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Nice update bhai
Waiting for new update bhai
Welcome back Jay Sutar bahi ap ko story par dekh kar or update read kar ke bouhat khushi hoi.
Peace.☺
Bhai index banao aap privious updates padhne me bahut problem hoti hai
Wah mza आ gya.... Aate hi 2 update शानदार भाई शानदार
Welcome back bro
Bahut hi sunkar shuruat
Lage raho
Public ki demand hai JAY BHAI
k INDEX bnao
INDEX
INDEX
INDEX BNAAAAAAOOOOOO
Jay bhai lagta h ab katle aam honge agar khub fight ane wali h......
Thanks Guys .Jay bhai ham sab to aapke likhne ke diwane hai aap jab tak bologe intejar karenge
Bas aap puri tarah se thik ho jao
Hame aapka intejar hai .......
God bless you bro
Thank you .Hello Jay Sutar sir,
Really glad to know ki aap ki health ab theek hai.
Firstly mai ye kahunga ki I am a big fan of your storytelling.
Maine ye kahani abhi kuchh dino pehle hi start ki thi, starting me kabhi kabaar padh leta tha par dheere dheere pta nhi kb mai to aapki story se itna addict ho gya pta hi nhi chla ki kb maine saare updates bui padh dale. Aur ab bas aage ki story ka intjzaar chal rha hai.
Jis tarah se aapne apni story oceanic city se start krte hue badi hi smoothly isko Draconian realm ta le aae hai ye aapki flawless storytelling shramta ka ek namoona hai.
Aur jbse martial market school arc start hua hai tbse kahani ek alag level pe aa gyi hai aur bahut hi interesting ho gyi hai. Mujhe sbse badiya fight to kabir vs Yan Ning ki lagi ki kaise usne apni strength aur ability se upar ke opponent ko itni badiya strategic battle moves se hara diya.
Bas mai aapko ek baat kehna chahunga ki jbse kabir and friends tiny world se gye hai, tbse kabir aur maithli and rati ke beech me bilkul bhi romance aur emotional scenes nhi dikhaae hai jo kahi na kahi ek khaalipan sa anubhav hota hai. Vaise to iss samay kabir ki training bahut important hai lekin fir bhi usse kuchh samay un dono ko dena hi chahiye.
Ye bas mera personal opinion hai, story aapki hai aur ise aap apni hi tarah se chalao aur aise hi thrilling updates dete raho.
Hoping for your speedy recovery.
Thank you .Thank you brother, i hope you are well and fit.. Mera 2 mhine ka furstration release krne k liye... Mujje umeed hi nhi thi k.... Double dhmaka hoga, aur update ki to.. Kya baat thi..
Bahut precisely kabir apne route ki tqraf ja rha hai... Aage chal kr use aur bahut sakht competitions dekhne pdeinge... But kuch bhi ho. ..usne apni past life se acha sabak liya hai.. Aur sabko sath lekr chla hai
Maja aaaye ga bhai vese ye secret kis bate me hone wala h matalb ki Kabir ki ya uske friends ki strength ke bare me ya kuch orr hWell guys thank you ke aap sabhi ne mera wait kiya. Vo bhi itna besabri se. Jitna aap sabhi wait kar rahe hai mere update ko read karne ke liye utna hi mein bhi yaha besabr hu aap sabhi ko aage ke updates read karnwane ke liye kaafi ideas aa gaye hai is story ko aur bhi interesting banane ke liye aur vo sabhi ideas apply bhi honge bas aise hi saath bane rahiye. Aur haa aaj BADA UPDATE aane wala hai.
Update 10-10:30 ke bich aayega
Peace.
Thanks bhai and waiting for next updateWell guys thank you ke aap sabhi ne mera wait kiya. Vo bhi itna besabri se. Jitna aap sabhi wait kar rahe hai mere update ko read karne ke liye utna hi mein bhi yaha besabr hu aap sabhi ko aage ke updates read karnwane ke liye kaafi ideas aa gaye hai is story ko aur bhi interesting banane ke liye aur vo sabhi ideas apply bhi honge bas aise hi saath bane rahiye. Aur haa aaj BADA UPDATE aane wala hai.
Update 10-10:30 ke bich aayega
Peace.