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Fantasy Gods and Demons

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Lovekillsyou

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Note- Update 177 hi 178 hain
 
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Rudrathakur

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Bhayanakar enrty sage emperor ki usne rati aur maithili ko maar kr kabir ke usko marne ke nischaya ko aur bhi dradh bna diya h... Uski ichhhashakti sage emperor ko maarne ke liye aur bhi jyada prabal aur bhayankar roop se ugra ho gyi h...sage emperor khud ki jald se jald sharpyukt jeevan se mukti chahta h isliye usne kabir ko iss trha ka jhatka diya taki kabir jald se jald us layak ban jaaye ki wo usko maar ske..anyatha pichhali anginat ladaiyo ki trha wo kabir ko firse maar dega aur ye silsila sayd hi khatam ho ya iss baar ye sab band ho jaaye aur fir anantkaal tk wo isi shrapyukt jeevan ka nirvahan kre...pr agr use kabir ko abhi maarna hota to wo apna attack rati aur maithili pr nhi kabir pr krta aur sayd kabir bach bhi nhi pata one shot dead ya fir uske raaste ke beech me sudarshan chakra ko aana pdta kabir ki raksha ke liye....wahi rati aur maithili ka ant ho gya...kya bakai me unka ant ho gya h.. Kya unki yahi destiny thi ...unka ant nishchit tha sayd. Tbhi Shreya aur Dina aur rati maithili same ho inke beech aisa koi connection ho ki wo ek trha se shreya aur dina ki life gaurd ki trha ho .. Unhe isi trha se cast kiya gya ho ki jo halat rati aur maithili ki hui h wo dina aur shreya ki na ho is journey me... Kyuki wo is safar me kabir ki bahut badi sahyogi banne wali h..uski shaktiyaan .. Aur sage emperor ke liye rati aur maithili ke roop me ek mayajaal buna gya ho taki shreya aur dina surakshit reh ske ...waise ek astitva to rati aur maithili ka tha hi aur agr ye bakai me ek mayajaal tha to bahut bhayanakar tha mtlb ki unka astitva itna original tha ki sage emperor bhi sayad dhokha kha gya h...baki to waqt ke sath clear ho hi jaana h kyuki aaj bahut sare sawal is update se khade ho gye h jo waqt ke sath hi pta chlne wale h to intzaar rhega unke revelation ka...pr kabir ka iss sabme bahut loss ho gya h ...jinse usne itni mohabbat ki unhe safe rkhne ke liye usne unhe itna strong bnaya unhe paane ke liye. Itna kuchh kiya. Yaha tak ki jb wo waps is life me aaya to use waps aane ki itni khushi nhi thi jitni rati ko waps pakar aur usme hi maithili bhi jud gyi uske sath. Is waqt kabir ki halat bahut dayniy h aur shreya aur dina ko hi use sambhalna hoga ...💔😢😤😤😤😤😤
Wahi bilkul sahi waqt pr aakr kabir ne zina ko un hawasi darindo se bacha liya wo to zina ke sath aise khel rhe the jaise billi chuhe ka shikar krne se phle uske sath khelti h...pr jis trha se kabir ne unko mara usse itna to h ki agr kabir apna full potential use kre to heaven realm warriors ke normal warriors uske samne tik nhi paayenge. Wahi uske filhal ke cultivation ke mutabik bhi mid levek earth realm warrior to kuchh nhi h uske samne ..chliye dekhte h kya hota h...waise kabir ne bdhiya bussiness kiya zina ke sath aur jab zina ko pta chla ki kabir ne aakhir usse liya kya h to bechari samjh gyi ki kabir ne uska popat bna diya pr baad me kabir ke ye kehne ki jb unhe is key ke through koi tressure milega to wo usko sbhi me baant lega usse wo dukh to kam hua hoga zina ka😂😂chliye dekhte h kya hota h...aage ab...
Aaj ka update bahut hi sad ending de gya hm sabhi readers ko...😤😤😤
Anyway behtrin update...waiting for the next brother👏👏👏👏👏🗡💀
 
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aalu

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Tumhare baare me, main kah sakta hu ke tumhari maintality bahut strong hain aur tumne sayad sab sahi kaha hain par me ab bhi rati maithili ko zinda dekhna chahunga yarr. Jo dil se jud jaate hain unka dukh to hota hi hain.

Kabir kis situation me hain ise feel karo ek baar. Apne samne hi rati aur maithili ko marte dekh liya aur Kabir bebas hokar bas sab hota dekh raha tha kuch kar nahi paya. bahut takleef hoti hain jab ap yogya ho aur yogyata dikhane ka ek mauka bhi na mil paya ho.


Agar dukh dard hi dekhne hote to me ye story padhta hi nahi. Iske liye mere pass meri life me bahut hain aur sayad sabki life me koi na koi dukh hoga aalu bhai tumhare bhi life me hoga.
hope kee tumhari ikchha puri kar de jay bhai.... waise unhone akaran toh na kiya hoga... two most favoured charachter ko ek jhatke mein khatm kar dena...

and yeh ek story hain toh jyada attached mat ho jana... aur force mat karo writer ko kabhi bhi plot change karne ke liye... maine dekha hain tum bhi kahani likh rahe ho bhai... toh agar kisi aur ke kehne par agar change karna pare toh khud kee imagination ko wahee pe break lag jata hain... i hope you understood my point brother...
 

Lovekillsyou

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hope kee tumhari ikchha puri kar de jay bhai.... waise unhone akaran toh na kiya hoga... two most favoured charachter ko ek jhatke mein khatm kar dena...

and yeh ek story hain toh jyada attached mat ho jana... aur force mat karo writer ko kabhi bhi plot change karne ke liye... maine dekha hain tum bhi kahani likh rahe ho bhai... toh agar kisi aur ke kehne par agar change karna pare toh khud kee imagination ko wahee pe break lag jata hain... i hope you understood my point brother...
Hmmm mujhe pata hain par yahi weak point raha hain hamesha.
 

Neel Singh

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Kabir bebas ka bebas hi rah gaya. Hahahaha ab chahe sage emperor mare ya jiye. Now kibir's life is now full of alone. Ghanta jeeta Kabir. God ko jo Kabir se chahiye voh bhi mil jayega.

End of the story wahi purana life ko jine ka ghisa pita rule. Sab bhulkar new shuruwat karo. Lakin writer jaisi kahani likhna chahte hain likhe.


Bye and good night everyone.
 

Naina

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Jay Sutar ji mai aapki toh fan ho gayi hu. Aap ne itni achhi tarah se is novel ko likha hai mai bata bhi nahi sakti hu. Mai ab tak is story ki silent reader rahi hoon par ab tak jo safar mai ne Kabir aur uske doston ka dekha hai aisa kuch pehele kabhi read nahi kiya. Aaj mai ne yeh account banaya taki mai aap ko bata saku ke mai aap ki fan ho gayi hoon. Waise vj4u Ji ki attitude ke dono part nain11ster Ji ki stories aur unke waha jo ek reader hai Naina Ji unke reviews aur comments ki bhi mai fan hu kash vo bhi yaha hoti toh aur bhi maza aata
Kamal hai.. mere reviews ki fan bhi hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi.. :hmm2:
Jay Sutar sahab ye to badi ajab gajab baat huyi gawa...
 

Jay Sutar

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Kamal hai.. mere reviews ki fan bhi hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi.. :hmm2:
Jay Sutar sahab ye to badi ajab gajab baat huyi gawa...
Well Naina this world is full of possibilities that's why always expect the unexpected.
Peace✌️.
 
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