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Yeh toh hai bhai. Waise bhi writer bhai ne pehle hi keh diya tha ke sex jaisa context vo nahi likh sakte hai.Bhai ap bhut mast likhte ho yha xforum par kuch stories bhut achi h jinme se ek apki bi h warna to lagbhag me sex hi sex h na koi story na kuch bhai ap aise hi likhte rho
Yeah baat aapne sahi kahi hai. Isse story ka suspense chala jaata hai. Yeh original story mein ne read ki hui hai. Writer bhai ne kafi saare minor changes kiye hue hai. Jisse yahi lag raha hai ke yeh story aage jaa kar kafi thrilling honewali hai.Readers Bhai logo
kahani jaisi chal rahi hai chalne do
aage kya hoga update by update pta chalta rahega
kux jada janna hai to mai Bata deta hu
hero ko heroin mil jaygi
villens sabhi mar jayenge
aur kahani end ho jaygi
isliye puchna hai pucho jo clear nahi hai
jada aage ka jaanne ki kosish mat karo
Mast update hai.
Kabir ander baate kar rha bahar maithali bichari wait kr rhi hai..??
Amazing update sir ji
Or sir ye 2nd phase kb se suru hoga??
Awesome update
very nice update dear.
Awesome update
Jabardasttt update bhai
Aaj to mega update dedete bhai bdi muskil se 2 din nikalte h
Awesome updatw
Jabardast update brother. Ekdam dhasu h. Akhirkar Kabir ne apni jaan bachane ka upay dhundh hi liya h agar wo alchemy association join kar leta h to aage bahut se chiz m madad milegi. Bhai ek baat h aap kamal ka likhte ho to story to padh raha hu but ye purple mint grass, refining, aur kya kya kuch palle nahi padta. But still I am a fan. Pls post more updates. Ek aur request ye villian type ka koii chiz v introduce kijiyega ya av aise hi chalega .
Eagerly waiting for next update brother
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Ni
Nice update
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Amazing brilliant update mja aagya Dekh Kar jb ye senior BN jayega TB hungama Hoga osian city main
THANKS GUYS ?.Nice one
Kya baat hai bro is update me power of the knowledge dikhaya gya hai I like very much the thought, dedication and the concept
waiting...
Nice update bhai
very very nice update bhai maza aa gya.. . Dil karta hai ki update khtam na Ho.. Apke agle update ka besabre se intezar rehega
Nice update
Bhai ji kamal ka update hai lage raho
Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Gajb k updt....gajab ki story....gajab ki script...maja aa gya ..kafi time baad aisi story padh rh hu...
Itni gajab ki story agar aap puri ni kar paye to aap khud apni writing skills ke satt nyay nahi kr paoge...
Big Fan of ur story..
THANKS GUYS ?.Awesome update bhai keep posting
Bro
in my opinion
1_ imagination is owesome
2_ every word is clear and unique
3_ every update is very good but small
4_ overall story ? of ?
5_ last kahani ko suspense me rahne do
tabhi kahani ka mazaa hai
yu aage kya hoga ye batakar kahani ka mazaa kharab na karo
jaise bhi chal rahi hai chalne do
Readers Bhai logo
kahani jaisi chal rahi hai chalne do
aage kya hoga update by update pta chalta rahega
kux jada janna hai to mai Bata deta hu
hero ko heroin mil jaygi
villens sabhi mar jayenge
aur kahani end ho jaygi
isliye puchna hai pucho jo clear nahi hai
jada aage ka jaanne ki kosish mat karo
Right bro
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Awsome Bhai
Bhai ap bhut mast likhte ho yha xforum par kuch stories bhut achi h jinme se ek apki bi h warna to lagbhag me sex hi sex h na koi story na kuch bhai ap aise hi likhte rho
Sex se story ki maa bahan ho jati hai story to esi honi chahiye jo padhne valo ko aapni taraf khich ke rakhe nahi ki bas lust ke liye
Wow maza aa gaya yr
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
THANKS GUYS ?.To yaha se alchemist association ka utthan shuru hogaya aur kabeer ko ek powerful aur bharosemand saathi mil gaya.
Yeh toh hai bhai. Waise bhi writer bhai ne pehle hi keh diya tha ke sex jaisa context vo nahi likh sakte hai.
Yeah baat aapne sahi kahi hai. Isse story ka suspense chala jaata hai. Yeh original story mein ne read ki hui hai. Writer bhai ne kafi saare minor changes kiye hue hai. Jisse yahi lag raha hai ke yeh story aage jaa kar kafi thrilling honewali hai.
Nice update ?
Mast update bro
Par I think ab story mein kuch twist and turns bhi laaye jaayein
THANKS GUYS ?.Bhai waiting for next update