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Jab Kabir ne Chiman se soul force absorb kiya tha uske wajah se ek aura uske aaspas ban gaya tha. Kabir us aura ko apne andar lene lag jata hai. Uske aisa karne se uska soul force phir se badh jata hai aur kuch der baad stable ho jata hai.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Aisa lag raha hai ke mein 1-star bronz tank par pohoch gaya hu.

Mein ne jis tarah Chiman ki soul force khichi hai usse mein 2-star bronze rank par bhi jaa sakta hu agar mujhe usse achhe se regulate karne ka waqt mil jaaye.

Sabhi kabir ko dekh rahe the.

Jeet-Kabir ne Chiman ke soul power ko samne se liya aur usse injured bhi kar diya. Kya iske paas sach mein red soul sea realm hai.

Yaha Chiman ko vo invisible ray kagne ke baad uska sir thoda bhari ho gaya tha par vo sirf Kabir ke soul mein usse jo kuch dikha tha vo hi bhul gaya tha.

Chiman slowly apne pairo par khada hota hai.

Chiman-Kabir aaj jo hua hai vo aise hi nahi khatam hoga.

Yeh keh kar vo palat jata hai aur waha se nikal ne lag jata hai. Tabhi piche se Kabir usse kehta hai

Kabir-Thik hai mein tumse kabhi bhi fight kar sakta hu. Waise mujhe ek baat yaad aayi hai. Kya tum vo dog bankar round nahi lagane wale.

Yeh baat sunkar Chiman zor se kehta hai.

Chiman-Itna uchalne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Us baat ke liy koi nahi mana tha.

Yeh keh kar vo waha se nikal jata hai wahi kabir sochta hai.

Kabir-Iski soul power damaged ho gayi hai, yeh agle kuch waqt tak toh mere piche nahi aayega.

Sabhi phir se aage badhne lag jaate hai. Kuch der aise hi chalne ke baad Kabir ko koi piche se aawaz deta hai.

Yeh Hina thi.

Hina-Kabir tumne mujhe kafi surprise kar diya. Mein ne dekha ke tum camp bhi sabhi se alag ek kone mein lagate ho. Kyo na aaj tum mere saath camp lagao. Ham saath mein sabhi topics par discussion karenge.

Yeh kehte hue Hina kabir ke kafi paas aa gayi thi jisse Rati ne dekh liya.

Rati apne man mein.

Rati-Yeh Hina kabir ke paas aana chahti hai vo bhi aise. Agar aisa hi raha thi Kabir bhi uske jaal mein phas jayega.

Hump, par yeh sab mein kyo soch rahi hu. Yeh meri problem nahi hai.

Yeh sochte hue Rati thodi aage chale jaati hai. Kabir ke paas Hina ko aise dekh kar uske dil mein ek halchal si ho gayi thi.

Wahi yaha kabir Hina ko samjhata hai.

Kabir-Miss Hina aap ke intention ko mein appreciate karta hu par aap already silver rank q par hai toh shayad hi ham kisi topic par disscuss kar payenge.

Yaha Rati halka sa piche dekhti hai ke Kabir aur Hina kya kar rahe hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Hina ka mood thoda off ho jata hai vo soch rahi thi.

Hina-Yeh ladka start se hi mujhe ignore kar raha hai.

Aisa sochte hi vo apne power ko release karti hai. Uski aankhe ab thodi change ho gayi thi.

Hina phir se Kabir ko aawaz deti hai.

Hina-Kabir…..

Uske yeh kehte hi ek halki si sweet smell Kabir ko aane lag jaati hai. Yeh Hina ki demon spirit thi jisse vo integrated hui thi.
Wahi yaha kabir jaise hi us smell ko sunghta hai waise hi vo ruk jata hai. Kabir ko ruka hua dekh kar Hina sochti hai.

Hina-yeh ladka ab mere charm se nahi bach sakta hai. Ab yeh meri har baat manega. Bohot decent behave kar raha tha ab tak Rati ke samne.

Tabhi Kabir kehta hai.

Kabir-Snow Sakura Demon Spirit. Mujhe nahi pata tha ke miss Hina ke paas itna rare demon spirit hoga.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Hina shock ho gayi thi. Usne apni aankhe band kar di kyo ki uski yeh technique uske aankho se hoti thi. Vo sochne lag jaati hai.

Hina-Yeh kya yeh is par kaam nahi kar raha hai. Aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai.

Wahi isne mere demon spirit ko ek look mein pehchan liya. The Snow Sakura Demon Spirit ek Botanic (Tree type) demon spirit hai jo St. Ancestral mountains ke bich paaya jata hai. Iske baas kafi strong charming abilities hoti hai. Normal log iske baremein jante tak nahi hai. Uske saath integrate ho kar same level ke demon spiritist ko charm kiya jaa sakta hai phir toh kabir abhi tak bronze rank tak bhi nahi pohocha hai.

Kahi iska dil itna pure toh nahi hai ke iske dil mein aise koi khayal hi naa ho. Iski willpower toh kisi silver rank de bhi powerful hai.

Wahi yaha kabir phir se Rati ke paas aa jata hai.

Rati-Kabir tumne Hina ko reject kyo kiya ?

Kya vo khubsurat nahi hai.

Is baat par kabir ek smile kar deta hai.

Kabir-Khubsurat toh vo hai par tumse nahi hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Rati sharma jaati hai aur dusri taraf dekhne lag jaati hai.

Rati-Shayad nahi vo mujhse jyada khubsurat hai. Mera uske saath koi comparison nahi ho sakta. Uske kafi chahne wale bhi hai.

Par kabir phir bhi smile kiye jaa raha tha. Usse aise dekh kar Rati shochti hai.

Rati-Kabir kabhi bhi serious nahi hota hai.
Yaha kabir ko Rativke saath aise dekh kar Hina sochti hai.

Hina-Mujhe toh believe hi nahi ho raha hai. Mere charm ka kabir par koi asar hi nahi ho raha hai.

Tabhi vo sabhi ke samne zor se kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir ek din tum mere liye khud chal kar aaoge. Mein ne decided kar liya hai. Kabir ko mein apna bana kar hi rahungi. Jo bhi uske paas aana chahega usse mera samna karna padega.

Yeh baat sunkar toh ab kabir tak shock ho gaya tha. Wahi kabir ko aise situation mein dekh kar Rati ko hasi aa rahi thi.

Sabhi aage chal rahe the wahi in sab mein abhi jo hua uske baremein baate bhi ho rahi thi.

Wahi Hina kabir ko kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir yeh almond ka cake hai tumhare liye.

Kya tum thak gaye ho? Mein tumhare liye kuch laau.

Hina ke haath mein ek soft cushion tha. Jo vo Kabir ko dena chah rahi thi.

Kabir-Miss Hina please aap mujhe tang mat kijiye.

Uski yeh baat sunkar Hina waha se chali jaati hai.

Kabir-Finally chali gayi.

Yeh keh kar vo ek gehri saans chodta hai.
Aise hi sabhi chal rahe the. Kuch dur jaane ke baad Hina phir se kabir ke paas aati hai.

Hina-Kabir kya tumhe pyass lagi hai mein tumhe paani du.

Kabir-Miss Hina aapki problem kya hai ?
Uske is baat par Hina smile karte hue kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir shayad mein tumhe like karne lagi hu. Haan janti hu ke tum mujhe nahi like karte ho par vo thik hai. Waise bhi koun nahi chahega ke mujh jaisi ladki kisi ko like kare.

Mujhe lagta hai tum abhi meri khubsurti ko dekh nahi paa rahe ho par koi baat nahi future mein tumhe zaroor pata chal jayega ke mein kitni khubsurat hu tab tum khud chal kar mere paas aaoge.

Kabir uski baat sunkar ek smile karta hai aur aage chalne lagta hai.

Sabhi chal rahe the par ab is team mein jitni bhi ladkiya thi vo sabhi kabir aur Hina ke baremein baate kar rahe the jisse kabir thoda irritate ho gaya tha.

Jab vo Rati ke saath phir se chalne laga tab Rati ne usse pucha.

Rati-Kya hua Kabir tum aur Hina saath mein kyo nahi ho.

Kabir-Rati tum toh janti ho ke Hina aur mere bich kuch bhi nahi hai. Mein toh usse abhi abhi mila hu.

Rati-Toh usse mere kya lena-dena hai.

Kabir ruk jata hai aur Rati ko aage jaate hue dekhta hai.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Rati abhi tak apne mind mein hi practice kar rahi hai. Waise ab phir se uske saath hu matlab hame abhi bhi ek lamba safar tay karna hai.

Sirf Rati ke liye nahi balki puri Osian City ke liye. Ab mujhe jitne y chances milenge mein sabhi use karunga. Jo meri power badhayega par ab jo mere soul force hai vo change ho gaya hai aur itna powerful hai ke HEAVENLY GOD TACTICS bhi uske samne kafi weak ho rahi hai aisa lag raha hai.

Aise hi kuch sochte hue vo phir se chalne lagta hai. Bich bich me Hina aa kar usse pareshan kar rahi thi par usse Kabir ignore kar raha tha. Ek aur din ka safar tay kar ke sabhi Orichid city ke bahar pohoch jaate hai.Abhi just subah ho rahi thi.

Har taraf se mountains aur jungle se ghiri yeh city kafi ancient aur khubsurat dikh rahi thi. Sabhi kafi excited ho gaye the Orichid city ko dekh kar.

Kuch der baad sabhi Orichid city ke gate ke bahar khade the. Sabhi ko uske andar ka nazara dikh raha tha. City andar se puri tarah destroy ho gayi thi. Sabhi walls toot gayi thi. Unpar veins ugg gaye the.

Jeet apne man main.

Jeet-Toh yeh city DARK AGES ke pehle ki hai.

Wahi kabir apne man mein.

Kabir-Same aisi hi halat baad mein Osian city ki hui thi.

Tabhi waha Jeet ki aawaz aati hai.

Jeet-Toh ham ab Orichid city aa gaye hai.

Yeh keh kar usne aone storage ring se is city ka map nikala aur nicha baith kar usse pura khol diya.

Jeet-Yeh hai Orichid city ka map ab hame yeh decide karna hai ke ham iske andar safely kaise enter kar sakte hai. Yeh city kafi ancient hai toh ab yaha par kisi strong demon beast ka hona na ke barabar hai. Ham isse explore kar sakte hai.

Tabhi ek ladka niche baithta hai aur map ko dekh kar kehta hai.

‘Yeh dekho ham main city mein paas ke West gate se enter kar sakte hai. Ham sabhi ko kuch na kuch main city mein hi mil sakta hai. Hame pehle sabhi commoner areas ko explore karna chahiye.’

Us ladke ki baat par sabhi raazi ho gaye the. Unhe bhi yeh sahi lag raha tha. Yaha kabir bhi baith kar uss map ko dekh raha tha.

Jeet-Tum kya kehte ho kabir ?

Kabir-Nahi yeh sahi nahi hai. Chalo maan bhi liya ke hame commoner area explore kar ke kuch mila bhi par yaha ki sab wealth sabhi badi families mein hogi.

Uske is baat par ab sabhi isse notice karne lag gaye.

Tabhi bich mein Aarav kehta hai.

Aarav-Yeh City kafi badi hai jismei bohot se commoner areas hai. Toh hame kaise pata chale ga ke wealthy family kaha rehti thi.
Jeet ek baar Aarav ko dekhta hai aur Kabir ko aage kehne ke liye kehta hai.

Jeet-Tum aage batate raho.

Kabir-Agar hame is cityvke wealthy families ko dhundna hai toh yeh sabse aasan hai map par jaha bhi tumhe building jyada round shape mein nazar aaye wahi wealthy family ka spot hai. Saath hi unka courtyard kafi bada hota hai.

Tabhi Hina aa kar us map ko dekhte hue kehti hai.

Hina-Yeh dekho yaha….

Jeet-Correct yeh yahi hona chahiye. Is building ka area kafi bada hai. Par yeh area….

Kabir-Ek team ne pehle hi is area ko ache se search kar liya hai. Unhe waise kuch khas nahi mila tha bar usse jyada unhe phir kuch nahi mil paya. Unhe koi basement ya secret room tak nahi mila hai.

Aarav-Mein ne toh pehle hi kaha tha ke yeh city kafi badi hai wahi Orichid city ke badi families ne pehle hi yaha par search kar ke dekh liya hai.

Kabir Aarav ko ek look deta hai.

Kabir-Kya tum chup nahi reh sakte jab mein kuch baat kar raha hota hu. Agr itana hi kuch kehna hai toh yaha aao aur yeh sab sambhalo.

Aarav-Tum..

Jeet-Shut up.

Jeet ki baat sunkar Aarav dursri taraf dekhne kag jata hai.

Kabir-Well yeh normal baat hai ke yeh place pehle hi search kiya jaa chuka hai kyo ki yeh city ke sabse middle area hai wahi city ki strongest defence hai.

Wahi yeh place dekh kar lag raha hai ke yeh city lord ka palace hai.

Kabir ki baat sunkar Jeet sochne lag jata hai.

Jeet-Kabir ka deduction ab tak kafi sahi raha hai.yeh city lord ka palace hi hai. Par yaha jo team pehle aayi thi unhone city lord ke palace ko search kiya tha aur saath hi unhone basement ko bhi search kiya tha jismein unhe kuch bhi nahi mila.

Kabir-Of course yeh place pehle hi search ki ja chuki hogi par yaha dekho. Yaha City Lord Mansion ke paas 3 jagah hai jo khali hai. Kya young master Jeet ko iske baremein kuch pata hai.


Jeet-Yeh area city lord ke military training ka ground hai. Wahi uske side mein hai ek stone fortress jo kisi black marble se bana hai. Hamare koi bhi weapon usse damage tak nahi kar paa rahe hai. Uske side mein yeh jo open area bana hai uske baremein mujhe bhi nahi pata hai ke yeh aisa kyo banaya gaya hai.
Jbardust amazing Shandar update Bhai mja aagya Keep it up
Bs update thode bda kro bhai
 

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UPDATE 24

Jab Kabir ne Chiman se soul force absorb kiya tha uske wajah se ek aura uske aaspas ban gaya tha. Kabir us aura ko apne andar lene lag jata hai. Uske aisa karne se uska soul force phir se badh jata hai aur kuch der baad stable ho jata hai.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Aisa lag raha hai ke mein 1-star bronz tank par pohoch gaya hu.

Mein ne jis tarah Chiman ki soul force khichi hai usse mein 2-star bronze rank par bhi jaa sakta hu agar mujhe usse achhe se regulate karne ka waqt mil jaaye.

Sabhi kabir ko dekh rahe the.

Jeet-Kabir ne Chiman ke soul power ko samne se liya aur usse injured bhi kar diya. Kya iske paas sach mein red soul sea realm hai.

Yaha Chiman ko vo invisible ray kagne ke baad uska sir thoda bhari ho gaya tha par vo sirf Kabir ke soul mein usse jo kuch dikha tha vo hi bhul gaya tha.

Chiman slowly apne pairo par khada hota hai.

Chiman-Kabir aaj jo hua hai vo aise hi nahi khatam hoga.

Yeh keh kar vo palat jata hai aur waha se nikal ne lag jata hai. Tabhi piche se Kabir usse kehta hai

Kabir-Thik hai mein tumse kabhi bhi fight kar sakta hu. Waise mujhe ek baat yaad aayi hai. Kya tum vo dog bankar round nahi lagane wale.

Yeh baat sunkar Chiman zor se kehta hai.

Chiman-Itna uchalne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Us baat ke liy koi nahi mana tha.

Yeh keh kar vo waha se nikal jata hai wahi kabir sochta hai.

Kabir-Iski soul power damaged ho gayi hai, yeh agle kuch waqt tak toh mere piche nahi aayega.

Sabhi phir se aage badhne lag jaate hai. Kuch der aise hi chalne ke baad Kabir ko koi piche se aawaz deta hai.

Yeh Hina thi.

Hina-Kabir tumne mujhe kafi surprise kar diya. Mein ne dekha ke tum camp bhi sabhi se alag ek kone mein lagate ho. Kyo na aaj tum mere saath camp lagao. Ham saath mein sabhi topics par discussion karenge.

Yeh kehte hue Hina kabir ke kafi paas aa gayi thi jisse Rati ne dekh liya.

Rati apne man mein.

Rati-Yeh Hina kabir ke paas aana chahti hai vo bhi aise. Agar aisa hi raha thi Kabir bhi uske jaal mein phas jayega.

Hump, par yeh sab mein kyo soch rahi hu. Yeh meri problem nahi hai.

Yeh sochte hue Rati thodi aage chale jaati hai. Kabir ke paas Hina ko aise dekh kar uske dil mein ek halchal si ho gayi thi.

Wahi yaha kabir Hina ko samjhata hai.

Kabir-Miss Hina aap ke intention ko mein appreciate karta hu par aap already silver rank q par hai toh shayad hi ham kisi topic par disscuss kar payenge.

Yaha Rati halka sa piche dekhti hai ke Kabir aur Hina kya kar rahe hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Hina ka mood thoda off ho jata hai vo soch rahi thi.

Hina-Yeh ladka start se hi mujhe ignore kar raha hai.

Aisa sochte hi vo apne power ko release karti hai. Uski aankhe ab thodi change ho gayi thi.

Hina phir se Kabir ko aawaz deti hai.

Hina-Kabir…..

Uske yeh kehte hi ek halki si sweet smell Kabir ko aane lag jaati hai. Yeh Hina ki demon spirit thi jisse vo integrated hui thi.
Wahi yaha kabir jaise hi us smell ko sunghta hai waise hi vo ruk jata hai. Kabir ko ruka hua dekh kar Hina sochti hai.

Hina-yeh ladka ab mere charm se nahi bach sakta hai. Ab yeh meri har baat manega. Bohot decent behave kar raha tha ab tak Rati ke samne.

Tabhi Kabir kehta hai.

Kabir-Snow Sakura Demon Spirit. Mujhe nahi pata tha ke miss Hina ke paas itna rare demon spirit hoga.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Hina shock ho gayi thi. Usne apni aankhe band kar di kyo ki uski yeh technique uske aankho se hoti thi. Vo sochne lag jaati hai.

Hina-Yeh kya yeh is par kaam nahi kar raha hai. Aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai.

Wahi isne mere demon spirit ko ek look mein pehchan liya. The Snow Sakura Demon Spirit ek Botanic (Tree type) demon spirit hai jo St. Ancestral mountains ke bich paaya jata hai. Iske baas kafi strong charming abilities hoti hai. Normal log iske baremein jante tak nahi hai. Uske saath integrate ho kar same level ke demon spiritist ko charm kiya jaa sakta hai phir toh kabir abhi tak bronze rank tak bhi nahi pohocha hai.

Kahi iska dil itna pure toh nahi hai ke iske dil mein aise koi khayal hi naa ho. Iski willpower toh kisi silver rank de bhi powerful hai.

Wahi yaha kabir phir se Rati ke paas aa jata hai.

Rati-Kabir tumne Hina ko reject kyo kiya ?

Kya vo khubsurat nahi hai.

Is baat par kabir ek smile kar deta hai.

Kabir-Khubsurat toh vo hai par tumse nahi hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Rati sharma jaati hai aur dusri taraf dekhne lag jaati hai.

Rati-Shayad nahi vo mujhse jyada khubsurat hai. Mera uske saath koi comparison nahi ho sakta. Uske kafi chahne wale bhi hai.

Par kabir phir bhi smile kiye jaa raha tha. Usse aise dekh kar Rati shochti hai.

Rati-Kabir kabhi bhi serious nahi hota hai.
Yaha kabir ko Rativke saath aise dekh kar Hina sochti hai.

Hina-Mujhe toh believe hi nahi ho raha hai. Mere charm ka kabir par koi asar hi nahi ho raha hai.

Tabhi vo sabhi ke samne zor se kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir ek din tum mere liye khud chal kar aaoge. Mein ne decided kar liya hai. Kabir ko mein apna bana kar hi rahungi. Jo bhi uske paas aana chahega usse mera samna karna padega.

Yeh baat sunkar toh ab kabir tak shock ho gaya tha. Wahi kabir ko aise situation mein dekh kar Rati ko hasi aa rahi thi.

Sabhi aage chal rahe the wahi in sab mein abhi jo hua uske baremein baate bhi ho rahi thi.

Wahi Hina kabir ko kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir yeh almond ka cake hai tumhare liye.

Kya tum thak gaye ho? Mein tumhare liye kuch laau.

Hina ke haath mein ek soft cushion tha. Jo vo Kabir ko dena chah rahi thi.

Kabir-Miss Hina please aap mujhe tang mat kijiye.

Uski yeh baat sunkar Hina waha se chali jaati hai.

Kabir-Finally chali gayi.

Yeh keh kar vo ek gehri saans chodta hai.
Aise hi sabhi chal rahe the. Kuch dur jaane ke baad Hina phir se kabir ke paas aati hai.

Hina-Kabir kya tumhe pyass lagi hai mein tumhe paani du.

Kabir-Miss Hina aapki problem kya hai ?
Uske is baat par Hina smile karte hue kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir shayad mein tumhe like karne lagi hu. Haan janti hu ke tum mujhe nahi like karte ho par vo thik hai. Waise bhi koun nahi chahega ke mujh jaisi ladki kisi ko like kare.

Mujhe lagta hai tum abhi meri khubsurti ko dekh nahi paa rahe ho par koi baat nahi future mein tumhe zaroor pata chal jayega ke mein kitni khubsurat hu tab tum khud chal kar mere paas aaoge.

Kabir uski baat sunkar ek smile karta hai aur aage chalne lagta hai.

Sabhi chal rahe the par ab is team mein jitni bhi ladkiya thi vo sabhi kabir aur Hina ke baremein baate kar rahe the jisse kabir thoda irritate ho gaya tha.

Jab vo Rati ke saath phir se chalne laga tab Rati ne usse pucha.

Rati-Kya hua Kabir tum aur Hina saath mein kyo nahi ho.

Kabir-Rati tum toh janti ho ke Hina aur mere bich kuch bhi nahi hai. Mein toh usse abhi abhi mila hu.

Rati-Toh usse mere kya lena-dena hai.

Kabir ruk jata hai aur Rati ko aage jaate hue dekhta hai.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Rati abhi tak apne mind mein hi practice kar rahi hai. Waise ab phir se uske saath hu matlab hame abhi bhi ek lamba safar tay karna hai.

Sirf Rati ke liye nahi balki puri Osian City ke liye. Ab mujhe jitne y chances milenge mein sabhi use karunga. Jo meri power badhayega par ab jo mere soul force hai vo change ho gaya hai aur itna powerful hai ke HEAVENLY GOD TACTICS bhi uske samne kafi weak ho rahi hai aisa lag raha hai.

Aise hi kuch sochte hue vo phir se chalne lagta hai. Bich bich me Hina aa kar usse pareshan kar rahi thi par usse Kabir ignore kar raha tha. Ek aur din ka safar tay kar ke sabhi Orichid city ke bahar pohoch jaate hai.Abhi just subah ho rahi thi.

Har taraf se mountains aur jungle se ghiri yeh city kafi ancient aur khubsurat dikh rahi thi. Sabhi kafi excited ho gaye the Orichid city ko dekh kar.

Kuch der baad sabhi Orichid city ke gate ke bahar khade the. Sabhi ko uske andar ka nazara dikh raha tha. City andar se puri tarah destroy ho gayi thi. Sabhi walls toot gayi thi. Unpar veins ugg gaye the.

Jeet apne man main.

Jeet-Toh yeh city DARK AGES ke pehle ki hai.

Wahi kabir apne man mein.

Kabir-Same aisi hi halat baad mein Osian city ki hui thi.

Tabhi waha Jeet ki aawaz aati hai.

Jeet-Toh ham ab Orichid city aa gaye hai.

Yeh keh kar usne aone storage ring se is city ka map nikala aur nicha baith kar usse pura khol diya.

Jeet-Yeh hai Orichid city ka map ab hame yeh decide karna hai ke ham iske andar safely kaise enter kar sakte hai. Yeh city kafi ancient hai toh ab yaha par kisi strong demon beast ka hona na ke barabar hai. Ham isse explore kar sakte hai.

Tabhi ek ladka niche baithta hai aur map ko dekh kar kehta hai.

‘Yeh dekho ham main city mein paas ke West gate se enter kar sakte hai. Ham sabhi ko kuch na kuch main city mein hi mil sakta hai. Hame pehle sabhi commoner areas ko explore karna chahiye.’

Us ladke ki baat par sabhi raazi ho gaye the. Unhe bhi yeh sahi lag raha tha. Yaha kabir bhi baith kar uss map ko dekh raha tha.

Jeet-Tum kya kehte ho kabir ?

Kabir-Nahi yeh sahi nahi hai. Chalo maan bhi liya ke hame commoner area explore kar ke kuch mila bhi par yaha ki sab wealth sabhi badi families mein hogi.

Uske is baat par ab sabhi isse notice karne lag gaye.

Tabhi bich mein Aarav kehta hai.

Aarav-Yeh City kafi badi hai jismei bohot se commoner areas hai. Toh hame kaise pata chale ga ke wealthy family kaha rehti thi.
Jeet ek baar Aarav ko dekhta hai aur Kabir ko aage kehne ke liye kehta hai.

Jeet-Tum aage batate raho.

Kabir-Agar hame is cityvke wealthy families ko dhundna hai toh yeh sabse aasan hai map par jaha bhi tumhe building jyada round shape mein nazar aaye wahi wealthy family ka spot hai. Saath hi unka courtyard kafi bada hota hai.

Tabhi Hina aa kar us map ko dekhte hue kehti hai.

Hina-Yeh dekho yaha….

Jeet-Correct yeh yahi hona chahiye. Is building ka area kafi bada hai. Par yeh area….

Kabir-Ek team ne pehle hi is area ko ache se search kar liya hai. Unhe waise kuch khas nahi mila tha bar usse jyada unhe phir kuch nahi mil paya. Unhe koi basement ya secret room tak nahi mila hai.

Aarav-Mein ne toh pehle hi kaha tha ke yeh city kafi badi hai wahi Orichid city ke badi families ne pehle hi yaha par search kar ke dekh liya hai.

Kabir Aarav ko ek look deta hai.

Kabir-Kya tum chup nahi reh sakte jab mein kuch baat kar raha hota hu. Agr itana hi kuch kehna hai toh yaha aao aur yeh sab sambhalo.

Aarav-Tum..

Jeet-Shut up.

Jeet ki baat sunkar Aarav dursri taraf dekhne kag jata hai.

Kabir-Well yeh normal baat hai ke yeh place pehle hi search kiya jaa chuka hai kyo ki yeh city ke sabse middle area hai wahi city ki strongest defence hai.

Wahi yeh place dekh kar lag raha hai ke yeh city lord ka palace hai.

Kabir ki baat sunkar Jeet sochne lag jata hai.

Jeet-Kabir ka deduction ab tak kafi sahi raha hai.yeh city lord ka palace hi hai. Par yaha jo team pehle aayi thi unhone city lord ke palace ko search kiya tha aur saath hi unhone basement ko bhi search kiya tha jismein unhe kuch bhi nahi mila.

Kabir-Of course yeh place pehle hi search ki ja chuki hogi par yaha dekho. Yaha City Lord Mansion ke paas 3 jagah hai jo khali hai. Kya young master Jeet ko iske baremein kuch pata hai.


Jeet-Yeh area city lord ke military training ka ground hai. Wahi uske side mein hai ek stone fortress jo kisi black marble se bana hai. Hamare koi bhi weapon usse damage tak nahi kar paa rahe hai. Uske side mein yeh jo open area bana hai uske baremein mujhe bhi nahi pata hai ke yeh aisa kyo banaya gaya hai.
Nice update bhai
 

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Jab Kabir ne Chiman se soul force absorb kiya tha uske wajah se ek aura uske aaspas ban gaya tha. Kabir us aura ko apne andar lene lag jata hai. Uske aisa karne se uska soul force phir se badh jata hai aur kuch der baad stable ho jata hai.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Aisa lag raha hai ke mein 1-star bronz tank par pohoch gaya hu.

Mein ne jis tarah Chiman ki soul force khichi hai usse mein 2-star bronze rank par bhi jaa sakta hu agar mujhe usse achhe se regulate karne ka waqt mil jaaye.

Sabhi kabir ko dekh rahe the.

Jeet-Kabir ne Chiman ke soul power ko samne se liya aur usse injured bhi kar diya. Kya iske paas sach mein red soul sea realm hai.

Yaha Chiman ko vo invisible ray kagne ke baad uska sir thoda bhari ho gaya tha par vo sirf Kabir ke soul mein usse jo kuch dikha tha vo hi bhul gaya tha.

Chiman slowly apne pairo par khada hota hai.

Chiman-Kabir aaj jo hua hai vo aise hi nahi khatam hoga.

Yeh keh kar vo palat jata hai aur waha se nikal ne lag jata hai. Tabhi piche se Kabir usse kehta hai

Kabir-Thik hai mein tumse kabhi bhi fight kar sakta hu. Waise mujhe ek baat yaad aayi hai. Kya tum vo dog bankar round nahi lagane wale.

Yeh baat sunkar Chiman zor se kehta hai.

Chiman-Itna uchalne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Us baat ke liy koi nahi mana tha.

Yeh keh kar vo waha se nikal jata hai wahi kabir sochta hai.

Kabir-Iski soul power damaged ho gayi hai, yeh agle kuch waqt tak toh mere piche nahi aayega.

Sabhi phir se aage badhne lag jaate hai. Kuch der aise hi chalne ke baad Kabir ko koi piche se aawaz deta hai.

Yeh Hina thi.

Hina-Kabir tumne mujhe kafi surprise kar diya. Mein ne dekha ke tum camp bhi sabhi se alag ek kone mein lagate ho. Kyo na aaj tum mere saath camp lagao. Ham saath mein sabhi topics par discussion karenge.

Yeh kehte hue Hina kabir ke kafi paas aa gayi thi jisse Rati ne dekh liya.

Rati apne man mein.

Rati-Yeh Hina kabir ke paas aana chahti hai vo bhi aise. Agar aisa hi raha thi Kabir bhi uske jaal mein phas jayega.

Hump, par yeh sab mein kyo soch rahi hu. Yeh meri problem nahi hai.

Yeh sochte hue Rati thodi aage chale jaati hai. Kabir ke paas Hina ko aise dekh kar uske dil mein ek halchal si ho gayi thi.

Wahi yaha kabir Hina ko samjhata hai.

Kabir-Miss Hina aap ke intention ko mein appreciate karta hu par aap already silver rank q par hai toh shayad hi ham kisi topic par disscuss kar payenge.

Yaha Rati halka sa piche dekhti hai ke Kabir aur Hina kya kar rahe hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Hina ka mood thoda off ho jata hai vo soch rahi thi.

Hina-Yeh ladka start se hi mujhe ignore kar raha hai.

Aisa sochte hi vo apne power ko release karti hai. Uski aankhe ab thodi change ho gayi thi.

Hina phir se Kabir ko aawaz deti hai.

Hina-Kabir…..

Uske yeh kehte hi ek halki si sweet smell Kabir ko aane lag jaati hai. Yeh Hina ki demon spirit thi jisse vo integrated hui thi.
Wahi yaha kabir jaise hi us smell ko sunghta hai waise hi vo ruk jata hai. Kabir ko ruka hua dekh kar Hina sochti hai.

Hina-yeh ladka ab mere charm se nahi bach sakta hai. Ab yeh meri har baat manega. Bohot decent behave kar raha tha ab tak Rati ke samne.

Tabhi Kabir kehta hai.

Kabir-Snow Sakura Demon Spirit. Mujhe nahi pata tha ke miss Hina ke paas itna rare demon spirit hoga.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Hina shock ho gayi thi. Usne apni aankhe band kar di kyo ki uski yeh technique uske aankho se hoti thi. Vo sochne lag jaati hai.

Hina-Yeh kya yeh is par kaam nahi kar raha hai. Aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai.

Wahi isne mere demon spirit ko ek look mein pehchan liya. The Snow Sakura Demon Spirit ek Botanic (Tree type) demon spirit hai jo St. Ancestral mountains ke bich paaya jata hai. Iske baas kafi strong charming abilities hoti hai. Normal log iske baremein jante tak nahi hai. Uske saath integrate ho kar same level ke demon spiritist ko charm kiya jaa sakta hai phir toh kabir abhi tak bronze rank tak bhi nahi pohocha hai.

Kahi iska dil itna pure toh nahi hai ke iske dil mein aise koi khayal hi naa ho. Iski willpower toh kisi silver rank de bhi powerful hai.

Wahi yaha kabir phir se Rati ke paas aa jata hai.

Rati-Kabir tumne Hina ko reject kyo kiya ?

Kya vo khubsurat nahi hai.

Is baat par kabir ek smile kar deta hai.

Kabir-Khubsurat toh vo hai par tumse nahi hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Rati sharma jaati hai aur dusri taraf dekhne lag jaati hai.

Rati-Shayad nahi vo mujhse jyada khubsurat hai. Mera uske saath koi comparison nahi ho sakta. Uske kafi chahne wale bhi hai.

Par kabir phir bhi smile kiye jaa raha tha. Usse aise dekh kar Rati shochti hai.

Rati-Kabir kabhi bhi serious nahi hota hai.
Yaha kabir ko Rativke saath aise dekh kar Hina sochti hai.

Hina-Mujhe toh believe hi nahi ho raha hai. Mere charm ka kabir par koi asar hi nahi ho raha hai.

Tabhi vo sabhi ke samne zor se kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir ek din tum mere liye khud chal kar aaoge. Mein ne decided kar liya hai. Kabir ko mein apna bana kar hi rahungi. Jo bhi uske paas aana chahega usse mera samna karna padega.

Yeh baat sunkar toh ab kabir tak shock ho gaya tha. Wahi kabir ko aise situation mein dekh kar Rati ko hasi aa rahi thi.

Sabhi aage chal rahe the wahi in sab mein abhi jo hua uske baremein baate bhi ho rahi thi.

Wahi Hina kabir ko kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir yeh almond ka cake hai tumhare liye.

Kya tum thak gaye ho? Mein tumhare liye kuch laau.

Hina ke haath mein ek soft cushion tha. Jo vo Kabir ko dena chah rahi thi.

Kabir-Miss Hina please aap mujhe tang mat kijiye.

Uski yeh baat sunkar Hina waha se chali jaati hai.

Kabir-Finally chali gayi.

Yeh keh kar vo ek gehri saans chodta hai.
Aise hi sabhi chal rahe the. Kuch dur jaane ke baad Hina phir se kabir ke paas aati hai.

Hina-Kabir kya tumhe pyass lagi hai mein tumhe paani du.

Kabir-Miss Hina aapki problem kya hai ?
Uske is baat par Hina smile karte hue kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir shayad mein tumhe like karne lagi hu. Haan janti hu ke tum mujhe nahi like karte ho par vo thik hai. Waise bhi koun nahi chahega ke mujh jaisi ladki kisi ko like kare.

Mujhe lagta hai tum abhi meri khubsurti ko dekh nahi paa rahe ho par koi baat nahi future mein tumhe zaroor pata chal jayega ke mein kitni khubsurat hu tab tum khud chal kar mere paas aaoge.

Kabir uski baat sunkar ek smile karta hai aur aage chalne lagta hai.

Sabhi chal rahe the par ab is team mein jitni bhi ladkiya thi vo sabhi kabir aur Hina ke baremein baate kar rahe the jisse kabir thoda irritate ho gaya tha.

Jab vo Rati ke saath phir se chalne laga tab Rati ne usse pucha.

Rati-Kya hua Kabir tum aur Hina saath mein kyo nahi ho.

Kabir-Rati tum toh janti ho ke Hina aur mere bich kuch bhi nahi hai. Mein toh usse abhi abhi mila hu.

Rati-Toh usse mere kya lena-dena hai.

Kabir ruk jata hai aur Rati ko aage jaate hue dekhta hai.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Rati abhi tak apne mind mein hi practice kar rahi hai. Waise ab phir se uske saath hu matlab hame abhi bhi ek lamba safar tay karna hai.

Sirf Rati ke liye nahi balki puri Osian City ke liye. Ab mujhe jitne y chances milenge mein sabhi use karunga. Jo meri power badhayega par ab jo mere soul force hai vo change ho gaya hai aur itna powerful hai ke HEAVENLY GOD TACTICS bhi uske samne kafi weak ho rahi hai aisa lag raha hai.

Aise hi kuch sochte hue vo phir se chalne lagta hai. Bich bich me Hina aa kar usse pareshan kar rahi thi par usse Kabir ignore kar raha tha. Ek aur din ka safar tay kar ke sabhi Orichid city ke bahar pohoch jaate hai.Abhi just subah ho rahi thi.

Har taraf se mountains aur jungle se ghiri yeh city kafi ancient aur khubsurat dikh rahi thi. Sabhi kafi excited ho gaye the Orichid city ko dekh kar.

Kuch der baad sabhi Orichid city ke gate ke bahar khade the. Sabhi ko uske andar ka nazara dikh raha tha. City andar se puri tarah destroy ho gayi thi. Sabhi walls toot gayi thi. Unpar veins ugg gaye the.

Jeet apne man main.

Jeet-Toh yeh city DARK AGES ke pehle ki hai.

Wahi kabir apne man mein.

Kabir-Same aisi hi halat baad mein Osian city ki hui thi.

Tabhi waha Jeet ki aawaz aati hai.

Jeet-Toh ham ab Orichid city aa gaye hai.

Yeh keh kar usne aone storage ring se is city ka map nikala aur nicha baith kar usse pura khol diya.

Jeet-Yeh hai Orichid city ka map ab hame yeh decide karna hai ke ham iske andar safely kaise enter kar sakte hai. Yeh city kafi ancient hai toh ab yaha par kisi strong demon beast ka hona na ke barabar hai. Ham isse explore kar sakte hai.

Tabhi ek ladka niche baithta hai aur map ko dekh kar kehta hai.

‘Yeh dekho ham main city mein paas ke West gate se enter kar sakte hai. Ham sabhi ko kuch na kuch main city mein hi mil sakta hai. Hame pehle sabhi commoner areas ko explore karna chahiye.’

Us ladke ki baat par sabhi raazi ho gaye the. Unhe bhi yeh sahi lag raha tha. Yaha kabir bhi baith kar uss map ko dekh raha tha.

Jeet-Tum kya kehte ho kabir ?

Kabir-Nahi yeh sahi nahi hai. Chalo maan bhi liya ke hame commoner area explore kar ke kuch mila bhi par yaha ki sab wealth sabhi badi families mein hogi.

Uske is baat par ab sabhi isse notice karne lag gaye.

Tabhi bich mein Aarav kehta hai.

Aarav-Yeh City kafi badi hai jismei bohot se commoner areas hai. Toh hame kaise pata chale ga ke wealthy family kaha rehti thi.
Jeet ek baar Aarav ko dekhta hai aur Kabir ko aage kehne ke liye kehta hai.

Jeet-Tum aage batate raho.

Kabir-Agar hame is cityvke wealthy families ko dhundna hai toh yeh sabse aasan hai map par jaha bhi tumhe building jyada round shape mein nazar aaye wahi wealthy family ka spot hai. Saath hi unka courtyard kafi bada hota hai.

Tabhi Hina aa kar us map ko dekhte hue kehti hai.

Hina-Yeh dekho yaha….

Jeet-Correct yeh yahi hona chahiye. Is building ka area kafi bada hai. Par yeh area….

Kabir-Ek team ne pehle hi is area ko ache se search kar liya hai. Unhe waise kuch khas nahi mila tha bar usse jyada unhe phir kuch nahi mil paya. Unhe koi basement ya secret room tak nahi mila hai.

Aarav-Mein ne toh pehle hi kaha tha ke yeh city kafi badi hai wahi Orichid city ke badi families ne pehle hi yaha par search kar ke dekh liya hai.

Kabir Aarav ko ek look deta hai.

Kabir-Kya tum chup nahi reh sakte jab mein kuch baat kar raha hota hu. Agr itana hi kuch kehna hai toh yaha aao aur yeh sab sambhalo.

Aarav-Tum..

Jeet-Shut up.

Jeet ki baat sunkar Aarav dursri taraf dekhne kag jata hai.

Kabir-Well yeh normal baat hai ke yeh place pehle hi search kiya jaa chuka hai kyo ki yeh city ke sabse middle area hai wahi city ki strongest defence hai.

Wahi yeh place dekh kar lag raha hai ke yeh city lord ka palace hai.

Kabir ki baat sunkar Jeet sochne lag jata hai.

Jeet-Kabir ka deduction ab tak kafi sahi raha hai.yeh city lord ka palace hi hai. Par yaha jo team pehle aayi thi unhone city lord ke palace ko search kiya tha aur saath hi unhone basement ko bhi search kiya tha jismein unhe kuch bhi nahi mila.

Kabir-Of course yeh place pehle hi search ki ja chuki hogi par yaha dekho. Yaha City Lord Mansion ke paas 3 jagah hai jo khali hai. Kya young master Jeet ko iske baremein kuch pata hai.


Jeet-Yeh area city lord ke military training ka ground hai. Wahi uske side mein hai ek stone fortress jo kisi black marble se bana hai. Hamare koi bhi weapon usse damage tak nahi kar paa rahe hai. Uske side mein yeh jo open area bana hai uske baremein mujhe bhi nahi pata hai ke yeh aisa kyo banaya gaya hai.
Mast update h Bhai
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