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So guys I created a page in Other Discussion section. We can talk over about my stories and let's get know eachother. Any conversation or any theories, speculations. We can talk over their. And yes whenever you ho there and want to ask or suggest me anytime you just tag me in your post.
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Story abhi tak padhke kaisi lagi :--
Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
romance, magic, mystery, heavy action scenes ke sath sath thrill ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ... kuch pehlu abhi bhi shayad adhuri hai joh dhire dhire samne aayenge ... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aaye.. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi hai... joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe hai kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro ke bina multiple ya pramukh kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye :bow: :bow:

Oh haan...
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Jay Sutar sahab:applause: :applause:
pith piche waar karne wala kabhi warrior nahi kehlata.. Square Commandery Prince ne jo kiya wo sachme sharamnak hai aur kayarata ka akhiri lakshan bhi..

ghamand aur ahankar.. ike chalte Square Commandery Prince aur Yan Ning ko ye baat katayi hajam nahi ho rahi hai ki unke waar se kaise bach sakta hai kabir..
wohi lalchi commandery prince ko kabir ke us powerful treasure, us Armour chahiye.. dusro ke shaktiyon ko chin ke khud ko shaktishali banana, yeh bhi kayarata ki hi lakshan hai..


woow to Zina ne 7 warriors ko maar hi diya finally..

akhiri waqt tak yan ning ko vishvas nah hua ki kabir kaise uspar kiye gaye itni shaktisali waaro se na keval bach gaya balki survive bhi kar gaya.. even patat waar bhi kiya wo itne shaktisali skills ke sath..
Khair.. yan ning ne yudh kiya ahankar ke sath aur kabir ne aatmvishvas aur sujh bujh aur sathik mauke pe sahi fighting skills ke sath.. isliye jeet kabir ki huyi aur yan ning.. wo mara gaya apni hi ghamand ke chalte..

Bahot se pehlu hai is kahani mein.. un mein kayi aham pehlu bhi.. jaise ki yeh jagah.. jaha kabir abhi hai.. aur jahan kabir aisa nahi kar sakta hai .wo us jagah par tabhi pohoch sakta hai jab uska waqt wahan phir se jane ka hoga. Tabhi woh river ushe aage jaane ke liye permission degi...

Haan.. chaahe lakh dusmani sahi.. lekin dusman ladki jo tahri ab kaise bura soche uske liye :D
ab is mamle wo tehra dildaar type ka :D
upor se Zina yeh sab us poison ki wajah se kar rahi hai. to uski help karna jayaz samjha kabir ne..


ek to khud pith piche waar karta hai aur upor kahta hai ki kabir luckily bach gaya.. jis din usse samne se yudh hoga tab pata chal jayega indono ko ki koun luckily bhag nikalta hai

ek pal ke liye dar hi gayi thi kahi zina mar to nahi jayegi :cold:
lekin kabir ki kripa se ushe kuch nahi hua aur rahi sahi us poison ko khatam kiya us detoxification ki pill ne...
chalo koi na ant bhala to sab bhala kam se kam ek tarah se dosti ki to suruwat huyi :D
waise kaafi advanced technologies aur science ke sath sath alag hi tarah ke fighting skills aur pauranik mysterious samar kalao ka gajab ka taalmel dekhne ko mili hai har ek update mein..
Writer sahab ne Har pehlu, har ek mod aur har ek point kaafi ache se explanation deke ek vistar roop mein hum readers ke samaks pesh kiye hai kahani ko... jiske chalte kahani aur bhi dilchasp aur manoranjanmay hoti jaa rahi ha..
Khair... let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Jay Sutar ji.. :applause: :applause: :applause:
Naina 11 ster fan what kind of behavior is this. Jay Sutar clearly mentioned both of you in his post and publicly apologize to you that he don't reply your comments. In last 24 hrs both of you are active on other threads but don't even think to appreciate Jay Sutar bhai's post. I use to think you are genuine readers but I think I was wrong. When I AM JD say something over their both of you start to say that Jay Sutar bhai never reply your comments. Did you knows what his health condition are. In on duty because of tiredness he sometimes pass out. In last one and half years we as a country lost more than 168 doctors because of this tiredness. Just because we are his juniors he never let us do extra time shift. He always say that we are future of country he can't risk our life. If you can't appreciate someone's work don't even think talk to bad about him.
So Naina your both of reviews are quite a deep. You have very strong analytical thinking. Well I can say because you saw quite deep details in my previous updates. Sorry for not replying on such good reviews.

I must say your review are very detailed. You must be very sharp minded person. So from now on in future I think you give me good reviews like this and I also try to answers your questions if you any have in any previous or in upcoming updates.

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UPDATE 145

Kabir Headmaster ke courtyard se phir se Dragons Martial Temple mei aata hai aur Earth No-1 ki taraf chal deta hai. Kuch der pehle Sage Emperor ki baat uske mind se chut gayi thi vo phir se uske baremein sochne lag gaya tha. Usse yeh toh samjh mei nahi aa raha tha ke vo reality thi ya dream par jo bhi tha ab us baat ko Kabir ignore nahi kar sakta tha.

Agar vo reality thi toh Sage Emperor ne directly usse apne samne summon kaise kiya hoga. Abhi tak Kabir utne high realm ka warrior bana bhi nahi tha.

Kabir-Yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Sage Emperor ko mere baremein pata kaise chal sakta hai mei toh abhi bhi Black Realm mei hu. Toh kaise...?

Suddenly usse kuch yaad aata hai.

Kabir-Yeh mein ne kya kar diya. Apne Sword Intent ko aur apni Abyss Ancient Sword ko gusse mei use kar liya. Abyss Ancient Sword ke Kulun Field mei aane ke wajah se yaha ki Heaven and Earth Qi mei zaroor koi fluctuations hui honge tabhi Sage Emperor ko uske baremain pata chal sakta hai. Upar se yeh Abyss Ancient Sword Pure Iron se banayi gayi hai ho pure "Akanksha Universe" mei kaafi rare metal hai. Usse agar puri tarah se refine kiya jaaye toh yeh God level Martial Arm ban sakti hai. Zaroor iske fluctuations ke wajah se hi Sage Emperor ko mere baremein pata chal gaya hoga. Ab se mujhe aur bhi alert rehna hoga. Itna toh pata hai mujhe ke Sage Emperor abhi apne kaafi critical time mei hai. Toh abhi uske attack karne ke koi bhi chances nahi hai.

Ab Kabir ko pata chal gaya tha ke last night usse kya galti jo gayi thi. Usse ab kaafi soch kar hi apne Abyss Ancient Sword ko aage se use karna hoga. Wahi apen aap ko jaldi se jaldi strong karna hoga.

Kabir ne phir Yuyan ko kaha ke vo Space and Time Spinel ke andar jaa raha hai.

Waha jakar Kabir ne ek Half-Saint's Essence ke drop ko liya aur usse phir refine karne lag gaya.

Kabir ne spinel ke andar 8 days tak practice ki thi. Issi bich usne Half-Saint's Essence ke 2 drops ko refine kar liya tha. Isse Kabir ka cultivation ab Black Realm ke Dawn Stage par break through kar gaya tha.

Black Realm ke Dawn Stage par aane ke wajah se Kabir ke Qi pool ki size ek baar phir se badh gayi thi.

Jab bhi Kabir ne break through kiya tha uske Qi pool ki size pehle se 10 times badh gayi thi. Par is baar uske Qi pool ki size 20 times badh gayi thi.

Although yeh pehle se sirf 2 times hi bada tha par is baat ko underestimate nahi kiya jaa sakta tha. Jab Martial Arts Masters ke bich fight hoti hai tab aise small, advantages hi jeet aur mout ke bich stand leti hai.

Kabir apne is break through se kuch had tak khush tha.

Kabir-Yeh Half-Holy water sach mei kaafi amazing hai. Yeh na sirf mere body of martial arts balki mere Qi I ke size tak ko badha raha hai.

Kabir ab mile hue Half-Saint's Essence ke 10 drops ke saath confident tha ke vo quarterly assessment ke pehle hi Black Realm ke Medium Stage par pohoch jayega.

Half-Holy water ko absorb kar ke apne cultivation ko badhana yeh Kabir ke liye secondary baat thi.

Is Half-Saint's Essence ke drops ka important aspect yeh tha ke vo Kabir ke Body of Martial Arts ko aur bhi strong bana raha tha. Half-Saint's Essence ke help se Kabir ki physical qualities badh gayi thi. Uski meridians ab aur bhi wide ho gayi thi. Ab vo pehle se bhi double strength ko burst out kar sakta tha.

Kabir-Black Realm ke Dawn Stage par pohochne ke baad mein shayad Animal Spirit Fixing Beasts ke power ko use kar sakt hu. Well mein ismei kounse illusory Blood Beast ko form kar sakta hu ?

Kabir Space and Time Spinel se bahar aata hai aur direct training room mei chala jata hai.

Animal Spirit Fixing Beasts !

Kabir training room ke center mei khada tha aur apne Genuine qi ko apne meridians ke through circulate kar raha tha. Isse uske body mei se ek blood fog nikal ne lag gaya tha.

Kabir ke Spiritual Blood mei se ab ek Dragon aur Elephant ki roar sunayi de rahi thi.

Kabir ke piche ab ek 7 meter tall Elephant ki illusory image form hone lag gayi thi. Issi Elephant ke upar ek long Dragon form ho gaya tha aur vo apne jaws ko snap kar raha tha aur apne claws ko bhi snap kar raha tha. Vo dragon apne sir ko apne aaspas ghuma raha tha. Uski vo bright dragon eyes uske andar ke purple lightning ke saath flash ho rahi thi.

Although is Dragon and Elephant ki image kaafi light thi par unse nikal raha aura kaafi mighty aur powerful tha. Aisa lag raha tha ke Kabir ko unke bich khada tha vo kisi otherworld se yaha aaya hua hai.

Kabie ne upar dekha aur halke se shock hote hue kaha.

Kabir-Unbelievable yeh tob Dragon and Elephant Shadow hai. Yeh toh mere past life ke Thunder Dragon shadow se bhi kaafi powerful hai.

Kabir ne apni is power ko phir se apne body ke andar le liye. Iske wajah se waha par bana vo Dragon aur Elephant jaldi hi gayab ho gaye.

Kabir-Ab mujhe apni current speed ko check karna chahiye.

Iske liye training room kaafi small tha toh kabir bahar aa kar courtyard mei aa gaya. Apni speed ko test karne ke liye.

Jab kabir Earth No-1 ke door par aaya tab usne apne Genuine qi ko circulate kiya aur wind ki speed se vo waha se nikal gaya.Jaha piche ab uske shadow hi reh si gayi thi.

Kuch hi pal mei Kabir courtyard ke other end par pohoch gaya is liye usne apne speed ko slow kiya.

Uske face par satisfaction clearly dikh sakta tha.

Kabir-Agar mein apne Spiritual Blood ke power ko na use karu toh bhi meri speed already 50 meters per second par pohoch gayi hai. Agar mein apne Spiritual Blood ki powers ko use karu aur Dragon and Elephant ke image ko create karu toh meri speed zaroor 52 meters per second par chali jayegi.

Normal warriors jo Black Realm ke Dawn Stage par pohochte haj unki top speed 36 meters per second hoti hai, Medium Stage par 40 meters per second, Final Stage par 44 meters per second aur Completion Stage par 48 meters per second ho jaati hai.

Martial Market School ke sabhi students baki sabhi school ke students se same realm ke andar kaafi strong the.

Even yaha ke weakest student bhi Black Realm ke Completion Stage mei 50 meters per second ki speed par pohoch sakta hai.

Kabir toh abhi Black Realm ke Dawn Stage par tha aur abhi se hi uski top speed 52 meters per second ki thi. Uski yeh speed Western Campus ke un students ke aaspas thi jo Black Realm ke Completion Stage par the.

Kabir-Meri current abilities ko dekh kar mein yeh confidently keh sakta hu ke mein Western Campus ke students jo Black Realm ke Completion Stage par hai unhe hara sakta hu. Wahi agar mein ne Black Realm ke Ultimate Realm mei break through kar liya toh meri speed zaroor 81 meters per second par pohoch jayegi. Meri current strength ko dekh kar mein Black Realm ke Completion Stage mei 70 meters per second ki speed par pohoch sakta hu. Par ussi stage mei mein 81 meters per second ki speed par nahi pohoch sakta hu.

Kabir is baat se bilkul bhi satisfied nahi tha. Although 70 meters per second ki speed toh kuch Earth Realm warriors se bhi kaafi speed thi. Par Kabir Black Realm me Ultimate Realm mei break through karna chahat tha. Sirf issi baato se uski growth baki sabhi warriors se zyada badh sakti thi.

Kabir-Lagta hai mujhe kisi high class speed related martial technique ki practice karni hogi. Tabhi mere Ultimate Realm mei break through karne ke chances badh sakte hai.

Kabir apne memory mei aisi kisi martial technique ke baremain search karne lag gaya. Divine Demon Spirit Book jismei har tarah me top class technique ke baremain likha gaya tha usse Kabir ne puri tarah apne mind mei bitha liya tha aur abhi vo wahi par aisi speed martial techniques ke baremain search kar raha tha.

Kabir abhi bhi apne memory mei aise technique ke baremain search kar raha tha aur tabhi usse ek Superior Class Spiritual Stage Speed related martial technique mil gayi. Isse "Shadow of the Royal Wind Dragon" kehte the.

Shadow of the Royal Wind Dragon already lowest class speed related technique thi jo usse yaad aa rahi thi. Wahi yeh technique abhi uske current cultivation ke liye kaafi right thi.

Kabir ke current cultivation ko dekh kar uske liye ek low class Spiritual stage martial technique ko completely practice karne ke liye at least 2-3 months lagne wale the. Mid class Spiritual stage martial technique ko completely practice karne ke liye 1 year ka time lag sakta tha. Wahi Superior Class Spiritual Stage Martial Technique ko completely practice karne ke liye usse almost 5 years ka time lag sakta tha.

Yeh toh uski Spiritual Power kaafi strong thi is liye vo high class martial techniques ko jaldi se practice kar sakta tha.

Nahi toh ek warrior jo Black Realm ke Dawn Stage par hai usse ek low class Spiritual stage martial technique ko practice karne ke liye 1 year, Mid class ke liye 10 years aur Superior Class ke liye at least 60 years lag sakte the.

Jitna high cultivation realm hoga utne hi jaldi martial techniques ko warrior practice kar sakta tha.

Saath mei agar Spiritual Power bhi kaafi strong hui toh vo bhi practice ke speed ko badha deti hai.

Kabir abhi ke liye yahi soch raha tha ke vo abhi se hi is technique ko fully complete nahi karega. Usse abhi ke liye sirf isse apni speed badhani thi.

Even usse bhi Kabir ki speed greatly badh sakti thi. Jaise vo koi Royal Wind Dragon ho.

Shadow of the Royal Wind Dragon mei sirf 9 parts the. Jiske har part ke 9 steps the. Iska matlab ismei totally 81 changes the.

Jab usse kahi jaldi mei travel karna ho toh usse sirf 9 steps lene ki hi zaroorat thi. Apne har 9 steps mei Kabir almost 2 km ka distance cross kar sakta hai.

Agar Kabir is technique kisi enemy ke against use karta hai toh uske is speed ke wajah se enemy react bhi nahi kar payega. Unhe sirf Kabir ke body ki shadow hi dikhegi aur kuch nahi.

Upar se Kabir ka bhi yeh first time tha ke vo Shadow of the Royal Wind Dragon ke technique ko first time practice kar raha tha. Is liye vo kuch ladkhda raha tha.

Starting mei vo sirf 9 simple steps ko hi follow kar sakta tha. Jab usne kuch der tak practice ki tab jaa kar uski speed badhne lag gayi thi.

Jaise jaise Kabir ki speed badh rahi thi waise waise uske pair jaise shadow mei change ho gaye the. Dekhne wale ko aisa dikhta ke uske kitne hi pair hai.

Wahi kuch distance par ek tower ke upar Shreya aur t baithe hue the aur Kabir ko dekh rahe the.

Dina-Lagta hai yeh kisi high level body skill ko practice kar raha hai. At least low class Spiritual stage body martial technique.

Shreya ne apne sir ko apne haato par rakha tha aur Kabir ko dekhte hue usne kaha.

Shreya-Body Martial Techniques hamesha se rare rahi hai. Mein currently ek Superior Class Human Stage martial technique ki practice kar rahi hu. Western Campus mei ek low class Spiritual stage body martial technique hai jisse Tunder Steps kaha jata hai. Par vo female warriors ke liye suitable nahi hai. Wahi Palace of Thousand Water mei 2 low class Spiritual stage body martial techniques hai but unmei kuch flaws hai. Lagta hai mujhe jab tak mein Internal Student nahi ban jaati hu tab tak wait karna hoga suitable Spiritual stage body martial technique ko dhundne ke liye.

Par Dina ko aankho mei ek alag hi brightness dikh rahi thi. Usne Kabir ko dekha jo abhi bhi practice kar raha tha. Usne usse dekhte hue kaha.

Dina-Kyo na ham kabir se kahe ke vo hame is technique ko sikhaye ?

Shreya-Ek low class Spiritual stage body martial technique kaafi precious hoti hai. At least uski cost 2,000,000 silver coins tak jaa sakti hai. Even Martial Market School mei bhi aisi technique ko sirf kuch der lene ke liye 1000 merit points lagte hai. Tumhe kya lagta hai vo hame aise hi sikha dega ?

Is baat par Dina ne apne Space Bracelet ko touch karte hue kaha.

Dina-Waise Kabir kaafi self-less person hai. Shayad vo hame sikha de.

Shreya-Vo self-less person sirf tumhare liye hai.

Dina-At least ham try karke dekhte hai kyo? Upar se mein yeh dekh kar hi bata sakti hu ke Kabir jis technique ki practice jar raha hai vo kuch special hai. Other Body martial techniques ki tarah shayad ismei koi body limitations nahi hai. Toh kya pata yeh hamare liye kaafi suitable sabit ho. Sister Shreya agar hamne yeh chance mis kar diya toh hame dusri suitable technique shayad hi mil sakti hai.

Shreya-Okay.

Shreya kuch had tak maan gayi thi. Agar Kabir jis body martial technique ki practice kar raha hai vo usse suit ho gayi toh vo usse khud se high price dene ke liye ready thi.

Shreya aur Dina ne us tower ke upar se kaafi khubsurat way mei jump lagayi. Unhe dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise koi fairies heavens se niche aa rahi ho. Vo jaldi hi Kabir ki taraf badh gayi.

Wahi yaha Kabir ke paas Rati aur Maithili bhi aa gayi thi. Jab unhone usse training karte hue dekha toh vo bhi waha aa gayi. Unhe dekh kar Kabir ne khud ko rok liya.

Tab tak Shreya aur Dina bhi waha aa gayi thi.

Dina ne waha aa kar kaafi bright aankho se Kabir se pucha.

Dina-Kabir tum kis high level martial technique ki practice kar rahe ho ?

Dina ki aankho mei curiosity achhe se dekhe jaa sakti thi.

Kabir ne smile karte hue kaha.

Kabir-Yeh koi high level martial technique nahi hai. Yeh bas ek speed related martial technique hai. Agar Senior Dina ko sikhna hai toh mein aap ko sikha sakta hu.

Yeh baat sunkar Dina aur Shreya halke se shock ho gaye the. Originally unhe laga tha Kabir unhe na kahega. Par unhone yeh socha bhi nahi tha ke Kabir ek hi baat mei maan jayega. Usse jaise pata tha ke vo aage kya kehne wali hai.

Tabhi Shreya ne ek cold tone e Kabir se kaha.

Shreya-Mein kuch bhi free mei nahi sikhne wali hu. Mein tumhe iske liye pay karungi merit points ya silver coins mei.

Kabir ne ek baar ke liye Shreya ke face ko dekha aur phir ek halke se smile ke saath usne kaha.

Kabir-Senior Shreya mujhe nahi lagta hai ke aap is technique ko afford kar payenge.

Rati aur Maithili ko pata tha ke Kabir Shreya aue Dina ke saath masti kar raha hai is liye vo chup chup kar has bhi rahi thi.

Wahi yaha Kabir ko achhe se pata tha ke Shreya aue Dina yaha kyo aayi hai. Usne is technique ko free mei sikhane ke liye is liye haa kahi kyo ko Shreya ne Kabir ke jaan bachayi thi Lin ko right time par maar kar.

Jaise revenge liya jata hai waise hi kindness ko bhi hame ussi taraf return karna chahiye.

Par kabir ki baat ko sunkar Shreya ki aankhe aur bhi cold ho gayi.

Shreya-Tumhe kisne kaha ke mein afford nahi kar sakti hu ? Mein ab isse buy kar ke hi rahungi.

Kabir ne halke se apne sir ko hilaya aur baat na karna hi thik samjha.

Ek worst superior class Spiritual stage martial technique bhi 8,000,000 silver coins ke liye sell ki jaa sakti hai. Toh Shadow of the Royal Wind Dragon jaisi technique ke price ke baremain socha bhi nahi jaa sakta hai. Upar se yeh technique superior class Spiritual stage martial technique mei sabse best thi. Agar aise hi isse kisi ne sell karne ke liye nikala toh yeh 30,000,000 silver coins ke niche aa hi nahi sakti hai.

Even Shreya jo ek Superior Commandery ki Princess thi. Vo khud bhi utni badi amount ko ek saath pay nahi kar sakti thi. Agar usne khud ko bhi sell kar diya toh bhi vo yeh price nahi nikal sakti thi. Agar uske Commandery King father ne socha toh vo shayad yeh technique buy kar sake uske liye.

Shreya-Kabir tumhare is face par jo look hai usse mein kya samjhu ? Kahi tum mujhe kam toh nahi samjh rahe ho.

Abhi baat aage badhti ke Rati ne piche se Kabir ke ear ko pakda aur usse twist karte hue kaha.

Rati-Ab bohot hua tumhara mazak. Aisa bhi koi pareshan karta hai apne senior ko. Sister Shreya Sister Dina yeh Kabir aap dono ko yeh technique sikhayega.


Wahi suddenly Rati ke aise Kabir ke ear ko twist karne ke wajah se usse halke halke pain ho raha tha.
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Bahot khoob superb lajawab
 
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