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marvelous update Jay Sutar bhai, but bhai please add some romance because Kabir is tyerlessly defending his love interests and he deserves some romance.
dhundh ke sahare le ke akraman karna... kaafi prachalit chhadam tarika... kab aaye kab kaate pata hi na chala... akhir itni bhari sankhaya mein log bina kisi shor ke itna najdeek pahunche kaise... warriors lekin evil... kapro kee halat se lagti hain jaise saalo se yahee hain shayad kaidi... // zina kabir aur saathio ko bhaag jaane ko keh rahi hain... akhir in logo ka din bhi kitna kharab raha aaj ka... pehle zina marte marte bachi phir do aur maut hui ... aur ab doobara wo kabje mein hain...
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mo long issi shaksh ne inhe kaid se aazad kiya hain... itne saalo se ek prasidh vidyarthi ke roop mein inhi logo ke beech raha aur kisi ko bhanak tak na lagi... ek kaabil jasoos... jo kaam diya gaya usne pura kiya... moon sect waalo ka kabir se ek samjhauta hua tha... lekin aazadi ke liye wo kuchh bhi karne ko tayaar hain... shayad iss baat se moon sect kee regional chief ittefaq na rakhhe...agar dushamn ek ho toh dost hote hain... lekin yehan pe dost jaisa bartab katai na hain... aur wo log jo itne saalo se kaid hain wo bhala kaise apni azadi ko jaane de...
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kabir aur shreya ne larne kee kosis kee lekin wo sankhaya mein jyada hain aur kayee takatwar bhi... kabhi kabhi bhaag nikalna hi samajhdari hoti hain... lekin moon sect ke din aaj kharab hain shayad unhe jeeva kee kaid se hi mukti milne waali hain.. akhir luhan jo bhookhi baithi hain jitna mile utna kam agar yeh shab mil kar bhi usse rok nahin paye toh uski bhayawahta ka andaja lagaya jaa shakta hain...
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luhan ek power hungry monster ban chuki hain... blood the more the merrier... uski takato se lagta hain kee wo un moon sect waalo ko khatm kar degi akele hi... kya ho agar wo chekong secret mansion se bahar nikal aaye... akhir wo belagam bhaag rahi hain jo bhi raste mein aata hain usse khatm karte hue... toh wo jab bahri duniya mein aa jayegi tab kya tabahi machayegi... aur kabir aur saathi bhi iss expedition se bahar aa chuke hain toh half saint light le ke usse rokne ka plan bhi khatm hain abhi ke liye...
khair yeh gate pe chhoti brawl chalu hain.. yeh teeno deviya se wo akeli na sambhal rahi kya...
JAY SUTAR. Bhai Chikong Secret Mansion ab kaafi dangerous hogya hai LUHAN ki vjjh se . Pr Kabir k character ko dekh kr aisa nhi lagta ki vo Half-Saint light ko itna easily chhod dega .Chaye iske liye use baad me wapas aana pdde .
Nice updates
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Very nice update brother
Update boht mast hai waiting for next update bro
Super update hai Bhai
Wonderfull update
Nice update jay bhai
Waiting for next update bhai
Thank you Guys .fantastic update bhai
Wonderful update
superbb behatrin jabardast update bro
Mast update
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
awesome
Naina ji mai bhi aapke revo ka wait kar rahi hu.
Nice update
Thank you Guys .Awesome Update keep posting
Awesome update Jay Sutar ji.
Toh Zina par Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke warriors ne attack kiya tha. Vo bhi 70+ warriors ne. Kabir bhi unhe jaane de raha tha par kya kare Shreya ko bandi banana chahate the aur waha se nikalna chahte the.
Mujhe ab pura yakin hai yeh jo bhi Saint Lady hai vo Dina hi hai.
Waise yeh Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke warriors itne evil lag nahi rahe hai jitne Black Market ke evil warriors the. Agar Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke warriors ki jagah vo hote toh vo kab ke attack kar chuke hote. Mo long jaise baatchit kar ke matter ko handle nahi karte baith gaye hote.
Upar se Saint Lady ka order bhi yahi tha ke vo sirf Shreya ko bandi banaye aur Omen Ridge se nikal jaaye.
Is par ek sawal hai. Yeh Moon Worship Demonic Sect zarur mention hue Moon Commandery mei hoga. Toh vo Omen Ridge ke under nahi aati hai. Lag toh aisa hi raha hai.
Waise Shreya ne bhi Windy Soul-Breaking Formation ka use kar ke kaafi Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke warriors ko maar diya saath mei injured bhi kar diya. Par yeh Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke chief mei se ek kaafi strong nikla aur smart bhi.
Yeh Zina ke piche Gayi hui female warrior bhi kaafi strong lag rahi hai. After all usne Wings of Winds ke speed ko catch up kar liya tha.
Ek baat puchni reh gayi thi. Kya Mina jo Yunvu Commandery mei Waha ke King Pavilion ki chief thi vo abhi tak Moon Worship Demonic Sect nahi pohochi hai.
Par bechara Mo long Luhan ke haato mara gaya. Waise yeh Luhan agar in sab ke blood ko absorb ke ke Heaven Realm mei pohoch gayi toh vo aur bhi jyada powerful ho jayegi. Phir toh usse maarne ke liye Kabir ko bhi kaafi strong aur jaldi se Heaven Realm mei Breakthrough karna hoga. Par dekhne se toh aisa nahi lag raha hai ke yeh sab itni jaldi hoga. Kyo ki in sabhi ko Underwater Dragon Palace mei bhi jana hai.
Fabulous update
Nice one jay bhai
Very nice update
Bahut hi umda update
Maiend blowing fabulous update
Awesome fabulous update Bhai
Thank you Guys .Good update bhai
Awesome update Jay Sutar bhai.
Toh yeh Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke masters the. Well aisa hi kuch laga tha. Kyo ki Luhan hoti toh chikhne tak ka time nahi deti.
Waise agar yeh sab yaha se bhagna hi chahte the toh kaafi saare students the waha par baki Campus ke unmei se kuch top students ko hostage bana lete aur waha se nikalte vo unke liye achha hota.
Jaisa Martial Market School ka nature hai vo apne talented students ko zaroor bachane aata. Sirf Shreya ke hi piche lagne se unka yeh haal hua. Otherwise vo kuch top students ko hostage banate aur waha se nikal jaate.
Kabir aur Shreya ki combination bhi kaafi achhi thi. Waise Shreya mei subtile changes dikhne lag gaye hai.
Laga nahi tha ke itne waqt ke liye prison mei rehne ke baad bhi Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke masters itne powerful ho sakte hai. Specially unke bich jo chief hai vo.
Par ab unka kuch nahi ho sakta hai. Kyo ki ab Luhan waha par aa gayi hai.
Waise agar Kabir ko aise Shreya ki waist ko pakad kar waha se udte hue jaate koi aur students dekhte toh unka reaction zaroor dekhne layak ho jata. Mujhe toh lagta hai unhe Guihai ne dekhna chahiye tha. Vo zaroor apne baal hi noch leta yeh dekh kar. Aisi jalti na uski. Ohh soch kar bhi hasi aa rahi hai.
Waise yeh Luhan ab kaafi powerful ho gayi hai. Agar vo sach mei Heaven Realm mei breakthrough kar gayi toh kaafi powerful ban jayegi. Phir toh uski Half-Saint ki power aur bhi zyada activities ho jayegi. Wahi agar vo apne Half-Saint Realm ke cultivation ko phir se paa leti hai toh phir usse rokna kaafi hard ho jayega. Kabir ko jaldi se jaldi kuch karna hoga. Nahi toh uske haato se vo Half-Saint's Light chali jayegi.
Thank you buddyNice update bro bhut achi story hi es forum ki ab age dekhna hi ki Kabir age kya karta hi kese Half - Saint's light kese hasil kerta hi waiting for next update jay bhai
Nahi yaha par time ko mein ne certain hi rakha hai. Agar Uncertainty rakhta time mei toh yeh story fantasy kam aur si-fi zyada ho jaati.Jay Sutar bhai aap ne yeh toh bata diya ke Aakanksha Universe mei kaafi saare realms/Dimensions hai. Par kya unka time ek dusre ke se uncertain nahi hai. Agar hai toh dono realms/Dimensions mai kitna difference hai.