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Fantasy Gods and Demons

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Jay Sutar

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Behad khubsurat update Dr saab
Bahot hi mast update bhai
Waiting Next
Fantastic update
very nice update bhai maza aa gya
Nice update

aisa lagaa ki abhi shuru hua aur abhi khatm bhi ho gaya update …….

keep it up
Fantastic update bro...
Best super updated bhai...
Thank you Guys 😊.
 

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Great to ye reason h pihu ka kabir ko sacred prince kehne ka kyuki uske half human peacock clan ko Buddhist emperor se aasirvaad prapt h unke sacred prince ko pehchan ne ka isilye pihu ne kabir ki identity pehchan li...bdhiya aur ab kabir ne pihu ko ek taqatwar yodha bnane ke liye uske clan ki hi best technique de rha h jisse pihu ka cultivation phle se bahut jyada achha ho jayega practise krne pr aur fir wo apni jaan maan samman ki raksha khud bhi kr payegi...
Wahi kabir aur shreya ke beech ka jo bhi gile sikwe is dauran hue unhe dono ne bade hi prem se aur ashrupurn mahol ke sath dur ho gye...wahi shreya ko abhi kuchh waqt aur chahiye aur kabir ko bhi thoda waqt chahiye in rishto ko fir se sudradh aur trustworthy bnane ke liye...taki aisi misunderstanding se unke beech koi tanav ki pristhiti paida na ho paaye...in sab ke aalawa..guihai kabir ke sar pr phle se lage black market me inam me 20 millions silver coins aur add krne wala h aur itna sare inaam ke chakkar me to sayd heaven realm ke assassins bhi kabir ko maarne ke liye aa jaaye...khair wo to waqt hi btayega ki kya hota h pr abhi kabir nether master ke ghr me safe h..pr kb tk ye dekhna jruri h. Khair dekhte h kya hota h ab aage
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🗡🗡

Thank you buddy 😊.

Yes Pihu Peacock Clan ki members hone ki wajah se vo Kabir ko pehchan paayi aur ab jab vo Kabir ke saath hai toh uska strong hona toh banta hi hai. Uske village ke baremei bhi aage aane wala hai. Jab Kabir Omen Ridge se nikal kar kahi jaayega tab.
 

Jay Sutar

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Kabir aur Guihai ke bich huye fight ke baad, waha jo log the, jo Warriors the sabhi shocked the uski Kabir ki jeet ko lekar...
Lekin mudde ki baat ye hai ki wo elder kuch zyada hi raaz ki baat sabke saamne ujagar kar di... jo kisi dhamake Kam na the.

Le.. Kabir..
ye elder to saari secret baatein batane pe utaru hai.. lage hatho iska bhi kissa khatam kar diyo... :D
dusri taraf do log aise bhi the jo pachta rahe the ki gayi galti par...
Ek wo shreya.... Duja wo 4th Prince
thik hai ho gayi galti lekin Shreya kaafi ego wali hai...
Kyun Shreya teko sabke saamne galti kar rahi thi to sharam na aayi, ab sabke saamne us galti ke liye maafi maangne mein sharam aa rahi hai :D
Waise ye story character Shreya ushi waqt na-kabil sabit ho gayi Kabir ke liye..
jab khud ek ladki hoke apne saamne hi ek ashahay majboor ladki pe hote huye julm ko dekh chup rahi, na kebal chup rahi balki ushe usse koi fark bhi nahi para....

Are kya commandery Princess banegi wo... :slap:
aur wo 4th Prince... iske bhi ajib hi chochle.... itna bada kand ho gaya uske chalte, ab bol raha hai ki Peacock wali ladki ko accept nahi kar sakta, kyunki uska baap ko agar pata chala to uski banda baja dega wo bhi tabiyat se...
pehle hi soch lena tha 4th Prince ko ye sab karne se pehle... kahe Kabir ko is jhanjhat fashaya wo :slap:

Oooo to Nata hai purana Peacock girl aur Kabir ke bich bhi :D
Waise dono ki Jodi superhit hai... Waise udhar mohini ek chaal chhalne wali hai :D
Pata nahi kyun par agar mohini kamyaab huyi apni chaal mein aur Kabir ko chin le Shreya se (jo ki mumkin nahi, phir bhi)
in future Wo situation padhne mein maza hi jaaye..

Ek galti to Kabir ne bhi kar di hai... are kahe jinda chhoda us Guihai ko :sigh:
dekho ab us galti ka kya kya khamiyaza bhugatna padta hai..
linsen ne sach bhi bol raha tha ye Guihai palat ke jarur hamla karega.. are beijjiti huyi thi itni...
so linsen ke salah ke mutabik ab se Kabir aur uske dost linsen ke father ke mansion mein rehne wale hai... kyunki abhi ke liye wohi safe jagah hai... Kabir ne ab yeh decide kar liya tha ke vo jab tak Earth Realm mei breakthrough nahi kar leta hai tab tak vo Devil Martial City ko nahi chodega.
waha mansion mein Nether Master ne bahot achhe Swagat kiya sabhi ka...
Hmm.... so Shreya aayi maafi maangne...
Ye kya... sare gile sikwe ek hi baar dur kar diya Kabir ne.. :D
I thought ki jabardast jhagda hoga dono ke bich waha :popcorn:
Khair..
kahani se Jude update prastut karne ka tarika, baatacheet ka hissa sab kuch bahot hi sundar aur dilchasp tarike se pesh kiya gaya hai... kirdaaro ke bhavanao ke adhar par update ke hisson ko jis tarah se vargikit kiya hai wo padhne mein baakeyi adbhut aur dilchap tha.... .

kya kirdaar aur kahani ne a aapko abhi tak kahani ke sath jude rehne ko majboor kiya...?

shat pratishat.... ...naye readers ke yahi bolu ki ek baar aap jarur padhiye is kahani ko.... aap log jitni baar padhenge is kahani ko... utni aapke dil ke karib hoti jayegi ye kahani....

narrations mein aapne kamaal kar diya hai ....shabdon ka aisa kamaal kaafi kam dekhne ko milta hai...har shabd ke andar bhaavnaye koot koot ke bhari hui hai khas Kar jab Shreya aur Kabir us dhalti shaam mein gile sikwe door kar rahe the.. ..har kisi ke bas ki baat nahin hotee bhaavanao ko pradarshit karana jo ki aapne behatareen dhang se kiye hai...

Oh Haan.... Hope ki us Guihai ka kissa jaldi hi khatam kar de Kabir... aur is baar hamesha hamesha ke liye taaki na rahe baans aur baje bansuri...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:

Thank you Naina .

Well elder kaafi strong person tha toh uske nazaro se kaise bach sakta hai Kabir. Usne toh casually keh diya tha par baki sabhi ke liye vo bomb hua :ultralul: .

Yes 4th Prince aur Shreya ko bura lag raha hai unke wajah se jo bhi hua uske liye. Waise agar yeh sab nahi hota toh shayad 4th Prince zarur Pihu ko accept kar leta. Wahi Shreya ka ego aa raha tha uske way mei kyo ki abhi bhi uska mindset change nahi hua hai puri tarah se. Par jaldi hi yeh bhi ho jaayega. Wahi ab baat kare Moon Tower ne Kabir aur uske matter ke bich interference kyo nahi kiya vo bhi Shreya ki hi wajah se. Kis ko nahi pata hai ke Shreya Superior Commandery ki Princess hai. Aise mei agar Moon Tower uske matter ke bich aati toh Shreya toh nahi lekin uske saath jo Geniuses the vo zarur is news ko Qin Commandery bhej dete jo Moon Tower ke liye achhi baat nahi hoti. You know that they are doing business aur mei business mei apne se bade organizations ko tab tak hurt nahi kar sakte hai jab tak ham khud bhi unki tarah powerful na ho jaaye.

Nahi nahi Kabir aur Pihu mei jodi nahi hone wali hai. Mohini bhi kuch der ke liye ek important character hai toh uski Kabir aur Shreya ke relai mei interference kaafi hone wali hai.

Well Kabir abhi itna powerful nahi hua hai ke vo directly kisi badi families ke saath panga le sake. Waise vo usse maar bhi deta par phir baat wahi aa jaati ke Guihai ki family yeh nahi sunti ke Guihai ne kya kiya unke liye bas Kabir ko marna hi motive reh jata.

Yes Kabir aur Shreya ke bich ki baat ko kahi toh start hona hi tha aur mujhe yeh situation kaafi sahi lagi kyo ki yeh situation bus movement ko achhe se suit kar rahi thi.

And yes I appreciate your comment in the last. But still I am learning new things so yes everyday khud ko improve kar raha hu.
 

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Kya Jay Sutar!!
Mai to wait kr rha tha ki kab ye chingaari se aag bhadkegi aue thoda masala milega janta ko.
Par kabir ne ek bar me hi maanke mamla hi fittus kr diya!!
Itni shanti bhi achhi nhi, thoda to mirch masala hona chahiye 🤪🤣
P.S. update to lajawab tha! Ab to mohoni ke character se ummeede hai mujhe 😅😅 ki wo kuchh bada kand kregi!

Thank you buddy 😊.

Are us matter ko zyada streched karne ki zarurat nahi thi otherwise uska vo feel nahi reh jata. Mujhe yeh dikhana tha ke itna sab hone ke baad bhi Kabir aur Shreya try kar rahe hai apne is new relationship ko jaldi accept karne ke liye.

Mirch masala toh aage banta hi rahega. Ab Mohini jo aa gayi hai story mei :akshay:.
 

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Jay Sutar bhai kya update tha. Waah.

Toh Guihai ab itna maar khane ke baad bhi nahi samjha aur ab vo Kabir par 20 Million Silver Coins ka reward bhi laga diya. Par bechare ko yeh nahi pata hoga ke Kabir ke upar yeh reward wali baat Shreya ya phir Dina ko pata chal gayi toh uski vo halat hogi jo usne apne dream mei bhi nahi sochi hogi.

Waise yeh update kaafi emotional raha. Specially Kabir aur Shreya ke liye.

Well Pihu jo Peacock Clan se hai vo Kabir Sacred Prince hai yeh baat janti hai aur uski wajah khud Buddhist Emperor hai. Uske diye gaye boon se usse pata chal paya. Iska matlab Kabir ke paas ek aur strong person aa gayi hai. Uske upcoming war ke liye aur Kabir zaroor usse achhe se train bhi karega.

Yeh 4th Prince bhi na fattu nikla are itna fight kar ke 1 Million Silver Coins aur 6 Half-Saint's Essences ke drops ko dekar Pihu ko liya Kabir ne aur ab khud piche hat raha hai apne baap ki maar ki wajah se . Jaise zindagi mei isne kabhi apne baap ki maar nahi khayi ho. Are kuch baat bol kar mana leta. Lekin yeh thehra fattu.

Shreya ko ap samajhna chahiye ke Kabir ka character kitna high moral wala hai. Agar usse ladkiya hi chahiye hoti toh kya Western Campus mei kam hai. Waha par zaroor kitney hi ladkiya hongi jo Kabir ke dreams dekhti hongi. Vo ek baar kehta vo sabhi uske paas bhaag par aa sakti thi. Par nahi madam toh apne hi ego ya duality mei phas gayi hai.

Dekhte hai ab Kabir aur Shreya waqt ke saath kaise apne relation ko aage le kar jaate hai.

Waise yeh Dina kahi nazar nahi aayi. Kaha chali gayi hai yeh ab.

Yeh Mohini mujhe kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai. Yeh zaroor kuch aisa karne ke chakkar mei hai jisse Kabir aur Shreya ke bich misunderstanding ban jaaye. Par kya pata Kabir is sab ke baremei janta ho. After all Kabir is sharp minded person.

Ahh vo moments bhul gaya us elder ne toj sab par bomb hi phod diya Kabir ke baremei bata kar. Bechare Kabir ko khud ke level se bhi niche samajh rahe the par Kabir ka talent toh Omen Ridge ke 36 Commanderies mei sabse best hai. Ab jaa kar inki aankho mei admiration aur respect aayi. Pehle unki aankho mei mockery thi. He bhagwan hipocrisy ki bhi sima hoti hai.

Well ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.


ADIOS.

Thank you buddy 😊.

Bas ab dekhte jana Kabir ka yeh talent aur kya kya karne wala hai Omen Ridge mei.
 

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Jay Sutar ji kaafi badhiya update tha. Kaafi badhiya.

Toh Guihai ko abhi bhi akal nahi aayi aur Kabir ke sir par reward rakh diya. Par usse yeh nahi pata hai ke vo Kabir hai. Uske jaise ko ek hi pal mei maar sakta hai.

Us elder ko baato se hi pata chalta hai vo khud bhi kaafi Powerful person hai. Sirf ek powerful person hi dusre powerful person ko achhe se samajh sakta hai. Wahi uski Ultimate Realm wali baat ne yeh sabhi ko bata diya ke Kabir kya cheez hai. Pehle toh usse nicha dikhana chahate the. Par ab unki aankho mei uske liye izzat aayi hai.

Toh Shreya ko abhi bhi apne ego ki complexity hai. Lekin ab lag raha hai zyada der nahi rahegi.

Waise yeh Pihu ne Kabir ko jaldi se pehchan bhi liya ke vo Sacred Prince hai. Par yeh sab bhi Buddhist Emperor ki wajah se ho paya. Lekin Pihu yaha kaise aayi. Usse kya kisi ne chura liya hai uske clan se.

Well Kabir ne yeh achha kiya ke vo usse uski clan ki sabse achhi exercises sikhane wala hai.

Last mei Kabir aur Shreya ki jo baatchit hui vo kaafi heart touching thi. Dono hi life ke raaste ke aise mod par khade hai jaha se unhe un decisons ko lena hai jo unke future ko achha bana sakti hai.

Yeh Mohini kaafi shatir lag rahi hai yeh zaroor Kabir ko Shreya se chin lena chahegi. Uski jealousy hi yeh bata rahi hai.

Toh Kabir ne yeh soch liya hai ke vo Earth Realm mei Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Devil Martial City se niklega.

Well let's see what happens next.

Thank you AvniTaneja .

Yup just wait and watch.
 
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