Lovekillsyou
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hope kee tumhari ikchha puri kar de jay bhai.... waise unhone akaran toh na kiya hoga... two most favoured charachter ko ek jhatke mein khatm kar dena...Tumhare baare me, main kah sakta hu ke tumhari maintality bahut strong hain aur tumne sayad sab sahi kaha hain par me ab bhi rati maithili ko zinda dekhna chahunga yarr. Jo dil se jud jaate hain unka dukh to hota hi hain.
Kabir kis situation me hain ise feel karo ek baar. Apne samne hi rati aur maithili ko marte dekh liya aur Kabir bebas hokar bas sab hota dekh raha tha kuch kar nahi paya. bahut takleef hoti hain jab ap yogya ho aur yogyata dikhane ka ek mauka bhi na mil paya ho.
Agar dukh dard hi dekhne hote to me ye story padhta hi nahi. Iske liye mere pass meri life me bahut hain aur sayad sabki life me koi na koi dukh hoga aalu bhai tumhare bhi life me hoga.
Hmmm mujhe pata hain par yahi weak point raha hain hamesha.hope kee tumhari ikchha puri kar de jay bhai.... waise unhone akaran toh na kiya hoga... two most favoured charachter ko ek jhatke mein khatm kar dena...
and yeh ek story hain toh jyada attached mat ho jana... aur force mat karo writer ko kabhi bhi plot change karne ke liye... maine dekha hain tum bhi kahani likh rahe ho bhai... toh agar kisi aur ke kehne par agar change karna pare toh khud kee imagination ko wahee pe break lag jata hain... i hope you understood my point brother...
Kamal hai.. mere reviews ki fan bhi hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi..Jay Sutar ji mai aapki toh fan ho gayi hu. Aap ne itni achhi tarah se is novel ko likha hai mai bata bhi nahi sakti hu. Mai ab tak is story ki silent reader rahi hoon par ab tak jo safar mai ne Kabir aur uske doston ka dekha hai aisa kuch pehele kabhi read nahi kiya. Aaj mai ne yeh account banaya taki mai aap ko bata saku ke mai aap ki fan ho gayi hoon. Waise vj4u Ji ki attitude ke dono part nain11ster Ji ki stories aur unke waha jo ek reader hai Naina Ji unke reviews aur comments ki bhi mai fan hu kash vo bhi yaha hoti toh aur bhi maza aata