Fantasy Gods and Demons

[Lovekillsyou]

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[Jay Sutar]

Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai

Bahut he lajawad updte tha bhai maza aa gya padh kr bs ek dukh h filght complete ho jati to accha hota bt koi na hm wait kr lege
had h yr abhi yaad aaya aaj to Friday h or update to mondey ko aayega pure 71 ghante had na ho rahi

Super update dear bro

Wah jay bhai kya Update dia hi
Nice update waiting for
Next update bhai

Superb Update Bhai...

Fantastic update bhai

Behtareen update bhai, wakai mja aa gya.
Guihai to gyo. Bahut uchal rha tha. Shreya ko Kabir ki puri baat sunani chahiye thi aisi galatfahmi me rishte kharab ho jate hai.

Kya jabardast update tha bhai......
Ek mega update toh ab banta hai Jay bhai kyuki kafi din ho gaye hain mega update diye huye.

Thank you Guys .

Well rahi baat mega update ki toh aise hi thodi na de sakta hu. Uske liye kuch special hona chahiye na. But kya pata kuch updates mei bhi shayad mil jaaye.

 

[Jay Sutar]

Super update hai Bhai

Awesome Update

Fantastic update

Nice One

Mast behtreen update

bahut bahut hi sandar update hai bhai

Bhai level update yaar
Very nice

Fantastic mind blowing update

Thank you Guys .

 

[Jay Sutar]

So this time Kabir dusted off the arrogant Guihai by his palm strike, I like this update, at least Kabir has started treatment of those who wants to diminish him. Thanks Jay Sutar bhai for this amazing update.



Kabir and his Elephant stance

Thank you buddy .

Well yes he beat the shit out of that Guihai. But yeh yahi nahi rukne wala hai.

And yes I like that pic though.

 

[Jay Sutar]

sword integrated to the mind hi toh pehla kadam hain telekinesis ka akhir iss kriya mein toh shab deemag kee ikchha shakti pe nirbhar karti hain... lekin yeh kriya sirf sword ke saath thee,, badhti takat aur deemagi kshamta ne iss gun ko aur doosri cheejo ko bhi kaabu karne kee maharath de dee... /// kehte hain na haathi se pehle haathi kee soond pahunch jaati hain... waisa hi haal kabir ka hain iski khyati chahe iske abhutpurva talent kee wajah se ya shreya kee love interest kee wajah se ho pahunch jaroor jaati hain...

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yeh shreya ne iske kitne naye dushman paida kar diye... sala adha se jyada toh iske talent ko chhor ke iske shreya ke love interest kee wajah se jal rahe hain ya gusse mein hain... akhir kitno kee dil kee rani ko le ura hain yeh... ab kaheen yeh sky-aapproaching pavilion kaheen shreya ka swayamvar ka akhara na ban jaye...

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jiske baate kar rahe hain wo bhi oopar baithi iss niche chalti bahas ko sun rahi hain... lekin shreya kabir se milne kyun nahin aayee... akhir itne mahine ho gaye the ya phir usse milne hi aaye lekin uske samne na jaa ke oopar chali gayee... kahir yeh guhai bhi yehan hain.... launde kee toh achhi khasi jal gayee aur jal ke koyal bhi hua para hain... akhir uske sapni kee rani ko koi le ura aur ussi kee hi baate jo ho rahi hain...

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hame toh laga kee shreya hi cold beauty hain lekin yehan toh icy cold aa gayee... mohini har tarah se shreya kee competitor ab kaheen kabir pe bhi dore dalne na shuru kar de... usse behtar ka toh pata nahin haan abhi kuchh improved jaroor honge lekin jayde din nahin... unki soch hi unhe utni door nahin lee jaa shakti... kabir kee soch hi bari hain is pure akansha universe jitni bari... usse iske emperor ko jo harana hain jo kisi bhi young prodigy ne apne wakt mein na socha hain na hoga....

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. 4 million silver coins staggering high price hain auro ke liye lekin kabir ke pass resources hain paisa kamane ke.... but impression toh garbar ho gayee akhir wo shreya ka fiance ke roop mein famous ho chuka hain... lekin shreya bhi yehan hogi wo usne expect na kiya tha... /// waise shreya has no right to say anything akhir kabir ne usse relationship ko pakka bhi kahan kiya tha usne toh haan tak na kaha toh wo obliged toh na hain,,, lekin ek dost ke naate yeh sawal jaroor kar shakti hain aur pyar karti hain toh hurt hona bhi lazmi hain...

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us ladki ke saath jyadi hui aur moon tower waalo ne kuchh kaha nahin... akhir unke member ko kaise jabardasti kar shakt hain wo bhi inke hi samne... aise toh wo blood pact banate hain aur yehan pe koi action nhin.../// lekin shreya abhi bhi na badli wahee purani hi rahi apni pride ke liye kisi ladki ke saath jyadti kar rahi hain... sahi kaha kabeer ne maithali ke aane ke baad toh kuchh badalan chahiye tha uska behaviour par nahin... usse ek baar safai ka mauka dena chahiye tha aur dene par bhi wo doosro kee baat sun rahi hain.... akhir itna shab hua unke saath phir bhi waisi hee hain... maithali se jyada shreya haawi hain uspe...

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guhai itna jyada aage badh gaya tha deadly force use kar raha tha akhir usse marne kee itni hi jaldi thee ,,, lekin shreya jara bhi move nahin hui akhir itni jaldi wo aisi kathor kaise ho shakti hain... uske andar maithali kee chhipi yaado ne bhi kuchh farq na para..

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Thank you buddy .

Yes Telekinesis Kabir ke Sword Realm se connected hai. Kyo ki Kabir apne mind se bhi apne sword ko apne Sword Realm se control kar sakta hai.

Well Shreya ka koi aisa intention toh nahi tha ke Kabir ke itne dushman bana de par kya kar sakte hai. Ek toh Shreya ek Superior Commandery ki Princess aur upar se Beauty With Brain. Beauty bhi aisi ke Nations ko uske liye fight karne par force kar de. Aise mei jo uska partner hoga usse duniya toh jalegi hi specially ladke jinki dream girl rahi hogi vo. Toh is sab ko ek tarah se Kabir ki fate hi maan leni chahiye. Baki kuch kar bhi nahi sakte hai. Waise Shreya ka Swayamvar aa raha hai aage. Jo kaafi dhamal machane wala hai.

Ab un niche 1st floor par baithe becharon ko kya pata ke jiske baremei vo baate kar rahe hai vo unke upar ke hi 3rd floor par baithi hui hai aur unki baate bhi soon rahi hai. Bhai Guihai ke pehle se jali hui hai Kabir se kyo ki Shreya ne samne se kaha hai ke vo Kabir ko like karti hai. Aise mei jal ke raakh ho gayi hai uski tashreef . Baaki aage dekhte jaao kya kya hone wala hai.

Yup Mohini Shreya se bhi cold hearted person hai bas apne face par dikhati nahi hai baaki sab dekho uske kaarname aage aane wale hai.

Well bas aage aage dekhte jaao kya kya hoga.

 

[Jay Sutar]

superbb jabardast update bro

Extraordinary update bro

Wawww bhai gajab ka update he ...bas shreya ki sister or private room me bete logo ka reaction ka pra bhi aaj ke update me chal jata to best rhta ..ab 3 din wait karna padega ...mast update bhai

super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya... Lagta hai ki kabir se ab Shayad hee koi panga Lena chahega

Bahi fight tu pori kar lete yar.

Nice updates

Bhai really u have awesome sense of humour...mast reply

एकदम झक्कास अपडेट भाई.... मजा आ गया और उस Guihai की अक्ल भी ठिकाने में आ गयी। अगले अपडेट का बेसब्री से इंतेजार

Wa maja aagaya

Thank you Guys .

 

[Jay Sutar]

Lgta h aaj guihai ka antkaal hi aane wala h agr wo apne ghamand ko chhod kr pichhe nhi hta to aaj uska satyanash tay h wo kitna bhi jor lga le pr khud ko kabir ke hatho marne se bcha nhi paayega...shreya ke samne Chatur chalak gidad bnne ke chakkr me lgta h aaj apni maut ko hi bula liya h usne... Shreya ko hasil krne ke liye usne use aaj kabir ke khilaf krne ki purjor koshish ki aur conditions bhi aisi hi bni ki shreya un sab ki baato me aane lag gyi h...khair shuru se lekar abhi tak agr kabir aur shreya ke beech kuchh rha h to wo h sirf misunderstandings ..kabir ne use kabhi safai nhi di kyuki shreya ke action hi itne aakramak rhe shuru se hi ki kabir ne cheezo ko explain hi nhi kiya uske samne...beshak ab maithili bhi shreya se jud gyi pr uske baad bhi shreya me itna khaas badlav nhi aaye h srf kabir ke liye kuchh feelings ko chhod kr baki uska kabir ko lekar trust abhi bhi nhi ban paya h itne waqt ke baad bhi...pr galati uski bhi nhi h uska itna gussail aur cheezo ko action lene se phle thik se analyze na krna uske bachpan se har khwahish ka pura hona aur jyada hi laad pyaar ke milne ke karan h aakhir wo ek rajkumari h...pr yaha cheezein thodi different h ab wo kabir ki fiancé bhi h aur dost bhi ban hi gye h to use itna to uspr aur uske character pr bharosha hona chahiye ki aakhir kabir aisa kuchh nhi kr skta h pr wo fir bhi dusro ki baato me aagyi...upar se use bhi pta h ki rati aur maithili ke sath kya hua sab uske samne hi hua tha...fir bhi usne guihai ki baate suni jo kabir ke liye bahut hi jyada bhaddi tippani thi..to kabir ke is trha gussa hone me wo bhi brabar ki bhagidaar h agr wo kabir ki baat sun leti to matter yahi close ho jata shanti se...khair dekhte h kya hota h aage...pr usse phle kabir ne 1st floor pr sabhi ki bolti band hi kr di apni bidding price se...aakhir usne dikha diya ki uski shakhshiyat un sab ki pahuch se bahut dur h...koi comparison hi nhi h ...to chliye intzaar h agle update ka ki kya hota h ab guihai ka aur uske baad jo bhi kabir ka mjak bna rhe the aur use kam aank rhe the unko bhut karara jawab milne wala h...jin prodigies ki baat yaha chal rhi h wo bhi kabir ke comparison me kahi bhi nhi h ..aakhir wo ek god bnne ki kabiliyat rkhta h ...wahi baki ke jitne bhi prodigies h unka sapna heaven realm aur half saint realm tk pahuchne ka hi rehta h to comparison kis cheez ka h kisi ka kabir se ....so waiting brother🗡maja aavega next part me aur bhi jyada

Thank you buddy .

Haan jab antkaal aata hai toh sabse pehle buddhi bhrasht ho jaati hai. Yaha Guihai ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi hone wala hai. Bas dekhte jana aage kya kya hota hai.

 

[Jay Sutar]

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai

Mind blowing update bhai. Shreya kabir ka nature achhi tarah janti hy phir bhi us pe zara sa bhi trust nahi kiya.

Nice fantastic update jai bro

Music running in the background during Kabir and Guihai fight: Thukraake mera pyaar...mera intqaam dekegi...

Thank you Guys .

 

[Devil@]

30 aug. Special day hai dr. Sahab

 

[Jay Sutar]

ek banda jo apni Mehnat se apni talent se jo aaj safalata ki sikhar tak pahucha hai, itne achievement aur jis jagah pe khada hai aaj.... iske piche kitni Mehnat lagi hai mentally aur physically usko na dekh ya jaanne koshish na kar waha sabhi ko ek tarah is baat ki padi thi ke aakhir kabir jaisa banda kaise in the saare achievement ke hakdaar hai... kyunki unki nazar mein kabir jaise log aise powers aur skills ke yogya hi nahi...
Kabir ke yudh kaushal, talents, success, sahi waqt pe sahi soch vichar aur faisla lene ki kshamata ko dekh jaise hazam nahi raha hai.... jaise unke sine pe saap loutne laga ho...
For example....

Kabir aaj jo bhi.... uski kamyaabi piche ki Mehnat ko tarif nahi kar rahe balki lage Jaise kabir ki kamyaabi ke piche jo history hai ushe anyalish kar rahe ho ki kahi is kabir ne koi 2 numberi ya shortcut tarike se ye skills hasil to nahi ki...
Aisa lage ki kabir ke powers ko dekh ye log jal rahe ho..
wohi nishi..... iske baare mein Kya hi likhu...
nishi didi ko ab 4th Prince se attention chahiye, nishi didi ko ab kabir se bhi attention chahiye aur ab to nishi didi ko Shreya se bhi attention chahiye.. aise kaise chalega didi
ye nishi unlogo mein se... jo bin laute ke pende ki tarah hote hai, ek jagah tikte hi nahi ..

yahan mujhe ye baat bahot buri lagi.... waha ye jo ladkiyon ko kisi saaman ki tarah kharid bech rahe the wo....ye padh mann mein reh, reh kar gussa ubal maare...
wohi dusri taraf Shreya.... itne karib se kabir ko jaanne ke baad bhi un guihai aur Zuolen jaise chirkuto ki baatien sun jo rabaya dikha rahi thi, wo sach mein soch se pare hai... are usse baat kar leti, mamle ko clear kar leti ki akhir mazra kya hai...
galatfami agar jaldi door na Kare to rishto mein darar aane mein zyada Der nahi lagti...
jo ghatanaye ghati 3rd floor pe aaj.. ushe dekh yahi lage ki kahi na kahi Shreya aur kabir ke bich ek deewar uth khadi ho chuki hai...
Lekin Jay Sutar sahab, as a reader meri point of view se Yun achanak ye aaj is moments mein ye jo dooriya paida huyi hai in dono ke bich ye hona hargiz nahi hona chahiye tha...
ant mein wo fight scenes...... Ek ne takraya ahankar ke chalte aur duje ne bach apna bachav kiya sathik yudh neeti se.... jeet kabir honi thi....
Jo bhi waha har ek kabir ke shaktiyo ka loha maan chuke the, balki gawah bhi bane har ek saksh..

Kabir ke friends aur kuch ek ko chhod ke waha har ek saksh bas uski kamiya nikalne mein lage huye the, har ek saksh bas usme khot nikalne ki koshish kar rahe the...
Kya ye kirdaar bhool Gaye ki ek Warrior hamesha hi dusre Warrior ko respect ki nazar se dekhte hai, na kewal dusre Warrior ko balki baaki sabhi ko bhi ek samman ki nazar se dekhte hai.
jo Warrior dusre Warrior ko sammaan nahi de sakte wo Warrior kehlane ki hi layak nahi...
Waise bhi us Peacock wali ladki ke sath jo karne jaa rahe the ye log, saari seemaye laangh di ushi waqt..

achha maza chakhaya us guihai ko..
Lagta hai us guihai ka kaam tamam ho gaya hai
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Jaise ki ye baat pehle bhi jikar kar chuki hun... ki writer sahab hamesha se hi sirf lead characters pe hi balki baaki ke kirdaaro ko bhi utna hi importance dete hai.... is baat ka saboot har update ki tarah ye update bhi hai.... yaha jis kisi bhi kirdaar naam aaya.. unka ek sathik details ke sath explanation kiya unhone... na kewal explanation balki unki skills ki bhi ek sathik jaankari dene ki koshish ki jisme wo sarthak rahe... Kyunki aapki kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro ke bina pramukh kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain...
well shandaar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan... .. Btw.. jo parithitiya ban rahi hai kahani ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge update mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai.
aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

aur isike sath us Guihai ka kissa khatam ho chuka hai hamesha hamesha ke liye shayad story se hi

Thank you@Naina .

Yup "In this world, wherever there is light - there are also shadows. As long as the concept of winners exists, there must also be losers. The selfish desire of wanting to maintain peace causes wars, and hatred is born to protect love."

Yahi mainly hua hai is update mei.

Wahi "People cannot show each other their true feelings of fear suspicion and resentment never subside."

Yeh Kabir aur Shreya ke bich hua hai.

Aur yeh Kabir aur un sabhi ke bich ki baat hai jo Shreya ko pana chahate hai.

"When a man learns to love, he must bear the risk of hatred."

Shreya ko yeh baat samajhni chahiye thi.

"When you fall in love, you love with all that you’ve got. You must learn to bear anger, hatred, keep your ego and attitude aside and handle things with care, calmness, and love."

Yes misunderstanding hi sabse zyada relationship ko break karti hai. Kyo ki misunderstanding kisi ek taraf se clear nahi ki jaa sakti hai. Usse dono taraf se clear hona hoga. Otherwise vo relationship kabhi bhi happy nahi reh sakta.

Side characters. Well yes mein side e par bhi Focus karta hu taaki story mei jo main character hai uski growth hi side characters ki wajah se hoti hai. Agar side characters ko sahi se handle kiya jaaye toh vo kaafi useful ho jaati hai story ke liye aur story ko kaafi strong base bhi dete hai.

Well bas aage dekhti jaao hota hai kya.

 

[Jay Sutar]

Ye guihai to wahi hai naa jo kabir ko chikong mention me marne ka plan kiya tha.।। Or phir isko wo 8 pairon wala beast kha gaya tha...... Phir ye yaha kaise aa gaya..... Kya us ka naam kuchh or tha.... Main galti to nhi kar raha hun.....

Thank you buddy .

Nahi vo koi aur tha Guihai Chikong Secret Mansion mei Kabir se mila bhi nahi.