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Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
for completing 1400+ pages on your thread brother
Very nice update bhai
Nice update bhai
Congratulations for complete 1400 pages
Shandaar Jabardust update Bhai
Nice update
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Thank you Guys .Fantastic update
Aik Writer k leye Jitni tareef achi hoti hai us sy zada Tankeed achi hoti hy jo usy btati hai k abi wo perfect nahi huwa
Ye update be acha tha par Boht acha nahi
Zada tar wohi batyn theen jo hamyn pehly sy pata hain
Mery hyal mai aisi batoon par zada time na zaya kiya jay or Story K Main Hero par Focus kiya jay
Sorry bhai Agar meri baat buri lagi ho to
Mazrat
Congratulations for completing 1400 pages
Boht umdaaaa behtreen Kamal ka update the
for complete 1400 pages
Zabardast Update Bhai
congratulations for 14th century Jay Sutar bhai...
Awesome update bro
superbb updatw bro
congrets for 1400 pages bro
Yes app shi kh rhe hi Jay bhai intjar rhega update kaThank you buddy .
Yeh toh har teacher ka point of view hota hai. Agar vo apne students ki care karta ho toh vo unhe sahi direction hi dega. Yaha baat bhi wahi hai Deputy Headmaster ko lagta hai ke Kabir mei potential hai top master hone ki but agar vo aise hi bina ruke breakthrough karta rahega toh uska foundation weak hoga. Par bechari Deputy Headmaster unhe pata hi nahi hai ke Kabir ke paas Space and Time Spinel hai.
Well ab Kabir ki friends Earth Realm masters ho gaye hai. Toh uske sir par se Black Market aur Hades Department ka tension kuch kam ho jayega. Kyo ki Earth Realm masters ko itne easily nahi maar sakta hai koi. Upar se Martial Market School ke top students hai toh unhe school bhi kuch nahi hone dega. Ab Kabir achhe se apni praci karega. Khud bhi shayad jaldi Earth Realm mei Breakthrough kar le.
waise kabir ne kya bataya aur unke dosto ka reaction kaisa raha... akhir yeh koi mamuli baate toh nahin... akhir do insan hi gayab ho gaye puff jaise kabhi the hi nahin koi nammonishan bhi nahin.... na hi unke sareer ka hi... jaise rati aur maithali ne kabhi paida hi na liya tha... aur unke pita kya wo bhi aise hi sambhal jayenge... akhir shreya aur dina unki betiya nahin hain iss janm mein kisi aur kee santane hain kya unka dukh wo kaise samjhenge...
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shreya aur dina ko miss kar raha hain... lekin jo hamesha ke liye chali gayee unki yaado ko bhula baitha.. kahir jaane waale chale gaye jo jinda hain unhe toh nahin maar shakte... //// aisa lag raha hain sabhi ne kabir ko pechhe chhor ke aage badh gaye... lekin yeh kabir ne chuna hain akhir sabhi ke saath hote hue bhi wo akela hee toh hain... jin yaado ke saharo hajaro warsho tak jinda raha wo waps mili bhi toh aadhi adhuri... sage emperor ne ek jhatke de diye kee tayaari mein teji lao tumhe ab aur jyada wakt nahin milega..
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agar sage emperor ne kabir ko mehsoos kar hi liya hain toh phir usne isse chhora kyun akhir wo samay hi kyun dena chahta hain apne maut ke saman ko tayaar hone ke liye... wo sabhi ko khatm bhi kar shakta tha ya phir jo purvanihit hain wahee kar raha hain... agar parinam hi pata hain toh phir dar kaisa saari mashakkat toh bas kabir ko karni hain usse harane ke liye akhir haar tay hi hain uski....
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black ultimate realm kitabo ke anusar kisi ne usse prapt nahin kiya hain... nirasha aisi stithi mein hona lajmi hain... manshik dwando se ghira hain wo ek toh apno ke khone ka dard aur phir ek mukam paane kee jaddojeh aksar ekagrata aur aatmvishwas dagmagane lagta hain... lekin jo kisi ne na kiya wahee pana hee toh hoga kyunki kisi ne bhi sage emperor ko nahin haraya hain aur yeh harna chahta hain... toh abhutpurva karya karne honge...
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foundation strong karna hoga yaani aur jyada samay... lekin headmaster ko yeh toh nahin pata na kee kabir baakio se teen guna jyada samay de raha hain apne space and time spinel ke andar... akhir 6 mahine hain toh laghbhag dedh-saal ke around toh usne samay diye hee hain... aur agar aur jyada majboot hona hain yaani internal campus mein jaane mein aur deri yaani usse abhi idhar aur rahna hoga...
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deputy headmaster ne apni vyatha hi keh sunai kabir ko jo galtiya unhone kee wo nahin chahte hain kee kabir wahee kare... the three devils ke internal campus mein jaane ke baad western campus ka top prodigy abhi kabir hain... toh jahir hain idhar uska status kaafi badh gaya hain... aur abhi idhar 1 saal wo vyatiti karne wala hain... ab uske idhar 1 saal mein internal campus mein uske dosto aur so called fiances ke saath kya badlaw hota hain yeh toh udhar jaane ke baad hi maloom chalega...
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waise zina nahin gayee usse bhi toh chali jana chahiye tha uski cultivation technique toh fast thee khair naye log aa gaye ek purane chehra bhi mila.. dekhte hain yehan se kabir kee life aur uska dil kidhar le jata hain...
great narration.... jitne aage jaate hain aur jaane kee ikchha hoti hain aage kyka hoga... tough road ahead...
Deputy head master ki baat sunkr Kabir or ek saal black relm me hold rakhna chahta hai yah Uske liye bhi sahi hoga master ne jo bhi btaya vo Kabir pahle se hi janta hai pr samne se kah nhi sakta Shreya Dina ko bhi Lagta hai Kabir abhi unke social life ko handle nhi kr sakta isliye Unhone nhi btaya to Ab zina or tong Bhi dragon palace me move kr rhe hai or master ne Kabir ko unka dhyan rakhne guide karne kaha hai... Kabir ne 10000 varso me kon aisa hai Jisne black relm ke aage break through kiya hai uski ek pustak dekhta hai to uska thoda confidence kam hone lagta hai pr vah apni soch ko dusri disha deta hai to uska confidence vapas aa jata hai mtlb banda self motivated hai deputy head master ne ek vyakti ka example diya ki usne kya or kaise kiya pr last me uske sath kya hua jisse Kabir ne bhi outside world ke 1 sal or Isi relm me practice karne ka plan bnaya hai to Kabir ne 15 Three leaf holy clover ko bhi refine kr liya hai jisse uski power or badh gyi hai uski qi pool ab qi lake ban gyi hai jo ab 60%full Ho gyi hai... Kabir se master ko ummid hai ki Vo 1st no me aayega ek saal me profound board me unhone hina or han tiny world ke logo ke bare me btaya jinhe Kabir janta hai... Unhone Luo Sihan ka secret bhi btaya ki kaise or kab Usne fight ki jisse vah jit kr 2nd rank me pahuch chuki hai or yah bhi ki Shreya or Dina ne bhi fight ki thi pr unka result nhi pta chla unhe...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Bhai great update
Great going from here it is interesting to see how Kabir will transform himself and get sherya and dinaa
Waiting for next
Thanks Guys .Fantastic update
Bas chota tha I hope ki aage long update mile
Kaafi achha update tha Jay Sutar bhai. Kaafi saare powerhouse 3 Female Devils ke piche hai. Shreya ke uncle hi Martial Market School ke head hai yeh kaafi shocking tha. I mean vo khud ek Superior Commandery ki Princess thi aur uske mother ki family bhi kaafi strong bhi lag rahi hai.
Deputy Headmaster ka tension bhi apni jagah sahi hai. Agar cultivation mei foundation weak hogi toh aage cultivator badh hi nahi sakta hai.
Well ab Kabir Western Campus mei akela reh gaya hai. Par shayad vo bhi jaldi hi Earth Realm mei breakthrough kar ke apne sabhi friends ke paas pohoch jayega. After all vo an Space and Time Spinel ke andar vo 3 years guzarne wala hai. Itna time sach mei uske liye kaafi hai apne foundation ko strong banane ke liye.
Adios.
Jay Sutar ji kaafi achha update tha. Small tha but informative tha. Toh tino Female Devils big powerhouses se belong karti hai. Aise mei shayad hi koi hoga jo inhe chedna chahega.
Deputy Headmaster ka Kabir ke liye care karna bhi sahi tha. After all Kabir jaisa genius kaafi years mei ek baar hi aata hai.
Waise yeh bhi sahi hai ke abhi ki current generation Western Campus ki pride hai. Aise aise Geniuses aaye hue hai waha par ke ek se badh kar ek hai. Specially Kabir aur uska group.
Yuntai Suzerain ke master shayad Jeet Han aur Hina par utna focus na deta ho par Deputy Headmaster ki nazar unpar pad gayi hai. Aise mei vo shant nahi baithegi. Zarur kuch na kuch karegi ke vo sabhi bhi Kabir ke saath phir se connect ho jaaye.
Yeh baat toh hai ke Han ka talent kaafi achha hai kya pata shayad is Tian se bhi achha ho. Bas ab dekhna yeh hai ke jab yeh sabhi milenge tab kya dhamal karenge.
Thank you buddy .Super duper extraordinary update
Ok bhai waitingUpdate 10-10:30 tak aayega.
Peace ✌.