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"Lagta hai is year ka first place ab Square Commandery Prince ke naam hi hoga."

"Agar usne third floor ke first obsticle ko bhi pass kar liya toh yeh kaafi incredible hoga. Mein ne suna hai jab three female devil's ne jab is tower mein apni test di thi tab unhone third floor ke first obsticle ko clear kar liya tha."

Sabhi aisi hj baate discuss kar rahe the.

Kuch der baad Square Commandery Prince tower se bahar gaya.

Uske bahar aate hi Master Situ jaldi se uske samne aa gaye aur unhone usse pucha.

"Kya tumne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya ?"

Square Commandery Prince ne arrogantly sabhi warriors ki taraf dekha. Uski aankhe Kabir par focus thi aur usne ek smile ke saath kaha.

"Mein ne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya hai but second obsticle ko pass nahi kar paya."

Master Situ yeh sunkar kaafi khush ho gaye the aur unhone kaha.

"Great!"

Jaise hi Square Commandery Prince ne apni baat kahi uske baad hi sabhi jagah se kuch na kuch baat sabhi ko sunayi dene lag gayi thi.

"Incredible!"

"Isne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya. Iska talent zaroor three devil's ke level par hoga. Jo Western Campus ko ek tarah se rule kar rahi hai."

"Amazing! Square Commandery Prince ke talent ko dekh kar yeh zaroor is female rules ko break kar dega."

Yeh baat ek male external student ne kaafi excited ho kar kahi thi

"New students mein se first place ab iska hi hai. Usko ab isse koi shayd hi le sakta hai."

Inhi baato ke saath ek aur group ne tower mein entery le li.

Is group mein na sirf Zina thi balki Rati, Maithili, Riya aur 9th Princess bhi thi. Wahi Moon Commandery se aayi hui unki genius warrior bhi thi is group mein


Unke andar jaate hi kuch hi der mein ek warrior fail ho kar bahar aa gaya tha

Uske bahar aane ke baad aur 5 warriors fail ho kar bahar aa gaye the.

Sabhi yeh dekh rahe the aur tabhi second floor ko indicate karne wali light jal gayi.

Waha par jitney bhi elders the unhone apne sir ko haa mein hilate hue ek dusre se kaha.

"Is group mein kaafi achhe warriors hai. Waise tumne un 5 ladkiyo ko notice kiya. Jinmei se shayad 3 Tiny World se belong karti hai aur ek Nether Realm se. Wahi unke saath Yunvu Commandery ki 9th Princess bhi hai. Mein ne suna hai in sabhi ne first round mein kaafi achha perform kiya hai. Specially un 2 Tiny World ki ladkiyo ne. Upar se do no bhi hamari strong female external students ki tarah dikhti hai. Dekhte hai yeh ab second floor par kya kar sakti hai."

Sabhi apne apne taraf se har ek warrior ke baremein baate kar rahe the.

Wahi Nether Master ko Zina, Rati aur Maithili par puri tarah se confidence tha. Unhe is baat ka pura bharosa tha ke yeh 3no ladkiya second floor ke third obsticle ko pass kar sakti hai. Bas vo Yunvu Commandery ke 9th Princess ke baremein sure nahi the.

Par unhe itna pata tha ke vo bhi at least second floor ke 1-2 obsticles ko pass toh kar hi sakti hai.

Kuch der baad Rati, Maithili Riya aur 9th Princess tower se bahar aa gaye. Unke bahar aate hi unhone ek baar Kabir ko dekha aur phir apni jagah jaa kar khadi ho gayi thi. Par Zina abhi tak tower mein hi thi.

Zina ke saath Moon Commandery ki warrior bhi abhi tak tower mein hi thi.

Kuch der baad third floor ki light on ho gayi.

Yeh dekh kar kuch elders ke face ke expressions change ho gaye the. After all is campus mein last 100 years se sirf females hi rule mein thi aur males kuch hi the jo kaafi outstanding the.

Unhe lag raha tha ke Square Commandery Prince ke aane ke baad vo is tradition ko change kar sakte hai. Par aisa kisi ne bhi nahi socha tha ke unhe aur 2 female prodigies mil jaayegi.

An yeh tradition kaafi dangerous sa ho gaya tha.

Agar vo dono tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar leti hai toh yeh Western Campus par phir se females ka hi rule continue rahega aur agar aise hi aage chalta raha toh yeh Western Campus ke liye kaafi dangerous baat hogi. Specially male students ke liye. Martial Market School ke Western Campus ka naam par ek daag ki tarah yeh lag jaayega.

Wahi dur khade Square Commandery Prince ne ek cold hasi k saath kaha.

"Third floor ka first obsticle extremely difficult hai. Even mein khud bhi almost fail ho gaya tha. Par yeh zaroor fail ho jaayegi."

Par Kabir Zina ke talent par kaafi confident tha. After all Zina ek Saint bloodline ki descendants thi. Uski physical qualities aur uske sense sabhi extreme level par sharp the.

Vo talent mein kisi bhi tarah se Square Commandery Prince se piche nahi thi. Dekha jaaye toh vo usse slightly stronger bhi thi.

Kuch hi der baad Moon Commandery ki warrior tower se bahar aa gayi. Wahi uske piche hi Zina bhi bahar aa gayi thi.

Sabhi elders un dono ke paas gaye aur unse puchne lag gaye ke andar kya hua

Jispar Moon Commandery ki warrior ne kaha.

"Mein ne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya but second mein fail ho gayi."
Uski baat sunkar Zina ne bhi apne sir ko haan mein hilate hue kaha.

Zina-Mera bhu same result hai.

Yeh sunkar sabhi elders hasne kag gaye. Is year ke new students kaafi achhe the. Is year mein 3 prodigies unhe dikh rahe the. Jinhone tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya tha.

Western Campus ke history ko dekhe toh har 10 years mein koi ek hi warrior ho sakta tha jo third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar sakta tha.

Par recent years mein yeh kuch frequently hone lag gaya tha.

Unke liye yeh ek achhi baat thi!

Agar kisi bhi tarah ke accidents nahi hue toh Square Commandery Prince, Zina aur Moon Commandery ki warrior yeh 3 no hi is year ki top students hi jayenge. Unki ranking unke tower mein kiye hue performance par depend thi.

"Miss. Zina kaafi Powerful hai. Vo is tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar sakti hai. Usse zaroor bohot reward milega iske liye."

Yeh baat ek Yunvu Commandery warrior ne kahi thi.

Wahi Linsen ne kaha.

Linsen-Is year ke new students kaafi strong hai. Mein ne socha tha ke mein top 10 ki list mein aa sakta hu but ab mere chances kaafi kam hai.

Tabhi ek elder ne Kabir, Ravi, Linsen, Duan, Varun aur kuch warriors ka naam liya.

Vo sabhi jaa kar elders ke samne khade ho gaye.

Unmein se kuch warriors Black Realm ke Mid Stage par the aur kuch Dawn Stage par.

Jo Dawn Stage par the unmein Varun, Duan aur ek warrior jo Square Commandery se belong karta tha. Varun aur Duan ko Black Infernal Tower ko Black Flame ne kaafi help ki thi in jaldi ke break through ke liye. Par Kabir ki baat ko sunkar ab unhone apne next break through ko rok diya aur ab kuch der tak vo issi stage par rehne wale the. Nahi toh unki foundation weak hone ke chances kaafi ho sakti thi.

Us Square Commandery warrior ek baar Kabir aur baki sabhi warriors ko dekha aur socha.

"In sabhi ki cultivation kaafi weak hai. Is group mein shayad mein stand out kar sakta hu."

Square Commandery Prince ne Kabir ko dekha aur socha.

"Agar yeh Yan Ning jaise warrior ko maar sakta hai toh iska talent kisi bhi tarah se normal nahi hoga. Par phir bhi yeh Black Realm Mid Stage par hai. Yeh dekhte heu mein yeh surely keh sakta hu ke yey zyada se zyada second floor ke third obsticle ko pass kar sakta hai."

Sabhi 10 warriors tower ke andar jaa kar uske first floor par chale jaate hai.

Sabhi ke samne 10 doors the aur unke aage aur 10 small door the.

Un small doors par three ancient carved characters the. The First Obsticle.

Kabir ne ek baar sabhi ki taraf dekha aur phir kaafi relax ho kar usne second door mein enter kar liya. Kabir ke jaane ke baad baki sabhi warriors bhi apne apne doors choose kar ke andar chale gaye.

Jaise hi kabir us small door se anadr aaya waise hi usne apne aap ko kisi closed Martial Arts Field mein paya. Sabhi side metal se bani hui thi.

Yeh closed Martial Arts Field kaafi bada tha. Uski lenght aur width kuch 20 meters ki thi aur height kuch 30 meters ki. Har metal wall par 16 jagah bani hui thi aur usmein bronze colour ki lights rakhi hui thi.

Kabir chalte hue us martial arts field ke center mein aa gaya aur apne upar ke metal wall ko dekhne lag gaya.

Tabhi us wall ke side se ek warrior jo shayad 20 years ka tha vo chalte hue bahar aaya. Vo Kabir me samne aaya aur usne Kabir se kaha.

"Mein hi Luo Su. Mein represent karta hu Black Realm ki most powerful force Mid Stage ko. Agar tum mere 3 attacks ko jhel paaye toh tum is first obsticle se pass ho jaaoge."

Kabir ke samne jo Luo Su khada tha vo koi real person nahi tha. Yeh ek Spiritual Body thi jisse is tower ne apne Spiritual Qi se banaya tha.

Kabir-Tum Mid Stage ke most powerful force ko represent karte ho ?

Kabir ki baat ko sunkar Luo Su hasne laga aur usne Kabir se kaha

"Omen Ridge mein Martial Market School open hue sirf 460 years hi hue hai. Har year mein new students yaha aate hai is tower mein break through karne ke liye. Sirf new students hi nahi jo students abhi Western Campus mein practice kar rahe vo bhi aate hai yaha par break through karne ke liye. Mein Western Campus mein Black Realm ke Mid Stage ka strongest warrior hu."

Kabir Luo Su ki baat ko sunkar kuch had tak yaha par kya hota hai yeh samajh gaya tha.

Kabir-Toh agar mera cultivation Advance Stage par hota toh mein last 460 years ke sabse strongest Advance Stage warrior se milta. Right?

Kabir ki is baat ko sunkar Luo Su hasne laga aur usne kaha.

"Exactly!"

Kabir ne apne sir ko hilate hue kaha.

Kabir-Toh mujhe tumhare three attacks ko jhelna hai aur mein is first obsticle se pass ho jaunga ?

"Sahi kaha tumne."

Kabir-Kya hoga agar mein ne hi tumhe hara diya toh ?

Yeh sunkar Luo Su ne kaha.

"Agar aisa hua toh tum dirwci second floor ke first obsticle kar chale jaoge. Tum yaha par meri jagah bhi le sakte ho aur Mid Stage ke challanger bhi ban sakte ho. Par mein yeh keh du ke mujhe harana easy nahi hoga."

Kabir ne apne normal sword ko nikate hue kaha.

Kabir-Toh isse try bhi kar dekh lete hai.

Kabir ne apne Flashing Shining Sword ko utha liya. Uske us sword ko uthate hi Kabir jaise apne surrounding ke saath ek sa ho gaya tha.

Usne apne Space Domain ko use nahi kiya tha. Kyo ki vo last 460 years mein se Black Realm ke Mid Stage ke sabse strongest warrior ke saath equal battle karna chahta tha.

Wahi upar tower mein do kaafi khubsurat ladkiya ek secret room mein baithi hui thi.

Yeh koi aur nahi balki Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina thi. Jo room ke center mein baith kar unke samne jo 10 Spiritual Qi mirrors the unhe dekh rahi thi. Yeh mirrors hawa mein udd rahe the aur isse unhe har warrior ke progress ke barei pata chalta tha.

Normally isse Martial Market School ke 2 Silver Robed elders yeh sab dekhte the.

Par Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina ko is year ke new talented students ko dekhna chahti thi. Is liye unhone yaha ke dono elders ke saath yeh deal ki ke vo yeh sab dekh lengi.

Senior Shreya ka aura kaafi cold tha. Uske vo Royal Blue hairs uske face par baar baar aa rahe the. Uske vo hairs uske fair skin ko kaafi achhe dikh rahe the.

Usne apne same jo mirrors the unhe dekah aur kaha.

Shreya-Square Commandery Prince, Mooo Commandery ki warrior aur Zina ko dekhe ke baad mujhe nahi lagta hai jaise ab koi bacha hoga jo unke talent ke pay bhi aata hoga. Wahi agar koi prodigy nikla bhi toh vo inke jitna strong nahi hoga. Overall is year ke new students achhe hai. Ab mein apne practice ke liye jana chahti hu.

Senior Shreya ab ismein bilkul bhi interested nahi thi. Jab vo apni jagah se khadi hui toh uski figure kaafi tall si dikh rahi thi. Vo khade ho kar room ke door ki taraf jaane lag gayi

Par wahi Senior Dina abhi bhi un mirrors ko dekh rahi thi aur uske face ke expressions har pal change ho rahe the.

Dina-Interesting! So interesting!

Senior Shreya jo ab tak room ke door tak aa gayi thi vo wahi ruk gayi aur usne palat kar Senior Dina se pucha.

Shreya-Dina tum abhi bhi dekh rahi ho ?

Senior Dina jo kisi teenager ki tarah dikhti thi vo bhi three female devil's mein se ek thi.

Wahi Senior Shreya bhi three female devil's mein se ek thi.

Yeh dono hi Warrior of Division Profound thi. Yeh dono hi masters of Western Campus the aur koi bhi unhe challenge nahi kar sakta tha.

Senior Dina ne apne haat ko wave karte hue Senior Shreya ko apne paas aane ko kaha.

Dina-Sister Shreya jaldi yaha aao. Yeh Black Realm ke Mid Stage ka warrior Luo Su ke saath battle kar raha aur usne apne aap ko kafi achhe se hold kar ke bhi rakha hua hai.

Shreya-Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ? Luo Su Omen Ridge ke Martial Market School ke last 460 years mein se ek top prodigy hai. Vo ek ghost prodigy of generations hai. Kya aisa possible bhi hai ke koi warrior bhi same realm mein ho aur vo Luo Su ko battle mein rival kar sake ?

Senior Shreya kaafi shock thi is liye vo piche aayi aur us mirror ko dekhne lag gayi jismein Kabir dikh raha tha.

Mirrors mei 2 warriors kaafi tense battle mein engaged the.

Vo extremely fast move kar rahe the. Uske wajah se sirf unke shadows hi piche reh rahe the.

Senior Shreya ke facial expressions halke se change ho gaye. Uski aankho mei ek bright light si dikhne lag gayi thi. Usne waise hi shock ho kar Senior Dina se pucha.

Shreya-Ab tak unhone kitne strikes exchny kiye hai ?

Dina-74 Strikes!

Yeh sunkar Senior Shreya phir se aa kar apni jagah par baith gayi aur uske samne jo name list thi usse utha kae dekhne lag gayi.

Shreya-Yeh zaroor Tiny World se aaya hai aur iska naam 'Kabir' hai. Kya isse yeh pata nahi hai ke yaha par Kabir naam nahi rakha jata hai.

Senior Shreya ki is baat par Senior Dina hasne kag gayi aur usne kaha.

Dina-Ab tum usse uske naam ko change karne ke liye toh nahi kehne wali ho na ?

Shreya-Mein uske is tower ke test ko pass karne tak wait karungi. Agar isne Luo Su ke 100 strikes ko jhel liya toh yeh sach mein ek outstanding prodigy hai. Agar yeh apne naam ko change kar le toh mein isse zinda rakhne ke baremein sochungi.

Yeh baat Senior Shreya ne kaafi cold tone mein kahi thi.

Senior Shreya sabhi prodigies ko kaafi great nazar se dekhti thi.

Suddenly Spiritual Qi mirror mein jo ho raha tha vo change ho gaya. Kabir ko sword technique kaafi harsh hone lag gayi thi. Iske wajah se Luo Su bhi kuch steps apne piche lene lag gaya tha.

"Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ?"


Yeh baat dono Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina ne ek sath kahi thi. Unhone yeh keh kar apni saanso tak ko jaise rok liya tha aur shock ho kar apne samne jo mirror tha usse dekhne mag gayi thi.
Awesome update bhai....
 

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Jay bhai apny to suspence ma he mar diya fight pore kar dete ab to nend be aany se rhe ke aagy kya hoga

Thats not fear jay bhai

Well fadu update next ka besbri se intzar
 

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Update 123

"Lagta hai is year ka first place ab Square Commandery Prince ke naam hi hoga."

"Agar usne third floor ke first obsticle ko bhi pass kar liya toh yeh kaafi incredible hoga. Mein ne suna hai jab three female devil's ne jab is tower mein apni test di thi tab unhone third floor ke first obsticle ko clear kar liya tha."

Sabhi aisi hj baate discuss kar rahe the.

Kuch der baad Square Commandery Prince tower se bahar gaya.

Uske bahar aate hi Master Situ jaldi se uske samne aa gaye aur unhone usse pucha.

"Kya tumne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya ?"

Square Commandery Prince ne arrogantly sabhi warriors ki taraf dekha. Uski aankhe Kabir par focus thi aur usne ek smile ke saath kaha.

"Mein ne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya hai but second obsticle ko pass nahi kar paya."

Master Situ yeh sunkar kaafi khush ho gaye the aur unhone kaha.

"Great!"

Jaise hi Square Commandery Prince ne apni baat kahi uske baad hi sabhi jagah se kuch na kuch baat sabhi ko sunayi dene lag gayi thi.

"Incredible!"

"Isne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya. Iska talent zaroor three devil's ke level par hoga. Jo Western Campus ko ek tarah se rule kar rahi hai."

"Amazing! Square Commandery Prince ke talent ko dekh kar yeh zaroor is female rules ko break kar dega."

Yeh baat ek male external student ne kaafi excited ho kar kahi thi

"New students mein se first place ab iska hi hai. Usko ab isse koi shayd hi le sakta hai."

Inhi baato ke saath ek aur group ne tower mein entery le li.

Is group mein na sirf Zina thi balki Rati, Maithili, Riya aur 9th Princess bhi thi. Wahi Moon Commandery se aayi hui unki genius warrior bhi thi is group mein


Unke andar jaate hi kuch hi der mein ek warrior fail ho kar bahar aa gaya tha

Uske bahar aane ke baad aur 5 warriors fail ho kar bahar aa gaye the.

Sabhi yeh dekh rahe the aur tabhi second floor ko indicate karne wali light jal gayi.

Waha par jitney bhi elders the unhone apne sir ko haa mein hilate hue ek dusre se kaha.

"Is group mein kaafi achhe warriors hai. Waise tumne un 5 ladkiyo ko notice kiya. Jinmei se shayad 3 Tiny World se belong karti hai aur ek Nether Realm se. Wahi unke saath Yunvu Commandery ki 9th Princess bhi hai. Mein ne suna hai in sabhi ne first round mein kaafi achha perform kiya hai. Specially un 2 Tiny World ki ladkiyo ne. Upar se do no bhi hamari strong female external students ki tarah dikhti hai. Dekhte hai yeh ab second floor par kya kar sakti hai."

Sabhi apne apne taraf se har ek warrior ke baremein baate kar rahe the.

Wahi Nether Master ko Zina, Rati aur Maithili par puri tarah se confidence tha. Unhe is baat ka pura bharosa tha ke yeh 3no ladkiya second floor ke third obsticle ko pass kar sakti hai. Bas vo Yunvu Commandery ke 9th Princess ke baremein sure nahi the.

Par unhe itna pata tha ke vo bhi at least second floor ke 1-2 obsticles ko pass toh kar hi sakti hai.

Kuch der baad Rati, Maithili Riya aur 9th Princess tower se bahar aa gaye. Unke bahar aate hi unhone ek baar Kabir ko dekha aur phir apni jagah jaa kar khadi ho gayi thi. Par Zina abhi tak tower mein hi thi.

Zina ke saath Moon Commandery ki warrior bhi abhi tak tower mein hi thi.

Kuch der baad third floor ki light on ho gayi.

Yeh dekh kar kuch elders ke face ke expressions change ho gaye the. After all is campus mein last 100 years se sirf females hi rule mein thi aur males kuch hi the jo kaafi outstanding the.

Unhe lag raha tha ke Square Commandery Prince ke aane ke baad vo is tradition ko change kar sakte hai. Par aisa kisi ne bhi nahi socha tha ke unhe aur 2 female prodigies mil jaayegi.

An yeh tradition kaafi dangerous sa ho gaya tha.

Agar vo dono tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar leti hai toh yeh Western Campus par phir se females ka hi rule continue rahega aur agar aise hi aage chalta raha toh yeh Western Campus ke liye kaafi dangerous baat hogi. Specially male students ke liye. Martial Market School ke Western Campus ka naam par ek daag ki tarah yeh lag jaayega.

Wahi dur khade Square Commandery Prince ne ek cold hasi k saath kaha.

"Third floor ka first obsticle extremely difficult hai. Even mein khud bhi almost fail ho gaya tha. Par yeh zaroor fail ho jaayegi."

Par Kabir Zina ke talent par kaafi confident tha. After all Zina ek Saint bloodline ki descendants thi. Uski physical qualities aur uske sense sabhi extreme level par sharp the.

Vo talent mein kisi bhi tarah se Square Commandery Prince se piche nahi thi. Dekha jaaye toh vo usse slightly stronger bhi thi.

Kuch hi der baad Moon Commandery ki warrior tower se bahar aa gayi. Wahi uske piche hi Zina bhi bahar aa gayi thi.

Sabhi elders un dono ke paas gaye aur unse puchne lag gaye ke andar kya hua

Jispar Moon Commandery ki warrior ne kaha.

"Mein ne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya but second mein fail ho gayi."
Uski baat sunkar Zina ne bhi apne sir ko haan mein hilate hue kaha.

Zina-Mera bhu same result hai.

Yeh sunkar sabhi elders hasne kag gaye. Is year ke new students kaafi achhe the. Is year mein 3 prodigies unhe dikh rahe the. Jinhone tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya tha.

Western Campus ke history ko dekhe toh har 10 years mein koi ek hi warrior ho sakta tha jo third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar sakta tha.

Par recent years mein yeh kuch frequently hone lag gaya tha.

Unke liye yeh ek achhi baat thi!

Agar kisi bhi tarah ke accidents nahi hue toh Square Commandery Prince, Zina aur Moon Commandery ki warrior yeh 3 no hi is year ki top students hi jayenge. Unki ranking unke tower mein kiye hue performance par depend thi.

"Miss. Zina kaafi Powerful hai. Vo is tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar sakti hai. Usse zaroor bohot reward milega iske liye."

Yeh baat ek Yunvu Commandery warrior ne kahi thi.

Wahi Linsen ne kaha.

Linsen-Is year ke new students kaafi strong hai. Mein ne socha tha ke mein top 10 ki list mein aa sakta hu but ab mere chances kaafi kam hai.

Tabhi ek elder ne Kabir, Ravi, Linsen, Duan, Varun aur kuch warriors ka naam liya.

Vo sabhi jaa kar elders ke samne khade ho gaye.

Unmein se kuch warriors Black Realm ke Mid Stage par the aur kuch Dawn Stage par.

Jo Dawn Stage par the unmein Varun, Duan aur ek warrior jo Square Commandery se belong karta tha. Varun aur Duan ko Black Infernal Tower ko Black Flame ne kaafi help ki thi in jaldi ke break through ke liye. Par Kabir ki baat ko sunkar ab unhone apne next break through ko rok diya aur ab kuch der tak vo issi stage par rehne wale the. Nahi toh unki foundation weak hone ke chances kaafi ho sakti thi.

Us Square Commandery warrior ek baar Kabir aur baki sabhi warriors ko dekha aur socha.

"In sabhi ki cultivation kaafi weak hai. Is group mein shayad mein stand out kar sakta hu."

Square Commandery Prince ne Kabir ko dekha aur socha.

"Agar yeh Yan Ning jaise warrior ko maar sakta hai toh iska talent kisi bhi tarah se normal nahi hoga. Par phir bhi yeh Black Realm Mid Stage par hai. Yeh dekhte heu mein yeh surely keh sakta hu ke yey zyada se zyada second floor ke third obsticle ko pass kar sakta hai."

Sabhi 10 warriors tower ke andar jaa kar uske first floor par chale jaate hai.

Sabhi ke samne 10 doors the aur unke aage aur 10 small door the.

Un small doors par three ancient carved characters the. The First Obsticle.

Kabir ne ek baar sabhi ki taraf dekha aur phir kaafi relax ho kar usne second door mein enter kar liya. Kabir ke jaane ke baad baki sabhi warriors bhi apne apne doors choose kar ke andar chale gaye.

Jaise hi kabir us small door se anadr aaya waise hi usne apne aap ko kisi closed Martial Arts Field mein paya. Sabhi side metal se bani hui thi.

Yeh closed Martial Arts Field kaafi bada tha. Uski lenght aur width kuch 20 meters ki thi aur height kuch 30 meters ki. Har metal wall par 16 jagah bani hui thi aur usmein bronze colour ki lights rakhi hui thi.

Kabir chalte hue us martial arts field ke center mein aa gaya aur apne upar ke metal wall ko dekhne lag gaya.

Tabhi us wall ke side se ek warrior jo shayad 20 years ka tha vo chalte hue bahar aaya. Vo Kabir me samne aaya aur usne Kabir se kaha.

"Mein hi Luo Su. Mein represent karta hu Black Realm ki most powerful force Mid Stage ko. Agar tum mere 3 attacks ko jhel paaye toh tum is first obsticle se pass ho jaaoge."

Kabir ke samne jo Luo Su khada tha vo koi real person nahi tha. Yeh ek Spiritual Body thi jisse is tower ne apne Spiritual Qi se banaya tha.

Kabir-Tum Mid Stage ke most powerful force ko represent karte ho ?

Kabir ki baat ko sunkar Luo Su hasne laga aur usne Kabir se kaha

"Omen Ridge mein Martial Market School open hue sirf 460 years hi hue hai. Har year mein new students yaha aate hai is tower mein break through karne ke liye. Sirf new students hi nahi jo students abhi Western Campus mein practice kar rahe vo bhi aate hai yaha par break through karne ke liye. Mein Western Campus mein Black Realm ke Mid Stage ka strongest warrior hu."

Kabir Luo Su ki baat ko sunkar kuch had tak yaha par kya hota hai yeh samajh gaya tha.

Kabir-Toh agar mera cultivation Advance Stage par hota toh mein last 460 years ke sabse strongest Advance Stage warrior se milta. Right?

Kabir ki is baat ko sunkar Luo Su hasne laga aur usne kaha.

"Exactly!"

Kabir ne apne sir ko hilate hue kaha.

Kabir-Toh mujhe tumhare three attacks ko jhelna hai aur mein is first obsticle se pass ho jaunga ?

"Sahi kaha tumne."

Kabir-Kya hoga agar mein ne hi tumhe hara diya toh ?

Yeh sunkar Luo Su ne kaha.

"Agar aisa hua toh tum dirwci second floor ke first obsticle kar chale jaoge. Tum yaha par meri jagah bhi le sakte ho aur Mid Stage ke challanger bhi ban sakte ho. Par mein yeh keh du ke mujhe harana easy nahi hoga."

Kabir ne apne normal sword ko nikate hue kaha.

Kabir-Toh isse try bhi kar dekh lete hai.

Kabir ne apne Flashing Shining Sword ko utha liya. Uske us sword ko uthate hi Kabir jaise apne surrounding ke saath ek sa ho gaya tha.

Usne apne Space Domain ko use nahi kiya tha. Kyo ki vo last 460 years mein se Black Realm ke Mid Stage ke sabse strongest warrior ke saath equal battle karna chahta tha.

Wahi upar tower mein do kaafi khubsurat ladkiya ek secret room mein baithi hui thi.

Yeh koi aur nahi balki Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina thi. Jo room ke center mein baith kar unke samne jo 10 Spiritual Qi mirrors the unhe dekh rahi thi. Yeh mirrors hawa mein udd rahe the aur isse unhe har warrior ke progress ke barei pata chalta tha.

Normally isse Martial Market School ke 2 Silver Robed elders yeh sab dekhte the.

Par Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina ko is year ke new talented students ko dekhna chahti thi. Is liye unhone yaha ke dono elders ke saath yeh deal ki ke vo yeh sab dekh lengi.

Senior Shreya ka aura kaafi cold tha. Uske vo Royal Blue hairs uske face par baar baar aa rahe the. Uske vo hairs uske fair skin ko kaafi achhe dikh rahe the.

Usne apne same jo mirrors the unhe dekah aur kaha.

Shreya-Square Commandery Prince, Mooo Commandery ki warrior aur Zina ko dekhe ke baad mujhe nahi lagta hai jaise ab koi bacha hoga jo unke talent ke pay bhi aata hoga. Wahi agar koi prodigy nikla bhi toh vo inke jitna strong nahi hoga. Overall is year ke new students achhe hai. Ab mein apne practice ke liye jana chahti hu.

Senior Shreya ab ismein bilkul bhi interested nahi thi. Jab vo apni jagah se khadi hui toh uski figure kaafi tall si dikh rahi thi. Vo khade ho kar room ke door ki taraf jaane lag gayi

Par wahi Senior Dina abhi bhi un mirrors ko dekh rahi thi aur uske face ke expressions har pal change ho rahe the.

Dina-Interesting! So interesting!

Senior Shreya jo ab tak room ke door tak aa gayi thi vo wahi ruk gayi aur usne palat kar Senior Dina se pucha.

Shreya-Dina tum abhi bhi dekh rahi ho ?

Senior Dina jo kisi teenager ki tarah dikhti thi vo bhi three female devil's mein se ek thi.

Wahi Senior Shreya bhi three female devil's mein se ek thi.

Yeh dono hi Warrior of Division Profound thi. Yeh dono hi masters of Western Campus the aur koi bhi unhe challenge nahi kar sakta tha.

Senior Dina ne apne haat ko wave karte hue Senior Shreya ko apne paas aane ko kaha.

Dina-Sister Shreya jaldi yaha aao. Yeh Black Realm ke Mid Stage ka warrior Luo Su ke saath battle kar raha aur usne apne aap ko kafi achhe se hold kar ke bhi rakha hua hai.

Shreya-Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ? Luo Su Omen Ridge ke Martial Market School ke last 460 years mein se ek top prodigy hai. Vo ek ghost prodigy of generations hai. Kya aisa possible bhi hai ke koi warrior bhi same realm mein ho aur vo Luo Su ko battle mein rival kar sake ?

Senior Shreya kaafi shock thi is liye vo piche aayi aur us mirror ko dekhne lag gayi jismein Kabir dikh raha tha.

Mirrors mei 2 warriors kaafi tense battle mein engaged the.

Vo extremely fast move kar rahe the. Uske wajah se sirf unke shadows hi piche reh rahe the.

Senior Shreya ke facial expressions halke se change ho gaye. Uski aankho mei ek bright light si dikhne lag gayi thi. Usne waise hi shock ho kar Senior Dina se pucha.

Shreya-Ab tak unhone kitne strikes exchny kiye hai ?

Dina-74 Strikes!

Yeh sunkar Senior Shreya phir se aa kar apni jagah par baith gayi aur uske samne jo name list thi usse utha kae dekhne lag gayi.

Shreya-Yeh zaroor Tiny World se aaya hai aur iska naam 'Kabir' hai. Kya isse yeh pata nahi hai ke yaha par Kabir naam nahi rakha jata hai.

Senior Shreya ki is baat par Senior Dina hasne kag gayi aur usne kaha.

Dina-Ab tum usse uske naam ko change karne ke liye toh nahi kehne wali ho na ?

Shreya-Mein uske is tower ke test ko pass karne tak wait karungi. Agar isne Luo Su ke 100 strikes ko jhel liya toh yeh sach mein ek outstanding prodigy hai. Agar yeh apne naam ko change kar le toh mein isse zinda rakhne ke baremein sochungi.

Yeh baat Senior Shreya ne kaafi cold tone mein kahi thi.

Senior Shreya sabhi prodigies ko kaafi great nazar se dekhti thi.

Suddenly Spiritual Qi mirror mein jo ho raha tha vo change ho gaya. Kabir ko sword technique kaafi harsh hone lag gayi thi. Iske wajah se Luo Su bhi kuch steps apne piche lene lag gaya tha.

"Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ?"


Yeh baat dono Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina ne ek sath kahi thi. Unhone yeh keh kar apni saanso tak ko jaise rok liya tha aur shock ho kar apne samne jo mirror tha usse dekhne mag gayi thi.
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"Lagta hai is year ka first place ab Square Commandery Prince ke naam hi hoga."

"Agar usne third floor ke first obsticle ko bhi pass kar liya toh yeh kaafi incredible hoga. Mein ne suna hai jab three female devil's ne jab is tower mein apni test di thi tab unhone third floor ke first obsticle ko clear kar liya tha."

Sabhi aisi hj baate discuss kar rahe the.

Kuch der baad Square Commandery Prince tower se bahar gaya.

Uske bahar aate hi Master Situ jaldi se uske samne aa gaye aur unhone usse pucha.

"Kya tumne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya ?"

Square Commandery Prince ne arrogantly sabhi warriors ki taraf dekha. Uski aankhe Kabir par focus thi aur usne ek smile ke saath kaha.

"Mein ne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya hai but second obsticle ko pass nahi kar paya."

Master Situ yeh sunkar kaafi khush ho gaye the aur unhone kaha.

"Great!"

Jaise hi Square Commandery Prince ne apni baat kahi uske baad hi sabhi jagah se kuch na kuch baat sabhi ko sunayi dene lag gayi thi.

"Incredible!"

"Isne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya. Iska talent zaroor three devil's ke level par hoga. Jo Western Campus ko ek tarah se rule kar rahi hai."

"Amazing! Square Commandery Prince ke talent ko dekh kar yeh zaroor is female rules ko break kar dega."

Yeh baat ek male external student ne kaafi excited ho kar kahi thi

"New students mein se first place ab iska hi hai. Usko ab isse koi shayd hi le sakta hai."

Inhi baato ke saath ek aur group ne tower mein entery le li.

Is group mein na sirf Zina thi balki Rati, Maithili, Riya aur 9th Princess bhi thi. Wahi Moon Commandery se aayi hui unki genius warrior bhi thi is group mein


Unke andar jaate hi kuch hi der mein ek warrior fail ho kar bahar aa gaya tha

Uske bahar aane ke baad aur 5 warriors fail ho kar bahar aa gaye the.

Sabhi yeh dekh rahe the aur tabhi second floor ko indicate karne wali light jal gayi.

Waha par jitney bhi elders the unhone apne sir ko haa mein hilate hue ek dusre se kaha.

"Is group mein kaafi achhe warriors hai. Waise tumne un 5 ladkiyo ko notice kiya. Jinmei se shayad 3 Tiny World se belong karti hai aur ek Nether Realm se. Wahi unke saath Yunvu Commandery ki 9th Princess bhi hai. Mein ne suna hai in sabhi ne first round mein kaafi achha perform kiya hai. Specially un 2 Tiny World ki ladkiyo ne. Upar se do no bhi hamari strong female external students ki tarah dikhti hai. Dekhte hai yeh ab second floor par kya kar sakti hai."

Sabhi apne apne taraf se har ek warrior ke baremein baate kar rahe the.

Wahi Nether Master ko Zina, Rati aur Maithili par puri tarah se confidence tha. Unhe is baat ka pura bharosa tha ke yeh 3no ladkiya second floor ke third obsticle ko pass kar sakti hai. Bas vo Yunvu Commandery ke 9th Princess ke baremein sure nahi the.

Par unhe itna pata tha ke vo bhi at least second floor ke 1-2 obsticles ko pass toh kar hi sakti hai.

Kuch der baad Rati, Maithili Riya aur 9th Princess tower se bahar aa gaye. Unke bahar aate hi unhone ek baar Kabir ko dekha aur phir apni jagah jaa kar khadi ho gayi thi. Par Zina abhi tak tower mein hi thi.

Zina ke saath Moon Commandery ki warrior bhi abhi tak tower mein hi thi.

Kuch der baad third floor ki light on ho gayi.

Yeh dekh kar kuch elders ke face ke expressions change ho gaye the. After all is campus mein last 100 years se sirf females hi rule mein thi aur males kuch hi the jo kaafi outstanding the.

Unhe lag raha tha ke Square Commandery Prince ke aane ke baad vo is tradition ko change kar sakte hai. Par aisa kisi ne bhi nahi socha tha ke unhe aur 2 female prodigies mil jaayegi.

An yeh tradition kaafi dangerous sa ho gaya tha.

Agar vo dono tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar leti hai toh yeh Western Campus par phir se females ka hi rule continue rahega aur agar aise hi aage chalta raha toh yeh Western Campus ke liye kaafi dangerous baat hogi. Specially male students ke liye. Martial Market School ke Western Campus ka naam par ek daag ki tarah yeh lag jaayega.

Wahi dur khade Square Commandery Prince ne ek cold hasi k saath kaha.

"Third floor ka first obsticle extremely difficult hai. Even mein khud bhi almost fail ho gaya tha. Par yeh zaroor fail ho jaayegi."

Par Kabir Zina ke talent par kaafi confident tha. After all Zina ek Saint bloodline ki descendants thi. Uski physical qualities aur uske sense sabhi extreme level par sharp the.

Vo talent mein kisi bhi tarah se Square Commandery Prince se piche nahi thi. Dekha jaaye toh vo usse slightly stronger bhi thi.

Kuch hi der baad Moon Commandery ki warrior tower se bahar aa gayi. Wahi uske piche hi Zina bhi bahar aa gayi thi.

Sabhi elders un dono ke paas gaye aur unse puchne lag gaye ke andar kya hua

Jispar Moon Commandery ki warrior ne kaha.

"Mein ne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya but second mein fail ho gayi."
Uski baat sunkar Zina ne bhi apne sir ko haan mein hilate hue kaha.

Zina-Mera bhu same result hai.

Yeh sunkar sabhi elders hasne kag gaye. Is year ke new students kaafi achhe the. Is year mein 3 prodigies unhe dikh rahe the. Jinhone tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya tha.

Western Campus ke history ko dekhe toh har 10 years mein koi ek hi warrior ho sakta tha jo third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar sakta tha.

Par recent years mein yeh kuch frequently hone lag gaya tha.

Unke liye yeh ek achhi baat thi!

Agar kisi bhi tarah ke accidents nahi hue toh Square Commandery Prince, Zina aur Moon Commandery ki warrior yeh 3 no hi is year ki top students hi jayenge. Unki ranking unke tower mein kiye hue performance par depend thi.

"Miss. Zina kaafi Powerful hai. Vo is tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar sakti hai. Usse zaroor bohot reward milega iske liye."

Yeh baat ek Yunvu Commandery warrior ne kahi thi.

Wahi Linsen ne kaha.

Linsen-Is year ke new students kaafi strong hai. Mein ne socha tha ke mein top 10 ki list mein aa sakta hu but ab mere chances kaafi kam hai.

Tabhi ek elder ne Kabir, Ravi, Linsen, Duan, Varun aur kuch warriors ka naam liya.

Vo sabhi jaa kar elders ke samne khade ho gaye.

Unmein se kuch warriors Black Realm ke Mid Stage par the aur kuch Dawn Stage par.

Jo Dawn Stage par the unmein Varun, Duan aur ek warrior jo Square Commandery se belong karta tha. Varun aur Duan ko Black Infernal Tower ko Black Flame ne kaafi help ki thi in jaldi ke break through ke liye. Par Kabir ki baat ko sunkar ab unhone apne next break through ko rok diya aur ab kuch der tak vo issi stage par rehne wale the. Nahi toh unki foundation weak hone ke chances kaafi ho sakti thi.

Us Square Commandery warrior ek baar Kabir aur baki sabhi warriors ko dekha aur socha.

"In sabhi ki cultivation kaafi weak hai. Is group mein shayad mein stand out kar sakta hu."

Square Commandery Prince ne Kabir ko dekha aur socha.

"Agar yeh Yan Ning jaise warrior ko maar sakta hai toh iska talent kisi bhi tarah se normal nahi hoga. Par phir bhi yeh Black Realm Mid Stage par hai. Yeh dekhte heu mein yeh surely keh sakta hu ke yey zyada se zyada second floor ke third obsticle ko pass kar sakta hai."

Sabhi 10 warriors tower ke andar jaa kar uske first floor par chale jaate hai.

Sabhi ke samne 10 doors the aur unke aage aur 10 small door the.

Un small doors par three ancient carved characters the. The First Obsticle.

Kabir ne ek baar sabhi ki taraf dekha aur phir kaafi relax ho kar usne second door mein enter kar liya. Kabir ke jaane ke baad baki sabhi warriors bhi apne apne doors choose kar ke andar chale gaye.

Jaise hi kabir us small door se anadr aaya waise hi usne apne aap ko kisi closed Martial Arts Field mein paya. Sabhi side metal se bani hui thi.

Yeh closed Martial Arts Field kaafi bada tha. Uski lenght aur width kuch 20 meters ki thi aur height kuch 30 meters ki. Har metal wall par 16 jagah bani hui thi aur usmein bronze colour ki lights rakhi hui thi.

Kabir chalte hue us martial arts field ke center mein aa gaya aur apne upar ke metal wall ko dekhne lag gaya.

Tabhi us wall ke side se ek warrior jo shayad 20 years ka tha vo chalte hue bahar aaya. Vo Kabir me samne aaya aur usne Kabir se kaha.

"Mein hi Luo Su. Mein represent karta hu Black Realm ki most powerful force Mid Stage ko. Agar tum mere 3 attacks ko jhel paaye toh tum is first obsticle se pass ho jaaoge."

Kabir ke samne jo Luo Su khada tha vo koi real person nahi tha. Yeh ek Spiritual Body thi jisse is tower ne apne Spiritual Qi se banaya tha.

Kabir-Tum Mid Stage ke most powerful force ko represent karte ho ?

Kabir ki baat ko sunkar Luo Su hasne laga aur usne Kabir se kaha

"Omen Ridge mein Martial Market School open hue sirf 460 years hi hue hai. Har year mein new students yaha aate hai is tower mein break through karne ke liye. Sirf new students hi nahi jo students abhi Western Campus mein practice kar rahe vo bhi aate hai yaha par break through karne ke liye. Mein Western Campus mein Black Realm ke Mid Stage ka strongest warrior hu."

Kabir Luo Su ki baat ko sunkar kuch had tak yaha par kya hota hai yeh samajh gaya tha.

Kabir-Toh agar mera cultivation Advance Stage par hota toh mein last 460 years ke sabse strongest Advance Stage warrior se milta. Right?

Kabir ki is baat ko sunkar Luo Su hasne laga aur usne kaha.

"Exactly!"

Kabir ne apne sir ko hilate hue kaha.

Kabir-Toh mujhe tumhare three attacks ko jhelna hai aur mein is first obsticle se pass ho jaunga ?

"Sahi kaha tumne."

Kabir-Kya hoga agar mein ne hi tumhe hara diya toh ?

Yeh sunkar Luo Su ne kaha.

"Agar aisa hua toh tum dirwci second floor ke first obsticle kar chale jaoge. Tum yaha par meri jagah bhi le sakte ho aur Mid Stage ke challanger bhi ban sakte ho. Par mein yeh keh du ke mujhe harana easy nahi hoga."

Kabir ne apne normal sword ko nikate hue kaha.

Kabir-Toh isse try bhi kar dekh lete hai.

Kabir ne apne Flashing Shining Sword ko utha liya. Uske us sword ko uthate hi Kabir jaise apne surrounding ke saath ek sa ho gaya tha.

Usne apne Space Domain ko use nahi kiya tha. Kyo ki vo last 460 years mein se Black Realm ke Mid Stage ke sabse strongest warrior ke saath equal battle karna chahta tha.

Wahi upar tower mein do kaafi khubsurat ladkiya ek secret room mein baithi hui thi.

Yeh koi aur nahi balki Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina thi. Jo room ke center mein baith kar unke samne jo 10 Spiritual Qi mirrors the unhe dekh rahi thi. Yeh mirrors hawa mein udd rahe the aur isse unhe har warrior ke progress ke barei pata chalta tha.

Normally isse Martial Market School ke 2 Silver Robed elders yeh sab dekhte the.

Par Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina ko is year ke new talented students ko dekhna chahti thi. Is liye unhone yaha ke dono elders ke saath yeh deal ki ke vo yeh sab dekh lengi.

Senior Shreya ka aura kaafi cold tha. Uske vo Royal Blue hairs uske face par baar baar aa rahe the. Uske vo hairs uske fair skin ko kaafi achhe dikh rahe the.

Usne apne same jo mirrors the unhe dekah aur kaha.

Shreya-Square Commandery Prince, Mooo Commandery ki warrior aur Zina ko dekhe ke baad mujhe nahi lagta hai jaise ab koi bacha hoga jo unke talent ke pay bhi aata hoga. Wahi agar koi prodigy nikla bhi toh vo inke jitna strong nahi hoga. Overall is year ke new students achhe hai. Ab mein apne practice ke liye jana chahti hu.

Senior Shreya ab ismein bilkul bhi interested nahi thi. Jab vo apni jagah se khadi hui toh uski figure kaafi tall si dikh rahi thi. Vo khade ho kar room ke door ki taraf jaane lag gayi

Par wahi Senior Dina abhi bhi un mirrors ko dekh rahi thi aur uske face ke expressions har pal change ho rahe the.

Dina-Interesting! So interesting!

Senior Shreya jo ab tak room ke door tak aa gayi thi vo wahi ruk gayi aur usne palat kar Senior Dina se pucha.

Shreya-Dina tum abhi bhi dekh rahi ho ?

Senior Dina jo kisi teenager ki tarah dikhti thi vo bhi three female devil's mein se ek thi.

Wahi Senior Shreya bhi three female devil's mein se ek thi.

Yeh dono hi Warrior of Division Profound thi. Yeh dono hi masters of Western Campus the aur koi bhi unhe challenge nahi kar sakta tha.

Senior Dina ne apne haat ko wave karte hue Senior Shreya ko apne paas aane ko kaha.

Dina-Sister Shreya jaldi yaha aao. Yeh Black Realm ke Mid Stage ka warrior Luo Su ke saath battle kar raha aur usne apne aap ko kafi achhe se hold kar ke bhi rakha hua hai.

Shreya-Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ? Luo Su Omen Ridge ke Martial Market School ke last 460 years mein se ek top prodigy hai. Vo ek ghost prodigy of generations hai. Kya aisa possible bhi hai ke koi warrior bhi same realm mein ho aur vo Luo Su ko battle mein rival kar sake ?

Senior Shreya kaafi shock thi is liye vo piche aayi aur us mirror ko dekhne lag gayi jismein Kabir dikh raha tha.

Mirrors mei 2 warriors kaafi tense battle mein engaged the.

Vo extremely fast move kar rahe the. Uske wajah se sirf unke shadows hi piche reh rahe the.

Senior Shreya ke facial expressions halke se change ho gaye. Uski aankho mei ek bright light si dikhne lag gayi thi. Usne waise hi shock ho kar Senior Dina se pucha.

Shreya-Ab tak unhone kitne strikes exchny kiye hai ?

Dina-74 Strikes!

Yeh sunkar Senior Shreya phir se aa kar apni jagah par baith gayi aur uske samne jo name list thi usse utha kae dekhne lag gayi.

Shreya-Yeh zaroor Tiny World se aaya hai aur iska naam 'Kabir' hai. Kya isse yeh pata nahi hai ke yaha par Kabir naam nahi rakha jata hai.

Senior Shreya ki is baat par Senior Dina hasne kag gayi aur usne kaha.

Dina-Ab tum usse uske naam ko change karne ke liye toh nahi kehne wali ho na ?

Shreya-Mein uske is tower ke test ko pass karne tak wait karungi. Agar isne Luo Su ke 100 strikes ko jhel liya toh yeh sach mein ek outstanding prodigy hai. Agar yeh apne naam ko change kar le toh mein isse zinda rakhne ke baremein sochungi.

Yeh baat Senior Shreya ne kaafi cold tone mein kahi thi.

Senior Shreya sabhi prodigies ko kaafi great nazar se dekhti thi.

Suddenly Spiritual Qi mirror mein jo ho raha tha vo change ho gaya. Kabir ko sword technique kaafi harsh hone lag gayi thi. Iske wajah se Luo Su bhi kuch steps apne piche lene lag gaya tha.

"Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ?"


Yeh baat dono Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina ne ek sath kahi thi. Unhone yeh keh kar apni saanso tak ko jaise rok liya tha aur shock ho kar apne samne jo mirror tha usse dekhne mag gayi thi.
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Update 123

"Lagta hai is year ka first place ab Square Commandery Prince ke naam hi hoga."

"Agar usne third floor ke first obsticle ko bhi pass kar liya toh yeh kaafi incredible hoga. Mein ne suna hai jab three female devil's ne jab is tower mein apni test di thi tab unhone third floor ke first obsticle ko clear kar liya tha."

Sabhi aisi hj baate discuss kar rahe the.

Kuch der baad Square Commandery Prince tower se bahar gaya.

Uske bahar aate hi Master Situ jaldi se uske samne aa gaye aur unhone usse pucha.

"Kya tumne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya ?"

Square Commandery Prince ne arrogantly sabhi warriors ki taraf dekha. Uski aankhe Kabir par focus thi aur usne ek smile ke saath kaha.

"Mein ne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya hai but second obsticle ko pass nahi kar paya."

Master Situ yeh sunkar kaafi khush ho gaye the aur unhone kaha.

"Great!"

Jaise hi Square Commandery Prince ne apni baat kahi uske baad hi sabhi jagah se kuch na kuch baat sabhi ko sunayi dene lag gayi thi.

"Incredible!"

"Isne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya. Iska talent zaroor three devil's ke level par hoga. Jo Western Campus ko ek tarah se rule kar rahi hai."

"Amazing! Square Commandery Prince ke talent ko dekh kar yeh zaroor is female rules ko break kar dega."

Yeh baat ek male external student ne kaafi excited ho kar kahi thi

"New students mein se first place ab iska hi hai. Usko ab isse koi shayd hi le sakta hai."

Inhi baato ke saath ek aur group ne tower mein entery le li.

Is group mein na sirf Zina thi balki Rati, Maithili, Riya aur 9th Princess bhi thi. Wahi Moon Commandery se aayi hui unki genius warrior bhi thi is group mein


Unke andar jaate hi kuch hi der mein ek warrior fail ho kar bahar aa gaya tha

Uske bahar aane ke baad aur 5 warriors fail ho kar bahar aa gaye the.

Sabhi yeh dekh rahe the aur tabhi second floor ko indicate karne wali light jal gayi.

Waha par jitney bhi elders the unhone apne sir ko haa mein hilate hue ek dusre se kaha.

"Is group mein kaafi achhe warriors hai. Waise tumne un 5 ladkiyo ko notice kiya. Jinmei se shayad 3 Tiny World se belong karti hai aur ek Nether Realm se. Wahi unke saath Yunvu Commandery ki 9th Princess bhi hai. Mein ne suna hai in sabhi ne first round mein kaafi achha perform kiya hai. Specially un 2 Tiny World ki ladkiyo ne. Upar se do no bhi hamari strong female external students ki tarah dikhti hai. Dekhte hai yeh ab second floor par kya kar sakti hai."

Sabhi apne apne taraf se har ek warrior ke baremein baate kar rahe the.

Wahi Nether Master ko Zina, Rati aur Maithili par puri tarah se confidence tha. Unhe is baat ka pura bharosa tha ke yeh 3no ladkiya second floor ke third obsticle ko pass kar sakti hai. Bas vo Yunvu Commandery ke 9th Princess ke baremein sure nahi the.

Par unhe itna pata tha ke vo bhi at least second floor ke 1-2 obsticles ko pass toh kar hi sakti hai.

Kuch der baad Rati, Maithili Riya aur 9th Princess tower se bahar aa gaye. Unke bahar aate hi unhone ek baar Kabir ko dekha aur phir apni jagah jaa kar khadi ho gayi thi. Par Zina abhi tak tower mein hi thi.

Zina ke saath Moon Commandery ki warrior bhi abhi tak tower mein hi thi.

Kuch der baad third floor ki light on ho gayi.

Yeh dekh kar kuch elders ke face ke expressions change ho gaye the. After all is campus mein last 100 years se sirf females hi rule mein thi aur males kuch hi the jo kaafi outstanding the.

Unhe lag raha tha ke Square Commandery Prince ke aane ke baad vo is tradition ko change kar sakte hai. Par aisa kisi ne bhi nahi socha tha ke unhe aur 2 female prodigies mil jaayegi.

An yeh tradition kaafi dangerous sa ho gaya tha.

Agar vo dono tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar leti hai toh yeh Western Campus par phir se females ka hi rule continue rahega aur agar aise hi aage chalta raha toh yeh Western Campus ke liye kaafi dangerous baat hogi. Specially male students ke liye. Martial Market School ke Western Campus ka naam par ek daag ki tarah yeh lag jaayega.

Wahi dur khade Square Commandery Prince ne ek cold hasi k saath kaha.

"Third floor ka first obsticle extremely difficult hai. Even mein khud bhi almost fail ho gaya tha. Par yeh zaroor fail ho jaayegi."

Par Kabir Zina ke talent par kaafi confident tha. After all Zina ek Saint bloodline ki descendants thi. Uski physical qualities aur uske sense sabhi extreme level par sharp the.

Vo talent mein kisi bhi tarah se Square Commandery Prince se piche nahi thi. Dekha jaaye toh vo usse slightly stronger bhi thi.

Kuch hi der baad Moon Commandery ki warrior tower se bahar aa gayi. Wahi uske piche hi Zina bhi bahar aa gayi thi.

Sabhi elders un dono ke paas gaye aur unse puchne lag gaye ke andar kya hua

Jispar Moon Commandery ki warrior ne kaha.

"Mein ne third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya but second mein fail ho gayi."
Uski baat sunkar Zina ne bhi apne sir ko haan mein hilate hue kaha.

Zina-Mera bhu same result hai.

Yeh sunkar sabhi elders hasne kag gaye. Is year ke new students kaafi achhe the. Is year mein 3 prodigies unhe dikh rahe the. Jinhone tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar liya tha.

Western Campus ke history ko dekhe toh har 10 years mein koi ek hi warrior ho sakta tha jo third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar sakta tha.

Par recent years mein yeh kuch frequently hone lag gaya tha.

Unke liye yeh ek achhi baat thi!

Agar kisi bhi tarah ke accidents nahi hue toh Square Commandery Prince, Zina aur Moon Commandery ki warrior yeh 3 no hi is year ki top students hi jayenge. Unki ranking unke tower mein kiye hue performance par depend thi.

"Miss. Zina kaafi Powerful hai. Vo is tower ke third floor ke first obsticle ko pass kar sakti hai. Usse zaroor bohot reward milega iske liye."

Yeh baat ek Yunvu Commandery warrior ne kahi thi.

Wahi Linsen ne kaha.

Linsen-Is year ke new students kaafi strong hai. Mein ne socha tha ke mein top 10 ki list mein aa sakta hu but ab mere chances kaafi kam hai.

Tabhi ek elder ne Kabir, Ravi, Linsen, Duan, Varun aur kuch warriors ka naam liya.

Vo sabhi jaa kar elders ke samne khade ho gaye.

Unmein se kuch warriors Black Realm ke Mid Stage par the aur kuch Dawn Stage par.

Jo Dawn Stage par the unmein Varun, Duan aur ek warrior jo Square Commandery se belong karta tha. Varun aur Duan ko Black Infernal Tower ko Black Flame ne kaafi help ki thi in jaldi ke break through ke liye. Par Kabir ki baat ko sunkar ab unhone apne next break through ko rok diya aur ab kuch der tak vo issi stage par rehne wale the. Nahi toh unki foundation weak hone ke chances kaafi ho sakti thi.

Us Square Commandery warrior ek baar Kabir aur baki sabhi warriors ko dekha aur socha.

"In sabhi ki cultivation kaafi weak hai. Is group mein shayad mein stand out kar sakta hu."

Square Commandery Prince ne Kabir ko dekha aur socha.

"Agar yeh Yan Ning jaise warrior ko maar sakta hai toh iska talent kisi bhi tarah se normal nahi hoga. Par phir bhi yeh Black Realm Mid Stage par hai. Yeh dekhte heu mein yeh surely keh sakta hu ke yey zyada se zyada second floor ke third obsticle ko pass kar sakta hai."

Sabhi 10 warriors tower ke andar jaa kar uske first floor par chale jaate hai.

Sabhi ke samne 10 doors the aur unke aage aur 10 small door the.

Un small doors par three ancient carved characters the. The First Obsticle.

Kabir ne ek baar sabhi ki taraf dekha aur phir kaafi relax ho kar usne second door mein enter kar liya. Kabir ke jaane ke baad baki sabhi warriors bhi apne apne doors choose kar ke andar chale gaye.

Jaise hi kabir us small door se anadr aaya waise hi usne apne aap ko kisi closed Martial Arts Field mein paya. Sabhi side metal se bani hui thi.

Yeh closed Martial Arts Field kaafi bada tha. Uski lenght aur width kuch 20 meters ki thi aur height kuch 30 meters ki. Har metal wall par 16 jagah bani hui thi aur usmein bronze colour ki lights rakhi hui thi.

Kabir chalte hue us martial arts field ke center mein aa gaya aur apne upar ke metal wall ko dekhne lag gaya.

Tabhi us wall ke side se ek warrior jo shayad 20 years ka tha vo chalte hue bahar aaya. Vo Kabir me samne aaya aur usne Kabir se kaha.

"Mein hi Luo Su. Mein represent karta hu Black Realm ki most powerful force Mid Stage ko. Agar tum mere 3 attacks ko jhel paaye toh tum is first obsticle se pass ho jaaoge."

Kabir ke samne jo Luo Su khada tha vo koi real person nahi tha. Yeh ek Spiritual Body thi jisse is tower ne apne Spiritual Qi se banaya tha.

Kabir-Tum Mid Stage ke most powerful force ko represent karte ho ?

Kabir ki baat ko sunkar Luo Su hasne laga aur usne Kabir se kaha

"Omen Ridge mein Martial Market School open hue sirf 460 years hi hue hai. Har year mein new students yaha aate hai is tower mein break through karne ke liye. Sirf new students hi nahi jo students abhi Western Campus mein practice kar rahe vo bhi aate hai yaha par break through karne ke liye. Mein Western Campus mein Black Realm ke Mid Stage ka strongest warrior hu."

Kabir Luo Su ki baat ko sunkar kuch had tak yaha par kya hota hai yeh samajh gaya tha.

Kabir-Toh agar mera cultivation Advance Stage par hota toh mein last 460 years ke sabse strongest Advance Stage warrior se milta. Right?

Kabir ki is baat ko sunkar Luo Su hasne laga aur usne kaha.

"Exactly!"

Kabir ne apne sir ko hilate hue kaha.

Kabir-Toh mujhe tumhare three attacks ko jhelna hai aur mein is first obsticle se pass ho jaunga ?

"Sahi kaha tumne."

Kabir-Kya hoga agar mein ne hi tumhe hara diya toh ?

Yeh sunkar Luo Su ne kaha.

"Agar aisa hua toh tum dirwci second floor ke first obsticle kar chale jaoge. Tum yaha par meri jagah bhi le sakte ho aur Mid Stage ke challanger bhi ban sakte ho. Par mein yeh keh du ke mujhe harana easy nahi hoga."

Kabir ne apne normal sword ko nikate hue kaha.

Kabir-Toh isse try bhi kar dekh lete hai.

Kabir ne apne Flashing Shining Sword ko utha liya. Uske us sword ko uthate hi Kabir jaise apne surrounding ke saath ek sa ho gaya tha.

Usne apne Space Domain ko use nahi kiya tha. Kyo ki vo last 460 years mein se Black Realm ke Mid Stage ke sabse strongest warrior ke saath equal battle karna chahta tha.

Wahi upar tower mein do kaafi khubsurat ladkiya ek secret room mein baithi hui thi.

Yeh koi aur nahi balki Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina thi. Jo room ke center mein baith kar unke samne jo 10 Spiritual Qi mirrors the unhe dekh rahi thi. Yeh mirrors hawa mein udd rahe the aur isse unhe har warrior ke progress ke barei pata chalta tha.

Normally isse Martial Market School ke 2 Silver Robed elders yeh sab dekhte the.

Par Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina ko is year ke new talented students ko dekhna chahti thi. Is liye unhone yaha ke dono elders ke saath yeh deal ki ke vo yeh sab dekh lengi.

Senior Shreya ka aura kaafi cold tha. Uske vo Royal Blue hairs uske face par baar baar aa rahe the. Uske vo hairs uske fair skin ko kaafi achhe dikh rahe the.

Usne apne same jo mirrors the unhe dekah aur kaha.

Shreya-Square Commandery Prince, Mooo Commandery ki warrior aur Zina ko dekhe ke baad mujhe nahi lagta hai jaise ab koi bacha hoga jo unke talent ke pay bhi aata hoga. Wahi agar koi prodigy nikla bhi toh vo inke jitna strong nahi hoga. Overall is year ke new students achhe hai. Ab mein apne practice ke liye jana chahti hu.

Senior Shreya ab ismein bilkul bhi interested nahi thi. Jab vo apni jagah se khadi hui toh uski figure kaafi tall si dikh rahi thi. Vo khade ho kar room ke door ki taraf jaane lag gayi

Par wahi Senior Dina abhi bhi un mirrors ko dekh rahi thi aur uske face ke expressions har pal change ho rahe the.

Dina-Interesting! So interesting!

Senior Shreya jo ab tak room ke door tak aa gayi thi vo wahi ruk gayi aur usne palat kar Senior Dina se pucha.

Shreya-Dina tum abhi bhi dekh rahi ho ?

Senior Dina jo kisi teenager ki tarah dikhti thi vo bhi three female devil's mein se ek thi.

Wahi Senior Shreya bhi three female devil's mein se ek thi.

Yeh dono hi Warrior of Division Profound thi. Yeh dono hi masters of Western Campus the aur koi bhi unhe challenge nahi kar sakta tha.

Senior Dina ne apne haat ko wave karte hue Senior Shreya ko apne paas aane ko kaha.

Dina-Sister Shreya jaldi yaha aao. Yeh Black Realm ke Mid Stage ka warrior Luo Su ke saath battle kar raha aur usne apne aap ko kafi achhe se hold kar ke bhi rakha hua hai.

Shreya-Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ? Luo Su Omen Ridge ke Martial Market School ke last 460 years mein se ek top prodigy hai. Vo ek ghost prodigy of generations hai. Kya aisa possible bhi hai ke koi warrior bhi same realm mein ho aur vo Luo Su ko battle mein rival kar sake ?

Senior Shreya kaafi shock thi is liye vo piche aayi aur us mirror ko dekhne lag gayi jismein Kabir dikh raha tha.

Mirrors mei 2 warriors kaafi tense battle mein engaged the.

Vo extremely fast move kar rahe the. Uske wajah se sirf unke shadows hi piche reh rahe the.

Senior Shreya ke facial expressions halke se change ho gaye. Uski aankho mei ek bright light si dikhne lag gayi thi. Usne waise hi shock ho kar Senior Dina se pucha.

Shreya-Ab tak unhone kitne strikes exchny kiye hai ?

Dina-74 Strikes!

Yeh sunkar Senior Shreya phir se aa kar apni jagah par baith gayi aur uske samne jo name list thi usse utha kae dekhne lag gayi.

Shreya-Yeh zaroor Tiny World se aaya hai aur iska naam 'Kabir' hai. Kya isse yeh pata nahi hai ke yaha par Kabir naam nahi rakha jata hai.

Senior Shreya ki is baat par Senior Dina hasne kag gayi aur usne kaha.

Dina-Ab tum usse uske naam ko change karne ke liye toh nahi kehne wali ho na ?

Shreya-Mein uske is tower ke test ko pass karne tak wait karungi. Agar isne Luo Su ke 100 strikes ko jhel liya toh yeh sach mein ek outstanding prodigy hai. Agar yeh apne naam ko change kar le toh mein isse zinda rakhne ke baremein sochungi.

Yeh baat Senior Shreya ne kaafi cold tone mein kahi thi.

Senior Shreya sabhi prodigies ko kaafi great nazar se dekhti thi.

Suddenly Spiritual Qi mirror mein jo ho raha tha vo change ho gaya. Kabir ko sword technique kaafi harsh hone lag gayi thi. Iske wajah se Luo Su bhi kuch steps apne piche lene lag gaya tha.

"Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ?"


Yeh baat dono Senior Shreya aur Senior Dina ne ek sath kahi thi. Unhone yeh keh kar apni saanso tak ko jaise rok liya tha aur shock ho kar apne samne jo mirror tha usse dekhne mag gayi thi.
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