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very nice update bhaiUPDATE 128
Next din Shreya ko hosh aane lagta hai. Vo dekhti hai ke vo khud ko kisi jaane pehchane bed hai. Uski puri body mein abhi bhi pain ho raha tha. Usse apne fingers tak move karna hard jaa raha tha.
Vo last night kya hua tha yeh yaad karne ko koshish karti hai.
Kuch der dimag par zor dene ke baad usse yaad aata hai ke Kabir ne uspar attack kiya tha.
Yeh yaad aate hi usse gussa aata hai aur vo apne aaspas dekhne lagti hai. Jaise hi uski nazar ghum kar Kabir par jaati hai tabhi usse kaafi bada shock lagta hai.
Kabir niche baith kar practice kar raha tha aur uske pure body se ek golden aura nikal raha tha. Main world mein golden aura ka matlab Spiritual Qi ka sab se pure form mana jaata tha. Yeh sirf Saint Family ke Descendant mein se koi ek hi kar sakta tha. Par Kabir ki yeh baat Shreya ko zyada shock nahi kar rahi thi. Kabir ke piche ek Godly Golden Shadow thi aur uske upar ghum raha tha ek chakra.
Vo chakra jaise Shreya ko apne hi jagah par suppress kar raha tha. Usse nikalne wali divine energy ko Shreya jhel nahi paa rahi thi.
Aisa aaj tak kabhi bhi Shreya ne na dekha tha aur na hi suna tha. Par Aaj vo dekh bhi rahi thi aur usse feel bhi kar rahi thi.
Wahi Kabir ke us golden aura ne Shreya par bhi effect kar diya tha. Usse jo pure body mein pain feel ho raha tha vo ab puri tarah se heal hi gaya tha.
Kabir apne practice mein kaafi deep tha. Usse yeh tak sense nahi hua ke uske aise deep practice ke wahaj se uske soul ka true nature apne aap bahar aa gaya hai.
Abhi Shreya Kabir ko dekh hi rahi thi ke tabhi Kabir ke piche jo Godly Golden Shadow bani hui thi usne apne aankho ko open kiya aur Shreya ko dekha. Jaise hi Shreya aur us Godly Golden Shadow ki nazare mili waise hi Shreya ke dimag se abhi yaha jo bhi usne dekha tha vo sab mit gaya aur vo phir se behosh ho kar ussi bed par gir gayi.
Aise hi kuch aur waqt bit gaya. Kabir apne practice mein se bahar aata hai aur Shreya ko dekhta hai jo usse abhi bhi behosh ho dikhti hai.
Kabir ko lag raha tha ke usne kuch zyada hi heavily attack kar diya hai Shreya par.
Kabir phir se Shreya ki taraf apni back kar ke baith gaya tha.
Yaha par kuch der baad Shreya ko phir se hosh aata hai aur phir se vo last night kya hua tha yeh yaad karne lagti hai.
Usse yaad aata hai ke jab vo bath le rahi thi tab Yunvu Commandery ke 9th Princess ke brother Kabir ne usse waha dekha tha. Sirf dekha hi nahi balki usne toh uspar attack bhi kar diya tha. Shreya ko lag raha tha ke kahi uske behosh hone ke baad Kabir ne uske saath kuch kiya toh nahi.
Agar aisa nahi hai toh uske jaise person ne usse bath lete dekh kar attack kyo kiya hoga ?
Uske dimag mein sach mein kuch na kuch aaya hoga.
Yeh sab sochne ke baad Shreya ke face ke expressions hi change ho gaye.
Shreya-Mein is bed par kyo hu ? Aur yeh clothes kiske hai ?
Jaise hi uske dimag ne usse in sawalo ka answer diya uska dimag jaise blank hi ho gaya. Usse lag raha tha ke usne apne life mein sabse bada blow le liya hai. Vo toh phir se behosh hote hote reh gayi. Agar vo abhi heavily injured nahi hui hoti toh vo zaroor Kabir ko maar deti.
Usne apne nazaro ko ghuma kar dekha aur paya ke Kabir kuch duri par apni back kar ke baitha hua hai. Usne abhi apna inner robe hi nahi pehna hua hai jabki uska outer robe Shreya ke upar tha.
Uske dimag mein ab jaise yeh clear ho gaya tha ke uske behosh hone ke baad Kabir ne uske saath zaroor kuch kiya hua hai.
Shreya ki last hope bhi jaise ab mar gayi thi. Uske aankho mein se ab aansu bhi aane lag gaye the. Usse yeu bilkul bhi achha nahi lag raha tha. Agar usse yeh sab hone wala hai yeh pata hota toh vo Kabir ko kab ka maar deti.
Jab Kabir ne Shreya ko apne Genuine qi se uski injures ko stable kiya toh usne usse utha kar apne room mein lekar aa gaya. Usne usse bed par rakha aur khud niche baith kar apni practice karne lag gaya tha.
Yeh baat note karne wali thi ke Shreya ko bina clothes ke dekh kar bhi Kabir ke dil aur dimag mein aisa kuch bhi nahi aaya jo uski jagah agar koi aur hota toh uske dimag mein aata. Kabir ki will aur uska pyar Maithili aur Rati ke liye kaafi strong tha. Kabir ne jab usse bina clothes ke waha dekha tab usne apne outer robe ko nikal kar uske body ko cover kiya tha.
Issi ki wajah se yaha par ab ek aur misunderstanding ho gayi thi.
Abhi niche baith kar Kabir aur Zina ne milkar first round mein jitney bhi Square Commandery ke warriors ko mara tha aur unse jo bhi treasures mila tha usse count kar raha tha.
Usmein Spiritual Crystals, Silver Coins, Genuine Martial Arms, Pills, Spiritual Brawn, Exercise Manuals, Martial Techniques Instructions yeh sab tha.
Yeh clearly kaafi bada treasures tha.
Kabir aur Zina ke haato Square Commandery ke jitney bhi warriors maare gaye the vo Square Commandery ke young prodigies the. Vo sabhi Black Realm ke talented warriors the aur unke saath kaafi resources the practice ke liye.
Of course aadhe se zyada warriors ko Zina ne mara tha.
Sab kuch count karne ke baad Kabir kaafi shock ho gaya tha.
In sab mein 2483 Spiritual Crystals usse mile the.
174 Genuine Martial Arms unmein se 27 toh Second Level Arms the. 107 Third Level Arms the aur 45 Forth Level Arms the. Unmein kuch toh Fifth Level Arms bhi the.
Usse 368 Pills ki bottles bhi mile the. Jismein Triple-Purity Genuine qi Pills, Congealing Blood Pills, Saint Stone Pills...aise aur bhi the. Unmein se zyada tar Second class pills the. Par kuch kuch bottles Third class pills ki bhi thi. Saath hi warriors jo Blood Pills always apne saath rakhte hai unhe toh in sabhi mein count ho nahi kiya tha.
Wahi Kabir ko 48 pounds mein Spiritual Brawn mila tha aur vo sab jade containers mein store kiya gaya tha.
Practice resources ko compare kar ke dekhe toh yeh sabhi warriors kaafi kam Silver Coins apne saath carry kar rahe the. Sab kuch mila kar sirf 30,000 Silver Coins hi the. Aisa nahi tha ke vo warriors poor the par unhone apne most of the Silver Coins ko Spiritual Crystals aur Blood Pills mein exchange kar diya tha.
Is sab ko dekh kar Kabir ne apne aap se kaha.
Kabir-Itne bade level par hamne resources ko collect kiya hai yeh sach mein unbelievable hai. Isse puri tarah se use karne ke liye ab kaafi time hai. Tabhi Zina itni confident thi Square Commandery ke warriors ko hunt down karne ke liye. Yeh ek amazing deal hai. Agar hamne isse miss kar diya hota toh aisa treasure milna kaafi hard ho jata.
Jo 2483 Spiritual Crystals the vo 2483,000 Silver Coins ke equal the. Yeh ek almost Seventh Class family ka fortune hai.
Wahi jo 174 Genuine Martial Arms hai unhe almost 3,000,000 Silver Coins ke liye sell kiya jaa sakta hai.
Hundreds of bottle pills the, badi quantity mein blood pills, dozens of pounds mein Spiritual Brawn aur dozens of exercise books aur martial techniques. Agar inhe add kiya jaye toh yeh sab milakar almost kuch millions ke liye toh sell kiya hi jaa sakta hai.
Square Commandery ke warriors ko marne ke baad Kabir ki wealth ab kisi Seventh Class family se kam nahi thi.
Yeh baat note karne wali hai ke Kabir ke haato mein jo wealth hai vo combine wealth hai 100 warriors ki jo Black Realm ke experts the. Vo sabhi prodigies the aur kisi bhi normal Black Realm warrior se zyada wealth rakhte the.
Kabir-Zina ko sirf Spiritual Crystals aur Silver Coins se matlab hai. Mein usse 2000 Spiritual I de dunga aur baki apne liye rakh dunga. Usse utne kaafi hai. Wahi vo shayad in 30,000 Silver Coins ko lengi nahi.
Kabir ne 2000 Spiritual Crystals ko ek alag bag mein rakh diya aur next din Zina ko dene ke baremain socha. After all 98 warriors jo Black Realm mein the unmein se usne khud se hi 96 warriors ko maar diya tha. Kabir ne apne liye sirf ek small amount hi rakhi Spiritual Crystals ki.
Sab kuch side mein rakhne ke baad Kabir ne ek Fifth Level Genuine Martial Arm ko haat mei liya jo half moon shape blade tha.
Yeh weapon Yan Ning ka tha aur isse vo Death Sickle keh raha tha.
Bina Genuine qi ke inject kiye bhi Kabir is blade se nikalne wala chill aura ko feel kar sakta tha.
Yeh sach mein ek Fifth Level Genuine Martial Arm tha. Even Kabir ke Flash Shining Sword se bhi yeh blade sharper aur strong tha. Iski worth 100,000 Silver Coins se bhi zyada thi.
The Flash Shining Sword toh sirf Fourth Level Genuine Martial Arm thi. Yeh is blade ke saath compare nahi ki jaa sakti thi.
Tabhi Kabir ko piche se Shreya ki aawaz sunayi di.
Shreya-Bastard...Tumne mere saath kya kiya hai ?
Shreya ko hosh mein aaya dekh Kabir apni jagah se khada aur uski taraf chalne laga. Vo last night jo bhi hua usse clarify karna chahta tha.
Usse last night se hi lag raha tha ke vo khud bhi kuch zyada hi reckless ho gaya tha.
Apr Kabir ke haat mein abhi bhi vo Death Sickle tha. Par uske face par ek smile thi.
Kabir toh normally baat karna chahta tha lekin Shreya jaise Kabir ke haato mein Death Sickle ko dekh kar dar gayi thi.
Usse lag raha tha ke Kabir hamesha ke liye uski aawaz ko band kar dena chahta hai.
Kabir ke face par vo smile aur uske haato mein Death Sickle ko dekh kar Shreya dar toh gayi thi lekin usne abhi apne dar ko apne face par dikhaya nahi tha. Usne sabse pehle apne aap ko calm dikhya aur darte hue Kabir se pucha.
Shreya-Tum...tum yeh kya kar rahe ho ?
Although vo Black Realm ke Completion Stage ki warrior thi, lekin vo ek khubsurat aur young ladki bhi toh thi. Abhi vo apne sabse vulnerable moment mein thi. Toh aise mein vo darti kaise nahi ?
Uski nazaro mein abhi Kabir ek cruel aur heartless demon tha.
Kabir ne ek baar Shreya ke face par aane wale expressions ko dekha aur phir usne apne haat mei jo Death Sickle ko dekha. Tabhi usse samajh mein aaya ke Shreya aise kyo behave kar rahi hai. Usne apne smile ko gehri karte hue apne haato mein jo Death Sickle tha usse piche phek diya aur Shreya ko dekhte hue usne kaha.
Kabir-Miss Shreya aap ko darne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Last night jo bhi hua usmei meri utni bhi galti nahi thi. Yeh baat toh aap bhi jati hai, kyo ?
Par Shreya toh Kabir ko hi dekh rahi thi. Usse lag raha tha ke Kabir usse marne ke liye aa raha hai. Uske haato mei jo Death Sickle tha vo bhi toh Fifth Level Genuine Martial Arm tha. Par usse yeh samjh mein nahi aa raha tha ke Kabir ne uske haato jo weapon tha usse phek kyo diya.
Tabhi usse Kabir ka kiya hua sawal sunayi diya aur usne gusse mei apne teeths ko bhinch liya aur Kabir se kaha.
Shreay-Sahi kaha tumne sari galti meri hi thi.
Yeh sab kehte hue Shreya ko kaafi insulting lag raha tha.
Usse abhi yahi lag raha tha ke jab vo behosh thi tab Kabir ne uske saath kuch kiya hai aur par ab vo usse yeh kehne par bhi force kar raha tha jo uski galti bhi nahi thi.
Shreya ab Kabir se aur bhi next level wali gussa ho gayi thi.
Shreya-Abhi ke liye mein isse calm karti hu. Agar abhi ke liye mujhe yeh galti manni bhi pade toh bhi thik hai. Jaise hi mera cultivation recover ho jayega waise hi mei isse is insult ka answer dungi.
Yeh sab Shreya apne dimag mei soch rahi thi.
Wahi Kabir ne Shreya ke answer ko sunkar apne sir ko haa mein hilaya. Usse lag raha tha ke Shreya ko vo abhi bhi us path par jaane se rok sakta hai jo usne uske past life mein liya hua tha.
Kabir ne ek baar Shreya ko dekha aur bhi usse kaha.
Kabir-Apne galti ko man lena hi achhi baat hai. Waise bhi yeh baat ab itni bhi badi nahi hai ke ham is par apne hi bich koi fight start kar de. Mein bhi is baat ko bhul jaunga. Aur ha agar aap soch rahi hongi ke aap ke behosh hone par meine aap ke saath kuch kiya hua hai toh yeh bilkul bhi mat sochna kyo ki mein already engaged hu. Mujhe aap mein koi bhi interest nahi hai. Par aap weak hai toh apne aap ko recover kijiye tab tak mujhe kuch kaam hai vo mei kar ke aata hu.
Yaha yeh keh kar Kabir waha se bahar chala jata hai par Shreya abhi bhi shock thi ke Kabir ne jo last mei kaha kya vo sab sach hai ya nahi ispar. Dekha jaaye toh vo apne Genuine qi ko circulate kar ke apne body ko check kar sakti thi. Lekin abhi vo ek shock mein thi jisse vo yeh sab karna toh bhul si gayi thi.
Kabir jaise hi Yellow No-1 se bahar aaya waise hi usse bahar Dina dikh jisne abhi blue colour ke clothes pehne hue the.
Kabir ne usse halke shock mein dekha aur usse greet kiya.
Kabir-Kabir Senior Dina ko greet karta hai.
Wahi Dina toh jaise Kabir ko hall ke andar se bahar aate dekh kar kaafi shock ho gayi thi. Uski vo khubsurat aankhe toh jaise apni palko ko jhapkana ho rok nahi paa rahi thi. Usne waise hi shock ho kar Kabir se pucha.
Dina-Tum abhi bhi zinda ho ?
Kabir Dina ki is baat se jaise confuse sa ho gaya aur usne usse kaha.
Kabir-Aap kehna kya chahi ho ?
Dina-Sister Shreya ne tumhe mara nahi ?
Is sawal se Kabir aur bhi frustrate hi gaya aur use Dina se kaha.
Kabir-Vo mujhe kyo marna chahegi ? Wait...Aap ko kaise yeh baat pata hai ke vo mujhe marna chahti hai ?
Dina ko tab samajh mein aaya ke vo shock mein hote hue kya bol gayi hai aur usne apne face par smile laate hue is baat ko change kar diya.
Dina-Kuch nahi bas aise hi mei guessing kar rahi thi.
Dina abhi bilkul bhi khush nahi thi aur usne abhi abhi jhoot kaha tha. Usse lag raha tha ke usne jo plan kiya tha lagta hai vo fail ho gaya hai. Usse lag raha tha ke Kabir aur Shreya ne milkar yeh pata laga liya hai ke last nigh jo bhi hua vo uski wajah se hua hai.
Dina ne ek baar Kabir ko niche se upar tak dekha aur phir usse pucha.
Dina-Kya Sister Shreya abhi bhi wahi hai ?
Kabir ne haa mein sir hilate hue kaha.
Kabir-Last night ham dono ke bich ek misunderstanding si ho gayi thi. Abhi vo heavily injured hai. Aap usse jaa kar mil lijiye
Kabir ki baat sunkar Dina aur bhi shock ho gayi.
Dina-Vo injured kaise ho sakti hai ?
Uske dimag mein yeh chal raha tha ke abhi Kabir ko heavily injured hona chahiye tha.
Dina ab Kabir ka koi aur explanation nahi sunna chahti thi. Vo ek jaise shadow mein transform hi gayi aur ek second mein hi Yellow No-1 ke samne aa gayi.
Kabir ne yeh dekh kar apne sir ko sir hilaya aur ab vo Dragon Martial Temple ki taraf chal pada.
Jab usne apna first step palace me bahar rakha waha par usse bohot se aawaz sunayi dene lag gaye.
"Dekho, Dekho! Kabir palace se bahar aa raha hai !"
"Vo...vo na toh injured hai aur na hi wounded !"
"Iske pair bhi break nahi hua hai ? "
"Yeh impossible hai ! Zaroor usse internal injuries hui hai. Ya phir uske cultivation ko hi destroy kiya hoga"
"Mujhe lagta hai usse waha se bahar nikal diya hai"
Last hundreds of years mein aisa ek bhi male student nahi tha jo Dragon Martial Temple mein enter kiya ho aur next din bina kisi bhi injury ke bahar aaya ho.
Is liye most of the external students last night se hi Dragon Martial Temple ke bahar ruk kar wait kar rahe the aur dekhna chahte the ke kaise Kabir apna hi mazak banata hai.
Par jab Kabir bina kisi bhi injury ke bahar aaya tab koi bhi is baat par believe nahi kar paa raha tha.
Jaise hi Kabir bahar aaya waise hi uske samne waha par jitney bhi Yunvu Commandery ke warriors the unhone usse greet kiya aur un sabhi ke bich se raasta banate hue Linsen Kabir ke samne aaya aur usse dekhte hue usne kaha.
Linsen-Kabir kahi tum koi internal injuries se suffer toh nahi kar rahe ho na ?
Kabir-Nahi! Mein kisi bhi internal Injuries se suffer nahi kar raha hu.
Linsen-Kya tumhara last night kisi bhi three devil's ke saath koi encounter hua ?
Kabir-Haa! Ek ke saath hua.
Linsen-Kis ke saath.
Kabir-Shreya.
Kabir ki baat ko sunkar uske aaspas jitney bhi external students the unhone ek gehri saans li.
Wahi Linsen ne bhi ek gehri saans li aur Kabir ki taraf dekhte hue usne kaha.
Linsen-2 Years pehle jab Square Commandery ke Prime Minister ke son ke dono pairo ko break kar ke usse Dragon Martial Temple ke bahar phek diya tha. Toh usne tumhe kuch kyo nahi kiya ?
Kabir-Mein tumhe private mein sab batata hu abhi ke liye chalo yaha se.
Uske baad dono hi chalte hue aage aa gaye aur bich mein hi Kabir ne last nigh jo bhi hua vo sab Linsen ko bata diya. Pehle toh Linsen aise shock hua ke uska dimag ne work karna hi band kar diya ho aisa ho gaya tha par phir kabir ne usse kaha ne yeh baat vo kisi ko bhi na bataye.
Kabir jaldi se jaldi Zina ko uska hissa dekar wapas aana chahta tha.
Usne soch rakha tha ke vo apne aap ko inside training ke liye close kar lega aur Black Realm ke Advance Stage mein break through ke liye try karega.
Suddenly Kabir ko kuch sense hua. Usse feel ho raha tha ke ek sharp wind breaking sound uski taraf aa raha hai. Usne quickly apne aap ko 2 meters piche le liya jaise usse pata chal gaya ho ke kuch dangerous uski taraf aa raha hai.
Ek Jade-White long spear Kabir ke sir ke upar se aaya aur kuch der pehle vo jaha khada tha waha niche ground mein dhas gaya.
don't say sorry brother.. Ye sab to Bhagwan ki marzi hai... Aapne to aapni koshish kiI know guys yeh mega update nahi hai but from last night I am not in a state of mind ke mein kuch bhi aage likh saku because we lost our emergency patient who just 12 years old boy. Sorry I can't complete my promise.
Peace.
Fantastic updateUPDATE 128
Next din Shreya ko hosh aane lagta hai. Vo dekhti hai ke vo khud ko kisi jaane pehchane bed hai. Uski puri body mein abhi bhi pain ho raha tha. Usse apne fingers tak move karna hard jaa raha tha.
Vo last night kya hua tha yeh yaad karne ko koshish karti hai.
Kuch der dimag par zor dene ke baad usse yaad aata hai ke Kabir ne uspar attack kiya tha.
Yeh yaad aate hi usse gussa aata hai aur vo apne aaspas dekhne lagti hai. Jaise hi uski nazar ghum kar Kabir par jaati hai tabhi usse kaafi bada shock lagta hai.
Kabir niche baith kar practice kar raha tha aur uske pure body se ek golden aura nikal raha tha. Main world mein golden aura ka matlab Spiritual Qi ka sab se pure form mana jaata tha. Yeh sirf Saint Family ke Descendant mein se koi ek hi kar sakta tha. Par Kabir ki yeh baat Shreya ko zyada shock nahi kar rahi thi. Kabir ke piche ek Godly Golden Shadow thi aur uske upar ghum raha tha ek chakra.
Vo chakra jaise Shreya ko apne hi jagah par suppress kar raha tha. Usse nikalne wali divine energy ko Shreya jhel nahi paa rahi thi.
Aisa aaj tak kabhi bhi Shreya ne na dekha tha aur na hi suna tha. Par Aaj vo dekh bhi rahi thi aur usse feel bhi kar rahi thi.
Wahi Kabir ke us golden aura ne Shreya par bhi effect kar diya tha. Usse jo pure body mein pain feel ho raha tha vo ab puri tarah se heal hi gaya tha.
Kabir apne practice mein kaafi deep tha. Usse yeh tak sense nahi hua ke uske aise deep practice ke wahaj se uske soul ka true nature apne aap bahar aa gaya hai.
Abhi Shreya Kabir ko dekh hi rahi thi ke tabhi Kabir ke piche jo Godly Golden Shadow bani hui thi usne apne aankho ko open kiya aur Shreya ko dekha. Jaise hi Shreya aur us Godly Golden Shadow ki nazare mili waise hi Shreya ke dimag se abhi yaha jo bhi usne dekha tha vo sab mit gaya aur vo phir se behosh ho kar ussi bed par gir gayi.
Aise hi kuch aur waqt bit gaya. Kabir apne practice mein se bahar aata hai aur Shreya ko dekhta hai jo usse abhi bhi behosh ho dikhti hai.
Kabir ko lag raha tha ke usne kuch zyada hi heavily attack kar diya hai Shreya par.
Kabir phir se Shreya ki taraf apni back kar ke baith gaya tha.
Yaha par kuch der baad Shreya ko phir se hosh aata hai aur phir se vo last night kya hua tha yeh yaad karne lagti hai.
Usse yaad aata hai ke jab vo bath le rahi thi tab Yunvu Commandery ke 9th Princess ke brother Kabir ne usse waha dekha tha. Sirf dekha hi nahi balki usne toh uspar attack bhi kar diya tha. Shreya ko lag raha tha ke kahi uske behosh hone ke baad Kabir ne uske saath kuch kiya toh nahi.
Agar aisa nahi hai toh uske jaise person ne usse bath lete dekh kar attack kyo kiya hoga ?
Uske dimag mein sach mein kuch na kuch aaya hoga.
Yeh sab sochne ke baad Shreya ke face ke expressions hi change ho gaye.
Shreya-Mein is bed par kyo hu ? Aur yeh clothes kiske hai ?
Jaise hi uske dimag ne usse in sawalo ka answer diya uska dimag jaise blank hi ho gaya. Usse lag raha tha ke usne apne life mein sabse bada blow le liya hai. Vo toh phir se behosh hote hote reh gayi. Agar vo abhi heavily injured nahi hui hoti toh vo zaroor Kabir ko maar deti.
Usne apne nazaro ko ghuma kar dekha aur paya ke Kabir kuch duri par apni back kar ke baitha hua hai. Usne abhi apna inner robe hi nahi pehna hua hai jabki uska outer robe Shreya ke upar tha.
Uske dimag mein ab jaise yeh clear ho gaya tha ke uske behosh hone ke baad Kabir ne uske saath zaroor kuch kiya hua hai.
Shreya ki last hope bhi jaise ab mar gayi thi. Uske aankho mein se ab aansu bhi aane lag gaye the. Usse yeu bilkul bhi achha nahi lag raha tha. Agar usse yeh sab hone wala hai yeh pata hota toh vo Kabir ko kab ka maar deti.
Jab Kabir ne Shreya ko apne Genuine qi se uski injures ko stable kiya toh usne usse utha kar apne room mein lekar aa gaya. Usne usse bed par rakha aur khud niche baith kar apni practice karne lag gaya tha.
Yeh baat note karne wali thi ke Shreya ko bina clothes ke dekh kar bhi Kabir ke dil aur dimag mein aisa kuch bhi nahi aaya jo uski jagah agar koi aur hota toh uske dimag mein aata. Kabir ki will aur uska pyar Maithili aur Rati ke liye kaafi strong tha. Kabir ne jab usse bina clothes ke waha dekha tab usne apne outer robe ko nikal kar uske body ko cover kiya tha.
Issi ki wajah se yaha par ab ek aur misunderstanding ho gayi thi.
Abhi niche baith kar Kabir aur Zina ne milkar first round mein jitney bhi Square Commandery ke warriors ko mara tha aur unse jo bhi treasures mila tha usse count kar raha tha.
Usmein Spiritual Crystals, Silver Coins, Genuine Martial Arms, Pills, Spiritual Brawn, Exercise Manuals, Martial Techniques Instructions yeh sab tha.
Yeh clearly kaafi bada treasures tha.
Kabir aur Zina ke haato Square Commandery ke jitney bhi warriors maare gaye the vo Square Commandery ke young prodigies the. Vo sabhi Black Realm ke talented warriors the aur unke saath kaafi resources the practice ke liye.
Of course aadhe se zyada warriors ko Zina ne mara tha.
Sab kuch count karne ke baad Kabir kaafi shock ho gaya tha.
In sab mein 2483 Spiritual Crystals usse mile the.
174 Genuine Martial Arms unmein se 27 toh Second Level Arms the. 107 Third Level Arms the aur 45 Forth Level Arms the. Unmein kuch toh Fifth Level Arms bhi the.
Usse 368 Pills ki bottles bhi mile the. Jismein Triple-Purity Genuine qi Pills, Congealing Blood Pills, Saint Stone Pills...aise aur bhi the. Unmein se zyada tar Second class pills the. Par kuch kuch bottles Third class pills ki bhi thi. Saath hi warriors jo Blood Pills always apne saath rakhte hai unhe toh in sabhi mein count ho nahi kiya tha.
Wahi Kabir ko 48 pounds mein Spiritual Brawn mila tha aur vo sab jade containers mein store kiya gaya tha.
Practice resources ko compare kar ke dekhe toh yeh sabhi warriors kaafi kam Silver Coins apne saath carry kar rahe the. Sab kuch mila kar sirf 30,000 Silver Coins hi the. Aisa nahi tha ke vo warriors poor the par unhone apne most of the Silver Coins ko Spiritual Crystals aur Blood Pills mein exchange kar diya tha.
Is sab ko dekh kar Kabir ne apne aap se kaha.
Kabir-Itne bade level par hamne resources ko collect kiya hai yeh sach mein unbelievable hai. Isse puri tarah se use karne ke liye ab kaafi time hai. Tabhi Zina itni confident thi Square Commandery ke warriors ko hunt down karne ke liye. Yeh ek amazing deal hai. Agar hamne isse miss kar diya hota toh aisa treasure milna kaafi hard ho jata.
Jo 2483 Spiritual Crystals the vo 2483,000 Silver Coins ke equal the. Yeh ek almost Seventh Class family ka fortune hai.
Wahi jo 174 Genuine Martial Arms hai unhe almost 3,000,000 Silver Coins ke liye sell kiya jaa sakta hai.
Hundreds of bottle pills the, badi quantity mein blood pills, dozens of pounds mein Spiritual Brawn aur dozens of exercise books aur martial techniques. Agar inhe add kiya jaye toh yeh sab milakar almost kuch millions ke liye toh sell kiya hi jaa sakta hai.
Square Commandery ke warriors ko marne ke baad Kabir ki wealth ab kisi Seventh Class family se kam nahi thi.
Yeh baat note karne wali hai ke Kabir ke haato mein jo wealth hai vo combine wealth hai 100 warriors ki jo Black Realm ke experts the. Vo sabhi prodigies the aur kisi bhi normal Black Realm warrior se zyada wealth rakhte the.
Kabir-Zina ko sirf Spiritual Crystals aur Silver Coins se matlab hai. Mein usse 2000 Spiritual I de dunga aur baki apne liye rakh dunga. Usse utne kaafi hai. Wahi vo shayad in 30,000 Silver Coins ko lengi nahi.
Kabir ne 2000 Spiritual Crystals ko ek alag bag mein rakh diya aur next din Zina ko dene ke baremain socha. After all 98 warriors jo Black Realm mein the unmein se usne khud se hi 96 warriors ko maar diya tha. Kabir ne apne liye sirf ek small amount hi rakhi Spiritual Crystals ki.
Sab kuch side mein rakhne ke baad Kabir ne ek Fifth Level Genuine Martial Arm ko haat mei liya jo half moon shape blade tha.
Yeh weapon Yan Ning ka tha aur isse vo Death Sickle keh raha tha.
Bina Genuine qi ke inject kiye bhi Kabir is blade se nikalne wala chill aura ko feel kar sakta tha.
Yeh sach mein ek Fifth Level Genuine Martial Arm tha. Even Kabir ke Flash Shining Sword se bhi yeh blade sharper aur strong tha. Iski worth 100,000 Silver Coins se bhi zyada thi.
The Flash Shining Sword toh sirf Fourth Level Genuine Martial Arm thi. Yeh is blade ke saath compare nahi ki jaa sakti thi.
Tabhi Kabir ko piche se Shreya ki aawaz sunayi di.
Shreya-Bastard...Tumne mere saath kya kiya hai ?
Shreya ko hosh mein aaya dekh Kabir apni jagah se khada aur uski taraf chalne laga. Vo last night jo bhi hua usse clarify karna chahta tha.
Usse last night se hi lag raha tha ke vo khud bhi kuch zyada hi reckless ho gaya tha.
Apr Kabir ke haat mein abhi bhi vo Death Sickle tha. Par uske face par ek smile thi.
Kabir toh normally baat karna chahta tha lekin Shreya jaise Kabir ke haato mein Death Sickle ko dekh kar dar gayi thi.
Usse lag raha tha ke Kabir hamesha ke liye uski aawaz ko band kar dena chahta hai.
Kabir ke face par vo smile aur uske haato mein Death Sickle ko dekh kar Shreya dar toh gayi thi lekin usne abhi apne dar ko apne face par dikhaya nahi tha. Usne sabse pehle apne aap ko calm dikhya aur darte hue Kabir se pucha.
Shreya-Tum...tum yeh kya kar rahe ho ?
Although vo Black Realm ke Completion Stage ki warrior thi, lekin vo ek khubsurat aur young ladki bhi toh thi. Abhi vo apne sabse vulnerable moment mein thi. Toh aise mein vo darti kaise nahi ?
Uski nazaro mein abhi Kabir ek cruel aur heartless demon tha.
Kabir ne ek baar Shreya ke face par aane wale expressions ko dekha aur phir usne apne haat mei jo Death Sickle ko dekha. Tabhi usse samajh mein aaya ke Shreya aise kyo behave kar rahi hai. Usne apne smile ko gehri karte hue apne haato mein jo Death Sickle tha usse piche phek diya aur Shreya ko dekhte hue usne kaha.
Kabir-Miss Shreya aap ko darne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Last night jo bhi hua usmei meri utni bhi galti nahi thi. Yeh baat toh aap bhi jati hai, kyo ?
Par Shreya toh Kabir ko hi dekh rahi thi. Usse lag raha tha ke Kabir usse marne ke liye aa raha hai. Uske haato mei jo Death Sickle tha vo bhi toh Fifth Level Genuine Martial Arm tha. Par usse yeh samjh mein nahi aa raha tha ke Kabir ne uske haato jo weapon tha usse phek kyo diya.
Tabhi usse Kabir ka kiya hua sawal sunayi diya aur usne gusse mei apne teeths ko bhinch liya aur Kabir se kaha.
Shreay-Sahi kaha tumne sari galti meri hi thi.
Yeh sab kehte hue Shreya ko kaafi insulting lag raha tha.
Usse abhi yahi lag raha tha ke jab vo behosh thi tab Kabir ne uske saath kuch kiya hai aur par ab vo usse yeh kehne par bhi force kar raha tha jo uski galti bhi nahi thi.
Shreya ab Kabir se aur bhi next level wali gussa ho gayi thi.
Shreya-Abhi ke liye mein isse calm karti hu. Agar abhi ke liye mujhe yeh galti manni bhi pade toh bhi thik hai. Jaise hi mera cultivation recover ho jayega waise hi mei isse is insult ka answer dungi.
Yeh sab Shreya apne dimag mei soch rahi thi.
Wahi Kabir ne Shreya ke answer ko sunkar apne sir ko haa mein hilaya. Usse lag raha tha ke Shreya ko vo abhi bhi us path par jaane se rok sakta hai jo usne uske past life mein liya hua tha.
Kabir ne ek baar Shreya ko dekha aur bhi usse kaha.
Kabir-Apne galti ko man lena hi achhi baat hai. Waise bhi yeh baat ab itni bhi badi nahi hai ke ham is par apne hi bich koi fight start kar de. Mein bhi is baat ko bhul jaunga. Aur ha agar aap soch rahi hongi ke aap ke behosh hone par meine aap ke saath kuch kiya hua hai toh yeh bilkul bhi mat sochna kyo ki mein already engaged hu. Mujhe aap mein koi bhi interest nahi hai. Par aap weak hai toh apne aap ko recover kijiye tab tak mujhe kuch kaam hai vo mei kar ke aata hu.
Yaha yeh keh kar Kabir waha se bahar chala jata hai par Shreya abhi bhi shock thi ke Kabir ne jo last mei kaha kya vo sab sach hai ya nahi ispar. Dekha jaaye toh vo apne Genuine qi ko circulate kar ke apne body ko check kar sakti thi. Lekin abhi vo ek shock mein thi jisse vo yeh sab karna toh bhul si gayi thi.
Kabir jaise hi Yellow No-1 se bahar aaya waise hi usse bahar Dina dikh jisne abhi blue colour ke clothes pehne hue the.
Kabir ne usse halke shock mein dekha aur usse greet kiya.
Kabir-Kabir Senior Dina ko greet karta hai.
Wahi Dina toh jaise Kabir ko hall ke andar se bahar aate dekh kar kaafi shock ho gayi thi. Uski vo khubsurat aankhe toh jaise apni palko ko jhapkana ho rok nahi paa rahi thi. Usne waise hi shock ho kar Kabir se pucha.
Dina-Tum abhi bhi zinda ho ?
Kabir Dina ki is baat se jaise confuse sa ho gaya aur usne usse kaha.
Kabir-Aap kehna kya chahi ho ?
Dina-Sister Shreya ne tumhe mara nahi ?
Is sawal se Kabir aur bhi frustrate hi gaya aur use Dina se kaha.
Kabir-Vo mujhe kyo marna chahegi ? Wait...Aap ko kaise yeh baat pata hai ke vo mujhe marna chahti hai ?
Dina ko tab samajh mein aaya ke vo shock mein hote hue kya bol gayi hai aur usne apne face par smile laate hue is baat ko change kar diya.
Dina-Kuch nahi bas aise hi mei guessing kar rahi thi.
Dina abhi bilkul bhi khush nahi thi aur usne abhi abhi jhoot kaha tha. Usse lag raha tha ke usne jo plan kiya tha lagta hai vo fail ho gaya hai. Usse lag raha tha ke Kabir aur Shreya ne milkar yeh pata laga liya hai ke last nigh jo bhi hua vo uski wajah se hua hai.
Dina ne ek baar Kabir ko niche se upar tak dekha aur phir usse pucha.
Dina-Kya Sister Shreya abhi bhi wahi hai ?
Kabir ne haa mein sir hilate hue kaha.
Kabir-Last night ham dono ke bich ek misunderstanding si ho gayi thi. Abhi vo heavily injured hai. Aap usse jaa kar mil lijiye
Kabir ki baat sunkar Dina aur bhi shock ho gayi.
Dina-Vo injured kaise ho sakti hai ?
Uske dimag mein yeh chal raha tha ke abhi Kabir ko heavily injured hona chahiye tha.
Dina ab Kabir ka koi aur explanation nahi sunna chahti thi. Vo ek jaise shadow mein transform hi gayi aur ek second mein hi Yellow No-1 ke samne aa gayi.
Kabir ne yeh dekh kar apne sir ko sir hilaya aur ab vo Dragon Martial Temple ki taraf chal pada.
Jab usne apna first step palace me bahar rakha waha par usse bohot se aawaz sunayi dene lag gaye.
"Dekho, Dekho! Kabir palace se bahar aa raha hai !"
"Vo...vo na toh injured hai aur na hi wounded !"
"Iske pair bhi break nahi hua hai ? "
"Yeh impossible hai ! Zaroor usse internal injuries hui hai. Ya phir uske cultivation ko hi destroy kiya hoga"
"Mujhe lagta hai usse waha se bahar nikal diya hai"
Last hundreds of years mein aisa ek bhi male student nahi tha jo Dragon Martial Temple mein enter kiya ho aur next din bina kisi bhi injury ke bahar aaya ho.
Is liye most of the external students last night se hi Dragon Martial Temple ke bahar ruk kar wait kar rahe the aur dekhna chahte the ke kaise Kabir apna hi mazak banata hai.
Par jab Kabir bina kisi bhi injury ke bahar aaya tab koi bhi is baat par believe nahi kar paa raha tha.
Jaise hi Kabir bahar aaya waise hi uske samne waha par jitney bhi Yunvu Commandery ke warriors the unhone usse greet kiya aur un sabhi ke bich se raasta banate hue Linsen Kabir ke samne aaya aur usse dekhte hue usne kaha.
Linsen-Kabir kahi tum koi internal injuries se suffer toh nahi kar rahe ho na ?
Kabir-Nahi! Mein kisi bhi internal Injuries se suffer nahi kar raha hu.
Linsen-Kya tumhara last night kisi bhi three devil's ke saath koi encounter hua ?
Kabir-Haa! Ek ke saath hua.
Linsen-Kis ke saath.
Kabir-Shreya.
Kabir ki baat ko sunkar uske aaspas jitney bhi external students the unhone ek gehri saans li.
Wahi Linsen ne bhi ek gehri saans li aur Kabir ki taraf dekhte hue usne kaha.
Linsen-2 Years pehle jab Square Commandery ke Prime Minister ke son ke dono pairo ko break kar ke usse Dragon Martial Temple ke bahar phek diya tha. Toh usne tumhe kuch kyo nahi kiya ?
Kabir-Mein tumhe private mein sab batata hu abhi ke liye chalo yaha se.
Uske baad dono hi chalte hue aage aa gaye aur bich mein hi Kabir ne last nigh jo bhi hua vo sab Linsen ko bata diya. Pehle toh Linsen aise shock hua ke uska dimag ne work karna hi band kar diya ho aisa ho gaya tha par phir kabir ne usse kaha ne yeh baat vo kisi ko bhi na bataye.
Kabir jaldi se jaldi Zina ko uska hissa dekar wapas aana chahta tha.
Usne soch rakha tha ke vo apne aap ko inside training ke liye close kar lega aur Black Realm ke Advance Stage mein break through ke liye try karega.
Suddenly Kabir ko kuch sense hua. Usse feel ho raha tha ke ek sharp wind breaking sound uski taraf aa raha hai. Usne quickly apne aap ko 2 meters piche le liya jaise usse pata chal gaya ho ke kuch dangerous uski taraf aa raha hai.
Ek Jade-White long spear Kabir ke sir ke upar se aaya aur kuch der pehle vo jaha khada tha waha niche ground mein dhas gaya.
Dost yeh story Jay Sutar bhai ke detailing ke wajah se hi samajh sakti hai. Agar ham readers ko yeh details hi nahi mile toh jo ho raha hai vo kyo aur kaise ho raha hai yeh kaise samjhega. Writer kuch soch samajh kar hi itni details de rahe hai bhai. Upar se yeh story ki thik thak flow hai. Yaha par aap characters bhi dekhiye kitne hai. Har ek characters ki growth dikhani hai yaha par. Aisa toh ho nahi sakta ke is story ka Main Character hi sab kuch karta rahe aur baki ke kuch bhi nahi. Yahi reason hai ke yeh story baki stories se different hai. Yaha par har ek character ko develope kiya jaa raha hai. Bina development ke character phika ho jayega.Jay bhai story to bahut lazwab or umda he but ab ye thodi boring hoti ja rahi he, kyuki story ke main point ki jagah aap iski ditel par jyada focus karte he, jo story ko lamba kar dete to aap se yahi kahunga kahani to point par focus kare na ki diteling par
AgreedDost yeh story Jay Sutar bhai ke detailing ke wajah se hi samajh sakti hai. Agar ham readers ko yeh details hi nahi mile toh jo ho raha hai vo kyo aur kaise ho raha hai yeh kaise samjhega. Writer kuch soch samajh kar hi itni details de rahe hai bhai. Upar se yeh story ki thik thak flow hai. Yaha par aap characters bhi dekhiye kitne hai. Har ek characters ki growth dikhani hai yaha par. Aisa toh ho nahi sakta ke is story ka Main Character hi sab kuch karta rahe aur baki ke kuch bhi nahi. Yahi reason hai ke yeh story baki stories se different hai. Yaha par har ek character ko develope kiya jaa raha hai. Bina development ke character phika ho jayega.