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UPDATE 172

Zina aur Dina Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke female warrior ke saah battle position mei the.

Is female warrior ki ek aankh par metal sheet lagi hui thi. Wahi uske face par bhi kaafi small scars the.

Yeh Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke hersey mei se ek top master thi.

Usne Zina ka pich Chikong Secret Mansion ke gate tak kiya tha par waha se bich mei hi Dina aur Yuyan ne rok diya.

Zina aur Dina uske saath kaafi waqt tak fight kar rahe the jab tak Kabir aur Shreya waha nahi aaye.

Dina us female warrior ko dekh kar smile karti hai aur kehte hai.

Dina-Mein ne suna hai tum last 6 years se issi Chikong Secret Mansion mei prison thi aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai tumhara cultivation Earth Realm ke Dawn Stage par hai lekin itne waqt se prisoner rehne ke baad tumhare paas kitni strength bachi hogi ? Agar mei tumhare jagah hoti toh yaha apna time waste nahi karti kisi tarah se mei yaha se kab ki bhaag gayi hoti.

Us female warrior ne phele Dina aur Yuyan phir Kabir aur Shreya ko dekha.

Agar vo kisi ek ke saath bhi fight karti hai toh baki ke 3 bhi uspar strike karenge.

Upar se uske samne jo students the unke aas koi na koi Genuine Martial Arm tha. Toh vo is sab ko dekh kar in mei se kisi ko bhi hara nahi sakti thi.

Usne Kabir aur Shreya ko gusse se dekha aur kaha.

"Tum dono chief ke haat se kaise bach kar bhaag nikale ?"

Kabir yeh fight bilkul bhi hone nahi dena chahta tha. After all yeh female warrior Earth Realm ke Dawn Stage par thi. Usse universal rule ke baremei pata tha ke Yuyan har baat mortals ke matter mei unki help nahi kar sakti hai aur Dina Zina aur Shreya aur vo khud bhi ab is female warrior ka match up nahi tha.

Kabir-Well yeh mujhe nahi pata hai. Kya pata vo kisi badi musibat mei phas gaye ho. Tumhe jaa kar unki help karni chahiye.

Us female warrior ko Kabir ki baato par koi bhi doubt nahi ho raha tha. Agar aisa nahi hota toh Kabir aur Shreya kabhi bhi chief ke haato se nikal kar bhaag nahi sakte the.

Tabhi usne kuch socha aur suddenly kaafi speed ke saath phir se Chikong Secret Mansion ke andar chali gayi.

Us female warrior ko aise jaldi mei jaate hue dekh kar Dina bhi kaafi surprise ho gayi. Vo Kabir ki taraf badhi aur usne Kabir se pucha.

Dina-Un sabhi hersey prisoners ka ka kya hua ?

Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mei hilaya aur kaha.

Kabir-Mujhe bhi nahi pata hai. Par yaha par 3 possibilities hi banti hai. 1st Black Market ke prisoners. 2nd Underground savage beasts. 3rd vo blood sucking monster aur mujhe lagta hai ke vo last option ke saath hi encounter hue honge.

Dina-Kyo ?

Kabir-Vo blood sucking monster humans aur savage beasts ke breath ko smell kar sakta hai. Jitney zyada log ek jagah jama honge utni hi strong breath hogi. Jo usse easily attract kar sakti hai.

Shreya-Lekin ab yeh sab kaafi dangerous ho gaya hai. Ab hame yaha se jaldi hi nikalna hoga.

Shreya ne yeh baat kaafi serious tone mei kahi thi. Is Chikong Secret Mansion mei aane ke baad un sabhi ke life mei kaafi changes aa gaye the.

Issi ke saath Kabir Shreya Dina aur Yuyan kaafi high speed ke saath waha se nikalne lag gaye.

Wahi yaha Chikong Secret Mansion ke andar 70 se zyada hersey warriors ki bodies bina blood ke niche ground par giri hui thi. Un warriors mei se sirf chief hi bhaag paya tha.

Itne warriors ka blood absorb karne ke baad Luhan ab Heaven Realm mei pohoch gayi thi. Uske black hairs ab puri tarah se red ho gaye the saath hi uski body mei se halki halki red light bhi nikal rahi thi. Vo slowly Chikong Secret Mansion ke gate ki taraf badhne lag gayi thi.

Omen Ridge ke deep mei ek kaafi gehri khayi bani hui thi jo thousands of meters long thi. Uske andar se poisonous miasma bhi nikal raha tha jo thousands of meters tak ke area ko polluted kar raha tha. Iske wahaj se waha par ek tarah ka dead zone ban gaya tha.

Teh Chikong Secret Mansion ka entrance tha.

Kabir aur baki sabhi abhi bhi waha se nikale the. Unke paas waqt hi nahi tha andar kya hua yeh batane ke liye.

Suddenly andar se kaafi wheezing sound aane lag gayi.

Tabhi niche se ek shaks jo ek lightning cloak mei tha vo jump ke saath bahar aata hai.

Yeh wahi Chief tha.

Usne apne Thunderbolt Sacred Mark ko activate kar diya tha. Uski Genuine Qi ab thunder ke nature mei uske body ke aaspas thi. Issi wajah se jab bhi vo apne Genuine Qi ko circulate karta tha tab tab vo thunderbolt ke power ko summon kar sakta tha.

Yeh Chief apne ek waqt mei Moon Commandery ke Moon Worship Demonic Sect ka high status chief raha tha aur Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke disciples ko train karta tha. Vo ek imposing person tha. Par ab vo ek difficult position mei phas gaya tha. Vo heavily injured tha aur kaafi heavy injuries bane hue the uske body ke upar.

Bahar aane ke baad bhi uske face par panic clearly dikh sakta tha. Bahar aate hi vo jaldi se jaldi east ki taraf bhagne lag gaya.

"Tumhe aisa lagta hai ke tum phir se Chikong Secret Mansion se bhaag paoge chief ?"

Yeh baat east side mei baithe Eastern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster ne kahi thi. Jab unhone dekha ke chief unki hi taraf bhagta hua aa raha hai tab unke face par ek cold smile aa gayi. Suddenly vo apni jagah par khade ho gaye aur unki taraf aa rahe chief ki taraf apne palm ko release kar diya.

Although chief Earth Realm ke Completion Stage warrior tha par Eastern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster ka cultivation Heaven Realm mei tha. Jaise hi vo palm strike chief ko laga waise hi vo niche gir gaya.

Baki ke 3 Deputy Headmasters bhi jab us chief ko capture karne ke liye aage badhne wale the tabhi niche crack ke andar se aur bhi strong chikh sabhi ko sunayi dene lag gayi. Even us chikh ground tak ko halka sa shake kar diya tha.

Ground ke niche se Spiritual Blood ke threads upar aane lag gaye aur ek jagah aa kar unhone blood cloud ko form kiya.

Us blood cloud mei long human shadow dikh rahi thi jo kaafi terrifying power ko emit kar rahi thi.

Us blood cloud ko achhe se observe karne ke baad usmei dikh sakta tha ke unke andar koi kaafi khubsurat ladki khadi hai. Us ladki ke hairs kaafi long aur blood se bhige hue the. Uske skin par bhi fresh blood dikh raha tha. Lekin uski skin bhi kisi crystal ki tarah clear dikh rahi thi. Usse dekhne se hi aisa lag raha tha ke uski skin kisi White Jade bani hui hai.

Is khubsurat ladki ko crack ke andar se bahar aate dekh kar sabhi Deputy Headmasters kaafi surprise ho gaye.

Northern Deputy Headmaster ne jaise us ladki ko dekha vo usse pehchan gaye.

"Luhan kya yeh tum ho ?"

Luhan ne is sawal ke answer mei Northern Deputy Headmaster ki taraf dekha aur blood cloud ke saath kaafi speed se usne unpar attack kar diya.

"Tumhara blood kaafi rich hai."

"Deputy Headmaster careful Luhan Half-Saint's Light se possess ho gayi hai aur ek blood sucking monster ban gayi hai."

Issi ke saath Western aur Southern Campuses ke Deputy Headmaster ne apne unique martial technique se Luhan par attack kar diya.

Heaven Realms warriors ki battle ki destructive power kaafi terrifying thi. Unke sword se nikli single Sword Breath bhi kisi bhi Earth Realm Warrior ko ek strike mei maar sakti thi.

Kabir ne sabhi ko apne Space Domain ke andar le liya aur unke aage khada ho gaya.

Kuch hi der mei yeh battle khatam ho gayi.

Luhan ke bich mei aa jane ke wajah se chief ne waqt dekh kar waha se apne aap ko nikal liya aur Moon Commandery ki taraf chala gaya. Wahi even sabhi Deputy Headmaster ke combine attack karne ke baad bhi Luhan waha se bhaag gayi thi. Vo sabhi bhi milkar usse rok nahi paaye. Iski wajah thi Half-Saint's Light.

Kyo ki Half-Saint's Light ka protection tha usse toh unke attacks usse kuch bhi nahi kar sakte the.

Kyo ki Luhan bhi ab Heaven Realm mei pohoch gayi thi toh uski speed kaafi zyada thi. Blood cloud ke saath dissolve ho kar vo Omen Ridge ke andar deep mei chali gayi.

Western aur Northern Campuses ke Deputy Headmasters Luhan ke piche chale gaye the wahi Eastern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster Martial Market School ko notify karne chale gaye ke Luhan ko khatam karne ke liye unhe aur bhi masters ki zarurat hai.

Wahi Southern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster Chikong Secret Mansion ke andar chale gaye free hue prisoners ko phir se prison ke andar dalne ke liye.

Students jo Chikong Secret Mansion ke andar chale gaye the vo bhi dheere dheere bhahar aa gaye the. Jaha aate waqt 42 students the waha par aab sirf 24 students hi bache hue the. Nearly un sabhi mei se half maare gaye the.

Kuch underground savage beast ka shikar hue toh kuch aapas mei hi fight kar baithe kisi treasure ke wajah se.

Saath hi Black Market ke spy ke baremei bhi pata chal gaya tha jisney Black Market ke warriors ko free kiya tha. Vo Northern Campus ka 2nd best student tha jiski rank Profound Board par 99th thi aur usse ek powerful prodigy ki tarah dekha jata tha.

Southern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster ne khud se uske sir ko cut kar ke usse maar diya tha. Wahi uske bachi hui body ko us hot miasma mei phek diya.

Martial Market School spies ke upar kisi bhi tarah ki mercy nahi dikhata tha. Ek baar unhe pata chal gaya ke koi spy hai unke bich toh uske milne ke baad usse wahi maar dete the.

Western Campus ke bhi 12 mei se 7 students survive kar gaye the jinmei Luo Sihan, Kabir, Shreya, Dina, Manzi, Si kong aur Zina the.

The Intermediate Relic Exploration Test is tarah se end ho gayi thi. Jo survive kar gaye the unke cultivation mei great improvment hui thi saath hi unhe large amount mei cultivation resource bhi mila tha.

Jab tak vo is resource ko absorb karte rahenge tab tak unka cultivation leaps and bound badhta rahega. Saath hi ek baar vo Internal School mei enter kar gaye tab vo quickly masters ban sakte the.

Upar se vo in sabhi ke bich best mei se best the. Kyo k ab vo is Intermediate Relic Test mei survive kar gaye the toh unhe special attension aur training milne wali thi.

Southern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster ke under sabhi students apne apne campuses chale gaye the.

Luo Sihan, Shreya, Dina aur Sikong yeh sabhi Earth Realm mei pohoch gaye the toh unhe Internal School mei se summon aa gaya tha. Unhe next 3 days ke andar nikalna tha Western Campus se.

Jab Kabir Dragon Martial Temple mei aaya tab uske kuch der baad Shreya aur Dina bhi waha aa gaye. Yuyan hamesha ki tarah Space and Time Spinel ke andar chali gayi thi.

Kabir Dina aur Shreya abhi bhi uske room mei apni apni jagah khade the bas Kabir window ke bahar dekh raha tha aur uski back un dono ki taraf thi.

Tabhi Dina ne aage aate hue Kabir ke samne aa kar khadi ho gayi. Uski aankho se aansu behte hue dekh sakti thi.

Dina ne ek gehri saans chodi aur kaha.

Dina-Kabir mein janti hu yeh tumhare liye kaafi easy nahi hone wala hai. Par reality yahi hai aur iske baremei tum pehle se jante the. Par hamara pyar toh real hai. Mana tab hamne iske baremei nahi bataya tha par ham dono bhi tumne pyar karne lag gayi thi. Tumhara hamare saath rehna hame achha lagta tha. Par ham tumhare aur Rati, Maithili ke bich nahi aana chahte the.

Yeh sunte hi Kabir ne apni aankhe close ki aur usmei se aur bhi aansu nikalne lag gaye the.

Dina-Kabir ham aisa bilkul nahi chahenge ke tum hame is liye accept karo kyo ki Rati aur Maithili ham mei basti hai. Agar tumhara dil is baat ke liye na mane toh bhi hame koi problem nahi hai par ham apne bachi hui life mei kisi aur ki bhi nahi honge. Tum ham dono ke haato mei Rati aur Maithili ki rings dekh rahe ho. Yeh proof hai ke ham 3no ek dusre se jude hue chahe jo ho jaaye ham tumhara wait karenge.

Kabir ne ek gehri saans li aur apni aanho ko open karte hue kaha.

Kabir-Mu.....Mujhe kuch waqt chahiye.

Kabir ki aawaz kaafi bhari ho gayi thi. Kya nahi kiya tha usne Rati Maithili aur khud ke destiny ko change karne ke liye par shayad Kabir yeh bhul gaya tha ke koi destiny ko control nahi kar sakta hai balki destiny hi usse control karte rehti hai.

Shreya ne jab Kabir ki baat sunni tab usne kaha.

Shreya-Kabir tumhe jitna waqt lena hai le lo par jaldi karna kahi aisa na ho jaaye ke tum sochte baitho aur mein kahi aur chali jau.

Kabir ki soul hi jaise Shreya ki yeh baat sunkar hil gayi. Wahi Shreya ne jab yeh baat kahi uske baad vo jaldi se uske room mei se nikal kar chali gayi.

Kabir abhi Shreya ne jo kaha uske baremei soch raha tha.

Dina ne uske kandhe par haat rakha aur kaha.

Dina-Kabir Qin Commandery King Sister Shreya ke liye partner dhundne wale hai kuch weeks mei. Agar usse pehle tumne kuch nahi kiya toh....

Dina bhi yeh keh kar waha se chali gayi aur yaha Kabir bas unki baato ke baremei sochta reh gaya.

Next day jinhe Internal School summon kiya gaya tha vo ek chariot mei baith gayi. Shreya aur Dina ki aankhe red ho gayi thi jo yeh point kar raha tha ke last night vo kaafi royi hui hai. Wahi unhone ek baar Dragon Martial Temple ki taraf dekha jaha Kabir khada tha aur unhe jaate hue dekh raha tha. Usse dekh kar unhone usse ek smile paas ki aur apne haat ko wave kiya. Yeh toh unhone bhi notice kiya hua tha ke uski aankhe bhi red ho gayi hai.


Par ab jo bhi karna tha Kabir ko hi karna tha. Unhone apne life ko completely Kabir ke haato chod diya tha.
Zabardast awesome interesting update
 

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Sirji,
Jitna mujhe yaad hai internal student bnne ke lie earth realm me breakthrough krna mandatory hai. And as kabir presently black realm me hai so I don't think ki wo abhi qualified hai internal student banne ke lie
Haa whi reason jo shayad me bhul gya tha🤔....tabhi uska selection nhi hua ....thnks for btane ke liye....ab mujhe lgta hai....Kabir ki life shayad yha se change ho jayegi....
 

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Jay Sutar ji kaafi achha update tha. Kabir ne kaafi achhe se us female warrior ko trick kiya aur khud Shreya Dina Zina aur Yuyan ke saath Chikong Secret Mansion se bahar aa gaya. Par bahar Luhan jo ab Heaven Realm mei pohoch gayi hai vo bhi bahar aa gayi hai. Saath mei uske baremei Sabhi campuses ko pata chal jayega. Par Kabir ke liye ab us Half-Saint's Light ko usse le pana shayad hard ho jaaye.

Baki ending kaafi emotional thi. Kabir invincible nahi hai. Vo abhi bhi mentally suffer kar raha hai. Ek toh past life ka trauma aur ab yeh jo Chikong Secret Mansion mei Rati aur Maithili ke saath hua vo yeh sab zarur usse mentally effect kar raha hai. Par usse ab strong hona hoga.

Luo Sihan, Shreya aur Dina ab Earth Realm mei Breakthrough kar gaye hai toh unhe Internal Student banaya gaya hai.

Bas Kabir aur uske friends hi reh gaye hai. Dekhte hai vo sabhi bhi kab breakthrough karte hai.
 

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UPDATE 172

Zina aur Dina Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke female warrior ke saah battle position mei the.

Is female warrior ki ek aankh par metal sheet lagi hui thi. Wahi uske face par bhi kaafi small scars the.

Yeh Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke hersey mei se ek top master thi.

Usne Zina ka pich Chikong Secret Mansion ke gate tak kiya tha par waha se bich mei hi Dina aur Yuyan ne rok diya.

Zina aur Dina uske saath kaafi waqt tak fight kar rahe the jab tak Kabir aur Shreya waha nahi aaye.

Dina us female warrior ko dekh kar smile karti hai aur kehte hai.

Dina-Mein ne suna hai tum last 6 years se issi Chikong Secret Mansion mei prison thi aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai tumhara cultivation Earth Realm ke Dawn Stage par hai lekin itne waqt se prisoner rehne ke baad tumhare paas kitni strength bachi hogi ? Agar mei tumhare jagah hoti toh yaha apna time waste nahi karti kisi tarah se mei yaha se kab ki bhaag gayi hoti.

Us female warrior ne phele Dina aur Yuyan phir Kabir aur Shreya ko dekha.

Agar vo kisi ek ke saath bhi fight karti hai toh baki ke 3 bhi uspar strike karenge.

Upar se uske samne jo students the unke aas koi na koi Genuine Martial Arm tha. Toh vo is sab ko dekh kar in mei se kisi ko bhi hara nahi sakti thi.

Usne Kabir aur Shreya ko gusse se dekha aur kaha.

"Tum dono chief ke haat se kaise bach kar bhaag nikale ?"

Kabir yeh fight bilkul bhi hone nahi dena chahta tha. After all yeh female warrior Earth Realm ke Dawn Stage par thi. Usse universal rule ke baremei pata tha ke Yuyan har baat mortals ke matter mei unki help nahi kar sakti hai aur Dina Zina aur Shreya aur vo khud bhi ab is female warrior ka match up nahi tha.

Kabir-Well yeh mujhe nahi pata hai. Kya pata vo kisi badi musibat mei phas gaye ho. Tumhe jaa kar unki help karni chahiye.

Us female warrior ko Kabir ki baato par koi bhi doubt nahi ho raha tha. Agar aisa nahi hota toh Kabir aur Shreya kabhi bhi chief ke haato se nikal kar bhaag nahi sakte the.

Tabhi usne kuch socha aur suddenly kaafi speed ke saath phir se Chikong Secret Mansion ke andar chali gayi.

Us female warrior ko aise jaldi mei jaate hue dekh kar Dina bhi kaafi surprise ho gayi. Vo Kabir ki taraf badhi aur usne Kabir se pucha.

Dina-Un sabhi hersey prisoners ka ka kya hua ?

Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mei hilaya aur kaha.

Kabir-Mujhe bhi nahi pata hai. Par yaha par 3 possibilities hi banti hai. 1st Black Market ke prisoners. 2nd Underground savage beasts. 3rd vo blood sucking monster aur mujhe lagta hai ke vo last option ke saath hi encounter hue honge.

Dina-Kyo ?

Kabir-Vo blood sucking monster humans aur savage beasts ke breath ko smell kar sakta hai. Jitney zyada log ek jagah jama honge utni hi strong breath hogi. Jo usse easily attract kar sakti hai.

Shreya-Lekin ab yeh sab kaafi dangerous ho gaya hai. Ab hame yaha se jaldi hi nikalna hoga.

Shreya ne yeh baat kaafi serious tone mei kahi thi. Is Chikong Secret Mansion mei aane ke baad un sabhi ke life mei kaafi changes aa gaye the.

Issi ke saath Kabir Shreya Dina aur Yuyan kaafi high speed ke saath waha se nikalne lag gaye.

Wahi yaha Chikong Secret Mansion ke andar 70 se zyada hersey warriors ki bodies bina blood ke niche ground par giri hui thi. Un warriors mei se sirf chief hi bhaag paya tha.

Itne warriors ka blood absorb karne ke baad Luhan ab Heaven Realm mei pohoch gayi thi. Uske black hairs ab puri tarah se red ho gaye the saath hi uski body mei se halki halki red light bhi nikal rahi thi. Vo slowly Chikong Secret Mansion ke gate ki taraf badhne lag gayi thi.

Omen Ridge ke deep mei ek kaafi gehri khayi bani hui thi jo thousands of meters long thi. Uske andar se poisonous miasma bhi nikal raha tha jo thousands of meters tak ke area ko polluted kar raha tha. Iske wahaj se waha par ek tarah ka dead zone ban gaya tha.

Teh Chikong Secret Mansion ka entrance tha.

Kabir aur baki sabhi abhi bhi waha se nikale the. Unke paas waqt hi nahi tha andar kya hua yeh batane ke liye.

Suddenly andar se kaafi wheezing sound aane lag gayi.

Tabhi niche se ek shaks jo ek lightning cloak mei tha vo jump ke saath bahar aata hai.

Yeh wahi Chief tha.

Usne apne Thunderbolt Sacred Mark ko activate kar diya tha. Uski Genuine Qi ab thunder ke nature mei uske body ke aaspas thi. Issi wajah se jab bhi vo apne Genuine Qi ko circulate karta tha tab tab vo thunderbolt ke power ko summon kar sakta tha.

Yeh Chief apne ek waqt mei Moon Commandery ke Moon Worship Demonic Sect ka high status chief raha tha aur Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke disciples ko train karta tha. Vo ek imposing person tha. Par ab vo ek difficult position mei phas gaya tha. Vo heavily injured tha aur kaafi heavy injuries bane hue the uske body ke upar.

Bahar aane ke baad bhi uske face par panic clearly dikh sakta tha. Bahar aate hi vo jaldi se jaldi east ki taraf bhagne lag gaya.

"Tumhe aisa lagta hai ke tum phir se Chikong Secret Mansion se bhaag paoge chief ?"

Yeh baat east side mei baithe Eastern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster ne kahi thi. Jab unhone dekha ke chief unki hi taraf bhagta hua aa raha hai tab unke face par ek cold smile aa gayi. Suddenly vo apni jagah par khade ho gaye aur unki taraf aa rahe chief ki taraf apne palm ko release kar diya.

Although chief Earth Realm ke Completion Stage warrior tha par Eastern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster ka cultivation Heaven Realm mei tha. Jaise hi vo palm strike chief ko laga waise hi vo niche gir gaya.

Baki ke 3 Deputy Headmasters bhi jab us chief ko capture karne ke liye aage badhne wale the tabhi niche crack ke andar se aur bhi strong chikh sabhi ko sunayi dene lag gayi. Even us chikh ground tak ko halka sa shake kar diya tha.

Ground ke niche se Spiritual Blood ke threads upar aane lag gaye aur ek jagah aa kar unhone blood cloud ko form kiya.

Us blood cloud mei long human shadow dikh rahi thi jo kaafi terrifying power ko emit kar rahi thi.

Us blood cloud ko achhe se observe karne ke baad usmei dikh sakta tha ke unke andar koi kaafi khubsurat ladki khadi hai. Us ladki ke hairs kaafi long aur blood se bhige hue the. Uske skin par bhi fresh blood dikh raha tha. Lekin uski skin bhi kisi crystal ki tarah clear dikh rahi thi. Usse dekhne se hi aisa lag raha tha ke uski skin kisi White Jade bani hui hai.

Is khubsurat ladki ko crack ke andar se bahar aate dekh kar sabhi Deputy Headmasters kaafi surprise ho gaye.

Northern Deputy Headmaster ne jaise us ladki ko dekha vo usse pehchan gaye.

"Luhan kya yeh tum ho ?"

Luhan ne is sawal ke answer mei Northern Deputy Headmaster ki taraf dekha aur blood cloud ke saath kaafi speed se usne unpar attack kar diya.

"Tumhara blood kaafi rich hai."

"Deputy Headmaster careful Luhan Half-Saint's Light se possess ho gayi hai aur ek blood sucking monster ban gayi hai."

Issi ke saath Western aur Southern Campuses ke Deputy Headmaster ne apne unique martial technique se Luhan par attack kar diya.

Heaven Realms warriors ki battle ki destructive power kaafi terrifying thi. Unke sword se nikli single Sword Breath bhi kisi bhi Earth Realm Warrior ko ek strike mei maar sakti thi.

Kabir ne sabhi ko apne Space Domain ke andar le liya aur unke aage khada ho gaya.

Kuch hi der mei yeh battle khatam ho gayi.

Luhan ke bich mei aa jane ke wajah se chief ne waqt dekh kar waha se apne aap ko nikal liya aur Moon Commandery ki taraf chala gaya. Wahi even sabhi Deputy Headmaster ke combine attack karne ke baad bhi Luhan waha se bhaag gayi thi. Vo sabhi bhi milkar usse rok nahi paaye. Iski wajah thi Half-Saint's Light.

Kyo ki Half-Saint's Light ka protection tha usse toh unke attacks usse kuch bhi nahi kar sakte the.

Kyo ki Luhan bhi ab Heaven Realm mei pohoch gayi thi toh uski speed kaafi zyada thi. Blood cloud ke saath dissolve ho kar vo Omen Ridge ke andar deep mei chali gayi.

Western aur Northern Campuses ke Deputy Headmasters Luhan ke piche chale gaye the wahi Eastern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster Martial Market School ko notify karne chale gaye ke Luhan ko khatam karne ke liye unhe aur bhi masters ki zarurat hai.

Wahi Southern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster Chikong Secret Mansion ke andar chale gaye free hue prisoners ko phir se prison ke andar dalne ke liye.

Students jo Chikong Secret Mansion ke andar chale gaye the vo bhi dheere dheere bhahar aa gaye the. Jaha aate waqt 42 students the waha par aab sirf 24 students hi bache hue the. Nearly un sabhi mei se half maare gaye the.

Kuch underground savage beast ka shikar hue toh kuch aapas mei hi fight kar baithe kisi treasure ke wajah se.

Saath hi Black Market ke spy ke baremei bhi pata chal gaya tha jisney Black Market ke warriors ko free kiya tha. Vo Northern Campus ka 2nd best student tha jiski rank Profound Board par 99th thi aur usse ek powerful prodigy ki tarah dekha jata tha.

Southern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster ne khud se uske sir ko cut kar ke usse maar diya tha. Wahi uske bachi hui body ko us hot miasma mei phek diya.

Martial Market School spies ke upar kisi bhi tarah ki mercy nahi dikhata tha. Ek baar unhe pata chal gaya ke koi spy hai unke bich toh uske milne ke baad usse wahi maar dete the.

Western Campus ke bhi 12 mei se 7 students survive kar gaye the jinmei Luo Sihan, Kabir, Shreya, Dina, Manzi, Si kong aur Zina the.

The Intermediate Relic Exploration Test is tarah se end ho gayi thi. Jo survive kar gaye the unke cultivation mei great improvment hui thi saath hi unhe large amount mei cultivation resource bhi mila tha.

Jab tak vo is resource ko absorb karte rahenge tab tak unka cultivation leaps and bound badhta rahega. Saath hi ek baar vo Internal School mei enter kar gaye tab vo quickly masters ban sakte the.

Upar se vo in sabhi ke bich best mei se best the. Kyo k ab vo is Intermediate Relic Test mei survive kar gaye the toh unhe special attension aur training milne wali thi.

Southern Campus ke Deputy Headmaster ke under sabhi students apne apne campuses chale gaye the.

Luo Sihan, Shreya, Dina aur Sikong yeh sabhi Earth Realm mei pohoch gaye the toh unhe Internal School mei se summon aa gaya tha. Unhe next 3 days ke andar nikalna tha Western Campus se.

Jab Kabir Dragon Martial Temple mei aaya tab uske kuch der baad Shreya aur Dina bhi waha aa gaye. Yuyan hamesha ki tarah Space and Time Spinel ke andar chali gayi thi.

Kabir Dina aur Shreya abhi bhi uske room mei apni apni jagah khade the bas Kabir window ke bahar dekh raha tha aur uski back un dono ki taraf thi.

Tabhi Dina ne aage aate hue Kabir ke samne aa kar khadi ho gayi. Uski aankho se aansu behte hue dekh sakti thi.

Dina ne ek gehri saans chodi aur kaha.

Dina-Kabir mein janti hu yeh tumhare liye kaafi easy nahi hone wala hai. Par reality yahi hai aur iske baremei tum pehle se jante the. Par hamara pyar toh real hai. Mana tab hamne iske baremei nahi bataya tha par ham dono bhi tumne pyar karne lag gayi thi. Tumhara hamare saath rehna hame achha lagta tha. Par ham tumhare aur Rati, Maithili ke bich nahi aana chahte the.

Yeh sunte hi Kabir ne apni aankhe close ki aur usmei se aur bhi aansu nikalne lag gaye the.

Dina-Kabir ham aisa bilkul nahi chahenge ke tum hame is liye accept karo kyo ki Rati aur Maithili ham mei basti hai. Agar tumhara dil is baat ke liye na mane toh bhi hame koi problem nahi hai par ham apne bachi hui life mei kisi aur ki bhi nahi honge. Tum ham dono ke haato mei Rati aur Maithili ki rings dekh rahe ho. Yeh proof hai ke ham 3no ek dusre se jude hue chahe jo ho jaaye ham tumhara wait karenge.

Kabir ne ek gehri saans li aur apni aanho ko open karte hue kaha.

Kabir-Mu.....Mujhe kuch waqt chahiye.

Kabir ki aawaz kaafi bhari ho gayi thi. Kya nahi kiya tha usne Rati Maithili aur khud ke destiny ko change karne ke liye par shayad Kabir yeh bhul gaya tha ke koi destiny ko control nahi kar sakta hai balki destiny hi usse control karte rehti hai.

Shreya ne jab Kabir ki baat sunni tab usne kaha.

Shreya-Kabir tumhe jitna waqt lena hai le lo par jaldi karna kahi aisa na ho jaaye ke tum sochte baitho aur mein kahi aur chali jau.

Kabir ki soul hi jaise Shreya ki yeh baat sunkar hil gayi. Wahi Shreya ne jab yeh baat kahi uske baad vo jaldi se uske room mei se nikal kar chali gayi.

Kabir abhi Shreya ne jo kaha uske baremei soch raha tha.

Dina ne uske kandhe par haat rakha aur kaha.

Dina-Kabir Qin Commandery King Sister Shreya ke liye partner dhundne wale hai kuch weeks mei. Agar usse pehle tumne kuch nahi kiya toh....

Dina bhi yeh keh kar waha se chali gayi aur yaha Kabir bas unki baato ke baremei sochta reh gaya.

Next day jinhe Internal School summon kiya gaya tha vo ek chariot mei baith gayi. Shreya aur Dina ki aankhe red ho gayi thi jo yeh point kar raha tha ke last night vo kaafi royi hui hai. Wahi unhone ek baar Dragon Martial Temple ki taraf dekha jaha Kabir khada tha aur unhe jaate hue dekh raha tha. Usse dekh kar unhone usse ek smile paas ki aur apne haat ko wave kiya. Yeh toh unhone bhi notice kiya hua tha ke uski aankhe bhi red ho gayi hai.

Par ab jo bhi karna tha Kabir ko hi karna tha. Unhone apne life ko completely Kabir ke haato chod diya tha.
Fantastic update
 

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moon sect kee warrior kee halat dekh ke lagta hain kaafi laraiya dekhi hain us bachi hui ek aankh ne... anubhaw tajurba lekin irada galat... Dina ne daraya hi sahi lekin uske liye fayde kee baat keh de..... ek taraf jahan wo in teeno kee bheer dekh ke dar rahi hain wahee kabir ulta usse bhirna nahin chahta hain... bas dar ka khel jo pehle dar gaya wo sala mar gaya....

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luhan ka dar ab iss chekon secret mansion mein failne wala hain... ek wakt tha the great dragon ka ab shayad yeh haunt karegi... lekin kisi na kisi ko rokne toh aana hi parega aur kabir aur saathio kee jimmewari bhi banti hain school ko agah karne kee in halato se.... lekin der ho gayee aisa prateet hota hain... luhan kee shaktiya bari teji se badh rahi hain abhi heaven realm aur agar aise hi chalta raha toh wo wakt door nahin kee wo shaitan phir se half saint ya usse bhi oopar tak pahunch jaye... phir kaun rokega usse...

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samna hua bhi heaven realm warriors se lekin natija nill batte sannata wo bas usse kuchh pal tak hatahat kar sake lekin kaabu nahin... takat ka khel aur jyada takat ka nasha kya mil raha hain inhe... apni ko hi maar kar apne hi haatho se... kuchh pal pehle dost the aur kuchh chhan baad uski hi maut ke jimmedar... kabir aur uske dost aisi jagah se aaye hain jahan pe haivan nahin baste insan baste hain isliye insaniyat baaki hain lekin yehan pe kab kaun kidhar se waar kar de pata nahin... dost kee shakal mein bheriye ghumte hain...

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jo abhi saath hain wo bas jaroorat ke yaar hain zina hi sahi le ke toh maut ka paigam hi aayee thee lekin matlab ne ek saath bandh diya baad mein varun se uski dosti hui toh saath rahne kee wajah... lekin kya pata swabhaw toh uska bhi hinsak aur matlab parasat hee hain... akhir sabse behtar hone kee hor jo lagi hain... khud ko kaabil bana ke nahin toh jo kaabil hain usse niche gira ke...

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sabne kuchh paya ,, kabir bhi ussi chah mein gaya tha kuchh paya lekin uska mol kya jab anmol hi kho diya... rati aur maithali bhale hi aatma ne jagah badal lee hain lekin yaade toh ussi chehre se juri thee,, hum devta kee bhi pooja karte haintoh ek shakl de kar... uss nirankaari ko bhi ek murat ke hi roop mein mante hain... toh phir jis murat se issne pyar kiya tha wo toh nast ho gaya... kisi naye murat se pyar kaise kar shakta hain itni jaldi... bhale hi dina aur shreya isse pyar karti ho unme basi rati aur maithali kee yaado kee wajah se lekin kabir kee wo yaade toh inke saath na thee... yeh toh naye dost the naye mayne the inke iske jeevan mein jo ab badal diye hain uss rachaita ne... dekhte hain halat aur dil kis taraf murte hain... akhir dono larkio ne jaate jaate ultimatum bhi de gayee...

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lovely and emotional update...
 
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