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Fantasy Gods and Demons

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Lovekillsyou

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Note- Update 177 hi 178 hain
 
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Jay Sutar

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Wow bhai nice update shayad ab mujhe lagta hain CL Rati ke liye man jayege waise pichale update main is han ke bare main bahut kuchh bataya tha mujhe lagta hain ab is story ka naya willen aa gaya hain dekhte hain aage kya hota hain
Waiting for new update bhai
WELL HAN STORY KA VILLAIN NAHI HAI. IT'S JUST ONE OF THE SHOW UP CHARACHTER JO KUCH CHAPTERS TAK HAI.
THANKS.
 

Jay Sutar

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Nice update bhai waiting for next update
kabir ne apani jaan jokhim me daalkar city ko bachaya tha.Ab city lord ka kabir ko dekhane ka najariya badal gaya. Dekhate hain kabir ko kab hosh aata hai
Next update Ka besabri se intezar jay bhai
Super great writing skills bhai...
Han ka jyada jental hona samajh nahi aaraha aur ab shayad Kabir ka naya dusman bhi ban sakta hai kyonki use dar rahega ki uski gaddi n chinn jaye
Nice update bro waiting for next
Awesome story bro....
Bhai ap har update pe jo detailing karte hai woh kam kar de...
Kyuki apki har baat ki detailing karne mein update ka 50% se jada ata hai aur scene ya jo event ho raha hai..
Superb update bro

Waiting for next update
Waiting bhai
THANKS GUYS ✌😊.
 

Jay Sutar

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Awesome story bro....
Bhai ap har update pe jo detailing karte hai woh kam kar de...
Kyuki apki har baat ki detailing karne mein update ka 50% se jada ata hai aur scene ya jo event ho raha hai..
WELL ISKE BAREMEIN MEIN KHUD BHI KUCH NAHI KAR SAKTA HU BECAUSE IT'S ONE OF MY NATURE AS A DOCTOR I HAVE TO PAY ATTENTION TO THE DETAILS.
 

Jay Sutar

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wow akhir pathhar ko bhi pighla hi diya kabir ne, city lord ke man mein bhi ab uske liye soft corner ho chuki hain.
akhir unhe kabir se problem kya hai wo strong hain, intelligent hain. Intelligent nahin genius hain,haan thora unhe pareshan jaroor kar raha tha.
lekin usne apne selfless behaviour se unke heart ko bhi halka change jaroor kar diya hain.

Waise Han se kya kabir ko koi khatra toh nahin. matlab kya uske dil mein rati ke liye koi soft corner toh nahin.
mujhe lagta hain bad mein maithali ke father uske liye han ka rishta jaroor mangenge lekin maithali aisa nahin chahegi.
Ya phir Han maithali ko dekh ke dil de baithega aur wo usko pana chahega tab shayad kabir aur han mein takrav hoga.

Waise city lord ne jo bina ek baar bhi sankoc kiye itne rare herb uske liye de diya, yeh unka kabir ke liye unke feelings ko darshata hain.

at last rati ko bhi ab kabir ke liye thora na thora pyar toh feel ho hi raha hain, pata nahin wo kab tak bhagegi kabir se.
wo toh khul ke izhzar kar raha hain apne pyar ka.

Han aur kabir ke first meeting ko thora interesting banana, kyunki han waise abhi tak ghamandi toh nahin laga lekin mujhe lagta hain wo kabir ke samne apni superiority jaroor show karna chahega.

Waise yeh dark guild ka kya raj hain, aur wo osian city ko barbad karne pe kyun tuli hain.

and least but not last kabir abhi tak hosh mein kyun nahin aaya hain. shayad aapne isis bahane rati ko kabir ke najdeek karne ka plan bana liya hoga.

superb update rati ka kabir ke liye itni care dekh ke adbhut anand kee prapti hui.
bechara kabir hamesha uske liye tarapta rahta hain.

kya kabir rati ko undono ke pichhle yaadon ke baare mein kabhi batayega ya phir rati ko wo shab yaad aayega.

don't know. waiting for your next amazing update.
Maza aa geya next update ka intazar rahe ga.
NAHI HAN KE DIL MEIN RATI KE LIYE KOI SOFT CORNER NAHI HAI PAR KISI AUR KE LIYE JO AAJ KE UPDATE MEIN SAB KO PATA CHAL JAAYEGA. WAHI BAAT DARK GUILD KI TOH USKE PAAS AISA KOI MAIN REASON NAHI HAI OSIAN CITY KO DESTROY KARNE KA VO BAS USSE BINA KISI BHI REASON KE DESTROY KARNA CHAHTI HAI. PAR IS SAB KHEL KA DARK GUILD EK SMALL PART HAI. VO JISSE BELONG KARTI HAI VO KAAFI BADA MATTER HAI JO PAHSE 2 MEIN SAB KO PATA CHAL JAAYEGA.
THANKS ✌😊.
 

Jay Sutar

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UPDATE 10-10:30 KE BICH AAYEGA. ABHI THODA LIKHNA BAAKI HAI.
PEACE.
 

malhotra.nisha

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Jay Bhai,

Pichle 3 din se aapki ye story padhi, shuru se ab tak. Bas kya kahu...... It's pure bliss reading this story. Bilkul mere pasand ka fantasy genre hai... Naruto series ke baad yahi pasand aaya hai. Bahut barik details mein gae ho aap. Lagta aage bhi bahut maza aayega...
 

Jay Sutar

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Jay Bhai,

Pichle 3 din se aapki ye story padhi, shuru se ab tak. Bas kya kahu...... It's pure bliss reading this story. Bilkul mere pasand ka fantasy genre hai... Naruto series ke baad yahi pasand aaya hai. Bahut barik details mein gae ho aap. Lagta aage bhi bahut maza aayega...
THANKS ✌😊.
 
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