath aise waqt bita paate. Us waqt Kabir kafi low talented tha aur kafi poor family se vo belong karta tha.
Us raat ke baad ek aur attack hua un par us desert me lekin Kabir ko bachane ke liye Rati bich mein aa gayi.
kabir shayad hi kabhi yeh moment bhula paya hoga.
Uske baad jaan janewale attack se bachte hue Kabir us Endless desert se bahar aaya.
Dekha jaye toh us waqt Kabir ka talent kafi low tha lekin uske survival instinct ke wajah se usne sabhi Divine continent mein Saraf kiya.Vo aise bohot se logo se mila jo aise hi beasts se fight karte the. Usse aisi bohot si cheeze mili jo kafi mysterious thi aur unmein hi vo Divine Demon Spirit Book bhi thi agar vo na hoti toh shayd vo kabhi wapas nahi aa pata.
Us mysterious Divine Demon Spirit Book ne usse wapas laya tha.
Vo Osian city ke destruction se pehle aaya tha. Uske Family,Friends jo us fight mein mare gaye the aur saath hi Rati ke death se pehle hi aaya tha.
"Ab mein wapas aa gaya hu. Uparwale ne mujhe ek aur chance diya hai. Ab mein Osian city ko destroy nahi hone dunga.!"
Kabir ne yeh keh kar ek gehri saans li aur apne teeth bhich diye. Usne ab yeh decision le liya tha.
Tabhi usse yaad aata hai ke vo abhi abhi institute mein aaya hai aur is waqt vo 18 saal ka hai.
Kabir zor se hasna chahta tha, Mai wapas aa gaya hu.
Sage emperor ab jab ham milenge tab mai tumhe khatam kar dunga aur mere pichle life ka badla lekar rahunga.
Agar Osian city destroy na hui hoti toh vo aur Rati agal agal duniya mein hote. Vo kabhi bhi ek dusre ke karib nahi aa paate. Rati Osian city ke city lord ki beti thi aur uske dadaji the is city ke legen rank demon spiritualist Uday. Kabir ek powerless aur girti hui family se tha. Jab dono us waqt bbhaag rahe the aur ek dusre ko sahara de rahe the uski wajah se u dono mein ek dusre ke liye vo feelings aayi thi.
Jab Rati is institute mein aayi thi tab uski identity kisi ko bhi malum nahi thi par Kabir ko kuch waqt ke baad pata chal gayi thi.
Osian city mein 3 badi families thi. The Divine Family, The Sacred Family aur The Snow Wind Family. Yeh 3no families Osian city ki supreme powers ko represent karti thi sabse badi Nobel Families thi yeh. The City Lord ko inhi 3 major families mein se kisi ek ko chuna jata tha.3 major families ke baad 7 nobel families aati thi aur unke baad 12 Aristocratic families aati thi.
Kabir Heavenly Mark Family se belong karta tha. Jo sabse last mein thi Aristocratic families list mein. Dekha jaye toh unka status kafi chota tha lekin ek astronomical diffrence tha unke aur 3 major families aur 7 nobel families ke bich.
Kabir aur Rati ka agar background dekha jaye toh unka milna simply impossible tha.
Par ab uske aankhon mein ek dridhta chamak gayi, ab jab vo reborn huabhai uske liye yeh baat ab koi badi baat nahi rahi thi. Jabki uski foundation abhi bhi poor thi par uske pichle life mein usse mile vast knowledge ke hepl se vo ab apne aap ko improve kar sakta hai yeh uske liye imposible nahi tha.
Kabir tum aise kyu has rahe ho?
Yeh sawal Ravi ne pucha tha jo usse kab se dekhe jaa raha tha. Usse laga ke Kabir kahi crazy toh nahi hua. Kab se vo akele mein hi kuch baate kiye jaa raha hai aur kab se Rati ko bhi ghoore jaa raha tha.
Kabir-Kuch nahi bas mein kush hu tumhe dekh kar.
Yeh keh kar usne Ravi ko zor se gale laga liya. Yeh uske pichle life ki aadate thi.
Suddenly zor se gale lagane ke kaaran Ravi usse thode gusse se kehta hai.
Ravi-Kabir chodo mujhe mai tumhari tarah ladko mein interest nahi leta hu.
Ravi Kabir se chutne ke liye struggle kar raha tha. Unhone just school start kiya tha. Kuch hi din hue the unhe aapas mein mile hue. Vo abhi bhi utne close friends nahi bane the.
Kabir ne apni giraft loose nahi ki aur usse dekhte hue serious ho kar kaha.
Kabir-Tum mere baremein kuch bhi socho lekin mere dil mein tum mere sabse achhe friends mein se hi rahoge.
Naturally Kabir Ravi ko uske life and death tak ke adventure bko bata nahi sakta tha.
Ravi ne Kabir ko dekh kar usse paagal kaha.
Lekin abhi jo baat Kabir ne kahi vo uske dil ko chu gayi thi.
Ravi Kabir ko dekhta hai aur kehta hai.
Ravi-Mujhe pata hai tum bhi Osian city ke nobility mein se ek ho par mein tumhe warn karta hu us ladki ko lekar kuch bhi mat lana apne dimaag mein. Uski identity bohot hi mysterious hai. Mai ne suna hai ke usne jab institute join Kiya tha tab principal khud aaye the uski class dikhane.
Kabir uski yeh baat sunkar ek smile paas karta hai,kyo ki Ravi abhi tak Rati ki identity anhi janta tha lekin vo janta tha ke vo koun hai.
“Vo sirf meri hai” Kabir ne yeh baat us ladki ko dekhte hue declared kar di thi jo usse bas thodi hi dur baithi thi. Kabir ka dil zor se dhadak raha tha jab usse us raat wala manzar yaad aaya. Kabir ke aankho mein abhi bhi uske liye wahi pyaar tha jo uske pichle life mein hua karta tha.
Kabir ko suddenly yaad aata hai ke vo aur Rati abhi bhi 18 saal ke hai.
Kabir apne soch mein goom hue Rati ko bas dekhe hi jaa raha tha.
Rati kab tum badi hovogi. Mai tumhe aur is Osian city ko protect karunga aur ham dono ek saath rahenge.
Jyada dur nahi par Rati kuch feel karti hai. Usne apne sir ko ghumaya aur Kabir ki taraf dekha. Usne apne eye brows ko uthaya aur socha ke Kabir ek playful nobel hai. Jab se class start hui hai tab se hi vo usse dekhe jaa raha hai. Agar usne uske saath kuch ulti harkat karne ki koshish ki toh vo usse easily nahi chodegi.
Rati ko apna status nahi use karna tha friends banane ke liye par iska matlab yeh nahi tha ke vo apna humiliation hone degi.
St.Ancenstral mountain range aur uske gehri ghatiyon ke bich se Suraj ki roshni waha fail rahi thi. Ghari ke hi baju mein Jo mountain the waha par abhi bhi barf jami hui thi.
Dekha jaye toh garmiyon ka season start ho gaya tha par yaha ki barf abhi pighalni baki thi. Yaha ka Thand ka season kuch lamba hi chalta hai. Bich bich mein kisi demon beasts ki dahaad bhi sunayi deti thi.
Ussi ghati ke mein ek shandar aur khubsurat city thi.
St.Ancenstral mountains ke bahar ki duniya par ab demon beast ka raaj hai. Is mountain range mein rehne wale logon ne kitne saalon se bahar ki duniya nahi dekhi hai.
Yaha ke city mein rehne wale log bahar ki duniya se anjaan hai. Kaha jata hai ke jab yaha insano ka raaj tha tab hazaro Legend rank fighters aur Demon spiritualist ne bohot se empires khade kiye the lekin vo sabhi khatam ho gaye.
Mountains ki bich chupi hone ke wajah se yeh city ab tak bachi Hui thi Age of Darkness se. Kabhi kabhi is city par snow wind beast se attacks hote the jo St.Ancenstral mountain range mein rehte the,lekin aise kitne attacks ke baad bhi yeh city har baar banayi jaati thi.
Is city ka naam tha Osian city aur yeh city is ilake ki aankhri hope thi humanity ki.
Holy Osian institute, Fighters apprentice class.
30 students yaha baithe hai aur apne Female teacher ke lectures start karne ka wait kar rahe hai. Yeh students fighter apprentice the.
Tabhi kisine class mein kuch baat kahi.
"Mein ne suna hai hamari teacher shital sacred family se belong karti hai aur vo 3-star silver rank demon spiritualist hai!"
Yeh sunne ke baad kuch students apne aap mein kuch disscus karne lage.
Tabhi sabhi students ka dhyan teacher par gaya. Uska figure tall tha aur usne ek lavender colour ka dress pehna tha jo uske body ko kafi tightly fit ho raha tha jise uske sabhi curve dikh rahe the. Usne apne face par makeup bhi kiya hua tha. Uski aankho mein garv aur ahankaar bhara hua tha. Osian city mein sacred family teen bade families mein se ek thi. Kyo ki vo birth se Nobel thi aur 3-star silver rank demon spiritualist bhi toh uske nature mein yeh garv hona natural tha.
As a 3-star silver rank demon spiritualist vo kabhi bhi yaha nahi aati seekhane. Vo is baat par raazi hui ke uska bhatija yaha seekh raha tha.
Usne sabhi ki taraf dekha aur apna lecture start kiya.
Shital- Demon spiritualist aur Fighters mein five different ranks hote hai jaise "Bronze, Silver, Gold ,Black Gold aur Legend rank. Har ek rank apne aap mein five levels mein divided hoti hai jo 1-star se 5-star hoti hai."
Ek demon spiritualist fighter se upar hota hai. Dekha jaye toh ham ek nobel existance hai. Ek demon spiritualist apne ander ek soul realm bana sakta hai. Unke paas ek ability hoti hai jiske help se vo capture kiye hue demon spirit ke saath merge ho sakte hai aur fight ke waqt uska use kar sakte hai. Isse unhe matchless strength milti hai jo kisi bhi fighter ke bohot upar hai.
Shital ne apne sir ko upar kiya aur ahankaar mein kaha.
Shital- Jaise ki meri taraf, mera demon Scarlet Falme Fox hai.
Tabhi Shital mein suddenly changes aane lage, uska facial shape sharper ho gaya wahi uske teeth aur nails bhi sharper ho gaye. Finally ek scarlet tail uske piche se nikali.
Shital ne aage kaha.
Shital- Jaise hi mein mere demon ke saath merge hoti hu toh uske strength meri control mein aati hai aur uske fire-type abilities par bhi. Demons ke bich Scarlet Falme Fox ek Gold rank demon beast hai. Jiska matlab hai meri highest rank Gold rank demon spiritualist tak hai. Of course jab mein Gold rank demon spiritualist banane ke baad mein isse kisi aur powerful demon se replace kar sakti hu.
Jab bhi Shital le cultivation ki baat aati toh uske face par garv aur bhi badh jata.
Shital ki baaton ne kuch students ko kafi amez kar diya. Gold rank demon spiritualist banna unke liye ek sapne jaisa tha.
Shital ne apna lecture aage continue kiya wahi Kabir piche ek row mein baitha hua tha. Uska mind ek trance mein tha aur uski soul kahi float kar rahi thi.
Thodi der baad Kabir apni aankhe kholta hai. Uske samne jo chal raha tha usse vo thoda confuse tha.
Kabir-Mein kaha hu?.
Kabir ko ek bohot hi bada shock laga kyo ki uske haath chote ho gaye the. Uski skin bhi kafi tender ho gayi thi.
Shital aage stage par khadi ho kar sabhi ko non-stop lecture de rahi thi. Kabir ko achhe se yaad tha ke uske yeh institute kab join Kiya tha. Uske samne jo teacher hai vo ek 3-star silver rank demon spiritualist hai aur bohot hi ahankaari hai. Kyo ki Kabir ko uske marzi ke khilaf usse sikhna pada tha.
"Mein phir se reborn hua hu?"
Kabir abhi bhi shock mein tha. Usse achhe se yaad tha ke vo Sage Emperor aur uske six Deity rank beast se ghira hua tha aur un sabhi ke saath battle karte hue vo mara gaya tha. Aisa lag raha tha ke uski soul time mein piche aa gayi hai jab vo 18 saal ka tha.
Kabir apne side mein dekhta hai aur usse kuch jaane pehchane face dikhte hai jo the Ravi aur Varun. In dono ne Kabir ke saath Life aur death tak safar kiya hai, expect unki apperance kafi immature thi.
Tabhi Kabir apne left side mein dekhta hai. Usse kuch duri par ek bohot hi khubsurat face usse dikha hai. Uska naam tha Rati. Dekha jaaye toh vo abhi 18-19 saal ki thi par vo abhi se hi bohot khubsurat dikh rahi thi aur uske saath uske purple colour ke hairs jo uske kamar tak aate the. Vo abhi samne dekh rahi thi wahi uske aankho mein hoshiyaar hone ki chamak dekhi jaa sakti thi. Jab bhi vo ami karti thi tab uske gaalo mei ek dimple padta tha jo uske face ko aur bhi khubsurat banta tha.
Abhi ke liye vo thodi childish dikh rahi thi lekin Kabir janta tha ke jab vo aur thodi badi ho jayegi toh isse bhi jyada khubsurat aur karamati ho jayegi. Rati ne abhi ek silk dress pehna tha jo uski khubsurati ko chaat chand laga raha tha. Kabir ke pichle life mein Rati ke liye uske dil mein kafi deep feelings thi.
"Vo abhi bhi zinda hai".
Kabir is kadar khush hua tha ke vo almost chikne hi wala tha.
Kabir-Mein time mein piche aa gaya hu, kya yeh sach hai?kahi yeh koi dream toh nahi?.
Kabir yeh apne aap se puch raha tha aur uske saathi apne aap ko pinch bhi kar raha tha. Hone wale pain ke wajah se usse pata chal gaya ke yeh dream nahi hai. Tabhi usse kuch yaad aata hai.
Kabir-Divine Demon spirit Book. Yeh zaroor Divine Demon spirit Book ki wajah se hua hai.
Kabir jhat se niche dekhta hai aur apne kapdon mein usse dhundne lagta hai par usse Divine Demon spirit Book nahi milti.
Kabir ko abhi bhi thik se vishvas nahi ho raha tha uske rebirth ka, aisi mysterious ghatna uske saath hui, lekin yeh us mysterious Divine Demon Spirit Book se related nahi tha.
Us Divine Demon Spirit Book ka creator koun tha vo kabhi bhi pata nahi chal saka tha. Vo bohot hi mysterious book thi ke Kabir ne usse hamesha apne paas hi rakha tha. Usse achhe se yaad tha ke jab vo Sage Emperor aur uske six Deity rank Demon beasts se fight kar raha tha tab vo bohot hi ghayal ho gaya tha aur uske blood se vo book puri bhig gayi thi. Yeh zaroor Divine Demon Spirit Book ke wajah se hi hua hai us Book ke wajah se hi vo phir se wapas aa paya hai apne 18 saal ke age mein.
Kuch der baad sabhi jaane pehchane faces dekh kar Kabir ek gehri yaad mein kho gaya.
Kabir ko yaad tha ke jab Osian city par Snow wind beasts ne attack Kiya tha aur is city ke guardian Lord Uday, jo legend rank demon spiritualist the vo sabhi ko bachate hue mare gaye the aur uske saath aur bohot se log un beasts se fight karte waqt mare gaye the. Kuch thousands log hi bach paaye the aur vo sabhi desert ki taraf chale gaye jo St.Ancenstral mountains range ke east side mein tha. Us escape mein ek ke baad ek log maare jaa rahe the us desert mein. Eki din us sabhi ko us desert mein kuch beasts ne gher liya lekin us attack mein bhi kuch hi bach paaye. Issi bich us waqt Kabir aur Rati ek dusre ke bohot hi paas aa gaye the aur us raat vo dono hi ek ho gaye the.
Us raat Kabir ne Rati se is kadar pyaar kiya ke usne usse apne sirf Dil mein hi nahi balki usse apne soul mein utar diya.
Us chandani raat mein us chandani ne unpar ek ghungat sa odh diya tha. Rati ka vo jism aur uski vo crystal clear skin aisi lag rahi thi ke Swarg se koi apsraa hi niche utar aayi ho. Dono hi ek dusre ke pyaar us raat doob se gaye the.
Agar Osian city destroy na hui hoti aur waqt rehte vo waha se escape na hue hote toh shayd hi vo dono ek dusre ke saath aise waqt bita paate. Us waqt Kabir kafi low talented tha aur kafi poor family se vo belong karta tha.
Us raat ke baad ek aur attack hua un par us desert me lekin Kabir ko bachane ke liye Rati bich mein aa gayi.
kabir shayad hi kabhi yeh moment bhula paya hoga.
Uske baad jaan janewale attack se bachte hue Kabir us Endless desert se bahar aaya.
Dekha jaye toh us waqt Kabir ka talent kafi low tha lekin uske survival instinct ke wajah se usne sabhi Divine continent mein Saraf kiya.Vo aise bohot se logo se mila jo aise hi beasts se fight karte the. Usse aisi bohot si cheeze mili jo kafi mysterious thi aur unmein hi vo Divine Demon Spirit Book bhi thi agar vo na hoti toh shayd vo kabhi wapas nahi aa pata.
Us mysterious Divine Demon Spirit Book ne usse wapas laya tha.
Vo Osian city ke destruction se pehle aaya tha. Uske Family,Friends jo us fight mein mare gaye the aur saath hi Rati ke death se pehle hi aaya tha.
"Ab mein wapas aa gaya hu. Uparwale ne mujhe ek aur chance diya hai. Ab mein Osian city ko destroy nahi hone dunga.!"
Kabir ne yeh keh kar ek gehri saans li aur apne teeth bhich diye. Usne ab yeh decision le liya tha.
Tabhi usse yaad aata hai ke vo abhi abhi institute mein aaya hai aur is waqt vo 18 saal ka hai.
Kabir zor se hasna chahta tha, Mai wapas aa gaya hu.
Sage emperor ab jab ham milenge tab mai tumhe khatam kar dunga aur mere pichle life ka badla lekar rahunga.
Agar Osian city destroy na hui hoti toh vo aur Rati agal agal duniya mein hote. Vo kabhi bhi ek dusre ke karib nahi aa paate. Rati Osian city ke city lord ki beti thi aur uske dadaji the is city ke legen rank demon spiritualist Uday. Kabir ek powerless aur girti hui family se tha. Jab dono us waqt bbhaag rahe the aur ek dusre ko sahara de rahe the uski wajah se u dono mein ek dusre ke liye vo feelings aayi thi.
Jab Rati is institute mein aayi thi tab uski identity kisi ko bhi malum nahi thi par Kabir ko kuch waqt ke baad pata chal gayi thi.
Osian city mein 3 badi families thi. The Divine Family, The Sacred Family aur The Snow Wind Family. Yeh 3no families Osian city ki supreme powers ko represent karti thi sabse badi Nobel Families thi yeh. The City Lord ko inhi 3 major families mein se kisi ek ko chuna jata tha.3 major families ke baad 7 nobel families aati thi aur unke baad 12 Aristocratic families aati thi.
Kabir Heavenly Mark Family se belong karta tha. Jo sabse last mein thi Aristocratic families list mein. Dekha jaye toh unka status kafi chota tha lekin ek astronomical diffrence tha unke aur 3 major families aur 7 nobel families ke bich.
Kabir aur Rati ka agar background dekha jaye toh unka milna simply impossible tha.
Par ab uske aankhon mein ek dridhta chamak gayi, ab jab vo reborn huabhai uske liye yeh baat ab koi badi baat nahi rahi thi. Jabki uski foundation abhi bhi poor thi par uske pichle life mein usse mile vast knowledge ke hepl se vo ab apne aap ko improve kar sakta hai yeh uske liye imposible nahi tha.
Kabir tum aise kyu has rahe ho?
Yeh sawal Ravi ne pucha tha jo usse kab se dekhe jaa raha tha. Usse laga ke Kabir kahi crazy toh nahi hua. Kab se vo akele mein hi kuch baate kiye jaa raha hai aur kab se Rati ko bhi ghoore jaa raha tha.
Kabir-Kuch nahi bas mein kush hu tumhe dekh kar.
Yeh keh kar usne Ravi ko zor se gale laga liya. Yeh uske pichle life ki aadate thi.
Suddenly zor se gale lagane ke kaaran Ravi usse thode gusse se kehta hai.
Ravi-Kabir chodo mujhe mai tumhari tarah ladko mein interest nahi leta hu.
Ravi Kabir se chutne ke liye struggle kar raha tha. Unhone just school start kiya tha. Kuch hi din hue the unhe aapas mein mile hue. Vo abhi bhi utne close friends nahi bane the.
Kabir ne apni giraft loose nahi ki aur usse dekhte hue serious ho kar kaha.
Kabir-Tum mere baremein kuch bhi socho lekin mere dil mein tum mere sabse achhe friends mein se hi rahoge.
Naturally Kabir Ravi ko uske life and death tak ke adventure bko bata nahi sakta tha.
Ravi ne Kabir ko dekh kar usse paagal kaha.
Lekin abhi jo baat Kabir ne kahi vo uske dil ko chu gayi thi.
Ravi Kabir ko dekhta hai aur kehta hai.
Ravi-Mujhe pata hai tum bhi Osian city ke nobility mein se ek ho par mein tumhe warn karta hu us ladki ko lekar kuch bhi mat lana apne dimaag mein. Uski identity bohot hi mysterious hai. Mai ne suna hai ke usne jab institute join Kiya tha tab principal khud aaye the uski class dikhane.
Kabir uski yeh baat sunkar ek smile paas karta hai,kyo ki Ravi abhi tak Rati ki identity anhi janta tha lekin vo janta tha ke vo koun hai.
“Vo sirf meri hai” Kabir ne yeh baat us ladki ko dekhte hue declared kar di thi jo usse bas thodi hi dur baithi thi. Kabir ka dil zor se dhadak raha tha jab usse us raat wala manzar yaad aaya. Kabir ke aankho mein abhi bhi uske liye wahi pyaar tha jo uske pichle life mein hua karta tha.
Kabir ko suddenly yaad aata hai ke vo aur Rati abhi bhi 18 saal ke hai.
Kabir apne soch mein goom hue Rati ko bas dekhe hi jaa raha tha.
Rati kab tum badi hovogi. Mai tumhe aur is Osian city ko protect karunga aur ham dono ek saath rahenge.
Jyada dur nahi par Rati kuch feel karti hai. Usne apne sir ko ghumaya aur Kabir ki taraf dekha. Usne apne eye brows ko uthaya aur socha ke Kabir ek playful nobel hai. Jab se class start hui hai tab se hi vo usse dekhe jaa raha hai. Agar usne uske saath kuch ulti harkat karne ki koshish ki toh vo usse easily nahi chodegi.
Rati ko apna status nahi use karna tha friends banane ke liye par iska matlab yeh nahi tha ke vo apna humiliation hone degi.
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for new story bahiAm so happy k ek new story Dy Rahe ho hamain
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Nice very good plot bahi
Interesting lag rahi h Abhi se
Agy to dhmal ho ga
Interesting lag rahi h Abhi se
Agy to dhmal ho ga
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Congratulations for new story
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
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Hmm start kafi acha ha dost hero mar ka zinda hoa ha or bacha ban gya ha concept kafi acha ha keep it up
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