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Jay sutar sir doctor hain bhai aur apni duty ki wajah se kabhi kabhi update nahi de paate. Kam se kam apne bataye time ke pakke to hain. Aur kabhi update kyu nahi de paaye iska reason bhi dete hAre bhai baat to theek hai aapki lekin Aap socho week me 3 update aata hai kewal aur kabhi kabhi 2 hi aata hai uske baad bhi time se nahi aata jabki hum intajaar karte hai kal aayega update jab update k time tab aur delay aise me insan frustrate ho hi jata hai lekin bhai gali mat do plssss writer ko
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ohh broAre bhai baat to theek hai aapki lekin Aap socho week me 3 update aata hai kewal aur kabhi kabhi 2 hi aata hai uske baad bhi time se nahi aata jabki hum intajaar karte hai kal aayega update jab update k time tab aur delay aise me insan frustrate ho hi jata hai lekin bhai gali mat do plssss writer ko
.Are bhai baat to theek hai aapki lekin Aap socho week me 3 update aata hai kewal aur kabhi kabhi 2 hi aata hai uske baad bhi time se nahi aata jabki hum intajaar karte hai kal aayega update jab update k time tab aur delay aise me insan frustrate ho hi jata hai lekin bhai gali mat do plssss writer ko
Are bhai baat to theek hai aapki lekin Aap socho week me 3 update aata hai kewal aur kabhi kabhi 2 hi aata hai uske baad bhi time se nahi aata jabki hum intajaar karte hai kal aayega update jab update k time tab aur delay aise me insan frustrate ho hi jata hai lekin bhai gali mat do plssss writer ko
nice superrbbbb shandaaar update broUPDATE 184
Jaha bath mei Kabir neend mei chala gaya tha wahi Mohini ke building ke bahar Shreya aa kar khadi ho gayi thi. Uske ek haat mei uski sword thi aur dusre haat se usne uske samne jo gate tha us par strike kiya.
Boom !
Us door par lago badi so copper ring break ho gayi aur uske saath hi vo doors open ho gaye.
Jaise hi Shreya ne us building ke andar enter kiya waise hi 2 maids aayi aur apne ghutno par baith kar unhone Shreya se kaha.
"Commandery Princess Shreya hamari master abhi secluded hai aur practice kar rahi hai. Aap abhi andar nahi jaa sakti hai."
Un maids ki baat sunkar Shreya ne apne sword ko tightly pakda aur phir sharp nazaro se dekhte hue usne un maids se kaha.
Shreya-Ohh aisi baat hai. Toh mein ne usse Mount Saint Crossing se aate hue kaise dekh liya ?
Tabhi ek shadow building se bahar ki taraf aayi aur Shreya ke samne khadi ho gayi. Yeh koi aur nahi balki Mohini thi.
Mohini ke face par abhi ek smile thi aur chalte hue vo Shreya ki taraf aayi.
Mohini-Cousin aisa koun hai jisne tumhe itna gussa dilaya hai ?
Shreya kaafi cold look ke saath Mohini ko dekh rahi thi. Uske face par usse dekh kar smile bhi nahi aa rahi thi. Usne sidha point par aate hue kaha.
Shreya-Kabir kaha hai ? Mujhe usse dekhna hai.
Mohini-Ohh toh tum Kabir ko dekhne aayi ho.
Mohini jaise kisi bhi pressure mei nahi thi. Upar se uske face par ek smile thi jo har pal badhti jaa rahi thi. Usne apne soft aawaz mei aage kaha.
Mohini-Kabir Hurricane Secret Practicing Room mei practice kar ke heavily injured ho gaya hai. Abhi vo bath mei hai seven spirit medicinal spring water mei recover kar raha hai.
Mohini ki yeh baat sunkar Shreya aur bhi cold ho gayi.
Shreya-Cousin mein usse like karti hu yeh pata hai na tumhe. Agar usse recovery karni hai toh usse mere building mei hona chahiye. Aise uska tumhare building mei rukna sahi nahi hai.
Shreya ke is baat par Mohini ne smile karte hue kaha.
Mohini-Moon Tower mei jo hua tha shayad uske wajah se Kabir abhi bhi tension mei ho ke tum uspar abhi bhi gussa hogi. Shayad issi liye usne mujhse help le li hai. Please cousin tum apne building mei jaa sakti ho. Mein dekh lungi ke Kabir ko agar kuch chahiye hoga toh. Jab tak mein yaha hu usse koi hurt nahi kar sakta hai.
Shreya is mood mei hi nahi thi ke vo ab yaha se chale jaaye.
Shreya-Mohini baat ko aage mat badhao. Mujhe pata hai tum is sab se kya karna chahti ho is liye mein pehle hi tumhe kehti hu ke Kabir sirf mera hai. Uske naam ki ring tak mein ne pehen li hai. Agar mere siva koi aur ladki usse dekhegi bhi toh vo meri enemy hi ban jayegi.
Shreya ki baat par Mohini ne haste hue kaha.
Mohini-Hahaha ! Kisne socha tha ke tum Kabir ke naam ki ring bhi pehen logi. Mujhe laga tha ke tum sirf usse use kar rahi ho uncle jo tumhare liye ladke dekh rahe hai uske liye. Tum zyada mat socho cousin agar koi aur ladki Kabir ke baremei dreams bhi dekhegi toh mein usse achha sabak sikha dungi.
Shreya aur Mohini apne childhood se aise fight karte aa rahi thi. Toh Shreya ko Mohini ka nature achhe se pata tha.
Mohini ek aisi ladki thi jo apne goals ko pane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti thi. Usne zarur Kabir ke potential ko dekh liya hoga aur ab vo sab kuch soch kar Kabir ko Shreya se chin lena chahti thi.
Vo na sirf Kabir ko Shreya se chin lena chahti thi balki vo ek tarah se Shreya ko challenge bhi karna chahti thi. Sirf Kabir ko Shreya se chin kar hi vo yeh dikha sakti thi ke vo khud Shreya se kitni higher hai attractiveness mei.
Shreya ke paas is sab ke liye time nahi tha.
Shreya-Kabir kaha hai ? Aaj mein usse yaha se lekar hi jaane wali hu. Agar koi mere raaste mei aata hai toh mein us par kisi bhi tarah ki koi mercy nahi show karungi.
Mohini ne smile karte hue kaha.
Mohini-Cousin yeh mat kehna ke mein ne tumhe pehle bataya nahi. Ladko ko bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta hai jab koi ladki usse control kare. Agar tum usse yaha se forcefully lekar chali gayi toh kya pata vo tum par aur bhi gussa ho jaye.
Shreya-Mujhe is sab par tumhare lecture ki zarurat nahi hai.
Yeh keh kar Shreya ghum gayi aur jaldi se building mei jaa kar seven spirit bath ki taraf chali gayi.
Waise aisa kehna galat nahi hoga ke Mohini ki baato ne Shreya ke mind ko kuch calm kar diya tha.
Shreya ke steps kaafi light the aur saath hi uske aaspas ek fragrance bhi tha. Vo seven spirit bath mei enter karti hai aur waha par Kabir ko dekhti hai jo gehri neend mei tha.
Shreya waise hi Kabir ko nahi uthati hai. Par paas jaa kar vo carefully Kabir ko examine karne lag gayi thi.
Kabir apne training mei kaafi injured hua tha.
Tabhi piche se Mohini bhi waha aati hai aur Shreya ke side mei aa kar khadi hoti hai. Usne smile karte hue Shreya se pucha.
Mohini-Cousin mein ek baat nahi samajh paa rahi hu. Tumhare jaise high standard person ko Kabir mei aisa kya dikh gaya ? Kya tum sach mei usse like karti ho ya usse pyar hi karne lag gayi ho ?
Shreya ne Mohini ki baat toh sunli thi par uski nazare toh Kabir par hi atak gayi thi. Uske haato mei abhi bhi uski sword thi. Uske face par bhale koi expressions na ho par uski aankho mei jo emotions the usse dekh kar koi bhi yeh bata sakta tha ke uske mind mei kya chal raha hai. Usne halke aawaz mei Mohini se kaha.
Shreya-Haan ! hai mujhe Kabir se pyar. Kabir hi ek aisa 1st person hai jo meri is khubsurati se shock nahi hua tha. Uski nazaro mei mujhe mere liye kabhi bhi koi lust nahi dikhi thi. Jab ki baaki sabhi ki nazaro ko mein achhe se jaan leti hu. Kabir mere liye darkness mei ek light ki tarah hai jo mujhe sahi raasta dikhata hai. Yeh pyar nahi hai toh kya hai. Isse jab bhi dekhti hu dil ko ek tarah ka sukun milta hai. Aisa lagta hai bas isse dekhti rahu ya phir uski un aankho mei kho jaau. Aisa ek pal nahi hoga jab mera dil Kabir ka naam nahi leta hoga. Har pal mera dil sirf Kabir ke baremei hi sochta hai. Kab aur kaise mujhe isse pyar hua yeh pata bhi nahi chala. Jab Kabir hasta hai ya phir smile karta hai na toh aisa lagta hai pura nature khush hai. Uski vo smile jaise mere dil ko hi ek pal ke liye dhadakne se rok deti hai. Tum yeh sab nahi samajh paaogi. Na tumne abhi tak Kabir ko jana hai aur na hi tumhe pyar hua hai. Is liye keh rahi hu ke mere aur Kabir ke bich mei aane ke baremei sochna bhi mat. Baad mei mat kehna mein ne tumhe warn nahi kiya tha.
Shreya ki baat par haste hue Mohini ne kaha.
Mohini-Yeh baat keh kar tumne mujhe kaafi difficult position mei daal diya hai. Dekho na Kabir kaafi talented bhi hai aur us par ab mera bhi dil aa gaya hai. Kyo na ek kaam karte hai ham uske liye fairly fight karte hai, kya kehti ho ?
Shreya-Fairly fight ? Mohini Kabir ko cheez nahi hai jiske liye koi fair fight ho sakti hai. Vo sirf mera hai. Aisa kuch bhi possible nahi ho sakta hai.
Mohini-Khud par itna confidence hai tumhe.
Mohini yeh keh kar Shreya ke saath fight ko pick karna chahti thi. Vo apne baato se Shreya ko push kar rahi thi.
Shreya ne Mohini ko dekha aur phir usse dekhte hue kaha.
Shreya- Is Omen Ridge ke 36 commanderies mei Kabir se bhi talented persons hai. Toh tum mere Kabir ke hi piche kyo padi ho ?
Mohini ne smile karte hue kaha.
Mohini-Agar aisi baat hai toh tum un talented persons mein se kisi ko choose kyo nahi karti ho aur Kabir ko mujhe dedo.
Is baat se Shreya ko kaafi gussa aata hai aur uski sword apne aap hi uske sheat mei se nikal kar ek long Sword Qi ko Mohini ki taraf release kar deti hai.
Mohini ne phir se smile kiya aur apne body ko twist karte hue 2 meter high jump laga kar usne Shreya ke is strike ko dodge kar diya.
Shreya ka cultivation already Earth Realm ke Mid Stage par pohoch gaya tha aur vo ab pehle se bhi faster ho gayi thi. Uski speed ab 100 meters per second ki ho gayi thi. Shreya kaafi quickly move hui aur usne apne sword ke handle ko pakad kar usse mid air mei hi ghuma diya.
Floating Could Sword Song !
Tabhi Sword Qi se bana net Mohini ki taraf badh gaya.
Mohini ka cultivation bhi almost Shreya ko rival kar raha tha par Shreya ke paas speed ka advantage tha. Uski Genuine Qi wind nature ke power ke saath strongly infuse ho gayi thi.
Shreya ki sword technique kaafi energetic thi aur sense of invincibility ko carry karti thi.
Wahi Mohini ki Genuine Qi wood ke nature ke power ke saath infuse hui thi jo Shreya se slightly inferior thi par iske saath ek advantage aata tha ke yeh pills ko kaafi achhe se refine kar sakti thi. Is liye Mohini na sirf warrior thi balki ek 2nd-Class Alchemist bhi thi.
Green Wood Shield.
Issi ke saath Mohini ne apne palm movement ko use kiya aur uske palm mei se green hued Genuine Qi release hui. Vo Genuine Qi ek green shield mei condense ho kar 1 meter ke areal mei fail gayi.
Boom !
Vo powerful Sword Qi aa kar us shield par lag gayi.
Tabhi Mohini ne is chance ko lete hue piche ki taraf jump ki aur paas ke hi ek maple tree ke upar land ho gayi.
Uski landing aisi thi jaise vo weightless ho. Vo us tree ke single leaf par khadi thi par vo leaf bhi niche nahi jhuka tha.
Shreya ne apne Genuine Qi ko release karte hue ek bade se Geniune Qi ke vortex ko create kiya. Us vortex mei wind blade formless ho kar ghum rahe the.
Shreya ne apne sword ko Mohini ki taraf kiya aur us vortex mei se kuch wind blades nikal kar Mohini ki direction mei chale gaye. Jaise ek hot knife butter ko cut karta hai waise hi un wind blades ne us tree ko cut kar diya tha.
Mohini ne phir se ek jump lagayi aur piche ke lake ki taraf chali gayi.
Strong Wind Lifting the Clouds.
Shreya bhi Mohini ke piche aa gayi thi aur usne apne sword ko phir se ghuma diya. Isse us lake mei ek badi se wave ban kar Mohini ki taraf badh gayi.
Kabir-Lagta hai ab mujhe yaha se nikal lena chahiye.
Kabir ne apne aankho ko open kiya aur us seven spirit medicinal bath mei se nikalte hue ek gehri saans chodi. Jaha Shreya aur Mohini apni fight kar rahe the wahi Kabir calmly waha se nikal chuka tha.
Kabir abhi bhi thaka hua tha aur kaafi injured bhi tha. Par jab Shreya seven spirit bath mei aayi thi tabhi vo neend se bahar aa gaya tha.
Kyo ki uski Spiritual Power kaafi strong thi agar uske aaspas halki si bhi movement hoti thi toh vo apne neend mei se instantly uth sakta tha.
Kabir Shreya ke aate hi neend se bahar aa gaya tha aur usne Shreya aur Mohini ki baate sun li thi.
Kabir bas waha par neend mei hone ki acting kar raha tha.
Kabir Shreya ke kahi baato ke baremei hi scohe jaa raha tha aur saath mei Mohini ke baato ke baremei bhi.
Kabir-Yeh Shreya bhi Mohini ke provocation mei aa gayi aur ab uske saath fight karne lag gayi hai. Pata nahi yeh dono sisters kya kya karne wali hai aage. Is sab se baki kuch ho na ho mere sir ko pain zarur hone wala hai.
Jaise hi Kabir us building ke bahar aaya usse apne piche se kisi ke hasne ki aawaz aayi.
Yeh koi aur nahi balki Dina thi.
Dina-Waise mujhe nahi laga tha tum waha se one piece mei nikal kar aa bhi sakte ho ?
Yeh keh kar Dina aur bhi smile karne lag gayi thi.
Waise jaise hi Kabir ne Dina ko dekha waise hi usse laga ke usse koi guardian angel mil gaya hai.
Kabir-Dina achha hua tum mujhe yahi mil gayi. Yeh dono sisters mujhe pagal karne wali hai dekhna. Tumhe meri help karni hogi.
Dina-Ohh sahi mei ? Mujhe laga tha tumne khud se Mohini se help maangi thi aur ab uski help le kar phas gaye ho kyo ?
Kabir-Is waqt bhi tumhe sarcastic hona hai ? Upar se mein ne usse koi help nahi mangi thi wahi khud se aayi thi help karne ke liye. Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi chal raha hai ke un dono ke bich yeh chal kya raha hai.
Dina-Sahi mei ? Kya tumne khud se Mohini se koi help nahi mangi thi.
Kabir-Nahi.
Dina-Okay. Kyo ki tum mujhe itne achhe se puch rahe ho toh mein tumhe help karungi. Chalo ab yaha se yeh jagah in sabhi baato ke liye thik nahi hai. Pehle ham meri building mei chalte hai waha jaa kar is Mohini se kaise picha chudana hai vo sochte hai. Agar yeh dono abhi yaha aa gayi toh tumhara yaha se nikalna mushkil ho jayega.
Issi ke saath Dina Kabir ki help karte hue usse apne building ki taraf lekar chali gayi.
Dina ki taraf se help mil rahi hai yeh dekh kar Kabir ka mind kaafi calm ho gaya tha.
Dina-Kabir tumne ham tino ke relation ke baremei kya socha hai ? Dekho mein rukne ke liye ready hu par Shreya nahi ruk sakti hai. Tumhe Shreya ke baremei jaldi hi kuch sochna hoga nahi toh kuch aisa ho jayega jisse ham bilkul bhi change nahi kar sakenge.
Kabir-Mein ne Shreya se baat ki hai is baremei. Ham abhi phir se sab kuch start karna chahte hai. Mein ne usse aur usne mujhse time manga hai aur mein wahi baat bhi tumse kehna chahta hu. Yeh kaafi sudden hai. Ham aise hi hamare relation ko sabhi ke samne nahi laa sakte hai. Kaafi baate hai jo isse affect ho sakti hai aur meri is baat ko tum achhe se samajh rahi ho kyo. Par philhal ke liye is Mohini ka kya karu yeh batao.
Dina-Simple hai tum na toh Sister Shreya se miloge aur na hi Mohini se miloge kuch din ke liye. Sirf distance se unke behavior ko observe karna.
Kabir-Well agar aisi baat hai toh kuch waqt ke liye mujhe tumhare hi building mei rukna hoga.
Dina-Mujhe koi problem nahi hai.
Issi ke saath next 5 days Kabir Dina ki hi building mei rukta hai. Ab tak vo recover ho chuka tha aur normal feel karne lag gaya tha.