Lovekillsyou
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Dost agar mein ne in small details ko hi chod diya toh kisi ko bhi yeh samajh mein nahi aayega ke story mei is character ke pass yeh power aayi kaha se hai. Yahi toh story ke foundation ka part hai. Agar inhe chod diya toh sab yahi puchte baith jayenge ke yeh power hai kya. Is character ko kab aur kyo mili hai. Aise hi de di power toh kaafi confusion ho jaayega.Bro ap kuch zada he details mai chaly jaty ho jis ki wja sy story boht slow slow aagy ja rahi hy . Aik he scene mai apka update ada ho jata hy
Thorha Story ko Speed up kijyey
Jo zruri ho wohi details mai likho
Baki batyn likhny ki zada zrurt nahi hy
Or kindly update size ko brha kijyey
Shukriya ✌
Correct bhaiDost agar mein ne in small details ko hi chod diya toh kisi ko bhi yeh samajh mein nahi aayega ke story mei is character ke pass yeh power aayi kaha se hai. Yahi toh story ke foundation ka part hai. Agar inhe chod diya toh sab yahi puchte baith jayenge ke yeh power hai kya. Is character ko kab aur kyo mili hai. Aise hi de di power toh kaafi confusion ho jaayega.
Peace.
Fight time me love nahi hoga par lekin jab school me addmission hone ke baad toda so love mode start hogaBhai story to amazing hai but kuch bahut jaruri things missing hai like 2 mangetar hai but no romance koi conversation hi nhi Kabir ka uski hone wali wife's ke sath.