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Bhai
yaha sham ki jagah raat ho gyi hai update kab aayga
aur raat ko aayga to kab aayga
mitron
aap logo ka khyal hai
desh ki janta ye puch rahi hai
Kya hua
Zabardast yar hero ki powers ki bhi apni shape ha magar ya update chota aik choti si fight bta kar.......
Very nice, fantastic, awesome, fabulous amazing update ..............
keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update ..............
Amazing brilliant update
Nice update
Gajab update tha bhai lekin jaise ki main Hamesha Kahta hun Kafi Chhota update tha aapko Apne update ko regular ke sath mein thoda Bada bhi karne ki jarurat hai Baki aapki story bahut behtarin Hai Ek Bar aapko FIR itni acchi story likhane ke liye Meri shubhkamnaen
yahich mangta hai appun
kya bolti public
mai bhi sahmat hu
awseome Bhai Keep it up
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
THANKS GUYS ?.Very nice update bhai
Intejaar rahega 2nd phase Ka and waiting for next update ?THANKS GUYS ?.
ZAROOR JAB YEH STORY AONE 2ND PAHSE MEIN HOGI TAB ISKE UPDATES BADE HO JAAYENGE.
Awesome update ?
Finally kuch magic dikhaya sabke samne
Super update
Keep posting
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Jabardasttt updates bhai
Jabarjast shandaar update bhai waiting for next update
Nice update
Congratulations for ? pages
Awesome fabulous update bhai
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
जियो मेरे सचिन तेंदुलकर शानदार शतक के लिए बधाई
Awesome update's
congras for comp 100 Page's
Superb update bhai
THANKS GUYS ?.Very nice update dear.welldone for your new journey.
Fantastic update bhaiUPDATE 23
Hina aur Chiman mein behes ab thodi badh rahi thi.
Tabhi Hina kuch aisa bol deti hai jisse Chiman ke pride ko thes pohoch jaati hai.
Hina-Waise ek baat toh hai. Tumahara talent itna bhi khas nahi hai. Tum ab 20 years ke ho aur abhi bhi 3-star bronze rank par hi ho. Phri bhi tum dusro par has rahe ho.
Chiman-Toh kya hua mere pass yellow soul sea realm hai. Agar mein thoda aur practice karu toh silver rank tak pohoch sakta hu.
Wahi yeh jiski tum baat kar rahi ho kitna bhi practice karle apne life mein kabhi kabhi bronze rank me aage nahi jaa sakta hai. Yeh apni puri life kisi ka guard banne mein hi bita dega.
Yaha Kabir kab se uski baate sunta jaa raha tha par usne abhi tak kuch kaha nahi tha.
Isse dekh kar Chiman sochne lagta hai.
Chiman-Yeh banda kab se Shan khada hai lagta hai mujhse dar gaya hai.
Tabhi waha Kabir ki aawaz aati hai.
Kabir-Agar aisi baat hai toh mein tumhe ek round ke liye challenge karta hu. Jo bhi haar jaayega vo Dog bankar 3 round lagayega. Kya kehte ho tum.
Yeh baat kabir ne Chiman ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kahi thi. Lekin Jan kabir ne uske kandhe par haat rakha tha tab usse kuch ajeeb sa feel hua. Usse aisa lag raha tha ke uske kandhe par haath nahi balki koi mountain rakh diya ho.
Yaha Rati Kabir ko thoda side mein le jaati hai aur kehti hai.
Rati-Kabir tumhe itna inplusiy hone ki zaroorat nahi hai.
Kabir apna haath uske kandhe par se hata deta hai toh Chiman bhi palat kar kehta hai.
Chiman-yeh mein kya sun raha hu. Ek bachha jo abhi tak 1-star bronze rank tak bhin nahi pohocha hai vo mujhe challenge kar raha hai.
Mein apne soul force ko bhi nahi use karunga na phir bhi apne physical strength se hi tumhe hara dunga.
Mein khud tumhe ek chance deta hu apne aap Dog ban jaao aur 3 round laga do.
Kabir-Ho gaya tumhara. Agar har baar koi naya aata raha aur aise hi mera time waste karta raha toh mujhe kafi problem ho sakti hai toh mein aaj ek hi baar mein isse khatam kar dena chahta hu.
Waise bhi tumhe lagta hai tum kisi ko bhi offend kar sakte ho toh aaj mein tumhe ek lesson sikhaunga jisse tumhe pata chal jayega ke kabhi kabhi kisi ko offend nahi karna chahiye.
Kabir ke is baat se Chiman thoda gussa ho jata hai.
Wahi unke yeh challenge wali baat Jeet tak pohoch jaati hai.
Jeet-Challenge? Lagta hai kabir ke paas koi aisa tarika hoga ke vo Chiman ko bhi hara sakta hai. Par kabir ko dekh kar nahi lagta ke vo Rash person hai. Sabhi side hat jaao.
Jeet ke aawaz se sabhi side hat jaate hai ab waha ek ring sa ban gaya tha.
Waha khade sabhi log apne mein hi discussion karne lag gaye the.
Rati-Kabir par….
Kabir Rati ki baat ko bich mein hi rok deta hai.
Kabir-Don't worry Rati. Agar mein in jaiso ko handle nahi kar paya toh mein future mein tumhe kaise protect karunga.
Uski iss baat se Rati blush karne lag jaati hai. Wahi yaha Aarav sochne lag jaata hai.
Aarav-Mein ne Chiman se pehle bhi baat ki hai. Agar usse chance diya jaaye toh vo Kabir ko kafi achhe se sabak sikha sakta hai.
Yaha kabir ab apne aankhe band kar ke khada tha. Vo apne soul force ko halka sa release karta hai.
Dekha jaaye toh yeh kafi halka hi tha par ismein kafi strength thi. Wahi Chiman ne apne left haath ko piche rakh diya aur apne right haat se kabir ko ishara karne laga.
Chiman-Mein tumhe 3 chances deta hu mujhe hit karne ke. Agar mein ne aisa nahi kiya toh sabhi mujhe BULLY kahenge.
Yaha par Kabir ne bhi apni aankhe khol di thi.uski aankhe halki halki chamak rahi thi par vo chamak bohot hi kam thi. Agar pure focus se dekhe tabhi pata chal sakta tha ke vo aankeh chamak rahi hai.
Chiman ki baat sunkar Kabir halka sa smile karta hai aur apne jagah se gayab ho jata hai aur sidha Chiman ke samne aa jata hai.
Yeh itna jaldi hua ke Chiman toh kya kisi ko bhi yeh nahi samjh aaya ke Kabir apne jagah se move kab hua aur Chiman ke samne kab aaya.
Yah Kabir ko apne paas dekh kar Chiman thoda shock ho gaya wahi kabir ne apne right elbow se Chiman par attack kiya jise dekh kar has gaya.
Chiman-Yeh toh bachho wala punch hai.
Yeh kehte hue vo side mein ho gaya.
Wahi ab sabhi Kabir ko dekh rahe the ke vo aage kya karta hai.
Yaha Chiman side hua wahi kabir ne apne haat ko khol diya aur ek ulta punch sida uske pet mein maar diya.
Yeh right on point laga tha jiske chalte iska force kafi strong tha. Yaha tak ke Chiman ke paacho internal organs tak hil gaye the.
Chiman ki toh aankhe tak bahar si aa gayi thi.
Kabir-Tumhare basics kafi weak hai.
Yaha Chiman ab zamin par baith gaya tha aur omit kar raha tha. Wahi yeh dekh kar ab sabhi kafi shock mein the.
Jeet-Interesting, kabir ne bas ek hi attack mein Chiman jaise ko zamin par la diya.Chiman toh 3-Star bronze rank hai. Uski sirf physique hi 1-star bronze rank jitni Powerful hai.
Wahi yaha Chiman abhi tak kabir ke samne apne ghutno par jhuk kar omit kar raha tha. Uska luck kafi achha tha kyo ki agar Kabir Dragon and Elephant pranja palm ka ek bhi moment use karta toh yaha Chiman ki jaan bhi jaa sakti thi. Waha khada koi nahi janta tha ke kabir kitna powerful hai.
Chiman ko apne samne aise omit karte dekh Kabir sochta hai.
Kabir-Yeh kafi weak hai. Phir toh yeh obviously elixir lete hue bada hua hai. Jiske chalte iski foundation hi bekar hai.
Wahi yaha baki sabhi bhi kuch na kuch baate kar rahe the.
Yaha apne ghutno par baithe hue Chiman sochne lagta hai
Chiman-Yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Isne mujhe hara diya vo bhi tab jab mere paas bohot se plans ready the.
Yahi sochte hue vo thoda khade hone hone ki koshish kar raha tha jisse kabir dekh leta hai aur usse kehta hai.
Kabir-Oye. Tumne kaha tha ke tum mujhe 3 baar strike karne doge yeh pehla wala tha toh aur 2 strike bache hai.
Uski yeh baat sunkar hi Chiman ki halat kharab ho jaati hai.
Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar waha kadhe sabhi apne muu par haath rakh kar has rahe the. Chiman apne upar sabhi ko haste hue dekh leta hai jisse uska gussa badh jata hai aur vo kabir par sidha attack karta hai. Par kabir iske liye ready tha.
Chiman Kabir ke paas aa kar apne right leg ko uske sir ke taraf ghumata hai. Par kabir jaha tha wahi khada raha. Usne bas apne sir ki halka sa piche ki taraf kar diya tha.
Uske aisa karne se Chiman ka leg uske samne se gaya par usse kuch kar nahi paya.
Kabir apne man mein.
Kabir-No doubt yeh ek badi family se hai tabhi isne kafi young age mein hi martial arts sikh liya hai. Par phir bhi……
Jaise hi yaha Chiman ka leg uske samne se nikal jata hai waise hi kabir bhi ghum kar usse apne right leg se ek kick mar deta hai jo sidha uske face ko lag jaati hai.
Kabir ki Kick lagte hi Chiman piche ki taraf us jata hai.
Sabhi ko yeh ek aur shock tha ke kabir ne Chiman ko bas 3 strike mein hi hara diya.
Chiman piche ki taraf ud kar kuch dur gir gaya tha usee dekhte hue Kabir usse kehta hai.
Kabir-Toh Chiman tum apni kahi hui baat se piche nahi hatoge. Right.
Jeet bhi yeh sab dekh raha tha aur vo apne gurad jisne usse bachaya tha usse kehta hai.
Jeet-Shayad mein bhi kabir ko handle nahi kar sakta hu. Dekho toh yeh bas 18 years ka hai.
Uske silver rank pohochne tak aur vo jab kisi demon beast spirit se integrate karega tab dekhna vo pehle se bhi jyada stronger ho jayega shayad tumse bhi stronger.
Guard-Par Chiman ne kaha tha ke uske paas sirf Red soul sea hai. Kya vo silver rank tak pohoch bhi payega.
Jeet-Mujhe yeh hamesha lag raha hai ke Kabir ko samjhna kafi mushkil hai.
Yaha sabhi ke bich Hina bhi kafi shock thi vo sochti hai.
Hina-Lagta hai mein ne tumhe underestimate kiya hai.
Wahi Rati soch rahi thi.
Rati-The Nine Revolving Ice Phoenix Technique kabir ne mujhe aise hi de di thi.jo pehle se hi kafi strong hai. Matlab vo isse bhi kafi strong technique ki practice kar raha hoga.
Yaha Chiman khada ho jata hai uska gussa ab kafi had tak badh gaya tha vo sochta hai.
Chiman-Mein 3-star bronze rank hu. Mein aise kaise is bachhe se haar sakta hu. Yeh kafi insulting hai.
Ha iski soul power abhi tak 1-star bronze rank tak nahi pohochi hai. Mein apni soul power ka use kar ke uske soul realm ko destroy kar sakta hu.
Chiman aise hi sochte hue apne soul force ko release kar deta hai vo bhi kafi strong.
Yeh dekh kar Hina kuch samjh jaati hai aur vo zor se kehti hai.
Hina-Ruko Chiman tum aisa nahi kar sakte.
Par tab tak Chiman ne aone pure soul force ko release kar diya tha aur usne kabir ke soul sea ko target bhi kar liya tha.
Kabir yeh sab dekh leta hai par vo apne jagah se hilta bhi nahi.
Yaha Chiman ne apne soul force ko uske soul realm mein transfer kar diya tha. Ab vo Kabir ke consciousness mein tha. Par yaha ke baat usse ajeeb lagi ke yaha red soul sea thavhi nahi balki har jaga ek white energy yh jo kafi strong thi. Par yeh dekh kar bhi Chiman ne uspar attack kar diya tha.
Abhi usne attack kiya hi tha ke uske soul realm ko ek jhatka lag jata hai. Vo jitni bhi soul force ko use kar taha tha vo sab kuch vo white energy absorb kar rahi thi.
Yeh dekh kar China shock ho jata hai. Vo aone soul force ko phir se aone paas bulana chahta tha par ab vo aisa nahi kar paa raha tha.
Chiman-Yeh hai kya aakhir. Aise soul realm ke baremein mein ne kabhi nahi suna hai. Saath hi yeh meri energy ko absorb kar raha hai agar aisa hi raha toh meri puri energy yeh absorb kar lega. Mujhe jaldi se aone soul force ko wapas lana padega.
Par ab bohot der ho gayi thi. Kabir ke us energy ne uski almost saari soul force ko absorb kar liya tha aur ab vo apne aap ko close kar rahi thi.
Abhi vo close ho ho rahi thi bke Chiman ko kuch bohot hi powerful sensation feel hota hai. Usse us white energy mein ek humma shape dikh raha tha par vo kafi halka tha.
Lekin uski aankhe usse kafi bright dikh rahi thi. Tabhi un aankho mein se ek shock wave nikal jaati hai aur vo shock wave Chiman ke soul force ko piche uda deta hai.
Apne hi soul force se hit hone ke baad Chiman ko kafi pain feel ho raha tha yaha tak ke usne muu se blood bhi nikal raha tha.
Vo sochta hai.
Chiman-Yeh kaise possible hai aur vo kounsi energy thi jisne mujhe piche uda diya tha. Wahi us energy ne apne soul realm tak ko close kar diya hai. Yeh sirf jab koi silver rank par pohochta hai tabhi kar sakta hai.
Yeh abhi tak demon spiritist bhi nahi hua hai aur yeh apne soul realm ko close kar sakta hai.
Chiman ke muu se kafi blood nikal raha tha uske internal organs tak injured ho gaye the.
Wahi yaha kabir ne jo apni aankhe band ki hui thi unhe khol deta hai. Jaise hi vo apne aankhe khol kar Chiman ko dekhta hai uske aankho mein se ek invisible energy nikal kar sidha Chiman ke soul force ko hit kar deti hai jisse Chiman ne jo energy ko dekha tha vo uske baremein bhul jata hai.
Yah sabhi ab itne shock ho gaye the ke apni jagah se hil bhi nahi rahe the.
'Chiman haar gaya.’
‘Mein ne kaha tha na kabir ke paas koi na koi tarika hoga Chiman se nipatne ka.’
Sabhi aisi hi baate karne lag gaye the. Wahi Aarav sochne laga tha.
Aarav-Toh yeh hai kabir ki strength. Waise bhi usse uske level ke hi nahi balki uske higher level ke log bhi nahi hara paa rahe hai.
Tabhi Aarav ki nazar Rati oar jaati hai jo usse thodi duri par khadi thi.
Rati-Kabir Jeet gaya. Yeh sach mein kafi powerful bhi hai.