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UPDATE 60

Varun's Family.

Varun aur uski family bhi Osian City ke outer area mein rehti hai. yeh jaha rehti hai vo ek small village sa hai jismein 300 ke around log rehte hai aur vo sabhi Varun ke family se belong karte hai.

Varun ek small trail par chalte hue jaa raha tha. Aise hi jaate hue usse uske family ke members mil rahe the jo usse smile ke saath greet kar rahe the.

Varun aa gaya hai?

"Yes Uncles!"

Varun ne sabhi ko yeh smile ke saath kaha. Although Varun ki family kaafi poor thi lekin kabir unke members ke bich relationship kaafi closed tha.

Jab unhone Varun ko dekha tab unhone kaha.

"Hamari family is baar kaafi fortunate hai ke Varun jaisa genius hamare family mein born hua."

"Ha. Yeh toh already Silver Rank Demon Spiritualist ban gaya hai. Vo bhi itne young age mein. Yeh sach mein incredible hai. Hamari puri family aaj Varun ke wajah se proud feel kar rahi hai."

"Agar mere bachhe bhi Varun ke half talented bhi ho jaye toh mein khushi se mar jaunga."

Sabhi ki aisi baate sunkar Varun ko ab sharam aane kag gayi thi. Aaj tak uski itni tarif pehle kabhi nahi hui thi. Yeh sab sunte hue vo ab jaldi jaldi apne ghar ki taraf badh gaya.

Aaj puri family Varun par proud feel kar rahi thi. Vo already irreplaceable existence ban gaya tha puri family mein.

Varun ke family ka Ancestral Hall.

"Varun yeh hamari family ka keepsake hai. The Fire Qilin Jade Waist Pendent. Sirf family ke Patriarch hi is pendent ko rakh sakte hai. Aaj mein yeh tumhe pass karta hu. Jab tum us age mein aa jaoge tab apni is family ke Patriarch ban jaoge."

Ek plain sa robe pehne old person ne jiski beard tak white ho gayi thi usne halka sa jhukte hue Varun ne haat ko pakad kar uske haat mein vo pendent dete hue yeh baat kahi.

Yeh old person Varun ke family ke current Patriarch the.

Varun-Lord Patriarch mein aise hi is precious item ko nahi le sakta hu.

Varun ne kaafi nervous ho kar yeh baat kahi thi. Vo Fire Qilin Jade Waist Pendent se pure soul force ko emit hote hue feel kar sakta tha.

Patriarch-Hamari family kaafi long time se decline hoti jaa rahi hai. As the Patriarch mein ne hamare ancestors ko fail kar diya. Ab sirf tum ho jo is family ko bacha sakte ho. Tum iske liye worthy ho.

Patriarch ne yeh baat kaafi low tone mein kahi thi. Apne age walo se Varun kaafi mature tha. Issi liye Patriarch ne Fire Qilin Jade Waist Pendent ko Varun pass down kiya.

Varun kaafi waqt tak us pendent ko lene ke liye hesitate karta raha. Par phir usne kuch soch kar Us Fire Qilin Jade Waist Pendent ko Patriarch ke haato se le liya. Uske emotions kaafi waqt ke baad calm down hue the.

Varun ko apne bite din yaad aa rahe the.

Varun ki family kaafi had tak poor thi. Pure family ke paas sirf kuch land tak hi farm tha. Apni daily needs ko pura karne ke liye unhe mountains mein hunting karni padti thi. Tabhi unke paas kuch khane le liye income aati thi. Varun ko 2 elder sisters thi. Jab Varun ko Holy Osian Institute mein enter karna tha tab usse Osian City ke kisi disable person ke saath marriage karana pada tha. Us person ke Holy Osian Institute mein achhe connections the.

Varun apne dil mein yeh baat hamesha lekar baithta tha ke uske wajah se uski dono sisters ki life ab khatam si ho gayi hai. Jab bhi raat hoti thi toh vo akele mein bohot der tak rota tha. Usse hamesha yahi lagta tha ke uske usne apne sisters me saath bohot hi galat kiya hai.

Holy Osian Institute mein enter karne ke baad uska talent kaafi average tha par vo baki sabhi students ke mukalble kaafi zyada efforts lagata tha apni training mein. Vo hamesha yahi sochta tha ke agar vo hard work karega tohi uske family aur clan ka future change hoga.

Originally uska goal usse kaafi dur tha jab tak vo kabir se nahi mila tha.

Kabir ne uske fate ko completely change kar diya tha. Usne usse Silver Rank Demon Spiritualist bana diya tha. Yahi baat pure family ki poor condition change hone ke liye kaafi thi.

Varun ne us Fire Qilin Jade Waist Pendent ko kas kar apne haat mein pakda hua tha. Uski aankho mein tak aansu aa gaye the.

Varun-Kabir ab yeh life tumhari hai.
Varun ne yeh baat apne dil mein kahi thi.
Because of kabir vo apne fate aur apne family, clan ke fate ko change kar paya tha.

"Varun tumse bohot se Aristocratic's family ki ladkiya shaadi karna chahti hai. Jinmein kuch upper class nobles bhi hai."

Patriarch jab yeh baat keh rahe the toh vo apni khushi ko thinks dikha tak nahi paa rahe the. Kyo ki aise bohot hi kam ladkiya thi jo samne se Varun aur uske family mein shaadi karne ke liye aati thi. Magar ab, ab aisa nahi tha nobles tak ki ladkiya samne se aa rahi thi unke family mein shadi karne ke liye.

Tabhi Varun ne apne sir ko uthaya aur uske Patriarch ko dekhte hue kaha.

Varun-Lord Patriarch mein unmein se kisi se bhi shadi nahi karunga. Jab meri family decline ho rahi thi tab unhone hame aise hi nikal diya tha. Aur ab vo hamari family mein shaadi karwa kar hamse favours lena chahte hai.

Patriarch ne kuch der ke liye Varun ki kahi baato ke baremein socha. Tab unhe pata chala ke Varun jo keh raha hai vo sahi keh raha hai. Ab Varun Silver Rank Demon Spiritualist hai. Ab vo un sabhi families ko aise hi avoid kar sakte hai.
Phir Patriarch ne smile karte hue kaha.

Patriarch-Lagta hai Varun ke ab apne thoughts hai. Ab agar aisi baat hai toh mein is baremein koi baat nahi karunga. Uske yeh thoughts family ke liye helpful hi hai.

Ravi ki Family.

Ravi ki family bhi ek small aristocratic family thi. Ravi ke father jo uske family ke Patriarch bhi the vo 3-Star Gold Rank expert the. Dekha jaaye toh vo baji supre genius families ki tarah koi super expert nahi the. Par still vo City ke andar kaafi prestigious the. Unki family Osian City ke northern part mein rehti hai. Unke under waha par herbal business chal raha hai.

Jaldi hi Ravi ke father uske room mein aate hai aur Ravi ko dekhte hai jo ek chair par baitha hua tha aur paas mein pade fruits ko kha raha tha.

Agar ab old Ravi hota toh vo apne father ko aise dekh kar apne jagah par ho khada ho jata lekin ab uske family mein bhi uska status kaafi increase ho gaya tha. Ab tak vo apne family mein most disappoint member tha. Vo extremely lazy tha.

Par ab Ravi pehle ki tarah nahi raha tha. Ab vo suddenly 5-Star Bronze Rank expert ban gaya tha. Usne uske family ke sabhi younger generation ko cultivation ki speed mein piche chod diya tha.

Ravi ke father toh aisi koi baat ko pehle imagine bhi nahi kar sakte the.

Even jab vo Ravi ke age ke the tab vo sirf 1-Star Bronze Rank tak aa paye the. Ravi ki cultivation speed kaafi zyada thi. Teenage mein hi vo 5-Star Bronze Rank tak aa gaya tha.

Agar Ravi daily hard training karta toh uske father ko itna bada shock nahi lagta. Par unhone kabhi Ravi ko normal training tak karte nahi dekha tha. Saath hi Ravi kaafi timepass karta tha. Kal ki baat thi ke vo Azure Feather Family ke young miss ko ched kar aaya tha. Is baat par unki taraf se kaafi letter aa gaye the ke Ravi ko iski responsibility uthani hogi aur usse unke young miss se shadi karni hogi. Ravi ke father ko toh pehle laga tha ke yeh matter itne aasani se nahi shant hoga par jab unhone un sabi letters ko dekha toh aur bhi shock ho gaye. Tab unhe pata chala ke Ravi ke is cultivation speed ke baremein aur uske last exam ke progress ke baremein Azure Feather Family ko pata chal gaya hoga tabhi unhone iske liye marriage invitation bheja tha. Ravi ke father ko lag raha tha ke agar Ravi daily apni training kare toh vo Gold Rank ya phir Black-Gold Rank expert toh ban hi sakta hai.

Eve vo unke family mein laziest person tha par uski cultivation ki speed kaafi zyada thi.

Aise hi waqt bitne lag gaya. Sabhi apne apne cultivation ko increase karne mein lag gaye the. Kabir apne Heart Integration into Sword ko aur Sword Intent ko perfect karne mein lag gaya tha. Aise hi 1 month bet gaya.

City Lord Mansion.

City Lord aur several Black-Gold Rank experts baith kar kisi cheez par baat kar rahe the.

"City Lord Lord Uday ki taraf se ek news aayi hai. Hamare Osian City ke aaspaas ka climate change hone ke wajah se Demon Beast ki growth kaafi badh gayi hai. Hame kuch logo ko bhej kar un sabhi demon beasts ko maar na hoga aur demon spirits ko collect karna hoga. Agar jaldi hi hamne aisa nahi kiya toh hamare Osian City ke liye yeh bada dangerous ho sakta hai."

Ek Black-Gold Rank expert ne yeh baat City Lord se kahi thi. Yeh the Snow Wind Family ke Main Affairs Elder jo almost Lord Uday ke jitne strong the.

City Lord kuch der shant reh kar kuch soch rahe the. Phir sabhi baato par soch kar unhone kaha.

CL-Thik hai ham ek demon spiritualist ke batch ko demon beasts ko hunt karne ke liye bhej denge. Ek achhi baat hai ke hamare paas Alchemist Association se mile hue elixirs hai. Jisse hamari strength kaafi badh gayi hai. Saath Nine Transformation Pill ke wajah se hamari death count low reh sakti hai.
Yeh kehne ke baad City Lord ke dimag mein kisi figure aati hai. Yeh koi aur nahi balki Kabir hi tha. Saath jab vo first time mile the vo bhi unhe achhe se yaad aaya. City Lord ne apne sir ko jhatka aur aage kaha.

CL-However hame un Dark Guild ke logo se careful rehna hoga.

Agar vo Demon Spiritualist ki batch ko city ke bahar bhejte hai toh Dark Guild ke action lene ke chances kaafi the. Vo aise mile chance ko jaane nahi denge.

MAE-Waise yeh baat chod kar ek aur baat hai. Lord Uday ne is baat ke saath ek itne bhi mere saath bheja hai. Please isse dekhiye.

Yeh keh kar Main Affairs Elder ne apne storage ring mein se ek book nikali.

MAE-Yeh book Lord Uday ko ek kaafi ancient cave mein mili thi. Unhe is book mein likhi hui koi bhi baat samjh nahi aayi aur nahi vo isse read kar paaye.

Main Affairs Elder ne vo book open ki. Usmein bohot se drawings nikali hui thi. Saath hi kisi spell-like stuff bhi likhe hue the. Saath hi ismein kuch demon spirits ke pictures bhi bane hue the.

Suddenly us book se ek energy nikal kar waha fail gayi.

Yeh energy extremely pure thi. Even City Lord ne aise energy pehel kabhi feel nahi ki thi.

CL-Yeh book mili kaha se hai?

City Lord ka dil zor se dhadakne lag gaya tha. Vo us book ko carefully samjhne ki koshish kar rahe the par unhe kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha. Na us book ki language baur na hi usmein bane hue drawings.

MAE-Yeh book Lord Uday ko ek deep demon beast ke cave mein mili hai. Yeh booki kisi expert ke corpse ke paas thi. Jab hamne us corpse ko examine kiya tab hame yeh pata chala ke vo expert jab zinda tha tab vo Legend Rank ke peak par pohoch gaya tha.

Lord Uday hamesha aise hi karte the. Vo kabhi kabhi aise deep caves mein jaate the usse explore karne me liye. Saath hi vo bahar se hi Osian City ke surrounding ko bhi dekhte the.

MAE-Vo cave kaafi dangerous lag rahi thi. Even Lord Uday bhi waha zyada waqt tak rukna nahi chahte the. Unhone is book ko liye aur waha se nikal aaye.

Main Affairs Elder ko pata tha ke yeh book kisi treasure se kam nahi hai par vo isse use mein nahi laa sakte the yeh jaan kar depressed se ho gaye.

Main Affairs Elder abhi kuch soch ho rahe the ke unhone excitement mein kaha.

MAE-City Lord mein ne recently suna hai ke hamare city mein koi genius aaya hai jo ancient books aur language ka knowledge rakhta hai. Kya ham us genius boo invite kar k is book ko usse dikha sakte hai?

Main Affairs Elder ki baat sunkar City Lord bhi shock ho gaye. Unhe phir se Kabir ki vo gusse wali figure yaad aane kag gayi thi.

CL-Uske baremein baat mat karna.

MAE-kyo?

City Lord us din ke baad kabir ke baremein kuch bhi nahi bhule the. Aaj tak sirf unhe Lord Uday jo unke father the sirf wahi apne ghutno par laa sakte the. Par ek teenage ladke ne unhe us din apne ghutno par laa diya tha sirf apne powers ko release kar ke. Aaj tak unhone aise power ko kabhi feel hi nahi kiya tha. Agar us din Rati kabir ko aawaz na lagati toh kya ho jaata yeh City Lord soch bhi nahi sakte the.

City Lord ke expression ko dekh kar Main Affairs Elder samjh gaye ke unke aur kabir ke bich kuch hua hai. Par yeh Osian City ke Safety ka matter tha.

MAE-City Lord is item ko Lord Uday ne apne life ko risk mein daal kar nikala hai. Yeh definitely koi ordinary object nahi hai. Agar hamne iski mystery ko crack kar liye toh yeh hamare Osian City ke liye kisi good fortune ki tarah hoga.

City Lord abhi bhi kuch soch rahe the par phir unhone is baat ko lekar sochna chod diya. After all vo is position mein nahi the ke vo aise matters ko lekar baith jaaye. Unhone apne haat ko wave kiya aur kaha.

CL-Aap jayiye aur usse invite kijiye par mein uske samne nahi aaunga.

MAE-thik hai City Lord.

Main Affairs Elder ne apne sir ko hilaya aur waha se chale gaye.

Kabir's courtyard.

Main Affairs Elder ne jab yaha enter kiya tab unhone sab jagah dekha. Is jagah ki conditions kaafi achhi thi. City Lord ne kisi bhi tarah se kabir ko mistreate nahi kiya tha.

Tabhi unhe ek choti ladki ek tree ke niche baith kar apni practice karte hue dikhti hai. Soul force uske aaspas wave ho raha tha.

Main Affairs Elder ne jab yeh dekha tab halke shock se reh gaye. Apne experience se hi vo bata sakte the ke jo energy ka aura us bachhi ke aaspas bana hua hai vo 3-Star Bronze Rank ka hai.

Par yeh bachhi abhi bhi kaafi choti thi.

Aise genius ke baremein City ke logo ko pata chala toh vo sabhi shock ho jaayenge.

Main Affairs Elder ne ek gehri saas chodi. Unhe yeh jaan kar achha laga ke aise genius City Lord Mansion ke andar hai. Agar yeh bahar hoti aur iske baremein Dark Guild ko pata chalta toh vo isse maarne ke liye zaroor kuch na kuch karte.

Abhi jaise hi Main Affairs Elder andar jaane wale the ke unhe andar se hi koi bahar aate hue dikhta hai. Yeh koi aur nahi kabir tha.

Kabir bahar aa kar Main Affairs Elder ko dekhta hai. Although kabir ne Main Affairs Elder ke powers ko sense kar liya tha par uske liye yeh strength kuch bhi nahi thi.

Kabir-Kya kuch kaam hai jo Snow Wind Family ke Main Affairs Elder khud aaye hai. Jinki strength Lord Uday aur City Lord ke same level ki hai.

Kabir ki baat sunkar Main Affairs Elder kaafi shock the. Unhe nahi pata tha ke unhe kabir dekhte hi pehchan lega. Kyo ki ho almost har waqt Lord Uday ke saath hi travel karte rehte hai. Toh vo Osian City mein zyada waqt ke liye nahi rehte hai. Ek teenage ladka kisi bhi tarah se unhe pehchan nahi sakta hai. Ek baar mein dekh kar toh bilkul bhi nahi.

Apne shock ko apne dil mein suppress kar ke Main Affairs Elder ne kaha.

MAE-sahi kaha mein hu vo hu.

Main Affairs Elder kabir ko kaafi closely dekh rahe the. Unhone yeh suna tha ke koi genius aaya hai Osian City mein. Unhe kabir apne age ke ladko se kaafi mature sa dikh raha tha.

Tabhi ek metalic bird aa kar kabir ke kandhe par land hota hai.

Although yeh bird metal se bana hua tha par uski aankhe kaafi bright aur piercing thi. Aise lag raha tha ki vo aankhe infinite wisdom se bhari hui hai. Vo bird apni aankho se Main Affairs Elder ko dekh raha tha.

"Yeh toh Soul Puppet hai"

Us bird ko dekhte hi Main Affairs Elder shock ho gaye. Lord Uday ke saath travel karte hue Main Affairs Elder kaafi knowledgeable ho gaye the. Unhone soul puppet ke baremein suna tha par kabhi dekha nahi tha. Naahi unhone kabhi yeh suna tha ke soul puppet banane ki koi technique hai.

Jo soul puppet banata hai wahi uska owner ho sakta hai.

Ab jab Kabir ke paas soul puppet hai matalab usne hi isse create kiya hua hai. par soul puppet create karne ki method toh kab ki lost ho gayi hai. Yeh soul puppet kabir ne kaise banaya? Wahi kabir ka soul puppet jaise uske baremein bataya gaya tha waise bilkul bhi nahi hai. Koi bhi agar uski aankho ko dekh le toh bata sakta hai ke yeh bird highly intelligent hai.

Agar koi normal teenage ladka hota toh vo yeh sunkar dar ho jata ke usse milne Snow Wind Family ke Main Affairs Elder aa rahe hai. Par kabir toh directly unki aankho mein dekh raha tha.

Main Affairs Elder ab kabir ko lekar curious hone lag gaye the.

MAE-Maine suna tha ke Osian City mein kisi genius ne janam liya hai. Toh mein usse milne aa gaya.

Main Affairs Elder ne yeh baat smile karte hue kahi. Unhe kabir ka attitude dekh kar kisi bhi tarah se bura feel nahi hua tha.

Kabir-Main Affairs Elder ka mujhse milne aana kisi bhi tarah se simple nahi ho sakta hai.

Kabir ne casually kaha.

Kabir ki baat sunkar Main Affairs Elder ne socha ke unke samne jo teenager khada hai vo sach mein ek teenage ladka hai.

Main Affairs Elder ne apne attitude ko adjust kiya aur ab vo kabir ko kisi bhi tarah se apne se kam nahi samjh rahe the. Unhone kaha.

MAE-Well mein ek request lekar aaya hu.

Kabir ko pata chal gaya tha ke Main Affairs Elder ko zaroor City Lord ne bheja hoga. Us din ke baad toh City Lord kabir ko kaafi avoid kar rahe the. Kabir ko laga ke City Lord ne koi message uske liy bheja hai par jab Main Affairs Elder ne request ke baremein baat ki tab usne is baat ko sochna chod diya aur Main Affairs Elder ki baat ko carefully sunne lag gaya. Waise bhi Main Affairs Elder Rati ke Uncle the.
Nice update bhai
 

Jay Sutar

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Fantastic update bro.
Super update
Superb update bhai
Dhasu update bro
Mind blowing update bhai.
Jbardust update
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Marvelous update...?
Nice mind blowing update
Kya khubshoorat update hai

Lagta hai ab kabir ko ek or pure energy book milne wali hai jise uska knowledge or badhne wala hai
Ya kuch esa hone wala hai jo puri city ko hila ke rakhne wala hai
Bara maja aayega jab kabir or us book ka aamna samna hoga
Likhte raho bhai ji
Fabulous update brother...varun and ravi ke cultivation ke bdhne aur unki fast growth se ab unki family ki strength and khud unki image bhi bahut hi speed me highly growth krne lgi h aur wahi kabir ki sis ne bahut tezi se khud ko cultivate krke 3 star bronze level pr pahucha diya h... Waise jo book main affairs elder and lord uday ko mili h isse kabir ko pkka bahut benefit hone wala h aur isme majood pure energy se kabir ki soul aur bhi jyada refine ho jayegi sayd...waise agr kabir sbhi ke samne uss book ke raaz kholega to sbka shock se bura haal hone wala h jo ek normal baat hi h kisi bhi ancient cheezo ke baare me jankar shocked hona. Jisko unhone imagine bhi nhi kiya ho. Jo modern log khud ko bahut jyada smart talented genius smjhte h unke liye ye chheeze bakai me shock dene wali hongi ki purane jamane me aaj ke waqt ke muqable bahut kuchh tha jo ab ki tulna me atulniya h...chliye dekhte h iss book ke sath kitne raaz bahar aate hain...waiting brother
Nice update
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai ?
Grt update
Lets c what happens when kabeer reads the book.
THANKS GUYS ?.
 

Jay Sutar

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Mast update
Nice update ? dear
Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Bahut hi khubsurat update ...kuch aur lamba hota to aur khushi hoti jay bhai ?
Superb outstanding zabardast update bhai maza aa gaya.ab age dekhte hai kya hota hai .
Fabulous update bhai
Super update hai bhai
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Superb update bro
Fantastic update bhai maza aa gya
THANKS GUYS ?.
 

Jay Sutar

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Behtareen update,
To ek nayi book aur Naya adventure bhi
khubshoorat update
Maja aagaya
Excellent mind blowing update bhai.....
Fantastic update bhai
Sandarrrr update bhai
Next update ka intazar ha.
Nice update ☺
Waiting for the next one ...
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Awesome update
Keep posting
THANKS GUYS ?.
 

Jay Sutar

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nice update but kuchh bhi important event is update mein cover nahin hua.

ravi aur varun ki family ke baare mein jaan kar achha laga. but update thora chhota tha
overall update achha tha. but thora chhota tha isliye nirasha hui.
Dost har update story ke progress ke liye important hi hai. Ab agar mein Varun ke family ki situation na dikhata toh uska jo strong hone ka goal hai vo kyo hai uske piche ka reason kya hai yeh kaise pata nahi chalta. Issi se toh character ki development hoti hai. Aap bas saath rahiye ab story halki speed lene wali hai.
 

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Dost har update story ke progress ke liye important hi hai. Ab agar mein Varun ke family ki situation na dikhata toh uska jo strong hone ka goal hai vo kyo hai uske piche ka reason kya hai yeh kaise pata nahi chalta. Issi se toh character ki development hoti hai. Aap bas saath rahiye ab story halki speed lene wali hai.
Aapki baat Puri Tarah sahi hai story mein Varun and Ravi ka important role hai aur use misunderstand karna to sambhav hi Nahin hai

Otherwise
Jaan Kar achcha laga ki story halki speed Lene wali hai
And Aapke story Ka koi bhi update chhota Nahi hota hai
But previous update ke tulna me update 60 Thora choota tha

Otherwise
Next update Ka besabri se intezar
Ho sake to today ke update Ka current timing bata dijiye
 

Jay Sutar

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Sorry bro mai is bar kuch bolna chahu ga

Bro aap ne varun ki family ke bare me bata aur ye bhi bataya ki wo silver rank me hai aur Nobel family ki girls usse shadi karna chahti hai

Par mere hisaab se ek bettel krwana chahiye tha jisse varun ki strength sub ko pata chale aur usko us bettel me jitna tha jisse aur bhi ye update accha ho sakta tha family description ka

Baki aap writer hai to aap accha hi soche hoge

Rhi baat update ki to update accha tha
Par aur accha ho sakta tha
Dost mein aapki baat ka bura nahi manunga. Dekha jaaye toh ek had tak aap ki baat sahi hai lekin abhi tak Varun ke character aur uski powers mein itni growth nahi hui hai ke uski battle dikha sake. Ha vo apne age ke ladko se kaafi mature hai like kabir. Par kabir ki baat hi alag hai. Vo jis technique ki practice karta hai vo GOD level ki hai. Jisse khud us technique ne choose kiya hai. Wahi Kabir ne jo apne friends ko techniques di hai vo bhi kaafi powerful hai bas unhe abhi tak uska anzada nahi hai. Saath hi Varun aur baki sabhi friends abhi abhi Silver Rank aur Demon Spirit ke saath merge hue hai unhe abhi thoda waqt hai utna powerful hone mein. Waise bhi ek battle aa rahi hai sabhi ke liye jaha Kabir aur uske sabhi friends apni powers dikhane wale hai. Aap bas saath rahiye.
 
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