Fantasy Gods and Demons

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[The king]

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[Beast]

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[Avi9545]

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[Radhe]

UPDATE 33

Kabir ke baad bhi students ne apne test diye par koi bhi kabir jaisa perorm nahi kar paya jisse sabhi VIP’S aur VP bhi disappoint ho gaye the. Wahi yeh sab dekh kar jaha Aarav ko bohot bada shock laga tha wahi Shital ground se nikal kar sidha VP ke paas jaati hai.

Shital-Vice-Principle mein apna resign latter dene aayi hu. Aaj se mein Holy Osian Institute ki teacher nahi hu.

VP-Shital suddenly aisa sochna galat hai mein tumhe upper class ka teacher bhi bana sakta hu.

Shital-nahi VP mere aur us kabir ke bich yahi bet lagi thi. Yeh raha mera latter mein ab jaa rahi hu.

Yeh keh kar usne VP ke haath mein letter de diya aur waha se nikal gayi. Wahi kabir apne sabhi friends se has kar baate kar raha tha jaise kuch hua hi na ho. Tabhi kabir ki nazar ground se bahar jaate hue Shital par jaati hai.

Sabhi students ke test ho gaye the koi apne results se khush tha toh koi nahi. Kuch der baad sabhi top students ke naam aate hai jinmein KABIR, RATI,MATHILI, VARUN, RAVI the saath hi Aarav bhi usmein tha. Kyo ki Aarav sacred family se tha toh unke connections kaafi the institute mein. Yeh sabhi ek jagah khade ho gaye the. Unke same phir institute se ek master aata hai aur unhe kehta hai.

Pichle 3 years se koi bhi tum sabhi ki tarah performance nahi de paya hai. Issi liye tum sabhi ko school ke sabse SACRED jagah par le kar jaane wale hai aaj. Yeh keh kar vo master un sabhi ko uske piche aane ko kehta hai.

Sabhi uske piche jaa rahe the. Kabir ko toda bohot pata chal sa gaya tha ke vo master un sabh ko kaha lekar jaane wala hai. Sabhi ground se hote hue school ke andar aate hai. Vo master ek bade se door ke samne ruk jata hai aur uspr lage locks ko open kar deta hai. Jaise hi vo door open hota hai waise hi usmein se ek strong blood ki smell aati hai lekin aisa lag raha tha ke yeh blood koi normal blood nahi hai. Is blood ke smell mein bhi ek spiritual powers thi jo kabir k chod kar koi bhi sense nahi kar paa raha tha. Unhe bas blood ki smell hi aa rahi thi.
Door ke open hote hi waha basement mein jaane ke liye kuch stairs thi. Usse sabhi niche aate hai aur jab samne dekhte hai toh shock ho jaate hai. Kyo ki samne el bada sa pool tha jismein blood tha aur vo bhi kafi HOT. Usmein se kafi heat nikal rahi thi. Wahi us blood mein se halki halki red colour ki roshni bhi nikal rahi thi.

Master-agle ek week tak tum sabhi is blood mein khud ke spiritual powers ko badha sakte ho. Lekin yeh baat achhe se sunlo. Yeh blood kisi normal demon beasts ka nahi hai. Yeh sabhi yaa toh Black-Gold rank yaa phir Legend rak ke kairb ke demon beast ka blood hai. Yeh opportunity har kisi ko nahi milti hai. Tum sabhi ko is pool ke kinare par hi reha hai kyo ki pool ke centre mein blood ka temperature sabse jyada hai jo tumhari body ke liye achha nahi hoga.

Yeh keh kar vo master un sabhi ko ek ek pocket deta hai jismein 2nd class ki healing pills thi. sabhi ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Koi bhi abhi tak us pool mein nahi utra tha. Yeh dekh kar Aarav sabse pehle us pool mein utarta hai. Jaise hi usne apne pair ko us pool mein rakha wise hi usse pata chal gaya tha ke yeh blood kitna strong hai.

Aarav sirf pairo ke nichle hisse tak hi us pool mein gaya. Usse dekh kar Ravi bhi uske baad us pool mein utar gaya aur uske hi side mein khaha ho gaya. Uske baad Varun phir Rati aur Maithili yeh bhi us pool mein utar gaaye. Sabhi ek saath hi khade the. Wahi us pool ke bahar khade ho kar kabir kuch soch raha tha.

Kabir-is blood mein kafi stong spiritual powers hai. Yeh saara blood kisi bhi tarah normal demon beasts ka nahi hai. Yeh zaroor KYLIN ( kind of king level beasts ) ka blood hai. Agar mein iska use kar ke apne bache hue sabhi meridians ko open kar du toh mein YEELOW realm mein ek stage aur aage badh sakta hu. Saath hi mujhe yeh bhi pata chal jaayega ke mere sabhi meridians ko open kar ne ke baad mere practice mein kitna difference aata hai.

Yeh soch kar kabir us poll mein utarta hai aur chalte hue sabhi ke side se nikal kar aage jaane lagta hai. Usse aisa karte dekh sabhi shock mein the. Kyo ki abhi vo sabhi jaha khade the unhe waha par bhi us blood ke heat ko control karne mein takalif ho rahi thi. Wahi kabir kafi aasani le se us blood pool mein aage jaa raha tha. Aarav ka ab khud par se kaabu hat jaata hai aur vo zor se kabir ko aawaz deta hai.

Aarav-kabir tum apne aap kya samjhte ho. Is blood pool mein tum mujhe se aage jaa kar yeh dikhana chahte ho ke tum mujhse kaafi strong ho.

Kabir palat kar usse dekhta hai aur kehta hai.

Kabir-mujhe kuch bhi dikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai kyo ki mein tum se strong starting se hi tha.

Yeh keh kar kabir apne ghutno tak ke blood wale hisse mein aa kar ruk jaata hai. Aab usse bhi vo heat feel ho rahi thi lekin usne phir apni aankeh band ki aur BUDDHIST EMPEROR’S EMPIRIYAN ke 1st chapter ki practice start kar di.

Kabir ke aisa karte hi us blood mein jo spiritual power thi vo kabir ki taraf jaane lag gayi. Apne taraf aati hui spiritual powers ko feel karte hi usne apne sabhi 27 meridians ko activate kar diya aur vo saari spiritual powers uske meridians mein jaale lag gayi.
Kabir ne apne 1st chapter ki practice jaari rakhi. Kyo ki uske aisa karne se us blood ki heat usse kam hoti feel ho rahi thi. kuch der baad kabir ne phir se apne 28th meridian ko open karne ki koshish ki aur vo us blood ke spiritual powers ke wajah se open hone lag gayi thi. usse us meridian ko puri tarah open karne ke liye 12 hrs ka waqt lag gaya. Wahi uske sabhi friends bhi ab tak apni apni practice start kar chuke the aur vo sab bhi us blood se nikalne wali powers ko absorb karte hue apni powers ko refine kar rahe the.

Kabir ne un sabhi ko pehle hi keh diya tha ke chaahe tumhari next realm mein breakthrough karne ki speed bakiyon se jyada ho lekin jiske paas strong FOUNDATION hota hai uski powers sabse jyada hoti hai. Kyo ki uski powers STABLE hoti hai aur uske opponent ki UNSTABLE. Issi liye kabir ke sabhi friends us blood se nikalne wali powers ko absorb kar ke apni powers ko refine ka rahe the. Iska result jaldi hi usne samne aa gaya. unki foundation hal bitate pal ke saath kaafi strong hoti jaa rahi thi.

Wahi yaha ab sabhi ko 1 din ke upar ka waqt ho gaya tha sabhi masters aur VP us chamber ke bahar sabhi students ka wait kar rahe the. Aaj tak Lorad Uday ke siwaaye koi bhi us blood pool mein 1 din ke upar nahi ruka hai. Wahi yaha kabir ne apne 28th meridian ko achhe se refine bhi kar liya tha. Saath hi vo apne 29th meridian ko bhi open kar chuka tha. Jab bhi kabir apne new meridian ko open karta usse apne andar kaafi strong power feel hoti. Saath hi blood se nikalne wali spiritual powers uske blood ko aur bhi refine ka rahi thi. jiske chalte uska spiritual blood ki powers badhti jaa rahi thi.

Aaj sabhi ko 2 din bhi complete ho gaya tha us blood pool mein. Sabhi apne apne practice ko achhe se kar rahe the. Aarav aur Ravi ko chod kar unmein Rati, Maithili aur Varun ki speed kaafi thi. jiske chalte vo in dono se aage the.

Yaha ab 3rd din bhi pura ho gaya tha aur kabir ne apne 34th meridian tak ko open kar diya tha aur usse refine karne lag gaya tha. Uske itne saare meridians ko open karne se uska spiritual blood kaafi strong hoga tha. Uske blood ne uske upar ek shield tak bana di thi. abhi tak iske baremien khud kabir ko bhi nahi pata chal saka tha. Yaha kabir ek deep state mein tha wahi uski 35th meridian bhi open ho gayi thi. uske open hote hi us blood pool mein hakli halki waves banna start ho gayi.

Aaj sabhi ko us blood poool mein 4 din ho gaye the. Kabir ko chod kar sabhi apne apne practice se bahar aa gaye the. Sabhi kafi mushkil se us blood pool se bahar. Kyo ki us blood ke heat ne uske pairon ko achha khasa injured kar diya tha. Sabhi bahar nikal kar ek ek healing pill khate hai aur dekhte hi dekhte sabhi ki injuries heal ho jaati hai.

Wahi sab yaha bahar baith kar apne aap ko rest de rahe the tabhi Aarav ki nazar kabir par jaati hai jo abhi bhi us blood pool mein tha. Saath hi usne dekha ke ek red fog sa uske aaspaas kuch bana hua hai. Lekin tabhi uski nazar us blood pool mein ban rahe un waves par jaati hai. Usse yeh nahi samajh aa raha tha ke us kyo ban rahe hai. Sabhi phir wahi baith jaate hai aur unke body mein jo bhi extra spiritual powers aayi thi unhe stable karne lag jaate hai. Wahi us chamber ke bahar VP kuch masters ko us chamber mein jaane ke liye kehte hai.

Jisse 2 masters un chamber mei chalte jaate hai. Jab vo dono niche aate hai tab unhe kabir ko chod kar sabhi bahar baithe hue nazar aate hai. Yeh sabhi apne us extra power ko stable kar rahe the wahi. Kabir abhi bhi us pool mein tha. Vo dono masters bhi shock ho jaate hai jab vo kabir ko us blood pool mein itna andar dekhte hai.
Dono hhi jaldi se us chamber se nikal kar iski khabar VP ko dete hai. VP jab kabir ke baremein sunte hai toh kafi shock ho jaate hai.

Wahi yaha kabir ne apne 35th merdian ko bhi refine kar liya tha. Wahi usse aone andar ab ek aur cheez hone ki feeling aane lagi thi. yeh feeling kahi halki thi lekin isse kabir ne achhe se feel kar liya tha.

5 va din bhi pura ho gaya tha sabh ne apne apne powers ko stable kar liya tha wahi vo abhi ab kabir ko us pool mein khada dekh rahe the. Kyo ki abhi tak kabir us pool mein tha toh vo us chamber se bahar nahi nikal sakte the.

Aarav-yeh kabir kab tak aisa rehne wala hai.
Uske is baat par maithili kehti hai.

Maithili-agar tumhe jaana hai toh tum jaa sakte ho. Ham sabhi yaha kabir ka wait kar lenge.

Ravi-waise bhi tumhe kabir achha nahi lagta hai toh tum ruke hi kyo ho.

Ravi ke iss baat se aarac chid kar kehta hai.

Aarav-lagta hai tum master ki baat ko bhul gaye ho ke is chamber ke door par ek array laga hua jai jisne hame cont kiya hai aur agar ham abhi us kabir ke bina bahar nikle toh vo array hame wahi khatam kar dega.

Varun-agar kuch achha bol nahi sakte toh tum chup raho. Kabir abhi apne practice ke bich mein hai.

Varun ne yeh baat isliye kahi taaki kabir ko koi problem naa ho.

Yah almost 6 din hone aa gaye the aur kabir apne 36th meridian ko open karne ke kaafi karib aa gaya tha.

Jaise hi uske 6 din complete ho gaye waise hi uske body mein se vo nikalne wala fog badh gaya aur usne ek ELEPHANT aur uske upar ek DRAGON ka shape le liya sabhi yeh hota hua dekh rahe the. Sabhi ke liye ek shocking moment tha. Kyo ki kisi ne bhi kabhi iske baremein nahi kabhi suna th aur nahi kabhi kuch read kiya tha. Wahi yaha blood pool mein us elephant aur dragon ne ek saath apne aankhe kholi aur zor se roar kiya. Is roan mein itani power thi ke pura ka pura institute hi hila gaya tha.

Yaha aise roar ko sunte hi VP aur unke saath ke sabhi masters us chamber mein aa gaye. Aate hi VP ki nazar pool mein khade kabir par gayi aur uske baad us elephant aur dragon par. Lekin abhi kuch aur hone bhi shayad baaki tha. Jaha yeh elephant aur dragon ne roar kiya wahi kabir ki sabhi 36 meridians open ho gayi saath hi kabir apne VESEL OF SPIRIT se bhi apne aap connect ho gaya. Uske connect hote hi kabir ko apne soul power ke level ke baremein pata chal gaya. ab uski soul power level 37 thi.

Wahi jaise hi kabir apne VESEL OF SPIRIT se connct hua waise hi uske elephant dragon ke shape ke upar ek aur shape ban gaya. yeh ek humonoid shape tha aur uski aankhe abhi band thi. Lekin jaise hi us shape ne apni aankhe kholi waise hi ek pressure wave us shape mein se nikal kar pure Osian City mein fail gayi. Wahi us chamber mein us wave ka pressure itna tha ke uske niche baki sabhi ke saath VP bhi aa gaye the. Lekin yeh sirf kuch der ke liye hi tha. Kuch der ke baad vo humonoid shape aur vo elephant aur dragon dono hi kabir ke andar chale gaye.

Unke andar jaate hi sabhi par se vo pressure hat gaya aur sabhi ne ek chain ki saas li. Kisi ko samjha hi nahi ke yeh hua kya tha abhi. Wahi VP bhi kaafi shock the.

VP ne baki sabhi ko yaha jo bhi hua uske baremein abhi kisi ko bhi naa batene ko kaha.

Aaj kabir ko 7 din pure ho gaye the us blood pool mein aur ab kabir ki aankhe halki halki khul rahi thi. jaldi hi usne apni aankho ko puri tarah khol diya aur sabhi ki taraf ek baar dekha. Aarav ko chod kar usse sabhi haste hue hi dikhe.

Kabir ko ab sab kuch pata chal gaya tha ke pichle din kya hia tha. Yeh uske soul power ka kamaal tha. Wahi usse apne spiritual blood aur DIVINE SOUL ke activate hone ke baremein bhi pata chal gaya tha.

Kabir ab us blood pool se bahar aata hai aur ek healing pill kha leta hai. Uske pill khate hi uske pairon ki sabhi injuries heal ho jaati hai par ab us pills ka asar uspar kaafi kam speed se ho raha tha. Kuch der mein vo sabhi us chamber se bahar nikal aate hai.

In 7 din mein kabir yellow realm ke medium stage ke peak par pohoch gaya tha.
Jaise hi sabhi us chamber ke bahar aate hai waise hi Aarav kisi ko bhi kuch kahe bina waha se nikal jaata hai. Usse Kabir ki progress se jealousy feel ho rahi thi.

Wahi kabir us chamber se bahar nikalte waqt kuch soch raha tha.

Kabir-Kya mein abhi apne shadow demon spirit ke saath integrate kar sakta hu. Mein abhi yellow realm ke medium stage ke peak par hu. Matalab mein kisi bhi normal silver rank demon spiritualist se kaafi powerful hi. Mujhe apne shadow demon spirit ke saath integrate hona hi hoga.

Apne kaarname ke wajah se Kabir puri Osian City mein famous ho gaya tha. Jab bhi vo aone class mein aata koi na koi usse milne ke liye khada ho rehta tha. Aise hi ek din sabhi apne class mein baithe hue the aur unhe agle year ke class mein join koin hai yeh bataya jaa raha tha. Wahi kabir aur uske friends ko ek ek latter diya gaya. Yeh Genius class ka acceptance letter tha. Kabir us letter ko dekh kar sochta hai.

Kabir-Mere past life mein mei kafi hard work ke baad genius class mein mein gaya tha.

Wahi dusri taraf uske friends aaye hue sabhi ladko ko waha se jaane ke liye keh rahe the. Kabir ek baar un sabhi ko dekhta hai aur smile karta hai.

Aise hi Holy Osian Institute ke holidays bhi start hone wale the next din se. Sabhi students kaafi khush the. Kisi ko apne ghar jaane milne wala tha toh koi apne is holiday ka use apne practice ko badhane ke liye karne wala tha.

Wahi jab Kabir nikalne wala tha tab Maithili usse milti hai aur ek RED STONE usse dete hue kehti hai.

Maithili-Kabir yeh sirf tumhare liye hai. Yeh tumhe meri yaad dilata rahega. Mein chalti hu tumhe next semester mein milti hu.

Wahi kabir bhi us Red stone ko dekh kar halka sa shock tha vo abhi kuch kehne hi wala tha Maithili se ke tab tak Maithili waha se jaa chuki thi. Kabir us Red stone ko apne waist band se baandh leta hai. Tabhi usse apne piche se kisi ki hasne ki aawaz aati hai. Yeh koi aur nahi Rati thi. Jisne Maithili ko Red stone dete hue dekh liya tha.

Rati haste hue kabir se kehti hai.

Rati-kabir kya tumhe pata hai Osian City mein RED STONE ek ladki ke pyaar ko represent karta hai.

Kabir uske is baat par smile kar ta hai aur kehta hai.

Kabir-phir bhi like toh mein tumhe karta hu na.

Rati isse thodi sharma jaati hai.

Rati-agar Maithili tumhe itna pasand karti hai toh tum usse accept kyo nahi karte ho.
Kabir-phir meni bhi toh tumhe pasand karta hu kya tum mujhe abhi accept kar paaogi. Maithili aur meri feelings same hi hai. Mein usse mujhe like karne se rok nahi sakta hu aur na tum mujhe tumhe like kar ne se rok sakti ho.

Kabir ke is baat par Rati ko kuch bhi sujh nahi raha tha ke usse kya kahe. Vo ek baar upar aasman mein dekhne lag jaati hai aur aise hi dekhte hue kehti hai.

Rati-mein chahti hu ke mujhe jo chaahe vo is world ka sabse powerful person ho. Vo kaafi brave ho. Kisi se bhi takarane se bhi dare nahi.

Kabir uski ia baat par hasta hai aur kehta hai.

Kabir-tum girls bhi na. aaj tak is world mein aisa koi nahi born hua hai jise kisi bhi cheez se dar na lage. Waise is ek baat ko chod dogi toh tumhare baaki sabhi qualities hai mujh mein. Bolo kya kehti ho.

Rati uske is baat se puri tarah chup ho gayi thi. Usse kya bole kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha. Wahi kabir Rati ko aise sochte dekh kar smile karta hai aur waha se jaane lag jaata hai.

Room par aa kar kabir apna thoda samaan pack karta hai aur waha se nikal jaata hai. City ke bahar aa kar ek taanga lekar apne ghar ki or chal deta hai. Kabir ki HEAVENLY MARK FAMILY ka area mein city se din ke duri par tha. Kabir ko travel karte hue usse uske past life ke incidents yaad aa rahi thi. Jab demon beasts ka attack hua tha tab uski family bhi usmein maari gayi thi siwaaye uske koi bhi nahi bach paaya tha.
Lekin ab jab vo phir se reborn hua hai aur uske new powers ke saath kabir ab kaafi confident tha ke ab vo sab kuch rok sakta hai jo uske past life mein hua tha.

Kabir ko apne bachpan ke uske father ke saath bitaaye hue pal yaad aane lag jaate hai. Uske father usse kayi adventurer ki stories bataya karte the.

Kabir ke father family ke ek farmer the. Unka yahi kaam hota tha. Kabir 3rd morning mein pohoch jata hai apen ghar ke paas. Ghar kya yeh toh pura castle tha. Yeh is liye kyo ki pura heavenly mark clan ek saath rehta tha. Uska main business herbs ki farming thi.

Kabir ko sabhi jante the iske chalte jaise hi vo aaya sabhi usse greet karne lag gaye the. Kabir bhi sabhi ko smile karte hue greet kar raha tha. Abhi vo aage jaa hi raha tha ke usse samne se uski choti behen aati hui dikhti hai jo uski or doudti hui aa rahi thi. Kabir ke aane se vo bhi kaafi khush dikh rahi thi.

Kabir niche baith jaata hai jab vo uske paas aati hai aur uske sir par haat rakh kar kehta hai.

Kabir-PRITI tum toh kaafi badi ho gayi ho.
Priti- ha aur mein bhi bhai ki tarah Osian institute ko join karungi.

Kabir Priti ke is baat par hasta hai aur uske saath chalne lag jaata hai. Jaldi hi vobaone farther aur uncle bse bhi milta hai jo abhi apne farm par the. Kabir ko aata dekh vo bhi khush ho jata hai.

Uske father usse thodi bohot baate karte hai aur sabhi ghar ki taraf chal deta hai. Waha usse uski mother aur aunty bhi milti hai. Sabhi aaj khush the kabir ke aane se. Kuch der baad sabhi milkar breakfast ke liye baith jaate hai. Kabir sabhi apne progress ke baremein bata deta hai. Jisse sabhi sunkar shock ho jaate hai. Wahi uski mother sabhi ko breakfast deti hai. Sabhi aise hi breakfast karne lagte hai. Kabir sabhi ki baate sun raha tha saath vo vo kuch aur bhi soch raha tha.

Kabir-Maa ke haat ka khana khaaye kitna watq ho gaya hai pata hi nahi. 1000 years 2000 years yaa shayad usse bhi jyada.

Kabir ne to sub ke muh hi band kr diye aur aap ne hamare kyo ki Aaise update ki tarif me kuch nhi bol sakta yr
Kahte hai na Dr. Shahab talent kabhi nhi chupta aap ki story likhne ka hi talent hai jo ham sub aap ke fan hai
Rahi baat update ki to update Shandar tha jiski mai tarif me kuch nhi bol sakta

 

[Jimmy83]

Jabrdst updt....school sensation ka ek part khatm hua....ab fmly adventure shuru

 

[John Cena]

Waiting next

 

[Rajthehunterr]

Waiting for the next update dude!!??

 

[Jay Sutar]

Boht khoob yar maza a gya hero to sach ma boht strong shayed lord lord uday bhi us sa asani sa har jae

Jabardast update..

Awesome update bro...
To kabeer घर pahuch gya....
Neeraj se death match Kab hoga?

Bhai bahut hi jada mast update tha
apne sabdo me kahu to bhai aisa hi update mangta hai appun
ek update me ek chizz clear to dusre me dusra
Update xota ho ya bada
ye matter nhi karta
usme kitni baate clear ki gayi hai wo chizz main hai jo is updated me tha
baki aapke likhne ki Skil jabadast hai
aise hi likhte raho

Nice update

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

Nice update bro

Fab !!!! Bas ek cheej achhi nahi lagi , kabeer ka ye kehna k pichhli baar ye growth use bahut mehnat karne par mili thi, mehnat usne is baar usse adhik hi ki hai, haa samay jarur kam liya.

Very nice update..............
Keep it up ......
Waiting for next update.............

Nice one waiting for next

Bahut hi bhdia amazing update

Bemisal update bhai ji lage raho

Jabardasttt update bhai

THANKS GUYS ?.

 

[Jay Sutar]

aapki kahani ka plot toh acha hi hai brother,par presentation usse bhi acha hai...

mujhe bohot excitement hai ye janane ke liye ki aage kya hota hai...!!!!

WELL I AM PLEASED YOU LIKE THE STORY ?.