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Well Thank You NainaKya baat hai...
Dina ne bina Kabir ke kahe hi God Habitat Grass jo ki kaafi rare hai aur absolute strong toxicity ko carry karta hai , usko as a gift Kabir ke liye leke aayi hai.....
uff....yeh deewangi .....ye dillagi dekh Kabir bhi thodi bahot romantic ho gaya tha dina sang....par abhi waqt nahi tha uske paas in sab ke liye...Kyunki ushe kisi bhi haal mein zina ko chhudaane jaana tha....
So wo nikla gaddi leke mohini ke adde ki aurr after all mohini bhi to ushe chaahti thi...
waise yaha dina dwaara kahi gayi ye baat buri lagi.... actually dina ko pata hi nahi ki dosti kise kehte hai, warna Kabir ke saamne zina ko leke aisi tuchh baat kehti nahi...
Shayad dina ki nazar mein mahaz Zina ne identity expose ki hai.... lekin meri nazar mein zina ne dosti ka haq ada ki ki hai ...
Khair....
So Kabir ke sath bandar ki puch ki tarah udhar mohini ke adde par dina bhi jaa pahunchi...
planning blanning karne ke baad jaha Kabir pahucha us kaidkhane mein zina ko aazad karane,coincidentally mohini bhi zina jina milne aayi....
btw angrej chale gaye lekin is mohini ko chhod gaye ..... hindi kam angreji zyada bolne wali mohini jaate hi zina pe kahar barpane mein lag gayi..... Lekin uski badkismati ki udhar Kabir bhi aa pahucha tha... aur lo ji mohini ko behosh kar diya...
hairaangi baat ye hai ki sirf akela Kabir hi nahi balki ravi aur varun bhi udhar aaye the zina ko chhidane mein Kabir ko madad karne..
so finally zina ki kaafi na nukar ke baad apni powers ke show off kar Kabir, ravi aur varun ushe waha azaad karake le hi gaye...
us kaidkhane aur mohini ke adde se bahar niklte waqt ek do twists bhi aaye..
pehle wala twist comedy se bharpur
yaar jab mohini ko pata chalega ki Kabir sath milke zina ne ushe hi kaidkhane mein bhaandh ke sadne ke liye chhod gayi thi kya beetegi uspar
Jay Sutar sahab ye achha na kiya ju ne mohini ke sath... .
aur Dusra twist kaafi pasandida... matlab khoon kharabe wala twist..... Kabir us len ka kissa hi khatam kar diya gala kaat ke taaki koi saboot hi bache ki zina ko chhudaane aaya koun tha..
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Ooo to mohini ke adde ke bahar wo zora bhi aaya hua tha.... lekin varun aur Kabir zina ko uske paas chhodkar kyun chale gaye, zina ko sath le jaate...
hmm.... to zina ko new task mila hai... aur apne pita di huyi koi fruits juice jishe pike wo aur strong ho jaayegi...
ek baat to hai... zina ko apne baap aur bhai bilkul bhi pasand na hai...
waise dono hai zina ke baap bhai hai hi nafrat ke kabil... abbal darze ke kamine jo thehre...
Waise abbal darze ki kamini to mohini bhi hai...
Udhar kaam ho jaane ke baad dina ko waha se rafa dafa kar diya Kabir ne.... jaise chai se makkhi nikal ke faink di ho
Aur udhar royal place mein aake practice karne lag gaya..... waise grass poision ka karega kya wo kahi horlicks ke sath milkar to nahi pine wala wo...
badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
... kuch cheejo se shayad dhire dhire raaz ka parda hatenge... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai.. For example ..mohini .....itni buri niklegi wo ye to soch se bhi pare hai....Ek ladki hoke dusri ladki pe is kadar julm dhaye .....waise jaisi uski shreya waisi hi hai uski bahan mohini..
dono mein emotion naam ki koi cheej hi nahi... na hi dono ke dil mein koi daya mamta....
isliye.... Kabir mohini ke sath sath shreya ko bhi jaan se maar de bilkul lena ki tarah to Kabir aur uske frnds chain se jee paayenge ....
Btw kayi nayi situations bhi paida ho rahe hai rahe hai... joh apne ap me hairaangi bhari huyi hai....Jisme thrill , suspense aur action beshumaar hai... aur in sabhi ko shabdon mein pesh karne ka tarika bahot behtareen....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Nice update brother
Extraordinary update bro,
Dr saheb mind blowing update
Nice behtreen update
Bhai dono update asom thai bahut jada khushi hue aapko agin tack p dekh kr
Ab lgta h intersting fight hone wali h update ka intajaar rahega
love u bhai
Superb update bhai
Yr ye bahut amazing tha jab kabir ne apni devine soul release ki to use pura royal palace ke hi baaare me pata chal gaya ab to Kabir kabhi bhi kisi ka pata lga lega
Ye to unexpected tha, kuch hi lino me 24 days gujar gaye maine socha tha ki us false of body ki practice kaise ki ye pata chalega, lakin achha hi huwa usse kahani thodi aage ho gayi,
Ye kaafi amazing tha jab kabir ne apni devine soul release ki to use pura royal palace ke hi baaare me pata chal gaya.
Yanvu commandry king ka cultivation kya hain vaise. Agar voh heven realm me hain aur king bhi hai to fir kabir jab half saint banega to kya voh ocian city ke logo ko lekar yaha khud ki commandry bana kar rah sakta hain.
New Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke female master ko lagta h vo kabir ka martial soul tha par jab use pata chalega ki voh divine soul thi tab sayad vob kabir ke dar se kabhi uske samne bhi na aaye kyuki kabir usko jarur marta us New Moon Worship Demonic Sect ke female master ko kabir ka secret jo malum tha.
Kabir ki divine soul sach me powerful hain ki aur ab to saara khel nazaro ko ho gaya hain ordinary earth realm waale ko to kabir nazaro se dara sakta hai like ankhiyo se goli maare .
Ek minute ye breakthrough karne ke liye sacrifice ki power ka use karna padega iska mtlb kya hain. Sacrifice yaani tyag hota hain na to kya shakti paane ke liye kabir ko kuch tyagna hoga. Aisa me sirf tukka laga raha hu kya pata sacrifice ka mtlb kuch aur ho vaise ye baat to bilkul us kahavat ki trah ho gyi ki kuch paane ke liye kuch khona padta hain.
Oyyy hoyyee kya baat hain shreya kabir ko impress kar rahi hai use pata hain kabir yuxi aur uski ma ko apna manta hai isiliye unke liye White River Leaves ke 15 kg packages le aayi, pure 10 saal ka kota pura kar diya isne to. Ye mujhe bilkul vaisa lag raha jaise dina kabir ke liye god habbited grass lekar aayi to shreya bhi kuch lekar aayi.
Ye kabir ko bade maje aa rahe hain shreya ko chhedne me, ye chhed chaad hi bahut achhi lag rahi hain mujhe yaad hain sayad kabir ne last time aisa rati ke sath kiya tha jah ocian city lord ne kabir ko genius samajh kar apne city lord mantion me lekar aaye the, kabir tab rati ko khub satata tha aur rati bhi enjoy karti uske baad sayad ab aisa din aaya hai.
#chhichora piyaShreya ka rukna hard huwa to voh yuxi ki mommy ki bye bolkar jaane lag gayi tab kya hoga jab aisi situation aaye jab shreya uthkar ja bhi na sake aur kabir use sabke samne tease kar rahe shreya pakka kabir ko akele me milne ko bolegi voh sab liye nahi kabir ko sabak sikhane ke liye.
Hahahaha please is traf se chaliye your majesty aaj kabir fool masti majak ke mood hain sayad tea ka nasha hain. Kabir ne ye tea aur pi to ye pakka chai lover ban jayega.
Kabir shreya ke najadik aakar bola raha hai am sure shreya ke dil ki ghantiya baj rahi hongi jab kabir mohini ke palace me bath me tha tab shreya ne mohine se kabir ke baare me kaafi baate kahi thi us hisab se to shreya ke mind me definitely titliyan ud rahi hongi.
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Ceremony of worship to kal hain aap yaha kya kar rahe is saval ka jabab kabir ne kya diya ye saval tian par hi ulta pad gaya. Baato ke mammle me bhi kabir se jeetna muskil hain. Ye tian ceremony of worship ko host kar raha hai. To ye sayad ho sakta hain ki tian kabir ko ceremony of worship me sacrifice ki power ko lete huwe dekh le host jo hain.
rajni to ek healthy fight hi chahti thi par ye chenyu ne bich me bolkar apni ijjat lutwa li kuch dhang ka nahi bol sakta tha ye. 4th prince ka cusin nahi hota to abhi kuch hi pal ne ghunga ho jaaata.
Rajni kaafi achhi lag rahi hai. Shreya aur dina to kabir ki ho gayi rajni ko ab me pata lunga rajni meri huwi ab se. ( Majak kar raha hu )
rajni ne 72 snowflake se sword bana li Kyaa baat hain rajni you are too good. Aur apne kabir bhai saab kya ye 108 hi inki limit ya isse jyada vaise me curious hu ki kabir kitne sword bana sakta hain. 108 sword dekhkar hi rajni samajh gayi ye banda apni takkar nahi hain lakin rajni kisi kisi din to takkar ye soch rahi aur tian use marne ki dono ki soch me kitna fark hai.
Bhai ragni 72 snowflake se sword bana li Kyaa baat hain rajni bahut good h. Aur apne kabir bhai saab ki kya baat h 108 hi inki limit ya isse jyada vaise me curious hu ki kabir kitne sword bana sakta hain. 108 sword dekhkar hi rajni samajh gayi ye banda apni takkar ka nahi hain lakin rajni kisi kisi din to takkar ye soch rahi aur tian use marne ki dono ki soch me kitna fark. Lgta h ab kuch bada hone wala h.......
Super update hai Bhai
Fantastic super update
Very nice asy compliment hr koì nhe kr skta impressive
Superb update
Superb update
Fantastic super mind-blowing update
Fantastic super mind-blowing update
Waiting bhaiThank you Guys .
Jay Sutar bhai pehle toh welcome back aur rahi baat update ki toh awesome hi awesome tha.
Dina ki understanding Kabir ke liye sahi mei kaafi achhi hai. Vo uske bina kahe hi baat ko samajh gayi. Yahi toh baat hoti hai jo har person apne life partner mei dhundta rehta hai. Jo uske emotions ko samajh sake.
Kabhi kabhi hame kuch baate kahe bina hi samajhni pad jaati hai.
Waise Dina ka Kabir ko tease karna kaafi achha lag raha tha. Aise moments story ko aur bhi interesting bana dete hai. Story mei ek different test bana rehta hai.
Kaash Kabir Dina ko ussi waqt usse apni baho mei le leta. Par bechara kare bhi toh kya kare.
Waise Dina ko manna padega usne almost 100,000 km ke distance se 3 din ke andar God Habitat Grass ke 3 baldes le kar aayi. Isse vo Kabir ke liye kis had tak jaa sakti hai yeh show hota hai.
Agar Tian Kabir ko kuch karta hai aur yeh baat Dina ko samajh mei aa gayi toh Tina toh giyo.
Being a Santness Dina ko sabhi ki information hai. Jaise Zina ko kaha par capture kar ke rakha gaya hai. Yeh sab kuch.
Waise Dina ka Kabir ko trick karna sahi mei funny tha. Even Kabir bhi samajh nahi paaya ke Dina usse baato mei trick kar rahi hai yeh janne ke kiye ke kya Zina sahi mei Hades Department ki killer hai.
Ahh Dina ke chahne wale toh sabhi jalbhun gaye hai Dina aur Kabir ko ek saath dekh kar.
Lekin Dina kabhi unki ho hi nahi sakti thi. Usse hamesha se hi Kabir ki hi thi.
Yeh Mohini toh sach mei 2 faced person nikli sabhi ke samne kuch aur, aur Zina ke samne kuch aur hi ban rahi thi. Sahi mei ek cleaver fox hai yeh.
Par Kabir ne toh usse bhi apne palm strike se behosh kar diya.
Par Dina ne back up plan bhi kar ke rakha tha Varun aur Ravi ko bata kar ke unhe Volley Manor ke dungeoun mei kaise chupke se enter karna hai. Par Kabir ne unhe bhi pakad liya.
Waise Varun ka waha par Zina ko rescue karne ke liye aana sahi hi tha. After all pyar jo karta hai Zina se kaise na aata ?
Yeh Zina bhi chupirustam nikali Silkworm Butterfly Skill ko bhi kuch level tak practice kar ke rakha hua hai. Aage chal kar yeh zarur Kabir ki kaafi help kar sakti hai.
Waise yeh sabhi Volley Manor se nikal sahi se gaye the par yeh Mohini ke piche pade hue kuch warriors aaj Zina ko phir se pakda hi dete.
Yeh Len mujhe kuch achha lag hi nahi raha tha waise bhi. Aise koun ladki ke piche jata hai. Chamdi kahi ka.
Par sahi time par aa kar Varun ne usse piche hi uda diya aur jab dono ke bich single fist fight hui toh ahhh kya maze aaye the vo padhne ke liye.
Matlab sirf Kabir hi nahi balki uske sabhi friends kaafi strong ho gaye hai.
Otherwise kuch writers yeh bhul hi jaate hai ke side characters ko bhi develope karna hai. Par Jay Sutar bhai aap ne abhi tak aisa nahi kiya hai. Aap ne apni story ke har side character ko achhe se explain kiya hua hai.
Small se small details tak ko ignore nahi kiya hua hai aapne.
Yeh sahi mei ek high level dedication hai.
Kabir ne bhi kaafi dramatic way mei Len ka the end kiya tha Slow Poetic Perspective ka use kar ke.
Toh Zora aur Zina brother and sister hai. Iska matlab Zina Hades Dempartment ke owner ki daughter hai. Yeh Varun ne toh kaafi lamba haat maar liya.
Zora apne sister ke liye bura nahi hai. Uske Zina ke faliuer ko apne upar le liya aur ab Zina ko koi new mission mila hai. Abhi tak hame vo bataya nahi gaya hai dekhte hai aage kab pata chal sakta hai is mission ke baremei.
Yeh Dina kab Kabir ko tease karna band karegi. Bechare Kabir ko jab se aayi hai story mei tease hi kiye jaa rahi hai.
Wow 24 days nikaal diye Kabir ne Space and Time Spinel ke andar practice karte hue aur ab uski Divine Soul pehle se aur bhi zyada powerful hoti jaa rahi hai. Iska matlab Kabir ki jo Spiritual power hai jo level 33-34 ke aage unstable ho rahi hai vo ab stable hoti jaa rahi hogi. After all Spiritual powers toh Soul se connected hoti hai.
Kabir bhi kaafi maze le raha hai Shreya ke. Bhai isse koi roko warna ek din Shreya ke haato pitega yeh.
Waise Ceremony of Worship ke sacrifice ke power ki zarurat hai Kabir ke breakthrough karne ke liye. Phir vo God Habitat Grass ka kya karne wala hai.
Toh is year ke Ceremony of Worship ko Tina host karne wala hai. Par yeh Chenyu kyo itna ud raha tha in sabhi masters ke samne. Khud kuch zyada nahi samajh raha hai yeh Chenyu. Agar 4th Prince ka cousin na hota toh sach mei Rajni uski zuban hi kaat deti. Phir kehte rehta Bolo Zubaan KESARI.
Waise Jay Sutar bhai aap apne story mei hamare culture ke moral values ko kaafi achhe se show karte hai. Jaise Rajni ne 72 snowflakes ko milakar Sword ko banaya aur Kabir ne 108 agar 7+2 kiya jaaye toh total 9 aata hai wahi 1+0+8 kiya jaaye toh bhi uski total 9 aati hai aur Number 9 hamare culture mei kaafi achha mana jaata hai. Aap ka Philosophical point of vew bhi kaafi achha hai.
Well ab dekhte hai Kabir aage kya kya karne wala hai. Kuch bada zarur hoga is sab ke baad aisa feel ho raha hai. Let's see what happens Next.
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Tian susra kutte ki dum hi h...dusre ki tarrakki se jalne wala gadha... Aur ab wo soch rha h ki wo kabir ko kuchh sneaky attacks se maar skta h.. Bewkoofi ki bhi ek hadd hoti h mtlb kisi se nafrat aur lalach me itne andhe ho jao ki apne samne koi dikhe hi nhi..hm hi sabse shaktishali h baki sab to mungfali h..chhilenge aur chaba jayenge ..hlwa h kya khair jjb aa bail mujhe maar wali aadat hi pd jaye kisi ko to usko bail se kon bacha skta h..wohi haal tian ka bhi hone wala h kabir se bhidne walo baki logo ki trha hi iska bhi haal hona h kahin ka nhi rhega ye dar dar bhatkega fir kutte ki maut maara jaayega..wahi rajani wakai me ek gentle kanya nikli usne srf kabir ki kabiliyat dekhte hi apni haar swikaar kr li aakhir dono ke beech gap bhi to kaafi bda tha kaha 108 snowflakes se bni sword kaha 72 Snowflakes ki limit.. Uske baad jo next step kabir ne liya uske samne to rajni kahi bhi nhi tik pa rhi thi...and last me uska appreciation wala look aur sath me kabir ke sath badtameeze se bolne pr chenyu ka halak hi sukha diya usne isse pta chalta h ki use talented logo ki kitni kadar aur samman h....is sabke alawa kabir aur shreya ki pyaari si conversation kaafi arsa beet gya kabir ko is trha masti krte hue aur aakhir kaar aaj wo shreya ke sath kaafi khush tha ...
To aakhir kaar kabir ne god habitat grass ke sath 63 half saint blood drops ko refine krne ke sath false body of god ki bhi practice kr li in 24days me jisse uski divine soul ki divinity aur bhi jyada badh gyi h usi ke karan jab usne apni divine soul ko release to use itni dur mountains me chhipe heavenly realm warriors tk ki location ka pta chal gya jabki wo khud un logo se low cultivation pr h ...ye bakai bahut impressive h..pr is sab ke baad bhi kabir breakthrough nhi kr paya ab dekhte h worship wale din wo apni sacrifice power ka kis trha se use krta h taki wo next stage me breakthrough kr paaye tab tian ke liye kabir ko nuksaan pahuchana aur bhinjyada mushkil ho jayega. To dekhte h aane wale waqt me kya chhipa h..
Waiting brother..
लगता है इस tian को कुछ खास तरह के मरम्मत की जरूरत है,,,,,,
aainn main to khud apne revos seriously nahi leti.. ju ko bhala kya khas baat dikhi usme
BTW serious baat to is kahani is mod pe ye hai....
Shreya aur mohini kab apni sabhi powers peacock wali girl ko dene wali hai?
Pta nhe Q apko shreya achi q nhe lgti muhje tu uska attitude or uski feelings psnd hain or mohini tu bhot lalchi type hai muhje b nhe psnd
Koi bataiy ga update ki timing kia hai
Dina ne Kabir ka bahut help kiya usko god habitat grass lake diya jiska jarurat Kabir ko thi.Aur usko zina k bare me bhi bataya..dono milke doungon tak gaye ..zina ko mohini ki captive se bacha bhi liya sabhi warriors aur guards k nazaron se bach ke.(.dina ❤kabir❤shreya)
Varun aur ravi bhi dina ki help se doungon me gaye the....
Zina ko len ne pakad liya tha lekin sahi samay par kabir aur varun n aake situation sambhal lliya..mohini aab pagal ho jayegi iss incident ko leke..
Zora ko sense kar liya Kabir ne aur zora ne zina ki sari galti apne sar le liya taki usko kuch problem naa ho..Zina ko reward bhi mila he apni good work k liye..
Amazing update bro..hats off you for such long updates in your busy schedule..✌✌
Me kisi ek ka nehni ho sakta me mera dil aur dhadkan dono ka hnu means Kabir loves both dina and Shreya.Kabir apni power aur technique ko develop kar liya he dina ki help se..
Rajni challenge kiya tha kabir se but wo haar gayi Kabir se but kafi impress he Kabir se rajni.
Tian Kabir se bahut jealous feel karta he wo Kabir ko underestimate karta he uske mind me abhi bhi doubt he shurya aur Kabir ek he person he..
Sherya kese react karegi jab usko Kabir aur dina ki pyar ka pata chalegaa..
Mindblowing update...
Sandar revo bhai
Both update, awesome Bro
Thank You Xabhi .To Kabir ne apni divine soul ko takatvar bnaya hai or kal hone vali ceremony of worship me sacrifice ki power ko capture karne ke liye...
Tian Ise host karne vala hai dekhte hai kahi kuchh fir se gadbad na kr de...
Half-Saint's Blood ke 63 drops aur God Habitat Grass ke 3 blades ko obsorb karke divine soul ko majboot kiya or divine soul ne pure QI ko Kabir ki body me transfer kiya...
Divine soul ko release karte hi use 4 heaven relm warrior yunvu comendery ke alag alag mountain me sence huye jo yha ke king se bhi powerful master the... Kabir ne Shreya ko aise yuxi ki ma se bate karte hue dekha to Uspr pyar to Bahut aaya or Accha bhi lga pr apne imotion ko control kr Shreya ke bagal me baitha or Shreya ka aise chai bna kr dena badi Jabardast feeling aai... Jay Sutar bhai aapke Isi feeling ke chakkr me Ma se dant khani padi mujhe (maine bhi Bibi se ek gilash dudh mang liya tha garm abhi jb vo MA ke sath kaam kr rhi thi )
Shreya ko aisa karne me sarm bhi aa rhi thi jis pr yuxi Ki ma or Kabir ne thoda or mazak kiya Shreya ko see off karte wakt bhi Kabir Shreya ke karib pahuch gya Jisne Uski dhadkan hi bdha kr rakh di Surya ka Dina ka boyfriend hona pr thoda jelious feel hua Jo ki swabhavik hai btao naam diya Usne Surya or kaam prasang ke liye chuna Dina ko bahutai nainsafi hai bhaya
Aaj rajni ko bhi Kabir ki kabiliyat samajh aa gyi aise hi nhi yuxi or Shreya usko admire karti hai...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab or situations ke according romance maza aaya padh kr or thoda excited bhi lga
Wao! Wao! Wao amazing awesome revo JD bhai
Kya pata usse aur bhi exciting action sequences chahiye ho. Waise aa rahe hai aage aur bhi high level action sequences.Itni saari fight abhi nikal ke gayi tumko interesting abhi aur chahiye ya pahle waali interesting nahi lagi
Sandar revo bhai jabarjast
Bhai kuchh din se jay bhai ka time table badla hua hai Vo UK gye huye hai unhone bola hua hai 10-10:30pm post karne ki Kosis karenge ya fir late night me or rahi baat day ki to kafi din ho gye the isliye surprise mila hai ye varna unka 1-3-5 ka time fix hai
Ok thanks
Awesome superb and mindblowing update
Kabir ke liye Diana ka pyar, shreya ka line pur dheere dheere ana, ragini ka halka sa ghukav Kabir ke taraf, tian ki nafrat jalan,Kabir ka resorces ka istemal ,Kabir ke cultivation kahigh hona is updat me sub kuch ,thanks dr.dksaahab
Awesome superb and mindblowing update
Mast update bhai
Thank You Guys .Awesome updates bro