Fantasy Gods and Demons

[Lovekillsyou]

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Note- Update 177 hi 178 hain

 

[Ajay]

Sorry guys aaj update nahi de paya last 2 din kaafi busy the toh uske chakkar mei likhne ke liye hi nahi mil paya. But Friday ko ek bada update dunga.
Peace .

Ok bhai waiting

 

[Jay Sutar]

Listen guys I am not bound by this thread. Out there far greater duties I have to perform. If I want I can end this story in an instant. So be have patience. I am doing because I just have relief my stress. This thing takes so much of my time. So next time any one of you had any complaint about late update then keep it to yourself.
Peace .

 

[Punnu]

Hi Jay sutar bhai ...is my first comment of your story....tumahri story fantastic hai...jab mene ye stroy padhni start kri thi tb mujhe kuch bhi smj nhi aaya ki ye chl kya rha hai ..but jaise jaise padhta gya...waise hi story interested hoti gyi...Kabir ka reborn hona...apni pichli zindagi yaad Krna...fir rati or uski mulakat and saath me maithali ki bhi ....fir Sheetal se panga....Ravi se friendship demon se ladayi city lord se masti etc....aise bahut se drishya aaye story me jisse padhkar maja aa gya ...but saath ye pta chla tha Kabir ko mysterious egg milna and jab usse ye kha gya uska koi intzaar kr rha hai..Kon kr rha hai uska intzaar ye chize abhi disclose nhi hui hai..but dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...
Abhi kuch previous update me tha ki sage empirior khud chahta hai Kabir usse maare fir wo Kabir ko kyu maarta hai bhai ye smj nhi aaya...and agr Kabir sage empirior ko maar deta hai...shayad story yhi khatam nhi hogi isse aage bhi bahut kuch hai shayad...or Jha tak shreya or Dina ka face rati or maithali se milta hai...ye jaroor koi coincidence nhi hoga ...koi Raaz hai iske peeche jo shayad Kabir jaanta hai ...mujhe to aisa lgta hai...or to aage dekhte hai kya hota hai....
Apki story ek dam faadu chl rhi hai...story ko aisi chlana yr and and bhai mujhe aisa lgta hai ab aap ye story jldi khatam kr dena chahte hai....kyuki pehle tum chizo ko ache se disclose krte the jo shyad ab nhi krte...or bhaise jldi khatam mat krna apne jaisa waise hi iske anjaam tak le jana ...

 

[Punnu]

Listen guys I am not bound by this thread. Out there far greater duties I have to perform. If I want I can end this story in an instant. So be have patience. I am doing because I just have relief my stress. This thing takes so much of my time. So next time any one of you had any complaint about late update then keep it to yourself.
Peace ✌.

Offend mat ho bhai...sbko apke update ka intzaar rehta hai ... update nhi aata to thodi nirasha hoti hai....

 

[Neel Singh]

Listen guys I am not bound by this thread. Out there far greater duties I have to perform. If I want I can end this story in an instant. So be have patience. I am doing because I just have relief my stress. This thing takes so much of my time. So next time any one of you had any complaint about late update then keep it to yourself.
Peace ✌.

Jb apka man tab do update. Me to ab kabhi next update ki gujarish nahi karne waala. Lakin update ko padhna nahi chhodunga.

 

[Vickey1211]

Listen guys I am not bound by this thread. Out there far greater duties I have to perform. If I want I can end this story in an instant. So be have patience. I am doing because I just have relief my stress. This thing takes so much of my time. So next time any one of you had any complaint about late update then keep it to yourself.
Peace ✌.

Bhai sorry ab update ke liye nhi bolunga ab
Jab bhi aap update doge shaanti se read kar lunga
I baat aur jay bhai aapki story bohat acchi h tab hi aapko update ke liye sabhi log bolte h

 

[I AM JD]

Guys lagta hai sabhi Jay Sutar bhai ke baat ke context ko samajh nahi paa rahe hai. Last day zaroor kisi baat emergency ke wajah se vo update nahi kar paaye honge. Being a doctor means vo pure din mei aise aise logo ko handle karte honge jinhe ham bhi thik se handle nahi kar payenge. Upar se doctor ke upar har patient ki responsibility bhi toh hoti hai. Agar kal ko kisi patient ko kuch ho jata hai toh uske janne wale doctor ko hi pakadte hai ke uske hote hue uske saath yeh sab hua kaise. Kya pata Jay bhai kisi baat ke wajah se irritated bhi hue ho. Upar se yeh jo situation bani hau vo bhi kaafi badi hai. Corona jaane ka naam nahi le raha hai. Uske new variant aa rahe hai. Black fungus. Aisi na jaane kitni hi baate hai jinke baremei doctors ko sochna hota hai. Aise mei mood ki aisi taisi hona normal baat hai. So I think ke hame hi understandable hona hoga. Agar baat kisi aur profession ki hoti toh ham kuch keh toh sakte tha par yaha hamare writer sahab toh thehre doctor so we can't even imagine how much he under pressure.
ADIOS.

 

[Chattan singh]

Hello Dr sahab
Sorry agar kuch galat lga ho apko but sir it's not about the update being late or anything as I mentioned in my last post i know you're a very busy person and yes this is a very tough job i can also understand that bahot sara stress or extremly critical situations you have every day to handle apko week ke2 update do sir no problem just the thing is it's too detailed that you can't complete a scene in 1 or 2 updates because of the detailing so just think about that only a small request sir
Again sorry

 

[Neel Singh]

Guys lagta hai sabhi Jay Sutar bhai ke baat ke context ko samajh nahi paa rahe hai. Last day zaroor kisi baat emergency ke wajah se vo update nahi kar paaye honge. Being a doctor means vo pure din mei aise aise logo ko handle karte honge jinhe ham bhi thik se handle nahi kar payenge. Upar se doctor ke upar har patient ki responsibility bhi toh hoti hai. Agar kal ko kisi patient ko kuch ho jata hai toh uske janne wale doctor ko hi pakadte hai ke uske hote hue uske saath yeh sab hua kaise. Kya pata Jay bhai kisi baat ke wajah se irritated bhi hue ho. Upar se yeh jo situation bani hau vo bhi kaafi badi hai. Corona jaane ka naam nahi le raha hai. Uske new variant aa rahe hai. Black fungus. Aisi na jaane kitni hi baate hai jinke baremei doctors ko sochna hota hai. Aise mei mood ki aisi taisi hona normal baat hai. So I think ke hame hi understandable hona hoga. Agar baat kisi aur profession ki hoti toh ham kuch keh toh sakte tha par yaha hamare writer sahab toh thehre doctor so we can't even imagine how much he under pressure.
ADIOS.

Tumne mujhe samjha diya yarr me to bura maan gaya Dr sahab ki wajah se. Aur mera us waqt dimag bhi kharab to me bhi bura maan gaya aur bol gaya ab update ki mang meri taraf se kabhi nahi hogi.

 

[Sharau]

Dr saheb xforum pe apaki tarah dusari kahani nai hai isaliye ham apaki kahani ke update ka besabri se intjar kar rahe ho hi iselie app bura na mania