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Bahut he mazeddar update tha bhai padh k maza aa gya love u bhai
Meri ek baat manoge bhai meri mano to sherya or uski friend ko bhi gf k list me samil kr lo or maza aa jayega
Excellent update bhai
Or ha ek baat bhai ab aapki tabiyat kaise hai apna khyaal rakha kro
Waiting Next ....
Ummid se Chota Update tha.
Boht mast update hai bhai
Nice update
Nice fantastic update bro
Thank you Guys .Mast update
Thank you buddy .to kuchh vehshi darinde ya zina pr apni niyat dula baithe unme se 4 ko to zina ne tpka diya pr in teeno ki tpkaane se phle wo bhi khud kafi ghayal ho gyi h aur usne jb dekha ki ab wo aur nhi ld skti in sabhi se aur apni ijjat bachana mushkil h to mrne se phle ek daav aur khela aur unhe apni asliyat btai pr usse bhi un hawasiyo pr koi asar nhi hua...khair luckily kabir bhi ab zina ke paas pahuch hi liya to zina ab safe rhegi kyuki ab ye log kabir ke hatho marne wale h...
Wahi dusri trf shreya ,maithili, rati aur dina ne earth realm me breakthrough kr liya aur wo sabhi ab phle se bhi jyada fierce ho gyi h....sath me yuyan the spiritual goddess unke sath h jo khud phle se bhi bahut jyada strong ho chuki h mahadev se milne ke baad... In paancho ke samne tikna kisi ke liye bhi aasan nhi h aur ye sab wo 5cho dikha bhi rhe h jis trha se unhone evil warriors ko mara..pr us waqt bhi maithili aur shreya ne hi unko maara tha Dina rati aur yuyan ne to kisi ko kuchh kaha bhi nhi...to isse lga sakte h ki wo 5cho ek sath kitni khunkhaar hongi ek puri evil warriors ki sena ko niptane me saksham h wo sabhi.. Wahi zina aur kabir bhi unko join krle abhi to sayd hi koi evil warrior hi bach paaye yaha se ....ab ye 5cho kabir ko dhundne ke sath hi us black market ke jasus ko dhundne nikal gyi h jo in evil warriors ko free kr rha h unki kaid se ..kahin jyada der hone pr wo aur bhi strong warriors ko na aazad kr de..usse phle uska mrr jana behtar hoga...aur is beech unks samna pisachini luhan se na ho jaye wrna panga bhari pdega waha...yuyan ko to phle se uske baare me bhayakar khatra feel ho rha h dekhte h wo inko phle milti h ya kabir ko...
In sabke alawa kabir ne in 2 mahino me apne completion stage me breakthrough kr liya half saint blood aur icing meridian pills aur half saint essence ke madad se...jis karan ye breakthrough ek bde breakthrough ki trha hua jisne kabir ki strength aur qi lake ke space ko uske anuman se jyada bdha diya..jis karan kabir ko usko puri trha fill krne ke liye aur bhi jyada bdi matra genuine qi ko refine krna pdega...wahi nine folds of elephant power ke power ko 4 guna tk achieve kr liya h jiska impact phle se kahi jyada bhayakar h jiske ek attack se wo sayd mid level ke earth realm warrior ko bhi maar de... To dekhte h ab kya hota h aage jb kabir waps se maidan me aagya h aur udhr 5 khatarnak ladkiyaan bhi shikar krte hue aur andr aarhi h chikong mansion ke..wahi zina to abhi ld hi rhi apne shikaro ke sang. Jaha kabir uski madad ke liye pahuch chuka h..
So waiting for the next update
Very nice update bro
Nice update Jay bhai waiting for next
Awesome Update Bhai Keep Posting
superbb shandaar jbrdst update bro
Superb mind blowing fantastic outstanding update bhai
Fabulous update bhai
SUPER UPDATE
super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
Nice update
Thank you Guys .Nice update bhai
Bohat Shaandaar Update bro
Kabir k Ultimate Stage par ponchny ka intzar hai
Waiting for NEXT
Bahut hi khoobsurat update
Waiting for next update
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
Jay Bai super update Bai aisy hi jari rakhy
Super update hai Bhai
Nice Update Brother ♥
Awesome update bhai....
Amazing and superb update jay bhai
Thank you Guys .Bdhiya update bhai pr ab next update pdhne ki mn ar jyda ho gya kabir bachayega ya nhi zina ko bcha lena chahiye bichari ko koi ar dekhe isse bdhiya apna hero hi shi
Nice update
Jay Bhai aapse ek request kitni baar ki hai ki index banao please bana dijiye purane update padhne me bahut problem hoti hai
Fabulous Amazing Fantastic Update .....
Thank you Guys .Bhout jabarjast update bhai .bhai ek fight aisi bhi dikhana jismain kabir shreya ko bachaye fight karte hue .jisse shreya ko shock lage uski power dekhkar
Buddy utna time hi nahi hai mere pass ke Index banata rahu. Haan jab yeh story complete ho jayegi toh zarur try karunga ke mein iska index bana saku.Jay Bhai aapse ek request kitni baar ki hai ki index banao please bana dijiye purane update padhne me bahut problem hoti hai
Thank you buddy .Kabir ko ek drop half seint blood ko obsorb karne me 3 icing maradian pill lagi Wao! Isi baat se samjha ja sakta hai ki ye half saint's esence ki ek drop se kitni jyada powerful hai usne Kabir ke 5cho organ ko jalana suru kr diya tha bina icing meridian pill ke Kabir is relm me half-saint's blood drop ke presere ko jhel hi nhi pata...
Kabir ki ab genuine Qi 6 time badh gyi hai or Kabir ne 9 palm strike ke 4th tk ko practice kr liya hai jiska namuna Kabir ne patthar me half meter palm print karke diya jiske aaspas crack bhi aa gye the...
Kabir ne apne space and time spinal me 6 month bita diye jaha bahar sirf 2 month huye hai me practice karte huye or sath me break through ke baad apni power ko stable karne me Bachi Hui 10 half-seint's essence ki drops ko 5 icing meridian pill ke sath unko obsorb kiya refine kiya or sath me apni QI lake ko bhi 30 %fill kiya jo ki 21 times wide ho gyi hai...
Kabir Hunted mist mountain se teji se 75 ki speed se jo profound board ke no 1 se jyada thi se nikal kr luhan ke fut print ka pichha karte huye nikal jata hai vhi...
Dina Shreya maithili Rati 4ro earth relm me pahuch chuki hai or unhone sath me rah kr bahut se treaser collect kiye hai yuyan bhi unke sath hai Shreya or maithili ne milkr apne jalvo ki Thodi si jhalak dikhai jisko dekh black market ke warriors ki fat ke hath me aa gyi...
Zina 7 evil earth realm warriors jo black market se the unke trap me fas gyi hai pr usne akele hi 4 earth relm warrior ko mar diya tha Vo khud bhi heavy enjard ho gyi thi 3 abhi baki hai or vo zina ko kaise pakadna hai Ispr Charcha karte hai..
Vhi Inki fight ki kuchh aavaj Kabir ke sarp Kano me Padhti hai to vah luhan samajh kr apne hath me 1 half-saint's blood drop ko apni Genuine Qi me cover kar us gufa ki or badh jata hai...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast with awesome writing skills bhai
Dear writer,
M ek silent reader hu achi story p koi review ni de pata qki muje story writing ka 'W' b ni ata to ap jese bde aur kushal lekhak ki rachna k liye mera koi b tippani krna muje uchit ni lgta,
M fir b yhi kahunga k apki y story bht hi achi h, mene kayi chinese donghua dkhi h y wali b dkhi h bt apki likhne ki kala bht hi awwal darje ki h qki jis trh s aapne kahani k mukhya kirdar KABIR ko dikhaya h uska level hi kuch alag h, ab donghua dkhi h to comparison apne ap hi ho jata h bt sch kahunga k donghua ka NIE LI apke KABIR k age ni tikta aur na hi tales of the demon and god apki GODS AND DEMONS k age tikti h...
Bs muje ek doubt aaraha h k story k start m apne jb rank aur realm define ki ti tb apne rank bronze, silver, gold, black gold, aur fr legend btai ti, aise hi realm b yellow, black, earth, heaven etc btaya ta bt muje confusion y hua k jb kabir earth realm m break through kr lega to uski rank kon c ho jayegi qki kafi time s story m rank p koi bat ni hui bs realm hi clear h aur story ko kafi din b ho gye h to shyd yad b kam ho muje, in short bs m rank aur realm m connection janna chata hu k ek break through hone pr rank aur realm pr kya asar pdta h...
god ap pr apni kripa bnaye rkhe...
Hi Jay sutar bhai ...is my first comment of your story....tumahri story fantastic hai...jab mene ye stroy padhni start kri thi tb mujhe kuch bhi smj nhi aaya ki ye chl kya rha hai ..but jaise jaise padhta gya...waise hi story interested hoti gyi...Kabir ka reborn hona...apni pichli zindagi yaad Krna...fir rati or uski mulakat and saath me maithali ki bhi ....fir Sheetal se panga....Ravi se friendship demon se ladayi city lord se masti etc....aise bahut se drishya aaye story me jisse padhkar maja aa gya ...but saath ye pta chla tha Kabir ko mysterious egg milna and jab usse ye kha gya uska koi intzaar kr rha hai..Kon kr rha hai uska intzaar ye chize abhi disclose nhi hui hai..but dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...
Abhi kuch previous update me tha ki sage empirior khud chahta hai Kabir usse maare fir wo Kabir ko kyu maarta hai bhai ye smj nhi aaya...and agr Kabir sage empirior ko maar deta hai...shayad story yhi khatam nhi hogi isse aage bhi bahut kuch hai shayad...or Jha tak shreya or Dina ka face rati or maithali se milta hai...ye jaroor koi coincidence nhi hoga ...koi Raaz hai iske peeche jo shayad Kabir jaanta hai ...mujhe to aisa lgta hai...or to aage dekhte hai kya hota hai....
Apki story ek dam faadu chl rhi hai...story ko aisi chlana yr and and bhai mujhe aisa lgta hai ab aap ye story jldi khatam kr dena chahte hai....kyuki pehle tum chizo ko ache se disclose krte the jo shyad ab nhi krte...or bhaise jldi khatam mat krna apne jaisa waise hi iske anjaam tak le jana ...