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Nice update bhai
Bhai hamesa suspense main chod dete ho
Fabulous update bhai
But update mast he
Nice
Nice update
Awesome bhai
Bhai super update hai bhai aise hi update aage dete rahiyega.
Rati, Rati, Rati, oh my snow princess.
Jab apne pyar ke itne najdeek ho aur usse kho dene ke baad phir se dekho, toh control nahin hota hain. Usse door rahen hi ek saja lagti hain, kabir pata nahin kaise sah raha hain. Kab Rati uske pyar ko samjhegi.
kabir ne ek wish toh mang lee, lekin baki ke 2 wishes kya mangega yeh dekhne layak hoga. Kya issi bahane wo mithali aur rati ki friendship kara dega apne wish ke roop mein.
kaheen usse shaadi karne ko toh nahin kahega. Dekhte hain.
Kabir ko city lord ko satana bahut majedar tha.
Rati dhere-dhere pighal rahi hain.
City lord ko toh kabeer ka greatful hona chahiye lekin ulta wo usse khar khaye hue baithe hain.
Kabir unhe apne asliyat kyun nahin bata deta, saale sasur ke fat ke haath aa jayegi.
BEMISHAL, THA AAJ KA UPDATE.
waiting to see kabir and friends back in school.
Fantastic update bro
Super update hai bhai
Nice mind blowing update jay bhai
Next update Ka besabri se intezar
And sath hi ek small battle Ka city lord and Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ke bich
Aur sath hi villen Ka bhi saga empire ka
Otherwise
My story
raj-viraj-hero-devil-two-in-one
Mind blowing update bro.
Khubsurat update Bhai.
Kabir ka rati ko satana bahut achhe se dikhya apne.
City lord bichara kya kre kya na kre aaisi halat ho gaya hai.
Ab dekhna hai aage kya hota hai
Waiting for next update
THANKS GUYS ?.Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Nice update
Fabulous update
Jabardast update bhai maza aa gaya.age dekhte hai kya hota hai.
Nice update bro
Awesome update ?
Advance Sorry bro
Ek taraf Kabir rati aur uske pita ka majak bana raha hai dekha jaye to uske pas jo past life experience hai uska vo galat use kar raha hai agar vo rati se pyar karta hai jo ki vo karta hai to vo uske pita ko you baate na sunata aur baate bhi vo isiliye suna paa raha hai ki vo sabse kabil ho gaya hai to ek tarah se ye to uska ghamand hi hua na aur dusari baat bro aapki story mind blowing hai VJ4U ke baad aapki story hai jise mene kayi baar repeat karke padha hai but bro thodi to speed badhao aise to bor ho jate hai majak ki baate padhke aur jitna strong foundation aap dena hai do lekin uski bajah se story ki speed bhi ruk jati hai jese abhi ke update me dekho ya last ke 2 update me Kabir ke siva kisi ki koi velue hi nahi dikhayi aapne bas Kabir aur rati
Kya methali city lord mention me nahi hai kya uska kuch bhi roll nahi hai kya
Awesome update bhai keep posting
THANKS GUYS ?.Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai ?
Fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
Good one bro
Mast Update
Nice update bhai
Maza aa gya
बहुत शानदार अपडेट हैं दोस्त
Suppper update bro
THANKS GUYS ?.Wow bhai waise dekha jaye to apane sasur ko pareshan karna har damad ka hak hain to kabir bhi wahi kar raha hain waise bhai abhi tak koi fight nahi hui bina fight ke maja nahi aata bhai waise bhai aapaki story ke sare update hi lajawab hain sari frustrations dur ho jati hain
Ab waiting for new update bhai
LEKIN........?Apki kahani 1no ha lekin
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shandar update docter bhai
Excellent update bhai
You are just awesome i'm loving it so much...
Bahut hi romantic update tha
Thori khatti or thori mithi bato se bhara update
Chalo is update me CL ko pata chal gya ki kabir ne rati ko help ki hai aapne cultivation ko badhane me or use domain spirit bhi diya hai
Ab dekhte hai kya hota hai
Ese hi likhte raho bhai ji
nice update bro waiting for next
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Awesome update
Super update bhai mind blowing
Nice Update
THANKS GUYS ?.Tales of damon and gods......se aap ki story jyada achi he..pura detail me likh te ho aap. ...good going
Nice update bro
Very nice update
Once again a nice update brother as always..
Jaha 10k demon-beast array lgane ki taiyariyaan joro pr h wahi dusri trf kabir- rati ki mjedaar nok jhok jaari h aur iss baar isme kabir ne city lord ko bhi le liya...ek teer se 2 sikaar .. Jaha wo srf rati se baat krke city lord ke baare me uske views jaanna chah rha tha wahin usne city lord ko bhi extra sochne me majbur kr diya h ki baki city ki zimmedari ke alawa bhi unki ek aur zimmedari h rati ke liye..uss bin maa ki bacchi ke liye unko usko extra time chahe wo kuchh waqt ki hi kyu nhi hota wo dena chahiye tha taki rati ko kbhi bhi akela pan mehsus na ho... Ek higher family se belong karti h rati aur uska agr koi friend bnega to usme dosti se jyada lalch hoga rati ke status ko dekh kr...isliye rati ka koi frnd nhi tha aur ab jo h unhe uske status se koi frk nhi pdta kyuki wo uske sachhe dost h...pr fir bhi rati ka sbhi se interaction km se hi wo bhi isiliye ki abhi bhi uske mann me ek drr h ki kahin maithili ki trha uske wo dost bhi family difference ke karan door na ho jaaye ...wahi city lord ko bhi uski fikr h pr wo apni zimmedariyon ke kaaran kbhi ye fikr rati pr zahir hi nhi kr ske pr unhe smjhna chahiye ki rati ko unki kitni jarurt h..aur aaj ke vakya se unki soch me kuchh farak jarur aayega kabir ar rati dono ke liye....
So waiting bro nice update
Fantastic update
Sir, ye alternate day wali saza kb tk milti rhegi????
Waiting for next update
Parsanshniye update hai dost.
Intjaar rahega mitr agli update ka.
Waiting for next one
Waiting next update bro
THANKS GUYS ?.aap ki rayting
lajawab ha I am b happy
Ok bhai intzar rahegaUpdate 10 baje aayega.
Peace ✌?.